Looking for a Mod4Mod, so, here I am 
General:- Disable the
Letterbox During Breaks since you have a Video
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Timing Points: -->01:24:329 (Red Line): Is This Timing Point totally necesary? I remove it and I had not any problem with that
--> 03:18:731 (Inherited Point; Green Line): Add an Inherited Point to Remove the Kiai
--> 03:18:955 (Inherited Point; Green Line): Add an Inherited Point to restart with the Kiai
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Difficulties Name: You have two Guest Difficulties in the mapset, looking another mods and tags. But you have one difficulty with the Creator Name (L i a's Hard), and the other without it (Normal). For Consistency, you have to add the Creator Name in Normal or Remove it in Hard to make it
Easy-Normal-Hard-InsaneEasy:01:49:403 (4): Plays well with vocal, if you add a Clap in this note
02:48:731 (Spin): This Spinner sounds a little late, following the Vocal. I think that you have to move this Spinner 1/4 Back and after that make it bigger in 1/4
03:42:239 (2): Add a Clap at the end of Slider
Normal:00:59:030 (3): Following the Vocal, add a New Combo in this Note
01:38:657 (1): This note belongs to instrument pattern. For this reason, I suggest to Remove New Combo in this Note and add a New Combo in 01:39:552 (2) since begins the Vocal
02:13:358 (3): Add a New Combo, following the Vocal
03:24:105 (1,2,3): This Stack cause confusion in ''Normal Players'', because (1,2) are in 1/2 and (2,3) are in 1/1. Likely, this kind of player are going to Click all in 1/2. So, I suggest to unstack The Slider to Notes
L i a's Hard:00:44:926 (Spin): When I tested the map, this Spinner sounds a bit late. It's better if you move it 1/2 back (Red Tick, 00:44:702) and after that you make it bigger in 1/2 to finish in 00:45:821
00:45:817 (T): Unsnapped Kiai. The Kiai Time must starts in 00:45:821
01:16:265 (T): Unsnapped Kiai. The Kiai must finish in 01:16:269
01:20:299 (2,3,4,5,6): Those jumps cause confusion, since your Previous pattern in 1/2 are Separated in 1,0x (Distance Spacing). I suggest to continue with that, since looks like at 1/1 pattern
01:38:657 (1): I think that you have to play with Vocal/Instrument, I suggest to Remove New Combo here because belongs to instruments, and add a New Combo in Next note, since begin the Vocal
01:50:057 (6): Maybe New Combo, since the Vocal change it
01:59:254 (Spin): Same as 00:44:926
02:00:145 (T): Unsnapped Kiai. The Kiai Time must starts in 02:00:149
02:30:593 (T): Unsnapped Kiai. The Kiai Time must finish in 02:30:597
03:01:829 (3): Replace this Note to a Kick Slider, The Slider must finish in 03:01:040, with Hitwhistles, to continue the pattern
03:04:623 (T): Unsnapped Kiai. The Kiai Time must starts in 03:04:627
03:18:396 (2): I think that it's a Good Idea, if you starts to map with Vocal, so, Remove this Note in 1/4 (Blue Tick), and after that add two notes in 1/2. The First note in 03:18:284 (Red Tick) and the Second Note in 03:18:508 (White Tick)
03:42:235 (T): Unsnapped Kiai. The Kiai Time must finish in 03:42:239
03:44:926 (1,2): This pattern looks better if you inverse it. I think that you have to make a Flip Vertically (Ctrl+J), and also don't forget to move the note (2)
Insane:02:20:299 (3): Flow better if you make a Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) in this Slider
03:24:776 (3): (^)
03:42:239 (1): Add a Hitfinish in this Note
Well, that's all.
Nice map in General
Star and Good Luck with your map 
