lolcubes wrote:

[Vass-RJ]

1. 00:15:620 (6,7,8) - I don't like this because you have handled this far better later in the map. How about making a circle instead of the long slider, and then you use 2 short sliders with some spacing? It's more intuitive as well. But I like this rhythm. It plays well, I think.
2. 01:27:020 (2,3) - This is highly inappropriate for a hard diff (this is supposed to be hard, right?). It's difficult to read. You should remove the circle 2, there is absolutely nothing in the music there anyway. Try to reposition the 1 in the combo a bit further away as well, to create a "breather" the song implies. Vass don't want to fix it. And this mapped by rhythm so plays well too.
3. 01:31:049 (2) - This makes no sense because there is nothing to warrant the repeat part. Make it a normal slider ending at 01:31:220 please. Wha-? D: Look through Insane diff, there are such moments :< And I like 1/3 there..
4. 01:33:792 (2,3) - Same goes for these sliders as well. They are just not correctly snapped, that needs to be fixed. Same as above
5. 01:42:020 (2) - Same goes for this repeater and other repeaters in this section. Same~
6. 01:44:763 (2,3) - ^^ ^_^
7. 01:48:534 - You have a break time here, while you don't have a break time at 02:10:477 or 02:32:420. You should probably remove it because it's too short anyway. The arrows come to the screen before you even finish the last note, and that's not really good. Eh- B-but this arrows are cool... D:
8. 02:20:249 (2,4) - This is inappropriate because until now everything was really intuitive. A single repeater and then a 3-repeater afterwards, problems to read. I suggest that you convert the first repeater into a stack of 3 circles like you did at the beginning. This goes for all single repeaters that are paired with 3-repeaters all the way until the end of the song. What? There are MANY such moments in Hard and they are ok, aren't they?

Reiji-RJ wrote:

No changes, sorry..
Thank you for a mod!

TicClick wrote:

It all depends on drums. If they're on 3rd tick only, then it feels like bpm is twice as low, but you can listen to other sounds of a track and see that it doesn't need to be lowered. If drums are on 2nd and 4th ticks (wide-used set), everything is alright. But listen, there are sections in, like, half of all the dubstep songs, where drums start to appear two times often, and there's no speedup because bpm doesn't change at all, it's only drums. So I wouldn't suggest halving the BPM here.

Also, upload seems to be failed, I can neither play the map nor edit it.

lolcubes wrote:

Uh, what?
You do realize that red stuff is unrankable because it's snapped wrongly (except for that circle)?
Also why do you have one break there and you dont have them at other spots? That makes no sense...

Vass_Bass wrote:

there's just 1/3 sliders, why it need to be snapped?

lolcubes wrote:

Because the song is not 1/3. Like this sliders are incorrectly snapped.

lolcubes wrote:

[Frozen-LC]

1. 01:26:763 (2) - This slider makes 0 sense because there is nothing in the music here at all. Just remove it please. Feels strange to play as well cause it only creates a really awkward rhythm.
   
   That totally makes sense if you look closer.
   
2. 01:31:049 (2) - This is incorrect. The slider should end at 01:31:220. That's a blue tick once you change your bpm. The additional sound that is playing in the music is located on 01:31:306, so consider mapping that as well, instead of having a slider hovering between those 2 points.
   
   Incorrect? It's pretty hard to say if there is 1/3 in the song or not. But the point is, the player would hear exactly what I put there, if it's 1/3 the player would hear 1/3 and have fun with it. Look at Reiji and Vass, they do here 1/3 there, dont they? Afterall, you dont actually need to click 1/3!
   
3. 01:33:792 (2) - This and every other repeater here are incorrect as well. They should repeat at 01:33:963, however slider ends would be really bad then. You should try thinking of something else here, but that tick should be mapped correctly. See if you want to map the rest of the melody at 01:34:049 as well, however not really required, just a suggestion.
   
   Same.
   
4. 01:35:163 (6) - This repeater makes no sense at all. There is a distinct sound at 01:35:334 which should probably be mapped. Just make it a normal slider that sliders until that point because there is nothing in the music to be mapped until the next slider.
   
   Ok, this is like more major issue so I'll fix.
   
5. 01:42:020 (2) - Same applies here as the repeaters in the previous section.
   
   No.
   
6. 01:46:134 (6) - Same here as the previous slider 6, no repeat, fix the end so it lands on the correct tick please.
   
   Fixed.
   
7. 02:17:677 (2) - This jump is too sudden. Should lower the spacing. It's just too extreme. This map is possible to do on doubletime and on this spot its a guaranteed miss most of the time. It's unlikely that people would doubletime this due to AR9, however there are some extreme players who can do that.
   
   I'll wait till I get someone to DT this, otherwise I won't fix.

lolcubes wrote:

Fair enough. You will have to find another person to rebubble this then though.
No hard feelings but I don't want to approve of something I strongly disagree with.
Good luck.

nold_1702 wrote:

Then you should not pop it.

Sakura wrote:

However I listened to this song and this song really has no 1/3s anywhere, so if it really has 1/3s this map is unrankable as it's using the wrong snap.

nold_1702 wrote:

So,you should get a treatment for you ears.

nold_1702 wrote:

It is grateful to see an Alumni and a BAT undertake their responsibilities.

lolcubes wrote:

Recheck.

[Frozen-LC]
01:04:649 - Here you don't have a break, but you do have it just before the next chorus. To keep it consistent, add a break here. fixed
01:31:049 (2) - Still incorrectly snapped. :<fixed
02:10:477 - Would suggest adding a break here, since the pauses of a full half a measure had (or should have had) breaks before.fixed
02:32:420 - ^ fixed
Well to be honest, I am fine if you don't even have breaks on those spots, just make it consistent, which means either add them to those spots, or remove it from 01:48:534. I'd probably go with removing them myself. fixed

[Vass-RJ]
HPdrain +1? 4 seems low. fixed
02:54:363 (1) - I would say you are missing a finish here.fixed
Same thing about breaks, either use them, or don't use them. fixed

[Normal]
02:05:163 (3) - I believe you should have a whistle on the slider body as well.fixed
02:12:534 - I believe this should be a soft clap rather than a normal clap.fixed
02:34:477 - You have 75% volume here when you used 55% for the whole section kinda, use 55% here too? (same goes for the 65% volume that's right after it)fixed

[Easy]
00:04:992 (3) - Missing a clap.fixed
02:11:849 (1) - Should have a soft clap at the end rather than normal imo.fixed
02:19:734 (1) - You don't have this finish in your normal, consider removing it since it's offbeat.fixed
02:34:477 - This and the next timing section should be 55% volume if you ask me. Same deal like in normal pretty much.fixed

That's all. In hard and insane check how you want to sort your short breaks, I mean either add them everywhere or remove them from 01:48:534.

lolcubes wrote:

Eh, you removed the break at 01:48:534 now, and you added them everywhere else. Since you have breaks everywhere else now, add it here too.

[Easy]
02:34:820 - 55% volume please.

Fix and I rebubble.

lolcubes wrote:

This works.
Good luck!

xerapid wrote:

Is it just me or does the notes not match the beat of the song.?