Hey, hey. From my Queue ~
[General]
[KSHR's Easy]
[xrrs's Normal]
[cRyo's Hard]
[Insane]
Well, that's it :3
Good luck Mythol
[General]
- Offset 411 (+5) plays better to me
- 15 won't have any effect on tag, just removing it would be better I guess :3
- I think Audio-Lead-in is a bit short. I would prefer something like 1800 - 2000
[KSHR's Easy]
- Consider OD/HD + 1, as current one is pretty easy pass for beginners and not pretty fun at all then.
- You should consider adding a Spinner. It is an Easy diff and Score can't vary like this. You should have a good reason if you have no Spinner ;3
- 00:05:072 (1) - I prefer keeping whistle away from start as the tone is lower than the one you set whistle on end and it would give a much better emphasize for the last tone deleting the whistle from start.
- 00:29:739 (1,2) - Hm, I would like 2 to start on the red tick as it is more likely for the music and vocals. Try this
- 01:03:242 - Unsnapped green timing point. You will want to fix this
- 01:10:405 (4) - Consider using NC either for this or for 3. I would recommend 4 anyway as the new vocal is starting here anyway. Just have a try as I'd like to split the combo which get's a bit long for an Easy difficulty
- Well, nice done. Especially Sliderticks work nice with this diff :3
[xrrs's Normal]
- Well, consider increasing HD/OD for the same reason as Easy. Normal in generall should have a higher setting
- 00:02:405 (5) - Move a bit to the left to have a better allginment with 3 please
- 00:23:739 (3) - Move a bit right to make it look better. Even flow is a bit better as cursor gets in a better position here
- 00:26:405 (4) - I would remove whistle on end and set finish for it. The beat has more power on the end so I'd like to emphasize this by using a more rare finish then the more often whistle
- 00:27:405 (5) - And then I would remove whistle on this. This part is so sudden quiet so the hitsound doesn't fit this pretty well. Without hitsounds this note feels more likely the music
- 00:29:072 (2) - Would you mind removing whistle on Sliderbody? On this Slider is, not like on the one before, a holding voice, so imo the long whistle doesn't really fit with this at all
- 00:30:072 (3) - Same about this note as on 00:27:405
- 00:32:239 (3) - Start sounds really better without that whistle imo
- 00:35:072 (3) - I highly suggest to use finish for the start as this emphasizes downbeat and gives an extra emphasize to the vocal here
- 00:45:739 (5) - Remove whistle from this Sliderbody please, sounds noisy at this part
- 00:54:739 (2) - You could use whistle for the Sliderbody here, would fit the sliding vocal
- 01:09:572 (1) - This one sounds much better without whistle at start. The whistle is high and doesnt fit with this part at all. Addidionally it makes the finish a bit less powerful and takes the "power" out off it, if you understand what I'm trying to say
- 01:25:572 (1) - There is no point using finish for Sliderbody here. Set it for start instead to catch the sound of the heavy beat
- 01:46:405 (3) - Hm, current place looks a bit odd imo. The start off the Slider is somehow strange to me. Try something more good flowing like
- 01:46:905 (4) - Starting NC here makes much more sense to me. KIAI is starting and soundset is changing, so why not using NC here instead of using it on 01:47:739 ?
- 01:54:739 (5) - Going with the cursor back here doesn't fit the music well at all. I'd prefer a somehow more simple and just untricky pattern like
- 02:05:072 (5) - Consider shortning this to the red tick and add a repeat. That would follow melody in a better way then now if you listen
- 02:05:739 (1) - Remove clap from repeat please. Sounds odd and unfitting
- 02:10:905 (3) - Consider using a Finish for start, that helps to emphasize the strong beat here much better
- Well, I'm not liking the whole whistling on Sliderbody. Would be nice if you could reduce it to a better amount. Flow was really cool for whole map and Slidershapes regular and fitting. There were some combos I would have used in another way, but this is a question of mapping style in this place.
[cRyo's Hard]
- 00:09:572 (4) - Try whistle for start as it is following the high tone here pretty well
- 00:12:239 (1) - Hm, how about removing whistle from start? It's nearly not hearable in connection with finish
- 00:26:405 (4) - This is somewhat stronger in music. How about moving it to 00:26:572 and make it a tripleclick then?
- 00:52:239 (1) - Copy paste from 3 works and flows a bit better here imo as the current shape is somehow strange to me
- 01:10:905 (1) - How about putting a bit more effort on the straightness of this shape? As it is in the middle top, it seems not a bad idea to me to tweak this a bit to make it flow smoother
- 01:23:239 (1) - Hm, adding finish to Spinner fits the song pretty well, or?
- 01:36:572 (1) - And adding whistle to this also (ofc don't mute it) ~
- 01:39:172 - Unsnapped green timing point, you will want to fix it
- 01:41:739 (1) - How about gradually increasing of volume for this Spinner? Fits song really nice imo
- 01:43:839 - Unsnapped green timing point :3
- 01:46:405 (3) - Consider shortning this to the blue tick and add a circle at the white one ;3 Follows music better
- 01:48:239 (1) - Would you mind reducing this jump a bit? It seems uneasy for hard diff :3
- Great diff as always, cRyo :3 Enjoyed it pretty much >w<
[Insane]
- 00:04:405 (1) - Hm, feels empty of hitsound, how about a soft whistle for the start?
- 00:05:072 (3) - ^
- 00:29:739 (1) - Allign with 2 and 3 for a much better look :3
- 00:37:322 - Here should be a note according to the song ;3 If you stacked it with 1 it wouldn't be much of a problem
- 01:13:072 (1) - Remove NC? Doesn't makes really sense to me here. Also this jump won't be easier to read with it at all imo :3
- 01:28:405 (1,1,1,1) - Reduce spacing a bit? Current is hard to read imo. Increasing a bit would also help o3o
- 01:31:072 (1,2,3,4) - Could be misreaded on first sight. How about decreasing spacing a bit?
- 01:35:905 (4) - Doesn't follow song as cool as it could as I would expect a note on 01:35:989 So how about changing this into a triple like
- 01:53:239 (4) - Why not stacking this with the previous 6? Makes a better pattern imo
- Challenging and funny diff :33 lol. Really enjoyed it, even if some things could be a bit more readable.
Well, that's it :3
Good luck Mythol