Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi Strawberry!

From This Queue.

[Call Me Sweetie]

Good!

[Call Me Smoothie]

AR -1? i did ar +1 on the easiest one, so it would be consistant

01:34:690 (2) - last point x:224 y:272

01:42:690 (2) - ^ o_o! nice find! imma make that symmetric

02:12:190 (1) - Remove NC

02:12:440 (1) - NC

02:14:190 (1) - Remove NC

02:14:440 (1) - NC
new combos are fine to me, so i would keep them as for now

[Call Me Strawberrie]

00:05:690 (7) - Ctrl + G

00:46:440 (2) - 4st point x:284 y:340 how did you see that :O another 10 points!

Good luck~

thanks for modding~! i forgot to reply at first,sry ;_;

Mod

Call Me Sweetie

00:18:690 (5,6) - White borders overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/583725

Here use this code.

233,127,18690,2,0,B|235:112|257:107|278:112|280:129,1,60

If you want any better than that, you will need to fix the asymmetry of the slider points for note 6.

00:20:190 - So very quiet. Add hitsound like a finish or whistle?
00:20:690 (1) - Flow is negatively affected when you lower the spacing for such a pattern. It's probably not a big deal, but a flaw none the less.
00:47:190 (5) - I officially call this a lemon slider. xD. Awesome.
00:53:190 (2) - Loop doesn't flow the greatest IMO. Personally i would go for something more fluid, but it's plays well enough that you could keep it.
01:35:190 (4,1) - This is not a "Normal" transition or something that should be in the easiest difficulty. I say this mainly because it slows down the beat and it interrupts the flow which is bad for beginners.
01:43:190 (4,1) - ^
01:46:690 (3,4) - I really dislike this angle and I think it's a bad place for a loop. I suggest a different shape. 01:51:190 (4) - Same. Only my opinion though. You seem to like loops.
02:55:190 (4) - Try to avoid unnatural slider compress. Notice to the right of the slider center, that there is a bunch of slider lines that are really close together. It should be smooth like so. http://puu.sh/1SwRu
03:03:190 (1) - Maybe a wavy slider?

Call Me smoothie
It started out looking like a nice slider oriented difficulty and then you changed to streams for the rest of the song. I was enjoying the sliders and was really hoping this would be a Normal like difficulty. Oh well.

00:04:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest making all of this closer to 1.00. The start and end are 1.03 and the inside is 0.98.
00:07:190 (3,4,5,6,1) - Clean up this spacing? Also 00:07:190 (3,4,5) - looks nice evenly wrapped around 2. http://puu.sh/1SxcQ
00:08:440 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks rough. The note isn't perfectly centered.
00:09:440 (4,1,2) - Alignment is bad. Please improve this. Make like this? http://puu.sh/1Sxm0
00:15:940 (5,1,2,3) - spacing is very different than your first version of this. I suggest fixing this.
00:16:690 (3,4,5) - Again check this pattern.
00:17:690 (5,1,2) - Again alignment. Make sure your spacing is perfect and 1 is properly blanketted with 2.
00:27:190 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid lowering the snap (even slightly) when you're going into a jump. I suggest keeping spacing closer to 1.0 so that players don't slow down into the jump.Also try centering 3 with 2.
00:28:190 (1) - I keep mishitting this. Place in the center of the playing field to prevent people from mishitting?
00:49:690 (5,1,2) - stack better please.
00:57:690 (5,1,2) - ^
02:40:690 (2,3,4,5) - Doesn't look right to me.It might be that the angle is slightly off, but i think it would better if there was a tad more space between the blanket. Try to improve the blanket is my advice.
02:41:190 (5,6,7) - Personally i don't like this transition. Too complicated and follows off beat vocals. Don't need to do anything if you don't want to.

Call me strawberrie
Took me awhile to get used to the overmapped parts. I had problems trying to mod this so, use good judgment please when checking my findings.

01:13:190 (4,5) - feels too close after a jump. Also looks quite bad. I suggest this be a jump like the other sliders. you could stack this01:13:690 (5) - on 1 and then add a note here 01:14:065 - . definitely plays better than what you have now. If not there is probably other ways to map this part that would be better.
01:24:690 (2) - Doesn't look like previous slider. You should fix this. Maybe even reverse selection the sequence, I don't know.
01:29:190 (6,1,2) - Try to avoid note slider note patterns. They tend to be awkward. you should just have a triple like the next section.
01:45:940 (7,1,2) - ^
02:27:690 (5,1) - Stack better.



Good luck.

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod
my apology for late replying...
Call Me Sweetie

00:18:690 (5,6) - White borders overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/583725

Here use this code.

233,127,18690,2,0,B|235:112|257:107|278:112|280:129,1,60

If you want any better than that, you will need to fix the asymmetry of the slider points for note 6. yours is good enough

00:20:190 - So very quiet. Add hitsound like a finish or whistle? dont really wanna do that... lets keep it quiet
00:20:690 (1) - Flow is negatively affected when you lower the spacing for such a pattern. It's probably not a big deal, but a flaw none the less. what you said is true, but i would keep that because i think it makes it clean now, will change this if its necessary
00:47:190 (5) - I officially call this a lemon slider. xD. Awesome. so we got another one later
00:53:190 (2) - Loop doesn't flow the greatest IMO. Personally i would go for something more fluid, but it's plays well enough that you could keep it. i will change it because now i think its ugly....super...
01:35:190 (4,1) - This is not a "Normal" transition or something that should be in the easiest difficulty. I say this mainly because it slows down the beat and it interrupts the flow which is bad for beginners. as for this, i used to use another one but ppl said its ugly and i changed that into this, hmm technically i can't come up with some other slider shapes with the same starting n ending points without blocking other sliders...so ..
01:43:190 (4,1) - ^
01:46:690 (3,4) - I really dislike this angle and I think it's a bad place for a loop. I suggest a different shape. 01:51:190 (4) - Same. Only my opinion though. You seem to like loops. i just find it cute
02:55:190 (4) - Try to avoid unnatural slider compress. Notice to the right of the slider center, that there is a bunch of slider lines that are really close together. It should be smooth like so. http://puu.sh/1SwRu i didint really see the difference....
03:03:190 (1) - Maybe a wavy slider? tried some, but cant make a good one..

Call Me smoothie
It started out looking like a nice slider oriented difficulty and then you changed to streams for the rest of the song. I was enjoying the sliders and was really hoping this would be a Normal like difficulty. Oh well.

00:04:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest making all of this closer to 1.00. The start and end are 1.03 and the inside is 0.98. fixed a little bit.. cause i cant make it perfectly 1.0...
00:07:190 (3,4,5,6,1) - Clean up this spacing? Also 00:07:190 (3,4,5) - looks nice evenly wrapped around 2. http://puu.sh/1SxcQ fixed
00:08:440 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks rough. The note isn't perfectly centered. tired to fix it
00:09:440 (4,1,2) - Alignment is bad. Please improve this. Make like this? http://puu.sh/1Sxm0 i changed this a bit due to the previous adjustments.
00:15:940 (5,1,2,3) - spacing is very different than your first version of this. I suggest fixing this. fixed to my best
00:16:690 (3,4,5) - Again check this pattern.
00:17:690 (5,1,2) - Again alignment. Make sure your spacing is perfect and 1 is properly blanketted with 2. fixed the above two
00:27:190 (3,4,5,6) - Avoid lowering the snap (even slightly) when you're going into a jump. I suggest keeping spacing closer to 1.0 so that players don't slow down into the jump.Also try centering 3 with 2. imo its fine for now..
00:28:190 (1) - I keep mishitting this. Place in the center of the playing field to prevent people from mishitting? i would say just keep it as it is now, or im ganna changed the whole section after that and btw its not really blocking so i think it would not be a hard point... i tried and it works pretty good.
00:49:690 (5,1,2) - stack better please.
00:57:690 (5,1,2) - ^ sure for both
02:40:690 (2,3,4,5) - Doesn't look right to me.It might be that the angle is slightly off, but i think it would better if there was a tad more space between the blanket. Try to improve the blanket is my advice. its a flow problem, i reversed them and now its better than before..
02:41:190 (5,6,7) - Personally i don't like this transition. Too complicated and follows off beat vocals. Don't need to do anything if you don't want to. fine for me ...

Call me strawberrie
Took me awhile to get used to the overmapped parts. I had problems trying to mod this so, use good judgment please when checking my findings.

01:13:190 (4,5) - feels too close after a jump. Also looks quite bad. I suggest this be a jump like the other sliders. you could stack this01:13:690 (5) - on 1 and then add a note here 01:14:065 - . definitely plays better than what you have now. If not there is probably other ways to map this part that would be better. well... shape is not that bad...at least to me and hmm its a good DS for now so i would keep that
01:24:690 (2) - Doesn't look like previous slider. You should fix this. Maybe even reverse selection the sequence, I don't know. nice catch, tail tick is off and fixed
01:29:190 (6,1,2) - Try to avoid note slider note patterns. They tend to be awkward. you should just have a triple like the next section.
01:45:940 (7,1,2) - ^its ok i think, so keep it for now..
02:27:690 (5,1) - Stack better. it is good now..



Good luck.

thanks for modding~!

Hi there

[General]
* Invisible spinner-osu, spinner-spin, spinner-clear are unrankable, I think
* Your diff name makes players are confusing which one is easier or harder one. Rename all your diff name with difficulty name (e.g. "Hard", "Normal")

[Call Me Sweetie]
* Since this diff is an easier one, it's not recommended to use 0,5x BPM Multiplier. Because it makes beginners are confusing during reading a slider

00:37:190 (2) - I think curve slider is better than this slider.... It's kinda weird pattern having a curve slider (00:38:190 (3)) in one combo....
00:39:190 (4) - ^
01:28:690 (1) - This note is too close from spinner, since this diff is an easier one
02:56:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - These 1/2 pattern are not fit to the music. Try changing the pattern and follow the music/rhythm from the song

[Call Me Smoothie]
00:14:690 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This pattern isn't same as 00:12:440 (2,3,4,5,6)
00:47:190 (6,7,1,2) - Why triplets are too much? It doesn't follow the music
00:55:190 (6,7,1,2) - ^

[Call Me Strawberrie]
01:35:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This streams doesn't follow the music, maybe try this pattern for better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/620948
01:51:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^
02:43:190 (6) - Move up a bit so it stack with (6)?


Once you done, forum PM me

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Invisible spinner-osu, spinner-spin, spinner-clear are unrankable, I think yea you are right..
* Your diff name makes players are confusing which one is easier or harder one. Rename all your diff name with difficulty name (e.g. "Hard", "Normal") im probably gonna do that change, because it is so weird to me now...

[Call Me Sweetie]
* Since this diff is an easier one, it's not recommended to use 0,5x BPM Multiplier. Because it makes beginners are confusing during reading a slider but still i think it fits the song at that point, so i would like to keep that..

00:37:190 (2) - I think curve slider is better than this slider.... It's kinda weird pattern having a curve slider (00:38:190 (3)) in one combo....
00:39:190 (4) - ^ i think its pretty cute thou
01:28:690 (1) - This note is too close from spinner, since this diff is an easier one hmm if this is a must, i would like to fix that, but i dont really know where should i put that,
02:56:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - These 1/2 pattern are not fit to the music. Try changing the pattern and follow the music/rhythm from the song i changed the middle 3 ones into a slider, i would say its better?

[Call Me Smoothie]
00:14:690 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This pattern isn't same as 00:12:440 (2,3,4,5,6) its actually the same as 00:06:440 (2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:47:190 (6,7,1,2) - Why triplets are too much? It doesn't follow the music i did reduce some triples, now would be fine
00:55:190 (6,7,1,2) - ^

[Call Me Strawberrie]
01:35:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This streams doesn't follow the music, maybe try this pattern for better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/620948
01:51:190 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^ imo its fine... your suggestion is good but kinda simple for me, so if its not a big deal im gonna keep that.
02:43:190 (6) - Move up a bit so it stack with (6)? sure, and also changed a little bit for the shape of the next long slider


Once you done, forum PM me

thanks for modding~!

Strawberry-chan, when you in the mood, please call me

Bubbled

Oh my god, here we go again.

Go!

Finally bubbled , Go !

oh nice n(*≧▽≦*)n
thanks guys~!

Well, it's less annoying than the Nightcore version. I'll give it that.

Royston wrote:

Well, it's less annoying than the Nightcore version. I'll give it that.

thank you~!
you may wanna try Nightcore mode on this song, thats gonna be annoying hard lol

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

ATTATION

im gonna change spin-osu spin-clear and spin-spin

so please let me know when XATs are going to do something thank you

If you have something to change in your bubbled map, just go ahead and fix it, you can easily ask the XAT who bubbled it to do a quick recheck and then rebubble it.

Kurai wrote:

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

ATTATION

im gonna change spin-osu spin-clear and spin-spin

so please let me know when XATs are going to do something thank you

If you have something to change in your bubbled map, just go ahead and fix it, you can easily ask the XAT who bubbled it to do a quick recheck and then rebubble it.

alright thanks

Is it changed? If yes, PM Kurai for a rebubble since he popped it (:!

Hope to see this ranked soon c:

Gabe wrote:

Is it changed? If yes, PM Kurai for a rebubble since he popped it (:!

Hope to see this ranked soon c:

ok thank you

If only a skin file has been changed, I guess I can rank, I wanted to rank it before I even popped it. No need to wait any longer!

Congrats moe~ ♥

Oh fml.. not this Song.. But nevermind, great Job -Baby Strawberry- D

恭喜rank >w<

oh no, this song DDDDD:
anyways grats

I remember this from my Dreamland Dub times, grats for rank finally.

grats on rank!

恭喜啦=v=

I hear this too much IRL, makes my ears bleed.
Good map BTW.

I can't say I like overusing symmetry like this. At least the Insane lacks some creativity in my opinion.
It isn't really bad though, so congratz I guess.

Next time try to make your patterns longer. Right now with them being so short, and such a strong reliance on symmetry on the very center of the map, it makes all of your patterns very similar. They get stale really fast. You even had the advantage of overmapping everywhere. Try doing patterns for an entire musical phrase instead of portions of those phrases. Take that into consideration on your next map, I guess~

Can't see any reference

I can't rate 1 faster

Backfire wrote:

I can't rate 1 faster

Man, you don't have to say that...

Anyway congratulations!

thanks everyone

HEY I JUST MEET YOU
AND THIS IS CRAZY
BUT HERE'S MY PANTSUS
SO HUG ME MAYBE u//u
(?)

<3

JauiPlaY wrote:

Backfire wrote:

I can't rate 1 faster

Man, you don't have to say that...

Anyway congratulations!

Agree with JPY

寶貝草莓恭喜喔!!! xD ( 說草莓會跟草莓搞錯 :p )

Edit :

You shouldn't judge the song but the map itself when you give a rating to a beatmap.

Backfire wrote:

I can't rate 1 faster

what the ..

恭喜啦:3