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ClariS - Anata ni FIT

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Guy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月30日 at 12:22:42

Artist: ClariS
Title: Anata ni FIT
Source: Nendoroid Generation
Tags: PSP Opening Alice Clara Nexus kz livetune
BPM: 132
Filesize: 4795kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.76 stars, 175 notes)
  2. Hard (4.73 stars, 479 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 665 notes)
  4. Normal (3.33 stars, 293 notes)
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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アナタニFIT #1

Easy : 100%
Normal : 100%
Hard : 100%
Insane : 100%


ClariS <3
Kanari
Haii~
Yay!~ ClariS<33

[General]
.osb file is not used so delete it and full submit.
Put Nendoroid Generation PSP Opening Alice Clara into the tags

[Easy]
00:33:215 (1) - Delete this spinner maybe?

[Normal]
00:33:215 (1) - Delete this spinner?
01:13:897 - Add a circle?
01:15:715 - ^
02:38:670 (4) - New combo?

[Hard]
00:20:488 (4) - New combo?
00:33:215 (1) - Delete spinner?
01:22:306 (3) - New combo?
01:25:715 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:25:942 (7) - New combo.
02:15:942 (3) - I think this is too far, put it where (4) is.
02:26:397 - Add a circle.

[Insane]
Overall Difficulty +1?
00:33:215 (1) - Delete?
01:59:124 (2) - Stack under 01:57:306 (2)
01:59:351 (3) - Stack under 01:57:533 (3)
02:47:988 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:48:897 (12) - New combo.

Well mapped~
Star! ;D
Topic Starter
Guy

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii~
Yay!~ ClariS<33

[General]
.osb file is not used so delete it and full submit. - done
Put Nendoroid Generation PSP Opening Alice Clara into the tags - fixed

[Easy]
00:33:215 (1) - Delete this spinner maybe? - fixed

[Normal]
00:33:215 (1) - Delete this spinner? - fixed
01:13:897 - Add a circle? - fixed
01:15:715 - ^ - fixed
02:38:670 (4) - New combo? - fixed

[Hard]
00:20:488 (4) - New combo? - fixed
00:33:215 (1) - Delete spinner? - fixed
01:22:306 (3) - New combo? - fixed
01:25:715 (1) - Remove new combo. - fixed
01:25:942 (7) - New combo. - fixed
02:15:942 (3) - I think this is too far, put it where (4) is. - fixed
02:26:397 - Add a circle. - fixed

[Insane]
Overall Difficulty +1? - no change 8-)
00:33:215 (1) - Delete? - fixed
01:59:124 (2) - Stack under 01:57:306 (2) - fixed
01:59:351 (3) - Stack under 01:57:533 (3) - fixed
02:47:988 (1) - Remove new combo. - fixed
02:48:897 (12) - New combo. - fixed

Well mapped~
Star! ;D
It is first Mod in this beatmap, and I am glad <3
Thank you for Mod and star! :)
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: You should take a look, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion

[General]
there should be another kiai time from 03:26:851-03:41:396 since that's the final chorus.

[Easy]
00:07:761 (1) - add a finish to match the vocals?
00:14:124 (3) - same as above but at the end.
00:37:761 (1) - remove the NC for this because the vocals are still going.
00:40:488 (1) - same as 00:07:761.
00:51:397 (1) - ^
01:05:033 (3) - ^
01:33:215 (2) - make this slider look like (1) to make a better flow from the previous slider.
02:03:215 (4) - same as 00:07:761.
02:33:215 (1) - add a finish here since you have it on the first kiai.
03:11:397 (1) - make this smoother. as it stands it looks ugly. I suggest adding another point of the slider to make it smoother. to do this hold ctrl and click on the line of the slider.
overall the patterns look boring. yes ik that this is an easy diff but it not only it has to be easy, but also it has to be fun for beginners, also this needs more finishes. i heard so many cymbals that there were no finishes to match the cymbals or vocals, and last is the clap hitsounds. just adding claps looks plain and boring. add whistles as well because i think the whistles fit to the song.

[Normal]
00:07:761 (1) - same as easy.
00:15:033 (1) - ^
00:21:851 (6) - same as above but to match the drums.
00:45:942 (1) - make this a curved slider to flow nicely to the next note.
00:47:761 (3) - ^
00:51:397 (5) - same as 00:07:761.
00:58:670 (6) - ^
01:05:942 (1) - ^
01:20:488 (1) - ^
patterns are fine but the reason about the hitsounds stay the same.

[Hard]
why 1/6? set it to 1/4 because i don't see any notes at the 1/3 or 1/6 line.
00:07:761 (1) - same as easy.
00:15:033 (1) - ^
00:19:124 (2) - IMO this looks too easy, so Ctrl+R to challenge players. it's ok to have several anti jumps in hard but don't put too many.
00:36:851 (1) - same as 00:07:761.
00:37:533 (3) - why is a whistle here? it looks like it's just put there. remove it because it ruins the clap consistency.
00:39:011 (6) - ^
00:43:897 (4) - replace the clap for a finish. i think it's more effective and it fits with this part.
00:46:397 (2) - move this somewhere else to avoid the bad overlap.
00:47:533 (6) - same as 00:19:124.
00:51:170 (5) - same as 00:07:761.
00:58:442 (3) - ^
01:08:670 (7,8) - if you see during gameplay, these sliders barely look like a curved slider, so curve it properly to make it show.
01:20:033 (4) - replace this for a finish since you have this on normal.
01:20:488 (1) - same as 00:07:761.
01:26:851 (5) - ^
01:34:579 (6) - ^
02:37:761 (5,6,7) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this, then replace (5,6) for a 1/2 slider.
02:45:942 (1,2,3,4) - make this a diamond jump like the first kiai?
03:21:397 (1,2) - same as 00:46:397.
03:42:987 (5) - replace this for a circle and a 1/2 slider to follow the piano accurately.
not bad for a hard diff, but i suggest adding a few more anti-jumps to make it fun for players, and same reason about the hitsounds.

[Insane]
00:07:761 (1) - same as easy.
00:15:033 (10) - same as above and make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:20:488 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this pattern looks too easy, try this to make it fun for players.
00:43:215 (9) - make this a NC because it follows the instrumental. 1-8 is following vocals.
01:08:215 (9) - same as above but it follows the long pause?
01:11:851 (11) - ^
01:52:306 (8) - same as 00:43:215.
01:55:942 (8) - ^
02:00:488 (7) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
02:06:851 (7) - same as 00:43:215.
02:10:488 (8) - ^
02:24:579 (8) - same as 01:08:215.
02:32:079 - you're missing a circle here. add it to follow the vocals.
02:38:442 (7) - same as 02:00:488
02:42:306 (9) - ^
03:07:533 (10) - same as 01:08:215.
03:17:760 (5) - same as 02:00:488.
03:21:396 (8) - ^
03:25:033 (6) - ^
03:35:942 (1) - replace this for a 1/2 slider and a circle to follow vocals accurately.
03:43:215 (8) - a NC here because the instrumental changes.
03:46:851 (7) - ^
03:54:124 (9) - ^

alright that's all. remember what I said about the hitsounds because this map has potential of getting ranked. just get more mods and this map will be as fun as ever. anyways GL :D
Topic Starter
Guy

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: You should take a look, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion

[General]
there should be another kiai time from 03:26:851-03:41:396 since that's the final chorus.

[Easy]
00:07:761 (1) - add a finish to match the vocals?
00:14:124 (3) - same as above but at the end.
00:37:761 (1) - remove the NC for this because the vocals are still going.
00:40:488 (1) - same as 00:07:761.
00:51:397 (1) - ^
01:05:033 (3) - ^
01:33:215 (2) - make this slider look like (1) to make a better flow from the previous slider.
02:03:215 (4) - same as 00:07:761.
02:33:215 (1) - add a finish here since you have it on the first kiai.
03:11:397 (1) - make this smoother. as it stands it looks ugly. I suggest adding another point of the slider to make it smoother. to do this hold ctrl and click on the line of the slider.
overall the patterns look boring. yes ik that this is an easy diff but it not only it has to be easy, but also it has to be fun for beginners, also this needs more finishes. i heard so many cymbals that there were no finishes to match the cymbals or vocals, and last is the clap hitsounds. just adding claps looks plain and boring. add whistles as well because i think the whistles fit to the song.

[Normal]
00:07:761 (1) - same as easy.
00:15:033 (1) - ^
00:21:851 (6) - same as above but to match the drums.
00:45:942 (1) - make this a curved slider to flow nicely to the next note.
00:47:761 (3) - ^
00:51:397 (5) - same as 00:07:761.
00:58:670 (6) - ^
01:05:942 (1) - ^
01:20:488 (1) - ^
patterns are fine but the reason about the hitsounds stay the same.

[Hard]
why 1/6? set it to 1/4 because i don't see any notes at the 1/3 or 1/6 line.
00:07:761 (1) - same as easy.
00:15:033 (1) - ^
00:19:124 (2) - IMO this looks too easy, so Ctrl+R to challenge players. it's ok to have several anti jumps in hard but don't put too many.
00:36:851 (1) - same as 00:07:761.
00:37:533 (3) - why is a whistle here? it looks like it's just put there. remove it because it ruins the clap consistency.
00:39:011 (6) - ^
00:43:897 (4) - replace the clap for a finish. i think it's more effective and it fits with this part.
00:46:397 (2) - move this somewhere else to avoid the bad overlap.
00:47:533 (6) - same as 00:19:124.
00:51:170 (5) - same as 00:07:761.
00:58:442 (3) - ^
01:08:670 (7,8) - if you see during gameplay, these sliders barely look like a curved slider, so curve it properly to make it show.
01:20:033 (4) - replace this for a finish since you have this on normal.
01:20:488 (1) - same as 00:07:761.
01:26:851 (5) - ^
01:34:579 (6) - ^
02:37:761 (5,6,7) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this, then replace (5,6) for a 1/2 slider.
02:45:942 (1,2,3,4) - make this a diamond jump like the first kiai?
03:21:397 (1,2) - same as 00:46:397.
03:42:987 (5) - replace this for a circle and a 1/2 slider to follow the piano accurately.
not bad for a hard diff, but i suggest adding a few more anti-jumps to make it fun for players, and same reason about the hitsounds.

[Insane]
00:07:761 (1) - same as easy.
00:15:033 (10) - same as above and make this a NC because of new lyrics.
00:20:488 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this pattern looks too easy, try this to make it fun for players.
00:43:215 (9) - make this a NC because it follows the instrumental. 1-8 is following vocals.
01:08:215 (9) - same as above but it follows the long pause?
01:11:851 (11) - ^
01:52:306 (8) - same as 00:43:215.
01:55:942 (8) - ^
02:00:488 (7) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
02:06:851 (7) - same as 00:43:215.
02:10:488 (8) - ^
02:24:579 (8) - same as 01:08:215.
02:32:079 - you're missing a circle here. add it to follow the vocals.
02:38:442 (7) - same as 02:00:488
02:42:306 (9) - ^
03:07:533 (10) - same as 01:08:215.
03:17:760 (5) - same as 02:00:488.
03:21:396 (8) - ^
03:25:033 (6) - ^
03:35:942 (1) - replace this for a 1/2 slider and a circle to follow vocals accurately.
03:43:215 (8) - a NC here because the instrumental changes.
03:46:851 (7) - ^
03:54:124 (9) - ^

alright that's all. remember what I said about the hitsounds because this map has potential of getting ranked. just get more mods and this map will be as fun as ever. anyways GL :D

OK, the rough place were improved by your Mod  :)
It was very useful Mod.

Thank you for Mod!
ertyukjh010


Hello :)

[General]

Inconsistent of First kiai
Easy - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:35:033
Normal - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:35:033
Hard - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:38:670
Insane - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:38:670

[Easy]

00:20:488 (2) - cancel reply
00:21:624 () - Add slider and end at 00:22:306
00:22:306 (1) - Start at 00:22:533
00:44:124 (1) - whistle
02:31:397 (2) - Symmetry with 02:29:579 (1)
03:12:306 (1) - Finish instead at end
03:19:578 (1) - ^

[Normal]

03:12:306 - Useless inherited point

[Hard]

03:12:306 - Useless inherited point

[Insane]

03:12:306 - Useless inherited point

GoodLuck :)
Topic Starter
Guy

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello :)

[General]

Inconsistent of First kiai - oh, done!
Easy - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:35:033
Normal - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:35:033
Hard - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:38:670
Insane - Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:38:670

[Easy] - All done

00:20:488 (2) - cancel reply
00:21:624 () - Add slider and end at 00:22:306
00:22:306 (1) - Start at 00:22:533
00:44:124 (1) - whistle
02:31:397 (2) - Symmetry with 02:29:579 (1)
03:12:306 (1) - Finish instead at end
03:19:578 (1) - ^

[Normal] - I use this green line to make volume 30%.

03:12:306 - Useless inherited point

[Hard] - ^

03:12:306 - Useless inherited point

[Insane] - ^

03:12:306 - Useless inherited point

GoodLuck :)
Thank you for Mod!! :)
cmn_891127
Hi,Guy~ from #modreqs


[hard]
01:17:533 (1,1,2) - a little difficult, since the spinner is too short. Remove 01:18:897, or move to 01:19:351
03:17:761 (1,2,3) - the distance is a little small, maybe you can use grid level 4 (nazi)
03:31:851 (4,5,6,7,8) - the Pentagon is distorted


[Insane]
00:20:488 (1,2,3,4) - why not move to the centre
03:11:397 (1,2,3) - like


That's all~ Cute song and cute map, GL~
Topic Starter
Guy

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi,Guy~ from #modreqs


[hard]
01:17:533 (1,1,2) - a little difficult, since the spinner is too short. Remove 01:18:897, or move to 01:19:351 - done
03:17:761 (1,2,3) - the distance is a little small, maybe you can use grid level 4 (nazi) - done
03:31:851 (4,5,6,7,8) - the Pentagon is distorted - done


[Insane]
00:20:488 (1,2,3,4) - why not move to the centre - done
03:11:397 (1,2,3) - like - Hmm.. no change 8-)

That's all~ Cute song and cute map, GL~
Thank you for Mod! :)
osuyo
Hi~
from #modreqs

[Insane]
Grit sizeはTinyをオススメします。
01:30:942 distance space×1.3

[Hard]
looks nice~

[Normal]
02:43:215 ×0.8

[Easy]
00:21:624 こんな感じでもいいかも。


Good Luck :)

Topic Starter
Guy

osuyo wrote:

Hi~
from #modreqs

[Insane]
Grit sizeはTinyをオススメします。
01:30:942 distance space×1.3 - okかな?

[Hard]
looks nice~ - thanks!

[Normal]
02:43:215 ×0.8 - ずれてましたねw ok!

[Easy]
00:21:624 こんな感じでもいいかも。 - 以前違う方にModしてもらった時変えた所なんですよね・・・ 現状維持で


Good Luck :)
Modありがとうございました :)
remy11
modding~

[Hard]
00:10:715 (5) - 折り返しにclop
00:11:056 (5) - 終点にfinish
00:14:351 (5) - ^
00:14:579 (5) - ^
01:30:715 (3) - ^
01:30:942 (3) - ^
02:34:351 (5) - ^
02:34:579 (5) - ^
02:37:988 (6) - Add clop
02:38:215 (7) - Add finish
02:39:806 (3) - 終点にclop
02:40:033 (4) - 始点にfinish
03:27:987 (5) - Add clop
03:28:215 (6) - Add finish
03:29:806 (5) - ^
03:30:033 (6) - ^
03:37:078 (3) - 折り返しにclop
03:37:306 (3) - 終点にfinish

ふぁいと~ :)
remy11
言うことなしです...

すたああああ 8-)
Topic Starter
Guy

remy11 wrote:

modding~

[Hard]
00:10:715 (5) - 折り返しにclop
00:11:056 (5) - 終点にfinish
00:14:351 (5) - ^
00:14:579 (5) - ^
01:30:715 (3) - ^
01:30:942 (3) - ^
02:34:351 (5) - ^
02:34:579 (5) - ^
02:37:988 (6) - Add clop
02:38:215 (7) - Add finish
02:39:806 (3) - 終点にclop
02:40:033 (4) - 始点にfinish
03:27:987 (5) - Add clop
03:28:215 (6) - Add finish
03:29:806 (5) - ^
03:30:033 (6) - ^
03:37:078 (3) - 折り返しにclop
03:37:306 (3) - 終点にfinish

ふぁいと~ :)
Mod & Star ありです~
finishの音付け参考にします 8-)
those
[General]
Kiai Times are not consistent across all difficulties.

[Hard]
Unrankable bug: 01:19:124 (1) - needs NC

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Guy

those wrote:

[General]
Kiai Times are not consistent across all difficulties. - done!

[Hard]
Unrankable bug: 01:19:124 (1) - needs NC - done!

Good luck :3
Thank you for Mod & Star!! :)
Megurine Luka
/Queue

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font
[General]

*Close letterbox in break in you want
*Just asking..no Source? There should be a game name or something.
*The default sliderslide sounds weird in some part of the song. Try use http://puu.sh/qny9 I lower the volume of the default sliderslide
Others are clean

[Easy]

00:44:124 (1) - change whistle into a finish
01:09:579 (1) - ^
01:16:851 (1) - start from 01:16:624, add a circle on 01:18:215 and put 01:18:670 (2) - from 01:19:142 to 01:19:579
something like:

01:27:761 (1) - finish at head
01:33:215 (2) - ^
01:34:579 (x) - add circle
02:09:579 (1) - do not use multiple slider velocity in Easy. It is too difficult for new players to identify.
02:18:670 (1) - add fin
03:26:851 (1) - ^
03:34:124 (1) - fin at head
03:37:760 (1) - ^
03:39:578 (2) - fin at tail

[Normal]

For Normal, I suggest circle size -1
01:27:761 (1) - change whistle into fin
01:54:124 (2) - try

02:09:579 (3) - slider velocity change is not expected in N diff.
02:39:579 (3) - fin at tail

[Hard]

01:26:851 (5) - fin at tail
02:09:579 (5) - NC since slider velocity changed.
02:33:897 (4,5) - try 4 (x=208,y=80) 5 (x=240,y=168)
02:47:306 (2) - move the fin to slider tail

[Insane]

01:00:033 (5,6,7,8,9) - adjust the spacing, they're not equal
01:02:079 (6) - ^
02:05:715 (5) - try x=336, y=40
02:09:579 (7) - NC since slider velocity changed and move 1 grid down


I think that's all. Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Guy

Megurine Luka wrote:

/Queue

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font
[General] - ok,fixed

*Close letterbox in break in you want
*Just asking..no Source? There should be a game name or something.
*The default sliderslide sounds weird in some part of the song. Try use http://puu.sh/qny9 I lower the volume of the default sliderslide
Others are clean

[Easy] - All fixed

00:44:124 (1) - change whistle into a finish
01:09:579 (1) - ^
01:16:851 (1) - start from 01:16:624, add a circle on 01:18:215 and put 01:18:670 (2) - from 01:19:142 to 01:19:579
something like:

01:27:761 (1) - finish at head
01:33:215 (2) - ^
01:34:579 (x) - add circle
02:09:579 (1) - do not use multiple slider velocity in Easy. It is too difficult for new players to identify.
02:18:670 (1) - add fin
03:26:851 (1) - ^
03:34:124 (1) - fin at head
03:37:760 (1) - ^
03:39:578 (2) - fin at tail

[Normal]

For Normal, I suggest circle size -1 - no change 8-)
01:27:761 (1) - change whistle into fin - fixed
01:54:124 (2) - try - fixed

02:09:579 (3) - slider velocity change is not expected in N diff. - fixed
02:39:579 (3) - fin at tail - fixed

[Hard] - All fixed

01:26:851 (5) - fin at tail
02:09:579 (5) - NC since slider velocity changed.
02:33:897 (4,5) - try 4 (x=208,y=80) 5 (x=240,y=168)
02:47:306 (2) - move the fin to slider tail

[Insane] - All fixed

01:00:033 (5,6,7,8,9) - adjust the spacing, they're not equal
01:02:079 (6) - ^
02:05:715 (5) - try x=336, y=40
02:09:579 (7) - NC since slider velocity changed and move 1 grid down


I think that's all. Good Luck!
Thank you for Mod!!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Easy

  1. fine
Normal

  1. 03:26:396 (3) - this shape dosn't look so good...
Hard

  1. 01:03:670 (3) - spacing here?
  2. 02:09:579 (1) - the previous pattern doesn't slow down, so it'is kind of weird here.
  3. 02:10:488 (1,2) - slider ends are not snapped
  4. 02:20:942 (5,6,7,8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot455.jpg make a half hexagon here.
  5. 02:25:942 (1) - less curve
  6. 04:02:419 - same with insane
Insane

  1. 00:21:624 (1) - new combo? so it isn't easy to read as 1/2
  2. 00:50:488 (4) - the end of this slider is not snapped
  3. 02:37:761 (6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot454-1.jpg like this? I think it fits well here
  4. 02:47:079 (1) - new combo
  5. 04:02:419 - why does it have a green line after the spinner..?
  6. 04:05:033 - Also, I think adding a spinner here is pretty good.. also 5% volume at end
  7. a relaxing map :D
that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Guy

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Easy

  1. fine
Normal

  1. 03:26:396 (3) - this shape dosn't look so good...
Hard

  1. 01:03:670 (3) - spacing here?
  2. 02:09:579 (1) - the previous pattern doesn't slow down, so it'is kind of weird here.
  3. 02:10:488 (1,2) - slider ends are not snapped
  4. 02:20:942 (5,6,7,8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot455.jpg make a half hexagon here.
  5. 02:25:942 (1) - less curve
  6. 04:02:419 - same with insane
Insane

  1. 00:21:624 (1) - new combo? so it isn't easy to read as 1/2
  2. 00:50:488 (4) - the end of this slider is not snapped
  3. 02:37:761 (6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot454-1.jpg like this? I think it fits well here
  4. 02:47:079 (1) - new combo
  5. 04:02:419 - why does it have a green line after the spinner..?
  6. 04:05:033 - Also, I think adding a spinner here is pretty good.. also 5% volume at end
  7. a relaxing map :D
that's all

Good luck~
All fixed! Thank you for Mod!!
Kuria
coming here from my mod queue
k let see

General
no major error stuff, everything is fine i guess :3

Easy
01:18:783 (3) - i think it was better if you make this slider started at 01:18:783 (3) - and then make it end at 01:18:670 (3) - , the current timing seems a bit complicated for the totally newbie to follow, make it same as the slider position on 02:29:579 (1,2,3) - part (i know you're trying to make it match with the vocal/song here, just make it a consideration anyways ><)
01:16:624 (1) - and if you like, i would prefer to place it from 01:16:851 (1) - instead of the original, since this is easy diff, i guess make it match with the beats instead of the vocal here would be better.

Normal
Circle Size 3 here?
seems fine here and there, just one notes that i think it seems not place properly :D
03:44:124 (4) - i think you're make this a bit right so it can form a triangle pattern between 03:43:215 (3,4,1) - , but if you really intended for it, i think the (4) notes doean't seems on the right enough, it rather seems like it ws not straight to up from the 03:43:215 (3) - slider, i suggest to move that notes more right or just make it linear to up with the previous notes like these:

Hard
00:08:215 (3,4,5) - it seems that the triangle spacing/position between this 3 notes are a bit too near each other, why not make it same as 00:07:761 (1,2,3) - position? I think it was nicer that way
00:12:079 (4,5) - same here, i think make the backjump from (4) to (5) after smooth tapping on 00:11:397 (1,2,3,4) doesn't really fit/enjoyable while playing, why not move the (5) left a bit? At least to make it flow from (3) into (5)
00:13:442 (2,3,4,5) - make the pattern here into square rather than diamond shape? it would be look like this:
01:18:897 - add note here, i think feels like there was something missing while i try it first time orz
01:25:715 (6) - remove notes here? since there isn't any notes on the same beats like 01:22:079 - and 01:23:897 -

Insane
Seems fine too, just
01:21:397 (3,4,5,6,7) - why you suddenly make the stream spacing here with DS 1,2? I think it was considerable since it was on the chorus/kiai part, but then, i'm not see that you make the same stream spacing on the last chorus here 03:28:669 (1,2,3,4,5), if you intend to make the spaced stream on the kiai part, at least make it the same for all part.
To make it consistent, i think just use the same distance spacing and the lower one like 0,8 or 0,9 for all stream pattern spacing will be good, since people tend to hate the spaced/jumping streams (including me, i think this is just my though too orz)

well, i think that's all i can got for now, hope it can help
good luck :)
Topic Starter
Guy

Envi wrote:

coming here from my mod queue
k let see

General
no major error stuff, everything is fine i guess :3

Easy
01:18:783 (3) - i think it was better if you make this slider started at 01:18:783 (3) - and then make it end at 01:18:670 (3) - , the current timing seems a bit complicated for the totally newbie to follow, make it same as the slider position on 02:29:579 (1,2,3) - part (i know you're trying to make it match with the vocal/song here, just make it a consideration anyways ><)
01:16:624 (1) - and if you like, i would prefer to place it from 01:16:851 (1) - instead of the original, since this is easy diff, i guess make it match with the beats instead of the vocal here would be better.

Normal
Circle Size 3 here?
seems fine here and there, just one notes that i think it seems not place properly :D
03:44:124 (4) - i think you're make this a bit right so it can form a triangle pattern between 03:43:215 (3,4,1) - , but if you really intended for it, i think the (4) notes doean't seems on the right enough, it rather seems like it ws not straight to up from the 03:43:215 (3) - slider, i suggest to move that notes more right or just make it linear to up with the previous notes like these:

Hard
00:08:215 (3,4,5) - it seems that the triangle spacing/position between this 3 notes are a bit too near each other, why not make it same as 00:07:761 (1,2,3) - position? I think it was nicer that way
00:12:079 (4,5) - same here, i think make the backjump from (4) to (5) after smooth tapping on 00:11:397 (1,2,3,4) doesn't really fit/enjoyable while playing, why not move the (5) left a bit? At least to make it flow from (3) into (5)
00:13:442 (2,3,4,5) - make the pattern here into square rather than diamond shape? it would be look like this:
01:18:897 - add note here, i think feels like there was something missing while i try it first time orz
01:25:715 (6) - remove notes here? since there isn't any notes on the same beats like 01:22:079 - and 01:23:897 -

Insane - Oh, I made only Kiai-time stream DS1,3! :D
Seems fine too, just
01:21:397 (3,4,5,6,7) - why you suddenly make the stream spacing here with DS 1,2? I think it was considerable since it was on the chorus/kiai part, but then, i'm not see that you make the same stream spacing on the last chorus here 03:28:669 (1,2,3,4,5), if you intend to make the spaced stream on the kiai part, at least make it the same for all part.
To make it consistent, i think just use the same distance spacing and the lower one like 0,8 or 0,9 for all stream pattern spacing will be good, since people tend to hate the spaced/jumping streams (including me, i think this is just my though too orz)

well, i think that's all i can got for now, hope it can help
good luck :)
OK, I applied almost Mod.
Thank you for Mod!! :)
Suzully
From my modding queue.

[General]

  • オフセット+4。

    Letterboxを有効にしてください。
[Easy]

  • 1番のメロディにはfinishがたくさんあるのに2番の方にはないのは少し不自然です。
  1. 00:21:624 (3) - 終端にfinish。
  2. 01:05:033 (3) - finishをつけるなら始端ではなく終端。
  3. 02:03:215 (4) - ^
  4. 03:37:760 (1) - このfinishは合わないです。
[Normal]

  • InsaneとHardがサークルサイズ4でNormalが5ですか?こちらも4にしましょう。
  1. 00:21:851 (6) - 終端にfinish。
  2. 01:18:897 (1) - clap削除。
  3. 01:34:579 (2) - 終端にfinish。
  4. 01:51:397 (3) - ここにfinishを使うなら他の難易度でも同様に使いましょう。もしくはこちらを削除で。
  5. 01:54:124 (2,3) - できたら重ねない方が良いです。
  6. 02:09:579 (3,4) - スペーシングが狭すぎます。0.5xではなく1.0xで置いてください。
  7. 02:49:124 (5) - 終端にfinish。
  8. 03:26:396 (3) - ^
  9. 03:34:124 (1) - whistleではなくfinish。
  10. 03:40:942 (4) - 終端にfinish。
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:851 (3) - 終端にfinish。
  2. 01:16:397 (7) - 音楽に合っていません。
  3. 01:34:579 (6) - 終端にfinish。
  4. 01:49:579 (1) - Insaneと同様にfinishではなくwhistleを。
  5. 02:49:124 (5) - ^
  6. 03:40:942 (6) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:579 (1,2,3) - 確かに音楽には沿っているのですが、少しこのパターンに違和感があります。この音に沿うなら00:49:920にもノートが欲しいです。そうなるとパターンを変える必要も出てきますが・・・。個人的には下のような感じの方が好みです。
  2. 01:34:579 (7) - 終端にfinish。
  3. 02:03:215 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3)にはclapをつけて(4)にはwhistleの代わりにfinishを使うのはどうでしょう。
  4. 02:10:488 (1,2,3,4) - ここは4連打じゃないと思います。別に違和感があるわけではないのでこのままでも構いません。
  5. 02:46:851 (5) - ここには音楽がないので削除してしまって良いと思います。
  6. 02:49:124 (3) - 終端にfinish。
  7. 03:25:487 (3) - 静かなパートなのでclap音が少し浮いています。消しちゃいましょう。
  8. 03:34:124 (1) - ここの始端はwhistleではなくfinish。
  9. 03:40:942 (6) - 終端にfinish。
難易度間でfinishの位置が統一されていないのですが、全て指摘するのはさすがに手間なので、もしできたら修正してください。

修正が終わったら呼んでください。
Topic Starter
Guy

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]
  • - All fixed
    オフセット+4。

    Letterboxを有効にしてください。
[Easy]
  • - All fixed
    1番のメロディにはfinishがたくさんあるのに2番の方にはないのは少し不自然です。
  1. 00:21:624 (3) - 終端にfinish。
  2. 01:05:033 (3) - finishをつけるなら始端ではなく終端。
  3. 02:03:215 (4) - ^
  4. 03:37:760 (1) - このfinishは合わないです。
[Normal]
  • - All fixed
    InsaneとHardがサークルサイズ4でNormalが5ですか?こちらも4にしましょう。
  1. 00:21:851 (6) - 終端にfinish。
  2. 01:18:897 (1) - clap削除。
  3. 01:34:579 (2) - 終端にfinish。
  4. 01:51:397 (3) - ここにfinishを使うなら他の難易度でも同様に使いましょう。もしくはこちらを削除で。
  5. 01:54:124 (2,3) - できたら重ねない方が良いです。
  6. 02:09:579 (3,4) - スペーシングが狭すぎます。0.5xではなく1.0xで置いてください。
  7. 02:49:124 (5) - 終端にfinish。
  8. 03:26:396 (3) - ^
  9. 03:34:124 (1) - whistleではなくfinish。
  10. 03:40:942 (4) - 終端にfinish。
[Hard]
  • - All fixed
  1. 00:21:851 (3) - 終端にfinish。
  2. 01:16:397 (7) - 音楽に合っていません。
  3. 01:34:579 (6) - 終端にfinish。
  4. 01:49:579 (1) - Insaneと同様にfinishではなくwhistleを。
  5. 02:49:124 (5) - ^
  6. 03:40:942 (6) - ^
[Insane]
  • - All fixed
  1. 00:49:579 (1,2,3) - 確かに音楽には沿っているのですが、少しこのパターンに違和感があります。この音に沿うなら00:49:920にもノートが欲しいです。そうなるとパターンを変える必要も出てきますが・・・。個人的には下のような感じの方が好みです。
  2. 01:34:579 (7) - 終端にfinish。
  3. 02:03:215 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3)にはclapをつけて(4)にはwhistleの代わりにfinishを使うのはどうでしょう。
  4. 02:10:488 (1,2,3,4) - ここは4連打じゃないと思います。別に違和感があるわけではないのでこのままでも構いません。
  5. 02:46:851 (5) - ここには音楽がないので削除してしまって良いと思います。
  6. 02:49:124 (3) - 終端にfinish。
  7. 03:25:487 (3) - 静かなパートなのでclap音が少し浮いています。消しちゃいましょう。
  8. 03:34:124 (1) - ここの始端はwhistleではなくfinish。
  9. 03:40:942 (6) - 終端にfinish。
難易度間でfinishの位置が統一されていないのですが、全て指摘するのはさすがに手間なので、もしできたら修正してください。
- 改めて見てみたらfinish音の付け方ばらばらでしたね・・・ ほぼ統一できる場所は統一しました。
修正が終わったら呼んでください。
大変参考になるModでした!
ありがとうございます ;)
Suzully
おっと、オフセットを変えてから緑線がスナップされていません。
二つ目の赤線もそうですね。
全部オフセットに揃えてスナップしなおしてください。
Topic Starter
Guy

Suzully wrote:

おっと、オフセットを変えてから緑線がスナップされていません。
二つ目の赤線もそうですね。
全部オフセットに揃えてスナップしなおしてください。
ぎゃー完全に見落としてましたすみません :o
修正しましたー!
Suzully
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Guy

Suzully wrote:

Bubbled!
Thank youuu <3
jossieP
when you make the last submit for ranking please add "Nexus" tag (the single where this song is included) and "kz livetune" the producer of this cute girls >w<
Topic Starter
Guy

ikari_kyon wrote:

when you make the last submit for ranking please add "Nexus" tag (the single where this song is included) and "kz livetune" the producer of this cute girls >w<
ok fixed ;)
Suzully
Rebubbled.
Topic Starter
Guy

Suzully wrote:

Rebubbled.
Thank you!! :)
Topic Starter
Guy
Zzz
Breeze
Hi sorry for delay

[Easy]

  1. 00:57:764 (4) - Use default soft clap to reverse point and the end of this slider sounds nice imo (use both default clap to all this slider is nice too), and volume 40% would be better
  2. 01:12:310 (5) - I'm thinking of whether you are miss put whistle here, it suppose to be a clap?
  3. 01:26:855 (5) - Wee, seems it's not a miss, I'll suggest you use clap instead of whistle since it sounds better
  4. 01:34:128 (2) - Slider end, clap here sounds bad, because music here is quiet, so I'd suggest you use no hitsound for this point and reduce volume to 30%, back to 60% when 01:34:583, and you can add a clap to 01:34:583 (3), both default or custom one sounds fine
  5. 01:51:401 (3) - Add finish, remove whistle or not is depends on you
  6. 01:55:946 (3,4,1) - It's not consistence to 00:57:764 (4) :/ Well, it's not asked though
  7. 02:45:946 (3,4) - Same case as to 01:34:128 (2)
[Normal]

  1. 00:50:492 (4) - All point, default clap :D
  2. 00:57:764 (5) - ^
  3. 01:05:037 (4) - ^
  4. 01:13:219 (1,2,5) - Add finish sounds nice, and maybe add a note at 01:14:810 with finish sound, yay
  5. 01:16:855 (1) - Start at 01:16:628 with finish, remove whistle or not are both fine, and end at 01:17:310
  6. 01:33:219 (5) - Add clap all point of this slider would be nice
  7. 01:51:401 (3) - Finish
  8. 01:55:946 (5) - Same to 00:50:492 (4)
  9. 02:03:219 (4) - ^
  10. 02:31:855 (1) - No clap sounds better imo
  11. 02:45:946 (3) - All clap
[Hard]

  1. Nothing much to say, still, just some hitsound suggestions, like add clap to those 3/4 beat notes or so, add them if you like
[Insane]

  1. 00:49:924 (2,3) - This looked weird, I think here should be 1/2 beat, so I mean put (2) on 00:49:810 red tick
  2. yay, and those 3/4 beat notes add clap suggestions
Topic Starter
Guy

Breeze wrote:

Hi sorry for delay

[Easy]

  1. 00:57:764 (4) - Use default soft clap to reverse point and the end of this slider sounds nice imo (use both default clap to all this slider is nice too), and volume 40% would be better - OK, add clap all point, and volume 40%
  2. 01:12:310 (5) - I'm thinking of whether you are miss put whistle here, it suppose to be a clap? - fixed
  3. 01:26:855 (5) - Wee, seems it's not a miss, I'll suggest you use clap instead of whistle since it sounds better - fixed
  4. 01:34:128 (2) - Slider end, clap here sounds bad, because music here is quiet, so I'd suggest you use no hitsound for this point and reduce volume to 30%, back to 60% when 01:34:583, and you can add a clap to 01:34:583 (3), both default or custom one sounds fine - OK, 01:34:583 (3) add clap and,slider end clap is delete.
  5. 01:51:401 (3) - Add finish, remove whistle or not is depends on you - fixed
  6. 01:55:946 (3,4,1) - It's not consistence to 00:57:764 (4) :/ Well, it's not asked though - same 00:57:764 (4), fixed
  7. 02:45:946 (3,4) - Same case as to 01:34:128 (2) - fixed
[Normal]

  1. 00:50:492 (4) - All point, default clap :D - OK, fixed
  2. 00:57:764 (5) - ^ - ^
  3. 01:05:037 (4) - ^ - ^
  4. 01:13:219 (1,2,5) - Add finish sounds nice, and maybe add a note at 01:14:810 with finish sound, yay - OK, fixed
  5. 01:16:855 (1) - Start at 01:16:628 with finish, remove whistle or not are both fine, and end at 01:17:310 - fixed
  6. 01:33:219 (5) - Add clap all point of this slider would be nice - fixed
  7. 01:51:401 (3) - Finish - fixed
  8. 01:55:946 (5) - Same to 00:50:492 (4) - fixed
  9. 02:03:219 (4) - ^ - ^
  10. 02:31:855 (1) - No clap sounds better imo - fixed
  11. 02:45:946 (3) - All clap - fixed
[Hard]

  1. Nothing much to say, still, just some hitsound suggestions, like add clap to those 3/4 beat notes or so, add them if you like - I added clap to a part.
[Insane]

  1. 00:49:924 (2,3) - This looked weird, I think here should be 1/2 beat, so I mean put (2) on 00:49:810 red tick
  2. yay, and those 3/4 beat notes add clap suggestions - OK, fixed
All fixed ;)
Thank you Breeze <3
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