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Mikan

kosiga wrote:

Mikanさん こんにちは :)

thank you for the request :D

here my mod~

[General]
  1. 赤線はゲストに任せるのではなく、譜面作成者で全難易度合わせた方が親切かと思います。(変更した際のnote,緑線のresnapも同様に) ;) :arrow: ok!

[Mikan]
  1. 00:05:032 (3,4) - 場所を入れ替えた方が00:06:632 (5) の流れがスムーズに行くような気がします。 http://puu.sh/LRBq :arrow: fixed
  2. 00:18:472 (1) - remove NC and 00:18:825 (5) - add NC and 00:19:355 (1) - remove NC で良いと思います。 :arrow: no changeで>~<
  3. 00:19:355 (1) - 00:18:472 (1,2) - このへんと重ならないような配置にしてはどうですか? http://puu.sh/LRLL :arrow: fixed
    SPOILER
    296,216,19355,5,0
    205,292,19531,2,0,B|205:380,2,80,0|0|8
  4. 00:26:061 (7) - リピート部にclap? :arrow: fixed
  5. 00:26:590 (8,9) - 配置の提案: 重ねるよりは00:26:061 (7) - のslider endに対称で置いたほうが私的には良い感じ。 x104,y240の位置 :arrow: これでokかな?
  6. 00:29:413 (2) - 00:28:708 (1) - と対称にするなら x372,y328 :arrow: fixed
  7. 00:52:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 6,7,8くらいが無理矢理曲げてる感があるので、真っ直ぐ置いちゃった方が良いかも。 http://puu.sh/LS14 :arrow: fixed
    SPOILER
    384,136,52002,5,0
    360,168,52090,1,0
    336,200,52178,1,0
    312,232,52266,1,0
    288,264,52355,1,0
    264,296,52443,1,0
    240,328,52531,1,0
    216,360,52619,1,0
    184,336,52708,6,0,B|120:248|56:336,2,160,4|0|0
  8. 00:55:531 (2,3) - リピートスライダーではなく、普通のスライダー4個にしてジャンプ作るほうがヒットサウンドには合うかなと思います。 適当に置きましたが例えばこのように: http://puu.sh/LSbh (変更する場合は00:55:002 (1) - をremove NCして00:55:531からadd NC。00:54:472 (5) - の形を00:55:002 (6) - と同じに。 http://puu.sh/LS9c ) :arrow: no change
  9. 01:04:708 (1,2,3) - normalhitsoundだと元の音量大きいので、こういう何も音が無いところだと65%でも音が目立ちます。音量40%くらいにしてみては :arrow: fixed
  10. 01:13:884 (1) - slider end にclap? :arrow: fixed
  11. 01:15:119 (4) - endのfinishですが、normal 85%のfinishはここではあまりにも大きすぎると感じました。 :arrow: fixed
  12. 01:15:472 (5) - add clap ? :arrow: fixed
  13. 01:26:413 (4) - 01:15:119 (4)同様 :arrow: fixed
長いですが、Melophobiaさんの後なので細かいところばかりです @x@

mapはgood :oops: Star☆

頑張ってください~ :)
MOD,Starありがとうございます!
参考になりました! ;)
kajiyatta
thanks for moddings=
all fixed http://puu.sh/M2Sw
Piscis
Hi~

[General]
タグは全て小文字のほうがいいかも?

[Lace's Easy]
00:09:432 (1) - New combo?
00:27:296 (4) - ^
00:44:237 (1) - ^

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:09:432 (3) - ホイッスル追加
00:11:062 (1) - スライダーの最初と最後にホイッスル追加
00:28:355 (3) - スライダーの最初のフィニッシュ消してクラップ追加
00:28:708 (1) - フィニッシュ追加
00:29:413 (3) - ^
01:37:884 (1) - ^
01:38:414 (3) - ^

すくなくてごめんなさい~ :(
がんばってください!
kajiyatta

Piscis wrote:

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:09:432 (3) - ホイッスル追加 fixed
00:11:062 (1) - スライダーの最初と最後にホイッスル追加 fixed
00:28:355 (3) - スライダーの最初のフィニッシュ消してクラップ追加 fixed
00:28:708 (1) - フィニッシュ追加 fixed
00:29:413 (3) - ^ fixed
01:37:884 (1) - ^ clapのままでいいんじゃないかと finishは強いような気がする
01:38:414 (3) - ^^
thanks for modding~
http://puu.sh/MpvN
Topic Starter
Mikan

Piscis wrote:

Hi~

[General]
タグは全て小文字のほうがいいかも? :arrow: 小文字にしときました~


すくなくてごめんなさい~ :(
がんばってください!
MOD ありがとうございます~
Sktelecom T1
taiko diff 完成! よかったら使ってください!
http://puu.sh/N3mc
Topic Starter
Mikan

Restia wrote:

taiko diff 完成! よかったら使ってください!
http://puu.sh/N3mc
ありがとう :)
追加した!
Topic Starter
Mikan
update.
add restia's Taiko
re download plz
Sktelecom T1
Nice map Star!
KRZY

those wrote:

Also, nice to see KRZY mapping for a song from the the same visual novel http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27906 :o
Yeah I enjoyed this one ^^7



http://puu.sh/NkxA

Good mods

Thanks!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


Mikan

  1. In the beginning of the map, it's better to use soft sliders, like 00:33:825 (4,5,8) o.o
  2. 00:44:943 (3) - make symmetrical pattern here? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389053
  3. 00:49:531 (9) - I suggest that make a jump and remove the next note, to emphasize the vocal here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389054
  4. 00:52:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make some curve to the stream, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389055 I think it plays better
  5. 01:02:590 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ = ="
  6. 01:05:943 (2) - spacing
  7. 01:25:355 (1,2,3) - turning down volume in kiai sounds really weird to me = ="
Hard

  1. 00:17:943 (2) - I think this reverse arrow is hidden a little by the spinner complete message...
  2. 00:53:237 (2,3) - spacing use 1.4x
  3. 01:24:649 (7) - put down here I think looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389062
Normal

  1. imo the whistle sounds weird in the part 00:17:462 - 00:30:000. maybe replace with claps or find a better custom whistle?
  2. 00:43:884 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389067
  3. 01:02:590 (1) - add finish
  4. 01:08:237 (1) - no ._.
  5. 01:34:355 (3) - don't use whistle..
Easy

  1. 00:27:296 (4,1) - new combo on 4
  2. 01:33:649 (1) - you can do better make it look good o.o
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Mikan

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~


Mikan

  1. In the beginning of the map, it's better to use soft sliders, like 00:33:825 (4,5,8) o.o
  2. 00:44:943 (3) - make symmetrical pattern here? like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389053 :arrow: sorry no change.
  3. 00:49:531 (9) - I suggest that make a jump and remove the next note, to emphasize the vocal here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389054 :arrow: Hold
  4. 00:52:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make some curve to the stream, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389055 I think it plays better :arrow: I like the stream of the line
  5. 01:02:590 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ = =" :arrow: ^ ==
  6. 01:05:943 (2) - spacing :arrow: !..fixed :)
  7. 01:25:355 (1,2,3) - turning down volume in kiai sounds really weird to me = =" :arrow: Voice is a little small for


Good luck~
MOD thanks.
I'm sorry that no change at most :(
Suimya
Yahoooo ~ >w<


General:
Fine~ :3


Lace's Easy:
  1. 00:18:825 (1) - remove the NC here. it dont feel well to me > </
  2. 00:28:708 (1) - ^
  3. 00:34:708 (2) - it's feels empty so add a note here will be better o.o
  4. 00:41:414 (1,3) - switch the NC.so the combo stays at balance~
  5. 01:37:884 (1) - remove this NC ~

KRZY's Normal:
  1. 00:04:232 (6,1) - switch the NC. vocal stared at (6) not the (1) > <
  2. 00:22:884 (4) - maybe like this? the other one was not in good shape so yeah. don't forget to fix the spacing after that :3
  3. 01:05:061 (2) - remove the whistle on this one. two whistle dont fit here~ orz
  4. 01:18:825 (5,1) - just like this 00:04:232 (6,1) -
  5. 01:25:178 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:32:061 (4) - just like 00:22:884 (4) -

kajiyatta's Hard:
  1. 01:04:178 (2,3) - stacking is kinda boring so maybe do it like this?
  2. 01:16:266 (x) - it'll be better if you add a note here so it's fits with music > </
  3. 01:34:178 (2) - ^
Nice diff i liked it ><


Mikan:
Can't find anything >A</


That's all i can find > < Nice song and map ~ Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Mikan

-Sekai- wrote:

Yahoooo ~ >w< :arrow: Yahooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo


General:
Fine~ :3





Mikan:
Can't find anything >A</ wow!


That's all i can find > < Nice song and map ~ Good luck :3
Thank you for looking at the Map :)
kajiyatta
thanks for moddings~
some fixed http://puu.sh/ND1Y
Chewin
Hi there, mod request from my modding queue :3

[General]
You forgot to add "Restia" in the tags, add it
Inconsistency in red uninherited timing sections in the inaba's diff; you must set -2568 as 1st offset like the other diffs.

[Lace's Easy]
00:01:432 (2) - You should add whistle here, it's awesome
00:03:032 (3) - ^
00:12:662 (1) - I would reduce this spinner by 1/1 because it would follow the piano sound in this way. Moreover use a green timing section with 10% volume on the spinner's end
00:27:296 (4) - New combo to keep consistency and:
00:28:708 (1) - Remove NC here instead
00:44:237 (4) - New combo, always to keep consistency with 00:32:943 (1) that has got the same rhythm
00:49:884 (4) - ^
01:30:119 (3) - I would use a finish on this slider's end like you did for 01:33:649 (1) and 01:36:472 (3)

[KRZY's Normal]
00:17:414 (1,2,3) - What about to make them curved to keep a certain flow? Something like this http://puu.sh/NCV6
00:28:178 (3) - I would reduce this slider by 1/2 so you can use a finish on its end. The sound is better since I can hear a finish from the BGMusic too
00:39:472 (2) - ^
00:47:061 (1,2,3) - Select them and move to x:88 y:72, in this way they would be symmetric: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389261
00:51:649 (4) - Too loud finish and it sounds really bad in my opinion çç remove it
00:59:061 (2) - ^
01:02:590 (1) - Following the vocal it would be much better if you extend this spinner by 1/1 (adding a clap on it) and removing the circle 01:04:708 (1) since it would become too soon after the spinner, in this way the rhythm would fit really much better:

01:26:590 (2) - New combo
I like it, good job KRZY :3

[kajiyatta's Hard]
01:13:884 (1) - Overlap better with 01:12:472 (1) and make it more curved to create a blanket with 01:13:002 (2), something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389268
Awesome :3

[Mikan]
00:00:632 (1) - Remove whistle like the other diffs it's better
From here 00:17:414 you should use the custom hitclap hitsounds :\ These default soft hitclap are really too loud for this song
01:03:649 (1) - Remove New combo
01:22:002 (1) - ^
01:32:237 (9) - New combo
01:35:061 (8) - ^
This diff needs more work imho, but plz use custom hitclaps like the other diffs that are perfect with hitsounds çç

That's all! I wish you good luck >w<
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
all fixed and updated http://puu.sh/ND8J
Topic Starter
Mikan

Chewin wrote:

Hi there, mod request from my modding queue :3

[General]
You forgot to add "Restia" in the tags, add it :arrow: done
Inconsistency in red uninherited timing sections in the inaba's diff; you must set -2568 as 1st offset like the other diffs. :arrow: done~


[Mikan]
00:00:632 (1) - Remove whistle like the other diffs it's better :arrow: fixed
From here 00:17:414 you should use the custom hitclap hitsounds :\ These default soft hitclap are really too loud for this song
01:03:649 (1) - Remove New combo :arrow: sorry There is insistence no change.
01:22:002 (1) - ^ :arrow: sorry There is insistence no change.
01:32:237 (9) - New combo :arrow: fixed
01:35:061 (8) - ^ :arrow: fixed
This diff needs more work imho, but plz use custom hitclaps like the other diffs that are perfect with hitsounds çç

That's all! I wish you good luck >w<
MOD thanks~! :D
BrokenArrow
Just wanted to say that I skipped your mod request because I'm tired of this kind of songs.
Sorry, but still good luck =w=/
hibarirailwayz
Mikanさんから、Taiko mod 依頼~♪
あくまで提案ですので、あしからず。
kdは前回頂いていますので、どちらでも良いですw
[Restia's Taiko]
00:12:462 (1) - 音がほぼ無いので、削除した方がいいかも
00:31:531 - ③、④の音取りならここも必要
00:31:884 - ^
00:46:531 (3) - d(ドンの方が次のカッが目立ちます)
00:51:825 (2,1,1) - ddk(3番目にドラムが大きく入っているので)
00:56:237 (1,2,1) - dkd(次のKとの繋がりがいいと思います)
01:12:119 (3) - K(こっちの方が締まると思います。)
01:34:708 (4,5,6) - kdd(この辺がドンが密集して少しさびしいので。音取りとしてもいいと思います)
個人的には楽しかったですよ!
Sktelecom T1

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Mikanさんから、Taiko mod 依頼~♪
あくまで提案ですので、あしからず。
kdは前回頂いていますので、どちらでも良いですw
[Restia's Taiko]
00:12:462 (1) - 音がほぼ無いので、削除した方がいいかも fixed
00:31:531 - ③、④の音取りならここも必要 fixed
00:31:884 - ^ no changeで><
00:46:531 (3) - d(ドンの方が次のカッが目立ちます) no changeで><
00:51:825 (2,1,1) - ddk(3番目にドラムが大きく入っているので) no changeで><
00:56:237 (1,2,1) - dkd(次のKとの繋がりがいいと思います) fixed
01:12:119 (3) - K(こっちの方が締まると思います。) fixed
01:34:708 (4,5,6) - kdd(この辺がドンが密集して少しさびしいので。音取りとしてもいいと思います) fixed
個人的には楽しかったですよ!
非常に参考になるMODをありがとうございました!

updated.
http://puu.sh/NXdY
Lundlerol
Mikan's request
Taiko mod

[注意]
d=赤 k=青
D=大赤 K=大青

[Restia's Taiko]

00:18:825 (2) - D?
00:26:590 (3,1,1,2,1) -  ここを ddd k kkd にしてみては?
00:28:708 (2,3,4) - 3を消して2と4をDに変更
00:29:413 (1,2,3) - 2を消して1と3をKに変更
00:30:472 (1) -  kを追加(dでもok)
00:33:296 (1) -  kを追加(dでもok)
00:34:708 (1) -  kを追加
00:39:649 (1) -  Kを追加
00:39:825 (1) - Deleteして 00:40:002 (1,1,2) - d K K 00:40:708 (1,1) - DK
00:41:237 (2) - K追加
00:43:884 (5) - k追加
01:02:943 (2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  を 01:02:766 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - kkkkd kkk dkk 推奨←結構重要
01:04:002 (1,2,3) -  全てDに変更
01:12:472 (2) - から01:13:708 (1) - を kkd k d kdk d k はどうでしょうか?
01:15:384 -  d追加
01:29:061 (1) - kに変更
01:31:884 (2) - kに変更

多分これぐらいです。

[inaba's Taiko]
00:32:766 (9) - k?
00:32:766 (9) - ^
00:34:884 (16) - ^
00:35:237 (17) - ^
00:37:884 (27) - ^
00:37:884 (27) - add d notes?
00:37:884 (27) - add k notes?
00:37:884 (27) - ^
00:46:178 (10) - k?
00:46:178 (10) - ^
00:46:178 (10) - ^
00:57:649 (2) - d 微かに音が聞き取れるので。

inaba-tanの譜面で最初の方はdが多かったのでkを入れてみました。
個人的にはもうちょっとこの部分の音にも色があってもいいのでは?と思いました。



最後に。
※これらは自分なりの方法で変更した部分です。変更するかは貴方がた次第です。
Sktelecom T1

Lundlerol wrote:

[Restia's Taiko]

00:18:825 (2) - D? fixed
00:26:590 (3,1,1,2,1) -  ここを ddd k kkd にしてみては? fixed
00:28:708 (2,3,4) - 3を消して2と4をDに変更 もう一つの難易度と違いを持たせたかったためこのままで><
00:29:413 (1,2,3) - 2を消して1と3をKに変更 ^
00:30:472 (1) -  kを追加(dでもok) dを追加しました
00:33:296 (1) -  kを追加(dでもok) ^
00:34:708 (1) -  kを追加 fixed
00:39:649 (1) -  Kを追加 fixed
00:39:825 (1) - Deleteして 00:40:002 (1,1,2) - d K K 00:40:708 (1,1) - DK fixed
00:41:237 (2) - K追加 fixed
00:43:884 (5) - k追加 fixed
01:02:943 (2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  を 01:02:766 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2) - kkkkd kkk dkk 推奨←結構重要 ヒネリがほしい、難易度で違いがほしい、リズムが好きという理由でこのままにします><
01:04:002 (1,2,3) -  全てDに変更 ^
01:12:472 (2) - から01:13:708 (1) - を kkd k d kdk d k はどうでしょうか? fixed
01:15:384 -  d追加 fixed
01:29:061 (1) - kに変更 fixed
01:31:884 (2) - kに変更 fixed

多分これぐらいです。


最後に。
※これらは自分なりの方法で変更した部分です。変更するかは貴方がた次第です。

modありがとうございました!大変参考になりました~

01:02:943 (2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
これに関しては今後も同じような指摘を頂いた場合、推奨して頂いた音取りに変更しようと思います!

updated
http://puu.sh/O0tP
Topic Starter
Mikan
update.
KRZY
http://puu.sh/O7xD

Fixed some. Thanks!
Topic Starter
Mikan
update~~
KuronumaSawako
Mod requested in my queue.

Saa, let's go!

[General]


  1. Clear

[Easy]


  1. 00:22:355 (1): Remove clap here since there don't have clap sound here.
  1. 00:45:649 (2): Make slider like this?
    SPOILER

    304,320,45649,2,0,B|284:367|200:366|179:322,1,140,0|0
  1. 00:47:061 (1): Remove clap in slider end, for same reasons as 00:22:355.
  1. 00:55:884 (3): Add finish to follow the music.

[KRZY's Normal]


  1. Clear, like the way you used the sliders here.

[kajiyatta's Hard]


  1. 00:11:062 (1): Move slider second point to x:464 y:292.
  1. 00:13:062 (2,3,4): Make spacing like this?
    SPOILER

    480,138,13062,1,0
    430,88,13462,1,0
    364,68,13862,1,0

[Restia's Taiko]



[Mikan]


  1. 01:13:884 (1): Make slider look like this:
    SPOILER

    376,152,73884,6,0,B|448:152|448:100|448:100|448:28,1,160,4|8
    1. 01:28:002 (1): NC
    1. 01:28:531 (1): If you make the suggestion above, remove NC here.

That's all, good luck!
Sktelecom T1

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Mod requested in my queue.

Saa, let's go!


[Restia's Taiko]


  • :arrow: fixed


That's all, good luck!
thanks for your modding!
update http://puu.sh/OqXO
Topic Starter
Mikan

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Mod requested in my queue.

Saa, let's go!

[General]


  1. Clear


[Mikan]


  1. 01:13:884 (1): Make slider look like this: :arrow: ok~ code thanks!
    SPOILER

    376,152,73884,6,0,B|448:152|448:100|448:100|448:28,1,160,4|8
    1. 01:28:002 (1): NC
    :arrow: sorry no change
    1. 01:28:531 (1): If you make the suggestion above, remove NC here.
    :arrow: sorry no change

That's all, good luck!
mod thanks!
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
all fixed and updated http://puu.sh/OvEa
NewRulerNA
hi
recheck req

リチェックなので簡単なModのみ
If you can not understand Japanese, please send me forum-PM.
前も日本語でModしたから大丈夫だとは思いますが・・・

[General]
  1. なぜShort Ver.のこの譜面に動画を追加していないのでしょうか?
    私には既存のRank譜面同様に動画を入れない理由が思い浮かびません
[Lace's Easy]
  1. 00:00:632 ~ 00:11:862 - 私にはここのDistanceがあまりに近く、初心者にとってこのあとのBPM変動による実質的な距離の差が大きく感じられるように思いました
    これらの場所はDS1.3程度のもう少し間隔を広げた配置にしてみてはどうでしょうか
  2. 00:04:632 - 不必要な緑線
  3. 00:47:061 (1) - なぜこのスライダーの終点にclap?
    私にはこれが曲に合ったものでも、リズムから来たclapでも無く、浮いたclapとなっているように感じました

[KRZY's Normal]
  1. 00:17:414 (1,2,3) - 初心者にとってはこれが見難く思えてしまうかもしれません
    画像のようなより分かりやすい配置にしてみてはどうでしょう
  2. 00:51:649 (4,5) - このスライダーは2回目のターンが隠れてUnrankableです

[kajiyatta's Hard]
  1. 00:27:825 (2,3) - 私はこの2つのスライダーが一直線に完全に並んでいない配置が好きではありません
    00:28:355 (3) - 一直線に並べる位置的には2~3 grid right (Tiny)
    この触れる感じの配置が好きでないならば、(2,3)のスライダーの角度をより急にする必要があるでしょう
[inaba's Taiko]
  1. 00:10:232 (1) - 00:10:262の赤線の上にしっかり置き直しをしてください
[Restia's Taiko]
  1. fine
[Mikan]
  1. 私にはこの譜面はSlider Tick Rateを2にする必要性が感じられませんでした
    むしろこの難易度に関して言えば、slidertick.wavの音がこの曲にとって耳障りで、1への設定を私は推奨します
    他の難易度は全てゲスト難易度なので、統一面に関して特に気にする必要性はありません
  2. 全体を通してデフォルトのclap音が非常に煩く、曲に合った音量であるように思えませんでした
    70~60%程度に音量を落とすべきです
    もしくは他の難易度同様にカスタムのclap音を上手く使用するのでも構いません
  3. 00:25:178 (3) - この直線スライダーが譜面の流れの中において浮いているように思えます
    00:24:472 (1)のスライダーをコピペ、反転+角度調節したものを使ったほうが浮かずに済みます
  4. 00:26:943 (1,2) - (1)のスライダーの終点位置と(2)のスライダーの高さを揃える
    私は現在の配置が中途半端で、見た目的に良いとは思いませんでした
  5. 00:54:472 (5,1) - 両方共どちらかのスライダーの形に揃えるべきです
    この統一性の無さが私には見た目が良くなる配置であるとは思えません
  6. 01:02:061 (1) - このターン数の異なるキックスライダーが私にとっては00:58:002 (8)の影響でミスを引き起こす原因となるように感じました
    この音取りで行くならば単純にサークルを使用したStream
    もしくは3連打(サークル*2+1ターン 1/4スライダー)としたほうが譜面としては分かりやすさ、流れの自然さという意味ではよくなります
gl
Topic Starter
Mikan

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
recheck req

リチェックなので簡単なModのみ
If you can not understand Japanese, please send me forum-PM.
前も日本語でModしたから大丈夫だとは思いますが・・・

[General]
  1. なぜShort Ver.のこの譜面に動画を追加していないのでしょうか?
    私には既存のRank譜面同様に動画を入れない理由が思い浮かびません :arrow: 追加しました![/*:m:d5029]

[Mikan]
  1. 私にはこの譜面はSlider Tick Rateを2にする必要性が感じられませんでした
    むしろこの難易度に関して言えば、slidertick.wavの音がこの曲にとって耳障りで、1への設定を私は推奨します
    他の難易度は全てゲスト難易度なので、統一面に関して特に気にする必要性はありません
  2. 全体を通してデフォルトのclap音が非常に煩く、曲に合った音量であるように思えませんでした
    70~60%程度に音量を落とすべきです
    もしくは他の難易度同様にカスタムのclap音を上手く使用するのでも構いません
  3. 00:25:178 (3) - この直線スライダーが譜面の流れの中において浮いているように思えます
    00:24:472 (1)のスライダーをコピペ、反転+角度調節したものを使ったほうが浮かずに済みます
  4. 00:26:943 (1,2) - (1)のスライダーの終点位置と(2)のスライダーの高さを揃える
    私は現在の配置が中途半端で、見た目的に良いとは思いませんでした
  5. 00:54:472 (5,1) - 両方共どちらかのスライダーの形に揃えるべきです
    この統一性の無さが私には見た目が良くなる配置であるとは思えません
  6. 01:02:061 (1) - このターン数の異なるキックスライダーが私にとっては00:58:002 (8)の影響でミスを引き起こす原因となるように感じました
    この音取りで行くならば単純にサークルを使用したStream
    もしくは3連打(サークル*2+1ターン 1/4スライダー)としたほうが譜面としては分かりやすさ、流れの自然さという意味ではよくなります
:arrow: all fixed!
gl
リチェックありがとうございます!!! :)
Topic Starter
Mikan
Was added to the Video.
re Dl plz.
kajiyatta

NewRulerNA wrote:

[kajiyatta's Hard]
  1. 00:27:825 (2,3) - 私はこの2つのスライダーが一直線に完全に並んでいない配置が好きではありません
    00:28:355 (3) - 一直線に並べる位置的には2~3 grid right (Tiny)
    この触れる感じの配置が好きでないならば、(2,3)のスライダーの角度をより急にする必要があるでしょう
no fixedですが、他の方からも同様の指摘を受けた場合変更します。 thanks for modding~
wmfchris
- remove (short ver.) from the song name.
- I highly suggest you to find some timing experts, I feel like the first red section isn't that accurate, or the 1st and 2nd one can even be merged together...

[Restia's Taiko]
00:02:232 - while each phrases last 2 bars it sounds odd to make it denser every bar, so just add a note here.
01:02:766 - the 1/3 and 1/4 drums are totally away from the drums in the music (which sounds like xxxxx xxx...
01:04:708 - doesn't sound like this is an accent, remove finish
01:38:413 - refer to the music try dkk K kdk?

nice.

[inaba's Taiko]
not much to pick with

Both taiko has similar difficulties and idea behind streaming, so it'll be much better if you make one of them easier.
those

wmfchris wrote:

- remove (short ver.) from the song name.
p/1679546
Topic Starter
Mikan
[quote="wmfchris"]- remove (short ver.) from the song name.
- I highly suggest you to find some timing experts, I feel like the first red section isn't that accurate, or the 1st and 2nd one can even be merged together...

thanks~♪ :D
Nichiyouki


Hi, Mikan

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Artist: Duca
    Title: Futari Iro (Short Ver.)
    Comments same as wmfchris and those. I think that you remove it only topic name. Remove word red letters in-game, then when you fixed. Upload by full submission

Lace's Easy

  1. 00:20:237 (2) - Clap sound is strange. Remove it in slider repeat be better.
  2. 00:22:355 (1) - As well. Remove it be better.
  3. 01:29:414 (2) - ^

KRZY's Normal

  1. 00:51:649 (4) - Try make to no stack it, by considering notes such as 00:19:531 (2,3) -, 00:22:335 (2,3) -, etc.
  2. 00:52:002 (5) - In the Normal diff, don't suggest repeating of slider many times. May use 2 slider don't repeat be better.
  3. 01:27:825 (3,4) - It's hard for Normal diff. I suggest that remove (4), then make to slider end of (3) is end at 01:28:335 -. And if you fix it, don't forget move or fix the green line, too.

kajiyatta's Hard

  1. 00:17:062 - Add a green line by volume is 5%.
  2. 00:57:825 (5) - I heard something here. Add clap in slider begin.
  3. 01:15:472 (6) - ^

Mikan

  1. 00:01:432 (3,4) - I noticed a strange distance from the neighborhood. So should move (4) to down 1 grid, or if you want to make it more difficult. You may make it distance is farther.
  2. 00:06:632 (5) - Using slider 1/4 rhythm, then repeat it be better?
  3. 00:11:062 (7,8) - Reasons same as 00:01:432 (3,4) -. Perhaps, may move (7) to stack with slider begin of (8), and add NC when you're fix above recomment.
  4. 00:52:708 (1) - Add clap in slider repeat
  5. 00:53:766 (4) - Add clap in slider begin
  6. 00:59:590 (4) - The green line is overlap here. Remove green line 1 line.
  7. 01:37:531 (6) - Remove finish here

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Sktelecom T1

wmfchris wrote:

- remove (short ver.) from the song name.
- I highly suggest you to find some timing experts, I feel like the first red section isn't that accurate, or the 1st and 2nd one can even be merged together...

[Restia's Taiko]
00:02:232 - while each phrases last 2 bars it sounds odd to make it denser every bar, so just add a note here. fixed
01:02:766 - the 1/3 and 1/4 drums are totally away from the drums in the music (which sounds like xxxxx xxx... fixed(kkkkd kkk dkk)
01:04:708 - doesn't sound like this is an accent, remove finish fixed
01:38:413 - refer to the music try dkk K kdk? fixed

nice.


Both taiko has similar difficulties and idea behind streaming, so it'll be much better if you make one of them easier.
thanks for your mod!

01:02:766 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3) - this is an idea of Lundlerol, thanks

update http://puu.sh/PbTE
kajiyatta
all fixed=
thanks for modding~ http://puu.sh/PpLU
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