1. Angel (4.95 stars, 170 notes)
2. Easy (2.84 stars, 97 notes)
3. Hard (4.57 stars, 149 notes)
4. Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii (4.59 stars, 269 notes)
5. Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 338 notes)
6. Normal (3.99 stars, 114 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
mp3的码率必须要在128-192kbps之间 你需要换mp3 已更换mp3文件
bg的尺寸需要固定在600x800像素 你需要换3个bg 当时确实有三个不是800x600 Q^Q 已更换

[Easy]
00:53:240 (3,1) - (3)去掉折返然后(1)在原来(3)结束的地方开始 fixed
00:59:669 (3,4,1) - 明显的间距不等 fixed 让滑条3往其他方向拐了
01:11:097 (3,4,1) - 同上 而且(4)离(3)太近了 fixed ^
01:23:062 (1) - 这里都没声音了 加个spinner会被喷的很惨 我以为还有一点类似于【echo或是fade out】效果的东西的Q^Q 这个我再考虑下

[Normal]
00:12:169 (1,2) - 这样叠起来会让新人吃电视的
00:15:026 (5,1,2,3) - ^
00:28:597 (4,1,2,3) - ^
00:59:312 (3,4) - ^
01:18:419 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
01:21:633 (1,2,3) - ^ 已重新排版
然后 最后的spinner还是多余的...

[Hard]
为啥比I的圈还小... 呃我好像见过不少都是这样的呀0.0 因为觉得ins比较跳所以圈弄大一点吧……考虑考虑
00:56:455 (3) - 不要把折返箭头遮起来 已CTRL+G
然后 最后的spinner依然是多余的...

[Angel]
00:38:955 (7) - 不要把折返箭头遮起来 fixed
00:52:526 (5,6,7) - 感觉会被喷 嘛……呵呵=。=
然后 最后的spinner仍旧是多余的...
话说这个难度真的是你做的么... 为什么会有这种想法……

以上只是我觉得要改的最基本的基本 如果是以rank为目标明显还有很长一段路要走 嗯我明白=。=都是我做的 已修改完毕 十分感谢
加油吧~

1. 有兩個BG不在800x600, 改掉
2. Tags上Visual Novel hentai之類的 (目測是18禁遊戲O O)
3. 不選下combo colour? default略無聊

1. 00:06:513 (2,3) - 間距出了問題 一開始我也誤會了orz
2. 00:12:227 (1) - 咦咦這clap下在頭啊不是尾巴吧
3. 00:15:084 (4) - 被遮擋還行 但NC下以免新手沒看清楚
4. 00:23:655 (1) - (begin) clap
5. 00:26:513 (1) - ^
6. 00:29:370 (1) - ^
7. 00:31:513 (4) - 略醜 試著把第二跟第四個錨點拉開把幅度加大 看著虐心 然後順便NC - -
8. 00:42:584 (3) - Easy放這種slider大丈夫? 有點變速就是 還是改簡單的那種slider好
9. 00:51:513 (1) - Easy最好不要做這種遮擋 以免新手搞錯
10. 00:53:298 (3,1) - ^ 這裡就有點偏向Normal的譜面 甚至hard了
11. 01:07:048 (1,2) - 通常Easy比較偏向於節奏, 這裡跟vocal就不太理智 -一個reserve然後放在白線 (01:07:226 - )
12. 01:08:476 (2) - ^ (縮短1/4放白線)
13. 01:18:476 (3) - ^
14. 01:19:905 (1) - ^
    放藍線的原因我大概懂 只是不太理智 通常Easy不太放到藍線 況且白線也有音啊 ==/

1. 我操一開diff跑出一堆unsnapped note快resnap 當然以下說的也都是resnap後的時間點
2. 00:21:512 (2,3) - 略亂 建議拉開点
3. 00:28:655 (4,1,2) - 說起來我一開始也沒看到(2)就這樣疊在(1)下面啊。。。微調一下不然差評 http://puu.sh/1Ap5W
4. 00:32:762 (3,4,5) - 看起來有點像串 幅度縮小點不要太curve了
5. 00:40:797 (2,3,4) - 重新設計下排版啊誰看的到(4)地尾巴就這樣被300擋住啊你妹
6. 00:59:726 (4) - 這種穿越重音的slider不好把 重音一點都沒打擊感 (雖然我知道設計slider有點花時間==")
7. 01:11:155 (3) - ^

1. CS5搞毛啊差評
2. 00:14:727 (5) - NC下吧 妳之前都是一個重音一次NC
3. 00:20:084 (1) - reserve被遮擋是unrankable的吧
4. 00:22:227 (4) - ^
5. 00:23:298 (1,2) - Hard這麼跳大丈夫? 還是老老實實DS排下去別搞花樣的好
6. 00:28:655 (7,1) - 交換NC
7. 00:40:084 (1,1) - 都沒必要NC 顯得很醜很花
8. 01:00:084 (6) - NC請
9. 01:05:798 (7) - ^
10. 01:06:513 (9,1) - 這種DS讓人以為是1/2啊。。。

1. Hard CS用5 Insane CS用4 搞毛
2. 00:15:084 (5) - clap
3. 00:17:227 (5) - NC 按照你的NC rule
4. 00:29:013 (5) - ^
5. 00:20:798 (5) - clap
6. 00:44:369 (1) - 又被遮
7. 00:57:227 (10) - 這個大丈夫嗎有點亂耶容易誤讀...
8. 01:11:513 (5,1) - 交換NC
   咦這diff比其他好多了

Flask wrote:

~ Mod Request from My Queue

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. 有兩個BG不在800x600, 改掉 已修正 我更改了BG文件的话其他人是否需要重新下载？
2. Tags上Visual Novel hentai之類的 (目測是18禁遊戲O O) [/color]
3. 不選下combo colour? default略無聊

呃这个嘛0.0 我自己也想不太好用什么=。=难道我小学美术没学好……

[ Easy]

1. 00:06:513 (2,3) - 間距出了問題 一開始我也誤會了orz fixed
2. 00:12:227 (1) - 咦咦這clap下在頭啊不是尾巴吧 fixed
3. 00:15:084 (4) - 被遮擋還行 但NC下以免新手沒看清楚 fixed
4. 00:23:655 (1) - (begin) clap fixed
5. 00:26:513 (1) - ^ fixed
6. 00:29:370 (1) - ^ fixed
7. 00:31:513 (4) - 略醜 試著把第二跟第四個錨點拉開把幅度加大 看著虐心 然後順便NC - - fixed 改了形状
8. 00:42:584 (3) - Easy放這種slider大丈夫? 有點變速就是 還是改簡單的那種slider好 大概不吧 待定
9. 00:51:513 (1) - Easy最好不要做這種遮擋 以免新手搞錯 fixed 已重新排版
10. 00:53:298 (3,1) - ^ 這裡就有點偏向Normal的譜面 甚至hard了 fixed
11. 01:07:048 (1,2) - 通常Easy比較偏向於節奏, 這裡跟vocal就不太理智 -一個reserve然後放在白線 (01:07:226 - ) fixed 已重新排版
12. 01:08:476 (2) - ^ (縮短1/4放白線) fixed
13. 01:18:476 (3) - ^ fixed
14. 01:19:905 (1) - ^ fixed
    放藍線的原因我大概懂 只是不太理智 通常Easy不太放到藍線 況且白線也有音啊 ==/

嗯不太会做easy 以后做easy的时候先把智商清零 然后1/2白线摆满滑条=。=

[ Normal]

1. 我操一開diff跑出一堆unsnapped note快resnap 當然以下說的也都是resnap後的時間點 fixed
2. 00:21:512 (2,3) - 略亂 建議拉開点 fixed
3. 00:28:655 (4,1,2) - 說起來我一開始也沒看到(2)就這樣疊在(1)下面啊。。。微調一下不然差評 http://puu.sh/1Ap5W fixed
4. 00:32:762 (3,4,5) - 看起來有點像串 幅度縮小點不要太curve了 fixed
5. 00:40:797 (2,3,4) - 重新設計下排版啊誰看的到(4)地尾巴就這樣被300擋住啊你妹 fixed
6. 00:59:726 (4) - 這種穿越重音的slider不好把 重音一點都沒打擊感 (雖然我知道設計slider有點花時間==") fixed 已重新排版
7. 01:11:155 (3) - ^

fixed 已重新排版

[ Hard]

1. CS5搞毛啊差評 fixed 【hard一定不能比ins圈小么=。=】
2. 00:14:727 (5) - NC下吧 妳之前都是一個重音一次NC fixed
3. 00:20:084 (1) - reserve被遮擋是unrankable的吧 fixed
4. 00:22:227 (4) - ^ fixed 已重新排版
5. 00:23:298 (1,2) - Hard這麼跳大丈夫? 還是老老實實DS排下去別搞花樣的好 这个真的大丈夫 跪求不差评
6. 00:28:655 (7,1) - 交換NC fixed
7. 00:40:084 (1,1) - 都沒必要NC 顯得很醜很花 待定 这个加NC本来是想便于读图的
8. 01:00:084 (6) - NC請 fixed
9. 01:05:798 (7) - ^ fixed
10. 01:06:513 (9,1) - 這種DS讓人以為是1/2啊。。。

呃 这个是我意想不到的效果……待定

[ Angel]

1. Hard CS用5 Insane CS用4 搞毛 我本来ins也是CS5然后被训了=。=
2. 00:15:084 (5) - clap No 这里全部whistle是为了配合背景音乐 少一个clap大丈夫
3. 00:17:227 (5) - NC 按照你的NC rule fixed
4. 00:29:013 (5) - ^ fixed
5. 00:20:798 (5) - clap ^
6. 00:44:369 (1) - 又被遮 怨念思考中 暂时没动 会改的
7. 00:57:227 (10) - 這個大丈夫嗎有點亂耶容易誤讀... 本来头尾是重合的 被骂了Q^Q 所以现在分开了一些 或许再分开一点也不会掉肉=。= fixed
8. 01:11:513 (5,1) - 交換NC fixed
   咦這diff比其他好多了

因为这个大修了好几次了=。= ins做不好对不起观众啊0.0 谢谢认可

加油 多看些圖把~ 会的 正在以可见的速度进步 不信的话要不要看看我今天刚传上来的一张啊~http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69004 (>.<)嘿嘿~

mintong89 wrote:

Mod by Request ♪

[General]
你没用Distance Snap? o.O 当然用了0.0

[Easy]

00:15:084 (1) - 这建议在 00:12:941 (2) - 的尾端哦. fixed
00:17:584 (2,2) - 这两个叠在一起好不美观, 建议拉走 00:17:584 (2) - . 待定 easy距离近 拉走也不太好看
00:23:655 (1,2) - 试试这样？

SPOILER

nice, fixed
00:27:227 (2) - 太弯了. 建议别拉这么弯. fixed
00:29:370 (1,2,3) - 试试这样?

SPOILER

fixed
00:31:513 (1) - 这形状有点奇怪...建议放简单的形状就可以了...毕竟是easy嘛~ 呃 关系大概不大吧 又不算很难看懂的形状
00:56:513 (3) - 这和 00:55:798 (2) - 没排好. fixed
01:03:655 (3) - ^ fixed
01:12:227 (1) - NC No 这个note和后面的时间间隔太长了 不开HD应该不会影响读图
01:23:120 (1) - 我觉得删除了这spinner会比较好. 因为后面都没音了. 好的 再有一个人提到这个我就四个diff最后的spinner都删掉

[Normal]
Circle 和 Slider 没snap好... 换mp3之后忘记改它的offset=。=

00:28:655 (4) - 太弯了. fixed
00:40:797 (2) - ...奇怪的形状. fixed
01:00:083 (5) - 试试这样?

SPOILER

fixed
01:11:512 (4) - 没拉好. fixed
01:23:119 (1) - 和上面一样. 觉得删除了这spinner会比较好. 因为后面都没音了.

[Hard]
这...其实你的有些slider太圆了...比如 00:09:727 (3,4,5) - 这几个.

01:23:120 (1) - ^ fixed

[Angel]

这对我太难了我不mod.

最想听取意见的就是这个diff的说……好吧 可以理解你

就这些~

Strawberry wrote:

Star~☆

nicejob man~ keep going (也许晚些会mod下~

edit: 700th post o_O

__Ag wrote:

真是太烦了！！我又打错了两个单词，都说了我英文差！！呀哒！~~~><

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

__Ag wrote:

-Genenal-
有些压蓝线的note和slider总感觉违和了些，不过个人做法不同，mapper觉得这样不错也行，hard和angel难度压在slider上的早期藏匿排列比较多，个人不建议这样做，我就指出了两个一眼看着感觉不舒服的地方 压蓝线的原因是我BPM只设了84而不是168 如果在168就不是蓝线了 低难度压蓝线的我基本都处理掉了 H和I难度的 应该大丈夫 至于遮挡梗 有意而为之 在听其他人的意见 怎样做到适度


-Easy-
00:36:870 (3) - 这个换成slider也许会幸福一点? No 换的话又要压蓝线 不压吧拍子又不像
00:39:370 (5) - NC fixed
00:40:084 (1) - 取消NC ^
00:41:513 (2) - NC 没动 大丈夫
01:15:084 (3) - 丢到x279 y327? fixed

-normal-
00:17:940 (2) - 我也摆过这么下面的位置，被喷出翔了，建议往上一些 fixed
00:41:512 (3) - ^ 没动 这个工程量太大 我test的时候也没觉得怎么样 关系不大应该
00:16:512 (3) - 如果这里是跟vocal的话这个音应该延长到00:17:047 - ，00:16:869 - 或者在这里add一个note我想会好些，再调整一下吧w fixed 滑条延长了 调整了排版
00:51:869 (1) - 丢到x164 y248? fixed

-Hard-
00:16:869 - add note感觉好一些 fixed
00:19:012 (4) - 这个slider不是跟vocal也不是跟伴奏呢，有点违和感，因为是hard难度了，可以再设计一下w 已重新排版
00:22:227 (5) - ctrl+G? 我曾经是把它反着放的 然后被爆出翔了 那样遮挡折返箭头是unrankable
00:27:941 (5) - NC fixed
00:28:655 (1) - 取消NC ^
00:29:548 (2) - NC fixed
00:41:513 (2,3) - 这个排列不多见呢，个人觉得很赞，赞一个 谢谢~想了蛮久
01:00:084 (1) - 这根slider覆盖了很多音呢，感觉单调了，hard难度可以再丰富一下这里 嘛 大概不会改了吧 我难得行为艺术一下
01:03:655 (1,2,3) - 这个梗是很早期的了，不知道现在是不是unrank了，即使不是unrank可能也会被挑战，建议改改 这个应该是大丈夫的 会不会吐槽……那……走着瞧吧
01:17:584 (3,1,2) - 这个排列绝对unrank了，改 真的么……马克了 日后会考虑

-Angel-
00:09:727 (4) - NC fixed
00:10:798 (9) - NC ^
00:36:513 (7) - NC fixed
00:26:869 - add note 待定
00:48:298 (7) - 换成slider？如果换成slider后面几个note也要重新设计一下 fixed 换了个纠结的滑条

我就指出这些吧，小生新人，望指教~祝好运！

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Angel] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:083, ends on 01:22:940
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:084, ends on 01:22:941
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:083, ends on 01:22:940
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:083, ends on 01:22:940

雪梦酱果然是专业的^_^ fixed
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:

- [Angel] : 58597
- [Easy] : 59012
- [Hard] : 59012
- [Normal] : 58655

lol 我都不知道这个时间点是在哪里查的…不过…fixed

[Easy]
00:15:084 (1) - Try moving it to another place, beginners may read this hardly. fixed 换成了个滑条 重新排版了一下
00:18:655 (1) - ^ 已重新排版
00:37:584 (4) - Newcombo since 1/1 clap break here. fixed
01:03:655 (3) - Looks bad :< Move it 2 grids up and 1 grid left. fixed
01:15:084 (3) - ^ Move it 1 grid up and 1 grid right. fixed




[Normal]
Unsnapped things

00:42:562 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:42:562 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:705 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:00:062 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:00:062 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:11:134 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:11:491 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:11:491 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

这是调过offset之后又remap的部分……哦天呐 低级失误 fixed
00:46:154 (1,2,1) - A bit difficult to read for a normal diff. 嗯 待定
00:49:369 (1) - Why spinner her? It makes no sense 因为伴奏里有一段我不太知道怎么形容的旋律啊
01:21:690 (1) - It should be 1/4 clap shorter, then next sliders follow. fixed 在后面又加了一个note


[Hard]
00:19:012 (4) - End at 00:19:369 已重新排版
00:21:513 (3,4,5) - It is also hard to read... 嘛 大概不会动吧
01:15:084 (2) - Move it 1 grid up and 1 grid left. fixed


[Angel]
Unsnapped things

00:50:085 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:12:942 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).

fixed
00:15:798 (1,2,3) - Bad arrangement :< 已重新排版
00:55:798 (6) - Newcombo here. fixed
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Nice Mapset
额 总感觉排列看起来不是很舒服..

windswirl wrote:

Okay, here we go ...

As I said, I'm not all to happy with your way of arranging the single objects in your map, especially on the harder difficutlies because they don't flow so well. A map is way better to play if the courser moves with about the same speed most of the time. Sometimes it's fun to change that speed, but it is just confusing if changes for no reason... I think one point in your Angel Diff shows very well what I mean .. look between 00:50:440 and 00:53:833. Maybe you should resnap those.
Also I'm not so happy with the end of the Angel Diff (starting 01:15:619) ... it's really hard to read and the curser speed changes to rapidly again. It's simply confusing

But away from all that I have to say that I really like the map!
The BG pictures are beautifully chosen and the song is lovely <3
And away from the stuff I mentioned above (which is as well a matter of view) it's really well maped as well.
Keep going!

SPOILER

23:39 Zero__wind: Hi windswirl~ afternoon in Germany? I was just wondering if you do mapping?
23:40 windswirl: oh hi ^^
23:41 windswirl: yes I do, but none of theme are ready to be ranked yet
23:41 Zero__wind: I just start mapping and now I'm finding friends who may give some suggestions about it
23:42 windswirl: I can try it if you like
23:42 Zero__wind: Oh I'd really appreciate it
23:43 Zero__wind: maybe I'll mod your map in exchange~ if you have pending on
23:43 Zero__wind: oen
23:43 Zero__wind: one………………
23:43 Zero__wind: miss typing ……OMG
23:44 Zero__wind: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58412
23:45 Zero__wind: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58412
23:46 Zero__wind: Oh I'm continually lost connection with the server...
23:47 Zero__wind: Hope you like the song then
23:47 Zero__wind: and thanks in advance
23:56 windswirl: oh no problem xD
23:56 windswirl: I'm multyplaying right now so I'll try it later and give you my map
23:57 Zero__wind: Ok fine, take your time
00:04 windswirl:
00:16 *windswirl is listening to Ronald Knox (KENN) - LIBERTY PARTY
00:16 windswirl: my map
00:16 Zero__wind: Ok fine, I'll check in daytime
00:16 Zero__wind: for it's 0:16 am here
00:20 windswirl: oh xD
00:20 windswirl: it's 17:19 here
00:29 windswirl: well okay I played all of them now, first of all, good job!
00:29 windswirl: most mappers, when they map first are waaay worse
00:30 Zero__wind: Oh thx~
00:31 Zero__wind: it had been remaped some times so...
00:31 Zero__wind: especially the ins diff
00:32 windswirl: what I want to critisize thogh is the flow. you have a very ... special way of placing sliders, and I got all confused by it in the higher difficulties.
00:32 windswirl: Higher difficulties are SUPPOSED to be more difficult of course but when they become confusing, they are no fun to play anymore, I think
00:33 Zero__wind: hmm , I understand
00:35 windswirl: and on the insane I would suggest to make the circles appear a little faster I think
00:36 Zero__wind: yeah I understand that was an kind of old map and hmm how to say, I'm not that experienced like now
00:36 Zero__wind: AR9 you think would be better?
00:36 windswirl: hm I will try it on the editor.
00:37 windswirl: give me a sec ^^
00:38 Zero__wind: honestly, it ued to be AR9 and was critisized =.=
00:38 Zero__wind: some says AR9 is not suitable for lo BPM songs
00:39 windswirl: hm I'm not sure but to me it seems better
00:39 Zero__wind: Ok I see
00:40 Zero__wind: it will be reconsidered
00:40 windswirl: ^^
00:41 windswirl: a right, there's one more thing ... in my eyes the speed of the map varies a lot which also makes it a bit confusing ...
00:42 windswirl: but I don't really know how to fix that ^^'
00:42 Zero__wind: Oh really？ I'm not quite aware of the changing rhythm
00:42 Zero__wind: why I thought it was smooth 0.0
00:44 windswirl: well, maybe it's just my imagination ...
00:46 Zero__wind: hmm alright, don't actually mind it
00:46 Zero__wind: Oh maybe you'd better do me a favor by posting on the map's thread
00:46 Zero__wind: and you'll gain a kud while I gane SP
00:47 windswirl: I tried again, and it was fine xD
00:47 Zero__wind: hmm
00:47 windswirl: where do I find the map thead? I've never done that before? xD
00:48 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/1BZGO
00:48 Zero__wind: the beatmap's thread
00:49 Zero__wind: every map has one
00:50 windswirl: yes but (maybe I'm just supid) but where do I post a comment there?
00:50 Zero__wind: you opened this website? t/96547
00:51 Zero__wind: and click reply then
00:51 Zero__wind: and maybe lay your comment and suggestions there
00:51 Zero__wind: it'll maybe help me when MAT/BAT check my map
00:52 Zero__wind: I'd really appreciate it if you bother writing it there
00:53 Zero__wind: Oh I must go to sleep by now =.= and hope you'll grab how to do the stuff soon

Frostmourne wrote:

hi hi , M4M here

thank you for your modding very much yeahh, alright , it's time to mod this

General
Inconsistency in PreviewTime
in Normal diff , please change to 59012 like other diffs Though I don't know how to check it...I fixed

Easy
normal hitsounds for this song don't fit well with music imo , it still sounds a bit harshly I grabbed what you mean, though I just used Nomral for the plcae where the BGM is strong. So i think it's not that matter
00:12:941 (2) - should be more far from (1) fixed
00:14:013 (3) - should be more far from (2) also fixed
00:18:655 (2,3) - spacing , (3) should be closer to (2) fixed
00:39:727 (3) - remove this note and move 00:40:084 (4) - to 00:39:726 to follow vocal better and add note here 00:40:798 will be the best : )
don't forget to fix those spacings Nice suggestion! fixed
00:42:584 (2) - I don't suggest you make slider like this on this difficulty because it might be too hard for beginner to guess the direction of its thinking about how to do it in a different way
01:05:798 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - next time, you shouldn't stack too much notes like this because it's hard to see notes under the hitburst in Easy diff Ok I learnt that
01:21:691 (1) - shouldn't start this note on blue tick because it's too hard for this diff (again) , I suggest you move to 01:21:512 and end this slider at 01:22:226 the same point Ok it seems fine after fixing

Normal
00:15:083 (5,1) - really hard to read for the beginner = =||, remove this slider 00:15:262 (1) - and move 00:15:797 (6) - to another position like this
also new combo at 00:15:083 (1) - would be great fine, I changed the arrangement

SPOILER

00:23:654 (1,2,3) - don't stack too much like this please , it's REALLY hard to read with low AR like this seperate them
00:26:512 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
01:21:690 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and fixed
the way you put the rhythms is very good, it actually follows the music very great but I'm worried about spacing and too many stacking notes there
please try to fix them so, I can only give an idea thx~ I am awaree of my weakness in placement and I'm trying to get it better^_^

Hard
AR-1 OD-1 , it's too fast for this song thought since bpm is low , hard with AR7 might be a bit too fast Ok fixed, and then I could do it with HRHD xD
00:21:513 (3,4,5) - even I'm not bad player, this pattern is still hard to read though.. and the repeat point is under the covering slider, I would avoid this stuff because it might be unrankable Oh stupid my. the reverse slider used to be in the opposite dirrection and was critisized, and then CTRL+G to it just hopiing the reverse cursor won't be overlaped at first, but how could I just noticed the way forth without the way back=.= thinking about the placement
01:09:548 (6) - maybe move this one to another place ? it comes too fast and I think people might hit it early and get missed eventually hmm, I'll think about it, but not changing it currently, for I intended to make a gap here (>.<)
01:19:013 (2) - move this out from under slider to x:192 y:176 or something like that ? , it's still a bit confusing imo nice jump! fixed

Angel
AR-1 OD-1 , reason is the same as hard , I will use AR8 when bpm is 140+ only adjust to OD7 but reamained AR8, because whatever the BPM is, it's still an insane diff It used to be AR9 in this diff=.=
00:28:655 (4,1) - this spacing is too short , move (1) more far Oh I didn't even noticed that, I was just creating the structure when mapping this. Considering about the placement here
00:52:584 (5) - at least, new combo here to change the color and it will be easier to read the stacked notes fine~that's friendly
01:17:227 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'm not too sure if this is ok to exist here, I don't think that too many stacks will work here =_= hmm, no changes here I suppose. No matter what challenge facing me, for I think it's really the spotlight here

Good luck for your map ! , I hope my mod will be useful

1. Changed Background's file format(.png now) to .jpg plz.~
2. 实话讲……Easy难度有点难了。。也许他的铺面和节奏(或者说复杂度?)会好一些，感觉歌很relax但是original diff就有点不友好喔 :3 其实我觉得可以Easy做简单点，diff之间的难度差异也不会很大(其实如果是我的话可能只会做2~3个diff..)。嘛，具体的写在下面囖?~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. Circle size没有必要调到左慢。。首先是歌慢，circle还这么大的话看起来就“臃肿”……其次是有的地方会看起来有点confuse..(因为太大太遮?)
   2. 00:09:727 (2) - 首先看这里。。其实Easy难度要尽量避免这种repeat的slider，因为新人来打很容易把这slider的首尾当做两个stack来打了。。因为距离实在太近(由于Easy难度的低sv)。。其实easy的节奏不用下的这么细啊，作为一个EZ最重要的就是怎样避免麻烦和怎么才最大限度的权衡友善和节奏的完整度吧lol(其实咱也不是很懂:p) 好像有点扯远了~ 其实这种地方把repeat都换成1/2间距的circle就很合适啦。。另外再给你一个比较适合(纯属个人看法啦)Easy的rhythm pattern~ http://puu.sh/1CHps
   3. 00:11:512 - if you followed above~ don't forget to set a finish here~
   4. 00:18:655 (2) - 这个明显歪了。。做整齐点举手之劳啊，modder们看起来舒服，玩家打起来也舒服:3 http://puu.sh/1CHrr
   5. 00:20:084 (1) - 然后别忘了这个也和前面的00:18:655 (2) - stack上
   6. 00:33:298 (3,4) - a bit confused for beginner imo..maybe you can try to use this rhythm pattern. it will be easy to solve the issue.(and also consistent with 00:09:727)
   7. 00:49:013 (1,2,3) - 同样的问题。。而且很明显的overmap..改成上面的那种节奏比较好。。就不重复了~
   8. 00:55:798 (2) - 这个sliderfollowcircle在上方超出边框了(你也可以check出来)。。虽然不知道会不会被挑issue，不过还是挪下面一点比较好哦
   9. 01:07:226 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - confused for beginner because they are so constringent and crowded..
   10. 01:21:691 (1) - 这个对于新人来说太突然了。。虽然我知道你想要跟vocal。。但是感觉太不规则了。。还是改一下吧。。从01:21:869 - 开始都1/2就挺好的啊。。
   11. 01:23:120 (1) - 这spinner有点没必要了，挪去吧。
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   有些sliderslidetick音有点烦。。不过也没什么关系其实。。建议还是自己check一下如果有觉得吵的地方降一下volume~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 就算是Normal的，spacing也要齐啊~~~建议多参考一下其他慢图的normal~
   2. 00:25:083 (4) - 尾部的锚点向下3格。。这样才做成blanket
   3. 00:26:690 (2,3) - 不建议这种双repeat slider组合啊。。(一个是又偷懒嫌疑lol)主要是打起来很蛋痛(对于beginner来讲)……
   4. 00:30:083 (2) - 还有这种叠repeat slider后面的circle..好蛋痛orz
   5. 00:49:190 (1) - 应当开始在00:49:190 -
   6. 00:54:012 (4) - make the blanket better? like http://puu.sh/1CHUi
   7. 00:55:797 (5) - +nc~
   8. 00:59:369 (3,4) - 有点不友好。。
   9. 01:08:476 (1) - spacing……
   10. 01:10:797 (2,3) - 同上。。毕竟也是normal啊。。
   11. 01:23:120 (1) - 同ez……
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:18:477 (1) - don't do this.
      01:20:084 (2) - ^
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:06:870 (2) - 这里下nc? ~
   2. 00:07:227 (3) - 这个spacing..没什么道理啊。。打起来有些别扭~
   3. 00:21:513 (3,4,5) - ……不知道怎么吐槽了>_>
   4. 00:26:691 (3) - 超坑啊> 3<
   5. 00:27:941 (1) - 恩。。一般人都会以为是从现在的结束位置开始的。。最好ctrl+G一下吧?
   6. 00:33:298 (1,2) - 真的很遮。。很坑。
   7. 00:40:084 (1) - 尾巴和(2)叠好啊~
   8. 01:23:120 (1) - 同ez……
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. seems ok//

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:14:013 (1) - slider hiding
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:34:191 (6) - 删掉~
   2. 00:37:405 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这些统一往后错1/4，然后00:37:405 - 加个circle和(1)重叠
   3. 01:23:120 (1) - 和ez建议一样。。
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - i get some pattern in hitsound and i feel they are very suitable for the music~ (w=whistle f=finish o=none)
      `option.1 w o w o w
      `option.2 o w o w f
   2. 00:20:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - yea same as above~

Strawberry wrote:

Hi~中文囖~
　　
[ General]
　

1. Changed Background's file format(.png now) to .jpg plz.~ 真的么?我怎么觉得好像应该都可以……嘛 我会再问问的
2. 实话讲……Easy难度有点难了。。也许他的铺面和节奏(或者说复杂度?)会好一些，感觉歌很relax但是original diff就有点不友好喔 :3 其实我觉得可以Easy做简单点，diff之间的难度差异也不会很大(其实如果是我的话可能只会做2~3个diff..)。嘛，具体的写在下面囖?~

做4diff是为了4个人物=。=
　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. Circle size没有必要调到左慢。。首先是歌慢，circle还这么大的话看起来就“臃肿”……其次是有的地方会看起来有点confuse..(因为太大太遮?) 后面的CS也不小……所以……就这样吧 不敢动了 我本来hard是CS5的 被喷了
   2. 00:09:727 (2) - 首先看这里。。其实Easy难度要尽量避免这种repeat的slider，因为新人来打很容易把这slider的首尾当做两个stack来打了。。因为距离实在太近(由于Easy难度的低sv)。。其实easy的节奏不用下的这么细啊，作为一个EZ最重要的就是怎样避免麻烦和怎么才最大限度的权衡友善和节奏的完整度吧lol(其实咱也不是很懂:p) 好像有点扯远了~ 其实这种地方把repeat都换成1/2间距的circle就很合适啦。。另外再给你一个比较适合(纯属个人看法啦)Easy的rhythm pattern~ http://puu.sh/1CHps 已重新排版
   3. 00:11:512 - if you followed above~ don't forget to set a finish here~ 这种细节从来不会忘的 xD[/color]
   4. 00:18:655 (2) - 这个明显歪了。。做整齐点举手之劳啊，modder们看起来舒服，玩家打起来也舒服:3 http://puu.sh/1CHrr 我压根儿就没想过要对齐它们……好吧 现在对齐了
   5. 00:20:084 (1) - 然后别忘了这个也和前面的00:18:655 (2) - stack上 我最喜欢堆啊堆了……不会忘的 233
   6. 00:33:298 (3,4) - a bit confused for beginner imo..maybe you can try to use this rhythm pattern. it will be easy to solve the issue.(and also consistent with 00:09:727) 已以相似方式重排
   7. 00:49:013 (1,2,3) - 同样的问题。。而且很明显的overmap..改成上面的那种节奏比较好。。就不重复了~ fixed
   8. 00:55:798 (2) - 这个sliderfollowcircle在上方超出边框了(你也可以check出来)。。虽然不知道会不会被挑issue，不过还是挪下面一点比较好哦 fixed
   9. 01:07:226 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - confused for beginner because they are so constringent and crowded.. 已重新排版
   10. 01:21:691 (1) - 这个对于新人来说太突然了。。虽然我知道你想要跟vocal。。但是感觉太不规则了。。还是改一下吧。。从01:21:869 - 开始都1/2就挺好的啊。。 fixed 改完之后我自己每次都点早……哦买噶
   11. 01:23:120 (1) - 这spinner有点没必要了，挪去吧。
   成交！大大草莓是第三个提议删掉spinner的 于是乎我终于妥协了
   
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   有些sliderslidetick音有点烦。。不过也没什么关系其实。。建议还是自己check一下如果有觉得吵的地方降一下volume~

大丈夫 没动
　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 就算是Normal的，spacing也要齐啊~~~建议多参考一下其他慢图的normal~ 0.0 真的没有故意歪着摆的说……
   2. 00:25:083 (4) - 尾部的锚点向下3格。。这样才做成blanket fixed
   3. 00:26:690 (2,3) - 不建议这种双repeat slider组合啊。。(一个是又偷懒嫌疑lol)主要是打起来很蛋痛(对于beginner来讲)…… 嘛 这个怪我 楼上的Frostmourne大大已经提过这个事情我也已经重新换位置摆了 不过当时他的mod里还有两处还没改好我就没upload……嘛 总之现在它们都分开了
   4. 00:30:083 (2) - 还有这种叠repeat slider后面的circle..好蛋痛orz 呃…它们现在的状态比它们一开始已经好多了=。=
   5. 00:49:190 (1) - 应当开始在00:49:190 - fixed
   6. 00:54:012 (4) - make the blanket better? like http://puu.sh/1CHUi fixed
   7. 00:55:797 (5) - +nc~ 加到4上了
   8. 00:59:369 (3,4) - 有点不友好。。 大丈夫
   9. 01:08:476 (1) - spacing…… 这个嘛……好吧 改了
   10. 01:10:797 (2,3) - 同上。。毕竟也是normal啊。。 同样没动……
   11. 01:23:120 (1) - 同ez……
   fixed
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   

　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:18:477 (1) - don't do this.
      01:20:084 (2) - ^ [/color]
   各种拉一边儿去
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:06:870 (2) - 这里下nc? ~ 好吧~so 善良
   2. 00:07:227 (3) - 这个spacing..没什么道理啊。。打起来有些别扭~ 是指它突然远了点儿是吧……这个纯属意外……不知道如何发生的低级失误 fixed
   3. 00:21:513 (3,4,5) - ……不知道怎么吐槽了>_> 这个也在楼上的mod里提到了 已修改N+1次 你不会想知道它们最开始有多么坑的=。=
   4. 00:26:691 (3) - 超坑啊> 3< 位置一样时间间隔不一样的意思么0.0 我故意的……
   5. 00:27:941 (1) - 恩。。一般人都会以为是从现在的结束位置开始的。。最好ctrl+G一下吧? 不错的建议 fixed
   6. 00:33:298 (1,2) - 真的很遮。。很坑。 果断不动
   7. 00:40:084 (1) - 尾巴和(2)叠好啊~ fixed
   8. 01:23:120 (1) - 同ez……
   fixed
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. seems ok//

　
[ Angel]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:14:013 (1) - slider hiding
   在playtest中表示应该毫无压力 第一 颜色不同 第二 这个滑条的开头在开头部分停留时间较长 在这段时间里前一个滑条已经乖乖地消失了 我最初就是这么考虑的
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:34:191 (6) - 删掉~ 大大草莓好坏…删掉之后我自己总点快…fixed
   2. 00:37:405 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这些统一往后错1/4，然后00:37:405 - 加个circle和(1)重叠 确实这样和旋律才对准 fixed 并修改了其后的物件
   3. 01:23:120 (1) - 和ez建议一样。。
   fixed
   果然各种remap加大修过的diff问题还是少一些嘛……
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - i get some pattern in hitsound and i feel they are very suitable for the music~ (w=whistle f=finish o=none)
      `option.1 w o w o w
      `option.2 o w o w f chosen this one, though I think the current one is also fine
   2. 00:20:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - yea same as above~

^

　　--------------------------------------------------------
就这样囖~ 总体来说还好啦，不过提升空间很大哦~主要是铺面上 :3 嗯……这个是较早的时候做的=。=最近新做的两张图绝对已经好多了哦也！
加油!
Good Luck ~

Notice

1. Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks ! It is such helpful for me~ :3
   

1. 00:42:584 (2) - Really?
2. 01:15:084 (3) - Move this Object to x:196|y:124 [Grid lvl: 4]

1. 00:09:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this pattern to x:144|y:308 [Grid lvl: 4]
2. 00:36:869 (1) - Change this slider xD And add NewCombo.
3. 00:42:583 (4) - NewCombo (?

1. 00:36:870 (1) - The same with the others diffs

1. 00:22:226 (4) - Try make a ''S'' like This
2. 01:14:013 (1) - The same with the other diffs

angelfix wrote:

hi，因为自己很喜欢这歌所以擅自做了一个难度http://puu.sh/1CPPI，希望你不要生气 ，音效也没下，just for fun。lol （其中用了你的一两个梗）

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
I hate the love.

General:

1. huh.. Please.. Put Custom ComboColours.. I recommend:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,0,128
   Combo2 : 0,128,128
   Combo3 : 128,128,192
   Combo4 : 255,128,64

   thx for choosing combo color for me! they look nice~

Easy:

1. 00:42:584 (2) - Really? I'll try to change the pattern here for it's in E diff and there're alreaady other mods mentioned about it
2. 01:15:084 (3) - Move this Object to x:196|y:124 [Grid lvl: 4] fixed

Normal:

1. 00:09:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this pattern to x:144|y:308 [Grid lvl: 4] fixed
2. 00:36:869 (1) - Change this slider xD And add NewCombo. didn't change the slider but add NC
3. 00:42:583 (4) - NewCombo (? nope, for it's in the same sentence with the former objects

Hard:

1. 00:36:870 (1) - The same with the others diffs nope, I think it doesn't matter

Angel:

1. 00:22:226 (4) - Try make a ''S'' like This nice suggestion~ fixed
2. 01:14:013 (1) - The same with the other diffs

hesitating about this, I'll wait for more comments about it
OKAY- Nothing to say.. xD Good luck

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

A bit late but mod time /o/

Must fix.
Must fix (Unrankable)

[General]
There are some unsnapped notes, Timing->Resnap all notes. rechecked

[Easy]
Placement
00:07:226 (3,4) - Use 1.0x distance spacing here~ fixed
00:16:869 (3) - Try move it something like this, the flow will be better.

nice suggestion~ fixed
00:27:227 (2) - Move this to x:152 y:324, and unstack 00:28:655 (3) and put it around x:292 y:320, try keeping the same spacing in a Easy diff. fine~ fixed
00:49:726 (2,1,2,3) - You can arrange not in a straigh line, maybe like this, looks better after the curved sliders you use.

fixed
01:16:155 (1,2) - Unstack this, looks a bit weird. fixed

Aesthetics
00:07:584 (4) - Make the curve a bit softer, move the 2nd node 1 or 2 grid to the left fixed
00:23:655 (1) - Let's make this nicer, put the 2nd node in x:268 y:264 and the last node in x:284 y:232, the result will be this.

fixed really delicate
00:32:941 (2) - Make the curve "open" in the opposite side, move the 2nd node 4 grid down. fixed
00:35:798 (2) - Make this curve softer. fixed
01:14:013 (2) - Move the 2nd node to x:144 y:68 and the last node to x:120 y:136, making a better blanket. fixed

Rhythm
00:56:513 (3) - I highly recommend not to use short multiple repeat sliders in Easy diffs, make this a 1/2 beat slider
fixed

[Normal]
I highly recommend use a higher Slider Velocity (1.50 or even 1.60), the one you have now is the same as Easy, increase it a little and use a larger Distance Snap, and you will avoid lots of overlaps and will have a tidy gameplay, re-mapping (mostly placement) is an option here.
remapped with sv 1.6
Placement
00:30:083 (2) - Unstack this, can be confusing in a Normal.
00:46:154 (1,2,1) - Avoid overlaps like this in a Normal, are confusing and looks bad, arrange in a different way.

Rhythm
00:20:083 (1) - Use this, is less confusing and easier to play

00:56:512 (3) - ^


[Hard]
Placement
Try to put most of your sliders in a clearly way, avoiding most of the confusion that can be generated. will fix some
00:27:941 (1) - Unstack this and place it elsewhere, it's hard to read that it's there. sorry, I think that it's fine here
00:33:655 (3) - Move this away, one cannot figure that it is an slider. as the AR in this diff is low, it seems no problem to figure it out. currently not changing
01:04:013 (3) - Move this away, it gets hidden by the hitburst of previous notes. Ok then I'll consider about rearranging them
Aesthetics
Work in the shape of your sliders here, specially with 00:42:584 (3) and 00:54:013 (4), they look not confusing but weird Sorry, I intended to do so, so I won't change them

[Angel]
Placement
00:21:513 (2) - This gets a bit covered by the HP bar, move it down you're right, fixed
00:51:155 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is too confusing @_@, arrange in another way. currently not changing, but will reconsider about it when other modders mention it again
00:57:227 (5) - Can you move a bit down? it's a bit confusing to play it where it is now Ok, make it down a lot

Aesthetics
01:04:727 (1) - Move the last node 1 grid left fixed

Rhythm
01:22:048 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:405 (1) - ^
01:22:762 (1) - ^ hmm, I prefer players to react without the connecting white lines at the end of this diff, so, won't change

That's all from my part, good luck /o/

ffstar0716 wrote:

第一次mod哦 >< 以前真没mod过？居然post数量和我差不多呢 而且mod得不错噢~

[Easy]
这难度有点难，而且有点像Normal ._. 已经各种削减了=。=
00:44:370 (1,2) – 建议把slider 加长，别用repeat slider ;w; fixed
00:56:512 (3) - ^ （只是建议，不一定要采用）

SPOILER

fixed
01:05:798 (2) – Distance Snap ._. fixed

[Normal]
00:29:547 (1) – unsnapped slider 嘛 昨天刚remap的 又低级失误了哎 fixed

[Hard]
00:33:298 (1,2,3) – 建议换一个pattern吧，有点难读 ._. 暂时不打算改 再看看吧
00:56:513 (3) – 不如来个5角形 stream 怎样？

SPOILER

已采纳 不过不是顺序 是五角星
01:03:655 (1,2,3) – 这有点不舒服 已重新排版
01:08:655 (4,5,6,7) – 这样如何？

SPOILER

已改成和你这个类似的排版

[Insane]
00:52:584 (1,2,3) - … ……

说真的， Hard 和 Insane 有一些排列重叠有点严重，看了有点不舒服 ><
加油哦！

Tsusuko wrote:

Yo. My mod as requested in my modding queue~

• General

1. Good
   
   

   Easy

2. Very nice~ thx
   
   

   Normal

3. 00:09:726 ~ 00:11:155 (2,6) This part includes a lot of 1/4 sliders. Granted, it does sound interesting, although a stream of 5 sliders as short as these might be much for beginners. So, try something like this;
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:583 (3,5) Try something like this instead
   SPOILER

   
   hmm, I think they're fne now. So I just changed a little placement
   
   

   Hard

5. 00:21:512 ~ 00:22:940 (3,8) Not sure if this part will be readable to players. made it easier
   
   

   Angel

6. HP Drain Rate +1 nope HDR6 is enough for this kindda slw song. I want to be more friendly on this point.
   
   I have to say, out of all of the difficulties in the mapset, this one was the most well-constructed. Can't say much about the other difficulties, though.

=.= I reammped this diff for many times...

Sorry if I didn't have much to say about this. I can't say the difficulties need a lot of work, but they could be better. But, overall, I suppose the map was ok. Good luck on rank.

1. General normal hitsound set parts feel empty; this is because a lack of hitsounding. For example for this beat 00:10:084 could a sample hitsound which is similar to a drum be used.

1. As you used a custom difficulty name for your "Insane" I highly recommend you to change the other difficulty names to costum ones aswell for having a consistency here.

1. Please convert all of your background images into Jpg as it reduces filesize and osu! can't provide the quality you give with png.

1. Correct source should be: " Tenshi no Inai 12-gatsu " move your current source to tags as it is an aliás.

1. I highly recommend you to keep your rhythm for Easy difficultys on the beat and to use red ticks rarely. You may not think so but for beginners this rhythm is hard to read and there for you should limit yourself to a few red ticks which are easy to read.
2. 00:32:941 (2,3) - Pretty nazi but this blanket could look better. Just try to adjust your shape without gridsnap and fine tuning the placement of your Sliders to get something similar to this
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:51:512 (1) - I highly assume that you forgot a finish for this start as this is the downbeat and you need on to keep your finishes consistent.
4. 01:03:655 (3) - Does look good, has wrong spacing. Correct spacing for this place please as it is irretating for newbies.
5. Really good diff for a beginner. Rhythm should be more simple at places and some weird one ~ two grid spacing things but otherwise really good :3

1. 00:32:226 (2) - Super nazi but move it a bit down for having it symmetrical to 1.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:37:583 (2) - Hm, make this more symmetrical please, looks a bit wry at the moment.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:297 (4) - Not really a too big deal, but would you mind moving this a bit down? Current position touches the HP bar a bit which neither look really good nor is a good idea for beginners.
4. 01:06:512 - There are clear and prominent sounds in the music D: For keeping flow and following the music in a better way as current existing break.
5. 01:07:940 - Same as above of course to keep this both spots consistent.
6. 01:11:512 (4) - This Slider is not symmetric although having it symmetrical would give it a much more pleasing look. Try to move Slider's points on both sides of it symmetrical.
7. 01:17:940 - For this part - and the following similar to this one - is the same thing as above; where I talked about the parts.
8. Some patterns could be cleaned up to be best as possible, but currently I'm totally fine with this diff :3

1. 00:10:798 (5) - This Slider has one repeat more as the previous one which is confusing and also bad to read. Consider to split them just up into Sliders without repeat - or to use circles.
2. 00:13:655 (4) - Well, this stack with 2 is kinda really hard to read ;3 Also it's not perfectly stacked - but anyway; I highly suggest to remove this stacks as 2 stacks in a row play really bad and not only that, flow gets mixed up by going to the same point twice and it's not a really long time between the two stacks - I'm talking about 1 2 and 4 of course.
3. 00:20:083 (1) - Ehh, never use such slow Sliders with many repeats :< It is really odd to play and just guessing how many repeats this Slider may have. Please split it up into more Sliders and circles.
4. 00:26:691 (3,4) - Mehh, distance is a bit big for a hard difficulty :< Just reduce it a bit and unstack with 2, you dont need to destroy pattern anyway.
5. 00:27:941 (1) - Also this stack is confusing as you previous stacked object with a smaller distance on each other and now do it with 2 objects which are much farther in timeline. Just unstack it for a better play - it's really confusing currently.
6. 00:29:548 (1) - Improve the blanket by moving this away to prevent it from touching the Slider.
7. 00:30:441 (3) - Man, this is really strange and confusing. While start and end of the Slider are stacked, this is not a good sulution considering the hitbursts. Try CTRL + H and J this should work much better, anyways you can just move it away from this spot at all to fix this.
8. 00:33:298 (1,2,3) - Much too hard to read - also consider hitburst while mapping! This one would be fully hidden by hitbursts and there for hard readable and for a hard difficulty unfiting. Unstack and move these notes elsewhere please.
9. 00:41:513 (2) - Having this touching 1 so directly looks ugly and odd - you will want to transform this in a nice, neat blanket Looks really better such stuff ^^
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:45:798 (3) - Hitburst touches HP-bar which looks pretty much ugly and irretating during gameplay. One way of fixing this would be just to move it down and still having your triangle here :3
11. 00:46:870 (2) - You should notice that overlaping touchings and Slider cuddlings like this look really ugly and play bad during gameplay. Patterns like you did are used to look like below.
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:47:584 (3) - While talking, the end should be stacked with 1's beginning to have general look for this pattern neater and not having this stupid Slider end just empty existing and overlaping with 1's start, you know what I mean I guess ^^/
13. 01:02:584 (2) - Also notice please, overlaps like this are always ugly :< I mean they are just crossing the Slider for nothing and again nothing and well, you should place this note elsewhere to get rid of this overlap :3
14. 01:11:512 (1) - You're missing a finish here to keep the hitsound consistency between difficultys since as you may see you have used a finish in Normal and Easy aswell at this place.
15. 01:21:691 (1) - Improve this blanket by moving this a bit away from the Slider to prevent the touching and you have it ~
16. To be honest, this diff could work on making some patterns less confusing and easier to read, also some shapes and blankets are not as beautiful at they could be :3 Spacing could also need some tweaking but I'm sure you'll get this with more modding ^^

1. 00:24:727 (6,7,8) - To build a better pattern with more allignment here, you should move this more to the top mid, if you don't understand, see below :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:27:227 (2) - This long Slider is actually really unfiting here, I would focus more on the vocals for this as they are more prominent here.
3. 00:40:083 (3) - Hm, In my opinion a finish would fit here very well to emphasize the strong vocal, beat and give this beat a stronger accent.
4. 00:45:084 (2) - Again, the difference in repeats of these two Sliders are bad to read so I suggest to remove 2 repeats and add notes like below shown - of course you are recommended to use your own style I just want to give a suggestion here ~^^
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:48:297 (7) - This Sliderslide feels pretty empty currently and so I would recommend a normal whistle on the Sliderbody to emphasize the sliding vocal on this part, which is prominent to hear.
6. 00:59:370 (2,3) - Well, much too confusing with hitburst. Unstack 3 with 2 please - Stacking a note on a Slider's beginning is nearly unplayable and only in rear cases acceptable.
7. 01:00:084 (4) - NC please to signal the chorus starting also add a finish to the start of course, as you did it on other difficultys.
8. 01:02:227 (1) - Remove NC from here please, it's kinda senseless and unneeded as vocal stay the same and instruments keep playing normally.
9. 01:14:012 (1) - Sliding sounds empty so I'd like to suggest a whistle at Sliderbody as it sound really nice with vocal :3
10. 01:15:083 (2,3,4) - Well, these are again stacked on Slider's start :< While I'd say unstack them, they are actually readable although I recommend you to replace them elsewhere.
11. 01:15:620 (5,6,7,1) - This spacing is huge and really unreasonable, please reduce spacing for this part as it is hard to read and jumping doesn't fit the music here.
12. 01:18:120 (4,5) - These notes are hidden under the Slidertrack and there for unrankable, please replace them for the sake of their readability.
13. 01:19:548 (4,5) - Same as above^
14. Hm, spacing is strange here for parts while pattern look mostly neat and good here. Anyways, there are places where jumps or sudden spacing changes play bad so I'd suggest you to look at this for this difficulty. :3

Konei wrote:

From my Queue :3


[General]

1. General normal hitsound set parts feel empty; this is because a lack of hitsounding. For example for this beat 00:10:084 could a sample hitsound which is similar to a drum be used.

Ok I grabbed what you mean. I'll do it better next time. Actually it doesn't that matter in this song for I followed the tune instead of the beat at the timepint you mentioned.

1. As you used a custom difficulty name for your "Insane" I highly recommend you to change the other difficulty names to costum ones aswell for having a consistency here.

Oh sorry maybe not, I just want to let the I diff stand out and fit the game, besides, I didn't come up with other suitable diff names.

1. Please convert all of your background images into Jpg as it reduces filesize and osu! can't provide the quality you give with png.

fixed. It really make the size much smaller!

1. Correct source should be: " Tenshi no Inai 12-gatsu " move your current source to tags as it is an aliás.

fixed


[Easy]

1. I highly recommend you to keep your rhythm for Easy difficultys on the beat and to use red ticks rarely. You may not think so but for beginners this rhythm is hard to read and there for you should limit yourself to a few red ticks which are easy to read. Ok I got it
2. 00:32:941 (2,3) - Pretty nazi but this blanket could look better. Just try to adjust your shape without gridsnap and fine tuning the placement of your Sliders to get something similar to this
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
3. 00:51:512 (1) - I highly assume that you forgot a finish for this start as this is the downbeat and you need on to keep your finishes consistent. fixed
4. 01:03:655 (3) - Does look good, has wrong spacing. Correct spacing for this place please as it is irretating for newbies. changed the placement a little and now it's 1.08x which I suppose is OK
5. Really good diff for a beginner. Rhythm should be more simple at places and some weird one ~ two grid spacing things but otherwise really good :3

thx~

[Normal]

1. 00:32:226 (2) - Super nazi but move it a bit down for having it symmetrical to 1.
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
2. 00:37:583 (2) - Hm, make this more symmetrical please, looks a bit wry at the moment.
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
3. 00:48:297 (4) - Not really a too big deal, but would you mind moving this a bit down? Current position touches the HP bar a bit which neither look really good nor is a good idea for beginners. fixed
4. 01:06:512 - There are clear and prominent sounds in the music D: For keeping flow and following the music in a better way as current existing break. aorry for no changes because the vocal part 01:07:047 (2,1) - start at blue lines instead of white or red, so I suppoe to give players which are not so skikkful adequate time to judge and react.
5. 01:07:940 - Same as above of course to keep this both spots consistent. ^
6. 01:11:512 (4) - This Slider is not symmetric although having it symmetrical would give it a much more pleasing look. Try to move Slider's points on both sides of it symmetrical. fixed
7. 01:17:940 - For this part - and the following similar to this one - is the same thing as above; where I talked about the parts. no change, same as above
8. Some patterns could be cleaned up to be best as possible, but currently I'm totally fine with this diff :3

^_^

[Hard]

1. 00:10:798 (5) - This Slider has one repeat more as the previous one which is confusing and also bad to read. Consider to split them just up into Sliders without repeat - or to use circles. reduce a time of repeat and add a note
2. 00:13:655 (4) - Well, this stack with 2 is kinda really hard to read ;3 Also it's not perfectly stacked - but anyway; I highly suggest to remove this stacks as 2 stacks in a row play really bad and not only that, flow gets mixed up by going to the same point twice and it's not a really long time between the two stacks - I'm talking about 1 2 and 4 of course. not changing currently, will reconsider about it
3. 00:20:083 (1) - Ehh, never use such slow Sliders with many repeats :< It is really odd to play and just guessing how many repeats this Slider may have. Please split it up into more Sliders and circles. [/color]
4. 00:26:691 (3,4) - Mehh, distance is a bit big for a hard difficulty :< Just reduce it a bit and unstack with 2, you dont need to destroy pattern anyway. fixed
5. 00:27:941 (1) - Also this stack is confusing as you previous stacked object with a smaller distance on each other and now do it with 2 objects which are much farther in timeline. Just unstack it for a better play - it's really confusing currently. just changed a liitle placement, remain it there
6. 00:29:548 (1) - Improve the blanket by moving this away to prevent it from touching the Slider. fixed
7. 00:30:441 (3) - Man, this is really strange and confusing. While start and end of the Slider are stacked, this is not a good sulution considering the hitbursts. Try CTRL + H and J this should work much better, anyways you can just move it away from this spot at all to fix this. changed a series of arrangements and placement
8. 00:33:298 (1,2,3) - Much too hard to read - also consider hitburst while mapping! This one would be fully hidden by hitbursts and there for hard readable and for a hard difficulty unfiting. Unstack and move these notes elsewhere please. rearranged
9. 00:41:513 (2) - Having this touching 1 so directly looks ugly and odd - you will want to transform this in a nice, neat blanket Looks really better such stuff ^^
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
10. 00:45:798 (3) - Hitburst touches HP-bar which looks pretty much ugly and irretating during gameplay. One way of fixing this would be just to move it down and still having your triangle here :3 fixed
11. 00:46:870 (2) - You should notice that overlaping touchings and Slider cuddlings like this look really ugly and play bad during gameplay. Patterns like you did are used to look like below.
    
    SPOILER

    
    fixed
12. 00:47:584 (3) - While talking, the end should be stacked with 1's beginning to have general look for this pattern neater and not having this stupid Slider end just empty existing and overlaping with 1's start, you know what I mean I guess ^^/ fixed
13. 01:02:584 (2) - Also notice please, overlaps like this are always ugly :< I mean they are just crossing the Slider for nothing and again nothing and well, you should place this note elsewhere to get rid of this overlap :3 move the whole pattern elsewhere
14. 01:11:512 (1) - You're missing a finish here to keep the hitsound consistency between difficultys since as you may see you have used a finish in Normal and Easy aswell at this place. fixed
15. 01:21:691 (1) - Improve this blanket by moving this a bit away from the Slider to prevent the touching and you have it ~ fixed
16. To be honest, this diff could work on making some patterns less confusing and easier to read, also some shapes and blankets are not as beautiful at they could be :3 Spacing could also need some tweaking but I'm sure you'll get this with more modding ^^

I tried to do some slider-overlaping stuff but seems not successful, hmm, maybe improv it next time.


[Angel]

1. 00:24:727 (6,7,8) - To build a better pattern with more allignment here, you should move this more to the top mid, if you don't understand, see below :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
2. 00:27:227 (2) - This long Slider is actually really unfiting here, I would focus more on the vocals for this as they are more prominent here. currently not changing, for I thought the flow is smooth
3. 00:40:083 (3) - Hm, In my opinion a finish would fit here very well to emphasize the strong vocal, beat and give this beat a stronger accent. fixed
4. 00:45:084 (2) - Again, the difference in repeats of these two Sliders are bad to read so I suggest to remove 2 repeats and add notes like below shown - of course you are recommended to use your own style I just want to give a suggestion here ~^^
   
   SPOILER

   
   sorry I intended to do so
5. 00:48:297 (7) - This Sliderslide feels pretty empty currently and so I would recommend a normal whistle on the Sliderbody to emphasize the sliding vocal on this part, which is prominent to hear. fixed
6. 00:59:370 (2,3) - Well, much too confusing with hitburst. Unstack 3 with 2 please - Stacking a note on a Slider's beginning is nearly unplayable and only in rear cases acceptable. really confusing? I thought it's only for HDmod players =.= not changing
7. 01:00:084 (4) - NC please to signal the chorus starting also add a finish to the start of course, as you did it on other difficultys. fixed
8. 01:02:227 (1) - Remove NC from here please, it's kinda senseless and unneeded as vocal stay the same and instruments keep playing normally. fixed
9. 01:14:012 (1) - Sliding sounds empty so I'd like to suggest a whistle at Sliderbody as it sound really nice with vocal :3 fixed
10. 01:15:083 (2,3,4) - Well, these are again stacked on Slider's start :< While I'd say unstack them, they are actually readable although I recommend you to replace them elsewhere. as you wish
11. 01:15:620 (5,6,7,1) - This spacing is huge and really unreasonable, please reduce spacing for this part as it is hard to read and jumping doesn't fit the music here. make them closer but remain jumpin style. I really love the jumps here.
12. 01:18:120 (4,5) - These notes are hidden under the Slidertrack and there for unrankable, please replace them for the sake of their readability. Ok I understood. I will ask MATs clearly about this pattern. Not changing now for I love this style
13. 01:19:548 (4,5) - Same as above^ ^
14. Hm, spacing is strange here for parts while pattern look mostly neat and good here. Anyways, there are places where jumps or sudden spacing changes play bad so I'd suggest you to look at this for this difficulty. :3

a low BPM with not fast slider velocity, so I intended to make this diff jumping. So... I fixed some but preserved most of them as how they feels now. I admit it could be more delicate though, I'm already fond of this diff myself


Well, that's it for now :3

Good luck on the way ^^

1. 00:32:940 (3,4,5) - Hm, good pattern, but make it neater at all for having a great look :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:18:477 (1) - Spacing change is too sudden and too huge there for, please reduce it a bit.

1. 00:24:726 (6,7,8) - Meeh, I know it's nazi and such, but please move it one grid to the right as it is centered on the y-line
2. 00:27:227 (2) - Not only that I still dislike this Slider as it doesn't follow the song as neatly as it could, 3 which is touching the Slider should either be spaced out or, as spacing is suprisingly low, have a huger spacing.
3. 00:28:655 (1) - Nazi again, but please stack it on 2's end proper :3

Konei wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:32:940 (3,4,5) - Hm, good pattern, but make it neater at all for having a great look :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   O~k it looks better now,but remained the order. I think they're not that hard
2. 01:18:477 (1) - Spacing change is too sudden and too huge there for, please reduce it a bit.

fixed


[Angel]

1. 00:24:726 (6,7,8) - Meeh, I know it's nazi and such, but please move it one grid to the right as it is centered on the y-line fixed
2. 00:27:227 (2) - Not only that I still dislike this Slider as it doesn't follow the song as neatly as it could, 3 which is touching the Slider should either be spaced out or, as spacing is suprisingly low, have a huger spacing. made them seperate
3. 00:28:655 (1) - Nazi again, but please stack it on 2's end proper :3

stacked carefully


Really nicely done improvements :3
Have my star ~

No kd for this post ofc

Wiinter wrote:

Hello!

[General]
recommended bg resolution is 1024x768, so if you could have some version of the images on that size it'd be nice. it's okay if you don't though Oh I just thought this would be the standard size =.= if it's OK for now the I'll kep it, for the original picture is just like this.
isn't this the TV Size ver.? if so, the title should be Haruna Ikeda - I hope so... (TV Size) Oh I have to consider about this, for I really didn't ever found a so called full version so...I'll keep this for now
add 'opening' to tags fixed
I'm pretty sure you can find the non romanized version of the artist's name. I'm just not gonna post it here since I wouldn't be sure if it's wrong or right :~ Ok I'll ask others about this for I'm not sure about this either.
aand the combo colours don't match the bg of any diffs. If you want some help finding new ones feel free to ask me for help :> I set 4 different BG and if you want to make them fit, you'll pick 4 different sets of colors? Oh I don't know, maybe the current one is fine. At least I like them.

[Easy]
-1 AR
I think you can increase a little the distance snap since the bpm is really low.. hmm I'll consider about this maybe next time, I suppose the current dosen't look ugly for being too close. And it's for the closing spacing I set AR2. So, not changing
00:15:798 (2) - add new combo here and remove the one at 00:14:726 (1) - fixied
00:32:941 (2) - I'd change this slider's shape to this http://puu.sh/1Hhva. looks better to me fixed
00:37:584 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:39:727 (1) - add new combo fixed
00:45:798 (3) - add new combo here and remove it at 00:47:227 (1) - fixed
00:49:012 (1) - unnecessary new combo I add NC here for the two sliders are following the tune when there is no vocal, so, not changing
00:51:512 (1) - ^ I add NC here just to avoid a long combo in Easy diff and btw there's a strong beat on the slider1 now, so, not changing

[Normal]
00:32:226 (2) - make it symmetrical to the previous note fixed
00:42:583 (4) - this slider's shape looks quite awful ): at least fix the blanket changed pattern
00:49:190 (1) - this spinner really doesn't fit imo. I'd remove it and do something else here (call me if you want suggestions~) hmm I thought it was for the BGM in behind, currently not changing, thx.
01:07:047 (2) - add new combo fixed

[Hard]
SV so slowww
00:06:870 (1) - unnecessary new combo I thought this was more friendly
00:17:941 (2) - use distance snap D: an anti-jump doesn't fit here changed it to two notes
00:55:798 (1) - please use some other spacing. D: this one makes the note really hard to see eh, I thought it was just hard for HDmod players? hmm, will consider it
Also, the diff gap between this and normal is way too small. Make the SV here a bit faster and increase the spacing. The jumps were also quite random here, try to make a pattern to make them flow better~ yeah I noticed that, and how to say, maybe I will do a big change of it

[Insane]
00:34:013 (5) - gahh this spacing is terrible :< if you wanna keep it in the center of the sliders, make them more distant, like this:

SPOILER

make them a bit further but no more, I suppose.
00:37:940 (4,6) - ctrl+g them, it plays nicer really good idea!!!
00:49:369 (2,4) - ^ also fixed
00:57:227 (5) - this looks really ugly :< Oh I feel sorry that you don't like it
01:09:727 (6) - unsnapped slider (end). fixed
I'd also make distance snapping higher here. the notes are too close and then suddenly jumps D: it's okay if you wanna keep it though. yeah I prefer the fast could have have comparison with the slow. So I'm really fond of the pattern now.

That's all from me~ despite the spacing issues the rhythm sounds great. Good luck with this

R e d wrote:

From my mod queue

Remember that Modding, is almost about suggestions
This is my contribute to help you and your map!!
i like the song by the way glad you like that xD

[Angel]

00:09:727 (1) - Fist part of this slider, 1 Grid up. to look in sequence with 00:10:084 (2,3,4,5) fixed
00:28:476 (7) - Remove new combo, because its part of 00:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6). fixed
00:29:012 (1) - New combo because is after the big with tick fixed
00:36:513 (1) - Remove new combo, makes sense to me fixed
00:40:084 (1) - New combo, cause of white big tick, and you stop follow melody(voice) fixed
00:40:084 (1) - its cool if get same place of 00:37:227 (1) or 00:41:870 (6) - the same place of 00:40:084 (1) hmm, I thought they have actually no relations, so maybe it doesn't matter
00:44:370 (1) - i think this is unrakable. A over lap, with no reference or logic where the slider starts.. what about you do something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/547712 Ok finnaly I changed this one
00:45:083 (1) - ^same and this
00:45:083 (1) - Cut 2 reverse in this slider. something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/547739 (and add 2 circles like print screen show) the URL won't work and I reall hope you post it again!
---
if you did^ then:
00:45:083 (2) - remove new combo
00:45:797 (1) - New combo
00:45:797 (1) - finish hitsound
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00:50:440 (5) - new combo because you start follow Voice fixed
00:51:155 (3) - remove new combo fixed
01:15:620 (1) - A New combo here.because you stop follow voice, But im not sure about this. but check it not changing
01:15:441 (4,1) and 01:15:798 (2,3). In my opinion this is a Non-sense jump... Don't feel like jump.. hmm I intended to set jumps here, I'll reconsider about this
01:17:941 (3,4,5) - Lord of Overlaps, this is really hard to read... you must change this in my opinion.. Oh Sorry I really love this part, I'll ask MATs about this, if this is rankable and I'll absolutely keep the pattern
01:19:369 (3,4,5) - same^
01:18:120 (4,5) - this spacing is LOW, and suddely this spacing: 01:18:298 (5,1) - is HIGH. just in my opinion.. i dont like this. listening the music, dont sound like JUMP
01:19:726 (5,1) - same^ same as above

[Easy]

00:34:369 (1) - New combo fixed
00:39:727 (1) - new combo imo fixed
00:53:298 (3) - this beat overlap 00:54:013 (1). not good for easy diff, biggers cant read hmm, maybe a little bit unfriendly, but I thought it's OK. They'll learn about this.
00:55:798 (1) - new combo, because you stop follow voice fixed
00:58:655 - add circle. because of white tick.. and first beat nope, I'm not following the drumbeat here and I want to make it the same pattern with the below
01:12:227 (4) - 01:10:441 (1) - A little overlap.. you can avoid this this is only for playes with HDmod, beginners won't get confused

[Normal]

00:09:726 (2) - circle here.. instead of slider.. because 00:10:083 (3) - start follow melody and you have white tick. more sense to me actually the melody starts at the slider2 and no change here
00:28:654 (1) - new combo. because of white tick, and.. feel the song fixed
00:29:547 (1) - remove new combo.. ^
00:36:869 (4) - remove new combo, in my opinion.. fixed
00:37:583 (1) - new combo ^
00:39:369 (2,3) -make more symetrical to 00:37:583 (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548966 fixed
00:41:512 (1) - maybe a new combo fits here? nope
01:00:083 (1) - in my opinion a new combo here.. but in not sure anyway nope, neither the below
01:05:083 (1) - new combo? fixed
01:05:797 (3) - remove new combo? ^
01:07:047 (1) - new combo? fixed
01:11:512 (1) - new comb in my opinion.. but im not sure anyway

[Hard]

00:15:084 (2) - overlaps this slider.. 00:15:797 (4). with this overlap.. looks like is a circle and not a slider. hmm, actually the slider's head and tail are neither overlaped but I will reconsider about this
00:21:513 (5,6) - ^ this doesn't matter
00:27:941 (1) - really imprevisible.. players tendence to click in 00:27:762 and no in 00:27:940. Just dont stack 00:27:941 (1) .. hmm, I intended to make a gap here, not changding currently, sorry
00:31:513 (1) - new combo, because of white big tick fixed
00:32:405 (2) - remove new combo ^
00:39:727 (2) - this circle overlaps the slider 00:40:084 (1). also.. i think you should start a slider 00:39:727 (2) instead of 00:40:083, because to follow voice. I reversed the order of them and now it feels nice
01:00:084 (1) - why this long slider? :s just drawing an S and an O
01:02:941 (1) - new combo nope, the NC below is to make it more readable
01:04:012 (4) - remove new combo so, not changing
H diff I'm gonna redo it in a certain extent, so, this is it for now.

------------

Thanks all Good luck!!!!!!

Wiinter wrote:

just to point out some things:
no, it's not necessary to change the bg sizes, it's just that it'd look better.
yes, I would help you to find 4 different sets of combo colours (but only if you wanted them, ofc)
and last but not least, I know the quality kinda sucks, but here is a full ver. of that song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tA4aXQ2h-uk
OH, and I just realized that if you are going to point that it's not the full ver. you should add (Short Ver.) to the title, not TV size ><

lkx_shore wrote:

hi 我来骗kd来了

[Angel]
Od-1 fixed
00:06:333 (2) - 用soft,移动到 x436 y84 没动 觉得这样挺好
00:10:620 (5,1) - 大概没人喜欢这样,可以看着lks的花舞改:| 眼看着你就把我的善良图变成鬼畜图了啊啊啊啊啊
00:12:405 (3) - 放这里已经是破坏flow了,和4对调一下00:12:762 (5) - 扔到（6）滑条的开端 不改 和后面一组保持一致
00:15:084 (5) - clap 没加 伴奏里那几个音我就想用whistle 后面的也一样
00:41:155 (4) - ctrl+g fixed
00:59:370 (2) - (改成) 括弧指的是滑条形状 fixed
00:59:726 (3) - 按照上面改了以后，把这个叠到01:00:084 (1) - 的开头 fixed
01:04:013 (4,5) - not funny,同时也破坏了跳到6的flow 再思考思考 暂时没动
01:14:013 (1) - 不知道这样是不是unrank，但把他移动到x216 y296比较好 暂时没动 反正playtest感觉大丈夫
01:15:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - not funny 嘛 还好啦
01:16:513 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 首先01:16:513 (2) - 接到01:16:870 (3) - 再接到01:17:048 (1) - 已经很蛋疼。
01:17:048 (1) - 跳到01:17:227 (2) - 间距又突然变得非常小，你觉得这会让player怎么想
01:18:298 (5,1) - 5跳到1又是很突然的，不好读图. 上面这个pattern我大体上是不会改的 顶多做一些细节微调 除非MAT/BAT告诉我这是unrankable

比较好妥协的方法就是把01:17:048 (1) - 移动到x504 y16.下面几个梗也是这样。但因为已经飞到边缘，最好是还是拉回屏幕中间一点比较好

01:22:048 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ... 我用鼠标都基本不会miss的 有什么好无语的

[Hard]
AR+1 再思考一下 调来调去的我自己都很纠结
00:16:690 (6) - 叠到前面的5下面 没动 现在这样还好
00:17:583 (2) - Hard里不能放到滑条末挡住滑条的末尾，后面同理 加NC的话也不行么？
00:21:513 (2,3) - hard里不要这么挡 这个我想想怎么改
00:56:512 (3) - 正常摆法是x x xxxxx对吧，那么这第三个x是要叠在第二个x的物件下面的 嗯 再斟酌一下 这个地方有的时候我自己开HD也会点乱了
01:09:726 (4) - 善良点 我觉得还好啊 hard了不会还不知道点了滑条头以后可以不往下移吧

[Normal]
HP-1 fixed

这很像正常hard的节奏和排版

[Easy]
Hp-1 fixed

这很像正常normal的节奏
00:26:513 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 不要这么挡+1 fixed

[Other]
滑条叠来叠去的梗你不改掉么

Chyo-Kun wrote:

So long for get this mod,sorry

[Easy]

00:20:084 (1) - Even if it's a easy,maybe you should receck the spacing on this slider,it's so close to the last beat but starts after much time. (Just a suggestion) this placement obeys DS, it was good I thought
00:23:655 (1) - Move this slider 1 grid down for don't overlap a little with 00:24:370 (2) - fixed
00:55:798 (1) - Move to x:164 y:40 for make it look better? fixed
00:57:226 (3) - 2 grid down for the same reason as before ^
01:03:655 (3) - Move to x:312 y:120 fixed
01:06:512 (4) - Add whistle on this whole slider Sorry I don't like the sound like that
01:07:941 (3) - ^ also no change
01:12:227 (4) - Move to x:156 y:224 for place on the same spot as 01:10:441 (1) - this fixed
01:17:941 (3) - Add whistle on this whole slider ^
01:19:369 (2) - ^ ^

A easy without a spinner is very unusual,better add one at 01:23:298 - to 01:24:369 - It used to have one, but many modders thought it NG so I removed it...

[Normal]

00:08:297 (5) - Add a whistle on this slider end fixed
00:10:083 (3) - Add whistle to the whole slider only add at the end instead
00:10:797 (5) - ^ ^
00:36:869 (4) - Maybe replace this slider with a straight one sorry I thought the current one is OK
00:56:512 (3) - Add whistle on the whole slider fixed
00:57:226 (4) - Finish fixed

[Hard]

00:15:797 (4) - NC not neccessary

[Insane]

Nothing to say on this diff



Good luck for rank >w<

eLtigreXXx wrote:

m4m from my queue

Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours:
- [Angel] :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 236,190,140
Combo3 : 220,86,86
- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 170,208,223
Combo2 : 1,139,133
Combo3 : 143,156,171
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 198,224,184
Combo2 : 217,227,236
Combo3 : 253,238,170
- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,255,142
Combo3 : 138,74,86
I intended to pick different colors to fit different BGs.
suggestions
[easy]
00:05:798 (1) - finish ? added a lower-volume finish
00:06:513 (2) - Move to {x:292 y:128}. fixed
00:07:226 (3) - Move to {x:424 y:124}. ^
00:16:869 (2) - Move node #2 to {x:192 y:232}. fixed
01:09:726 - finish ? fixed
01:21:155 - ^ didn't add finish, for this not the end of this sentence.

angel

00:05:798 - finish fixed
00:10:977 (2) finish ? fixed

nice song
nice mapscet *.*

Wolf wrote:

Hi ♫
From my Modding Queue

General
Seems really good to me, it's ready imo. Tkx~

Easy
I can't add much stuff here, it's already pretty much done.
00:57:226 (3) - Add break after this? I know you've made the same on your other diffs for a consistency, but well, it suits very well in an easy diff imo.
hmm, not neccessary, didn't change

Normal
Same here, seems pretty solid.
00:09:012 (1) - Uhh, move to the center of the grid so you can make 00:08:297 (5,1,2) - symmetric ? x:296 y:252
I tried but can't get them symmetric for the flow is just like that =.= Ok I'll reconsider about it if someone else mention it again

Hard
00:39:370 (1,2,1,1) - Looks pretty hard for me to read those, probably because of the overlap, but well, they are playable, I just don't like they way they were done. I think they're Ok
00:47:584 (3) - Not correctly stacked with 00:46:155 (1) - Fix it with manual stacking. fixed
00:52:941 (3) - Suggesting moving this and 00:55:798 (1) - to x:152 y:272 for a better stacking placement under 00:54:012 (4) - fixed
01:09:013 (2) - Not perfectly stacked with 01:07:941 (3) - fixed

Angel
00:15:084 (5) - Replacing a whistle for a clap sounds much better imo. Ok you're the second one to point out this pattern. I'll do the change if the third appears, though I love the current ones...
00:20:798 (5) - ^
00:26:155 (5) - The overlap with 00:26:869 (1) - could've been improved a bit more imo. well actually I don'tmeant to stack them, I just want slider1 to cross 6, Oh well, this point may be changed in the future.
00:39:369 (2) - Hmm, not sure what I'd do with this one, I usually don't place objects off in the grid, what do you think? really important point! I didn't even notice. fixed by making the slider curved
00:41:870 (6) - Needs a better stack with 00:40:084 (1) - fixed
01:04:727 (1,2) - Don't quite like the overlap of this two sliders. Move somewhere else? If you're fine with them it's ok. hmm nice opinion, changed the arrangement
01:17:048 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Even this being the hardest diff of your mapset, I really don't agree on hiding those notes like that, if you can consider that like a "challenge" of your map, It's alright then. yeah, I'll preserve this as the best part for my map and for myself. Let's see how far they can go.

Nice work here, I'll drop my star:
Good luck.

1. If you don't use breaks, maybe disable the letterbox?

• -- Looks good to me.

• - 00:42:583 (1) You could make this slider much better, maybe like this
  - 00:48:297 (4) - If you can hear the voice, this note needs a whistle
  - 01:20:976 (3) - I suggest to move this slider in this part because is making a overlap with (2)

• - 00:30:083 (2) - Sorry but you can't make that, this slider is hidden under the slider (3), you must to move in another place please
  - 00:40:440 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it perhaps?
  - 00:47:583 (3) - Make this slider with the new system from sliders
  - 00:55:797 (1) - Whoops, another note, you should to move it to avoid the confusion when you play

• - 00:15:083 (5) - Perhaps replace this whistle for a clap for keep the drum? Sounds good to me
  - 00:20:797 (5) - Same ^

MoodyRPG wrote:

Boo ~

General

1. If you don't use breaks, maybe disable the letterbox?

fixed

Easy

• -- Looks good to me.

thx

Normal

• - 00:42:583 (1) You could make this slider much better, maybe like this fixed, it really looks better now
  - 00:48:297 (4) - If you can hear the voice, this note needs a whistle fixed
  - 01:20:976 (3) - I suggest to move this slider in this part because is making a overlap with (2)

fixed, nice idea

Hard

• - 00:30:083 (2) - Sorry but you can't make that, this slider is hidden under the slider (3), you must to move in another place please hmm, I'll think about it, not changing it currently for I think they are fine in playtest (the body of the slider2 are clearly visiable)
  - 00:40:440 (1) - Why the new combo here? Remove it perhaps? fixed
  - 00:47:583 (3) - Make this slider with the new system from sliders Oh...it used to be the way you want. But some say that it didn't overlap with the slider1 well so I made it like this... If it's OK then I won't change that.
  - 00:55:797 (1) - Whoops, another note, you should to move it to avoid the confusion when you play

fixed

Angel

• - 00:15:083 (5) - Perhaps replace this whistle for a clap for keep the drum? Sounds good to me Oh finally, this point has been point out for the third time=.= fixed as most of you want
  - 00:20:797 (5) - Same ^

fixed

Good map but I don't like these sliders in Easy and Normal, you could do better something but is only a suggestion for your future map, good luck

228,356,46513,1,0,0:0:0
371,257,46869,1,0,0:0:0
199,251,47047,1,0,0:0:0
335,357,47226,1,0,0:0:0
288,192,47405,1,0,0:0:0
228,356,47583,1,0,0:0:0

Genshin wrote:

sorry for being so late with the mod

[Normal]

OD3 fixed

00:13:297 (3,4,5) - 1 grid down changed the placement
00:49:190 (1) - move the begin of this slider to 00:49:369 - no , the melody of the BGM already started at the current time

[Hard]

OD5 fixed

00:56:511 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep consistency here fine now

[Angel]

00:42:584 (7) - please NO! =.= it connects the former and the latter sliders
00:46:513 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - fixed pattern for best shape and space:

228,356,46513,1,0,0:0:0
371,257,46869,1,0,0:0:0
199,251,47047,1,0,0:0:0
335,357,47226,1,0,0:0:0
288,192,47405,1,0,0:0:0
228,356,47583,1,0,0:0:0

changed the placement a bit, didn't make it a star-like jump because I don't want to do the same
01:16:870 (3,1,3,4,5,1,2,3) - not sure this pattern is rankable I'm not so sure either, but let's see


Ganbatte!

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q~

Angel

00:05:798(1,3) - maybe make this plancet more beautiful? http://puu.sh/1LANI fixed, looks nice now
00:11:155(3,3) - overlap looks not good fixed
00:15:797 - remove nc and add on slider 3 fixed
00:15:083(5) - add clap already fixed
00:18:476 - remove NC fixed
00:20:797 - ^ ^
00:39:012 - remove NC fixed
00:42:583 - add nc bcz you change speed fixed
01:00:976 - remove this note~ Without sounds better for me sorry for not changing, for a strong beat lands here
01:11:333 - here add note no, a gap feels nice
01:13:297(4,1) - omg >.< plz fix this terrible overlab bcz slider 1 not visible 0.0 actually not so bad in play test, the former slider disappears when the latter slider slides to the right (the beginning of the latter slider is slow)
01:16:155 - remove NC fixed
01:17:226(2,3) - stack better fixed
01:18:655(2,3) - ^ fixed
01:17:940 - add nc fixed
01:19:369 - ^ fixed

Hard

00:21:869(3,4) - hm better a little change this pattern http://puu.sh/1LB0d It will be more playable Really nice suggestion!
00:39:369(1,2,1,1,2,3) - plz change this pattern bcz it overlap and very confused place for hard hmm, not changing it currently but I'll consider about this
00:52:226(2,3) - stack it better fixed
00:52:940(3,4)- overlap~ plz fix this~ Looks really ugly >.< =.= Oh I'm sorry for that
00:56:512 - unstack this notes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562532 Try this~ they already gone elsewhere

Normal

Distance spacing should be 0.8-1.0 on normal diffs~ Plz fix all spasing I asked a BAT about this and he said that it doesn't matter as long as it's reasonable and acceptable

00:09:726 - This pattern very hard for Normal~ http://puu.sh/1LBhW sorry I think they're nice now. The BPM is low so that this 1/4-sliders won't seem too hard
00:13:297 - remove this note and make slider 2 double tried but failed to make the flow good while obeying tee distance snap. So... not changing
00:21:512 - http://puu.sh/1LBjX playtested, I'm feeling NG, sorry.

E.t.c you should make this diff easier bcz Notes on blue tick it very hard for normal diffs~ I set long gaps before those hard-to-catch sliders, so I think they're not that unfriendly as you thought

Easy

00:26:512(1,2) - fix overlap http://puu.sh/1LBnN fixed
00:44:369(1,2) - fix overlap fixed

P.S Map looks a little weird~ You need more work and more mods~ Good luck

Gero wrote:

Hi Hi Here My Mod From My Queue (n.n)


[General]
(*)Would you recommend looking for a new MP3 i Listen Too Low fixed and polished
(*) You should correct the images, are the correct size 1024X764 fixed

[Easy]

HP Drain +1 not neccessary

(*) 00:08:298 (5) - Not sure but I think this might be difficult to understand for new players hmm I think they're fine due to the low BPM
(*) 01:03:655 (3) - ^ ^
(*) 00:23:655 (1,2) - check the distance snap please n.n I don't want to make them overlap, actually I think it doesn't that matter, just such a bit further.
(*) 00:31:513 (1) - might suggest do more aesthetic and beautiful this slider

SPOILER

fixed
(*) 00:39:370 (6) - move this note to X: 284 Y: 220 to form a perfect blanket fixed

[Normal]

(*) 00:09:726 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is too difficult for a normal ;______; =.= they'll learn about this. I suppose it'll not be that hard for this is a really slow song
(*) 00:36:869 (4,1) - This sudden change of pace so may fail to make new players,
I recommend this:

SPOILER

really nice point! fixed and changed a series of placement

[Hard]

(*) 00:40:798 (1) - could you do this to maintain a clean and playable pattern

SPOILER

Really nice of you for providing the patterns but sorry I just did some of them. I love the overlap as they are now.

Good luck with the map :3!
n.n

DX5536 wrote:

I enjoy the song everytime i hear it. But to bad it is not the full version. If it a OP version then please change the title. (Your choice to change it or not).
Good map !!!

Natsu wrote:

Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours:

SPOILER

- [Angel] :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 236,190,140
Combo3 : 220,86,86

- [Easy] :
Combo1 : 170,208,223
Combo2 : 1,139,133
Combo3 : 143,156,171

- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 198,224,184
Combo2 : 217,227,236
Combo3 : 253,238,170

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,255,142
Combo3 : 138,74,86

Zero__wind wrote:

DX5536 wrote:

I enjoy the song everytime i hear it. But to bad it is not the full version. If it a OP version then please change the title. (Your choice to change it or not).
Good map !!!

Glad th/at you like this~
I dodn't have a good full ver. mp3, so...
The title I'll decide later.
Thx for reminding me
btw, on page 4 of this thread, Wiinter has given a link of full ver. mp3 link, maybe you'll need it~

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue M4M request

SPOILER

Easy
Clear

Normal
00:09:726 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too hard for Normal diff, fix this plz? I see,Will make it easier if pointed out by others once more
00:48:298 (4) - make 1/1 slider plz fixed

Hard
00:47:583 (3) - add soft finish on end and delete whistle fixed

Angel
00:48:297 (7) - add soft finish on start and delete all the whistle same
01:15:798 (6,7) - hard to hit, reduce DS little? nope, I think it's fine acutally thee distance between 6 and 7 is shorter than the distance between 5 and 6

Good clam song lol good luck for rank!

meetmeetdee wrote:

hi - m4m requested in game.
有点来迟了的Mod 没事的 考试时间嘛 大家都忙
都是一些个人建议
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[General]
- 在标题加上（Short Ver.）？ 嗯 看来是要加的
- 没有video的吗？ 个人觉得video效果不太好 而且尺寸小 而且有些镜头需要被河蟹 所以就没加
- 00:05:441 - 00:11:869 + 00:32:584 - 01:23:298 - missing claps? 有点奇怪 查了 没什么问题
[Easy]
- 有些过急和密集的感觉+滑条颇短 嗯 是有点 不过因为这歌BPM很低 所以其实还好
00:07:941 - 用这个吗？ 嗯还不错 会简单一些 fixed
00:14:726（4） - 用这个吗？ fixed
00:19:013（3） - 加reverse吗？ 不加了 节奏有点密
00:21:513（2,3） - 用这个吗？ 其实还可以 不过没加 一是因为加了也和歌词不很温和 二是因为我的note3是stack在滑条1的尾巴上的 换成滑条的话往哪边都不好看
00:28:655（3） - 用滑条？]this 不改 这里要和它们前一个combo的结构保持一致性
00:32:941（2,3） - 这样放好像较好]this sorry 我喜欢现在这个样子
00:42:584（2,3,4） - 用这个吗？ 它其实原来是和你想的一样的 是一个开头用红锚点变速的滑条 不过被人说那种东西放在Easy不好 但是因为持续时间很长 所以弄成一般形状的滑条会破坏flow 所以就不打算改了
00:50:441（1,2） - 用滑条？如果用滑条的话，这样放好像较好this 其实都还好啦 我是想用3个note来配合歌词中的3个音的
- 个人认为这些reverse太短，看你换不换一下吧 嗯 明白你的意思 在E最好是不要用到1/4的没错 看看吧 有可能会改

[Normal]
- 在蓝线上放note有点奇怪 为了跟歌词才那样放的 大概还好 毕竟在那之前有足够长的准备时间
00:12:940（2,3） - 用这个或这个？ 鉴于这个点不是第一次被提出来了 就改了吧 采用了第一种 第二种的flow不好
00:17:940（2） - 用这个吗？ fixed
00:21:155 - 加note fixed
00:22:226（5） - 这样？ 没改 不太必要
00:26:155 - 00:27:047 - 这样？ fixed
00:28:297 - 加note 不加 位置很难摆
00:31:155 - 加note 加了note会被后面的滑条2的尾巴碰到 不美观
00:55:797（2） - 用直滑条 不，为了包后面的3
01:06:512 - 加note
01:06:869 - 加note
01:07:940 - 加note
01:08:297 - 加note
01:17:940 - 加note
01:18:297 - 加note
01:19:369 - 加note
01:19:726 - 加note 这些空当就是为了不让后面的蓝线开始的滑条太难才留的 所以一律不加东西
01:21:690（1） - 缩短这个由01:21:869开始 不改了 要跟vocal就跟到底
- 有点急，例如00:09:726（2,3,4,5,6），对于Normal可能有点难，但个人认为都可以接受 嗯 理解，毕竟歌比较慢 其实还好

[Hard]
AR + 1 AR已经7了 不会加了 这么慢的歌 它曾经还是AR6呢
- 不同节奏的重叠，略坑 不是很理解你的意思 应该还好吧……
00:22:227（4,5） - 这样？ 不顺
00:26:513（2,3,4,5,6,1） - 有点乱，把00:27:941（1）放到别处？ 不太打算改这个梗
00:30:797（3） - 用弯滑条 用弯滑条又包不住前一个滑条 我还是想用直的配合后面的滑条 好看些 我觉得
00:39:370（1,2,3,1） - 没叠好 fixed
00:47:583（3） - 未拉好，或许这样放？this 不动 想和1重叠
00:47:583（3,4） - 没叠好 fixed 感觉最近的osu编辑器里面note和滑条头尾重叠判定有bug
00:48:655 - 加note 有点怪
00:51:870（1） - 用note？ 关系不大吧 没改
00:52:227（2） - 未拉好 应该可以了
00:56:511（1,2,3,4,5） - 增加彼此的距离? 和00:55:797（1,2）一样有点坑 其实这对于这图整体的物件间距来讲已经不算很近了……
01:06:513（3,1） - 略坑，逆转01:06:513（3）的方向？ CTRL+G是吧？ 改了
01:11:155（4,1） - 距离略坑 换了位置
01:21:691（1） - 缩短这个由01:21:869开始 不改 跟人声


[Angel]
AR + 1 暂时没动 毕竟BPM100都不到 AR9感觉太快了
- 不善于Insane的，只是个人意见
00:15:797（7,8,1） - 距离略坑 改了排版
00:25:441（1,2,3,4,5） - 放星形？ 不 这和前面2个3连打的位置是呼应的
00:37:583（3,5） - 方向向上吗？this 不动了 我觉得这样挺好
00:49:012（1,3） - 同上
00:50:798（2,3,4,5,6） - 这星形是故意的吗？ 这里有什么很奇怪的么 是和后面的滑条位置照应的
01:15:798（6,7） - 按Ctrl + G？ 改了 好像有点意思
01:22:226（2,1） - 按Ctrl + G？ ^
01:22:762（1,2） - 按Ctrl + G？ 没啥必要 没动

第一次mod图，试试看吧。加油！！

TheVileOne wrote:

Late mod is better than no mod at all.

Datzuke-Oni wrote:

I like

TheVileOne wrote:

SPOILER

Late mod is better than no mod at all. Yeah, it's true

Easy

00:08:670 (1,2) - Should be 1.0. fixed
00:12:241 (1,2) - Align better. fixed
00:14:027 (3,4) - Bad transition. Don't be lazy now. Oh, note actually lazy, fine now imo
00:29:384 (1,2,3) - Something about this doesn't look right. 1 is higher than 3. Pattern should be level. fixed
00:47:241 (2,3) - Not the greatest looking pattern IMO. Maybe try a smoother transition? Sliders like this 00:47:955 (3) - are rough and don't make great looking patterns usually. example pattern: http://puu.sh/1QKAt You could keep in mind 00:49:026 (1,2) - which is smooth and create a symmetry pattern here. (also take note that just because I don't mention previous sliders that are rough, doesn't invalidate my response. Smooth patterns generally look better. If you wanted to convert your other pattern, that is up to you.) fixed
00:59:027 (1,2,3) - Rough looking pattern. 3 looks disproportionately farther away from the rest of the pattern. 01:10:455 (1,2,3) - looks a lot better. Use this as a template. fixed

Normal

00:26:885 (2,3,4) - Maybe have some more curve here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/578744 fixed in another way
00:42:599 (4) - Curve could wrap around the note better with an extra point. http://puu.sh/1QL8j It's more polished IMO. changed without an extra point, cause I think it's not that nice-looking with your idea
00:45:814 (3) - Unsnapped Oops
00:46:171 (1,2,3,4) - all these blankets can be improved. Make each slider starts center within the previous slider's arc. make them delicate
00:59:385 (3,4) - Repeat slider fits better here IMO. want to keep consistency wth the latter one
01:17:242 (3) - finish on end? It would give focus to these parts. Ok, add in each diff
01:18:670 (2) - ^ ^

Hard
You have unsnapped notes- check aimod. fixed all

00:13:669 (4,1) - Jump feels forced to me. IMO i wouldn't have a jump here. But it could just my mouse being weird. not feel like a change
00:16:526 (5,6) - Not lined up. Move 5 up a few grids. changed 6 instead
00:19:740 (6,1) - Kind of far for the pace of the notes, and the BPM. Don't necessarily have to fix, but it's probably not the most proper way to represent the beat. not changing it currently, will reconsider
00:21:527 (2,3,4) - Fix the overlap? fixed
00:22:954 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just can't imagine the music like this. I think it's important to make sure the map is a representation of the music, and these kind of cross pattern just seem foreign and unlike the music. also i think the jump segment is here 00:23:669 (2,3) - not at 1,2. It's better to have a jump there rather than before it IMO. hmm, I made it like this for I think the vocal seems fluently so I set jumps at its either side
00:27:955 (1,2) - Normal sampleset doesn't sound right to me. Actually it's probably that fact that these are sliders instead of notes that makes it sound so bad. They seem to sound alright without the normal samplesets added. Also I think it would be better if 2 was parallel to 1. Please use the same angle for both sliders. Example; http://puu.sh/1QMbJ fixed
00:30:811 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap if possible. fixed a series of placement
00:47:597 (3) - Strange slider. I suggest something that fits better. (something with a consistent curve) fixed
00:54:027 (4) - Not sure I like overlapping a slider like this. hmm not gonna change
00:58:669 (1,2,3) - I suggest equal spacing here. It just plays a lot more intuitively. It even forms a nice pattern http://puu.sh/1QMqC fixed
01:10:455 (1,2,3,4) - Angle is off. Try moving 01:10:991 (3) - to x 260 y 233 and 01:11:169 (4) - to x 251 y 245 fixed in another way
01:15:097 (2,3) - Transition isn't straight. Move second point of 3 to x 232 y 283. fixed
01:19:384 (3,1,2) - Lower spacing to 1.50? Actually i recommend you just remove 1. It's not following the beat and is unneeded. Plays better without it. [/color]
01:20:098 (4,5,6) - You should fix transitions that stack upward. If you manual place the stack to prevent this, it would be better. Try moving 01:20:991 (5,6) to x 194 y 163, - . thought I mad them nice now

Angel

00:12:419 (3,4,5) - Jumps not based off of the beat >.< It would be better if the singer was actually singing on beat. Oh well. =.=
00:20:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - Start on the horizontal line? It's a better approach IMO. Ok
00:28:491 (7,1,2,3) - I don't like that you slowed down the pace so suddenly. You can more naturally transition to the slow pace by increasing the spacing at 1,2. Consider doing so. I think that I indicates this with a finish sound=.=
00:59:027 (1,2,3) - Flows badly. a simple triple here would suffice. Ok then
01:00:098 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this plays even worse. Where are the beats? i can barely hear them but yet you expect players to play large jumps based off them. You should delete 01:00:991 (3) - , and 01:01:170 (4,5,1) - should have the same spacing since they go together. I highly recommend sticking to this timeline. This is the beat. http://puu.sh/1QNru Anything other than this is overmapped. hmm, you're right in a certain extent
01:04:205 (5,6,1) - This is unnecessarily confusing. Stacking 6,1 seems like the proper approach here. It sounds like it should be stacked. fixed
01:15:455 (4,5) - Such an unnatural jump IMO. This transition is very awkward and not like the beat at all. I highly recommend lowering the spacing. lower the spacing for this has been mentioned more than once
01:22:776 (1,2) - Nazi- isn't exactly straight fixed

Conclusion

This beatmap set is rough. Your pattern usage includes very sharp transitions that are hit or miss in fitting the song in general. You're lucky that falls under personal preference. Keep getting opinions, it's not far away from a bubble, but you have to weed badly flowing patterns. Thx for the opinions, I didn't really consider about the transition things

Sonnyc wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

Late mod is better than no mod at all.

SUPER sorry for the Super delay ;_; owo

Most of your notes are unsnapped by +1. Resnap them all (aimod doesn't catch) fixed but not sure if fixed all

Easy:

00:39:741 (1) - Some more symmetry please fixed
00:45:098 (2) - Make this a curve to interact with (1) fixed
00:59:384 (2) - Uhh,, 1 grid left? fixed
01:20:812 (2) - Add soft-Finish at the end add in each diff

Normal:

00:28:312 - Add a note nope
00:37:956 (1) - Honestly, I didn't liked this slider.. since it's too sharp. (also in Easy) =.=
00:57:242 (4) - Place this somewhere else fixed
01:05:813 (3) - Whistle
01:07:063 (1,2) - ^
01:17:242 (3,2) - ^ not fond of these

Hard:

00:16:704 (6) - Make a line with (5) fixed
00:31:527 (1) - Make the spacing like what you've done at 00:30:097 (2,3) fixed
00:40:812 (1) - Line with previous slider fixed
00:42:598 (3) - Overlap with the previous slider? I don't think this as a good idea.. If you want to leave this, at least try to follow 00:41:527 (2) make them overlap better
01:00:098 (1) - Neatly please fixed in a certain extent

Angel:

-- Some were playable, but lots of jumps weren't that expectable to me... changed a bit=.=

00:48:311 (7) - Make the shake(?) little weaker. Current shape isn't perfect for me fixed
00:50:098 (4) - 1 Grid Right to not make this touch (2) fixed
00:57:241 (5) - More symmetry fixed
01:15:634 (5) - Unexpected jump, I think..

Rock Forever wrote:

kurosanyan's taiko oni:

00:22:122 (1) - I think that a slider must be better at this point, instead of the spinner With this bpm, it's 1/8 sliders, so no.

01:14:027 (1) - 01:14:384 (4) - just another little thing, this RRRR must sound better with a RBBR. I'll check this one when I can go on osu and will edit my post

and if you want, set the initial slider velocity to 2.0 No I prefer to keep this SV.

• 00:12:241 - 00:32:598这一段感觉clap声音略大 可以考虑减一点音量

• 00:39:741(1)whistle换成soft的finish？ 这里哨音感觉不舒服 其他diff也是
  00:51:170(3)改成这样的节奏试试
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• 00:18:312(3,4)感觉这样排要好一些
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  00:27:241(4)可以再多折一次
  00:49:205(5)spin可以在后面的短白线开始

• 00:16:527(5)x:32 y:243
  00:32:955(4,5,6)排成这个样子好看些
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  00:56:527(1)这个nc换成combo colour2 1,3的差别实在太小

• 00:14:920(4)左一格
  00:47:062(2,3,4,5)下一格