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Haya

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-22T21:10:34+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 13. April 2013 at 23:48:46

Artist: nano
Title: Omoide Kakera
Tags: Sakuya Layfon LunarSakuya Red_Layfon nanoir nicovideo Nico Nico Douga
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7053kb
Play Time: 04:10
Difficulties Available:

Insane (5 stars, 799 notes)
Layfon's Easy (2,94 stars, 203 notes)
Normal (4,33 stars, 380 notes)
Sakuya's Hard (4,92 stars, 431 notes)

Download: nano - Omoide Kakera
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Map #2! ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ♥ Ranked!!

New MP3! Redownload if you had this map before 02.11.2012 ~

Layfon's Easy by Red Layfon (100%)
Normal by Haya (100%)
Sakuya's Hard by LunarSakuya (100%)
Insane by Haya (100%)

Thanks to the following modders

Irreversible
Tenshichan
Bomber34
Kin
xxheroxx
R e d
Natsu
No_Gu
Yuki-kun
CDFA
Hsiao-Chai
ztrot
phaZ
Scorpiour
Charles445
Kurai

Thanks to meiikyuu for the Banner! :3

Last edited by Haya 2013-04-14T12:47:36+00:00, edited 71 times in total.

EpicRazor214

8 posts

Joined July 2012

EpicRazor214 2012-10-25T00:25:46+00:00

Love this Beatmap

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2012-10-25T17:25:01+00:00

http://puu.sh/1iBPG

Hope you like it lol

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-26T18:07:22+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
http://puu.sh/1iBPG

Hope you like it lol

Love it, thanks ^^

Kin

Beatmap Nominator

2,629 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2012-10-27T17:40:09+00:00

Hi, M4M here ~
all suggest except unranked stuff

general :

"pulse" and "Omoide Kakera BG" are the same BG, delete one of them
maybe change your "normal-hitwhistle" as normal-hitclap

Lowah :

Hit sound

All whistle are clap if you do this ----> change your "normal-hitwhistle" as normal-hitclap
00:42:030 - add whistle
00:42:630 - ^
00:43:830 (2) - ^
00:45:630 - ^
00:46:230 - ^
00:48:630 (5) - ^
00:49:830 (2) - ^
00:50:430 - ^
00:53:430 - ^
00:55:230 - ^
00:55:830 - ^
00:56:430 - ^
00:57:030 (5) - ^
00:58:530 - add finish ?
01:51:330 (1) - add whistle
01:54:630 (6) - ^
01:55:830 (2) - ^
01:58:230 (5) - ^
01:58:530 - add finish
01:58:830 - add whistle
01:59:430 - ^

unranked stuff

00:58:830 (2) - slider end is unsnapped
01:00:030 (4) - ^
01:00:930 (1) - ^
01:02:130 (3) - ^
01:03:030 (4) - ^
01:04:530 (2) - ^
01:05:730 (3) - ^
01:06:930 (4) - ^
01:08:130 (1) - ^, snap slider end on white tick
01:09:030 (2) - slider end is unsnapped
01:09:930 (4) - ^
01:11:730 (6) - ^
01:12:330 (7) - ^
01:12:930 (1) - ^
01:16:830 (1) - unsnapped arrow and end
01:36:330 (3,1) - 2 hit object in same time, move spinner 1 tick later
02:01:530 (3) - slider end unsnapped
02:02:130 (4) - ^
02:03:330 (1) - ^
02:04:230 (2) - ^
02:04:830 (3) - arrow and slider end unsnapped
02:06:330 (3) - slider end unsnapped
02:07:530 (5) - ^
02:08:730 (6) - ^
02:10:530 (1) - ^, resnap end on white tick
02:11:430 (2) - slider end unsnapped
02:12:930 (1) - ^, resnap end on white tick
02:19:230 (1) - arrow and slider end unsnapped
02:38:130 (1) - ^

00:51:030 (4,5) - move red point in center of slider tick ?
01:15:330 (1,2,3) - hit on red tick can confuse beginner, try a slider like this : http://puu.sh/1jjzc
01:35:730 - I don't know why bpm is x0.50 here
01:40:155 - you can remove inherited point here
01:40:305 - ^
02:17:730 (1,2,3) - hit on red tick can confuse beginner, try a slider like this : http://puu.sh/1jjzc
02:34:530 (1) - for better blanket on 7 : 2nd point to : x100 y 212 /// 3rd point to x100 y 264
03:12:930 (1,1,1,2) - don't make a spacing like this, it's confuse beginner

Normal :

00:48:330 (8) - too much arrow here, try this : http://puu.sh/1jk6S
00:56:430 (3,4,5) - too much confusion for normal diff
01:07:530 (1) - too much arrow here, try this : http://puu.sh/1jkiT
01:16:830 (1,2,3,4) - too much confusion for normal diff
01:43:230 (1) - turn off grid if you want to make slider end on 1
01:48:030 (1,2) - too much confusion for normal diff
01:59:430 (4,2) - don't make overlap like this for normal diff
02:38:130 (6) - delete sv x1,25 here
02:59:730 (2) - turn grid off if you want to make him on slider end
03:09:030 (4) - ^
03:55:830 (2) - don't make too much arrow like this

Sakuya's hard :

00:46:380 (2) - maybe try to make a blanket like this ? http://puu.sh/1jlso
03:58:530 (1) - i think it's look a bit strange with 2 and 3 next to 1

Insane :

MAX score must be under 20 000 000 for ranked, I can't mod for approuval sorry

well good luck ~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-27T18:23:18+00:00

SPOILER

Kin wrote:
Hi, M4M here ~
all suggest except unranked stuff

general :

"pulse" and "Omoide Kakera BG" are the same BG, delete one of them
maybe change your "normal-hitwhistle" as normal-hitclap

Normal :

00:48:330 (8) - too much arrow here, try this : http://puu.sh/1jk6S
00:56:430 (3,4,5) - too much confusion for normal diff
01:07:530 (1) - too much arrow here, try this : http://puu.sh/1jkiT
01:16:830 (1,2,3,4) - too much confusion for normal diff
01:43:230 (1) - turn off grid if you want to make slider end on 1
01:48:030 (1,2) - too much confusion for normal diff
01:59:430 (4,2) - don't make overlap like this for normal diff
02:38:130 (6) - delete sv x1,25 here
02:59:730 (2) - turn grid off if you want to make him on slider end
03:09:030 (4) - ^
03:55:830 (2) - don't make too much arrow like this

well good luck ~

Some of the things you pointed out have been fixed.
Pulse.png was used for the SB so I'll leave it like this.
I won't change my normal-hitwhistle.

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2012-10-27T20:21:09+00:00

Kin wrote:
Lowah :
Hit sound
All whistle are clap if you do this ----> change your "normal-hitwhistle" as normal-hitclap
00:42:030 - add whistle
00:42:630 - ^
00:43:830 (2) - ^
00:45:630 - ^
00:46:230 - ^
00:48:630 (5) - ^
00:49:830 (2) - ^
00:50:430 - ^
00:53:430 - ^
00:55:230 - ^
00:55:830 - ^
00:56:430 - ^
00:57:030 (5) - ^
00:58:530 - add finish ?
01:51:330 (1) - add whistle
01:54:630 (6) - ^
01:55:830 (2) - ^
01:58:230 (5) - ^
01:58:530 - add finish
01:58:830 - add whistle
01:59:430 - ^
unranked stuff
00:58:830 (2) - slider end is unsnapped
01:00:030 (4) - ^
01:00:930 (1) - ^
01:02:130 (3) - ^
01:03:030 (4) - ^
01:04:530 (2) - ^
01:05:730 (3) - ^
01:06:930 (4) - ^
01:08:130 (1) - ^, snap slider end on white tick
01:09:030 (2) - slider end is unsnapped
01:09:930 (4) - ^
01:11:730 (6) - ^
01:12:330 (7) - ^
01:12:930 (1) - ^
01:16:830 (1) - unsnapped arrow and end
01:36:330 (3,1) - 2 hit object in same time, move spinner 1 tick later
02:01:530 (3) - slider end unsnapped
02:02:130 (4) - ^
02:03:330 (1) - ^
02:04:230 (2) - ^
02:04:830 (3) - arrow and slider end unsnapped
02:06:330 (3) - slider end unsnapped
02:07:530 (5) - ^
02:08:730 (6) - ^
02:10:530 (1) - ^, resnap end on white tick
02:11:430 (2) - slider end unsnapped
02:12:930 (1) - ^, resnap end on white tick
02:19:230 (1) - arrow and slider end unsnapped
02:38:130 (1) - ^
00:51:030 (4,5) - move red point in center of slider tick ?
01:15:330 (1,2,3) - hit on red tick can confuse beginner, try a slider like this : http://puu.sh/1jjzc
01:35:730 - I don't know why bpm is x0.50 here
01:40:155 - you can remove inherited point here
01:40:305 - ^
02:17:730 (1,2,3) - hit on red tick can confuse beginner, try a slider like this : http://puu.sh/1jjzc
02:34:530 (1) - for better blanket on 7 : 2nd point to : x100 y 212 /// 3rd point to x100 y 264
03:12:930 (1,1,1,2) - don't make a spacing like this, it's confuse beginner

._. Someone messed around with my sliders. none of them were unsnapped. I checked the mod and somewhere along the lines, someone changed my x0.80 to x0.75. That's the only reason it's unsnapped. Actually a lot of my SV changes were modified, so many of them were wtf when I looked at it recently.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-27T22:11:54+00:00

Yea, I don't know why, but osu has bugged recently... My Map resetted itself by about 30 seconds and the guest diffs suddenly had weird slider velos -.-

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2012-10-27T22:59:25+00:00

Kin wrote:
Sakuya's hard :

00:46:380 (2) - maybe try to make a blanket like this ? http://puu.sh/1jlso already blanketed? xD
03:58:530 (1) - i think it's look a bit strange with 2 and 3 next to 1 maybe a suggestion would help =v=, i left it for now

well good luck ~

Thanks for mod!!

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Irreversible 2012-10-27T23:40:04+00:00

Hey

Lowah

00:23:430 (2) - What about something like this? http://puu.sh/1jsHg
00:48:030 (4) - I would add a circle here
01:16:830 (1) - ?? 1 tick lesser
01:24:930 (5) - http://puu.sh/1jsNE
01:36:330 (3) - This is also not possible o,o You have to take care with 0.5x speed and stuff
02:19:230 (1) - two ticks lesser o.o
02:33:030 (6) - add a circle
02:38:130 (1) - xD should be longer i guess
03:37:530 (1) - sounds weird, delete?

Normal + Insane

irc mod

SPOILER

01:01 Haya: Ey
01:01 Irreversible: ja?
01:01 Haya: Lowah hast du glaub ich umsonst gemodded
01:01 Haya: Sie hat mir das gemoddete noch nicht geschickt
01:02 Irreversible: omg
01:02 Irreversible: egal man
01:02 Irreversible: ich will nich nochmal easy modden
01:02 Haya: XD
01:02 Haya: Ist okay
01:02 Irreversible: voll mühe gegeben
01:02 Irreversible: extra für dich
01:02 Irreversible: wirklich durchgespielt
01:02 Haya: Süß von dir
01:02 Irreversible: BALBLA UMSONST
01:02 Irreversible: headhsooot
01:02 Irreversible: ok jez normal
01:03 Haya: 02:56:130 - das gitarren solo bitt enicht auf hitsounds modden
01:03 Irreversible: okay
01:03 Haya: Die timing points mit den Tick sounds wurde gelöscht
01:03 Irreversible: das musste ich auch immer sagen
01:03 Irreversible: xDD
01:04 Haya: Muss das fixen
01:04 Irreversible: 00:20:130 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1jsYu wie wärs irgendwie so? so würdest du distance snap einhalten, und
01:04 Irreversible: hast nen ovalen flow xD musst aber nicht xD
01:04 Irreversible: (is jez hässlich hier)
01:06 Irreversible: 01:15:630 (6) - den würd ich weg machen
01:06 Irreversible: und dafür machst dus so http://puu.sh/1jt0Q
01:07 Irreversible: 01:26:730 (1) - uhhh da war ein blue tick xD 1 tick mehr
01:08 Haya: Nee
01:08 Haya: Da fehlt die slider velo
01:08 Haya: Also der grüne strich
01:08 Irreversible: achsö
01:08 Irreversible: 02:17:730 (4) - bei dem part würd ich auch iwie auf lyrics achten also die nächsten 3 circles noch xD
01:09 Haya: Nee
01:09 Irreversible: 02:59:730 (2) - der is nich so schön aufm 1
01:09 Haya: Ich mag es nicht 1/2 in ner normal zu machen
01:09 Irreversible: ist ja nur diese stelle. xD
01:09 Irreversible: und bisschen abwechslung halt
01:09 Irreversible: weil es klingt schon arg gleich die ganze zeit
01:10 Irreversible: und am schluss haste auch iwie keine grünen striche xD
01:11 Irreversible: aber die map gefällt mir voll, fänds jez unnötig da irgendwas noch zu verbessern xD
01:11 Irreversible: von der platzierung*
01:11 Irreversible: xD
01:11 Haya: ach kack slider bug
01:11 Haya: Was wie wo
01:11 Haya: grüne striche
01:11 Irreversible: ja halt am schluss .. is iwie auch alles falsch vllt wegen timing
01:12 Haya: wo
01:12 Irreversible: ach der bug war bei mir
01:12 Haya: lol
01:13 Irreversible: bei der hard gibts gar nichts..
01:13 Haya: Pro mapper ^^
01:14 Irreversible: ja is voll blöd
01:14 Irreversible: sieht voll faul aus
01:14 Haya: Hm?
01:14 Haya: Wieso das
01:14 Irreversible: ja wenn cih schreib
01:14 Irreversible: i can't find anything thats wrong o.o
01:15 Haya: XD
01:15 Haya: Das zeigt wie gut die map ist
01:15 Irreversible: ..ist sie cht
01:15 Irreversible: echt
01:15 Haya: http://puu.sh/1jtdd
01:15 Irreversible: ich glaub ich bau einfach nen fehler ein
01:16 Irreversible: paranoia und so
01:16 Haya: Nene
01:16 Haya: Lass es
01:16 Haya: Du darfst beim modden nicht lügen
01:16 Irreversible: das warn scherz
01:16 Irreversible: xDDD
01:16 Haya: xD
01:16 Haya: lol
01:16 Haya: Sakuya will meine Insane zocken
01:17 Irreversible: hm
01:17 Irreversible: ich modde in der zeit
01:18 Irreversible: also insane jez
01:18 Haya: Kay
01:18 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1jthv
01:18 Irreversible: 00:28:080 (6) -
01:18 Irreversible: wolltest wieder freestylen?
01:18 Irreversible: xDDD
01:21 Irreversible: 00:36:030 (4,5,6,7) - für den flooowwww
01:21 Irreversible: 00:38:880 (12) - new combo?
01:21 Haya: huh
01:21 Haya: Warum ist der so versetzt
01:21 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1jtlLhier das ist für den flow
01:22 Irreversible: vergessen zu puushen
01:22 Haya: was fürn flow
01:22 Haya: xD
01:22 Irreversible: den ovalen flowww
01:23 Irreversible: 01:25:230 (4) - und 01:25:530 (7) - new combo? xD
01:24 Haya: nene
01:24 Haya: NC ist bei mir lyrics
01:25 Irreversible: den triplet is bisschen unnötig..
01:25 Irreversible: der
01:25 Irreversible: 02:22:980 (5) -
01:25 Irreversible: 02:26:055 (4) - der au
01:25 Irreversible: 02:26:055 (4,3,4) - ganz schlechter flow :X XDD
01:26 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1jtrp like thissss
01:26 Irreversible: du musst schauen
01:26 Haya: Scheiß auf flow
01:26 Haya: :X
01:26 Irreversible: nuhh
01:27 Haya: Kay habs
01:27 Irreversible: es ist viel besser zu spielen so
01:27 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1jtua .. dein flow
01:28 Haya: haha
01:28 Haya: Ich habs ja shcon
01:28 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1jtuq mein flow <3
01:28 Irreversible: LOL
01:28 Irreversible: XD
01:28 Irreversible: voll am nerven.. hab das im forum gehsene
01:28 Irreversible: jez voll flowaddiction
01:29 Haya: oafaehfuiafhuiahjnaq
01:29 Haya: weiter gehts.
01:29 Irreversible: ja muss testen
01:30 Irreversible: 02:32:730 (1) - den circle part find ich nbisschen unleserlich

01:30 Haya: Np
01:30 Haya: Tester habn es geschafft
01:31 Haya: oder meinst du ab
01:31 Haya: 02:33:330 (5) -
01:31 Irreversible: jo
01:31 Haya: np
01:32 Irreversible: hier die idee
01:32 Haya: Hab bei 5 einfach NC gemacht
01:32 Haya: damit man es einfacher sieht
01:32 Irreversible: nein
01:32 Irreversible: ahso
01:32 Irreversible: ja
01:32 Irreversible: nein so war das nicht gemeint
01:32 Irreversible: xD
01:32 Haya: wasn
01:33 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/1jtBI
01:33 Irreversible: die zahlen einfach das du weisst welche circles xD
01:33 Irreversible: nicht combos
01:33 Haya: dem
01:33 Haya: paint
01:33 Haya: skills
01:33 Irreversible: paint tool sai
01:33 Irreversible:

01:33 Irreversible: XDD
01:34 Irreversible: ohaa
01:34 Irreversible: voll stolz auf den part
01:34 Irreversible: das is mein baby
01:34 Irreversible: ausser 10.. der is bisschen crappy
01:34 Haya: an sich ganz gut
01:34 Haya: aber 9 und 10 zu viel abstamnd
01:34 Irreversible: irgendwas stimmt aber nicht xD
01:35 Irreversible: ja genau xD
01:35 Haya: 5 und 6
01:35 Haya: und 4 und 5
01:35 Irreversible: nein 5 und 6 mit absicht
01:35 Irreversible: das is ja ein jump
01:35 Irreversible: das checkste automatisch
01:35 Irreversible: so im rausch
01:35 Haya: Passt nicht zum verherigen pattern
01:35 Haya: vor*
01:35 Irreversible: warum nicht o_o
01:36 Haya: Ka ist son gefühl
01:36 Haya: egal weiter
01:36 Irreversible: wie du meinst ;D
01:36 Irreversible: 03:42:330 (1,2,3) -
01:36 Irreversible: das würd ich ändern
01:36 Irreversible: das ist so schlimm.. xD
01:36 Haya: lol
01:37 Haya: Ändern gerne
01:37 Haya: aber wieso
01:37 Irreversible: weil
01:37 Irreversible: du bist so voll gut dran
01:37 Irreversible: und dann plötzlich siehst du nicht mehr wirklich was kommt
01:37 Haya: Dann
01:37 Haya: RETURN MOTHERFKCER
01:37 Irreversible: und voll hidden
01:37 Irreversible: und noch muttergeschrei von hinten
01:37 Irreversible: und stinkewindeln von rechts
01:37 Irreversible: miss
01:38 Haya: So
01:38 Haya: hab einfach
01:38 Haya: noch ne runde gemacht
01:38 Haya:

01:38 Irreversible: XDD
01:38 Irreversible: der rest passt

01:38 Irreversible: ist ganz cool
01:38 Haya: Gut
01:38 Haya: Vielleicht doch bisschen zu jumpy
01:38 Irreversible: nee
01:38 Haya: aber ist zu spät zum ändern
01:38 Irreversible: ja
01:38 Irreversible: XD

Sakura's Hard

I can't find any mistake or something that doesn't look good in that map. . . well done? XD

;D bis dann & viel glcük

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-27T23:51:21+00:00

Danke für den Mod ^^

Kin

Beatmap Nominator

2,629 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2012-10-28T12:38:10+00:00

back for insane diff ~
of course, no KD

Insane

01:07:680 (2,4) - whistle
01:07:830 (3) - finish ?
01:36:030 - whistle
01:51:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS 1,5 and just after DS 1,8 is bit strange for me
02:00:480 (5) - whistle
02:06:780 (3,5) - ^
02:06:930 (4) - remove whistle
02:10:080 (2) - whistle
02:10:230 (3) - finish, remove whistle
02:38:130 (1) - try to make this more symetric
02:56:280 - maybe whistle ?

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-28T13:52:55+00:00

SPOILER

Kin wrote:
back for insane diff ~
of course, no KD

Insane

01:07:680 (2,4) - whistle
01:07:830 (3) - finish ?
01:36:030 - whistle
01:51:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS 1,5 and just after DS 1,8 is bit strange for me
02:00:480 (5) - whistle
02:06:780 (3,5) - ^
02:06:930 (4) - remove whistle
02:10:080 (2) - whistle
02:10:230 (3) - finish, remove whistle
02:38:130 (1) - try to make this more symetric
02:56:280 - maybe whistle ?

All things done except for the symmetric one.
That slider is the symmetry itself

Thank you very much, Kin ~

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2012-10-28T20:22:33+00:00

[General]

LunarSakuya has a Guest diff. So add his/her name to tags in all diffs
The audio file you are using has a kbit/s of 320. But 192 is the allowed maximum.
04:18:930 - I would like to see you map until here (maybe end with spinner then). Your "ending" is okay, too. But it doesn't really call for an end here.
Your KIAI time is inconsistant

[Lowah]
- 2,98 Stars of the allowed 3 star limit for the "atleast on easier diff" rule

00:45:630 (6) - new combo. Vocal starts a new music phrase
00:53:130 (6,1) - new combo on (6) and remove new combo from (1)
01:09:930 (4) - new combo
02:01:530 (3) - bow should face into other direction. Looks better
02:07:530 (5) - Your combo gets to long. Use a new combo here or on the next one
02:12:330 (3) - Vocal calls for new combo. You can let the next slider be a new combo or not
02:24:630 (1) - Even if you follow music (or vocal) start the slider at 02:24:930 -
02:33:030 - maybe add a note or do a slider from (5) to this point

02:58:530 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical. Use this code

72,176,178530,6,2,B|72:60|156:24|232:60|252:108|244:164|256:176|256:176|268:164|260:108|280:60|356:28|440:60|440:176,1,640,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

03:12:930 (1,1,1,2) - These super low spacing parts are not so good for easier diffs D:
03:37:530 (1) - abit far away from center after the spinner.

[Normal]

00:23:130 (3) - not symmetrical

301,178,23130,2,0,B|256:120|212:178,2,110,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:34:530 (1) - not symmetrical

288,72,34530,6,0,B|432:56|504:192|432:328|288:312,1,440

00:36:030 (1) - slider beginning should stack with 00:34:230 (4) - . looks weird at the moment
00:38:730 (3) - to many repeats. better remove one repeat and add a note on 00:39:330 -

00:44:130 (3) - not symmetrical

136,216,44130,2,0,B|120:128|168:56|256:32|344:56|392:128|376:216,1,440

01:01:830 (4) - touches HP bar a little
01:06:030 (6) - ^
01:07:530 (1) - remove 2 repeats and add a Note on 01:08:130 - . Sounds better
01:14:430 (3) - stack with sliderbeginning of (1)
01:17:730 (2) - New combo

01:59:430 (4) - not symmetrical

169,119,119430,2,0,B|224:140|256:184|256:184|287:140|344:120,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

02:07:830 (1) - hard to say. For me the spinner is a tiny bit to short for this difficulty
02:09:855 - alot of unused green inherit lines
03:06:930 (1) - This slider is a bit ugly. Try using a slider where you can see the spikes.
03:14:730 (3) - Sliderend is in the HP bar. That is really ugly
03:22:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounding you used here doesn't work, sounds annoying/unfitting
03:32:286 - why is here a break?

03:42:030 (3) - unsymmetrical slider

312,200,222030,2,0,B|256:184|256:184|200:200,2,110,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

04:13:455 - unused green inherit line

[Sakuya's Hard]

00:21:180 (3) - slider beginning: whistle
00:31:230 (4) - new combo
02:00:330 (5,6,7,8) - plays weird
02:35:430 (3) - last anchor point one levelgrid4 to the left for a better symmetric
03:01:830 (3) - sounds overmapped D: Idk. these short slider repeats sound off
03:57:330 (3) - either a new combo or a Hitcircle on 03:57:180 - . At the moment it looks/sounds strange

- It plays fine but it sounds weird overall. Like it is "too" close to the vocals sometimes and sometimes it is uhhh.

[Insane]

00:28:830 (1) - sounds to loud
00:33:480 (5,7) - Their bows should face into the other direction for a better design of 00:33:180 (4,5,6,7) -
00:37:530 - add note somewhere
00:54:330 (7,8,9) - uuhh sounds suddenly so slow. Overall jump rate in this combo is a bit high or at least the flow isn't good enough
01:00:180 (6,1) - jump feels pointless. Use at least a lower spacing
01:03:780 - add note
01:24:480 (6) - spacing is off
01:24:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - sounds to loud. Flow would be better with a tiny bit of a lower spacing
01:35:730 (1) - suddenly so slow D:
01:51:180 (6,7,8) - they feel bad placed D: They look to much like they follow (4). Flow isn't nice for that D:
02:12:930 (3) - place on X: 320 Y: 312 for a better overlap with (2)
02:57:930 (4) - previous jump would be better with a distance of 1.3x
02:58:230 (7) - ^
03:10:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - too loud
03:48:330 (1) - one grid down

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2012-10-28T20:35:06+00:00

M4M From my queue~

[General]

The kbps of the mp3 is unrankable, the maximum is 192 kbps.
Unneeded green line: 00:57:930

[Lowah]

00:19:230 - Add this?
01:12:930 (1) - Add a note instead and let the slider begin 1 tick later?
01:15:330 (1,2,3) - I like finish sounds on this notes, although it might be a matter of taste
01:17:730 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
01:22:530 (1) - ^
01:23:730 (3) - End at 01:24:030 and add a note at 01:24:330
01:27:330 (3) - Finish sound on slider start
01:58:530 (1) - ^
02:09:930 (7) - NC
02:10:530 (1) - Remove NC and add finish sound
02:11:430 (2) - Extend slider to 02:11:880
02:15:330 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
02:18:180 (2,3) - Add Finish sounds?
02:20:130 (1) - ^
02:24:630 (1) - Finish sound at slider end
02:27:330 (1,2) - Better
02:29:730 (1) - Finish sound at slider start
02:32:730 (5) - Remove this note and add a slider instead until 02:33:030
02:34:530 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
02:56:130 (1) - Finish sound at start + end
03:12:930 (1,1,1) - It looks so empty here. Probably add a note between those circles at 03:13:530 and 03:14:730
03:17:730 (1) - Remove NC
03:37:530 (1) - Add Finish sound
03:39:330 (1) - ^ at slider start
03:44:130 (1) - ^
03:53:730 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:17:730 (1) - Add finish sound
00:18:030 (2,3) - Finish on both slider ends
00:24:930 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
00:28:830 (1) - Finish sound
00:29:730 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
I won't mention anymore hitsounding now with finish sound, you should get what I mean by now
00:33:030 (2) - Don't let it repeat
00:53:730 (3,4,5) - This might be confusing for beginners
01:15:780 (6) - Spacing
01:26:730 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:130 (1) - Remove NC
02:17:730 (4,5,6,7) - Better
02:30:930 (3) - 2 grid left and 1 down for a line
03:06:930 (1) - Fix this slider a bit because it is a normal diff
03:12:030 (6,7) - CTRL +G?

[Sakuya's Hard]

00:22:980 (6) - Delete note? To me it doesn't follow anything
01:20:880 (2) - Delete slider, extend previous slider 1/2 tick and add a note at 01:21:030
01:42:780 (2) - This overlapping is ... meh. You can do it better.
02:12:030 (3) - Delete note and extend the repeating slider until here?
02:21:630 (5) - Weird overlapping
03:09:330 (4) - Probably make it parallel to (3) and (5)?
03:35:430 (1) - I think the spinner should have a finish instead of a whistle
03:57:030 - Add a note here instead of the slider

[Insane]

00:46:080 (2) - Weird overlapping
01:15:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I fucking love this. Just saying
01:19:980 (4) - Move to x:128 y:144
01:44:430 (2,3) - CTRL + G, then (3) and (4) CTRL + G
02:02:730 (1) - 1 grid left
02:13:380 (4) - Overlapping D: (I don't like overlapping)
02:30:780 (4) - ^ D:
03:25:530 (3,4,5,6) - Make them more smooth

Very nice Insane!

I love this song + map! Good luck in getting it ranked!

+ STAR

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-28T21:28:42+00:00

SPOILER

bomber34 wrote:
[General]
LunarSakuya has a Guest diff. So add his/her name to tags in all diffs Fixed!
The audio file you are using has a kbit/s of 320. But 192 is the allowed maximum. Going to fix it later!
04:18:930 - I would like to see you map until here (maybe end with spinner then). Your "ending" is okay, too. But it doesn't really call for an end here. Nah gonna leave it like this ^^
Your KIAI time is inconsistant Fixed!
[Normal]
00:23:130 (3) - not symmetrical Fixed
301,178,23130,2,0,B|256:120|212:178,2,110,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:34:530 (1) - not symmetrical It is symmetrical
288,72,34530,6,0,B|432:56|504:192|432:328|288:312,1,440
00:36:030 (1) - slider beginning should stack with 00:34:230 (4) - . looks weird at the moment You won't see it ingame ^^
00:38:730 (3) - to many repeats. better remove one repeat and add a note on 00:39:330 - Fixed another way
00:44:130 (3) - not symmetrical
136,216,44130,2,0,B|120:128|168:56|256:32|344:56|392:128|376:216,1,440
Fixed!
01:01:830 (4) - touches HP bar a little Fixed!
01:06:030 (6) - ^ Fixed!
01:07:530 (1) - remove 2 repeats and add a Note on 01:08:130 - . Sounds better No <.<
01:14:430 (3) - stack with sliderbeginning of (1) Fixed!
01:17:730 (2) - New combo Fixed!
01:59:430 (4) - not symmetrical
169,119,119430,2,0,B|224:140|256:184|256:184|287:140|344:120,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:07:830 (1) - hard to say. For me the spinner is a tiny bit to short for this difficulty Naah
02:09:855 - alot of unused green inherit lines Fixed!
03:06:930 (1) - This slider is a bit ugly. Try using a slider where you can see the spikes. Imo it's alright, testers didn't have probs either
03:14:730 (3) - Sliderend is in the HP bar. That is really ugly Fixed!
03:22:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounding you used here doesn't work, sounds annoying/unfitting Fixed!
03:32:286 - why is here a break? Because I didn't want to let the HP drain and a small break always fits
03:42:030 (3) - unsymmetrical slider Fixed!
312,200,222030,2,0,B|256:184|256:184|200:200,2,110,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
04:13:455 - unused green inherit line Fixed!
[Insane]
00:28:830 (1) - sounds to loud Don't want to make it lower
00:33:480 (5,7) - Their bows should face into the other direction for a better design of 00:33:180 (4,5,6,7) - Fixed!
00:37:530 - add note somewhere Nope
00:54:330 (7,8,9) - uuhh sounds suddenly so slow. Overall jump rate in this combo is a bit high or at least the flow isn't good enough I will think about it
01:00:180 (6,1) - jump feels pointless. Use at least a lower spacing Lowered the spacing
01:03:780 - add note Nope, follows the lyrics
01:24:480 (6) - spacing is off No it isn't
01:24:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - sounds to loud. Flow would be better with a tiny bit of a lower spacing Fixed!
01:35:730 (1) - suddenly so slow D: Surprise!
01:51:180 (6,7,8) - they feel bad placed D: They look to much like they follow (4). Flow isn't nice for that D: Fixed!
02:12:930 (3) - place on X: 320 Y: 312 for a better overlap with (2) Nah, wouldn't change anything ingame
02:57:930 (4) - previous jump would be better with a distance of 1.3x It's good as it is
02:58:230 (7) - ^ ^
03:10:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - too loud Nah
03:48:330 (1) - one grid down Fixed!

Thanks Bomber :3

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-28T22:21:22+00:00

SPOILER

Tenshichan wrote:
M4M From my queue~

[General]

The kbps of the mp3 is unrankable, the maximum is 192 kbps. Fixing this after all Guest Diffs are updated
Unneeded green line: 00:57:930 Fixed!
[Normal]

00:17:730 (1) - Add finish sound
00:18:030 (2,3) - Finish on both slider ends
00:24:930 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
00:28:830 (1) - Finish sound
00:29:730 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
I won't mention anymore hitsounding now with finish sound, you should get what I mean by now Fixed all above!
00:33:030 (2) - Don't let it repeat I like this repeat, so no
00:53:730 (3,4,5) - This might be confusing for beginners You understimate their power!
01:15:780 (6) - Spacing Fixed!
01:26:730 (1) - Remove NC Fixed!
01:50:130 (1) - Remove NC Fixed!
02:17:730 (4,5,6,7) - Better Fixed!
02:30:930 (3) - 2 grid left and 1 down for a line Fixed!
03:06:930 (1) - Fix this slider a bit because it is a normal diff Oh man, if you guys insist... Fixed ._.
03:12:030 (6,7) - CTRL +G? Fixed!

[Insane]

00:46:080 (2) - Weird overlapping Fixed!
01:15:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I fucking love this. Just saying Thank you ^^
01:19:980 (4) - Move to x:128 y:144 Fixed!
01:44:430 (2,3) - CTRL + G, then (3) and (4) CTRL + G Nah I like this Anti-Flow ^^
02:02:730 (1) - 1 grid left
02:13:380 (4) - Overlapping D: (I don't like overlapping) I like it ^^
02:30:780 (4) - ^ D: ^
03:25:530 (3,4,5,6) - Make them more smooth
Very nice Insane!

I love this song + map! Good luck in getting it ranked!
+ STAR

Thank you very much for the Mod and the Star, Tenshi :3

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2012-10-29T18:10:11+00:00

bomber34 wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:21:180 (3) - slider beginning: whistle did you mean default whistle lol
00:31:230 (4) - new combo Fixed
02:00:330 (5,6,7,8) - plays weird
02:35:430 (3) - last anchor point one levelgrid4 to the left for a better symmetric Fixed
03:01:830 (3) - sounds overmapped D: Idk. these short slider repeats sound off uh matches bg music
03:57:330 (3) - either a new combo or a Hitcircle on 03:57:180 - . At the moment it looks/sounds strange Fixed
- It plays fine but it sounds weird overall. Like it is "too" close to the vocals sometimes and sometimes it is uhhh.

lol thanks for mod bomber!!

Tenshichan wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]

00:22:980 (6) - Delete note? To me it doesn't follow anything Fixed
01:20:880 (2) - Delete slider, extend previous slider 1/2 tick and add a note at 01:21:030 Rhythm sounds a little off so i'll hold it for now
01:42:780 (2) - This overlapping is ... meh. You can do it better. lol yea Fixed
02:12:030 (3) - Delete note and extend the repeating slider until here? Seems fine now
02:21:630 (5) - Weird overlapping I'll do something later
03:09:330 (4) - Probably make it parallel to (3) and (5)? Fixed
03:35:430 (1) - I think the spinner should have a finish instead of a whistle Fixed
03:57:030 - Add a note here instead of the slider Left it for now

Thanks Tenshi

http://puu.sh/1kaDE

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-10-29T18:21:20+00:00

Updated!
Waiting for Lora before I change the Mp3.

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2012-11-02T19:36:44+00:00

Tenshichan wrote:
M4M From my queue~

[Lowah]

00:19:230 - Add this?
01:12:930 (1) - Add a note instead and let the slider begin 1 tick later? Spacing would look weird if I didn't stack the note on top of the slider.
01:15:330 (1,2,3) - I like finish sounds on this notes, although it might be a matter of taste Taste. 3 finish sounds in a row to me sounds lol.
01:17:730 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
01:22:530 (1) - ^
01:23:730 (3) - End at 01:24:030 and add a note at 01:24:330 Why?
01:27:330 (3) - Finish sound on slider start
01:58:530 (1) - ^
02:09:930 (7) - NC
02:10:530 (1) - Remove NC and add finish sound
02:11:430 (2) - Extend slider to 02:11:880
02:15:330 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
02:18:180 (2,3) - Add Finish sounds? Same as your tastes.
02:20:130 (1) - ^
02:24:630 (1) - Finish sound at slider end
02:27:330 (1,2) - Better
02:29:730 (1) - Finish sound at slider start
02:32:730 (5) - Remove this note and add a slider instead until 02:33:030 Whoa. Explain to me how to do a slider going backwards in time.
02:34:530 (1) - Finish sound on slider start
02:56:130 (1) - Finish sound at start + end
03:12:930 (1,1,1) - It looks so empty here. Probably add a note between those circles at 03:13:530 and 03:14:730
03:17:730 (1) - Remove NC
03:37:530 (1) - Add Finish sound Which part of the slider?
03:39:330 (1) - ^ at slider start
03:44:130 (1) - ^
03:53:730 (1) - ^

EDIT: Also added bomber34's mods along with yours.

Rant:

SPOILER

I'm very flexible in making changes to my works, but I am NOT a dog.
Whenever people ask me to add things, please consider the following:

Will it increase the star difficulty past the "limit"? If so, I don't feel like "adding" it.
Does it HAVE to match the song perfectly on said difficulty? (Granted "Lowah" is ambiguous)
Is it an "error" or is it just your own tastes?
PS, I'm gonna be so mad when some other person comes and tells me to get rid of the new stuff you tell me to do.

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2012-11-03T11:22:36+00:00

Updated! - MP3 File changed!

Haya

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Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2012-11-04T19:12:03+00:00

crap.

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2012-11-17T23:48:59+00:00

Haya wrote:
crap.

Linn

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Joined April 2010

Linn 2012-11-17T23:50:16+00:00

Haya wrote:
crap.

GumiMegpoid_old

2 posts

Joined June 2012

GumiMegpoid_old 2012-11-20T16:29:48+00:00

love this map x3

GumiMegpoid_old

2 posts

Joined June 2012

GumiMegpoid_old 2012-11-20T16:34:13+00:00

make more beatmaps with nano x3

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2012-11-20T17:13:32+00:00

Don't worry, a new nano beatmap is coming soon :3

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2012-11-29T16:12:34+00:00

love this so much

a star for you :3

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2012-11-29T18:12:51+00:00

Thank you very much! :3

Diasios

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Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-02-05T19:44:57+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Artist: ナノ || Romanised Artist: nano
• Title: 想イ出カケラ || Romanised Title: Omoide Kakera
• Tags: add "Lunar Sakuya Red Layfon"
• Offset: 1000
• Max storyboard elements size is 800x600.
• Make kiai the same on all diffs.
• Also, every diff has differents breaks that start/end in different positions: make them consistent between all diffs.
• Why don't you use this video? Or try to make something like that with a SB.

Lowah

• Is this diff supposed to be an Easy? It's kinda too "hard" for being the easier difficulty. Anyway, rename this diff Red's Easy (or Red's Normal, or something like that)
• HP Drain Rate: 4
• Approach Rate: 5
• Overall Difficulty: 4
• 00:59:500 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
• 02:13:900 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Normal

• HP Drain Rate: 5
• Approach Rate: 6
• Overall Difficulty: 5

Insane

• HP Drain Rate: 7

Just some suggestions.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-05T21:57:37+00:00

SPOILER

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Artist: ナノ || Romanised Artist: nano Done!
• Title: 想イ出カケラ || Romanised Title: Omoide Kakera Done!
• Tags: add "Lunar Sakuya Red Layfon" Why? They are already there
• Offset: 1000 Done!
• Max storyboard elements size is 800x600. I will delete the storyboard anyways
• Make kiai the same on all diffs. Done!
• Also, every diff has differents breaks that start/end in different positions: make them consistent between all diffs. Nah
• Why don't you use this video? Or try to make something like that with a SB.
I will use the video later

Normal

• HP Drain Rate: 5 Done!
• Approach Rate: 6 Done!
• Overall Difficulty: 5
Done!

Insane

• HP Drain Rate: 7
Done!

Just some suggestions.

Thank you very much!

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-02-06T00:03:47+00:00

I am terrible.

Remapped to an Easy. Still gonna remove stuffs so that the star rating goes lower.~

SPOILER

Layfon's Easy
~~http://puu.sh/1Y5g2~~

Last edited by -Kirito- 2013-02-07T05:02:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

R e d

226 posts

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R e d 2013-02-06T19:54:05+00:00

song is so long lmao i just had time to mod 1 mod properly
i hope help in something :3

[Insane]

00:25:000 (1) - finish
00:28:600 (7) - add circle,, i think is important a circle here on white big tick, helps help rythme and flow
00:34:600 (1) - finish
00:37:600 (1) - add circle, i listen a important note there, that is important to start the stream in time, (because stream start on red tick)
00:37:600 (1) - if you add circle^ New combo on it
00:46:150 (2) - put a circle in 00:46:150 and no a slider, because i just listen a small drums there, since voice dont start there, looks wierd to me.
but 00:45:700 (1,5) are great because start and end with voice, 00:46:150 (2) feels weird
01:28:900 (8,9,1) - inst this so much jump distance? listening the song, i dont feel like jumping so much
and then 01:29:650 (4,5) - really small distance, in 01:29:650 (4,5) - is where i feel need jump!!
01:35:800 (1) - finish
01:51:250 (6,7,8) - looks weird and out of your style. the player will get a bit confused. just stack it propably
01:55:975 (6) - delete this circle. it is overmapped, there i no beat in there
01:58:600 (1) - finish, and also i suggest to make usack it to make NC visible
02:04:825 (2,4,6) - there is no beat there, so is overmapped and non sense. just delete that circles, not stream there.
02:14:200 (1) - remove nc. you keep follow voice, there is no reason for nc imo
02:19:300 (1) - use custom soft for this slider.
02:31:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so much circles in a row :s dont forget that is 200 bpm. In my opinion you should not do so much singles in a row. a least start sliders in 02:33:250 (4) -
02:33:250 (4) - NC combo? you have a loud voice there, makes more sense to me
02:58:600 (1) - finish, because start solo and white big tick
03:33:100 (13) - this is a important slider that must not be overlaped by 03:32:200 (1,2,3,4) -
03:38:500 (1) - soft hitsounds in this slider? maybe make it a bit slower?
03:57:400 (1) - this and 01:35:800 (1) i suggest use same slider speed for both and this 02:38:200 (1) -

Good luck :3

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-06T22:06:55+00:00

SPOILER

R e d wrote:
song is so long lmao i just had time to mod 1 mod properly
i hope help in something :3

[Insane]

00:25:000 (1) - finish Done!
00:28:600 (7) - add circle,, i think is important a circle here on white big tick, helps help rythme and flow I don't think so
00:34:600 (1) - finish Done!
00:37:600 (1) - add circle, i listen a important note there, that is important to start the stream in time, (because stream start on red tick) Done!
00:37:600 (1) - if you add circle^ New combo on it Done!
00:46:150 (2) - put a circle in 00:46:150 and no a slider, because i just listen a small drums there, since voice dont start there, looks wierd to me.
but 00:45:700 (1,5) are great because start and end with voice, 00:46:150 (2) feels weird Changed it another way
01:28:900 (8,9,1) - inst this so much jump distance? listening the song, i dont feel like jumping so much Personal taste
and then 01:29:650 (4,5) - really small distance, in 01:29:650 (4,5) - is where i feel need jump!! Well, I guess it's a matter of taste
01:35:800 (1) - finish Done!
01:51:250 (6,7,8) - looks weird and out of your style. the player will get a bit confused. just stack it propably Done!
01:55:975 (6) - delete this circle. it is overmapped, there i no beat in there Done!
01:58:600 (1) - finish, and also i suggest to make usack it to make NC visible Added the Finish
02:04:825 (2,4,6) - there is no beat there, so is overmapped and non sense. just delete that circles, not stream there. *Sigh*
02:14:200 (1) - remove nc. you keep follow voice, there is no reason for nc imo Done!
02:19:300 (1) - use custom soft for this slider. Nope
02:31:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so much circles in a row :s dont forget that is 200 bpm. In my opinion you should not do so much singles in a row. a least start sliders in 02:33:250 (4) - Naaaah, np np
02:33:250 (4) - NC combo? you have a loud voice there, makes more sense to me Nope
02:58:600 (1) - finish, because start solo and white big tick Done!
03:33:100 (13) - this is a important slider that must not be overlaped by 03:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - You won't see the overlap ingame
03:38:500 (1) - soft hitsounds in this slider? maybe make it a bit slower? Used Soft hitsounds but kept the speed
03:57:400 (1) - this and 01:35:800 (1) i suggest use same slider speed for both and this 02:38:200 (1) - Didn't really understand so I just left it

Good luck :3

Thank you, R e d!

-Kirito-

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Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-02-07T00:22:49+00:00

I modded myself and fixed a lot of things. :3 *gives self kudosu*

More minor changes to come..

Someone kill me please.

SPOILER

Layfon's Easy:
~~http://puu.sh/1YAbX~~

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-02-07T22:17:35+00:00

More subtle changes.

Someone please check me on NC (below)

03:40:900 (1) - I don't know how to fix.. it looks awkward! >.<

SPOILER

Layfon's Easy:
~~http://puu.sh/1Z0dJ~~

Last edited by -Kirito- 2013-02-08T02:47:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-07T23:14:05+00:00

Blahblah everything updated

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-02-08T02:06:00+00:00

Haya, you updated over the wrong map. The insane has my Easy now, and my Easy was erased. D:

Fix when you get back.

SPOILER

Insane (previous):
http://puu.sh/1Z7hw

Layfon's Easy (updated):
http://puu.sh/1Z7ig

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-08T11:19:50+00:00

Fixed

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-02-08T22:00:52+00:00

And now my final fix..

Structural changes from 02:19:300 to 02:39:100 to improve flow.

Awaiting any more mods (:

SPOILER

Layfon's Easy:
http://puu.sh/1ZtQN

Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Mikarunoel131_DELETED 2013-02-08T22:29:04+00:00

Gute beatmap und tolles Lied :3
Stern und viel Erfolg x3

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-09T00:50:03+00:00

Dankeschön! :3

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-02-09T06:23:05+00:00

General:

Kiai is not the same in all diffs

Easy:

00:17:800 add finish in the head of slider since all diffs got it
00:21:700 remove whistle form the head and it on the repeat for be consistence with your hitsounds.
00:24:400 whistle in the head too ^
00:37:000 (1,1) - You can see the slider when you are spining this is unrankable on easy.. you should fix

SPOILER

00:49:000 soft finish fit better imo
00:53:800 move this to x:92 y:140 better flow if you do be careful with spacing
00:58:000 (1) - remove red point of slider since look ugly
01:00:100 (4) - maybe can you make it curve like previous slider?
01:17:800 remove NC
02:25:900 and 02:26:500 really you should add a circle or make a repeat slider since that pause is so confuse..
02:36:700 remove red point of slider to make a better blank with 02:36:100
02:58:600

nice slider i got one in my map too good job ^^
03:07:000 sorry but this look so ugly remove red point too
03:10:600 (3,4,5) - this pattern dont look good what about this:

SPOILER

03:34:600 (1,1) - same problem with 00:37:000
04:08:200 lower volume here to 40% maybe

Normal:

00:41:200 (1,2,3) - inconsistence in distance :/
00:37:600 (1,2) - why this extreme jump on normal diff?
00:49:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so much one on one add some slider there plz (new players gonna get confuse)
00:51:400 (1,2) - why are you using jumps on normal?
00:53:800 (3,4,5) - ^
01:19:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont do that single tap in normal is annoying try another pattern
01:26:200 (4,1) - big jump why

03:01:000 (1,2) - again big jump this is normal no hard :l
03:44:200 (1,2,3,4) - jumps again xd
04:10:600 same as easy

(You should rename it to normal +) and sorry map is so long i just mod 2 diffs good luck

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-09T11:27:23+00:00

SPOILER

Natsu wrote:
General:

Kiai is not the same in all diffs Done!

Normal:

00:41:200 (1,2,3) - inconsistence in distance :/ Done!
00:37:600 (1,2) - why this extreme jump on normal diff? Done!
00:49:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so much one on one add some slider there plz (new players gonna get confuse) Nope, already let some new players play and they had no probs
00:51:400 (1,2) - why are you using jumps on normal? Done!
00:53:800 (3,4,5) - ^ Done!
01:19:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont do that single tap in normal is annoying try another pattern No
01:26:200 (4,1) - big jump why Done!
03:01:000 (1,2) - again big jump this is normal no hard :l 03:07:000 (4) -
03:44:200 (1,2,3,4) - jumps again xd This shouldn't be a problem
04:10:600 same as easy ?

(You should rename it to normal +) Normal + sounds shitty, I will keep the name
and sorry map is so long i just mod 2 diffs good luck

Thanks for the mod!

No_Gu

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Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2013-02-09T14:14:33+00:00

From my queue
I love nano so much!

[General/All diffs]
maybe name the drum sound as normal-hitclap.wav but not whistle in your next time...
why all diffs have a special NC in some parts..I don't think it's necessary,or you have some meaning on it?

[Easy]
Artist and Title are broken,copy the right one from other diffs
00:19:300 - add 3 notes by 1/1 from here?I think here's a little empty
00:58:600 - I would change DS here to 1.3x so that It looks like the same as the before part,that won't disturb beginners imo.but maybe don't use speed-change in easy diff next time
01:15:400 (4,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 4
02:06:400 (2) - move it closer to 1
02:17:800 (5,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 5
02:36:700 (3) - this slider's blanket seems not good
03:37:600 (1,1,1) - why these NCs?..
04:02:200 (1) - move it to center is better imo
04:07:000 (1) - ^
04:08:200 (1) - add a line (40%) in the end to get a good sense

[Normal]
00:21:100 (2) - why so big spacing...I don't think jumping in normal is good
00:33:100 (2) - whistle in the beginning
00:42:400 (3) - whistle on the repeat
01:15:400 (5,6,7) - make them a slider?..since this pattern is unusual
01:16:900 (1) - what's the meaning of this NC?
01:17:800 (1) - finish in the beginning
01:27:700 why not add a drum sound with the tick?
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no snare drums in the beginning..remove whistle
Some suggestions for you in the furture:you'd better avoid speed-change in easy/normal beacuse beginners can't read it easily./add NC for each 2 downbeat is the best imo.

[Hard]
00:58:600 - I suggest remaping this part by using 1.4x DS so that there is no overlap and it will be neater than now.but if you don't want,it's OK
01:36:550 (2) - it sounds better if you map this as 1/3 pattern imo
02:19:600 (3) - add normal-sliderwhistle and make the 2 circles soft?

[Insane]
AR-1 maybe?..
00:28:750 add a note here for a base-drum?
00:38:500 (13) - NC
01:35:800 (1) - ahh I don't think this slow down is good
01:50:500 (6,7,8) - a little weird
03:13:600 (1,1,1) - make them away
good enough for #2 map.keep up the good work

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-09T16:08:39+00:00

SPOILER

No_Gu wrote:
From my queue
I love nano so much!

[General/All diffs]
maybe name the drum sound as normal-hitclap.wav but not whistle in your next time... Does it matter?
why all diffs have a special NC in some parts..I don't think it's necessary,or you have some meaning on it? Don't get what you mean

[Normal]
00:21:100 (2) - why so big spacing...I don't think jumping in normal is good Done!
00:33:100 (2) - whistle in the beginning Done!
00:42:400 (3) - whistle on the repeat Done!
01:15:400 (5,6,7) - make them a slider?..since this pattern is unusual Done!
01:16:900 (1) - what's the meaning of this NC? Vocals are changing
01:17:800 (1) - finish in the beginning Done!
01:27:700 why not add a drum sound with the tick? Done!
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no snare drums in the beginning..remove whistle Done!
Some suggestions for you in the furture:you'd better avoid speed-change in easy/normal beacuse beginners can't read it easily./add NC for each 2 downbeat is the best imo.

[Insane]
AR-1 maybe?.. Nah, AR 8 is too slow
00:28:750 add a note here for a base-drum? Nope
00:38:500 (13) - NC Done!
01:35:800 (1) - ahh I don't think this slow down is good It's fine imo
01:50:500 (6,7,8) - a little weird Ah... Mistake caused by the Distance Snap
03:13:600 (1,1,1) - make them away Yessir.
good enough for #2 map.keep up the good work

Thanks for the mod, No_Gu!

-Kirito-

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Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-02-09T21:41:12+00:00

SPOILER

Natsu wrote:
Easy:

00:17:800 add finish in the head of slider since all diffs got it Done.
00:21:700 remove whistle form the head and it on the repeat for be consistence with your hitsounds. Lolwut? Already consistent.
00:24:400 whistle in the head too ^ Already consistent.
00:37:000 (1,1) - You can see the slider when you are spining this is unrankable on easy.. you should fix Give me time to rethink it then.

00:49:000 soft finish fit better imo
00:53:800 move this to x:92 y:140 better flow if you do be careful with spacing Style choice.
00:58:000 (1) - remove red point of slider since look ugly I agree. Fixed.
01:00:100 (4) - maybe can you make it curve like previous slider? Style choice.
01:17:800 remove NC
02:25:900 and 02:26:500 really you should add a circle or make a repeat slider since that pause is so confuse..
02:36:700 remove red point of slider to make a better blank with 02:36:100 Thinking about this..
02:58:600 nice slider i got one in my map too good job ^^ Thanks.
03:07:000 sorry but this look so ugly remove red point too
03:10:600 (3,4,5) - this pattern dont look good what about this: Thinking about this.. [Marked this entire area to fix soon]

03:34:600 (1,1) - same problem with 00:37:000 Give me time to rethink it then.
04:08:200 lower volume here to 40% maybe Fixed.

SPOILER

No_Gu wrote:
[Easy]
Artist and Title are broken,copy the right one from other diffs Fixed.
00:19:300 - add 3 notes by 1/1 from here?I think here's a little empty Maybe. I'll check the effects before sumitting.
00:58:600 - I would change DS here to 1.3x so that It looks like the same as the before part,that won't disturb beginners imo.but maybe don't use speed-change in easy diff next time Thinking..
01:15:400 (4,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 4 *
02:06:400 (2) - move it closer to 1 Fixed?
02:17:800 (5,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 5 *
02:36:700 (3) - this slider's blanket seems not good Fixed.
03:37:600 (1,1,1) - why these NCs?.. **
04:02:200 (1) - move it to center is better imo Moved it slightly closer.
04:07:000 (1) - ^ Moved it slightly closer.
04:08:200 (1) - add a line (40%) in the end to get a good sense Fixed.

* - Only happens in my difficulty. Only 3 sections get white NC, so it's slightly weird.
** - Again, white NC.

I'm even worse at applying structural mods.

Haya you owe me big time when I'm completely done. Give me some treats. :>

SPOILER

Layfon's Easy:
http://puu.sh/1ZZAI

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-02-09T23:05:17+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
[Hard]
00:58:600 - I suggest remaping this part by using 1.4x DS so that there is no overlap and it will be neater than now.but if you don't want,it's OK Fixed
01:36:550 (2) - it sounds better if you map this as 1/3 pattern imo Fixed
02:19:600 (3) - add normal-sliderwhistle and make the 2 circles soft? Fixed

Thanks a lot!!

http://puu.sh/202g9

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-09T23:09:42+00:00

Updated!

gurodoll_old

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gurodoll_old 2013-02-10T21:28:51+00:00

～❤ hook it to my veins

Yuki-kun

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Yuki-kun 2013-02-14T05:37:23+00:00

Hi~

From my queue xD
Sr for delayed, a bit busy with my workshop.

Let's begin.

> General <

--- Inconsistancy in Kiai Times.
- [Insane] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:300

- [Layfon's Easy] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:293

--- Tags
Please add "Layfon" and "Sakuya" to your tag.

> My Mod <

[Insane]
03:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - If you want to use this kind of stream, make sure player can read all of note, since you put 03:33:100 (13) - as a slider, it's hard to see.

[Sakuya's Hard]
AR +1. Your BPM is 200.

[Normal]
01:04:900 (4) - NC.

[Layfon's Easy]
03:58:293 - Usnapped green timing. Snap to 03:58:300

Nice map. Good luck

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-14T18:47:32+00:00

SPOILER

Yuki-kun wrote:
Hi~

From my queue xD
Sr for delayed, a bit busy with my workshop.

Let's begin.

> General <

--- Inconsistancy in Kiai Times. Done!
- [Insane] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:300

- [Layfon's Easy] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:293

--- Tags
Please add "Layfon" and "Sakuya" to your tag. Done!

> My Mod <

[Insane]
03:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - If you want to use this kind of stream, make sure player can read all of note, since you put 03:33:100 (13) - as a slider, it's hard to see. Done!

[Normal]
01:04:900 (4) - NC.Done!

Nice map. Good luck

Thanks for the mod, Yuki!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-02-21T03:33:58+00:00

ALLRIGHT LET'S DO THIS.

NOTE: Every time I say clap, I mean whistle, mostly becuase every time there's a map with a snaresample, they always use claps, so I'm just used to it. Denwa.

Overall:
Getting tom drum hitsounds for the slower parts would be cool.
04:10:600 (1) - Feels really random and the map just ends like what there's a few seconds left you can do it.

Storyboard:
01:17:800 - Add a white flash to this so it doesn't just pop up randomly. Same for 2nd chrous

Insane:
I wish this diff had a better understanding of when to go ahead and map heavily and when to hold back and not overmap.

00:25:450 (2,3,4) - I want to do something with this that avoids notes going back on themselves but I'm not sure what. If you're ok with having a jump, move (5) to the end of the previous slider
00:28:900 (1) - Having all of these claps at this volume sounds so bad like omg. It's the hitsample's fault, it's not designed for rolls. You can decrease the volume to like, 55-65%, or you can find a softer snaresample for those notes. It just sounds really out of place the way it is atm.
00:40:375 (6) - Remove this, this is a softer section of the music and should avoid overmapping as much as possible.
01:35:800 (1) - Oh sweet jesus no. There's no signification that there's a speed change, and it'll confuse people so much for the wrong reasons.
01:45:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Huge overmap
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Save it for the chrous
02:38:200 (1) - Maybe make this to a more creative slider. Especially with the speed-up, it's kind of a boring slider to put.
03:12:700 (4) - Add clap on beginning of slider
03:13:900 (10) - ^
03:14:500 (12) - ^
03:18:025 - What are you doing finish this guitar solo it's really cool and you can map it really hard and it'll be fine.
03:23:800 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC
03:29:800 (1) - SLIDER REPEAT HIDDEN. I guess you can see like the edge of it but it's enough to make me srs concerned.
03:38:500 (1) - Make this a lot softer so it makes the last chorus more effective.
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap on end of slider

Hard:
00:38:650 (4,5,6) - Remove (4), and move (5) and (6) back 2 ticks (so 5 starts on the red tick), so it fits the drum pattern. Put a note on the red tick where (6) used to end.
01:25:600 (8) - Omg this was going to be a cool square and then you were like "nope" like no
01:36:700 (2) - Add a repeat?
01:58:450 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
03:35:500 - Add note here
04:03:400 (1) - Might want to think about moving this elsewhere, the repeat is slightly hidden

Normal:
00:23:200 (3) - ok jump. If you're gonna do a jump, horizontally flip the slider and make it wider so it at least looks nice.
00:38:200 (2) - Not perfectly stacked by the slightest margin.
01:55:600 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:09:700 - um
02:23:500 (4) - Add clap on end of slider
02:56:500 (2) - Add clap to beginning of slider
02:56:950 (3) - ^
02:57:400 (4) - Add clap to 1st and 3rd repeat
03:03:400 (1) - ^
03:05:800 (3) - ^
03:18:100 - psl
03:32:200 - ^
03:38:500 (1) - Same as insane
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap

Easy:
Hitsounds in the verses would be cool
00:25:000 - Dood if you're gonna start off with slidertick hitsounds, you gotta have them in the entire map
03:37:600 (1) - Sounds really weird since nothing in the music really hits here (I believe the rhythm they're on is all red ticks atm)

desu. I felt like I was a lot more brash in this mod than I usually am. Sorry if that's so. Uguu.

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-21T12:55:33+00:00

Kudosu'd you, but going to change change the map when that slider bug is fixed ~
P.S.: That mod wasn't brash at all lol.

Edit: Kay fixed:

SPOILER

CDFA wrote:
ALLRIGHT LET'S DO THIS.

NOTE: Every time I say clap, I mean whistle, mostly becuase every time there's a map with a snaresample, they always use claps, so I'm just used to it. Denwa.

Overall:
Getting tom drum hitsounds for the slower parts would be cool.
04:10:600 (1) - Feels really random and the map just ends like what there's a few seconds left you can do it. I will think about it

Storyboard:
01:17:800 - Add a white flash to this so it doesn't just pop up randomly. Same for 2nd chrous Gotta ask Layfon for this

Insane:
I wish this diff had a better understanding of when to go ahead and map heavily and when to hold back and not overmap.

00:25:450 (2,3,4) - I want to do something with this that avoids notes going back on themselves but I'm not sure what. If you're ok with having a jump, move (5) to the end of the previous slider Done!
00:28:900 (1) - Having all of these claps at this volume sounds so bad like omg. It's the hitsample's fault, it's not designed for rolls. You can decrease the volume to like, 55-65%, or you can find a softer snaresample for those notes. It just sounds really out of place the way it is atm. Done!
00:40:375 (6) - Remove this, this is a softer section of the music and should avoid overmapping as much as possible. Done!
01:35:800 (1) - Oh sweet jesus no. There's no signification that there's a speed change, and it'll confuse people so much for the wrong reasons. Done!
01:45:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Huge overmap Done!
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Save it for the chrous Done!
02:38:200 (1) - Maybe make this to a more creative slider. Especially with the speed-up, it's kind of a boring slider to put. Done!
03:12:700 (4) - Add clap on beginning of slider Done!
03:13:900 (10) - ^ Done!
03:14:500 (12) - ^ Done!
03:18:025 - What are you doing finish this guitar solo it's really cool and you can map it really hard and it'll be fine. I know that it's really cool but it's just gonna be another super stream. I think that the player deserves a break after 200 bpm streams
03:23:800 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC Done!
03:29:800 (1) - SLIDER REPEAT HIDDEN. I guess you can see like the edge of it but it's enough to make me srs concerned. Done!
03:38:500 (1) - Make this a lot softer so it makes the last chorus more effective.Done!
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap on end of sliderDone!

Normal:
00:23:200 (3) - ok jump. If you're gonna do a jump, horizontally flip the slider and make it wider so it at least looks nice. Done!
00:38:200 (2) - Not perfectly stacked by the slightest margin. Uh, done?
01:55:600 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done!
02:09:700 - um Done?
02:23:500 (4) - Add clap on end of slider Done!
02:56:500 (2) - Add clap to beginning of slider Done!
02:56:950 (3) - ^ Done!
02:57:400 (4) - Add clap to 1st and 3rd repeat Done!
03:03:400 (1) - ^ Done!
03:05:800 (3) - ^ Done!
03:18:100 - psl Nope
03:32:200 - ^ Nope
03:38:500 (1) - Same as insane Done!
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap Done!

desu. I felt like I was a lot more brash in this mod than I usually am. Sorry if that's so. Uguu.

Thanks for your generous mod, CDFA!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-02-26T22:09:37+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Hard:
00:38:650 (4,5,6) - Remove (4), and move (5) and (6) back 2 ticks (so 5 starts on the red tick), so it fits the drum pattern. Put a note on the red tick where (6) used to end. Fixed
01:25:600 (8) - Omg this was going to be a cool square and then you were like "nope" like no ...sorry xD
01:36:700 (2) - Add a repeat? Fixed
01:58:450 (1) - Add clap on end of sliderFixed
03:35:500 - Add note here i left it for now since I didn't hear a major finish in the bg music
04:03:400 (1) - Might want to think about moving this elsewhere, the repeat is slightly hidden Fixed

Thanks ~~again~~ !!

http://puu.sh/28Tka

Haya

580 posts

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-02-26T22:19:09+00:00

Updated~

Hsiao-Chai

119 posts

Joined January 2012

Hsiao-Chai 2013-03-04T09:04:06+00:00

hi haya~
from m4m

SPOILER

[General]
the hitsound make this song even noisier, especially the nor-hitnormal with hoot end.
you can try this as hitnormal, and maybe a default sliderslide or silent sliderslide with it.

[Layfon's Easy]
01:26:800 (1,2) - can be a better blanket
01:53:500 add an object here
02:10:000 (1,2,3) - In old saying we said that newer player who play easy won't understand notes overlap
02:33:700 (5,6) - ^

[Normal]
AR-1
00:31:600 (4,5) - bad DS, start at (448,160) looks better
00:33:700 (3,4) - bad DS
01:15:400 (5) - not good overlap, try this http://puu.sh/2bSp6
01:36:700 add a note here and start spinner at 01:36:775
01:58:900 (3,4,1) - bad DS inbetween
02:35:200 (3,5) - could be more curvey
03:58:300 add a note here and start spinner at 03:58:375
04:02:200 (1) - tick back once more and start spinner at 04:03:175

[Sakuya's Hard]
00:39:400 (8,1) - Distance Snapping
01:11:800 (6,1) - ^
02:14:800 (1,2) - even with ctrl+g on (1), DS is too big
02:15:400 (1,2,3) - could be closer
02:19:600 (3,1) - change shape to low down DS and stay where your slider end
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable DS feels bad
02:28:900 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:35:500 (3,4) - bad DS

[Insane]
can't mod due to bug

nice map, good luck for rank!

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-04T11:21:55+00:00

Hsiao-Chai wrote:
hi haya~
from m4m

[Insane]
can't mod due to bug
nice map, good luck for rank!

What bug are you talking about?
EDIT: What the hell...
EDIT 2:

Hsiao-Chai wrote:
hi haya~
from m4m

SPOILER
[General]
the hitsound make this song even noisier, especially the nor-hitnormal with hoot end.
you can try this as hitnormal, and maybe a default sliderslide or silent sliderslide with it. Nah, I like it as it is ^^

[Normal]
AR-1 Done!
00:31:600 (4,5) - bad DS, start at (448,160) looks better Done!
00:33:700 (3,4) - bad DS Done!
01:15:400 (5) - not good overlap, try this http://puu.sh/2bSp6 Done!
01:36:700 add a note here and start spinner at 01:36:775 Done!
01:58:900 (3,4,1) - bad DS inbetween Kinda fixed it
02:35:200 (3,5) - could be more curvey Nope
03:58:300 add a note here and start spinner at 03:58:375 Done!
04:02:200 (1) - tick back once more and start spinner at 04:03:175 No

Thanks for your mod!

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-03-11T01:02:55+00:00

Hsiao-Chai wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:39:400 (8,1) - Distance Snapping what
01:11:800 (6,1) - ^
02:14:800 (1,2) - even with ctrl+g on (1), DS is too big it'll become boring if you stick with DS throughout the whole diff
02:15:400 (1,2,3) - could be closer Fixed a little
02:19:600 (3,1) - change shape to low down DS and stay where your slider end the jump signifies the transition
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable DS feels bad Fixed
02:28:900 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ it's fine
02:35:500 (3,4) - bad DS

Thanks!
http://puu.sh/2fCA5

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-11T14:34:27+00:00

Updated! Waiting for Lora

ztrot

osu! Alumni

4,378 posts

Joined February 2008

ztrot 2013-03-14T16:44:21+00:00

[Hard]
02:23:500 (2) - this being placed on the slider end makes it hard to see the repeat because of the 300.

yeah that is really the only thing worth pointing out get that taken care of and I can bubble

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-14T22:02:04+00:00

Thanks for the mod ztrot!
Sakuya fixed her mod so... Updated~

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-03-15T00:19:25+00:00

From my Queue... I felt this map Perfect (: Let's go

[General]

There are two files absolutely equals: "Omoide Kakera BG.jpg" and "pulse.jpg". You could save 420KB space by using the same for BG and pulse events.

-----------------------------------------

Absolutely PERFECT all difs!

Thence, not helpful mod

GOOD LUCK for get Ranked soon!

Att.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-15T15:01:04+00:00

SPOILER

cFiszpan wrote:
From my Queue... I felt this map Perfect (: Let's go

[General]

There are two files absolutely equals: "Omoide Kakera BG.jpg" and "pulse.jpg". You could save 420KB space by using the same for BG and pulse events.
Fixed!
-----------------------------------------

Absolutely PERFECT all difs!

Thence, not helpful mod

GOOD LUCK for get Ranked soon!

Att.

Thanks! :3

phaZ

739 posts

Joined October 2011

phaZ 2013-03-15T21:25:43+00:00

[Easy]

i cant believe the starrating is below 3,00 stars xD
01:13:000 (1) - third waypoint should be at 448;128
[Normal]

01:55:600 (1) - i think this goes out of the screen
03:32:725 - this pause is so "dafuq?". what about a spinner or at least set a break there
03:37:000 (6) - i think a normal whistle would fit perfect. add section with ~10% volume, use sampleset: soft on the head and end, use addition: normal+whistle.
[Hard]

use AR 8! its 200bpm, AR 7 doesnt fit imo
also compared to the normal and easy here is a little "jump" in the sv. and high sv + low AR never fit
ofc its a bit harder and there is a little gap in the diffspread then but it would make the hard-diff so much more awesome <3
02:00:100 (4,5,6,7,8) - these stop-and-go's are a bit hard (lol). i prefere two sliders and then a triplet http://puu.sh/2igAz. also a triplet is much more awesome than just 1/2-tapping
02:56:200 (1,2,3) - these syncopes are very unexpected and its a bit unclear how to play them (on first try) i suggest http://puu.sh/2igL0
[Insane]

00:24:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - meh so much stack :c waht about a triangle and a stream http://puu.sh/2igZD.this boosts your map xD
00:28:600 - this gap must be filled, it feels so empty :'(
00:37:450 - again here. why? das nimmt der map voll die energie (mein englisch failt xD)
00:37:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - they arent exactly in a line. im not sure if it was done on purpose
01:34:450 (1,2,3,4) - they all play a bit strange because they start on a red tick >.>
03:29:350 (6) - add repeat! bittebittebitte :3
[]
nice map!

and sorry for troll mod ;D

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-03-15T22:11:56+00:00

phaZ wrote:
[Hard]

use AR 8! its 200bpm, AR 7 doesnt fit imo sure
also compared to the normal and easy here is a little "jump" in the sv. and high sv + low AR never fit
ofc its a bit harder and there is a little gap in the diffspread then but it would make the hard-diff so much more awesome <3
02:00:100 (4,5,6,7,8) - these stop-and-go's are a bit hard (lol). i prefere two sliders and then a triplet http://puu.sh/2igAz. also a triplet is much more awesome than just 1/2-tapping got rid of the single notes
02:56:200 (1,2,3) - these syncopes are very unexpected and its a bit unclear how to play them (on first try) i suggest http://puu.sh/2igL0 fixed

Code:

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Omoide Kakera.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76754
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 57930,60480,72330,76080,139230,142230,218430
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Omoide Kakera
TitleUnicode:想イ出カケラ
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:Haya
Version:Sakuya's Hard
Source:
Tags:Sakuya Layfon LunarSakuya Red_Layfon nanoir nicovideo
BeatmapID:186390
BeatmapSetID:62510

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Omoide Kakera BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,163200,175450
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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228925,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
229000,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1
238300,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


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Combo4 : 130,255,255
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100,228,194800,2,0,B|88:192|92:156,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,276,195250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,195400,6,0,B|244:216|320:172,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,196150,2,0,B|216:76|256:64,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,92,196450,2,0,B|340:88|340:88|352:92|352:92|364:88|364:88|372:92|372:92|384:88|384:88|392:92|392:92|400:88|400:88|408:92|408:92|416:88|416:88|424:92|424:92|432:88|432:88|440:92|440:92|448:88|448:88|456:92|456:92|464:88|464:88|472:92,1,140
456,176,196900,2,0,B|380:176,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,288,197500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,236,197800,6,0,B|160:316|228:356,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,198550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,108,198700,2,0,B|304:88|320:48,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,199150,2,0,B|176:36|136:36,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,199600,2,0,B|104:136|96:176,1,70
104,256,199900,2,0,B|108:292|132:320,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,344,200200,6,0,B|356:312,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,200650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,160,200800,2,0,B|408:124|416:84,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,201250,2,0,B|316:96|328:24,1,140
244,48,201700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,168,202000,2,0,B|48:168,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,244,202450,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,304,202600,6,0,B|252:320|292:316,1,70
348,256,202900,2,0,B|376:228|412:224,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,203350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,148,203500,2,0,B|180:92|100:84,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,204400,2,0,B|416:200,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,204850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,236,205000,6,0,B|300:296|300:296|228:296,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,272,205450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,236,205600,2,0,B|0:236,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,152,206050,2,0,B|116:104|164:104|164:104|200:152|264:148,2,210,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,204,207100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,300,207400,6,0,B|376:268|376:268|428:252|472:268,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,300,208300,2,0,B|136:268|136:268|84:252|40:268,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,209050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,209200,2,0,B|256:84,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,72,209650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,140,209800,6,0,B|96:208|132:280,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,316,210250,2,0,B|280:280|352:292,1,140
412,248,210700,2,0,B|424:176|392:108,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,211150,2,0,B|236:104|176:52,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,211600,2,0,B|28:76|16:160,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,220,212050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,212200,6,0,B|152:216|152:216|232:232|332:272|328:348|256:392|180:348|176:272|280:232|360:216|360:216|388:156,2,560,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,215050,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,215500,12,4,218200,0:0:0:0:
136,264,219400,6,0,B|96:196|132:128,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,220000,2,0,B|272:184|184:192,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,264,220450,2,0,B|188:324|264:300,1,140
336,260,220900,2,0,B|400:220,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,221200,2,0,B|440:84|368:52,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,52,221800,6,0,B|72:84|64:160,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,136,222550,2,0,B|188:168|232:168,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,156,222850,2,0,B|308:220|260:244|260:244|260:284,1,140
184,316,223300,2,0,B|184:244,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,164,223600,2,0,B|156:92|68:84,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,164,224200,6,0,B|356:92|444:84,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,224800,2,0,B|332:264|268:248|252:204,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,225250,2,0,B|124:264,1,140
48,240,225700,2,0,B|92:176,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,226000,2,0,B|164:68|164:68|208:44|256:68,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,156,226600,2,0,B|356:200|356:200|312:224|264:200,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,227050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,72,227200,2,0,B|424:68|472:112|472:156,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,227650,2,0,B|388:356,1,140
312,320,228100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,256,228400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,92,228700,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,256,229000,6,0,B|200:232|216:156,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,229450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,229600,2,0,B|348:136|352:96,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,244,230050,2,0,B|396:204|472:220,1,140
484,300,230500,2,0,B|420:340|344:324,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,231100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,336,231400,6,0,B|68:300|68:212,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,204,231850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,232000,2,0,B|236:121|168:85,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,232450,2,0,B|296:72|324:152|320:220,1,210,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,296,233050,2,0,B|264:316|224:320,2,70
376,312,233500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,104,233800,6,0,B|324:112|296:192,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,188,234250,2,0,B|184:109|112:101,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,234700,2,0,B|64:248|64:248|92:312,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,300,235150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,344,235300,2,0,B|300:296|300:296|368:288,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,236200,6,0,B|412:192|412:192|432:160|464:148,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,128,236950,2,0,B|364:120,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,237400,2,0,B|148:176,1,70
100,108,237700,2,0,B|60:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,184,238000,2,0,B|48:256,1,70
96,320,238300,2,0,B|80:364,2,35,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,336,238600,6,0,B|192:256|268:232,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,320,239350,2,0,B|352:320,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,239800,2,0,B|408:248,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,164,240250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,100,240400,2,0,B|212:80,1,70
168,148,240700,2,0,B|240:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,241000,6,0,B|44:192,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,241750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,364,241900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,316,242050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,242200,2,0,B|468:192,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,243100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,232,243400,6,0,B|256:260|188:232,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,244150,2,0,B|412:140|404:104,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,244600,2,0,B|260:101|188:129,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,245350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,245500,2,0,B|408:296|380:324,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,245800,2,0,B|240:336|208:308|208:308|192:268,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,256,246550,2,0,B|252:188,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,247000,6,0,B|360:140|316:72,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,104,247900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,248200,12,4,253000,0:0:0:0:

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-15T22:40:08+00:00

SPOILER

phaZ wrote:
[Normal]

01:55:600 (1) - i think this goes out of the screen It fits perfectly
03:32:725 - this pause is so "dafuq?". what about a spinner or at least set a break there I don't think that it's really sudden. A spinner would not fit here imo and mapping this part would be too boring
03:37:000 (6) - i think a normal whistle would fit perfect. add section with ~10% volume, use sampleset: soft on the head and end, use addition: normal+whistle. wtf. Why was this part soft? O-O

[Insane]

00:24:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - meh so much stack :c waht about a triangle and a stream http://puu.sh/2igZD.this boosts your map xD Fixed it otherwise!
00:28:600 - this gap must be filled, it feels so empty :'( Well, it follows the Guitar part. So.... I will leave it like that
00:37:450 - again here. why? das nimmt der map voll die energie (mein englisch failt xD) LOL XD ^
00:37:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - they arent exactly in a line. im not sure if it was done on purpose Shit, they aren't?
01:34:450 (1,2,3,4) - they all play a bit strange because they start on a red tick >.> Matter of taste!
03:29:350 (6) - add repeat! bittebittebitte :3 Just added a Hitcircle between that gap
[]
nice map!

and sorry for troll mod ;D

Thanks for the mod, phaZ!

-Kirito-

57 posts

Joined November 2011

-Kirito- 2013-03-15T23:12:14+00:00

Haya stop bugging me, please. <3

Structural change again. Got rid of slow-downs.

SPOILER

Yuki-kun - Thanks, done.

CDFA - I think the slider is okay. Makes it parallel and fills up space *noob mapper*

Hsiao-Chai - Thanks, done.

phaZ - I love you.

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/2ikXZ

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-15T23:24:29+00:00

Red Layfon wrote:
Haya stop bugging me, please. <3

Fak you. </3

aaand Updated!

ztrot

osu! Alumni

4,378 posts

Joined February 2008

ztrot 2013-03-17T21:33:12+00:00

looking good as far as I can tell the only thing that worried me has been corrected.

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-03-18T20:39:55+00:00

popped for unrankable stuff

[General]

Inconsistent Tags
Missing SB item, there's no "pulse.jpg" in your song folder.

and the storyboard effect also have some problem

i may mod it thoroughly later since i have to go now.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-18T23:23:03+00:00

About that sb problem, people told memto delte pulse.jpg so i got confused since i know nothing about sb lol
Too bad abot the bubble tho
EDIT: Fixed the SB Stuff!
Also fixed the Tag unconsistency!

AiriiUsamune

17 posts

Joined December 2012

AiriiUsamune 2013-03-20T20:23:23+00:00

I like this song, I love EVERYTHING from Nano... *-*

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-21T16:58:43+00:00

Me too! :3

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-03-24T22:33:28+00:00

okay let's continue the modding~~ sorry for my delay
no KDs to this post since you have given it to me already :>

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

Disable letterbox during breaks. you have some short breaks so that this effect is not very suitable
I think the source is Nico Nico Douga

[Storyboard]

As I told you, change "black.jpg" to "white.jpg", and then SB code:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 C,0,0,,0,0,0
 S,0,0,,0.8
 F,0,76530,77130,0,1
 F,0,77130,77730,1
 F,0,77730,77805,1,0
 F,0,138930,139530,0,1
 F,0,139530,140130,1
 F,0,140130,140205,1,0
 F,0,218130,218730,0,1
 F,0,218730,219330,1
 F,0,219330,219405,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Omoide Kakera BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,77730,78330,1,0
 S,0,77730,78330,0.625,0.75
 F,0,140130,140730,1,0
 S,0,140130,140730,0.625,0.75
 F,0,219330,219930,1,0
 S,0,219330,219930,0.625,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 L,77730,1
  P,0,0,600,A
  F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 L,140130,1
  P,0,0,600,A
  F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 L,219330,1
  P,0,0,600,A
  F,1,0,600,0.6,0

[Insane]

00:21:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a better hexagon pattern, and also move (4) to the bottom but not in centre
00:23:200 (3,4) - ctrl+g separately for better flow?
00:28:600 - the blank here is pretty weird...add a 1/4 repeat slider here?
00:37:150 (7) - also suggest to add a repeat
01:15:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think the pattern is not start at an appropriate point because both the drum and vocal stress are stay at downbeat ( 01:15:400 - ) and there's also a drum at 01:15:325 - . That is, the whole pattern is expected to start at 01:15:400 - and also a triplet at 01:15:250 - like
01:25:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these three triplets here are heard odd...i'd like to move them to redline but not whiteline
01:29:650 (4,5) - bad flow. In general the jump from note to slider could be longer than note->note
01:40:450 - remove the short break here, it's unnecessary
01:42:100 (1,2) - 1/2 slider first then 1/1 for vocal
01:47:950 - still unsuitable blank...
01:50:350 - ^
01:54:550 - ^, actually the beat around here is messed :<
01:57:550 - ^
03:02:950 - add a note here

[Sakuya's Hard]

02:33:250 (4,6) - make the blanket better?
03:22:450 (1) - any reason for the single NC here?

[Normal]

00:28:600 (3) - move next NC to here
00:34:600 (1) - also blanket problem... and some similar cases in this diff like 00:44:200 (3) - , i think it's unnecessary for me to point of all them one by one~
00:38:950 (4) - highly recommend to remove it for difficulty issue
00:46:600 (3) - move NC from 00:45:700 (1) - to here to control the combo length no longer than 6.
01:20:200 (3) - ^
01:35:800 - why change SV here to 0.5? here's no slider :<
02:10:000 - and the break here is pretty weird...make no sense since the vocal is still....so please map this part
03:11:800 (5) - NC here
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - generally it is fine... just boring a bit :>
03:32:200 - also recommend to map this part
03:36:100 (3,4) - i don't like this kinda stack... move (4) to 256:192?

the NC of this diff is still messed a bit, In general, it's better to place NC on downbeat (long-white tick), and the combo length in E/N over 6 is not recommended.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-24T23:41:20+00:00

Fixed:

SPOILER

Scorpiour wrote:
okay let's continue the modding~~ sorry for my delay
no KDs to this post since you have given it to me already :>

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks. you have some short breaks so that this effect is not very suitable Fixed!
I think the source is Nico Nico Douga
Fixed!

[Storyboard]
As I told you, change "black.jpg" to "white.jpg", and then SB code: Fixed!
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 C,0,0,,0,0,0
 S,0,0,,0.8
 F,0,76530,77130,0,1
 F,0,77130,77730,1
 F,0,77730,77805,1,0
 F,0,138930,139530,0,1
 F,0,139530,140130,1
 F,0,140130,140205,1,0
 F,0,218130,218730,0,1
 F,0,218730,219330,1
 F,0,219330,219405,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Omoide Kakera BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,77730,78330,1,0
 S,0,77730,78330,0.625,0.75
 F,0,140130,140730,1,0
 S,0,140130,140730,0.625,0.75
 F,0,219330,219930,1,0
 S,0,219330,219930,0.625,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 L,77730,1
  P,0,0,600,A
  F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 L,140130,1
  P,0,0,600,A
  F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
 L,219330,1
  P,0,0,600,A
  F,1,0,600,0.6,0
[Insane]
00:21:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a better hexagon pattern, and also move (4) to the bottom but not in centre Fixed!
00:23:200 (3,4) - ctrl+g separately for better flow? I like the symmetry here
00:28:600 - the blank here is pretty weird...add a 1/4 repeat slider here? Fixed another way!
00:37:150 (7) - also suggest to add a repeatI do think that this very small break fits
01:15:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think the pattern is not start at an appropriate point because both the drum and vocal stress are stay at downbeat ( 01:15:400 - ) and there's also a drum at 01:15:325 - . That is, the whole pattern is expected to start at 01:15:400 - and also a triplet at 01:15:250 - like
Fixed!
01:25:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these three triplets here are heard odd...i'd like to move them to redline but not whiteline They sound pretty okay to me
01:29:650 (4,5) - bad flow. In general the jump from note to slider could be longer than note->note Fixed!
01:40:450 - remove the short break here, it's unnecessary Fixed!
01:42:100 (1,2) - 1/2 slider first then 1/1 for vocal Fixed!
01:47:950 - still unsuitable blank... Fixed!
01:50:350 - ^ Fixed!
01:54:550 - ^, actually the beat around here is messed :< Fixed!
01:57:550 - ^ Fixed!
03:02:950 - add a note here
Fixed!

SPOILER

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[*]00:34:600 (1) - also blanket problem... and some similar cases in this diff like 00:44:200 (3) - I dont think that those blankets are a bad choice.

Normal fixed everything but the blanket problem

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-03-29T04:08:53+00:00

rebubbled~~

Haya

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Haya 2013-03-31T15:49:24+00:00

Popped the bubble for some improvements. Waiting for a re-bubble by Scorpiour or Charles445.

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-04-08T10:29:36+00:00

Haya wrote:
Popped the bubble for some improvements. Waiting for a re-bubble by Scorpiour or Charles445.

fine~~

Haya

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Haya 2013-04-08T13:58:36+00:00

Huehuehuehuehue spamming worked :3

Konei

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Konei 2013-04-10T17:18:44+00:00

This song is great ><

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-04-13T20:45:44+00:00

The only issues I have with this map are the combo colours.
Combo1 and Combo2 look like they are almost the sames. That, that doesn't really look nice. On top of that, they both blends in the background which make them less readable.
About Combo3 and 4, you should also consider not using flashy colours, that green-blue hurts my eyes and white is usually a bad idea when the background is already pretty bright.
You should think about changing them.

Haya

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Haya 2013-04-13T20:55:03+00:00

Thanks for your advice!
Combo Color 1: Weakened so it looks less like Combo Color 2.
Combo Color 3: Weakened to make it look less flashy.
Combo Color 4: Weakened to make it look less flashy.
Combo Color 5: Made the white some tones more grey.

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-04-14T11:56:57+00:00

:3 ~

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-04-14T12:04:40+00:00

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