[General]
最初のoffsetを-2568に設定して下さい。メトロノームがズレているので現状のままだとunrankableです
[Easy]
00:00:632 - change the sample set into S:C1 to mute sliderslide
00:01:432 (2,3,1) - i prefer placing them like this for better flow
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380704
00:09:432 (1) - the end should be snapped at 00:10:262 -
00:18:825 (2) - add newcombo for change of melody?
00:38:590 (3) - this combo is quite long imo, add newcombo here?
00:41:414 (7,1) - switch these newcombo because of a downbeat
00:55:884 - the percussion here is stronger than others, so add a note here?
01:04:002 (3) - it'd be better to end this slider at 01:04:355 - instead. because there's no background music at 01:04:708 - so the end of slider shouldn't be there
01:09:649 (2) - missing clap (01:10:002 - )
01:24:472 (4) - i'd suggest a finish at 01:25:178 - since i can hear it in the music
[Normal]
00:17:414 (1,2) - add finishes at the beginning of both instead of clap? sounds nice to me
00:35:766 (1,2) - maybe spaci00:10:262 - ng is wrong, i could not find any reason to use a lower spacing here. please correct it~
01:11:061 (1,2,3,4) - kinda dislike these overlapping.. maybe it'd be better to avoid it
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380718
01:16:355 (6) - clap sounds better imo as you can hear the percussion is stronger than others
01:22:355 (1,2,3,4) - same as the previous one
01:27:825 (4) - i know you tried to follow vocal here, but i dont think it sounds that good. because there's the accent at 01:28:002 - and Kiai ends there. i think you should follow it
[Hard]
00:00:632 - sliderslideがちょっと煩いのでサンプルセットをカスタムの物に設定して下さい
00:09:432 (3) - 終点は00:10:262 - にsnapされてる必要があります~
00:13:062 (6,7,8) - うーん、このspacingの変更は音にも合ってないし見た目を損ねるだけだと思うのであまりオススメしません
00:17:943 (2) - 始点finish
00:28:355 (3) - ^
00:35:237 (7) - このnoteをもう少し↓に置くと流れがイイと思います
01:12:472 (1,2) - 1grid左に動かして(6,2)のspacingと(1,2)のspacingを同じ見た目にしてみては?
01:15:296 (5) - finish
01:37:178 (3) - 終点clap
[Insane]
00:28:708 (1,2) - repeat削除した方が曲に合うと思います
00:40:708 (6,7,8,9) - 超個人的な好みなんですが、音取りの提案...
00:46:531 (7) - 3連打に変更?00:43:708 (7,8,9) - が3連打なので... 音的にもよくなると思います
01:04:708 (1,2,3) - ここではdrumはなってないのでclap外した方がベターです。もし可能ならsoftのhitsoundでも良いと思います
01:27:296 - なんか突然softになってちょっと叩きにくかったです。音聞く感じNormalでも大丈夫だと思います
最初のoffsetを-2568に設定して下さい。メトロノームがズレているので現状のままだとunrankableです
[Easy]
00:00:632 - change the sample set into S:C1 to mute sliderslide
00:01:432 (2,3,1) - i prefer placing them like this for better flow
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380704
00:09:432 (1) - the end should be snapped at 00:10:262 -
00:18:825 (2) - add newcombo for change of melody?
00:38:590 (3) - this combo is quite long imo, add newcombo here?
00:41:414 (7,1) - switch these newcombo because of a downbeat
00:55:884 - the percussion here is stronger than others, so add a note here?
01:04:002 (3) - it'd be better to end this slider at 01:04:355 - instead. because there's no background music at 01:04:708 - so the end of slider shouldn't be there
01:09:649 (2) - missing clap (01:10:002 - )
01:24:472 (4) - i'd suggest a finish at 01:25:178 - since i can hear it in the music
[Normal]
00:17:414 (1,2) - add finishes at the beginning of both instead of clap? sounds nice to me
00:35:766 (1,2) - maybe spaci00:10:262 - ng is wrong, i could not find any reason to use a lower spacing here. please correct it~
01:11:061 (1,2,3,4) - kinda dislike these overlapping.. maybe it'd be better to avoid it
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380718
01:16:355 (6) - clap sounds better imo as you can hear the percussion is stronger than others
01:22:355 (1,2,3,4) - same as the previous one
01:27:825 (4) - i know you tried to follow vocal here, but i dont think it sounds that good. because there's the accent at 01:28:002 - and Kiai ends there. i think you should follow it
[Hard]
00:00:632 - sliderslideがちょっと煩いのでサンプルセットをカスタムの物に設定して下さい
00:09:432 (3) - 終点は00:10:262 - にsnapされてる必要があります~
00:13:062 (6,7,8) - うーん、このspacingの変更は音にも合ってないし見た目を損ねるだけだと思うのであまりオススメしません
00:17:943 (2) - 始点finish
00:28:355 (3) - ^
00:35:237 (7) - このnoteをもう少し↓に置くと流れがイイと思います
01:12:472 (1,2) - 1grid左に動かして(6,2)のspacingと(1,2)のspacingを同じ見た目にしてみては?
01:15:296 (5) - finish
01:37:178 (3) - 終点clap
[Insane]
00:28:708 (1,2) - repeat削除した方が曲に合うと思います
00:40:708 (6,7,8,9) - 超個人的な好みなんですが、音取りの提案...
00:46:531 (7) - 3連打に変更?00:43:708 (7,8,9) - が3連打なので... 音的にもよくなると思います
01:04:708 (1,2,3) - ここではdrumはなってないのでclap外した方がベターです。もし可能ならsoftのhitsoundでも良いと思います
01:27:296 - なんか突然softになってちょっと叩きにくかったです。音聞く感じNormalでも大丈夫だと思います