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TheVileOne
lol at this song...


Easy

Modder Comments

Very nice difficulty.

00:10:143 (2,3) - I don't think the red point is necessary.

Normal

Modder Comments

This difficulty falls into that lull that comes with songs that have the same rhythm that plays over and over again. Although the sliders are different and varied, it's still the same rhythm. I don't think there's anything that can be done, it's a problem with the song. Your mapping is solid, the hitsounds are really nice and fitting. Everything is snapped right and flows.

00:02:178 (5) - Perhaps have this hug note 4?
00:03:771 (1,2,3) - The angle of these notes doesn't go with any recognizable pattern. I think it should.
00:40:143 (3) - Kind of looks uneven where it is. How about having it above the end of slider 2 instead of below it or straight across
00:57:134 (6,1) - It would look nicer if you unstacked.
01:23:417 (1,2,3) - The climb of that slider looks unappealing. perhaps lessen the curve slightly and lower the climb a bit. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337285

Hard

Modder Comments

Argh this song require focus to play. It's challenging, but not technically as fun to play as the easier non 1/6th difficulties. But there aren't really many technical flaws, just some small things that I felt I had to mention.

Beat Snap Divisor should be saved to 1/6th. Please do that.

00:18:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - I was expecting a different kind of pattern here. How about instead of a triangle pattern, you can have a more rounded pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337292
00:30:054 (1,2,3) - This is fairly harder to read/hit than other patterns in this difficulty. Why isn't it like this pattern 00:32:178 (1,2,3,4) - (with all sliders)?
00:40:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those scratches don't add much to the beat IMO. Really it just feels like I'm just randomly hitting an extra time for each note more than following a recognizable beat. Technically it works. I will leave this as just a comment.
00:41:382 (6,7) - I think you should start the repeater where 6 is instead and add an extra repeat, then you can add a similar repeater here 00:41:913 -
00:42:355 - Ignore the sound here, the beat is complete without it.(Delete the note here)
01:04:302 (3,4,5,6) - Here's another example of those confusing patterns. There's something about spacing out a 1/6th and then stacking the next 1/6th. It just looks confusing.
01:31:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same comment about 40 and 41 seconds

LL's Difficulty

^^ You couldn't elaborate what difficulty it is. It's just difficulty?

Modder Comments

Ehm your audio volumes are all over the place. Why not round off some of those values? I felt there was random patterns here and there, and the spacing was often too large for my tastes and also felt random. Large jumps work when they are incorporated into a nice looking pattern and the beat allows for it, but when the beat doesn't change, it just seems like the spacing just happens to be increasing greatly in random spots rather than flowing intuitively. I don't want to ruin your playing style on my accord, but if those jumps were just to make it harder, I would tone some of them down if you were doing it for that purpose. Actually some of the jumps should be toned down anyways IMO.

00:06:426 (1,2) - This jump is random and doesn't flow. Please do something else. and it doesn't match up with 3 at all.
00:14:922 (3,4,1) - okay you just randomly go for huge jumps for this part, but you generally space it normally? I don't think you should have huge jumps unless there's a consistent need to have a large jump for a rhythm. Although that's only my opinion.
00:30:231 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's really tricky to read notes that lower in hitsound volume but increase in spacing. It's confusing IMO. also use 1.3 snap instead of 1.4 snap for last part. 1.4 doesn't look very nice and doesn't play well.
00:32:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:34:745 (3,4,5,6) - I think if you're going to space out one part, you should space out all of them.
00:46:515 (5) - Start next combo here?
00:51:028 (1,2,3,4) - AND large spacing comes out of nowhere. I can't say I approve all that much, but you don't have to change it on my account.
00:54:214 (3,4,5) - Huge random jump. Why is it differently spaced too?
Since this is a mirror of the first part of the song, my comments for the first part of the song apply to these parts as well.


Conclusion

Not much at all wrong. Although I really don't care for the jumps in LL's difficulty. I feel that difficulty has the most inconsistent spacing of the bunch. You can have a star in the meantime.
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ -kevincela- ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistency countdown.

[LL's Difficulty]


  1. 00:55:010 (6) - Add new combo and Remove 00:55:276 (1).

[Hard]


  1. 00:42:001 (8,9,10) - Maybe change slider much better here.
  2. 01:32:975 (8,9,10,11) - ^

[Normal]


  1. 00:04:833 - Remove finish and Add clap.
  2. 00:05:895 - ^
  3. Remove short new combo :
    SPOILER
    00:14:391 (1) -
    00:18:639 (1) -
    00:23:152 (1) -
    00:32:444 (1) -
    00:40:408 (1) -
    00:48:904 (1) -
    00:57:400 (1) -
    01:01:116 (1) -
    01:05:364 (1) -
    01:09:612 (1) -
    01:13:860 (1) -
    01:23:417 (1) -
    01:31:382 (1) -

[Easy]


  1. 00:04:833 - Same as normal.
  2. 00:05:895 - ^

That's all ~ nice map ~

Good luck with rank ~
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Thanks for the mods Kawayi and TheVileOne! Will fix later,since now I really can't :P
Lunah

TheVileOne wrote:

LL's Difficulty
Everything is random, yeah
Armin
[General]

I suggest you to add "remix" or something in the title and to remove it from the tags: is this a remix of an original song, right?


[Easy]

00:25:541 (1,2,3,4) - Add a whistle pattern of (1/1) in order to emphatize the bass part, like you did in (1) -> same stuff on similar parts (ex in the middle and at the end 01:25:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:34:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) Fai così anche nella normal se ti suona meglio
00:40:408 (1) - I'd say that this new combo is pretty useless -> 00:48:904 (1) - same stuff here

It's clean, very good!

[Normal]

00:47:311 (1) - I'd add a clap here instead of a whistle (you were following a clap pattern too and it's supposed to be here the next one!)
01:30:320 (2) - This whistle at sliderside sound just too awful for my ears
01:33:240 (1,2,3) - The rhythm is simple, but I feel this part weird, especially on the 3, where I can listen other beats on the next/previous 1/6 part that may confuse the player! I suggest you to replace (2,3) with a simple slider.

[Hard]

Whoops, what if you add the same whistle-pattern of the previous difficulties? It sounds good :cry:

00:42:178 (9,10,1) - Following the Distance Snap is good but this doesn't make this part intuitive! Also their placements are ugly. Try to adopt an alternative solution: I'd suggest you to add a slider with a repeat or two slider like in this screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350110 You can add a jump if you want to make this part enjoyable
01:32:908 (7,8,9,10,11) - this part is okay since someone already knows how the rhythm changes!

e togli quell 1/8 sbd di deafult :/

[Wmf's Taiko]

God that slider velocity's value... gonna talk with some mats/bats to check if it's okay
EDIT: http://puu.sh/D25M ; http://puu.sh/D26A

[LL's]

00:04:302 (1) - Quite random new combo, what if you delete it?
00:54:745 (5,1,2,3) - dat weird stack Guarda capisco che fa figo fare così ma sta doppietta potrebbe fare un pò da scherma per l'effetto ottico /: diminuire lo stack leniency serve a poco in questo caso
01:29:789 (2) - whoops you missed the whistle pattern at the beginning of the slider

Okay good
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

Armin wrote:

[General]

I suggest you to add "remix" or something in the title and to remove it from the tags: is this a remix of an original song, right? Sì,ma non ho comunque intenzione di aggiungere il remix nel titolo anche perchè nonostante sia un remix,l'autore ha deciso di non mettere il remix comunque nel titolo,essendo parte di una complilaton chiamata appunto "Cave Story Remix Project"


[Easy]

00:25:541 (1,2,3,4) - Add a whistle pattern of (1/1) in order to emphatize the bass part, like you did in (1) -> same stuff on similar parts (ex in the middle and at the end 01:25:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:34:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) Fai così anche nella normal se ti suona meglio Fatto,almeno credo
00:40:408 (1) - I'd say that this new combo is pretty useless -> 00:48:904 (1) - same stuff here Scusa,ma preferisco mantenere queste new combo per ora :\

It's clean, very good!

[Normal]

00:47:311 (1) - I'd add a clap here instead of a whistle (you were following a clap pattern too and it's supposed to be here the next one!) Fatto
01:30:320 (2) - This whistle at sliderside sound just too awful for my ears Rimosso
01:33:240 (1,2,3) - The rhythm is simple, but I feel this part weird, especially on the 3, where I can listen other beats on the next/previous 1/6 part that may confuse the player! I suggest you to replace (2,3) with a simple slider. Fatto

[Hard]

Whoops, what if you add the same whistle-pattern of the previous difficulties? It sounds good :cry: Fatto

00:42:178 (9,10,1) - Following the Distance Snap is good but this doesn't make this part intuitive! Also their placements are ugly. Try to adopt an alternative solution: I'd suggest you to add a slider with a repeat or two slider like in this screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350110 You can add a jump if you want to make this part enjoyable Dovrei aver fatto tutto aggiungendo uno slider con un repeat,dopodichè ho anche modificato i pattern seguenti per farli adattare alla loro nuova posizione
01:32:908 (7,8,9,10,11) - this part is okay since someone already knows how the rhythm changes!

e togli quell 1/8 sbd di deafult :/ Fatto

Okay good
wmfchris
My reasoning for 2.1: BPM 113, but 1/3 based, so 1.4 * 3/2 = 2.1. (so it's BPM (113*1.5) with SV1.4, not 222)
Considering it looks a bit too fast now, changed to 1.8.
Stefan
Hmm.

[General]
You added "Wii" as Tag. So in this case, add "Nintendo" too. But I feel you should remove "Wii" because Cave Story got also released at the PlayStation portable the XBox and also for the PC (like Steam, etc). Even they're just downloadable Games, they released on these platforms. The best thing you should do is to remove "Wii".

[Easy]
00:00:585 (2,4) - I would not use here Claps because they feels too loud until 00:03:771.
00:07:488 (2) - Add Whistle into the Slider.
00:12:798 (1) - Finish sounds personally not good.
00:21:293 (1) - ^
00:29:789 (1) - ^ (add there instead of Finish a Clap)
00:38:816 (1) - Add Clap at the Start Point, it would not sound too bad and the music would fit with it too.
00:39:878 (2) - ^
01:03:771 (1) - Finish sounds bad here.
01:12:267 (1) - ^
01:19:701 (5) - ^ (add there Clap at the End)
01:15:453 (4) - How about to copy 01:13:860 (2) and use it here too?
01:29:789 (7) - Add at the Start and End Point Clap. And remove Whistle from the End.

[Normal]
00:00:585 (2,4) - Same what I said in Easy.
00:04:833 (4,5) - IMO it is a bad Idea. It stacks and (4) does not end at the white Tick. Beginner could tap it too early. It should not stack.
00:12:798 (1) - I don't like Finish here. :<
00:12:798 (1,2,3) - Flow feels weird. I expected that the upper circle (3) is before (2). You should switch (2) and (3).
00:21:293 (1) - Finish sounds not good here.
00:30:320 (2) - Clap at the Start Point?
00:31:116 (3) - It is not so neccessary to use a Slider here. Add at 00:31:382 a Circle and it sounds also nice.
00:37:223 (5,6) - Same as on 00:04:833 (4,5).
00:38:816 (1) - Clap here instead of Whistle.
00:39:347 (2) - ^ at the End Point.
00:40:408 (1) - At the Start Point: Add Finish and not Whistle like in Easy.
01:03:771 (1) - Finish sounds bad here.
01:12:267 (1) - ^
01:21:293 (1) - Remove Whistle and set Clap there.
01:28:196 (5,6) - Same as on 00:04:833 (4,5).
01:29:789 (1) - Add Clap.
01:30:320 (2) - ^ instead of Whistle at the End Point.
01:31:382 (1) - Finish at the Start Point and not Whistle. :<

[Hard]
Eww.. do you have to take AR8? ;-; I really perfer AR7 for a Hard Diff. (And since it should be not the hardest Diff at the Mapset)
I don't know but I feel that you should hold the same Hitsounds like in the previous Diffs.
00:00:585 (2) - I don't like the Clap blablabla... Same Story like in Easy.
00:01:647 (4) - ^
00:02:709 (3) - ^
00:29:789 (5) - Finish instead of Whistle.
01:04:214 (2,3,4) - Okay, I accepted every overlap, but this here just looks gross and should made better.
01:10:674 (1,2,3) - ^
01:15:099 (1) - NC (for holding NC Consistency)

[Wmf's Taiko]
01:16:780 (402) - Errr.. d instead of k?

[LL's Difficult]
Why do you don't start like all Diffs before? This short part at the begin is also worth for being mapped.
00:12:798 (1) - Finish sounds bad here.
00:21:293 (1) - ^
00:27:134 (6) - NC
00:29:258 (1) - Remove NC there if you NC it above.
00:36:426 (9) - NC
01:03:771 (1) - Remove Finish here.
01:12:267 (1) - ^
01:18:639 (8) - NC here.
01:20:231 (1) - Remove NC.
I don't like the Copy/Paste Style, but okay..

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Thanks fot your mod,later I'll fix it! ^^
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Ok,fixed a part of you mod (I'm sorry,but I do not agree with mostly of your hitsounds suggestions D:)
Btw I've added the tag "Wii" because this tune is used for the Wii's channel of Cave Story+.
Reisen Udongein
Buon giorno kevincela :3 from my queue!

[General]

add 8bit to the tags?

[LL's Difficulty]

00:16:515 (1) - add a whistle?
00:20:939 (2,3) - add whistle to the 2 , delete whistle on 3 like previous part?
00:25:010 (1) - add a whistle?
00:27:665 (8) - NC?
00:36:426 (9) - ^
01:07:488 (6) - ^ , add a whistle
01:11:736 (1,2,3) - add a whistle on 1 and 2 , delete whistle on 3?
01:18:639 (8) - NC?
01:27:400 (9) - ^

[Hard]

Nice hard diff~ :D i like it!

HP,OD,AR set is like Insane diff x_x how about decrease 1 at all or decrease 1 for HP , OD?

00:19:170 (5) - add a whistle on the head , not on the tail as you did on previous part?
00:20:231 (3) - ^
00:41:470 (6) - add a finish on the head?
00:42:001 (8) - ^
00:46:249 (5) - NC as you did in previous part?
00:46:780 (1) - and DNC this.
01:29:258 (6) - NC?
01:29:524 (1) - DNC?
01:32:886 (7) - NC?
01:32:975 (2,3,4,5) - since it's hard diff , this rhythm is too hard to players who play 'Hard' diffs. maybe this will be better

[Normal]

00:32:444 (1) - delete whistle on the head and add it on the tail?
00:34:568 (2) - make this slider more symmetric so that it can be blanket to 3?
00:38:285 (6) - NC?
00:38:816 (1) - DNC?
01:20:762 (7) - NC?
01:21:293 (1) - DNC?
01:22:886 (3) - NC?
01:23:417 (1) - DNC?
01:31:382 (1,2,3) - add some green lines for gradually decreased volume like Hard diff?

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 -> 0.9

00:37:223 (6) - NC?
00:38:816 (1) - DNC?
00:57:400 (4) - 1 grid right , 1 grid up for second dot to make better blanket? *nazi*
01:12:267 (1) - 1gird left for third dot?
01:28:196 (6) - NC?
01:31:382 (1,2,3) - same suggestion like normal diff

that's all i can find. Buona lezione! :D
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

Reisen Udongein wrote:

Buon giorno kevincela :3 from my queue!

[General]

add 8bit to the tags? Okay

[Hard]

Nice hard diff~ :D i like it!

HP,OD,AR set is like Insane diff x_x how about decrease 1 at all or decrease 1 for HP , OD? No,I think they fit perfectly in this diff. Sorry!

00:19:170 (5) - add a whistle on the head , not on the tail as you did on previous part? Done
00:20:231 (3) - ^ Done
00:41:470 (6) - add a finish on the head? No
00:42:001 (8) - ^ ^
00:46:249 (5) - NC as you did in previous part?
00:46:780 (1) - and DNC this. Both done
01:29:258 (6) - NC? No
01:29:524 (1) - DNC? ^
01:32:886 (7) - NC? ^
01:32:975 (2,3,4,5) - since it's hard diff , this rhythm is too hard to players who play 'Hard' diffs. maybe this will be better No,since the song is repeating itself,the people will know the change of rhythm,so there's no problem actually

[Normal]

00:32:444 (1) - delete whistle on the head and add it on the tail? I like this whistle better,sorry D:
00:34:568 (2) - make this slider more symmetric so that it can be blanket to 3? Done
00:38:285 (6) - NC? No
00:38:816 (1) - DNC? ^
01:20:762 (7) - NC? Done
01:21:293 (1) - DNC? ^
01:22:886 (3) - NC? ^
01:23:417 (1) - DNC? ^
01:31:382 (1,2,3) - add some green lines for gradually decreased volume like Hard diff? Done

[Easy]

SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999 -> 0.9 Oh,didn't notice that! Fixed

00:37:223 (6) - NC? Sorry,I prefer this NC pattern ^^
00:38:816 (1) - DNC? ^
00:57:400 (4) - 1 grid right , 1 grid up for second dot to make better blanket? *nazi* Done
01:12:267 (1) - 1gird left for third dot? Done
01:28:196 (6) - NC? Nope
01:31:382 (1,2,3) - same suggestion like normal diff Added

that's all i can find. Buona lezione! :D
BCI
add Doukutsu Monogatari and Chiptune in tags because http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14830 no kd ofc
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

add Doukutsu Monogatari and Chiptune in tags because http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14830 no kd ofc
Thanks for the tags! ^^

/late
Hasema
AWESOME!!!!!!!
Chewin
IRC mod:

SPOILER
15:18 Chewin: rimuovi il countdown dalla guest di lunah e wmf
15:18 -kevincela-: okay
15:18 -kevincela-: fatto
15:19 Chewin: Il primo kiai time sempre nelle stesse guest dovrebbe finire in 00:42:532 come le altre diff, èp meglio
15:19 -kevincela-: vuoi dire come nelle mie diff?
15:19 Chewin: si
15:19 -kevincela-: ok
15:20 Chewin: [easy]
15:20 Chewin: 00:07:488 (2) - muovi il 2nd waypoint in x:480 y:236 così è blankettato meglio col prossimo slider
15:21 -kevincela-: fatto
15:21 Chewin: 00:16:515 (5,1) - se overlappi sti due elementi il (5) si overlappa col il (4) per la stack leniency
15:21 Chewin: cerca di modificare sto pattern?
15:22 -kevincela-: che ne dici
15:22 -kevincela-: se faccio un manual stack?
15:22 Chewin: fallo e mostramelo xD
15:22 -kevincela-: ok
15:23 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/12Po5
15:23 -kevincela-: potrebbe sembrare innaturale
15:23 -kevincela-: ma ingame sembra proprio uno stack
15:24 Chewin: va bene
15:24 -kevincela-: bon
15:26 Chewin: 00:17:046 (1) - blanketta così: http://puu.sh/12PpL http://puu.sh/12Pqg <-- ho fixato pure lo spacing dei successivi beat
15:28 Chewin: 00:32:444 (4) - same http://puu.sh/12PqZ http://puu.sh/12Prd
15:28 Chewin: ovviamente sono solo suggerimenti, in questo modo scorrono meglio però
15:28 Chewin: 00:36:161 (4) - new combo?
15:28 -kevincela-: sìsì
15:29 -kevincela-: altri pure me l'avevano detto che era molto nazabile xD
15:29 Chewin: 00:44:656 (4) - http://puu.sh/12Psw
15:29 Chewin: http://puu.sh/12PsK
15:29 -kevincela-: il new combo non mi piace un granchè lì :\
15:30 Chewin: oki
15:30 Chewin: 00:44:656 (4) - potresti usare whistle all'inizio in modo che si adatti al suono che senti dalla song
15:31 Chewin: e suonerebbe anche meglio insieme a 00:43:594 (3) -
15:31 Chewin: 00:46:249 (1) - finish alla fine?
15:31 -kevincela-: sì,suona bene
15:31 Chewin: riguardo al whistle dovresti usarlo per consistenza con 00:48:904 (1) -
15:31 Chewin: 00:54:745 (1) - se hai seguito sopra, whistle
15:31 Chewin: ciioè finish*
15:32 -kevincela-: ah bene
15:32 -kevincela-: xD
15:32 -kevincela-: mi sembrava strano
15:32 -kevincela-: k,fatto
15:33 Chewin: 00:57:400 (4) - blankeeet xDhttp://puu.sh/12PuX
15:33 Chewin: dimmi se vuoi i code e te li passo
15:33 -kevincela-: sì,dammelo xD
15:33 -kevincela-: comunque sti errori di blanket sono normali
15:33 Chewin: quanto sei lazy D:
15:33 -kevincela-: dopotutto,la mia mappa è vecchia
15:33 -kevincela-: eh sì u.u
15:33 Chewin: 312,116,57400,2,0,B|376:120|412:204|352:260,1,180,2|2
15:33 Chewin: http://puu.sh/12Pvn
15:33 Chewin: si tranquillo
15:33 -kevincela-: grazie ammore <3
15:33 Chewin: li fixiamo insieme :D
15:34 Chewin: 01:10:143 (3) - 2nd waypoint in x:32 y:68
15:35 Chewin: 01:12:267 (1) - http://puu.sh/12Pwb
15:35 -kevincela-: x:32?
15:35 -kevincela-: non quadra D:
15:35 Chewin: 92
15:35 Chewin: sorry rofl
15:35 -kevincela-: lol
15:35 Chewin: aou non rompere, capita u.u
15:36 -kevincela-: ho fixato il blanket da me in 2 secondi
15:36 -kevincela-: non passarmi il code xD
15:38 Chewin: 01:21:293 (1,2,3) - aa che brutto, fai cosi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425268 http://puu.sh/12Pyl
15:38 Chewin: simmetrico e preciso
15:38 -kevincela-: cool
15:40 Chewin: 01:29:789 (7) - new combo per consistenza con 00:38:816 (1,2) -
15:40 -kevincela-: ok
15:41 Chewin: ah, metti come audio leadin 2000 anche nella diff di.. lunah
15:41 Chewin: anche se non inizia subito la song hai usato 2000 anche nella taiko
15:41 Chewin: ed inizia nello stesso momento
15:41 -kevincela-: okay
15:43 Chewin: [normal]
15:43 Chewin: 00:38:816 (1,2) - rimuovi whistle sull'1 e mettilo sul due
15:44 Chewin: suona meglio.
15:44 -kevincela-: okay
15:46 Chewin: 01:30:320 (2) - whistle
15:47 Chewin: bella mappa xD
15:47 -kevincela-: thx :3
15:47 Chewin: [hard]
15:47 Chewin: AR -1 sarebbe meglio, 8 troppo alto
15:48 Chewin: anzi è mappata in 1/3 a quanto vedo
15:48 -kevincela-: boh,per me con AR -1 sembra un po' moscio
15:48 Chewin: allora lascia
15:48 -kevincela-: yep
15:48 -kevincela-: Niva mi ha detto "great diff" sulla Hard
15:49 -kevincela-: mi sento realizzato
15:49 -kevincela-: lol
15:50 Chewin: 00:00:055 (1,2,3,4) - qui gli sliders con i blanket possono essere migliorati: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425281 http://puu.sh/12PFZ
15:51 Chewin: 00:28:196 (1) - rimuovi new combo?
15:52 Chewin: 00:36:692 (5) - new combo?
15:52 -kevincela-: mi servirebbe per delineare il nuovo pattern
15:52 -kevincela-: comunque,fatto
15:53 Chewin: 00:35:630 (1,2,3,4) - un rombo simmetrico come questo: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425282 muovendo (1) e (3) sulla linea orizzontale della grid
15:53 Chewin: renderebbe il gameplay più fluido: http://puu.sh/12PHZ
15:54 -kevincela-: hai ragione
15:54 Chewin: 00:38:285 (8) - seguendo quanto sopra non dimenticare di sovraporre questo circle con 00:36:426 (4) :3
15:54 Chewin: 00:39:347 (2) - nazi ma muovi il 3 waypoint in x:408 y:156, lo slider scorre meglio
15:55 Chewin: 00:40:320 (1,3) - whistle che seguono quel suono nella musica?
15:56 Chewin: 00:42:001 (8) - ^ su inizio fine e repeat
15:56 -kevincela-: qui ho preferito seguire
15:56 -kevincela-: i drums nel bg
15:56 Chewin: si per questo
15:56 Chewin: i whsitle si adatterebber IMO
15:56 -kevincela-: ah
15:56 Chewin: o almeno, qui suonerebbero perfettamente 00:42:001 (8) -
15:56 -kevincela-: li metto con il finish o lo rimuovo?
15:57 -kevincela-: okay
15:57 Chewin: aspe sto vedendo se trovo qualche altra possibilità
15:57 -kevincela-: ok
15:57 Chewin: ok usa questo pattern che è perfetto ** allora
15:58 -kevincela-: quindi che faccio?xD
15:58 Chewin: su 00:42:001 (8) - 00:40:851 (3) - usa normal hitsound 25%
15:59 -kevincela-: quindi riduco il volume?
15:59 Chewin: no aspe faccio io ti passo i timing point
15:59 -kevincela-: ok
16:02 Chewin: http://puu.sh/12PNz
16:02 Chewin: rimuovi tutti i whistle che ti ho detto di aggiungere e vedi come suona figo
16:02 Chewin: seguono il drum perfettamente
16:03 -kevincela-: lascio i finish
16:03 -kevincela-: no?
16:03 Chewin: sisi
16:03 Chewin: ho messo appunto i timing start e end
16:03 -kevincela-: in effetti suona davvero bene
16:03 Chewin: per i finish che c'erano già
16:03 Chewin: si :3
16:04 Chewin: per il volume se ti piace così bene, oppure vedi tu come vuoi metterli :3 il mio suggerimento era per seguire il drum della song
16:04 -kevincela-: per me così vanno bene
16:04 Chewin: gg
16:06 Chewin: cmq ci sono cosi tanti stack, forse potresti ridurre un po' la stack leniency
16:06 Chewin: però così va pure bene eh xD
16:07 Chewin: 01:11:205 (3) - nazi o.o 2nd waypoint 1 grid su
16:07 -kevincela-: fatto
16:08 -kevincela-: comunque alla fine del secondo ritornello
16:08 -kevincela-: forse è meglio che mantenga alla fine il soft che scende di volume
16:08 Chewin: 01:30:320 (4) - oddio rimuovi sto whistle orrendo
16:09 Chewin: si va bene il volume ma userei NC qui 01:32:886 (7) -
16:09 -kevincela-: intendi
16:09 -kevincela-: allo slider body?
16:09 Chewin: si
16:10 -kevincela-: aspè,il minimo volume rankabile era 10%?
16:10 Chewin: si
16:11 -kevincela-: ok,bon
16:11 -kevincela-: ho fixato nella diff di lunah dei inherited sections con volume 5%
16:11 Chewin: ok aggiorno
16:11 Chewin: ah devi ancora submittare
16:11 Chewin: ok allora dopo
16:12 -kevincela-: submitto?
16:12 Chewin: 00:06:426 (1,2,3) - che brutto pattern da giocare.
16:12 Chewin: no, vedo dopo col recheck
16:12 -kevincela-: ok
16:12 -kevincela-: a me sembra apposto D:
16:12 Chewin: si ma è brutto da giocare, boh ok
16:13 -kevincela-: tu come mi consiglieresti di modificarlo?
16:16 Chewin: 00:49:435 (3) - x:148 y:136 per spacing consistency
16:16 Chewin: 00:49:701 (4) - x:180 y:332 stesso motivo
16:16 -kevincela-: fatto
16:16 -kevincela-: ok
16:17 Chewin: 00:49:701 (4) - anzi correggendomi x:188 y:324
16:17 -kevincela-: ok
16:17 Chewin: 00:53:683 (2) - CTRL + R?
16:18 -kevincela-: hmm,ci sta bene
16:18 -kevincela-: ok
16:18 Chewin: no sense jump 00:54:479 (4) -
16:18 Chewin: muovilo in x:336 y:72
16:18 Chewin: cosi crei un triangolo simmetrico con 00:54:214 (3,5) -
16:19 -kevincela-: ok
16:19 Chewin: lol copy past.
16:21 Chewin: 01:26:603 (7,8) - per avere un blanket migliore con lo slider precedente e uno spacing più giocabile usa sto code:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425308
16:21 Chewin: http://puu.sh/12Q2Z

[Taiko]

00:05:630 (9,10) - k d sounds better and it'd be consistent with 00:04:568 (5,6,7,8,11,12,13)
00:21:028 (91) - big kat here? It'd emphasize better the big don on 00:21:293 (92)
00:24:125 (x) add a kat? The stream should start here
00:43:860 (220,221) - Same of 00:05:630 (9,10)
00:51:028 (254) - kat ?
wmfchris

Chewin wrote:

[Taiko]

00:05:630 (9,10) - k d sounds better and it'd be consistent with 00:04:568 (5,6,7,8,11,12,13) yes
00:21:028 (91) - big kat here? It'd emphasize better the big don on 00:21:293 (92) I'll treat 00:20:757 - as the beginning of a new phrase and 00:20:757 - ~ 00:21:288 - is what I'm trying to emphasize
00:24:125 (x) add a kat? The stream should start here good catch
00:43:860 (220,221) - Same of 00:05:630 (9,10) same as above
00:51:028 (254) - kat ?Like the d k d k at the beginning d here fits better.

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488,88,85979,1,2
488,88,86067,1,2
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488,88,86864,1,2
488,88,87129,1,2
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488,88,87395,1,0
488,88,87572,1,0
488,88,87660,1,2
488,88,87926,1,0
488,88,88191,1,6
488,88,88457,1,4
488,88,88988,1,2
488,88,89253,1,0
488,88,89519,1,0
488,88,89784,1,0
488,88,90050,1,0
488,88,90315,1,2
488,88,90492,1,0
488,88,90580,1,0
488,88,90757,1,0
488,88,90846,1,2
488,88,91111,1,0
488,88,91377,1,2
488,88,91642,1,2
488,88,91819,1,0
488,88,91908,1,2
488,88,92173,1,2
488,88,92350,1,0
488,88,92439,1,0
488,88,92704,1,2
488,88,92881,1,2
488,88,92970,1,0
488,88,93235,1,6
488,88,93501,1,4
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Updated!
Chewin
Fixed some stuff in the Hard and LL's diff via IRC.

Okay, Bubbled ~
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Thank you so much! :D
Armin
Madonna non hai nemmeno la forza di chiamare un bat eh V:
Chewin
♥ Gratz kevin *-*
Aurele
Omgomg, Congratulation Kevin! :D
Mismagius
Cave Story ♥
mancuso_JM_
oh... you!!
Congratz!! :3
Kei
oooooh finally! grats kevincela :D
Aoriki
Congratz
DarknessAngel
congratz !! \:D/
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Thank you all guys! :D
Also, ti amo Armin <3
Uni

Blue Dragon wrote:

Cave Story ♥
karterfreak
[Wmf's Taiko]
01:03:501 (322,323) - This isn't timed right, these two notes should be moved back to start on 01:03:412 . Pretty much the first thing I noticed when I played this the first time
Armin
as I said to you in irc, I let that go for a variation of rhythm. But I guess it's up to the mapper the final verdict.
Hoping to see wmf ingame soon
Stefan

Blue Dragon wrote:

Cave Story ♥
RikiH_
Gratz :3
Armin
I'm really afraid but this needs an unrank. As people noticed to me, that 1/3 double was clearly off.

kevin, fix that please.
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Fixed.
Inamaru
speed re-ranking
Andrea

Inamaru wrote:

speed re-ranking
I agree with this.

Re-Ranked~
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Fastest speed (re)ranking in my life ♥
I hope there aren't any more problems :U
Mercurial
Speed re-ranking.



Re-Congratz Kevin n.n
Armin

-kevincela- wrote:

Fastest speed (re)ranking in my life ♥
I hope there aren't any more problems :U
Oh don't worry.

Your map is perfect now. V:
haha5957
wow regrtaz xd
bossandy
Kevin!!~ Good :3
Leader
Kevinnnnn ♥ complimenti!
Chewin
:3
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
Thank you guys! :D
Sekai
Gratz on re-rank owo/
Aurele
I'm going to cry...
Now I understand why I lost my first firstrank D': !
Metro
cute map! definitely doesn't deserve such low rating
Gaba
Great song too :3
Hashirochibi
Hello My Favorite Game :)
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