GeneralI don't understand why there is a lapse in alternating hitsounds in certain parts. I don't hear a change in beat, so why does it just stop?
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You have more than one .osb in the mapset.
Why is the featuring performer part of the title?
Easy/Frozen-LC - make audio-leadin exactly 1 second or 1000ms. Currently 993.
Taiko leadin (both) exactly 2 seconds or 2000 ms. Currently 1993.
EasyDrain +1?
01:06:020 - This point onward, you should turn grid snap off and try to make the spacings as close to 1.2 as you can. Currently they vary from 1.16 to 1.24. The spacing differences are notable while playing.
01:32:763 (2,1) - Spacing? Easy players might mishit here thinking they have to hit right away.
01:36:192 (5) - New combo. It doesn't need to go up to 8.
02:14:249 (1) - Moving to x 272 y 152 looks better IMO. It will line up with the end of this 02:11:849 (1) - and I felt there should have been a bit more distance from 02:13:392 (3) - . Fix the spacing after and it should work fine.
02:28:134 (6) - I recommend that you move back to the white tick. It plays a lot better there and avoids a 1/2th section.
02:30:706 (1) - Move to x 256 y 208 for the same reason as 2:14. It feels too close to a previous section.
02:44:420 (4,1) - Spacing?
02:45:792 (2,3,4) - I don't like this going straight down. Add a bend like you did in the other parts like this.
http://puu.sh/VltW02:52:306 (4,1,2) - Looks better straight.
Normal00:02:934 (2) - Symmetry looks off to me. Notice that the angle of the first and move point pairs are at different angles. These angles should be the same.
00:06:706 (3) - Not parallel with 00:08:420 (1,2) -
00:21:449 (4,1,2,3) - Randomly uses 1.5 snap. Please keep the snap the same.
00:22:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like how this sounds with all Normal hitsounds. Those red ticks sound weird.
00:33:106 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:420 (4,1,2,3) - Again don't do this.
00:37:221 (3,4) - Use the same angle?
00:39:964 (3,4) - ^
00:55:134 - Unneeded bookmark
00:57:792 (1) - Slider isn't going along with the slant of the square after it like the first slider was. You'll have to do a little more than just flip the square pattern over.
01:36:877 (2,3,4) - You should lower this part to get this effect.
http://puu.sh/Vm5E You should be able to adjust spacing after.
01:56:763 (4,5) - Use same angle?
02:11:849 (1,2,3) - Exactly 1.0
02:22:134 (4) - Slider could be better.
02:44:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds weird like 22 seconds.
02:53:677 (5) - I don't like this having 2 repeats. ._.
Vass-RJGreat difficulty!
00:00:192 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Exactly 1.3
00:15:620 (6,7,8) - Use exactly 1.7 snap. Also perhaps give 8 the same angle as 00:15:277 (5) -
00:16:306 (8,1) - 1.7 too?
00:27:106 - Don't skip over this sound please.
00:31:734 (1) - Sounds like it should end on the red tick to me. It would fix that awkward transition from 1/4th right after.
00:34:306 (4,5) - Nazi- Exactly 1.4
01:02:592 (5,6,7,8) - Stacking away from the pattern :/
01:09:106 (2,3,4) - Awkward. Use a similar snap.
01:39:792 - Add note?
02:03:277 (4,1) - 0.4 snap like the other transitions?
02:12:877 (4,5) - Stack better?
02:20:077 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - So very awesome.
02:26:592 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - <3
02:53:677 (4,5) - Bring spacing down to 2?
Frozen-LC01:17:334 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:18:706 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:23:849 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:24:191 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:01:220 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:02:592 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:07:734 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:08:077 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:706 (3,4,5) - I would much rather these be spaced similarly. 1.2 snap for both?
01:26:591 (1,2) - I have to reach so far to hit this :/
01:54:192 (2,3,4,5,6) - <3 love this so much.
01:59:163 (6,1,2) - Really awkward transition IMO.
02:09:106 (1) - maybe bending a bit more will look better.
02:13:392 (6,7,8) - stacking improperly.
02:14:249 (9,1) - Huge jump :/ It breaks flow being so large.
02:19:392 (8,9,10) - Looks better straight. And while you're add it make the spacing equal there.
ConclusionI love this mapset. I can't wait for this to be ranked.