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Lan wings
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月19日星期五 at 15:31:57

Artist: MiddleIsland
Title: Vision
Source: Gen Sou Musai Shoku
Tags: Nakajima Misaki Piano Violin Beren -Baby Strawberry-
BPM: 115
Filesize: 6134kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.81 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hardy (4.49 stars, 158 notes)
  3. Insane (4.85 stars, 352 notes)
  4. Normal (3.88 stars, 139 notes)
Download: MiddleIsland - Vision
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th
http://www.middleisland.net/gms/
弦奏無彩色 TR.09 Vision
thx from Garven's Timing and LKs's Timing help
Hardy by -Baby Strawberry-
Click here to download Taiko diff
Storyboard by Beren
某天聽著這首歌的時候看到荊棘鳥的故事``然後就濕了
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Dino99
沙發~~
cmn_891127
love love MiddleIsland~
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

- the tag M3 29 is useless (too short to be searched)

[Taiko]
- some sections are not clearly audiable
00:27:716 - dkdd
00:33:716 - the melody goes up then down. Try dkkd / dkdd
00:38:151 - ^
00:39:977 - just remove the note at 00:40:107 - since it does nothing with the coming 1/6 stream. Also you may want to add a note 1/6 before this for the quick notes
00:41:542 - same as 0:33
00:43:368 - dddk with the melody
00:48:412 - I'll prefer leave it blank, and the spinner like music starts eariler than spinner
00:51:977 - ...just use 1/6 and avoid 1/8 whenever possible
00:54:455 - just put this on the 2/3 beat and start 1/6 there, using like kkdddddddk otherwise the separation of the whole stream looks odd
00:58:760 - same as 0:33
01:00:846 - does not fit with streams, emphasize the later notes with simple 1/2 would be fine
01:13:368 - broken slider, use 1/6 ddddd kkkkk instead
01:37:366 - fit the music but avoid 1/8 complex streams, us 1/4 streams instead
01:42:821 - 1/8 can be avoided here
01:43:317 - nothing to follow here under a long violin note, dd dd sounds odd
01:49:176 - hentai
01:58:991 - k
02:01:353 - 人性呢

敢自重嗎
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
MiddleIsland...
spboxer3

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

- the tag M3 29 is useless (too short to be searched)

[Taiko]
- some sections are not clearly audiable
00:27:716 - dkdd 這個維持現狀 我喜歡這種用pitch的高低來分辨的排法
00:33:716 - the melody goes up then down. Try dkkd / dkdd ok I used dkkd
00:38:151 - ^ 維持原狀 同樣的 因為音調問題我認為kkdd比較適合
00:39:977 - just remove the note at 00:40:107 - since it does nothing with the coming 1/6 stream. Also you may want to add a note 1/6 before this for the quick notes k removed
00:41:542 - same as 0:33 ok
00:43:368 - dddk with the melody k
00:48:412 - I'll prefer leave it blank, and the spinner like music starts eariler than spinner 往後1/4拍 結尾不變
00:51:977 - ...just use 1/6 and avoid 1/8 whenever possible D:來不及了...後頭多的很...
00:54:455 - just put this on the 2/3 beat and start 1/6 there, using like kkdddddddk otherwise the separation of the whole stream looks odd 這段我用d kdddddd d的節奏 這樣會好打些
00:58:760 - same as 0:33 k
01:00:846 - does not fit with streams, emphasize the later notes with simple 1/2 would be fine ->d
01:13:368 - broken slider, use 1/6 ddddd kkkkk instead 我真的很想罵這什麼爛Bug= = 01:13:368 (1) - 結尾到01:13:629 - bug fixed
01:37:366 - fit the music but avoid 1/8 complex streams, us 1/4 streams instead ...
01:42:821 - 1/8 can be avoided here ...
01:43:317 - nothing to follow here under a long violin note, dd dd sounds odd 改了...aabc幫我mod的時候就改了~
01:49:176 - hentai
01:58:991 - k k
02:01:353 - 人性呢

敢自重嗎
我記得有強調只要test阿 lol'd

老闆你就不能修好附加檔案嗎? 泥馬這多蛋疼阿
aabc271
Some simple mods about the taiko diff :3
Chatlog
... 00:42 aabc271: : Anyway, 2nd song
00:44 spboxer3: : 第二首說實話我絕得並沒有做很好:(
00:44 aabc271: : ............
00:44 : *aabc271 slaps baka sp3 www
00:44 spboxer3: : Q_Q
00:45 : *aabc271 wipes baka sp3's tears
00:45 aabc271: : Well ....
00:45 spboxer3: : O_O
00:45 aabc271: : A few things
00:45 aabc271: : 00:54:455 -
00:45 aabc271: : How do I know k is right / left ?
00:45 aabc271: : Maybe a bit hard ?
00:46 aabc271: : Also for the beat
00:46 aabc271: : Hard to interpret at 1st sight
00:46 aabc271: : But well, this is the song's style ?
00:47 spboxer3: : 背景音樂的搖鈴是這樣沒錯 我想用note呈現出來
00:47 aabc271: : Yes, but this could be hard to play
00:47 aabc271: : Uses of 1/3 ~ 1/8
00:48 aabc271: : All included .______.
00:48 aabc271: : Sometimes even mixes
00:48 aabc271: : 01:13:368 -
00:48 aabc271: : The sliders . . . .
00:48 aabc271: : Even at editor, I still wonder if (1) ends at 1/8 tick ....
00:49 spboxer3: : Orz... It's a mistake
00:49 aabc271: : Baka ~ www
00:49 spboxer3: : I just want make 1/4 rhythm to here lol
00:50 aabc271: : I'm not sure if the bug applies to sliders too
00:50 aabc271: : notes<====Slider====>
00:50 aabc271: : ^ With 1/4 space in between
00:50 aabc271: : = High chance of missing some / all hits in slider
00:50 spboxer3: : Orz...
00:50 aabc271: : I dunno if sliders will have this bug too
00:50 spboxer3: : 我實在很想知道為什麼會有這個bug...
00:50 aabc271: : ^ Same
00:51 aabc271: : Seems the osu mechanics
00:51 aabc271: : In authentic, d & k are separate
00:51 aabc271: : While in osu, they're the same
00:51 spboxer3: : Orz...
00:51 aabc271: : If you hit kkkkkkkkkkkk in authentic when a d appears, it will not miss because of wrong hit
00:52 aabc271: : But only miss because of hitting nothing
00:52 aabc271: : But osu isn't like that. It'll assume as a miss because of wrong colour
00:52 aabc271: : ^ I guess it could be related to this
00:52 aabc271: : Osu may treat notes & sliders the same thing
00:52 aabc271: : ^ Not sure though
00:53 aabc271: : But well, I dunno the real reason .____.
00:53 aabc271: : This is just a possible one
00:54 spboxer3: : :(
00:54 aabc271: : Anyway, let's get back to the map
00:54 aabc271: : 01:37:118 - A bit hard, but acceptable ...?
00:55 aabc271: : 01:43:317 - Could be misleading because this 1/6 pattern appears once only >
00:55 aabc271: : ?*
00:55 aabc271: : 01:48:690 - Last k is again unsure if it's left / right
00:56 aabc271: : 02:01:353 - A bit hard, but this is the last part. So whatever .__.
00:56 spboxer3: : \:D///
00:57 aabc271: : 2:01 should be earier imo :<
00:57 spboxer3: : 00:55:107 (1) - -> d
00:57 spboxer3: : 01:13:368 (1,2) - I really dunno what should I do lol
00:58 spboxer3: : 01:50:148 (1) - ->d
00:58 aabc271: : Yeah I know some are hard to fix :3
00:58 aabc271: : So I don't really expect fixes on them
00:59 aabc271: : Just saying some places which make players want to slap you
00:59 aabc271: : wwwwwwww
00:59 spboxer3: : Orz...
00:59 : *aabc271 slaps sp3 ~~
00:59 aabc271: : xD
00:59 aabc271: : For me, I'll probably not submit the record when it's ranked
00:59 aabc271: : Too hard to FC & have good acc
01:00 spboxer3: : :(
01:00 aabc271: : But anyway, I understand most of the styles
01:00 aabc271: : So don't worry .___."
01:01 aabc271: : Just saying that some players may think this map's eggpain
01:01 spboxer3: : Orz...eggpain
01:01 aabc271: : Yes for me in 1st impression
01:01 aabc271: : But neutral after simple modding
01:01 spboxer3: : Orz...我懂
...
Overall OK, but some parts are too hard Orz
Anyway, star and good luck ~
btw nice song :)
Topic Starter
Lan wings

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

- the tag M3 29 is useless (too short to be searched)fixed
and thx aabc271's star~
sherrie__fay
[Insane]

00:24:064 (6) - 放到(5)后面
00:24:325 (7) - NC
00:25:629 (1) - 去掉NC
00:26:151 (6) - 可以酌情加NC
00:27:194 (1) - 改成两个note 最好是跳
00:29:542 (3) - 不要和4重叠 建议位置x:296 Y:80上下那一片都可以
00:31:629 (3,1) - 不slider不幸福
00:35:020 (1,2,3,4) - 不和00:34:238 (7) - 重叠吗?故意错开的?
00:41:020 (3,4) - 分开来摆 而且这个spacing不加NC吗?
00:49:890 (2,3) - 这种地方为啥总要把他们挨一起呢我就不明白
00:59:281 (7,8) - 这种地方倒是可以放这种梗
01:01:238 (6) - 短滑条改成单点更好
01:18:325 (1) - 天然1/3(?

后面摆得漂亮! 没啥问题
Topic Starter
Lan wings

sherrie__fay wrote:

[Insane]

00:24:064 (6) - 放到(5)后面fixed
00:24:325 (7) - NCfixed
00:25:629 (1) - 去掉NCfixed
00:26:151 (6) - 可以酌情加NCfixed
00:27:194 (1) - 改成两个note 最好是跳fixed
00:29:542 (3) - 不要和4重叠 建议位置x:296 Y:80上下那一片都可以放那里不怎么好看啊``
00:31:629 (3,1) - 不slider不幸福现在幸福了吧``
00:35:020 (1,2,3,4) - 不和00:34:238 (7) - 重叠吗?故意错开的?故意的``因为HID完全看不到这里``
00:41:020 (3,4) - 分开来摆 而且这个spacing不加NC吗?fixed
00:49:890 (2,3) - 这种地方为啥总要把他们挨一起呢我就不明白没梗了随便放噗
00:59:281 (7,8) - 这种地方倒是可以放这种梗
01:01:238 (6) - 短滑条改成单点更好fixed
01:18:325 (1) - 天然1/3(?这地方是1/6三连....

后面摆得漂亮! 没啥问题
-Baby Strawberry-
做好啦~
点我下载
还是后面有点off,我对不准,然后帮忙改一下~
然后update以后我再加音效
;)
Beren
JoJo
From ingame PM~ OvO

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
  3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO
[General]
  1. 好像没问题呢!
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:977 (6) - 头加个clap?
  2. 00:54:586 (3) - 建议减少一个折返
  3. 01:05:542 (2,3) - 这边很容易让人措手不及的说...
  4. 01:37:366 (1) - 这边强烈建议减少个折返...不然超容易combobreak =A=...
  5. 01:43:317 (1,2) - 个人感觉这个跳太大了,与难度整体比较的话略显违和...适当减少DS比较好
  6. 01:47:233 (2,3,1) - 要不要把3往下面放点吧...感觉3和1离得太近了会让某些急性子按早>_>
  7. 01:53:273 (x) - 这边加个note比不加要好=。=
[Hardy]
  1. 这难度名是特意的么? =v= 第一眼看到的时候还以为是手抖写错了 >_>
  2. 01:23:281 (5) - nazi来了..放到x:348 y:28吧 =v=
  3. 01:42:325 (8,1) - 我觉得这边遮得太厉害了...略丑
  4. 01:54:233 (x) - 加个圈圈? o.o
Normal和Easy都没啥好挑的o.o
啊啊~身无分文有了裤兜我再射星=。=
Topic Starter
Lan wings

JoJo wrote:

From ingame PM~ OvO

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
  3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO
[General]
  1. 好像没问题呢!
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:977 (6) - 头加个clap?fixed
  2. 00:54:586 (3) - 建议减少一个折返fixed
  3. 01:05:542 (2,3) - 这边很容易让人措手不及的说...這裡不知道怎麼破``求梗
  4. 01:37:366 (1) - 这边强烈建议减少个折返...不然超容易combobreak =A=...fixed
  5. 01:43:317 (1,2) - 个人感觉这个跳太大了,与难度整体比较的话略显违和...适当减少DS比较好fixed
  6. 01:47:233 (2,3,1) - 要不要把3往下面放点吧...感觉3和1离得太近了会让某些急性子按早>_>前面123是個等邊三角0.0``我看看旋轉一下好了
  7. 01:53:273 (x) - 这边加个note比不加要好=。=fixed
Normal和Easy都没啥好挑的o.o
啊啊~身无分文有了裤兜我再射星=。=
bakabaka
懶惰的Modder lol
SPOILER
16:07 Lan wings: 來mod=w
16:07 Lan wings: =w=
16:08 bakabaka: ":3
16:15 bakabaka: 01:06:325 (1) - 總感覺這nc比較好一點><
16:16 Lan wings: 為啥
16:17 bakabaka: 前面那間距讓我以為這是1/2 lol
16:17 Lan wings: 哦
16:17 bakabaka: 不加應該也大膠布:3
16:17 Lan wings: 那弄個吧
16:17 Lan wings: 反正加個NC不會懷孕
16:17 bakabaka: 不會嗎: o
16:18 Lan wings: 莫非你會?
16:18 Lan wings:  瞎了
16:18 bakabaka: 羞
16:20 bakabaka: 01:03:455 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊要不要改成1/4三連拍:O
16:21 Lan wings: 不要``這裡故意的
16:21 bakabaka: : o
16:21 bakabaka: 恩
16:24 bakabaka: 濕惹~MOD不出來
16:26 Lan wings: Q.Q
16:26 bakabaka: 不會mod這種音樂OTZ
16:27 Lan wings: 怎麼破
16:27 Lan wings: 沒有可修改的circle jump么
16:29 bakabaka: 感覺都挺好跳的耶:<
16:30 bakabaka: BPM的關係不太會MOD OTZ
16:32 bakabaka: 01:07:629-沒用的綠線
16:33 bakabaka: 01:17:803-^
16:34 Lan wings: fixed
16:37 bakabaka: 00:37:629 (3) - clap
16:38 bakabaka: 要不要移掉:O?
16:38 bakabaka: 00:47:020 (2) - ^?
16:38 Lan wings: 於是聽著有點違和?
16:38 bakabaka: 會嗎:O
16:38 Lan wings: 那你問要不要移掉
16:39 bakabaka: 以為你說移掉後違和lol
16:40 bakabaka: 00:48:846 (1) - 音量漸大怎麼樣 30>40>50
16:40 Lan wings: 那不移掉是不是違和?
16:40 bakabaka: 有點:O
16:40 Lan wings: 可能有點大聲
16:40 Lan wings: 我小聲點
16:40 Lan wings: 你弄到20%看看
16:40 bakabaka: clap那邊嗎
16:41 Lan wings: 嗯
16:41 bakabaka: 感覺還是怪耶:<
16:41 bakabaka: 換成whistle還感覺好一點lol
16:41 Lan wings: 尿了``我前面的clap基本是照著這個梗下的
16:41 bakabaka: 是嗎 :<
16:41 Lan wings: 是啊
16:42 bakabaka: 那邊比較空白~所以放clap比較突兀:O
16:42 bakabaka: 後面空了一整拍~感覺clap打下去有點怪而已:P
16:42 Lan wings: 那你說放whistle好還是就空著什麽都不放好
16:43 bakabaka: 空著好:O
16:43 Lan wings: 噢
16:43 Lan wings: 那就空著吧
16:43 bakabaka: : o
16:45 bakabaka: '01:35:135 (5,6) - 6上面的clap改到5怎麼樣:O
16:47 Lan wings: 剛接了個電話
16:47 Lan wings: 繼續=w=
16:47 bakabaka: :3
16:48 Lan wings: 改到5可以
16:48 Lan wings: 00:48:846 (1) -
16:48 Lan wings: 這裡音量怎麼放
16:48 bakabaka: 00:48:846-30%
16:48 bakabaka: 00:49:107-40%
16:48 bakabaka: 00:49:368-50 ?
16:49 Lan wings: 於是最後放50好像沒啥區別0.0
16:49 Lan wings: 算了``就這樣吧
16:49 bakabaka: 後面的地方整體50呀 ":P
16:49 Lan wings: 我意思是那個slider
16:50 bakabaka: :O
16:50 Lan wings: 基本就沒有50的音了
16:50 bakabaka: 是呀lol
16:50 Lan wings: 是不是原來太大聲?
16:50 bakabaka: 有點
16:50 bakabaka: 沒有漸層感覺怪怪:P
16:50 bakabaka: 02:01:826 (7) - 要不要用soft :O
16:51 Lan wings: 我聽聽看0.0
16:51 Lan wings: 好像不錯耶
16:52 bakabaka: :O
16:53 bakabaka: 沒惹:P
16:53 Lan wings: 米有了么
16:53 Lan wings: 其他難度看么
16:54 bakabaka: 沒力了 /..\
16:54 Lan wings: 0.0
16:54 Lan wings: 那就post吧

Good Luck ;D
Steph De Chine
from steph's queue
好音乐,我喜欢~~

Fast mod结果:

Easy
00:22:759 (1) - 还是换成3个note?
01:05:020 (1,2) - 这个把红点的位置调到中间?让那个红点代表那个音会好些

Normal
01:05:542 (5) - 或许再拉出来一个折返箭头?

Hardy
01:23:803 (1,2), 01:31:379 (3,4), 01:34:391 (4,5), 01:47:718 (1,2) 这里,这里,这里,还有这里……你是认真的么?就算你是个程序员,不在意Warnings,可这里已经成ERROR了啊!

Insane倒是颇具Insane之风……不错
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Steph De Chine wrote:

from steph's queue
好音乐,我喜欢~~

Fast mod结果:

Easy
00:22:759 (1) - 还是换成3个note?按照我個人習慣開場第一個note是slider``因為如果開場circle的話非常容易出100對於SS黨來說是不可饒恕的(關我什麽事``我又不是SS黨)同時hard難度已經是3個circle了``所以這裡不再重複
01:05:020 (1,2) - 这个把红点的位置调到中间?让那个红点代表那个音会好些fixed

Normal
01:05:542 (5) - 或许再拉出来一个折返箭头?那個音其實在這裡01:06:325 - 而不是1/3的位置(於是見挺多人這裡不知道停頓多久還是加個circle看看效果怎麼樣好了)


Insane倒是颇具Insane之风……不错
-Baby Strawberry-

Steph De Chine wrote:

from steph's queue
好音乐,我喜欢~~


Hardy
01:23:803 (1,2), 01:31:379 (3,4), 01:34:391 (4,5), 01:47:718 (1,2) 这里,这里,这里,还有这里……你是认真的么?就算你是个程序员,不在意Warnings,可这里已经成ERROR了啊!我这里看没有啊。。。。。

JoJo wrote:

From ingame PM~ OvO

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
  3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO
[General]
  1. 好像没问题呢!

[Hardy]
  1. 这难度名是特意的么? =v= 第一眼看到的时候还以为是手抖写错了 >_> 抖>~<
  2. 01:23:281 (5) - nazi来了..放到x:348 y:28吧 =v=
  3. 01:42:325 (8,1) - 我觉得这边遮得太厉害了...略丑 嗯这个我再想想
  4. 01:54:233 (x) - 加个圈圈? o.o 不了不了
谢谢大家mod~! :)

改完了下载咯~
Loneight
早灣 >w<
M4M.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 咱堅信著 , 咱會吐槽那個bookmark

[Easy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:14:412 - 這裡有紅線跟綠線 , 咱看綠線沒調速度為甚麼不乾脆直接在紅線上加kiai time就好 , 咱感覺那個綠線是多餘的
    01:23:803 - 這裡也是..同樣個點有兩個音量?!把紅線改成40%就好 不用在去加個60%綠線~
    01:26:803 -
    01:32:904 -
    01:44:804 -
    01:50:633 -
    01:56:393 -

  2. 00:24:846 (2) - 在x:116 y:184 ?
  3. 00:33:194 (1) - 感覺開頭的clap,有些多餘 ;w;
  4. 00:35:281 (3) - NC ?! 咱想說跟00:32:151 (1) - 一樣
  5. 00:39:977 (1) - 第4個點x:40 y:60
  6. 00:46:238 (4) - NC
  7. 01:05:020 (1,2) - 在咱的眼裡..這有些不好看
  8. 01:11:281 (3) - NC
  9. 01:14:412 (2) - ^ (咱是想說kiai time開始 所以NC)
  10. 01:53:513 (3) - ^

[Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:14:412 -
    01:23:803 -
    01:26:803 -
    01:32:904 -
    01:44:804 -
    01:50:633 -
    01:56:393 -

  2. 00:46:238 (7) - ^
  3. 01:17:542 (6,1) - 交換NC

[Hardy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    02:02:298 -

  2. 00:27:977 (2) - NC ~ 咱是想說緩速
  3. 00:35:542 (4) - ^
  4. 01:00:064 (2) - NC ~ 你懂得XD
  5. 01:15:194 (2) - ^
  6. 01:18:585 (3) - ^
  7. 01:21:716 (2) - ^
  8. 01:24:053 (2) - ^
  9. 01:31:633 (4) - ^

[Insane]

  1. 00:23:021 (2,4) - 咱看到這裡直覺直接告訴咱要NC
  2. 00:29:542 (3) - NC~
  3. 00:55:107 (1,2) - 交換NC
  4. 00:59:281 (7) - NC?~
good song & good SB & good luck ~
這次wing醬的譜面insane可能會有很多NC問題 ... 有點太多NC 感覺NC得有些亂 咱有點眼花了 ;w;
加油:3~
-Baby Strawberry-

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
M4M.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[Hardy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    02:02:298 -
    这个删掉了
  2. 00:27:977 (2) - NC ~ 咱是想說緩速
  3. 00:35:542 (4) - ^
  4. 01:00:064 (2) - NC ~ 你懂得XD
  5. 01:15:194 (2) - ^
  6. 01:18:585 (3) - ^
  7. 01:21:716 (2) - ^
  8. 01:24:053 (2) - ^
  9. 01:31:633 (4) - ^
关于这个NC吧,我基本上没动,因为加上的话好乱的赶脚。。。 :(
不过还是谢谢mod啦~
Topic Starter
Lan wings

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
M4M.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 咱堅信著 , 咱會吐槽那個bookmark

[Easy]

  1. 無用的綠線:其實這些線很明顯能看出來是Insane的遺留物的吧`````
    01:14:412 - 這裡有紅線跟綠線 , 咱看綠線沒調速度為甚麼不乾脆直接在紅線上加kiai time就好 , 咱感覺那個綠線是多餘的
    01:23:803 - 這裡也是..同樣個點有兩個音量?!把紅線改成40%就好 不用在去加個60%綠線~
    01:26:803 -
    01:32:904 -
    01:44:804 -
    01:50:633 -
    01:56:393 -

  2. 00:24:846 (2) - 在x:116 y:184 ?fixed
  3. 00:33:194 (1) - 感覺開頭的clap,有些多餘 ;w;fixed
  4. 00:35:281 (3) - NC ?! 咱想說跟00:32:151 (1) - 一樣fixed
  5. 00:39:977 (1) - 第4個點x:40 y:60fixed
  6. 00:46:238 (4) - NCkeep
  7. 01:05:020 (1,2) - 在咱的眼裡..這有些不好看其實modder在提出某些不好看的地方的時候應該給出一個自己認為好看的方案給mapper``不然我是無法修改的``我自己都不知道該怎麼拉才算好看``你說是吧>.<
  8. 01:11:281 (3) - NCkeep
  9. 01:14:412 (2) - ^ (咱是想說kiai time開始 所以NC)fixed
  10. 01:53:513 (3) - ^fixed

[Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:fixed
    01:14:412 -
    01:23:803 -
    01:26:803 -
    01:32:904 -
    01:44:804 -
    01:50:633 -
    01:56:393 -

  2. 00:46:238 (7) - ^fixed
  3. 01:17:542 (6,1) - 交換NCfixed

[Insane]

  1. 00:23:021 (2,4) - 咱看到這裡直覺直接告訴咱要NC太短不好看
  2. 00:29:542 (3) - NC~keep
  3. 00:55:107 (1,2) - 交換NCkeep
  4. 00:59:281 (7) - NC?~keep
good song & good SB & good luck ~
這次wing醬的譜面insane可能會有很多NC問題 ... 有點太多NC 感覺NC得有些亂 咱有點眼花了 ;w;怎麼說呢``只能說每個人加NC的習慣都是不同的``
加油:3~
Dino99
Suggestion
Extremely suggestion
Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<Easy>
  • 00:29:020 (4) - 要扭是可以.. 但就E來說.. 好像太扭了些..>_>
    00:49:368 (1) - finish? 效果挺好的
    01:49:176 (4) - 改下形狀吧.. 不然跟 01:47:718 (1) - 感覺好緊._. 大概像這樣w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440981

<Normal>
  • 00:51:977 (3) - 左移一格吧~
    00:52:499 (4) - 移到[X:316 Y:228]?
    01:20:672 (1) - 移到[X:332 Y:324]~ 改了的話後面間距自己條一下唄o.o
<Hardy>
  • 01:46:261 (4) - 嘛... 可以再包好些唄x3 由上數下來第2個白點移到[X:232 Y:160]如何~? (Nazi.. Orz)

Good~ ww

<Insane>
  • 02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧度差評._. 幫你弄了個>_>.. 我把間距縮小了些.. DS大好難排=A= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441048
    250,39,121117,5,0
    280,28,121235,1,0
    311,28,121353,1,8
    341,38,121471,1,0
    364,59,121589,1,0
    379,86,121707,1,0
    382,117,121826,1,0
    373,147,121944,1,0
    349,167,122062,1,12
渣mod... T_T
加油啦~
cmn_891127
Hi, Lan wings & -Baby Strawberry-


[Insane]
超级好!
就是01:37:862 (2) - 01:44:308 (1) - 01:56:393 (1) - 01:59:227 (1) - 这种我打的时候总是移动太快,导致冲出圈圈了特别是01:56:393 (1) - 会断……所以把slider拉直一些吧~

[Hardy]
这个难度有一个error,但是完全不知道为什么
01:33:399 (2) - 在01:33:317 (x) - 加一个note
02:02:062 (7) - NC

[Normal]
None

[Easy]
00:52:499 (1,2,3,4) - 整体右上一格
00:58:760 (1) - 这个形状也很诡异,完全可以跟00:57:194 (3,4) - 成三角,又包住01:00:325 (2) -
02:00:644 (4) - 弧度大一些

总体上感觉hardy真的很精致~Insane手感不错~
-Baby Strawberry-

12BARRY21 wrote:

Suggestion
Extremely suggestion
Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<Hardy>
  • 01:46:261 (4) - 嘛... 可以再包好些唄x3 由上數下來第2個白點移到[X:232 Y:160]如何~? (Nazi.. Orz)
好~我调整了下
Good~ ww
谢谢mod~!

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Lan wings & -Baby Strawberry-



[Hardy]
这个难度有一个error,但是完全不知道为什么
我也不知道啊OJZ
01:33:399 (2) - 在01:33:317 (x) - 加一个note 其实吧我觉得没什么必要。。。
02:02:062 (7) - NC 好~



总体上感觉hardy真的很精致~Insane手感不错~
谢谢mod~!

更新咯~
Topic Starter
Lan wings

12BARRY21 wrote:

Suggestion
Extremely suggestion
Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<Easy>
  • 00:29:020 (4) - 要扭是可以.. 但就E來說.. 好像太扭了些..>_> fixed
    00:49:368 (1) - finish? 效果挺好的fixed
    01:49:176 (4) - 改下形狀吧.. 不然跟 01:47:718 (1) - 感覺好緊._. 大概像這樣w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440981fixed

<Normal>
  • 00:51:977 (3) - 左移一格吧~ 00:50:933 (1,2) - 我这两个右移吧
    00:52:499 (4) - 移到[X:316 Y:228]?fixed
    01:20:672 (1) - 移到[X:332 Y:324]~ 改了的話後面間距自己條一下唄o.o于是后面一堆要我改```
<Insane>
  • 02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧度差評._. 幫你弄了個>_>.. 我把間距縮小了些.. DS大好難排=A= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441048 间距不改``最后一段stream我不加大间距都不错了``弧度我重新弄弄好了
    250,39,121117,5,0
    280,28,121235,1,0
    311,28,121353,1,8
    341,38,121471,1,0
    364,59,121589,1,0
    379,86,121707,1,0
    382,117,121826,1,0
    373,147,121944,1,0
    349,167,122062,1,12
渣mod... T_T
加油啦~

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Lan wings & -Baby Strawberry-


[Insane]
超级好!
就是01:37:862 (2) - 01:44:308 (1) - 01:56:393 (1) - 01:59:227 (1) - 这种我打的时候总是移动太快,导致冲出圈圈了特别是01:56:393 (1) - 会断……所以把slider拉直一些吧~明显能看出来slider扭过``自己打图的时候就应该在扭的地方稍微停一停``这属于读图问题``不改

[Easy]
00:52:499 (1,2,3,4) - 整体右上一格fixed
00:58:760 (1) - 这个形状也很诡异,完全可以跟00:57:194 (3,4) - 成三角,又包住01:00:325 (2) - fixed
02:00:644 (4) - 弧度大一些fixed

总体上感觉hardy真的很精致~Insane手感不错~
Selee
Middleisland绝赞 =w=
做的不错 加油咯

我可不可以不去上课了 233
12:23 *Lan wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/165554 MiddleIsland - Vision]
12:23 Lan wings: 打打看``
12:23 Selee: ~
12:23 Lan wings: I难度和N难度
12:23 Selee: 下载中
12:23 Lan wings: N难度算是我这段时间来自认为做的最好的图了
12:24 Selee: 嗯
12:24 Lan wings: 包括音效
12:24 Selee: N难度么
12:25 Lan wings: 嗯
12:26 Selee: 这段
12:26 Selee: 用BIOS里面的定音鼓呗
12:27 Selee: 那个..
12:27 Selee: 等下
12:27 Lan wings: 啥来的
12:27 Selee: Normal-finish换一下试试
12:27 Lan wings: ?
12:27 Selee: 我试试=w=
12:28 Lan wings: bios里的哪个音效
12:28 Selee: =w= 貌似不错
12:28 Lan wings: 哪个0.0
12:29 Selee: soft-finish1
12:29 Selee: 你改成 normal-finish加进你的
12:29 Lan wings: 哦
12:29 Selee: 听了一下 还有个意见
12:29 Lan wings: 那个底鼓会不会太大声`在I里
12:29 Selee: 00:25:629 这段 建议音量再低点 尤其是那个铃铛
12:30 Selee: soft-finish
12:30 Selee: 声音大了点
12:30 Lan wings: soft-finish要调小音量吗?
12:30 Selee: 20%感觉不错
12:30 Selee: 前面这段钢琴感觉还是小点音量比较好
12:31 Selee: 00:25:629 这里的线改20% imo
12:31 Lan wings: 改了
12:31 Selee: 你听鼓了么
12:32 Lan wings: 听了
12:32 Selee: 感觉呢
12:32 Lan wings: 01:38:854 (1) -
12:32 Lan wings: 你这里开始听听看
12:32 Selee: 嗯啊
12:33 Lan wings: 你听有没问题
12:33 Selee: 之后没啥问题的感觉 之前有点
12:33 Lan wings: 换了之后没问题么
12:33 Selee: 嘛 我觉得挺合适的 本来就高潮部分
12:33 Selee: 他也有配鼓
12:34 Lan wings: 不知道是不是我耳机问题
12:34 Selee: 咋了
12:34 Lan wings: 感觉有点太吵0.0
12:34 Selee: ._. 我还觉得很给力呢
12:34 Selee: 无所谓你咯
12:34 Selee: kiai就这感觉
12:34 Lan wings: 应该说那个鼓的回音
12:34 Selee: 假如我是编曲的话我都会加上这个鼓 lol
12:35 Lan wings: 那个鼓很大的杂音
12:35 Selee: 嗯 就是回音啊
12:35 Selee: 感觉很好啊
12:35 Lan wings: 莫非是我耳机问题么0.0
12:35 Selee: 或许我耳机质量太好? xD
12:35 Lan wings: 还是和监听耳机有关
12:37 Lan wings: I难度我感觉那个鼓好像有点太大声?
12:38 Selee: 00:39:977 (3) - 有种该拉长到红线的感觉
12:38 Selee: 或者把尾巴静音掉吧
12:38 Selee: 连着两下有点不舒服
12:38 Selee: 我觉得吧
12:39 Selee: 高潮这段就是给人比较震撼的感觉
12:39 Lan wings: 我已经听不出来有两下了
12:39 Selee: 定音鼓就有这样的效果..于是我还是觉得挺合适的
12:39 Lan wings: 那hitnormal呢
12:39 Selee: 其他感觉都挺合的
12:39 Selee: 嗯 感觉不错
12:41 Selee: hardy无kiai?
12:41 Selee: w/e.
12:41 Lan wings: 咦
12:41 Lan wings: 他又弄不见了
12:41 Selee: ._.
12:41 Selee: 这无所谓
12:42 Lan wings: 没删红线就好
12:43 Lan wings: 刚开始做的时候他删绿线把红线也给删了0.0
12:43 Lan wings: 诶``求post
12:44 Lan wings: 挂个irc什么的=w=
12:44 Lan wings: 骗SP
12:45 Selee: 嗯..
12:45 Selee: 咋save来着的
12:45 Lan wings: 现在给别人kd自己会sp+1
12:45 Lan wings: log
12:45 Lan wings: savelog
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Selee wrote:

Middleisland绝赞 =w=
做的不错 加油咯

我可不可以不去上课了 233
12:23 *Lan wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/165554 MiddleIsland - Vision]
12:23 Lan wings: 打打看``
12:23 Selee: ~
12:23 Lan wings: I难度和N难度
12:23 Selee: 下载中
12:23 Lan wings: N难度算是我这段时间来自认为做的最好的图了
12:24 Selee: 嗯
12:24 Lan wings: 包括音效
12:24 Selee: N难度么
12:25 Lan wings: 嗯
12:26 Selee: 这段
12:26 Selee: 用BIOS里面的定音鼓呗
12:27 Selee: 那个..
12:27 Selee: 等下
12:27 Lan wings: 啥来的
12:27 Selee: Normal-finish换一下试试
12:27 Lan wings: ?
12:27 Selee: 我试试=w=
12:28 Lan wings: bios里的哪个音效
12:28 Selee: =w= 貌似不错
12:28 Lan wings: 哪个0.0
12:29 Selee: soft-finish1
12:29 Selee: 你改成 normal-finish加进你的
12:29 Lan wings: 哦
12:29 Selee: 听了一下 还有个意见
12:29 Lan wings: 那个底鼓会不会太大声`在I里
12:29 Selee: 00:25:629 这段 建议音量再低点 尤其是那个铃铛
12:30 Selee: soft-finish
12:30 Selee: 声音大了点
12:30 Lan wings: soft-finish要调小音量吗?
12:30 Selee: 20%感觉不错
12:30 Selee: 前面这段钢琴感觉还是小点音量比较好
12:31 Selee: 00:25:629 这里的线改20% imo
12:31 Lan wings: 改了
12:31 Selee: 你听鼓了么
12:32 Lan wings: 听了
12:32 Selee: 感觉呢
12:32 Lan wings: 01:38:854 (1) -
12:32 Lan wings: 你这里开始听听看
12:32 Selee: 嗯啊
12:33 Lan wings: 你听有没问题
12:33 Selee: 之后没啥问题的感觉 之前有点
12:33 Lan wings: 换了之后没问题么
12:33 Selee: 嘛 我觉得挺合适的 本来就高潮部分
12:33 Selee: 他也有配鼓
12:34 Lan wings: 不知道是不是我耳机问题
12:34 Selee: 咋了
12:34 Lan wings: 感觉有点太吵0.0
12:34 Selee: ._. 我还觉得很给力呢
12:34 Selee: 无所谓你咯
12:34 Selee: kiai就这感觉
12:34 Lan wings: 应该说那个鼓的回音
12:34 Selee: 假如我是编曲的话我都会加上这个鼓 lol
12:35 Lan wings: 那个鼓很大的杂音
12:35 Selee: 嗯 就是回音啊
12:35 Selee: 感觉很好啊
12:35 Lan wings: 莫非是我耳机问题么0.0
12:35 Selee: 或许我耳机质量太好? xD
12:35 Lan wings: 还是和监听耳机有关
12:37 Lan wings: I难度我感觉那个鼓好像有点太大声?
12:38 Selee: 00:39:977 (3) - 有种该拉长到红线的感觉
12:38 Selee: 或者把尾巴静音掉吧
12:38 Selee: 连着两下有点不舒服
12:38 Selee: 我觉得吧
12:39 Selee: 高潮这段就是给人比较震撼的感觉
12:39 Lan wings: 我已经听不出来有两下了
12:39 Selee: 定音鼓就有这样的效果..于是我还是觉得挺合适的
12:39 Lan wings: 那hitnormal呢
12:39 Selee: 其他感觉都挺合的
12:39 Selee: 嗯 感觉不错
12:41 Selee: hardy无kiai?
12:41 Selee: w/e.
12:41 Lan wings: 咦
12:41 Lan wings: 他又弄不见了
12:41 Selee: ._.
12:41 Selee: 这无所谓
12:42 Lan wings: 没删红线就好
12:43 Lan wings: 刚开始做的时候他删绿线把红线也给删了0.0
12:43 Lan wings: 诶``求post
12:44 Lan wings: 挂个irc什么的=w=
12:44 Lan wings: 骗SP
12:45 Selee: 嗯..
12:45 Selee: 咋save来着的
12:45 Lan wings: 现在给别人kd自己会sp+1
12:45 Lan wings: log
12:45 Lan wings: savelog
快逃课=w=
wantuole
路过~
mark and star
Topic Starter
Lan wings

wantuole wrote:

路过~
mark and star
谢星星>.<
Flower
irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住,因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)

[E]
00:32:151 (1) -
00:45:716 (3) -
01:34:391 (2) -

[N]
00:27:455 (1) - 朝右上挪一小格 好看些
00:31:107 (5,6) - 同不是很好看
00:55:629 (1) -
01:26:303 (4,1) - 不是很好看?
01:51:593 (3) - ^

[H]
00:26:673 (5) -

[I]
01:28:328 (1) -
02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧形排得更好看些
Scorpiour
Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]
  1. 一般来说同一个人的diff最好kiai一致吧……检查下你的Easy
[Easy]
  1. 00:39:977 (1) - 好像有一点点……奇怪…………要是我的话会顺着音乐把它放在下面……so……试试这个造型?
  2. 01:14:412 (1) - (nazi)感觉做对称了会好看一点?
  3. 01:23:803 (6) - 这里可以考虑放个NC,否则的话这个combo有点太长了
  4. 01:25:303 (8) - (nazi)依然是形状……要把blanket做好一点嘛?
  5. 01:29:853 (3) - 这里的whistle可以放到slider body上,比在尾巴上效果要好
  6. 01:44:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的话,我倾向于在每一组的2和3上加上clap来强化圆舞曲的节奏~
  7. 01:49:176 (4) - 这里whistle放在尾巴我觉得不如放在下一个slider的head以及body上
[Normal]
  1. 01:13:368 (1) - slider body上可以放whistle
  2. 01:17:542 (1) - ^
  3. 01:19:107 (4) - ^
  4. 01:20:672 (1) - ^
  5. 01:23:803 (1) - ^
  6. 01:26:803 (1) - ^
  7. 01:38:854 (1) - ^
  8. 01:43:317 (6) - ^
  9. 01:47:718 (1) - ^
  10. 01:54:953 (6) - ^
[Hardy]
  1. 00:31:629 (2) - 有点confusing的spacing... >: 我觉得和(1)的尾巴叠一下也许反而会更好一点?
  2. 00:56:673 (2) - ^
  3. 01:31:379 (3) - 这里建议可以做成一个1/6的折返,起点位置不用动stack就很好
  4. 01:34:391 (4) - ^
  5. 01:47:718 (1) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:064 (4) - 试试放到256:44?因为是个高音所以放在屏幕上方的一个1/1跳似乎也不错呢
  2. 01:00:846 (5,6) - 这里节奏总听着有点奇怪…………仔细听了一下发现是因为01:01:107 - 有一个重音……所以我建议是可以考虑把(5)总长度做成4次(折返3次),然后从01:01:107 - 这里开始下一个kick slider,另外如果01:01:107 (6) - 放过来的话可以做成一个1/6的kick slider,也是总共4次
差不多就这些了~~star & good luck~~
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Flower wrote:

irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住,因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)

[E]
00:32:151 (1) - 稍微超了点边``我转一下吧
00:45:716 (3) - 不出网格就不改了
01:34:391 (2) - 也是转一下

[N]
00:27:455 (1) - 朝右上挪一小格 好看些fixed
00:31:107 (5,6) - 同不是很好看这是为Hardy难度做预防的排法``
00:55:629 (1) - fixed
01:26:303 (4,1) - 不是很好看?keep
01:51:593 (3) - ^keep

[I]
01:28:328 (1) - 只是擦一点网格无视
02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧形排得更好看些这是一个带有一点尖锐的弧形``旋转一下角度后是上下对称的

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]
  1. 一般来说同一个人的diff最好kiai一致吧……检查下你的Easy哭了这kiai怎么少了一截
[Easy]
  1. 00:39:977 (1) - 好像有一点点……奇怪…………要是我的话会顺着音乐把它放在下面……so……试试这个造型?好!
  2. 01:14:412 (1) - (nazi)感觉做对称了会好看一点?跟这个对称?01:15:977 (3) -
  3. 01:23:803 (6) - 这里可以考虑放个NC,否则的话这个combo有点太长了如果这里加我前面这里也得加了01:17:542 (1) -
  4. 01:25:303 (8) - (nazi)依然是形状……要把blanket做好一点嘛?不够弯?感觉差不多了啊http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/444536看approach
  5. 01:29:853 (3) - 这里的whistle可以放到slider body上,比在尾巴上效果要好尾巴的whistle我就不去掉了``那个高音还是要用到的
  6. 01:44:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的话,我倾向于在每一组的2和3上加上clap来强化圆舞曲的节奏~
  7. 01:49:176 (4) - 这里whistle放在尾巴我觉得不如放在下一个slider的head以及body上放后面不好听``我直接删掉吧
[Normal]
  1. 01:13:368 (1) - slider body上可以放whistlewhistle本来只是想作为一个点缀``加多了不好``你说了就加吧
  2. 01:17:542 (1) - ^这个加了后神了01:17:803 - 这条绿线=w=
  3. 01:19:107 (4) - ^这里我想突出定音鼓``所以不改了
  4. 01:20:672 (1) - ^fixed
  5. 01:23:803 (1) - ^这里我想突出定音鼓``所以不改了
  6. 01:26:803 (1) - ^这里不放``01:26:303 (4) - 倒是这里可以放一个
  7. 01:38:854 (1) - ^不放
  8. 01:43:317 (6) - ^不放
  9. 01:47:718 (1) - ^不放
  10. 01:54:953 (6) - ^这个音量比较难搞``
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:064 (4) - 试试放到256:44?因为是个高音所以放在屏幕上方的一个1/1跳似乎也不错呢可以
  2. 01:00:846 (5,6) - 这里节奏总听着有点奇怪…………仔细听了一下发现是因为01:01:107 - 有一个重音……所以我建议是可以考虑把(5)总长度做成4次(折返3次),然后从01:01:107 - 这里开始下一个kick slider,另外如果01:01:107 (6) - 放过来的话可以做成一个1/6的kick slider,也是总共4次节奏是摆了``但是排列该怎么摆好呢```
差不多就这些了~~star & good luck~~
-Baby Strawberry-

Flower wrote:

irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住,因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)


[H]
00:26:673 (5) - 这个应该还好吧。。。我这里看好像没有盖到。。。

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]


[Hardy]
  1. 00:31:629 (2) - 有点confusing的spacing... >: 我觉得和(1)的尾巴叠一下也许反而会更好一点?
  2. 00:56:673 (2) - ^ 其实我还是觉得这样还可以。。。要不然除了叠就是等距没什么意思,毕竟是hard了嘛~
  3. 01:31:379 (3) - 这里建议可以做成一个1/6的折返,起点位置不用动stack就很好
  4. 01:34:391 (4) - ^
  5. 01:47:718 (1) - ^ 嗯我觉得这个好听,fixed~!


差不多就这些了~~star & good luck~~
谢谢大家mod~!更新咯
wantuole
[General]
nothing
[Easy]
01:05:020 (1) - 延续 01:01:890 (1,2) 的旋转梗。
01:24:803 (2,3) - ctrl+h对称01:21:194 (2,3) ,故意向左移了一点 感觉3→1距离有点近
01:41:829 (1) - 太贴近4了 像01:39:350 (2,3) 这样摆设
01:56:393 (1) - 不美观 太长的画条中间的红点转折太容易看清楚. 红点移动到正中间
02:00:644 (4) - 重音 这个要更佳力度点的摆设 旋转-90° 往上升的方向。
[nor]
nothing
[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧,太多东西挤着角落
[Insane]
ar-1?用note和短slider组成的梗显得有些空洞了。不如hady的slider梗好。当然减少ar只是个人看法。

就这些了 祝你好运
kosiga
Hi~ Lan wings =v=

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 01:12:846 (4) - I recommend NC pattern: 01:12:846 (4) - add NC and 01:13:368 (1) - remove NC. If do not change, 01:11:281 (3) - I want here NC ( 01:08:151 (1,1) - same NC pattern) :P
  2. 01:39:350 (2) - I suggest that you put a curved slider. for ex: http://puu.sh/194WT i think this improves a flow more
    148,280,99350,2,2,B|201:318|262:299,1,120,0|0
  3. 01:41:829 (1) - one grid up. It looks slightly tight
[Normal]
  1. 01:05:542 (5,6) - 1/3 kick slider and then 1/2 note. I thought this was a little difficult in normal. so i suggest 01:06:325 (6) - remove note. There is not the sense of incongruity even if I do not put this :P
  2. 01:13:368 (1) - Is greater than the sound of your other diff lol. 01:13:107 (green line) - use N:C1 is better ?
  3. 01:20:412 - Unnecessary green line
  4. 01:26:675 - ^
  5. 01:27:819 (2,3,4) - better to align the width. http://puu.sh/19ndE ( need to follow the note after ) i suggest form:↓
    SPOILER
    204,336,86803,6,0,B|248:392|324:380|348:328|348:328|432:312,1,225,4|0
    488,304,87819,2,0,B|444:128,1,150
    376,208,88582,2,0,B|332:32,1,150,0|4
    248,56,89345,2,2,B|267:128,1,75,0|0
    284,216,89853,6,0,B|224:220|188:168|188:168|160:204,1,150,4|0
    112,272,90616,2,0,B|32:272,2,75
    200,288,91379,2,2,B|268:312|332:292|332:292|348:296,1,150,4|0
  6. 01:37:862 (4) - i prefer suggestion of the form :D : http://puu.sh/19nh7 ( 01:36:870 (3) - use copy. )
  7. 01:39:846 (2,3) - DS is different from other(0.9x). This is intentional o.o?
  8. 01:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly crooked star form. try like this: http://puu.sh/19nvb
    SPOILER
    154,187,101829,5,12
    214,119,102077,1,0
    295,157,102325,1,0
    285,246,102573,1,8
    196,264,102821,1,0
  9. 01:44:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider end point. It is because across the Timing Point(redline). It is necessary to change rhythm :( so i suggest: remove repeat. and add slider to 01:45:046~01:45:289.
  10. 01:56:153 - Unnecessary green line
[Hardy]
  1. 01:26:553 (4) - i prefer move note to 01:26:303 rhythm. :D If you do not want to change it, add NC and 01:26:803 (1) - remove NC is better. ( It is already the next rhythm. )
  2. 01:34:639 (5) - You are always using the SV0.75x in this pattern. So I felt some sense of incongruity o.o
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:368 (2) - 00:31:629 (3,1) - I prefer a rhythm similar to here. so move to 00:31:499. and 00:31:368 (2,3,1) - use similar DS. ( 00:31:629 (3,1) - Current DS, I feel a little far :? )
  2. 00:36:586 (1,2) - grid move to x264,y288. http://puu.sh/19nYY when played, complete stack here does not have flows so well.
  3. 01:14:542 - Unnecessary green line
  4. 01:24:803 (6) - add NC and 01:25:053 (1) - remove NC. Probably this will be intentional. but I do not like the look :P
good :3 star☆~

Good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
Lan wings

wantuole wrote:

[General]
nothing
[Easy]
01:05:020 (1) - 延续 01:01:890 (1,2) 的旋转梗。fixed
01:24:803 (2,3) - ctrl+h对称01:21:194 (2,3) ,故意向左移了一点 感觉3→1距离有点近fixed
01:41:829 (1) - 太贴近4了 像01:39:350 (2,3) 这样摆设fixed
01:56:393 (1) - 不美观 太长的画条中间的红点转折太容易看清楚. 红点移动到正中间fixed
02:00:644 (4) - 重音 这个要更佳力度点的摆设 旋转-90° 往上升的方向。fixed
[nor]
nothing
[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧,太多东西挤着角落
[Insane]
ar-1?用note和短slider组成的梗显得有些空洞了。不如hady的slider梗好。当然减少ar只是个人看法。AR不减``至于你说的长短slider``低难度当然应该用长slider``高难度用长slider是属于浪费节奏的行为``我的节奏观念是能用上的节奏就一定会用上``抱歉

就这些了 祝你好运

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Lan wings =v=

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 01:12:846 (4) - I recommend NC pattern: 01:12:846 (4) - add NC and 01:13:368 (1) - remove NC.fixed If do not change, 01:11:281 (3) - I want here NC ( 01:08:151 (1,1) - same NC pattern) :P
  2. 01:39:350 (2) - I suggest that you put a curved slider. for ex: http://puu.sh/194WT i think this improves a flow morefixed
    148,280,99350,2,2,B|201:318|262:299,1,120,0|0
  3. 01:41:829 (1) - one grid up. It looks slightly tightfixed
[Normal]
  1. 01:05:542 (5,6) - 1/3 kick slider and then 1/2 note. I thought this was a little difficult in normal. so i suggest 01:06:325 (6) - remove note. There is not the sense of incongruity even if I do not put this :P fixed
  2. 01:13:368 (1) - Is greater than the sound of your other diff lol. 01:13:107 (green line) - use N:C1 is better ?Normal's hitsound is a new attempt``so different from the other diff
  3. 01:20:412 - Unnecessary green line01:20:672 - del here and volume+20%
  4. 01:26:675 - ^This is not unnecessary
  5. 01:27:819 (2,3,4) - better to align the width. http://puu.sh/19ndE ( need to follow the note after ) i suggest form:↓fixed
    SPOILER
    204,336,86803,6,0,B|248:392|324:380|348:328|348:328|432:312,1,225,4|0
    488,304,87819,2,0,B|444:128,1,150
    376,208,88582,2,0,B|332:32,1,150,0|4
    248,56,89345,2,2,B|267:128,1,75,0|0
    284,216,89853,6,0,B|224:220|188:168|188:168|160:204,1,150,4|0
    112,272,90616,2,0,B|32:272,2,75
    200,288,91379,2,2,B|268:312|332:292|332:292|348:296,1,150,4|0
  6. 01:37:862 (4) - i prefer suggestion of the form :D : http://puu.sh/19nh7 ( 01:36:870 (3) - use copy. )fixed
  7. 01:39:846 (2,3) - DS is different from other(0.9x). This is intentional o.o?Not intentional
  8. 01:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly crooked star form. try like this: http://puu.sh/19nvb
    SPOILER
    154,187,101829,5,12
    214,119,102077,1,0
    295,157,102325,1,0
    285,246,102573,1,8
    196,264,102821,1,0
  9. 01:44:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider end point. It is because across the Timing Point(redline). It is necessary to change rhythm :( so i suggest: remove repeat. and add slider to 01:45:046~01:45:289.fixedhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/445996
  10. 01:56:153 - Unnecessary green lineThis is not unnecessary
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:368 (2) - 00:31:629 (3,1) - I prefer a rhythm similar to here. so move to 00:31:499. and 00:31:368 (2,3,1) - use similar DS. ( 00:31:629 (3,1) - Current DS, I feel a little far :? )fixed
  2. 00:36:586 (1,2) - grid move to x264,y288. http://puu.sh/19nYY when played, complete stack here does not have flows so well. fixed
  3. 01:14:542 - Unnecessary green linefixed
  4. 01:24:803 (6) - add NC and 01:25:053 (1) - remove NC. Probably this will be intentional. but I do not like the look :Pok:<
good :3 star☆~

Good luck~ ;)
-Baby Strawberry-

wantuole wrote:

[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧,太多东西挤着角落 诶。。我没太明白这是怎么个改法。。。

就这些了 祝你好运

kosiga wrote:

[Hardy]
  1. 01:26:553 (4) - i prefer move note to 01:26:303 rhythm. :D If you do not want to change it, add NC and 01:26:803 (1) - remove NC is better. ( It is already the next rhythm. ) i didn't change this, i think i should be fine>~<
  2. 01:34:639 (5) - You are always using the SV0.75x in this pattern. So I felt some sense of incongruity o.o true, changed!~
good :3 star☆~

Good luck~ ;)
thanks for all the moddings~!

http://puu.sh/19XtM
我觉得差不多可以找mat了>~<
LKs
hi

[general]

关了letterbox

hardy难度的kiai Starts on 01:14:933 改成 Starts on 01:14:412

既然写了piano和violin那么可以多写点类似的东西方tags 比如orchestra

[Insane]

这个难度的artist和title是空的 请补上

00:32:499 (2,3,4) - 间距差有点明显
00:36:846 (2) - 00:46:238 (1) - 这两个slider如果想做blanket那么就还能再调整一下弧度
01:01:107 (6) - 好像听起来没错 但事实上那四个钢琴是1+3个1/8 不是1/6折返 怎么改看你了
01:20:672 (1) - slider有点歪
01:48:447 (1,2,3) -在kiai期间你的hitnormal音比较不明显但在这里突然又有了 这三个slider还好 01:49:662 (7) - 之后的这个slider的开头的默认hitnormal就显得有点违和

[Hardy]

00:37:368 (2) - 感觉结尾那个弧形(红点后的)有点太尖锐了 how about http://puu.sh/1dfQB
01:03:977 (5) - 这个以后说

[normal]

00:47:803 (3) - 反正就是不圆
01:54:953 (6) - ^
01:14:412 (1) - 这个也不太对称 你经常把node最后一个点放的太远 记住把那个node放在sliderend的中心就好做对称了 然后有红点的地方要保证红点和左右两点三点一线
02:00:644 (3) - ^
01:23:020 (4) - 这个就是典型的例子 node放的太远
01:35:879 (1) - 这个也是 调整node 后可以blanket的更好


[Easy]

01:54:953 (3) - 这blanket也有点不舒服 不用四点式吗
Topic Starter
Lan wings

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

关了letterboxfixed

hardy难度的kiai Starts on 01:14:933 改成 Starts on 01:14:412

既然写了piano和violin那么可以多写点类似的东西方tags 比如orchestra 不知道东西方tags都有啥``等你上了再问问你

[Insane]

这个难度的artist和title是空的 请补上更新后不知道为啥就变这样了皮皮三人日虫虫

00:32:499 (2,3,4) - 间距差有点明显fixed
00:36:846 (2) - 00:46:238 (1) - 这两个slider如果想做blanket那么就还能再调整一下弧度fixed
01:01:107 (6) - 好像听起来没错 但事实上那四个钢琴是1+3个1/8 不是1/6折返 怎么改看你了这里没跟钢琴呀``00:54:586 (3) - 类似这里的
01:20:672 (1) - slider有点歪歪?
01:48:447 (1,2,3) -在kiai期间你的hitnormal音比较不明显但在这里突然又有了 这三个slider还好 01:49:662 (7) - 之后的这个slider的开头的默认hitnormal就显得有点违和这个等你上线再跟你讨论``

[Hardy]

00:37:368 (2) - 感觉结尾那个弧形(红点后的)有点太尖锐了 how about http://puu.sh/1dfQB
01:03:977 (5) - 这个以后说

[normal]

00:47:803 (3) - 反正就是不圆这个我没要圆形啊``只是要个类似马蹄的形状而已0.0
01:54:953 (6) - ^^
01:14:412 (1) - 这个也不太对称 你经常把node最后一个点放的太远 记住把那个node放在sliderend的中心就好做对称了 然后有红点的地方要保证红点和左右两点三点一线唔``这个平时拉slider的时候都没怎么留意到``于是记住了``估计是拉中间的node的时候``后面的又弄的对不齐了
02:00:644 (3) - ^fixed
01:23:020 (4) - 这个就是典型的例子 node放的太远fixed
01:35:879 (1) - 这个也是 调整node 后可以blanket的更好fixed


[Easy]

01:54:953 (3) - 这blanket也有点不舒服 不用四点式吗修了下``
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