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DJ YOSHITAKA feat. Hoshino Kanako - MAX LOVE
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Konei wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
- Consider OD/HD + 1, as current one is pretty easy pass for beginners and not pretty fun at all then. increased them by1
- You should consider adding a Spinner. It is an Easy diff and Score can't vary like this. You should have a good reason if you have no Spinner ;3 that's not good as you said. added a spinner (I might add more spinners but there is only 1 spinner now)
- 00:05:072 (1) - I prefer keeping whistle away from start as the tone is lower than the one you set whistle on end and it would give a much better emphasize for the last tone deleting the whistle from start.
hm, I don't wanna remove it from start because there is a sound which I'm following with whistle. reduced the volume to 60% instead of that.- 00:29:739 (1,2) - Hm, I would like 2 to start on the red tick as it is more likely for the music and vocals. Try this
no change. I felt a bit ood but tried. because most of objects are following the synthesizer not the vocal in this dif- 01:03:242 - Unsnapped green timing point. You will want to fix this ok, fixed~
- 01:10:405 (4) - Consider using NC either for this or for 3. I would recommend 4 anyway as the new vocal is starting here anyway. Just have a try as I'd like to split the combo which get's a bit long for an Easy difficulty
I dont wanna add NC to (4). please rotate 01:09:072 (3,4) 180 degrees. I think you would be able to know the reason I felt so, but it's hard to explain in my poor English.. well, agree with your saying; the combo is a bit long. so added it to (3)- Well, nice done. Especially Sliderticks work nice with this diff :3 thanks :3
thank you for modding~!LunarSakuya wrote:
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I'm LunarSakuya's fan
KSHR'S Easy
00:18:405 (2) - Finish on reverse, hear bg music added it~
Nice hitsounding thanks!
http://puu.sh/1sHBT
Hey
[Insane]
00:22:905 (4,5,1) - NC on (4) instead. It's better if you keep them gathered like this imo
00:26:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
00:32:239 (7,8,1) - NC on (7) instead
01:02:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
01:14:739 (7) - NC? it looks kinda weird with the followpoint
01:29:655 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead
00:55:072 - Why are you skipping such an important beat?
01:29:072 (1) - hiding this isn't very nice 01:53:739 - skipping another important beat?
02:01:572 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
[cRyo]
Why doesn't this have a break?
00:23:072 (4) - Finish on start
00:56:572 (1,1) - I find this more fitting 01:55:239 (1,1) - same as above
[xsrs]
00:29:072 (2) - finish on end
00:48:239 (1) - finish on start
00:49:572 (3) - ^
00:50:905 (2) - ^
00:52:239 (2) - ^
00:53:739 (1) - ^
00:54:739 (2) - finish on end
00:59:072 (1) - finish on start
01:14:739 (1) - remove finish on start
01:23:072 (1,1) - for this speed, I think it's kinda tight
01:48:239 (3) - finsih on start
01:49:572 (2) - ^
01:50:905 (2) - ^
01:52:405 (1) - ^
01:53:072 (2) - finish on end
01:57:739 (1) - finish on start
02:03:072 (1) - ^
02:13:405 (1) - remove finish from start
[KSHR]
00:13:572 - that was a weird finish lol
00:14:405 (4) - remove finish, doesn't really fit here imo
00:58:405 (5,1) - these are too close to each-other
01:36:072 (3) - NC?
01:47:739 (2) - finish on repeat
01:50:405 (4) - ^
02:09:072 (2) - remove finish on start, kinda unfitting
02:11:739 (4) - ^
o.o/
That's all from me
Good luck!
please no, I'm scared of that face D:LunarSakuya wrote:
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
[Insane]
00:22:905 (4,5,1) - NC on (4) instead. It's better if you keep them gathered like this imo
00:26:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
00:32:239 (7,8,1) - NC on (7) instead
01:02:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
01:14:739 (7) - NC? it looks kinda weird with the followpoint
01:29:655 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead
00:55:072 - Why are you skipping such an important beat?
01:29:072 (1) - hiding this isn't very nice 01:53:739 - skipping another important beat?
02:01:572 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
[cRyo]
Why doesn't this have a break?
00:23:072 (4) - Finish on start
00:56:572 (1,1) - I find this more fitting 01:55:239 (1,1) - same as above
[xsrs]
00:29:072 (2) - finish on end
00:48:239 (1) - finish on start
00:49:572 (3) - ^
00:50:905 (2) - ^
00:52:239 (2) - ^
00:53:739 (1) - ^
00:54:739 (2) - finish on end
00:59:072 (1) - finish on start
01:14:739 (1) - remove finish on start
01:23:072 (1,1) - for this speed, I think it's kinda tight
01:48:239 (3) - finsih on start
01:49:572 (2) - ^
01:50:905 (2) - ^
01:52:405 (1) - ^
01:53:072 (2) - finish on end
01:57:739 (1) - finish on start
02:03:072 (1) - ^
02:13:405 (1) - remove finish from start
[KSHR]
00:13:572 - that was a weird finish lol
00:14:405 (4) - remove finish, doesn't really fit here imo
00:58:405 (5,1) - these are too close to each-other
01:36:072 (3) - NC?
01:47:739 (2) - finish on repeat
01:50:405 (4) - ^
02:09:072 (2) - remove finish on start, kinda unfitting
02:11:739 (4) - ^
o.o/
That's all from me
Good luck!
Topic Starter
fixed NCs thx~
NewRulerNAlazy to quote ww fixed !!!
Konei
Konei wrote:
[cRyo's Hard]too loud for me :3
- 00:09:572 (4) - Try whistle for start as it is following the high tone here pretty well
nah its fine
- 00:12:239 (1) - Hm, how about removing whistle from start? It's nearly not hearable in connection with finish
i think current paters also fits very good, and i ussualy avoiding triplets in H diffs oo!
- 00:26:405 (4) - This is somewhat stronger in music. How about moving it to 00:26:572 and make it a tripleclick then?
they already copypasted ww
- 00:52:239 (1) - Copy paste from 3 works and flows a bit better here imo as the current shape is somehow strange to me
no no, i think this angle better then symetry oo!
- 01:10:905 (1) - How about putting a bit more effort on the straightness of this shape? As it is in the middle top, it seems not a bad idea to me to tweak this a bit to make it flow smoother
yep
- 01:23:239 (1) - Hm, adding finish to Spinner fits the song pretty well, or?
kk
- 01:36:572 (1) - And adding whistle to this also (ofc don't mute it) ~
removed it oo!
- 01:39:172 - Unsnapped green timing point, you will want to fix it
ok
- 01:41:739 (1) - How about gradually increasing of volume for this Spinner? Fits song really nice imo
kk
- 01:43:839 - Unsnapped green timing point :3
no no, i think rhytm too hard = =|
- 01:46:405 (3) - Consider shortning this to the blue tick and add a circle at the white one ;3 Follows music better
waaa i dont think it that big ww
- 01:48:239 (1) - Would you mind reducing this jump a bit? It seems uneasy for hard diff :3
thx xD
- Great diff as always, cRyo :3 Enjoyed it pretty much >w<
those
those wrote:
[Hard]
- Somehow these difficulties seem to be more fitting for you to map. Overall excellent map, but 01:33:739 (1,3) - needs to be snapped to 1/3, unless you've actually got something at that 01:33:989 - 1/4 which I can't seem to hear. rly dont want 1/3, current one is fine also (stop touching my 3/4 sliders xD), maybe will change to long slider+note later, but not sure now
- 01:34:072 (2) - End of this should have a Finish as well, instead of 01:34:405 (3) - ; the Finish hitsound here should be used more to emphasize the bass, whereas hitsounds with higher tones, like the whistle or clap can be used to mark the piano melody if you're choosing to follow that at all. ok
LunarSakuya
LunarSakuya wrote:
cRyo's Hard
00:27:072 (1) - Clap or whistle at end dont like both
01:04:739 (1) - Delete NC, like 00:43:405 (3) - but current one looks good :>
00:54:905 (1) - Delete Finish at beginning? yeah finish in music appears 1 tick later but still it sounds fine for me oo!
00:59:072 (2) - NC dont want 1 slider NC xD
01:23:239 (1) - Finish yep
01:29:405 (4,5) - Try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/499802 i got ur idea but that sound that you following hard to hear, i prefer to follow beat since its simply louder :>
01:57:739 (2) - NC 1 slider
02:03:405 (1) - Delete NC like before; if so, then NC on 02:04:405 (4) - maybe prefer current one cause changing in music oo!
02:13:405 (4) - NC? 1 slider
Saten
Thx for mods! Saten wrote:
[cRyo]
Why doesn't this have a break? dont like breaks (:
00:23:072 (4) - Finish on start yep
00:56:572 (1,1) - I find this more fitting 01:55:239 (1,1) - same as above
dont like it, because spinner starts with vocal and i prefer that it will ends also with vocal, dont want stop on random beat = =''
from JMT(Japan Melophobia Tyrant)
[KSHR's Easy]
[xsrs's Normal]
[cRyo's Hard]
[Insane]
I hope this map will go Ranked<3
bye :3
[KSHR's Easy]
- 00:13:072 (3) - This slider's Additions sound setting is durm, it is intentional?
- 00:29:739 (1) - ^
- 00:45:405 (3) - ^
- 00:48:739 (1,2) - I'm not sure that this part is follow to what sound. I think you should correct the sound in something another way.
- 01:04:739 (2,3,4) - There is a little strange feeling for me, I feel slightly different to until now the sound flow. How about this?
- 02:03:405 (2,3,4) - ^
[xsrs's Normal]
Red = Normal hitsound Blue = Soft hitsound
I think you have been using some similar green line, slider's slide is not silence on this map. I feel you should more attention this sound :3
There is nothing to point out.
[cRyo's Hard]
- 00:37:739 (1) - add whistle to the slider's head. I think this time should be emphasized, and you put it already to 01:57:739 (2) - .
- 00:40:405 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head? You put it on the similar place, but I don't know whether this is intentional because pattern is slightly different.
- 00:42:405 (1) - add whistle on the slider's rail? I like this better.
- 00:42:905 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head. You put it to same part. [01:04:239 (2) - ,02:02:905 (2) -]
- 00:59:072 (2) - same as 00:37:739's suggestion.
- 01:02:072 (5) - remove whistle on slider's end. I feel a little strange.
- 01:03:739 (1) - same as 00:42:405's suggestion.
- 02:00:739 (4) - same as 01:03:739's suggestion.
- 02:02:405 (1) - same as 00:42:405's suggestion.
[Insane]
- 00:03:905 (4) - move to x248 y276
- 00:21:572 (6) - move to x180 y288
- 00:35:239 (2) - add clap
00:35:739 (2,3) - add clap
00:36:072 (1) - remove clap
00:36:239 (2) - add clap - 00:36:405 (3) - remove clap on the slider's reverse arrow.
- 01:20:239 (11) - remove whistle
I hope this map will go Ranked<3
bye :3
Saten wrote:
[KSHR]
00:58:405 (5,1) - these are too close to each-other
looks fine to me. I might fix if other modders suggest that
fixed all but this
thank you for modding~terametis wrote:
from JMT(Japan Melophobia Tyrant) You should remove the Melophobia
[KSHR's Easy]awesome map~~<3 <3
- 00:13:072 (3) - This slider's Additions sound setting is durm, it is intentional? mistake not intentional.. fixed!
- 00:29:739 (1) - ^ ^
- 00:45:405 (3) - ^ ^
- 00:48:739 (1,2) - I'm not sure that this part is follow to what sound. I think you should correct the sound in something another way.
fixed with another pattern- 01:04:739 (2,3,4) - There is a little strange feeling for me, I feel slightly different to until now the sound flow. How about this?
synthesizer sound is different from 00:43:072 (1,2), so I wanna use another pattern here- 02:03:405 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
http://puu.sh/1tj9A
Topic Starter
nice jump suggestions tera
all fixed~
all fixed~
cirno-_old
Hello ^_^
These are good maps. It was hard to mod. Insane was lots of fun to play. One stream was hard to read, but got it 2nd try.
Sometimes the hitsounds sound quite, but that might be because the song is loud, or maybe I've been playing too much ;p
Easy
00:59:072 (1) - Space it a few gridpoints away from previous slider?
Xsrs' Normal
CS 5 feels too big. CS 4 feels better
02:08:239 (1,2,3) - I think more can be done around here. Feels awkward. ex. http://i.imgur.com/w3QQX.png Something like that instead of the sliders.
Hard
01:30:072 (6) - Bring it just a few grids closer to the end of (5)'s center
Overall I think these are good. I double checked, because I don't like giving short mods like this, and I can't find anything else. Maybe someone else will?
You might want to change the Xsrs's diff name to Xsrs'
These are good maps. It was hard to mod. Insane was lots of fun to play. One stream was hard to read, but got it 2nd try.
Sometimes the hitsounds sound quite, but that might be because the song is loud, or maybe I've been playing too much ;p
Easy
00:59:072 (1) - Space it a few gridpoints away from previous slider?
Xsrs' Normal
CS 5 feels too big. CS 4 feels better
02:08:239 (1,2,3) - I think more can be done around here. Feels awkward. ex. http://i.imgur.com/w3QQX.png Something like that instead of the sliders.
Hard
01:30:072 (6) - Bring it just a few grids closer to the end of (5)'s center
Overall I think these are good. I double checked, because I don't like giving short mods like this, and I can't find anything else. Maybe someone else will?
You might want to change the Xsrs's diff name to Xsrs'
Topic Starter
yay
thank you for modding!cirno- wrote:
Easy
00:59:072 (1) - Space it a few gridpoints away from previous slider?
keep for now. please look at this screen shot; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/504744
the beginning of (1) is placed on the extension of 00:58:405 (5) so looks fine enough to me :3
from my queue
[General]
tags are not the same in cRyo's Hard. also I suggest to add "cRyo" into tags, sometimes can't search well with "[" or "]"
lead-in need to be 2000 at least, 1500 is not enough
[KSHR's Easy]
01:49:405 (3) - use a 3/4 repeat slider at 01:49:072 - instead of this one? fit the song better imo, like what you did at 02:10:405 -
[xsrs's Normal]
00:42:905 - how about start slider (1) here, follow vocal here is better than follow drum(or maybe heavt beat) imo
01:04:239 - also here, if you fixed ^
02:03:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kick sliders are kinda hard to play as Normal diff imo, try to use some 3/4 slider instead will be much better to read/play
[Insane]
HD or OD +1 plz, or the setting is kinda low
00:40:405 (1) - why not use this shape? http://puu.sh/1A2ZM , looks and play better, cuz arc slider's flow is kinda better than straight one. also you need to fix 00:40:739 (2) - if you changed the 1st one
01:23:739 (1,1) - I strongly suggest to make them repeat 1 time less, or the spacing is really hard to play with 1/8 repeat sliders(will miss the last repeat sometime)
awesome mapset
call me back then
[General]
tags are not the same in cRyo's Hard. also I suggest to add "cRyo" into tags, sometimes can't search well with "[" or "]"
lead-in need to be 2000 at least, 1500 is not enough
[KSHR's Easy]
01:49:405 (3) - use a 3/4 repeat slider at 01:49:072 - instead of this one? fit the song better imo, like what you did at 02:10:405 -
[xsrs's Normal]
00:42:905 - how about start slider (1) here, follow vocal here is better than follow drum(or maybe heavt beat) imo
01:04:239 - also here, if you fixed ^
02:03:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kick sliders are kinda hard to play as Normal diff imo, try to use some 3/4 slider instead will be much better to read/play
[Insane]
HD or OD +1 plz, or the setting is kinda low
00:40:405 (1) - why not use this shape? http://puu.sh/1A2ZM , looks and play better, cuz arc slider's flow is kinda better than straight one. also you need to fix 00:40:739 (2) - if you changed the 1st one
01:23:739 (1,1) - I strongly suggest to make them repeat 1 time less, or the spacing is really hard to play with 1/8 repeat sliders(will miss the last repeat sometime)
awesome mapset
call me back then
Some suggestions by LunarSakuya, Saten & terametis have been applied but these were done a few weeks back, and my memory is too bad for a changelog. Thanks to the above modders!
http://puu.sh/1A3J3
cirno- wrote:
CS 5 feels too big. CS 4 feels better
for one, this difficulty was mapped to CS5 so it'd be unoptimized for CS4, but I don't mind if mythol wants to change it
02:08:239 (1,2,3) - I think more can be done around here. Feels awkward. ex. http://i.imgur.com/w3QQX.png Something like that instead of the sliders.
tried out a couple other alternatives to no avail, so the players will be given a break here :<
Thank you for modding!wcx19911123 wrote:
[xsrs's Normal]
00:42:905 - how about start slider (1) here, follow vocal here is better than follow drum(or maybe heavt beat) imo
01:04:239 - also here, if you fixed ^ 其实这我也考虑了一段时间，最后还是不打算改，希望你了解
02:03:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kick sliders are kinda hard to play as Normal diff imo, try to use some 3/4 slider instead will be much better to read/play
changed into something easier
http://puu.sh/1A3J3
Topic Starter
thx! ^^wcx19911123 wrote:
from my queue
[General]
tags are not the same in cRyo's Hard. also I suggest to add "cRyo" into tags, sometimes can't search well with "[" or "]" tags fixed, and cRyo can be found with "cRyo[iceeicee]" tag so it's fine
lead-in need to be 2000 at least, 1500 is not enough fixed
[Insane]
HD or OD +1 plz, or the setting is kinda low I had some test players and noticed you can fail just by missing a few jumps, and with HR you'll fail unless fc so I'll keep 6 o:
00:40:405 (1) - why not use this shape? http://puu.sh/1A2ZM , looks and play better, cuz arc slider's flow is kinda better than straight one. also you need to fix 00:40:739 (2) - if you changed the 1st one ok
01:23:739 (1,1) - I strongly suggest to make them repeat 1 time less, or the spacing is really hard to play with 1/8 repeat sliders(will miss the last repeat sometime) changed
awesome mapset
call me back then
Thx tera~terametis wrote:
[cRyo's Hard]awesome map~~<3333333 <3
- 00:37:739 (1) - add whistle to the slider's head. I think this time should be emphasized, and you put it already to 01:57:739 (2) - . i removed from 01:57:739 (2) instead xD
- 00:40:405 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head? You put it on the similar place, but I don't know whether this is intentional because pattern is slightly different. ok!
- 00:42:405 (1) - add whistle on the slider's rail? I like this better. umm dont like whistle here =="
- 00:42:905 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head. You put it to same part. [01:04:239 (2) - ,02:02:905 (2) -] ahh nope they not similar xD
- 00:59:072 (2) - same as 00:37:739's suggestion. i dont want to emphasize this note with whistle because most of whistles following specific sound in BG music and this sound not appears at this note, so i decided to make like this ^^
- 01:02:072 (5) - remove whistle on slider's end. I feel a little strange. idk a bit empty without whistle here
- 01:03:739 (1) - same as 00:42:405's suggestion. following specific sound x:
- 02:00:739 (4) - same as 01:03:739's suggestion. empty
- 02:02:405 (1) - same as 00:42:405's suggestion. following specific sound
----> cirno-
spacing surely fine there o.o!
BM B(
thank you for modding, wcx~wcx19911123 wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
01:49:405 (3) - use a 3/4 repeat slider at 01:49:072 - instead of this one? fit the song better imo, like what you did at 02:10:405 -
ok~, fixed!I don't know why I used 1/1 repeat slider..
http://puu.sh/1Ajkn
awesome now
go go Mythol (「・ω・)「
Topic Starter
thank you wcx :>
alacat o^^
alacat o^^
Hi random mod because MAX LOVE has been one of my favorite IIDX songs forever~
[General]
The title is wrong. It's MAX LOVE, not Max Love. (Also my information says it's Kanako Hoshino, not Hoshino Kanako.)
add 15 DJ TROOPERS to the tags, you only have troopers currently.
add DanceDanceRevolution X2 to the tags.
add LOVELY BUCHIAGE POP, this is the song's genre from IIDX.
add TOMOSUKE to the tags, he wrote/played the piano solo.
For further information regarding the song: http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/MAX_LOVE (This website holds information for every bemani song across all games.)
[Insane]
01:28:572 (1,1,1) - Remove these combos it is totally unnecessary. And you didn't even add them at the other sliderstream jumps here 01:31:072 (1,2,3,4) - so what is the point?
[Hard]
01:57:239 (2) - Add a new combo since it's the note after the spinner.
[Easy]
01:45:072 (2) - Add a new combo since it's the note after the spinner.
Fix everything and call me back.
[General]
The title is wrong. It's MAX LOVE, not Max Love. (Also my information says it's Kanako Hoshino, not Hoshino Kanako.)
add 15 DJ TROOPERS to the tags, you only have troopers currently.
add DanceDanceRevolution X2 to the tags.
add LOVELY BUCHIAGE POP, this is the song's genre from IIDX.
add TOMOSUKE to the tags, he wrote/played the piano solo.
For further information regarding the song: http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/MAX_LOVE (This website holds information for every bemani song across all games.)
[Insane]
01:28:572 (1,1,1) - Remove these combos it is totally unnecessary. And you didn't even add them at the other sliderstream jumps here 01:31:072 (1,2,3,4) - so what is the point?
[Hard]
01:57:239 (2) - Add a new combo since it's the note after the spinner.
[Easy]
01:45:072 (2) - Add a new combo since it's the note after the spinner.
Fix everything and call me back.
星野奏子 is read Hoshino Kanako, following Eastern format.
[Hard]
[Hard]
- 01:57:739 (2) - Instead of what MMzz suggested, this should be the object with the new combo if you're going to add one, seeing how your combos follow measures as opposed to vocals. 01:57:239 (1) - doesn't need new combo.
----> MMzz
added
hmm just wondering why ur link is 01:57:239 (2) ( when it should be 01:57:239 (1) - = ='' )
----> those
dont want to see 1 note NC o:
if this part had slider/notes instead of spinne,r then i would surely start NC at 01:57:739 (2)
Thx 4 mod!
http://puu.sh/1Cfon
added
hmm just wondering why ur link is 01:57:239 (2) ( when it should be 01:57:239 (1) - = ='' )
----> those
dont want to see 1 note NC o:
if this part had slider/notes instead of spinne,r then i would surely start NC at 01:57:739 (2)
Thx 4 mod!
http://puu.sh/1Cfon
Topic Starter
All tags added
Everything fixed in Insane + Easy
changed name ;_;
ty~
ah btw i changed 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - because previous pattern 01:29:072 (1) - was hidden
Everything fixed in Insane + Easy
changed name ;_;
ty~
ah btw i changed 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - because previous pattern 01:29:072 (1) - was hidden
Ranked! 
Because there was no NC on this note the spinner was counted as 1.cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
hmm just wondering why ur link is 01:57:239 (2) ( when it should be 01:57:239 (1) - = ='' )
(ﾉ^^)ﾉ~~~Grats!!
cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
(ﾉ^^)ﾉ~~~Grats!!
congrats^^o <3
Topic Starter
Ty MMzz!! 
I really like your beatmap, I am glad it's ranked!
cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
(ﾉ^^)ﾉ~~~Grats!!
ome~
oh~ congrats!
congratz~~
congrats !
gratz!
gratz ~
hoaaaaa!!!!!!!