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Haya wrote:
crap.
love this map x3
make more beatmaps with nano x3
Topic Starter
Don't worry, a new nano beatmap is coming soon :3
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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Lowah
Normal
Insane
Just some suggestions.
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General
- • Artist: ナノ || Romanised Artist: nano
• Title: 想イ出カケラ || Romanised Title: Omoide Kakera
• Tags: add "Lunar Sakuya Red Layfon"
• Offset: 1000
• Max storyboard elements size is 800x600.
• Make kiai the same on all diffs.
• Also, every diff has differents breaks that start/end in different positions: make them consistent between all diffs.
• Why don't you use this video? Or try to make something like that with a SB.
Lowah
- • Is this diff supposed to be an Easy? It's kinda too "hard" for being the easier difficulty. Anyway, rename this diff Red's Easy (or Red's Normal, or something like that)
• HP Drain Rate: 4
• Approach Rate: 5
• Overall Difficulty: 4
• 00:59:500 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
• 02:13:900 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Normal
- • HP Drain Rate: 5
• Approach Rate: 6
• Overall Difficulty: 5
Insane
- • HP Drain Rate: 7
Just some suggestions.
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Thank you very much!xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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GeneralI will use the video later
- • Artist: ナノ || Romanised Artist: nano Done!
• Title: 想イ出カケラ || Romanised Title: Omoide Kakera Done!
• Tags: add "Lunar Sakuya Red Layfon" Why? They are already there
• Offset: 1000 Done!
• Max storyboard elements size is 800x600. I will delete the storyboard anyways
• Make kiai the same on all diffs. Done!
• Also, every diff has differents breaks that start/end in different positions: make them consistent between all diffs. Nah
• Why don't you use this video? Or try to make something like that with a SB.
NormalDone!
- • HP Drain Rate: 5 Done!
• Approach Rate: 6 Done!
• Overall Difficulty: 5
InsaneDone!
- • HP Drain Rate: 7
Just some suggestions.
song is so long lmao i just had time to mod 1 mod properly
i hope help in something :3
[Insane]
00:25:000 (1) - finish
00:28:600 (7) - add circle,, i think is important a circle here on white big tick, helps help rythme and flow
00:34:600 (1) - finish
00:37:600 (1) - add circle, i listen a important note there, that is important to start the stream in time, (because stream start on red tick)
00:37:600 (1) - if you add circle^ New combo on it
00:46:150 (2) - put a circle in 00:46:150 and no a slider, because i just listen a small drums there, since voice dont start there, looks wierd to me.
but 00:45:700 (1,5) are great because start and end with voice, 00:46:150 (2) feels weird
01:28:900 (8,9,1) - inst this so much jump distance? listening the song, i dont feel like jumping so much
and then 01:29:650 (4,5) - really small distance, in 01:29:650 (4,5) - is where i feel need jump!!
01:35:800 (1) - finish
01:51:250 (6,7,8) - looks weird and out of your style. the player will get a bit confused. just stack it propably
01:55:975 (6) - delete this circle. it is overmapped, there i no beat in there
01:58:600 (1) - finish, and also i suggest to make usack it to make NC visible
02:04:825 (2,4,6) - there is no beat there, so is overmapped and non sense. just delete that circles, not stream there.
02:14:200 (1) - remove nc. you keep follow voice, there is no reason for nc imo
02:19:300 (1) - use custom soft for this slider.
02:31:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so much circles in a row :s dont forget that is 200 bpm. In my opinion you should not do so much singles in a row. a least start sliders in 02:33:250 (4) -
02:33:250 (4) - NC combo? you have a loud voice there, makes more sense to me
02:58:600 (1) - finish, because start solo and white big tick
03:33:100 (13) - this is a important slider that must not be overlaped by 03:32:200 (1,2,3,4) -
03:38:500 (1) - soft hitsounds in this slider? maybe make it a bit slower?
03:57:400 (1) - this and 01:35:800 (1) i suggest use same slider speed for both and this 02:38:200 (1) -
Good luck :3
i hope help in something :3
[Insane]
00:25:000 (1) - finish
00:28:600 (7) - add circle,, i think is important a circle here on white big tick, helps help rythme and flow
00:34:600 (1) - finish
00:37:600 (1) - add circle, i listen a important note there, that is important to start the stream in time, (because stream start on red tick)
00:37:600 (1) - if you add circle^ New combo on it
00:46:150 (2) - put a circle in 00:46:150 and no a slider, because i just listen a small drums there, since voice dont start there, looks wierd to me.
but 00:45:700 (1,5) are great because start and end with voice, 00:46:150 (2) feels weird
01:28:900 (8,9,1) - inst this so much jump distance? listening the song, i dont feel like jumping so much
and then 01:29:650 (4,5) - really small distance, in 01:29:650 (4,5) - is where i feel need jump!!
01:35:800 (1) - finish
01:51:250 (6,7,8) - looks weird and out of your style. the player will get a bit confused. just stack it propably
01:55:975 (6) - delete this circle. it is overmapped, there i no beat in there
01:58:600 (1) - finish, and also i suggest to make usack it to make NC visible
02:04:825 (2,4,6) - there is no beat there, so is overmapped and non sense. just delete that circles, not stream there.
02:14:200 (1) - remove nc. you keep follow voice, there is no reason for nc imo
02:19:300 (1) - use custom soft for this slider.
02:31:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so much circles in a row :s dont forget that is 200 bpm. In my opinion you should not do so much singles in a row. a least start sliders in 02:33:250 (4) -
02:33:250 (4) - NC combo? you have a loud voice there, makes more sense to me
02:58:600 (1) - finish, because start solo and white big tick
03:33:100 (13) - this is a important slider that must not be overlaped by 03:32:200 (1,2,3,4) -
03:38:500 (1) - soft hitsounds in this slider? maybe make it a bit slower?
03:57:400 (1) - this and 01:35:800 (1) i suggest use same slider speed for both and this 02:38:200 (1) -
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
SPOILER
R e d wrote:
song is so long lmao i just had time to mod 1 mod properly
i hope help in something :3
[Insane]
00:25:000 (1) - finish Done!
00:28:600 (7) - add circle,, i think is important a circle here on white big tick, helps help rythme and flow I don't think so
00:34:600 (1) - finish Done!
00:37:600 (1) - add circle, i listen a important note there, that is important to start the stream in time, (because stream start on red tick) Done!
00:37:600 (1) - if you add circle^ New combo on it Done!
00:46:150 (2) - put a circle in 00:46:150 and no a slider, because i just listen a small drums there, since voice dont start there, looks wierd to me.
but 00:45:700 (1,5) are great because start and end with voice, 00:46:150 (2) feels weird Changed it another way
01:28:900 (8,9,1) - inst this so much jump distance? listening the song, i dont feel like jumping so much Personal taste
and then 01:29:650 (4,5) - really small distance, in 01:29:650 (4,5) - is where i feel need jump!! Well, I guess it's a matter of taste
01:35:800 (1) - finish Done!
01:51:250 (6,7,8) - looks weird and out of your style. the player will get a bit confused. just stack it propably Done!
01:55:975 (6) - delete this circle. it is overmapped, there i no beat in there Done!
01:58:600 (1) - finish, and also i suggest to make usack it to make NC visible Added the Finish
02:04:825 (2,4,6) - there is no beat there, so is overmapped and non sense. just delete that circles, not stream there. *Sigh*
02:14:200 (1) - remove nc. you keep follow voice, there is no reason for nc imo Done!
02:19:300 (1) - use custom soft for this slider. Nope
02:31:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so much circles in a row :s dont forget that is 200 bpm. In my opinion you should not do so much singles in a row. a least start sliders in 02:33:250 (4) - Naaaah, np np
02:33:250 (4) - NC combo? you have a loud voice there, makes more sense to me Nope
02:58:600 (1) - finish, because start solo and white big tick Done!
03:33:100 (13) - this is a important slider that must not be overlaped by 03:32:200 (1,2,3,4) - You won't see the overlap ingame
03:38:500 (1) - soft hitsounds in this slider? maybe make it a bit slower? Used Soft hitsounds but kept the speed
03:57:400 (1) - this and 01:35:800 (1) i suggest use same slider speed for both and this 02:38:200 (1) - Didn't really understand so I just left it
Good luck :3
Thank you, R e d!
Haya, you updated over the wrong map. The insane has my Easy now, and my Easy was erased. D:
Fix when you get back.
Fix when you get back.
And now my final fix..
Structural changes from 02:19:300 to 02:39:100 to improve flow.
Awaiting any more mods (:
Structural changes from 02:19:300 to 02:39:100 to improve flow.
Awaiting any more mods (:
SPOILER
Layfon's Easy:
http://puu.sh/1ZtQN
http://puu.sh/1ZtQN
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
General:
Kiai is not the same in all diffs
Easy:
00:17:800 add finish in the head of slider since all diffs got it
00:21:700 remove whistle form the head and it on the repeat for be consistence with your hitsounds.
00:24:400 whistle in the head too ^
00:37:000 (1,1) - You can see the slider when you are spining this is unrankable on easy.. you should fix
00:49:000 soft finish fit better imo
00:53:800 move this to x:92 y:140 better flow if you do be careful with spacing
00:58:000 (1) - remove red point of slider since look ugly
01:00:100 (4) - maybe can you make it curve like previous slider?
01:17:800 remove NC
02:25:900 and 02:26:500 really you should add a circle or make a repeat slider since that pause is so confuse..
02:36:700 remove red point of slider to make a better blank with 02:36:100
02:58:600
nice slider i got one in my map too good job ^^
03:07:000 sorry but this look so ugly remove red point too
03:10:600 (3,4,5) - this pattern dont look good what about this:
03:34:600 (1,1) - same problem with 00:37:000
04:08:200 lower volume here to 40% maybe
Normal:
00:41:200 (1,2,3) - inconsistence in distance :/
00:37:600 (1,2) - why this extreme jump on normal diff?
00:49:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so much one on one add some slider there plz (new players gonna get confuse)
00:51:400 (1,2) - why are you using jumps on normal?
00:53:800 (3,4,5) - ^
01:19:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont do that single tap in normal is annoying try another pattern
01:26:200 (4,1) - big jump why
03:01:000 (1,2) - again big jump this is normal no hard :l
03:44:200 (1,2,3,4) - jumps again xd
04:10:600 same as easy
(You should rename it to normal +) and sorry map is so long i just mod 2 diffs good luck
Kiai is not the same in all diffs
Easy:
00:17:800 add finish in the head of slider since all diffs got it
00:21:700 remove whistle form the head and it on the repeat for be consistence with your hitsounds.
00:24:400 whistle in the head too ^
00:37:000 (1,1) - You can see the slider when you are spining this is unrankable on easy.. you should fix
00:49:000 soft finish fit better imo
00:53:800 move this to x:92 y:140 better flow if you do be careful with spacing
00:58:000 (1) - remove red point of slider since look ugly
01:00:100 (4) - maybe can you make it curve like previous slider?
01:17:800 remove NC
02:25:900 and 02:26:500 really you should add a circle or make a repeat slider since that pause is so confuse..
02:36:700 remove red point of slider to make a better blank with 02:36:100
02:58:600
nice slider i got one in my map too good job ^^03:07:000 sorry but this look so ugly remove red point too
03:10:600 (3,4,5) - this pattern dont look good what about this:
03:34:600 (1,1) - same problem with 00:37:000
04:08:200 lower volume here to 40% maybe
Normal:
00:41:200 (1,2,3) - inconsistence in distance :/
00:37:600 (1,2) - why this extreme jump on normal diff?
00:49:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so much one on one add some slider there plz (new players gonna get confuse)
00:51:400 (1,2) - why are you using jumps on normal?
00:53:800 (3,4,5) - ^
01:19:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont do that single tap in normal is annoying try another pattern
01:26:200 (4,1) - big jump why
03:01:000 (1,2) - again big jump this is normal no hard :l
03:44:200 (1,2,3,4) - jumps again xd
04:10:600 same as easy
(You should rename it to normal +) and sorry map is so long i just mod 2 diffs good luck
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Natsu wrote:
General:
Kiai is not the same in all diffs Done!
Normal:
00:41:200 (1,2,3) - inconsistence in distance :/ Done!
00:37:600 (1,2) - why this extreme jump on normal diff? Done!
00:49:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so much one on one add some slider there plz (new players gonna get confuse) Nope, already let some new players play and they had no probs
00:51:400 (1,2) - why are you using jumps on normal? Done!
00:53:800 (3,4,5) - ^ Done!
01:19:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dont do that single tap in normal is annoying try another pattern No
01:26:200 (4,1) - big jump why
03:01:000 (1,2) - again big jump this is normal no hard :l 03:07:000 (4) -
03:44:200 (1,2,3,4) - jumps again xd This shouldn't be a problem
04:10:600 same as easy ?
(You should rename it to normal +) Normal + sounds shitty, I will keep the name
and sorry map is so long i just mod 2 diffs good luck
Thanks for the mod!
From my queue
I love nano so much!
[General/All diffs]
maybe name the drum sound as normal-hitclap.wav but not whistle in your next time...
why all diffs have a special NC in some parts..I don't think it's necessary,or you have some meaning on it?
[Easy]
Artist and Title are broken,copy the right one from other diffs
00:19:300 - add 3 notes by 1/1 from here?I think here's a little empty
00:58:600 - I would change DS here to 1.3x so that It looks like the same as the before part,that won't disturb beginners imo.but maybe don't use speed-change in easy diff next time
01:15:400 (4,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 4
02:06:400 (2) - move it closer to 1
02:17:800 (5,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 5
02:36:700 (3) - this slider's blanket seems not good
03:37:600 (1,1,1) - why these NCs?..
04:02:200 (1) - move it to center is better imo
04:07:000 (1) - ^
04:08:200 (1) - add a line (40%) in the end to get a good sense
[Normal]
00:21:100 (2) - why so big spacing...I don't think jumping in normal is good
00:33:100 (2) - whistle in the beginning
00:42:400 (3) - whistle on the repeat
01:15:400 (5,6,7) - make them a slider?..since this pattern is unusual
01:16:900 (1) - what's the meaning of this NC?
01:17:800 (1) - finish in the beginning
01:27:700 why not add a drum sound with the tick?
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no snare drums in the beginning..remove whistle
Some suggestions for you in the furture:you'd better avoid speed-change in easy/normal beacuse beginners can't read it easily./add NC for each 2 downbeat is the best imo.
[Hard]
00:58:600 - I suggest remaping this part by using 1.4x DS so that there is no overlap and it will be neater than now.but if you don't want,it's OK
01:36:550 (2) - it sounds better if you map this as 1/3 pattern imo
02:19:600 (3) - add normal-sliderwhistle and make the 2 circles soft?
[Insane]
AR-1 maybe?..
00:28:750 add a note here for a base-drum?
00:38:500 (13) - NC
01:35:800 (1) - ahh I don't think this slow down is good
01:50:500 (6,7,8) - a little weird
03:13:600 (1,1,1) - make them away
good enough for #2 map.keep up the good work
I love nano so much!
[General/All diffs]
maybe name the drum sound as normal-hitclap.wav but not whistle in your next time...
why all diffs have a special NC in some parts..I don't think it's necessary,or you have some meaning on it?
[Easy]
Artist and Title are broken,copy the right one from other diffs
00:19:300 - add 3 notes by 1/1 from here?I think here's a little empty
00:58:600 - I would change DS here to 1.3x so that It looks like the same as the before part,that won't disturb beginners imo.but maybe don't use speed-change in easy diff next time
01:15:400 (4,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 4
02:06:400 (2) - move it closer to 1
02:17:800 (5,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 5
02:36:700 (3) - this slider's blanket seems not good
03:37:600 (1,1,1) - why these NCs?..
04:02:200 (1) - move it to center is better imo
04:07:000 (1) - ^
04:08:200 (1) - add a line (40%) in the end to get a good sense
[Normal]
00:21:100 (2) - why so big spacing...I don't think jumping in normal is good
00:33:100 (2) - whistle in the beginning
00:42:400 (3) - whistle on the repeat
01:15:400 (5,6,7) - make them a slider?..since this pattern is unusual
01:16:900 (1) - what's the meaning of this NC?
01:17:800 (1) - finish in the beginning
01:27:700 why not add a drum sound with the tick?
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no snare drums in the beginning..remove whistle
Some suggestions for you in the furture:you'd better avoid speed-change in easy/normal beacuse beginners can't read it easily./add NC for each 2 downbeat is the best imo.
[Hard]
00:58:600 - I suggest remaping this part by using 1.4x DS so that there is no overlap and it will be neater than now.but if you don't want,it's OK
01:36:550 (2) - it sounds better if you map this as 1/3 pattern imo
02:19:600 (3) - add normal-sliderwhistle and make the 2 circles soft?
[Insane]
AR-1 maybe?..
00:28:750 add a note here for a base-drum?
00:38:500 (13) - NC
01:35:800 (1) - ahh I don't think this slow down is good
01:50:500 (6,7,8) - a little weird
03:13:600 (1,1,1) - make them away
good enough for #2 map.keep up the good work
Topic Starter
SPOILER
No_Gu wrote:
From my queue
I love nano so much!
[General/All diffs]
maybe name the drum sound as normal-hitclap.wav but not whistle in your next time... Does it matter?
why all diffs have a special NC in some parts..I don't think it's necessary,or you have some meaning on it? Don't get what you mean
[Normal]
00:21:100 (2) - why so big spacing...I don't think jumping in normal is good Done!
00:33:100 (2) - whistle in the beginning Done!
00:42:400 (3) - whistle on the repeat Done!
01:15:400 (5,6,7) - make them a slider?..since this pattern is unusual Done!
01:16:900 (1) - what's the meaning of this NC? Vocals are changing
01:17:800 (1) - finish in the beginning Done!
01:27:700 why not add a drum sound with the tick? Done!
03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no snare drums in the beginning..remove whistle Done!
Some suggestions for you in the furture:you'd better avoid speed-change in easy/normal beacuse beginners can't read it easily./add NC for each 2 downbeat is the best imo.
[Insane]
AR-1 maybe?.. Nah, AR 8 is too slow
00:28:750 add a note here for a base-drum? Nope
00:38:500 (13) - NC Done!
01:35:800 (1) - ahh I don't think this slow down is good It's fine imo
01:50:500 (6,7,8) - a little weird Ah... Mistake caused by the Distance Snap
03:13:600 (1,1,1) - make them away Yessir.
good enough for #2 map.keep up the good work
Thanks for the mod, No_Gu!
SPOILER
Natsu wrote:
Easy:
00:17:800 add finish in the head of slider since all diffs got it Done.
00:21:700 remove whistle form the head and it on the repeat for be consistence with your hitsounds. Lolwut? Already consistent.
00:24:400 whistle in the head too ^ Already consistent.
00:37:000 (1,1) - You can see the slider when you are spining this is unrankable on easy.. you should fix Give me time to rethink it then.
00:49:000 soft finish fit better imo
00:53:800 move this to x:92 y:140 better flow if you do be careful with spacing Style choice.
00:58:000 (1) - remove red point of slider since look ugly I agree. Fixed.
01:00:100 (4) - maybe can you make it curve like previous slider? Style choice.
01:17:800 remove NC
02:25:900 and 02:26:500 really you should add a circle or make a repeat slider since that pause is so confuse..
02:36:700 remove red point of slider to make a better blank with 02:36:100 Thinking about this..
02:58:600
03:07:000 sorry but this look so ugly remove red point too
03:10:600 (3,4,5) - this pattern dont look good what about this: Thinking about this.. [Marked this entire area to fix soon]
03:34:600 (1,1) - same problem with 00:37:000 Give me time to rethink it then.
04:08:200 lower volume here to 40% maybe Fixed.
SPOILER
No_Gu wrote:
[Easy]
Artist and Title are broken,copy the right one from other diffs Fixed.
00:19:300 - add 3 notes by 1/1 from here?I think here's a little empty Maybe. I'll check the effects before sumitting.
00:58:600 - I would change DS here to 1.3x so that It looks like the same as the before part,that won't disturb beginners imo.but maybe don't use speed-change in easy diff next time Thinking..
01:15:400 (4,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 4 *
02:06:400 (2) - move it closer to 1 Fixed?
02:17:800 (5,1) - remove NC on 1 and add it on 5 *
02:36:700 (3) - this slider's blanket seems not good Fixed.
03:37:600 (1,1,1) - why these NCs?.. **
04:02:200 (1) - move it to center is better imo Moved it slightly closer.
04:07:000 (1) - ^ Moved it slightly closer.
04:08:200 (1) - add a line (40%) in the end to get a good sense Fixed.
* - Only happens in my difficulty. Only 3 sections get white NC, so it's slightly weird.
** - Again, white NC.
I'm even worse at applying structural mods.
Haya you owe me big time when I'm completely done. Give me some treats. :>
SPOILER
Layfon's Easy:
http://puu.sh/1ZZAI
http://puu.sh/1ZZAI
Thanks a lot!!No_Gu wrote:
[Hard]
00:58:600 - I suggest remaping this part by using 1.4x DS so that there is no overlap and it will be neater than now.but if you don't want,it's OK Fixed
01:36:550 (2) - it sounds better if you map this as 1/3 pattern imo Fixed
02:19:600 (3) - add normal-sliderwhistle and make the 2 circles soft? Fixed
http://puu.sh/202g9
～❤ hook it to my veins
Hi~
From my queue xD
Sr for delayed, a bit busy with my workshop.
Let's begin.
> General <
--- Inconsistancy in Kiai Times.
- [Insane] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:300
- [Layfon's Easy] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:293
--- Tags
Please add "Layfon" and "Sakuya" to your tag.
> My Mod <
[Insane]
03:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - If you want to use this kind of stream, make sure player can read all of note, since you put 03:33:100 (13) - as a slider, it's hard to see.
[Sakuya's Hard]
AR +1. Your BPM is 200.
[Normal]
01:04:900 (4) - NC.
[Layfon's Easy]
03:58:293 - Usnapped green timing. Snap to 03:58:300
Nice map. Good luck
From my queue xD
Sr for delayed, a bit busy with my workshop.
Let's begin.
> General <
--- Inconsistancy in Kiai Times.
- [Insane] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:300
- [Layfon's Easy] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:293
--- Tags
Please add "Layfon" and "Sakuya" to your tag.
> My Mod <
[Insane]
03:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - If you want to use this kind of stream, make sure player can read all of note, since you put 03:33:100 (13) - as a slider, it's hard to see.
[Sakuya's Hard]
AR +1. Your BPM is 200.
[Normal]
01:04:900 (4) - NC.
[Layfon's Easy]
03:58:293 - Usnapped green timing. Snap to 03:58:300
Nice map. Good luck
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Yuki-kun wrote:
Hi~
From my queue xD
Sr for delayed, a bit busy with my workshop.
Let's begin.
> General <
--- Inconsistancy in Kiai Times. Done!
- [Insane] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:300
- [Layfon's Easy] :
Kiai #6: Starts on 03:49:000, ends on 03:58:293
--- Tags
Please add "Layfon" and "Sakuya" to your tag. Done!
> My Mod <
[Insane]
03:32:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - If you want to use this kind of stream, make sure player can read all of note, since you put 03:33:100 (13) - as a slider, it's hard to see. Done!
[Normal]
01:04:900 (4) - NC.Done!
Nice map. Good luck
Thanks for the mod, Yuki!
Shohei Ohtani
ALLRIGHT LET'S DO THIS.
NOTE: Every time I say clap, I mean whistle, mostly becuase every time there's a map with a snaresample, they always use claps, so I'm just used to it. Denwa.
Overall:
Getting tom drum hitsounds for the slower parts would be cool.
04:10:600 (1) - Feels really random and the map just ends like what there's a few seconds left you can do it.
Storyboard:
01:17:800 - Add a white flash to this so it doesn't just pop up randomly. Same for 2nd chrous
Insane:
I wish this diff had a better understanding of when to go ahead and map heavily and when to hold back and not overmap.
00:25:450 (2,3,4) - I want to do something with this that avoids notes going back on themselves but I'm not sure what. If you're ok with having a jump, move (5) to the end of the previous slider
00:28:900 (1) - Having all of these claps at this volume sounds so bad like omg. It's the hitsample's fault, it's not designed for rolls. You can decrease the volume to like, 55-65%, or you can find a softer snaresample for those notes. It just sounds really out of place the way it is atm.
00:40:375 (6) - Remove this, this is a softer section of the music and should avoid overmapping as much as possible.
01:35:800 (1) - Oh sweet jesus no. There's no signification that there's a speed change, and it'll confuse people so much for the wrong reasons.
01:45:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Huge overmap
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Save it for the chrous
02:38:200 (1) - Maybe make this to a more creative slider. Especially with the speed-up, it's kind of a boring slider to put.
03:12:700 (4) - Add clap on beginning of slider
03:13:900 (10) - ^
03:14:500 (12) - ^
03:18:025 - What are you doing finish this guitar solo it's really cool and you can map it really hard and it'll be fine.
03:23:800 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC
03:29:800 (1) - SLIDER REPEAT HIDDEN. I guess you can see like the edge of it but it's enough to make me srs concerned.
03:38:500 (1) - Make this a lot softer so it makes the last chorus more effective.
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
Hard:
00:38:650 (4,5,6) - Remove (4), and move (5) and (6) back 2 ticks (so 5 starts on the red tick), so it fits the drum pattern. Put a note on the red tick where (6) used to end.
01:25:600 (8) - Omg this was going to be a cool square and then you were like "nope" like no
01:36:700 (2) - Add a repeat?
01:58:450 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
03:35:500 - Add note here
04:03:400 (1) - Might want to think about moving this elsewhere, the repeat is slightly hidden
Normal:
00:23:200 (3) - ok jump. If you're gonna do a jump, horizontally flip the slider and make it wider so it at least looks nice.
00:38:200 (2) - Not perfectly stacked by the slightest margin.
01:55:600 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:09:700 - um
02:23:500 (4) - Add clap on end of slider
02:56:500 (2) - Add clap to beginning of slider
02:56:950 (3) - ^
02:57:400 (4) - Add clap to 1st and 3rd repeat
03:03:400 (1) - ^
03:05:800 (3) - ^
03:18:100 - psl
03:32:200 - ^
03:38:500 (1) - Same as insane
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap
Easy:
Hitsounds in the verses would be cool
00:25:000 - Dood if you're gonna start off with slidertick hitsounds, you gotta have them in the entire map
03:37:600 (1) - Sounds really weird since nothing in the music really hits here (I believe the rhythm they're on is all red ticks atm)
desu. I felt like I was a lot more brash in this mod than I usually am. Sorry if that's so. Uguu.
NOTE: Every time I say clap, I mean whistle, mostly becuase every time there's a map with a snaresample, they always use claps, so I'm just used to it. Denwa.
Overall:
Getting tom drum hitsounds for the slower parts would be cool.
04:10:600 (1) - Feels really random and the map just ends like what there's a few seconds left you can do it.
Storyboard:
01:17:800 - Add a white flash to this so it doesn't just pop up randomly. Same for 2nd chrous
Insane:
I wish this diff had a better understanding of when to go ahead and map heavily and when to hold back and not overmap.
00:25:450 (2,3,4) - I want to do something with this that avoids notes going back on themselves but I'm not sure what. If you're ok with having a jump, move (5) to the end of the previous slider
00:28:900 (1) - Having all of these claps at this volume sounds so bad like omg. It's the hitsample's fault, it's not designed for rolls. You can decrease the volume to like, 55-65%, or you can find a softer snaresample for those notes. It just sounds really out of place the way it is atm.
00:40:375 (6) - Remove this, this is a softer section of the music and should avoid overmapping as much as possible.
01:35:800 (1) - Oh sweet jesus no. There's no signification that there's a speed change, and it'll confuse people so much for the wrong reasons.
01:45:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Huge overmap
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Save it for the chrous
02:38:200 (1) - Maybe make this to a more creative slider. Especially with the speed-up, it's kind of a boring slider to put.
03:12:700 (4) - Add clap on beginning of slider
03:13:900 (10) - ^
03:14:500 (12) - ^
03:18:025 - What are you doing finish this guitar solo it's really cool and you can map it really hard and it'll be fine.
03:23:800 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC
03:29:800 (1) - SLIDER REPEAT HIDDEN. I guess you can see like the edge of it but it's enough to make me srs concerned.
03:38:500 (1) - Make this a lot softer so it makes the last chorus more effective.
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
Hard:
00:38:650 (4,5,6) - Remove (4), and move (5) and (6) back 2 ticks (so 5 starts on the red tick), so it fits the drum pattern. Put a note on the red tick where (6) used to end.
01:25:600 (8) - Omg this was going to be a cool square and then you were like "nope" like no
01:36:700 (2) - Add a repeat?
01:58:450 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
03:35:500 - Add note here
04:03:400 (1) - Might want to think about moving this elsewhere, the repeat is slightly hidden
Normal:
00:23:200 (3) - ok jump. If you're gonna do a jump, horizontally flip the slider and make it wider so it at least looks nice.
00:38:200 (2) - Not perfectly stacked by the slightest margin.
01:55:600 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:09:700 - um
02:23:500 (4) - Add clap on end of slider
02:56:500 (2) - Add clap to beginning of slider
02:56:950 (3) - ^
02:57:400 (4) - Add clap to 1st and 3rd repeat
03:03:400 (1) - ^
03:05:800 (3) - ^
03:18:100 - psl
03:32:200 - ^
03:38:500 (1) - Same as insane
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap
Easy:
Hitsounds in the verses would be cool
00:25:000 - Dood if you're gonna start off with slidertick hitsounds, you gotta have them in the entire map
03:37:600 (1) - Sounds really weird since nothing in the music really hits here (I believe the rhythm they're on is all red ticks atm)
desu. I felt like I was a lot more brash in this mod than I usually am. Sorry if that's so. Uguu.
Topic Starter
Kudosu'd you, but going to change change the map when that slider bug is fixed ~
P.S.: That mod wasn't brash at all lol.
Edit: Kay fixed:
Thanks for your generous mod, CDFA!
P.S.: That mod wasn't brash at all lol.
Edit: Kay fixed:
SPOILER
CDFA wrote:
ALLRIGHT LET'S DO THIS.
NOTE: Every time I say clap, I mean whistle, mostly becuase every time there's a map with a snaresample, they always use claps, so I'm just used to it. Denwa.
Overall:
Getting tom drum hitsounds for the slower parts would be cool.
04:10:600 (1) - Feels really random and the map just ends like what there's a few seconds left you can do it. I will think about it
Storyboard:
01:17:800 - Add a white flash to this so it doesn't just pop up randomly. Same for 2nd chrous Gotta ask Layfon for this
Insane:
I wish this diff had a better understanding of when to go ahead and map heavily and when to hold back and not overmap.
00:25:450 (2,3,4) - I want to do something with this that avoids notes going back on themselves but I'm not sure what. If you're ok with having a jump, move (5) to the end of the previous slider Done!
00:28:900 (1) - Having all of these claps at this volume sounds so bad like omg. It's the hitsample's fault, it's not designed for rolls. You can decrease the volume to like, 55-65%, or you can find a softer snaresample for those notes. It just sounds really out of place the way it is atm. Done!
00:40:375 (6) - Remove this, this is a softer section of the music and should avoid overmapping as much as possible. Done!
01:35:800 (1) - Oh sweet jesus no. There's no signification that there's a speed change, and it'll confuse people so much for the wrong reasons. Done!
01:45:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Huge overmap Done!
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Save it for the chrous Done!
02:38:200 (1) - Maybe make this to a more creative slider. Especially with the speed-up, it's kind of a boring slider to put. Done!
03:12:700 (4) - Add clap on beginning of slider Done!
03:13:900 (10) - ^ Done!
03:14:500 (12) - ^ Done!
03:18:025 - What are you doing finish this guitar solo it's really cool and you can map it really hard and it'll be fine. I know that it's really cool but it's just gonna be another super stream. I think that the player deserves a break after 200 bpm streams
03:23:800 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove NC Done!
03:29:800 (1) - SLIDER REPEAT HIDDEN. I guess you can see like the edge of it but it's enough to make me srs concerned. Done!
03:38:500 (1) - Make this a lot softer so it makes the last chorus more effective.Done!
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap on end of sliderDone!
Normal:
00:23:200 (3) - ok jump. If you're gonna do a jump, horizontally flip the slider and make it wider so it at least looks nice. Done!
00:38:200 (2) - Not perfectly stacked by the slightest margin. Uh, done?
01:55:600 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Done!
02:09:700 - um Done?
02:23:500 (4) - Add clap on end of slider Done!
02:56:500 (2) - Add clap to beginning of slider Done!
02:56:950 (3) - ^ Done!
02:57:400 (4) - Add clap to 1st and 3rd repeat Done!
03:03:400 (1) - ^ Done!
03:05:800 (3) - ^ Done!
03:18:100 - psl Nope
03:32:200 - ^ Nope
03:38:500 (1) - Same as insane Done!
03:48:400 (1) - Add clap Done!
desu. I felt like I was a lot more brash in this mod than I usually am. Sorry if that's so. Uguu.
Thanks for your generous mod, CDFA!
ThanksCDFA wrote:
Hard:
00:38:650 (4,5,6) - Remove (4), and move (5) and (6) back 2 ticks (so 5 starts on the red tick), so it fits the drum pattern. Put a note on the red tick where (6) used to end. Fixed
01:25:600 (8) - Omg this was going to be a cool square and then you were like "nope" like no ...sorry xD
01:36:700 (2) - Add a repeat? Fixed
01:58:450 (1) - Add clap on end of sliderFixed
03:35:500 - Add note here i left it for now since I didn't hear a major finish in the bg music
04:03:400 (1) - Might want to think about moving this elsewhere, the repeat is slightly hidden Fixed
http://puu.sh/28Tka
hi haya~
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from m4m
SPOILER
nice map, good luck for rank![General]
the hitsound make this song even noisier, especially the nor-hitnormal with hoot end.
you can try this as hitnormal, and maybe a default sliderslide or silent sliderslide with it.
[Layfon's Easy]
01:26:800 (1,2) - can be a better blanket
01:53:500 add an object here
02:10:000 (1,2,3) - In old saying we said that newer player who play easy won't understand notes overlap
02:33:700 (5,6) - ^
[Normal]
AR-1
00:31:600 (4,5) - bad DS, start at (448,160) looks better
00:33:700 (3,4) - bad DS
01:15:400 (5) - not good overlap, try this http://puu.sh/2bSp6
01:36:700 add a note here and start spinner at 01:36:775
01:58:900 (3,4,1) - bad DS inbetween
02:35:200 (3,5) - could be more curvey
03:58:300 add a note here and start spinner at 03:58:375
04:02:200 (1) - tick back once more and start spinner at 04:03:175
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:39:400 (8,1) - Distance Snapping
01:11:800 (6,1) - ^
02:14:800 (1,2) - even with ctrl+g on (1), DS is too big
02:15:400 (1,2,3) - could be closer
02:19:600 (3,1) - change shape to low down DS and stay where your slider end
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable DS feels bad
02:28:900 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:35:500 (3,4) - bad DS
[Insane]
can't mod due to bug
the hitsound make this song even noisier, especially the nor-hitnormal with hoot end.
you can try this as hitnormal, and maybe a default sliderslide or silent sliderslide with it.
[Layfon's Easy]
01:26:800 (1,2) - can be a better blanket
01:53:500 add an object here
02:10:000 (1,2,3) - In old saying we said that newer player who play easy won't understand notes overlap
02:33:700 (5,6) - ^
[Normal]
AR-1
00:31:600 (4,5) - bad DS, start at (448,160) looks better
00:33:700 (3,4) - bad DS
01:15:400 (5) - not good overlap, try this http://puu.sh/2bSp6
01:36:700 add a note here and start spinner at 01:36:775
01:58:900 (3,4,1) - bad DS inbetween
02:35:200 (3,5) - could be more curvey
03:58:300 add a note here and start spinner at 03:58:375
04:02:200 (1) - tick back once more and start spinner at 04:03:175
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:39:400 (8,1) - Distance Snapping
01:11:800 (6,1) - ^
02:14:800 (1,2) - even with ctrl+g on (1), DS is too big
02:15:400 (1,2,3) - could be closer
02:19:600 (3,1) - change shape to low down DS and stay where your slider end
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable DS feels bad
02:28:900 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:35:500 (3,4) - bad DS
[Insane]
can't mod due to bug
Topic Starter
What bug are you talking about?Hsiao-Chai wrote:
hi haya~
from m4m
[Insane]
can't mod due to bug
nice map, good luck for rank!
EDIT: What the hell...
EDIT 2:
Thanks for your mod!Hsiao-Chai wrote:
hi haya~
from m4mSPOILER[General]
the hitsound make this song even noisier, especially the nor-hitnormal with hoot end.
you can try this as hitnormal, and maybe a default sliderslide or silent sliderslide with it. Nah, I like it as it is ^^
[Normal]
AR-1 Done!
00:31:600 (4,5) - bad DS, start at (448,160) looks better Done!
00:33:700 (3,4) - bad DS Done!
01:15:400 (5) - not good overlap, try this http://puu.sh/2bSp6 Done!
01:36:700 add a note here and start spinner at 01:36:775 Done!
01:58:900 (3,4,1) - bad DS inbetween Kinda fixed it
02:35:200 (3,5) - could be more curvey Nope
03:58:300 add a note here and start spinner at 03:58:375 Done!
04:02:200 (1) - tick back once more and start spinner at 04:03:175 No
Thanks!Hsiao-Chai wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:39:400 (8,1) - Distance Snapping what
01:11:800 (6,1) - ^
02:14:800 (1,2) - even with ctrl+g on (1), DS is too big it'll become boring if you stick with DS throughout the whole diff
02:15:400 (1,2,3) - could be closer Fixed a little
02:19:600 (3,1) - change shape to low down DS and stay where your slider end the jump signifies the transition
02:22:600 (1,2,3,4,1) - unstable DS feels bad Fixed
02:28:900 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ it's fine
02:35:500 (3,4) - bad DS
http://puu.sh/2fCA5
[Hard]
02:23:500 (2) - this being placed on the slider end makes it hard to see the repeat because of the 300.
yeah that is really the only thing worth pointing out get that taken care of and I can bubble
02:23:500 (2) - this being placed on the slider end makes it hard to see the repeat because of the 300.
yeah that is really the only thing worth pointing out get that taken care of and I can bubble
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod ztrot!
Sakuya fixed her mod so... Updated~
Sakuya fixed her mod so... Updated~
From my Queue... I felt this map Perfect (: Let's go
[General]
There are two files absolutely equals: "Omoide Kakera BG.jpg" and "pulse.jpg". You could save 420KB space by using the same for BG and pulse events.
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Absolutely PERFECT all difs!
Thence, not helpful mod
GOOD LUCK for get Ranked soon!
Att.
[General]
There are two files absolutely equals: "Omoide Kakera BG.jpg" and "pulse.jpg". You could save 420KB space by using the same for BG and pulse events.
-----------------------------------------
Absolutely PERFECT all difs!
Thence, not helpful mod
GOOD LUCK for get Ranked soon!
Att.
Topic Starter
SPOILER
cFiszpan wrote:
From my Queue... I felt this map Perfect (: Let's go
[General]
There are two files absolutely equals: "Omoide Kakera BG.jpg" and "pulse.jpg". You could save 420KB space by using the same for BG and pulse events.
Fixed!
-----------------------------------------
Absolutely PERFECT all difs!
Thence, not helpful mod
GOOD LUCK for get Ranked soon!
Att.
Thanks! :3
[Easy]
i cant believe the starrating is below 3,00 stars xD
01:13:000 (1) - third waypoint should be at 448;128
[Normal]
01:55:600 (1) - i think this goes out of the screen
03:32:725 - this pause is so "dafuq?". what about a spinner or at least set a break there
03:37:000 (6) - i think a normal whistle would fit perfect. add section with ~10% volume, use sampleset: soft on the head and end, use addition: normal+whistle.
[Hard]
use AR 8! its 200bpm, AR 7 doesnt fit imo
also compared to the normal and easy here is a little "jump" in the sv. and high sv + low AR never fit
ofc its a bit harder and there is a little gap in the diffspread then but it would make the hard-diff so much more awesome <3
02:00:100 (4,5,6,7,8) - these stop-and-go's are a bit hard (lol). i prefere two sliders and then a triplet http://puu.sh/2igAz. also a triplet is much more awesome than just 1/2-tapping
02:56:200 (1,2,3) - these syncopes are very unexpected and its a bit unclear how to play them (on first try) i suggest http://puu.sh/2igL0
[Insane]
00:24:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - meh so much stack :c waht about a triangle and a stream http://puu.sh/2igZD.this boosts your map xD
00:28:600 - this gap must be filled, it feels so empty :'(
00:37:450 - again here. why? das nimmt der map voll die energie (mein englisch failt xD)
00:37:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - they arent exactly in a line. im not sure if it was done on purpose
01:34:450 (1,2,3,4) - they all play a bit strange because they start on a red tick >.>
03:29:350 (6) - add repeat! bittebittebitte :3
[]
nice map!
and sorry for troll mod ;D
i cant believe the starrating is below 3,00 stars xD
01:13:000 (1) - third waypoint should be at 448;128
[Normal]
01:55:600 (1) - i think this goes out of the screen
03:32:725 - this pause is so "dafuq?". what about a spinner or at least set a break there
03:37:000 (6) - i think a normal whistle would fit perfect. add section with ~10% volume, use sampleset: soft on the head and end, use addition: normal+whistle.
[Hard]
use AR 8! its 200bpm, AR 7 doesnt fit imo
also compared to the normal and easy here is a little "jump" in the sv. and high sv + low AR never fit
ofc its a bit harder and there is a little gap in the diffspread then but it would make the hard-diff so much more awesome <3
02:00:100 (4,5,6,7,8) - these stop-and-go's are a bit hard (lol). i prefere two sliders and then a triplet http://puu.sh/2igAz. also a triplet is much more awesome than just 1/2-tapping
02:56:200 (1,2,3) - these syncopes are very unexpected and its a bit unclear how to play them (on first try) i suggest http://puu.sh/2igL0
[Insane]
00:24:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - meh so much stack :c waht about a triangle and a stream http://puu.sh/2igZD.this boosts your map xD
00:28:600 - this gap must be filled, it feels so empty :'(
00:37:450 - again here. why? das nimmt der map voll die energie (mein englisch failt xD)
00:37:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - they arent exactly in a line. im not sure if it was done on purpose
01:34:450 (1,2,3,4) - they all play a bit strange because they start on a red tick >.>
03:29:350 (6) - add repeat! bittebittebitte :3
[]
nice map!
and sorry for troll mod ;D
Code:phaZ wrote:
[Hard]
use AR 8! its 200bpm, AR 7 doesnt fit imo sure
also compared to the normal and easy here is a little "jump" in the sv. and high sv + low AR never fit
ofc its a bit harder and there is a little gap in the diffspread then but it would make the hard-diff so much more awesome <3
02:00:100 (4,5,6,7,8) - these stop-and-go's are a bit hard (lol). i prefere two sliders and then a triplet http://puu.sh/2igAz. also a triplet is much more awesome than just 1/2-tapping got rid of the single notes
02:56:200 (1,2,3) - these syncopes are very unexpected and its a bit unclear how to play them (on first try) i suggest http://puu.sh/2igL0 fixed
SPOILER
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: Omoide Kakera.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76754
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 57930,60480,72330,76080,139230,142230,218430
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Omoide Kakera
TitleUnicode:想イ出カケラ
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:Haya
Version:Sakuya's Hard
Source:
Tags:Sakuya Layfon LunarSakuya Red_Layfon nanoir nicovideo
BeatmapID:186390
BeatmapSetID:62510
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Omoide Kakera BG.jpg",320,240
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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268,92,229450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,229600,2,0,B|348:136|352:96,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,244,230050,2,0,B|396:204|472:220,1,140
484,300,230500,2,0,B|420:340|344:324,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,231100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,336,231400,6,0,B|68:300|68:212,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,204,231850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,200,232000,2,0,B|236:121|168:85,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,232450,2,0,B|296:72|324:152|320:220,1,210,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,296,233050,2,0,B|264:316|224:320,2,70
376,312,233500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,104,233800,6,0,B|324:112|296:192,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,188,234250,2,0,B|184:109|112:101,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,180,234700,2,0,B|64:248|64:248|92:312,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,300,235150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,344,235300,2,0,B|300:296|300:296|368:288,2,140,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,236200,6,0,B|412:192|412:192|432:160|464:148,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,128,236950,2,0,B|364:120,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,237400,2,0,B|148:176,1,70
100,108,237700,2,0,B|60:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,184,238000,2,0,B|48:256,1,70
96,320,238300,2,0,B|80:364,2,35,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,336,238600,6,0,B|192:256|268:232,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,320,239350,2,0,B|352:320,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,239800,2,0,B|408:248,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,164,240250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,100,240400,2,0,B|212:80,1,70
168,148,240700,2,0,B|240:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,241000,6,0,B|44:192,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,241750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,364,241900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,316,242050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,232,242200,2,0,B|468:192,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,243100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,232,243400,6,0,B|256:260|188:232,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,244150,2,0,B|412:140|404:104,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,244600,2,0,B|260:101|188:129,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,176,245350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,245500,2,0,B|408:296|380:324,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,245800,2,0,B|240:336|208:308|208:308|192:268,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,256,246550,2,0,B|252:188,2,70,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,247000,6,0,B|360:140|316:72,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,104,247900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,248200,12,4,253000,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
SPOILER
phaZ wrote:
[Normal]
01:55:600 (1) - i think this goes out of the screen It fits perfectly
03:32:725 - this pause is so "dafuq?". what about a spinner or at least set a break there I don't think that it's really sudden. A spinner would not fit here imo and mapping this part would be too boring
03:37:000 (6) - i think a normal whistle would fit perfect. add section with ~10% volume, use sampleset: soft on the head and end, use addition: normal+whistle. wtf. Why was this part soft? O-O
[Insane]
00:24:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - meh so much stack :c waht about a triangle and a stream http://puu.sh/2igZD.this boosts your map xD Fixed it otherwise!
00:28:600 - this gap must be filled, it feels so empty :'( Well, it follows the Guitar part. So.... I will leave it like that
00:37:450 - again here. why? das nimmt der map voll die energie (mein englisch failt xD) LOL XD ^
00:37:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - they arent exactly in a line. im not sure if it was done on purpose Shit, they aren't?
01:34:450 (1,2,3,4) - they all play a bit strange because they start on a red tick >.> Matter of taste!
03:29:350 (6) - add repeat! bittebittebitte :3 Just added a Hitcircle between that gap
[]
nice map!
and sorry for troll mod ;D
Thanks for the mod, phaZ!
Topic Starter
Fak you. </3Red Layfon wrote:
Haya stop bugging me, please. <3
aaand Updated!
looking good as far as I can tell the only thing that worried me has been corrected.
popped for unrankable stuff
[General]
i may mod it thoroughly later since i have to go now.
[General]
- Inconsistent Tags
- Missing SB item, there's no "pulse.jpg" in your song folder.
i may mod it thoroughly later since i have to go now.
Topic Starter
About that sb problem, people told memto delte pulse.jpg so i got confused since i know nothing about sb lol
Too bad abot the bubble tho
EDIT: Fixed the SB Stuff!
Also fixed the Tag unconsistency!
Too bad abot the bubble tho
EDIT: Fixed the SB Stuff!
Also fixed the Tag unconsistency!
I like this song, I love EVERYTHING from Nano... *-*
okay let's continue the modding~~ sorry for my delay
no KDs to this post since you have given it to me already :>
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[General]
no KDs to this post since you have given it to me already :>
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks. you have some short breaks so that this effect is not very suitable
- I think the source is Nico Nico Douga
- As I told you, change "black.jpg" to "white.jpg", and then SB code:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
C,0,0,,0,0,0
S,0,0,,0.8
F,0,76530,77130,0,1
F,0,77130,77730,1
F,0,77730,77805,1,0
F,0,138930,139530,0,1
F,0,139530,140130,1
F,0,140130,140205,1,0
F,0,218130,218730,0,1
F,0,218730,219330,1
F,0,219330,219405,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Omoide Kakera BG.jpg",320,240
F,0,77730,78330,1,0
S,0,77730,78330,0.625,0.75
F,0,140130,140730,1,0
S,0,140130,140730,0.625,0.75
F,0,219330,219930,1,0
S,0,219330,219930,0.625,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
L,77730,1
P,0,0,600,A
F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
L,140130,1
P,0,0,600,A
F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
L,219330,1
P,0,0,600,A
F,1,0,600,0.6,0
- 00:21:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a better hexagon pattern, and also move (4) to the bottom but not in centre
- 00:23:200 (3,4) - ctrl+g separately for better flow?
- 00:28:600 - the blank here is pretty weird...add a 1/4 repeat slider here?
- 00:37:150 (7) - also suggest to add a repeat
- 01:15:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think the pattern is not start at an appropriate point because both the drum and vocal stress are stay at downbeat ( 01:15:400 - ) and there's also a drum at 01:15:325 - . That is, the whole pattern is expected to start at 01:15:400 - and also a triplet at 01:15:250 - like
- 01:25:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these three triplets here are heard odd...i'd like to move them to redline but not whiteline
- 01:29:650 (4,5) - bad flow. In general the jump from note to slider could be longer than note->note
- 01:40:450 - remove the short break here, it's unnecessary
- 01:42:100 (1,2) - 1/2 slider first then 1/1 for vocal
- 01:47:950 - still unsuitable blank...
- 01:50:350 - ^
- 01:54:550 - ^, actually the beat around here is messed :<
- 01:57:550 - ^
- 03:02:950 - add a note here
- 02:33:250 (4,6) - make the blanket better?
- 03:22:450 (1) - any reason for the single NC here?
- 00:28:600 (3) - move next NC to here
- 00:34:600 (1) - also blanket problem... and some similar cases in this diff like 00:44:200 (3) - , i think it's unnecessary for me to point of all them one by one~
- 00:38:950 (4) - highly recommend to remove it for difficulty issue
- 00:46:600 (3) - move NC from 00:45:700 (1) - to here to control the combo length no longer than 6.
- 01:20:200 (3) - ^
- 01:35:800 - why change SV here to 0.5? here's no slider :<
- 02:10:000 - and the break here is pretty weird...make no sense since the vocal is still....so please map this part
- 03:11:800 (5) - NC here
- 03:22:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - generally it is fine... just boring a bit :>
- 03:32:200 - also recommend to map this part
- 03:36:100 (3,4) - i don't like this kinda stack... move (4) to 256:192?
Topic Starter
Fixed:
SPOILER
Scorpiour wrote:
okay let's continue the modding~~ sorry for my delay
no KDs to this post since you have given it to me already :>
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[General]Fixed!
- Disable letterbox during breaks. you have some short breaks so that this effect is not very suitable Fixed!
- I think the source is Nico Nico Douga
[Storyboard][Insane]
- As I told you, change "black.jpg" to "white.jpg", and then SB code: Fixed!
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
C,0,0,,0,0,0
S,0,0,,0.8
F,0,76530,77130,0,1
F,0,77130,77730,1
F,0,77730,77805,1,0
F,0,138930,139530,0,1
F,0,139530,140130,1
F,0,140130,140205,1,0
F,0,218130,218730,0,1
F,0,218730,219330,1
F,0,219330,219405,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Omoide Kakera BG.jpg",320,240
F,0,77730,78330,1,0
S,0,77730,78330,0.625,0.75
F,0,140130,140730,1,0
S,0,140130,140730,0.625,0.75
F,0,219330,219930,1,0
S,0,219330,219930,0.625,0.75
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
L,77730,1
P,0,0,600,A
F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
L,140130,1
P,0,0,600,A
F,1,0,600,0.6,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240
L,219330,1
P,0,0,600,A
F,1,0,600,0.6,0Fixed!
- 00:21:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd like to make a better hexagon pattern, and also move (4) to the bottom but not in centre Fixed!
- 00:23:200 (3,4) - ctrl+g separately for better flow? I like the symmetry here
- 00:28:600 - the blank here is pretty weird...add a 1/4 repeat slider here? Fixed another way!
- 00:37:150 (7) - also suggest to add a repeatI do think that this very small break fits
- 01:15:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think the pattern is not start at an appropriate point because both the drum and vocal stress are stay at downbeat ( 01:15:400 - ) and there's also a drum at 01:15:325 - . That is, the whole pattern is expected to start at 01:15:400 - and also a triplet at 01:15:250 - like
Fixed!
- 01:25:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these three triplets here are heard odd...i'd like to move them to redline but not whiteline They sound pretty okay to me
- 01:29:650 (4,5) - bad flow. In general the jump from note to slider could be longer than note->note Fixed!
- 01:40:450 - remove the short break here, it's unnecessary Fixed!
- 01:42:100 (1,2) - 1/2 slider first then 1/1 for vocal Fixed!
- 01:47:950 - still unsuitable blank... Fixed!
- 01:50:350 - ^ Fixed!
- 01:54:550 - ^, actually the beat around here is messed :< Fixed!
- 01:57:550 - ^ Fixed!
- 03:02:950 - add a note here
SPOILER
Normal fixed everything but the blanket problem[Normal]
[list]
[*]00:34:600 (1) - also blanket problem... and some similar cases in this diff like 00:44:200 (3) - I dont think that those blankets are a bad choice.
[list]
[*]00:34:600 (1) - also blanket problem... and some similar cases in this diff like 00:44:200 (3) - I dont think that those blankets are a bad choice.
rebubbled~~
Topic Starter
Popped the bubble for some improvements. Waiting for a re-bubble by Scorpiour or Charles445.
fine~~Haya wrote:
Popped the bubble for some improvements. Waiting for a re-bubble by Scorpiour or Charles445.
This song is great ><
The only issues I have with this map are the combo colours.
Combo1 and Combo2 look like they are almost the sames. That, that doesn't really look nice. On top of that, they both blends in the background which make them less readable.
About Combo3 and 4, you should also consider not using flashy colours, that green-blue hurts my eyes and white is usually a bad idea when the background is already pretty bright.
You should think about changing them.
Combo1 and Combo2 look like they are almost the sames. That, that doesn't really look nice. On top of that, they both blends in the background which make them less readable.
About Combo3 and 4, you should also consider not using flashy colours, that green-blue hurts my eyes and white is usually a bad idea when the background is already pretty bright.
You should think about changing them.
Topic Starter
Thanks for your advice!
Combo Color 1: Weakened so it looks less like Combo Color 2.
Combo Color 3: Weakened to make it look less flashy.
Combo Color 4: Weakened to make it look less flashy.
Combo Color 5: Made the white some tones more grey.
Combo Color 1: Weakened so it looks less like Combo Color 2.
Combo Color 3: Weakened to make it look less flashy.
Combo Color 4: Weakened to make it look less flashy.
Combo Color 5: Made the white some tones more grey.
:3 ~
Glückwunsch
congrats :3
gratz!!!
Nano :O
Gratz~
Gratz~
hey gz ! freut mich~
freut mich~Grats~ Another nano map!
Congratz \o
Good job, grats!
omg lol
congratz~<3
congratz~<3
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