xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Artist: ナノ || Romanised Artist: nano Done!
  • Title: 想イ出カケラ || Romanised Title: Omoide Kakera Done!
  • Tags: add "Lunar Sakuya Red Layfon" Why? They are already there
  • Offset: 1000 Done!
  • Max storyboard elements size is 800x600. I will delete the storyboard anyways
  • Make kiai the same on all diffs. Done!
  • Also, every diff has differents breaks that start/end in different positions: make them consistent between all diffs. Nah
  • Why don't you use this video? Or try to make something like that with a SB.

I will use the video later


Normal

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 Done!
  • Approach Rate: 6 Done!
  • Overall Difficulty: 5

Done!


Insane

• • HP Drain Rate: 7

Done!


Just some suggestions.

R e d wrote:

song is so long lmao i just had time to mod 1 mod properly
i hope help in something :3

[Insane]

00:25:000 (1) - finish Done!
00:28:600 (7) - add circle,, i think is important a circle here on white big tick, helps help rythme and flow I don't think so
00:34:600 (1) - finish Done!
00:37:600 (1) - add circle, i listen a important note there, that is important to start the stream in time, (because stream start on red tick) Done!
00:37:600 (1) - if you add circle^ New combo on it Done!
00:46:150 (2) - put a circle in 00:46:150 and no a slider, because i just listen a small drums there, since voice dont start there, looks wierd to me.
but 00:45:700 (1,5) are great because start and end with voice, 00:46:150 (2) feels weird Changed it another way
01:28:900 (8,9,1) - inst this so much jump distance? listening the song, i dont feel like jumping so much Personal taste
and then 01:29:650 (4,5) - really small distance, in 01:29:650 (4,5) - is where i feel need jump!! Well, I guess it's a matter of taste
01:35:800 (1) - finish Done!
01:51:250 (6,7,8) - looks weird and out of your style. the player will get a bit confused. just stack it propably Done!
01:55:975 (6) - delete this circle. it is overmapped, there i no beat in there Done!
01:58:600 (1) - finish, and also i suggest to make usack it to make NC visible Added the Finish
02:04:825 (2,4,6) - there is no beat there, so is overmapped and non sense. just delete that circles, not stream there. *Sigh*
02:14:200 (1) - remove nc. you keep follow voice, there is no reason for nc imo Done!
02:19:300 (1) - use custom soft for this slider. Nope
02:31:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so much circles in a row :s dont forget that is 200 bpm. In my opinion you should not do so much singles in a row. a least start sliders in 02:33:250 (4) - Naaaah, np np
02:33:250 (4) - NC combo? you have a loud voice there, makes more sense to me Nope
02:58:600 (1) - finish, because start solo and white big tick Done!
03:33:100 (13) - this is a important slider that must not be overlaped by 03:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - You won't see the overlap ingame
03:38:500 (1) - soft hitsounds in this slider? maybe make it a bit slower? Used Soft hitsounds but kept the speed
03:57:400 (1) - this and 01:35:800 (1) i suggest use same slider speed for both and this 02:38:200 (1) - Didn't really understand so I just left it


Good luck :3

Natsu wrote:

General:

Kiai is not the same in all diffs Done!


Normal:

00:41:200 (1,2,3) - inconsistence in distance :/ Done!
00:37:600 (1,2) - why this extreme jump on normal diff? Done!
00:49:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so much one on one add some slider there plz (new players gonna get confuse) Nope, already let some new players play and they had no probs
00:51:400 (1,2) - why are you using jumps on normal? Done!
00:53:800 (3,4,5) - ^ Done!
01:19:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont do that single tap in normal is annoying try another pattern No
01:26:200 (4,1) - big jump why Done!
03:01:000 (1,2) - again big jump this is normal no hard :l 03:07:000 (4) -
03:44:200 (1,2,3,4) - jumps again xd This shouldn't be a problem
04:10:600 same as easy ?

(You should rename it to normal +) Normal + sounds shitty, I will keep the name
and sorry map is so long i just mod 2 diffs good luck

No_Gu wrote:

From my queue
I love nano so much!

[General/All diffs]
maybe name the drum sound as normal-hitclap.wav but not whistle in your next time... Does it matter?
why all diffs have a special NC in some parts..I don't think it's necessary,or you have some meaning on it? Don't get what you mean

[Normal]
00:21:100 (2) - why so big spacing...I don't think jumping in normal is good Done!
00:33:100 (2) - whistle in the beginning Done!
00:42:400 (3) - whistle on the repeat Done!
01:15:400 (5,6,7) - make them a slider?..since this pattern is unusual Done!
01:16:900 (1) - what's the meaning of this NC? Vocals are changing
01:17:800 (1) - finish in the beginning Done!
01:27:700 why not add a drum sound with the tick? Done!
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no snare drums in the beginning..remove whistle Done!
Some suggestions for you in the furture:you'd better avoid speed-change in easy/normal beacuse beginners can't read it easily./add NC for each 2 downbeat is the best imo.

[Insane]
AR-1 maybe?.. Nah, AR 8 is too slow
00:28:750 add a note here for a base-drum? Nope
00:38:500 (13) - NC Done!
01:35:800 (1) - ahh I don't think this slow down is good It's fine imo
01:50:500 (6,7,8) - a little weird Ah... Mistake caused by the Distance Snap
03:13:600 (1,1,1) - make them away Yessir.
good enough for #2 map.keep up the good work

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

00:17:800 add finish in the head of slider since all diffs got it Done.
00:21:700 remove whistle form the head and it on the repeat for be consistence with your hitsounds. Lolwut? Already consistent.
00:24:400 whistle in the head too ^ Already consistent.
00:37:000 (1,1) - You can see the slider when you are spining this is unrankable on easy.. you should fix Give me time to rethink it then.


00:49:000 soft finish fit better imo
00:53:800 move this to x:92 y:140 better flow if you do be careful with spacing Style choice.
00:58:000 (1) - remove red point of slider since look ugly I agree. Fixed.
01:00:100 (4) - maybe can you make it curve like previous slider? Style choice.
01:17:800 remove NC
02:25:900 and 02:26:500 really you should add a circle or make a repeat slider since that pause is so confuse..
02:36:700 remove red point of slider to make a better blank with 02:36:100 Thinking about this..
02:58:600 nice slider i got one in my map too good job ^^ Thanks.
03:07:000 sorry but this look so ugly remove red point too
03:10:600 (3,4,5) - this pattern dont look good what about this: Thinking about this.. [Marked this entire area to fix soon]



03:34:600 (1,1) - same problem with 00:37:000 Give me time to rethink it then.
04:08:200 lower volume here to 40% maybe Fixed.

No_Gu wrote:

[Easy]
Artist and Title are broken,copy the right one from other diffs Fixed.
00:19:300 - add 3 notes by 1/1 from here?I think here's a little empty Maybe. I'll check the effects before sumitting.
00:58:600 - I would change DS here to 1.3x so that It looks like the same as the before part,that won't disturb beginners imo.but maybe don't use speed-change in easy diff next time Thinking..
01:15:400 (4,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 4 *
02:06:400 (2) - move it closer to 1 Fixed?
02:17:800 (5,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 5 *
02:36:700 (3) - this slider's blanket seems not good Fixed.
03:37:600 (1,1,1) - why these NCs?.. **
04:02:200 (1) - move it to center is better imo Moved it slightly closer.
04:07:000 (1) - ^ Moved it slightly closer.
04:08:200 (1) - add a line (40%) in the end to get a good sense Fixed.

* - Only happens in my difficulty. Only 3 sections get white NC, so it's slightly weird.
** - Again, white NC.

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

From my queue xD
Sr for delayed, a bit busy with my workshop.

Let's begin.

> General <

--- Inconsistancy in Kiai Times. Done!
- [Insane] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:300

- [Layfon's Easy] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:293


--- Tags
Please add "Layfon" and "Sakuya" to your tag. Done!

> My Mod <

[Insane]
03:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - If you want to use this kind of stream, make sure player can read all of note, since you put 03:33:100 (13) - as a slider, it's hard to see. Done!

[Normal]
01:04:900 (4) - NC.Done!

Nice map. Good luck

CDFA wrote:

ALLRIGHT LET'S DO THIS.

NOTE: Every time I say clap, I mean whistle, mostly becuase every time there's a map with a snaresample, they always use claps, so I'm just used to it. Denwa.

Overall:
Getting tom drum hitsounds for the slower parts would be cool.
04:10:600 (1) - Feels really random and the map just ends like what there's a few seconds left you can do it. I will think about it

Storyboard:
01:17:800 - Add a white flash to this so it doesn't just pop up randomly. Same for 2nd chrous Gotta ask Layfon for this

Insane:
I wish this diff had a better understanding of when to go ahead and map heavily and when to hold back and not overmap.

00:25:450 (2,3,4) - I want to do something with this that avoids notes going back on themselves but I'm not sure what. If you're ok with having a jump, move (5) to the end of the previous slider Done!
00:28:900 (1) - Having all of these claps at this volume sounds so bad like omg. It's the hitsample's fault, it's not designed for rolls. You can decrease the volume to like, 55-65%, or you can find a softer snaresample for those notes. It just sounds really out of place the way it is atm. Done!
00:40:375 (6) - Remove this, this is a softer section of the music and should avoid overmapping as much as possible. Done!
01:35:800 (1) - Oh sweet jesus no. There's no signification that there's a speed change, and it'll confuse people so much for the wrong reasons. Done!
01:45:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Huge overmap Done!
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Save it for the chrous Done!
02:38:200 (1) - Maybe make this to a more creative slider. Especially with the speed-up, it's kind of a boring slider to put. Done!
03:12:700 (4) - Add clap on beginning of slider Done!
03:13:900 (10) - ^ Done!
03:14:500 (12) - ^ Done!
03:18:025 - What are you doing finish this guitar solo it's really cool and you can map it really hard and it'll be fine. I know that it's really cool but it's just gonna be another super stream. I think that the player deserves a break after 200 bpm streams
03:23:800 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC Done!
03:29:800 (1) - SLIDER REPEAT HIDDEN. I guess you can see like the edge of it but it's enough to make me srs concerned. Done!
03:38:500 (1) - Make this a lot softer so it makes the last chorus more effective.Done!
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap on end of sliderDone!

Normal:
00:23:200 (3) - ok jump. If you're gonna do a jump, horizontally flip the slider and make it wider so it at least looks nice. Done!
00:38:200 (2) - Not perfectly stacked by the slightest margin. Uh, done?
01:55:600 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done!
02:09:700 - um Done?
02:23:500 (4) - Add clap on end of slider Done!
02:56:500 (2) - Add clap to beginning of slider Done!
02:56:950 (3) - ^ Done!
02:57:400 (4) - Add clap to 1st and 3rd repeat Done!
03:03:400 (1) - ^ Done!
03:05:800 (3) - ^ Done!
03:18:100 - psl Nope
03:32:200 - ^ Nope
03:38:500 (1) - Same as insane Done!
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap Done!

desu. I felt like I was a lot more brash in this mod than I usually am. Sorry if that's so. Uguu.