Kotori
Good luck :3
- Unsnapped green timing point: 01:09:091
- 00:14:620 (1) - this slider place is looking a bit forcing blanketing next note. maybe, try this code?
228,324,14620,2,0,B|204:288|220:244,1,80,0|8
- 00:36:975 (1) - why not add finish sound in beginning) instead the whistle?
- 00:59:666 (1) - remove finish sound in the end? seems not fit with bg music
- 01:00:821 (3) - add whistle in beginning? the sound similar with next note (4)
- 01:22:936 (2) - shorter this slider 1/2 beat? seems at 01:23:705 is more fit than at white tick. and add finish in there too
- 01:27:359 (1) - add clap? I can hear a little sound like 'tak' in bg music 0.0
- Unsnapped green timing point: 01:09:091
- 00:18:513 (3) - add finish sound in beginning for cymbal sounder?
- 00:21:590 (1) - ^
- 00:24:667 (1) - ^ in the beginning and end
- 00:37:359 (2,3) - add whistle in the end? I think that fit with vocal :3
- 00:53:706 (1) - add finish ?
- 00:54:090 (2) - add clap in beginning and end? matching with bg music imo
- 00:56:782 (2) - add new combo? usually kiai time is starting with new combo for better effect
- 01:01:398 (2,4) - add finish sound? I can heard a little cymbal sounder in music >< or if you think that's too loud, use whistle is ok too
- 01:04:282 (1) - add clap in slider's beginning?
- 01:05:244 (2) - same with 01:01:398
- 01:05:821 (3) - ^ in the reverse
- 01:07:552 (3) - ^
- 01:09:090 (4) - same with 00:56:782
- 01:12:167 (2) - add finish in beginning too. similar reason with before about this ;3;
- 01:13:706 (1,2) - ^
- 01:15:821 (2) - nee, clap in the end is weird to hear. change it into whistle is more better imo
- 01:17:167 (2,3) - add whistle?
- 01:22:936 (1) - ^
- 01:24:282 (1) - I think...this new combo not really necessary. so remove it?
- 01:27:936 (3,4,5) - for (3) and (4) is better if add finish in slider's end? fit with the vocal >< and add too in (5) for cymbal sounder in bg music 0.0
- 01:31:398 (4,3,4) - similar think with above
- 01:33:321 (1) - and here, this new combo isn't necessary ><
- Unsnapped green timing points: 00:15:340 and 01:09:091
- 01:08:898 (5) - add clap? I can hear sound like 'tak' in here >< altough that's just a bit
- 01:18:129 (7) - eh.. stack this more properly? more clear to see if more tidy ;~;
- nice diff ;-;b
- Unsnapped green timing points: 01:38:910
- 00:14:907 (2) - uwoo unsnapped circle........snap it ! XD
- 00:35:244 (4,6) - add finish in beginning? not bad imo 'w'
- 00:41:398 (2,4) - ^
- 00:55:052 (5) - can increase the volume until 10% ~ 15%? too quiet when click this note ;-;
- 01:05:052 (6) - add clap in here for a little drum sound~
- 01:11:782 (2) - clap sound in wrong place, should in (3) for following the drum? in here is weird..
- 01:21:398 (1) - end this spinner at 01:23:705 ? then, add finish for cymbal sounder. I think this way much better o3o
- 01:24:667 (1) - add clap in the end for consistent hitsounding?
- 01:30:820 (x) - add an note in here with finish sound? I feel something missing in here ;~;
- 01:31:398 (2,4) - add finish in slider's beginning? 'w'
- 01:32:936 (1) - ^
Good luck :3