Jacob wrote:

[General]

• Since all of the difficulties name what the difficulty actually is except LL's diff, I think that it'd be appropriate to rename "LL's Difficulty" to "LL's Insane." The mapper will decide what to do here
• The kiais are inconsistent on LL's difficulty. (The ending of the first kiai is 1/2 second earlier than the other difficulties.) ^. And AFAIK it's allowed to do so.
• If possible, please find a way to implement a spinner into [Easy], [Normal], and [Hard]. No spinners means that a tie score can occur (especially on easy difficulties). Will see this later. Actyally,I don't want to add a spinner.
• Turn off letterboxing during breaks. It's unneeded because there aren't any breaks. Done

[Easy]

00:37:208 (6) - Remove whistle from the end of the slider. Done
01:21:278 (1) - Whistle at the head of the slider. Done
01:28:181 (6) - Remove whistle from the end of the slider. Done
01:29:774 (7) - NC No
01:31:367 (1) - Remove NC if the above suggestion is made.
01:33:491 (3) - NC No,sorry

[Normal]

01:21:278 (1) - Whistle at the head of the slider. Ok
01:29:243 (6) - Remove whistle, you didn't do it in the last kiai part. Done
01:33:491 (3) - NC No

[Hard]

• Tick rate 2. Done
01:29:243 (6) - Remove whistle Done

wmfchris wrote:

- untag "cave story"
(no kd)

btw I want to make a taiko diff : D

iMercurial wrote:

Special Queue o/

General

AIBat wrote:

Inconsistency on Kiai Time: http://puu.sh/p63y Like I said in the other mods,the mapper of the gd will decide this
Inconsistency on Combo Colours: http://puu.sh/p64O ^

Normal

00:05:880 (2) On Easy/Normal diffs, circles under sliders aren't allowed. AFAIK it's fine,but anyway I'll look on this later
00:38:270 (6) ^ ^
01:08:801 (2,3) ^ ^
01:29:243 (6) ^ ^

Well done.

aabc271 wrote:

Went to testplay your map just now, and I find the offset is earlier than it should be ~
Maybe you can try offset 55 ? Remember to resnap all notes after changing the offset
Good luck on your map
No need to kds this ~

1. 00:03:771 (1) - As your next (3) is centered already, maybe make this encircle (2) so it will somewhat emphasize the symmetry here?
2. 00:10:143 (2) - Hmm, I wonder, why the whistle stops here? The song is more or less the same with the song on (1)'s end, so I don't think stopping the whistle here is a good idea >_< - This suggestion applies to next parts like this
3. 00:15:984 (4,5,1) - I'm not a big fan of stacks on Easy diff, actually... But on this case, I'd rather stack (5) above (1), because stacking (4) above (5) will cause (3)'s path to be overlapped (uh, yes, basically (5) will also overlap (4) if stacked above (1), but at least the overlap will be less minor)
4. 00:23:948 (3) - (optional) As the previous (2) is basically a slider with a downward path, perhaps place this above (2) instead of below to give a slight variation here?
5. 00:29:789 (1,3) - Add finish? Basically, the synth sounds like 00:25:541 (1) here, it has a strong attacking sound - so a finish would be fitting~
6. 00:34:037 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) I do believe (2)'s flow can be improved by arranging these four in arc, perhaps like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:46:249 (1) - It's good to have a consistent clap every 2/1 here, but an exception comes on this 1/2 repeating slider imo - the synth isn't strong enough, so it's best to leave the slider's end unhitsounded imo...
8. 00:54:745 (1) - Same as above here (basically, my suggestion above applies for the next similar 1/2 repeating sliders - and, (optional) a slight curve leftward for this slider would be cute~
9. 01:11:205 (4) - Also here, add a slight curve downward on this so it will flow together with (3)?
10. 01:19:701 (5's end,2) - Basically same with what I've pointed for the previous chorus, add finish to add the "strike" effect?
11. 01:28:196 (6) - (optional) Create an elbow slider here? It's not that hard to create (add a bezier waypoint before the red one - it doesn't have to be perfectly elbowed), and it also gives a better flow with your previous (5)
12. 01:32:975 (2,3) - This stack in easy definitely can be stacked to get a better flow - putting (2) in x:420 y:128 and adjusting (3), for example, already gives a better flow for the ending~

1. 00:06:426 (1,2,3) - Hmm, why these three is arranged in a straight line? Moving (3) downward to form an arc (like you did before) isn't that hard, though~
2. 00:08:550 (1,2,3) - (optional) Hmm, I personally dislike this triangle here, won't be nice when it's played with DoubleTime mod imo. I prefer something moving here:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:939 (2) - As your next (1) is placed beneath, I prefer to put this on the top of (1,3) instead (instead of below) to avoid clustering xD
4. 00:14:391 (1,2,3) - Don't force symmetry too much on (1) here, especially with a straight slider (it won't build the correct flow to your next (2)) - a combination of bezier and linear waypoint like this flows better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:21:293 (1) - Place in x:460 y:260? This will make 00:19:701 (3)'s direction points out directly to this note (thus emphasizing your thunderbolt-shape pattern here)
6. 00:22:355 (3) - (optional) Instead of a direct straight slider, I think you can slightly curve this downward to let it flow together with your next (1)
7. 00:29:789 (7,3) - Put the new combos here, because it's downbeat? (not something really major though, your current NC-ing still looks tidy anyway :3)
8. 00:40:408 (1) - Err, do you really need the two finishes here? imo it's better to stick with the whistles because there's nothing strong from the music here (plus a finish fits only on 00:42:532 (1) around here imo)
9. 00:44:656 (1,2,3,4,1) - To make this part less random, I think it's better to let the symmetry comes on (3,4,1) instead of forcing (1) to be in the center - this can be done by moving (1) to x:488 y:160, (2) to x:440 y:256, and adjust (3) to (1)... (this will also create a tilted square formation on (3,1,2,3))
10. 00:49:966 (2) - I'm fine with the double clap here, but it's missing a whistle on its start... (quite weird because the music really fits for a whistle)
11. 00:58:462 (2) - Same as above
12. 01:01:116 (1,2,3) - (optional) Well, for me keeping up the symmetry isn't bad, but still it's better for me to continue the flow as following:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:17:046 (2) - To beautify this part, I think it's better to rotate this by ~48° clockwise and add a slight curve on (2) and (3)
14. 01:19:701 (5) - Again, I think you're too forcing symmetry here. For example, you can put this on x:380 y:316, make this encircle (4), and adjust (6) - it'll flow good this way imo~
15. 01:31:382 (1) - Same as what I said on the previous chorus, the double finish here sounds too loud imo...
16. 01:33:240 (x) - (optional) The music goes somewhat hectic here, add circle? xD

1. 00:07:754 (4,5,6) - Swap (4,5)'s position and put (6) below your previous (3)? Will play more natural like this imo~
2. 00:08:019 (5,6,1) - ...or perhaps you can delete (6) here and let (3,4,5) to be a jump with (5) stacked above (1)'s end, fits this part's atmosphere this way
3. 00:09:081 (3,4) - (optional) Add a slight curve (to an antagonistic direction) for both? xD
4. 00:13:860 (5,1,3) - This is just my thought, but I think it will flow better if these three isn't arranged in a straight line (moving (1,2) and (3,4) slightly more to the bottom-right won't be that hard though, plus (4)'s shape doesn't need to be changed as it flows good already)
5. 00:17:046 (1) - Finish on slider's start here, to emphasize the song's new part?
6. 00:19:966 (2,3) - Eh... Personally I think stacking notes below sliders in 1/6 with low spacing like this isn't easy to read, I prefer a continuous flow like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:27:134 (1,1) - Hmm, adding whistle on slider's start here fits a lot imo (as the synth hits high note here) ~
8. 00:35:630 (1,2) - Minor stuff here, move (1) one grid right and (2) one grid left so (4,1,2) forms a straight line?
9. 00:37:223 (6,7,8) - (optional) Try this jump here? Nothing special actually, I just personally thought it will be fancy >_<
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:42:001 (8,9,10) - I think, in this 1/3 it's good to add a gradual volume decrease here to fit the music (70 -> 60 -> 50 should be enough, but feel free to use a lower volume)
11. 00:43:329 (4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't it be better to stack (4,5) instead of (7,8)? It still keeps the symmetry while follows the music's progression better imo...
12. 00:49:966 (3,4,5,6) - (optional) Try this? Again, I just thought it would be fancy this way...
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:02:444 (2) - Hmm, dunno... I think it's better to curve this upward instead (put the midpoint in x:152 y:216) to let it flow more naturally
14. 01:03:771 (1) - Finish on slider's start here, to emphasize the new part of the song?
15. 01:17:488 (5,6) - (optional) Perhaps try to move this more to the upper-left? I think it will flow better this way instead of using a triangle (you can simply adjust (6)'s endpoint so (6,1)'s spacing is still consistent, though)
16. 01:22:621 (6) - Maybe move this few grids to the right, to let (5,6,7) forms an arc?
17. 01:30:320 (4) - Perhaps continue your encircling formation here with a slider shape like this? (you can just simply move your next (5) upward a bit to let (4,5)'s spacing consistent, though)
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 01:32:975 (8,9,10) - Same as my previous suggestion about the gradual volume decrease~

Options such as letterboxing, countdown, and audio lead-in should be consistent between difficulties. Having cohesive settings throughout your mapset will look much more professional, although there are always scenarios where this is impossible. One difficulty might start at the beginning of the mp3, where a countdown is impossible but an audio lead-in is absolutely necessary; while another difficulty may start a few seconds in, where a countdown is usable but an audio lead-in is senseless.

1. 00:07:223 (5) - Add a slight curve downward to continue your flow with (6)?
2. 00:08:019 (7) - Stack this above (1)? This fits the song's atmosphere very much imo (would be even better if (7,1) is a jump xD)
3. 00:12:267 (1,2,3) - Put the whistles on (1,2) instead of (3)? Whistles fit more on high-pitched notes on the song, really >_<
4. 00:14:922 (3,4,1) - Yes, a jump here plays good, but I think it's placed quite random... Perhaps place (4) in x:283 y:36 so these three's jump distance will be equal?
5. 00:18:373 (6) - Is it intentional to put this slightly higher compared to (5)? Not hard to catch, though...
6. 00:20:143 (3,4) - (optional) I'd rather move this more to the bottom-right, so the flow can be continuous like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:21:559 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The whistle goes random here... I think it's better to put the whistle only on (4) and (8)'s start, so it consistently follows your previous whistle pattern on 00:17:488 (2,3,5)
8. 00:26:603 (5) - (optional) Minor stuff, but move this to x:194 y:302 and rotate it ~19° clockwise to continue the flow with your previous (4)?
9. 00:27:134 (6) - Also, if you do my suggestion above, don't forget to re-place this so (5,6,7) still forms a straight line (:
10. 00:34:037 (1) - Err... I think it's better to use a same rhythm with the one you used in 00:25:541 (1) - shorten this slider by 1/6 and add a note on where the slider originally ends (fancier rhythm will be formed this way imo xD)
11. 00:35:895 (7) - The overlap with (5) is still visible on play mode regardless of your fast AR, perhaps try this instead to avoid the overlap?
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:40:408 (1) - The song continues here - it's better to add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 (or 1/6) after it~
13. 00:48:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's quite obvious, the pentagon is unsymmetrical... I don't think it's intentional to create an unsymmetrical pentagon like this, try this code for a symmetrical pentagon instead:
    

    464,176,48904,5,0
    320,48,49170,1,2
    146,134,49435,1,0
    179,349,49701,1,2
    373,368,49966,1,0
    303,219,50231,1,0
    303,219,50497,1,4

14. 00:53:683 (2) - Add whistle here? (your previous 00:45:187 (2) also has whistle on it's start, so it's better to add it here as well to let the hitsound consistent)
15. 00:55:276 (1) - The whistle on slider's start here sounds out of place imo. Move to slider's end?
16. 00:57:400 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - Again, the jump here feels very random... Perhaps try this? This way, (7) will be stacked above (1), which will create a fun-to-play stack (:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 00:59:524 (1 until the end) - ...well, because the second half is copy-pasted and flipped, pretty much my suggestion is still the same as the first half xD

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

As stated in the queue, although Yasora/Miya doesn't like the song, I can come randomly ^^
I played Cave Story, anyway~

[General]

-> Add [google:be793]Daisuke Amaya[/google:be793] (Pixel's real name) to the tags? Done
-> Offset 50ms (-5ms) fits more for me, not very sure though... Hmm,not too sure on this,will see later

[Easy]

-> With the current diff. setting, it won't hurt to increase the AR by 1 imo, plus it will increase readability on some parts (especially with the low spacing you used) Changed AR

1. 00:03:771 (1) - As your next (3) is centered already, maybe make this encircle (2) so it will somewhat emphasize the symmetry here? Done,but I don't know if I did that right
2. 00:10:143 (2) - Hmm, I wonder, why the whistle stops here? The song is more or less the same with the song on (1)'s end, so I don't think stopping the whistle here is a good idea >_< - This suggestion applies to next parts like this You're right,added all the whistles
3. 00:15:984 (4,5,1) - I'm not a big fan of stacks on Easy diff, actually... But on this case, I'd rather stack (5) above (1), because stacking (4) above (5) will cause (3)'s path to be overlapped (uh, yes, basically (5) will also overlap (4) if stacked above (1), but at least the overlap will be less minor) Good idea,fixed
4. 00:23:948 (3) - (optional) As the previous (2) is basically a slider with a downward path, perhaps place this above (2) instead of below to give a slight variation here? Done
5. 00:29:789 (1,3) - Add finish? Basically, the synth sounds like 00:25:541 (1) here, it has a strong attacking sound - so a finish would be fitting~ Done
6. 00:34:037 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) I do believe (2)'s flow can be improved by arranging these four in arc, perhaps like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Done
7. 00:46:249 (1) - It's good to have a consistent clap every 2/1 here, but an exception comes on this 1/2 repeating slider imo - the synth isn't strong enough, so it's best to leave the slider's end unhitsounded imo... You're right,fixed
8. 00:54:745 (1) - Same as above here (basically, my suggestion above applies for the next similar 1/2 repeating sliders - and, (optional) a slight curve leftward for this slider would be cute~ Done
9. 01:11:205 (4) - Also here, add a slight curve downward on this so it will flow together with (3)? Done
10. 01:19:701 (5's end,2) - Basically same with what I've pointed for the previous chorus, add finish to add the "strike" effect? Done
11. 01:28:196 (6) - (optional) Create an elbow slider here? It's not that hard to create (add a bezier waypoint before the red one - it doesn't have to be perfectly elbowed), and it also gives a better flow with your previous (5) Done
12. 01:32:975 (2,3) - This stack in easy definitely can be stacked to get a better flow - putting (2) in x:420 y:128 and adjusting (3), for example, already gives a better flow for the ending~ Done

[Normal]

-> My suggestion on Easy diff about the whistles and the chorus' finishes still apply here~ Done~

1. 00:06:426 (1,2,3) - Hmm, why these three is arranged in a straight line? Moving (3) downward to form an arc (like you did before) isn't that hard, though~ Done,to mantain the right spacing I changed the shape of the slider 3 too~
2. 00:08:550 (1,2,3) - (optional) Hmm, I personally dislike this triangle here, won't be nice when it's played with DoubleTime mod imo. I prefer something moving here: Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:939 (2) - As your next (1) is placed beneath, I prefer to put this on the top of (1,3) instead (instead of below) to avoid clustering xD Done
4. 00:14:391 (1,2,3) - Don't force symmetry too much on (1) here, especially with a straight slider (it won't build the correct flow to your next (2)) - a combination of bezier and linear waypoint like this flows better imo: Done,even if I don't know if I did it right
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:21:293 (1) - Place in x:460 y:260? This will make 00:19:701 (3)'s direction points out directly to this note (thus emphasizing your thunderbolt-shape pattern here) Done
6. 00:22:355 (3) - (optional) Instead of a direct straight slider, I think you can slightly curve this downward to let it flow together with your next (1) Done
7. 00:29:789 (7,3) - Put the new combos here, because it's downbeat? (not something really major though, your current NC-ing still looks tidy anyway :3) Done
8. 00:40:408 (1) - Err, do you really need the two finishes here? imo it's better to stick with the whistles because there's nothing strong from the music here (plus a finish fits only on 00:42:532 (1) around here imo) Changed the finishes into whistles
9. 00:44:656 (1,2,3,4,1) - To make this part less random, I think it's better to let the symmetry comes on (3,4,1) instead of forcing (1) to be in the center - this can be done by moving (1) to x:488 y:160, (2) to x:440 y:256, and adjust (3) to (1)... (this will also create a tilted square formation on (3,1,2,3)) You're right,this new pattern looks pretty neat. Fixed
10. 00:49:966 (2) - I'm fine with the double clap here, but it's missing a whistle on its start... (quite weird because the music really fits for a whistle) Done
11. 00:58:462 (2) - Same as above Done
12. 01:01:116 (1,2,3) - (optional) Well, for me keeping up the symmetry isn't bad, but still it's better for me to continue the flow as following: Done
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:17:046 (2) - To beautify this part, I think it's better to rotate this by ~48° clockwise and add a slight curve on (2) and (3) Done,but I had to reverse the slider 3 to find a proper pattern for the fix the thing below
14. 01:19:701 (5) - Again, I think you're too forcing symmetry here. For example, you can put this on x:380 y:316, make this encircle (4), and adjust (6) - it'll flow good this way imo~ Done
15. 01:31:382 (1) - Same as what I said on the previous chorus, the double finish here sounds too loud imo... Changed them into whistles
16. 01:33:240 (x) - (optional) The music goes somewhat hectic here, add circle? xD Done

[Hard]

1. 00:07:754 (4,5,6) - Swap (4,5)'s position and put (6) below your previous (3)? Will play more natural like this imo~ Decided to do the thing below
2. 00:08:019 (5,6,1) - ...or perhaps you can delete (6) here and let (3,4,5) to be a jump with (5) stacked above (1)'s end, fits this part's atmosphere this way Done
3. 00:09:081 (3,4) - (optional) Add a slight curve (to an antagonistic direction) for both? xD Done
4. 00:13:860 (5,1,3) - This is just my thought, but I think it will flow better if these three isn't arranged in a straight line (moving (1,2) and (3,4) slightly more to the bottom-right won't be that hard though, plus (4)'s shape doesn't need to be changed as it flows good already) Sorry,I think it's ok as it is. Will see later if there's any rearrangement I can do,though
5. 00:17:046 (1) - Finish on slider's start here, to emphasize the song's new part? Done
6. 00:19:966 (2,3) - Eh... Personally I think stacking notes below sliders in 1/6 with low spacing like this isn't easy to read, I prefer a continuous flow like this: Done
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:27:134 (1,1) - Hmm, adding whistle on slider's start here fits a lot imo (as the synth hits high note here) ~ Done
8. 00:35:630 (1,2) - Minor stuff here, move (1) one grid right and (2) one grid left so (4,1,2) forms a straight line? Fixed,but in another way.
9. 00:37:223 (6,7,8) - (optional) Try this jump here? Nothing special actually, I just personally thought it will be fancy >_< Done :3
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:42:001 (8,9,10) - I think, in this 1/3 it's good to add a gradual volume decrease here to fit the music (70 -> 60 -> 50 should be enough, but feel free to use a lower volume) Done
11. 00:43:329 (4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't it be better to stack (4,5) instead of (7,8)? It still keeps the symmetry while follows the music's progression better imo... Done
12. 00:49:966 (3,4,5,6) - (optional) Try this? Again, I just thought it would be fancy this way...
    
    SPOILER

    
    Done
13. 01:02:444 (2) - Hmm, dunno... I think it's better to curve this upward instead (put the midpoint in x:152 y:216) to let it flow more naturally Done
14. 01:03:771 (1) - Finish on slider's start here, to emphasize the new part of the song? Done
15. 01:17:488 (5,6) - (optional) Perhaps try to move this more to the upper-left? I think it will flow better this way instead of using a triangle (you can simply adjust (6)'s endpoint so (6,1)'s spacing is still consistent, though)
16. 01:22:621 (6) - Maybe move this few grids to the right, to let (5,6,7) forms an arc? Done
17. 01:30:320 (4) - Perhaps continue your encircling formation here with a slider shape like this? (you can just simply move your next (5) upward a bit to let (4,5)'s spacing consistent, though) Done
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 01:32:975 (8,9,10) - Same as my previous suggestion about the gradual volume decrease~ Done

Hard and LL's Difficulty is so well-constructed, while the easier diffs still feels quite random for me... Again, your [Hard] is a standout though~ Yep,in the easier diff I often don't put the passion i usually put on the harder diffs

Great 1/6 map (: - Good luck, -kevincela- xD Thanks

1. Disable the countdown please
2. You forgot to add "Daisuke Amaya" in tags from diff Wmf's Taiko
3. Inconsistency in Kiai times in LL's difficulty and Wmf's Taiko,the first kiai ends in 00:42:001,which the others diffs ends 00:42:532

• -- Considered to reduce one tick in the Approach Rate
  - 00:04:833 (2,3) - Replace those notes with a finish please
  - 00:40:408 (1) - Remove this new combo please,looks good to me

• - 00:29:789 (1) - Perhaps you should to add a finish here for being consistent?

• -- Looks nice

• -- Blurrp...nice

• -- Please specify the kind of difficulty on the difficulty name
  -- The slider tick is unrankeable in my opinion so keep the tick rate consistent on the difficulty,try tick rate 2
  -- The Stack Leniency is 0.3 is unrankeable,fix this problem please
  - 00:27:665 (8) - Add a new combo to follow the music
  - 00:36:426 (8) - ^
  - 00:51:028 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Seriously i don't like this jump between those notes so try to reduce them please
  - 00:57:400 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^
  - 01:18:639 (8) - New combo here to follow the music
  - 01:27:400 (8) - ^

MoodyRPG wrote:

Random mod :3

General

1. Disable the countdown please You're right,but I removed them only on my diffs,since the Taiko and LL's diff are currently using this
2. You forgot to add "Daisuke Amaya" in tags from diff Wmf's Taiko Forgot to do it,thanks for noticing
3. Inconsistency in Kiai times in LL's difficulty and Wmf's Taiko,the first kiai ends in 00:42:001,which the others diffs ends 00:42:532 As I said,it isn't unrankable,so I don't find any problems here

Easy

• -- Considered to reduce one tick in the Approach Rate No
  - 00:04:833 (2,3) - Replace those notes with a finish please Why? For me it stays good there
  - 00:40:408 (1) - Remove this new combo please,looks good to me No

Normal

• - 00:29:789 (1) - Perhaps you should to add a finish here for being consistent? Whew,forgot to add it,thanks for noticing

And that's it. Good luck kevincela Thanks~

HellDawn wrote:

Hi :3

Easy

01:28:196- this slider need all whistle Done

Normal

00:37:223- whistles No
01:28:196- ^ No

TheVileOne wrote:

LL's Difficulty

Armin wrote:

[General]

I suggest you to add "remix" or something in the title and to remove it from the tags: is this a remix of an original song, right? Sì,ma non ho comunque intenzione di aggiungere il remix nel titolo anche perchè nonostante sia un remix,l'autore ha deciso di non mettere il remix comunque nel titolo,essendo parte di una complilaton chiamata appunto "Cave Story Remix Project"


[Easy]

00:25:541 (1,2,3,4) - Add a whistle pattern of (1/1) in order to emphatize the bass part, like you did in (1) -> same stuff on similar parts (ex in the middle and at the end 01:25:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:34:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) Fai così anche nella normal se ti suona meglio Fatto,almeno credo
00:40:408 (1) - I'd say that this new combo is pretty useless -> 00:48:904 (1) - same stuff here Scusa,ma preferisco mantenere queste new combo per ora :\

It's clean, very good!

[Normal]

00:47:311 (1) - I'd add a clap here instead of a whistle (you were following a clap pattern too and it's supposed to be here the next one!) Fatto
01:30:320 (2) - This whistle at sliderside sound just too awful for my ears Rimosso
01:33:240 (1,2,3) - The rhythm is simple, but I feel this part weird, especially on the 3, where I can listen other beats on the next/previous 1/6 part that may confuse the player! I suggest you to replace (2,3) with a simple slider. Fatto

[Hard]

Whoops, what if you add the same whistle-pattern of the previous difficulties? It sounds good Fatto

00:42:178 (9,10,1) - Following the Distance Snap is good but this doesn't make this part intuitive! Also their placements are ugly. Try to adopt an alternative solution: I'd suggest you to add a slider with a repeat or two slider like in this screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350110 You can add a jump if you want to make this part enjoyable Dovrei aver fatto tutto aggiungendo uno slider con un repeat,dopodichè ho anche modificato i pattern seguenti per farli adattare alla loro nuova posizione
01:32:908 (7,8,9,10,11) - this part is okay since someone already knows how the rhythm changes!

e togli quell 1/8 sbd di deafult :/ Fatto

Okay good

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Buon giorno kevincela :3 from my queue!

[General]

add 8bit to the tags? Okay

[Hard]

Nice hard diff~ i like it!

HP,OD,AR set is like Insane diff x_x how about decrease 1 at all or decrease 1 for HP , OD? No,I think they fit perfectly in this diff. Sorry!

00:19:170 (5) - add a whistle on the head , not on the tail as you did on previous part? Done
00:20:231 (3) - ^ Done
00:41:470 (6) - add a finish on the head? No
00:42:001 (8) - ^ ^
00:46:249 (5) - NC as you did in previous part?
00:46:780 (1) - and DNC this. Both done
01:29:258 (6) - NC? No
01:29:524 (1) - DNC? ^
01:32:886 (7) - NC? ^
01:32:975 (2,3,4,5) - since it's hard diff , this rhythm is too hard to players who play 'Hard' diffs. maybe this will be better No,since the song is repeating itself,the people will know the change of rhythm,so there's no problem actually

[Normal]

00:32:444 (1) - delete whistle on the head and add it on the tail? I like this whistle better,sorry D:
00:34:568 (2) - make this slider more symmetric so that it can be blanket to 3? Done
00:38:285 (6) - NC? No
00:38:816 (1) - DNC? ^
01:20:762 (7) - NC? Done
01:21:293 (1) - DNC? ^
01:22:886 (3) - NC? ^
01:23:417 (1) - DNC? ^
01:31:382 (1,2,3) - add some green lines for gradually decreased volume like Hard diff? Done

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 -> 0.9 Oh,didn't notice that! Fixed

00:37:223 (6) - NC? Sorry,I prefer this NC pattern ^^
00:38:816 (1) - DNC? ^
00:57:400 (4) - 1 grid right , 1 grid up for second dot to make better blanket? *nazi* Done
01:12:267 (1) - 1gird left for third dot? Done
01:28:196 (6) - NC? Nope
01:31:382 (1,2,3) - same suggestion like normal diff Added

that's all i can find. Buona lezione!