Hey
LunarSakuya wrote:
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please no, I'm scared of that face D:
[Insane]
00:22:905 (4,5,1) - NC on (4) instead. It's better if you keep them gathered like this imo
00:26:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
00:32:239 (7,8,1) - NC on (7) instead
01:02:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
01:14:739 (7) - NC? it looks kinda weird with the followpoint
01:29:655 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead
00:55:072 - Why are you skipping such an important beat?
01:29:072 (1) - hiding this isn't very nice
01:53:739 - skipping another important beat?
02:01:572 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
[cRyo]
Why doesn't this have a break?
00:23:072 (4) - Finish on start
00:56:572 (1,1) - I find this more fitting
01:55:239 (1,1) - same as above
[xsrs]
00:29:072 (2) - finish on end
00:48:239 (1) - finish on start
00:49:572 (3) - ^
00:50:905 (2) - ^
00:52:239 (2) - ^
00:53:739 (1) - ^
00:54:739 (2) - finish on end
00:59:072 (1) - finish on start
01:14:739 (1) - remove finish on start
01:23:072 (1,1) - for this speed, I think it's kinda tight
01:48:239 (3) - finsih on start
01:49:572 (2) - ^
01:50:905 (2) - ^
01:52:405 (1) - ^
01:53:072 (2) - finish on end
01:57:739 (1) - finish on start
02:03:072 (1) - ^
02:13:405 (1) - remove finish from start
[KSHR]
00:13:572 - that was a weird finish lol
00:14:405 (4) - remove finish, doesn't really fit here imo
00:58:405 (5,1) - these are too close to each-other
01:36:072 (3) - NC?
01:47:739 (2) - finish on repeat
01:50:405 (4) - ^
02:09:072 (2) - remove finish on start, kinda unfitting
02:11:739 (4) - ^
o.o/
That's all from me
Good luck!