1. Easy (1.81 stars, 165 notes)
2. Hard (4.94 stars, 374 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 594 notes)
4. S h i o n's Normal (3.78 stars, 205 notes)

Changed mp3
27/11/2011 Redownload pleaze

LaceWingfield wrote:

[General]
Don't make combo more than 10, because it's kinda ugly Dx

[S h i o n 's normal]
even if it's unfinished, i'll try mod~
00:41:856 (3~4): 1 grid down

anything is fine ~

[Hard]
00:23:856 (8): new combo
00:28:056 (8): ^
00:38:556 (10): ^
00:47:256 (7): ^
01:02:856 (6): ^
01:06:456 (6): ^
01:07:656 (6): ^
01:12:456 (5): ^
01:18:456 (9): ^
01:21:906 ~ 01:24:456 : add break
01:27:456 (9): New combo
01:32:256 (10: ^
01:42:156 (10): ^
02:06:456 (6): ^
02:11:256 (7): ^
02:16:056 (5): ^

that's it~

[Insane]
00:21:531 (4,5): make it the same spacing as (1,2) earlier.
00:23:106 (10): 1 grid left
00:23:817 (2~4): like this?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:85fc5]screenshot072.jpg[/attachment:85fc5]

00:25:056 (9): 1 grid down
00:26:556 (5): 1 grid right
00:28:026 (2): 1 grid left
00:31:356 (6~7): 1 grid right
00:48:756 (6): 1 grid down
01:04:956 (9): 1 grid right?
01:09:456 (6): new combo?
01:13:656 (5): ^
01:21:906 ~ 01:24:456 : add break
01:52:656 (7): 2 grid left?
02:02:556 (9): new combo
02:13:072 (9): ^

nice map~

nice song >w< i love it
star!

DivineRage wrote:

Insane:
01:10:206 the beat circle here is overlapping a slider extremely shortly afterwards which makes reading difficult. Maybe move 1 grid down so it isn't directly overlapping?

Other than that, awesome song

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ >~< A request from My Modding Queue~

Blue - No problem ~
Purple - Seems Okay ~ ( Map )
Pink - Suggestion

[Easy]
01:05:903(2) = how about change it to slider 1/2 o.o? http://puu.sh/9rhC
01:22:103 = put a break time after finish this spinner ~ http://puu.sh/9rik
02:44:603 = ^ http://puu.sh/9rjs

[S h i o n's Normal]

[Hard]
01:07:703(11) = NC
01:12:503(5) = ^
01:17:303(5) = ^
01:28:103(10) = ^
01:32:003(9) = ^
01:36:803(7) = ^
01:41:303(7) = ^
01:56:303(7) = ^
02:44:903 = put break time ~ http://puu.sh/9rmg

[Insane]
Can't mod ~ >~<''

That's all >w<"

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:44:903 (1,2,3,4) - this is not a square =w= you can (2) up 1 grid, (3) down 1 grid Fixed
01:09:053 (6) - left 1 grid to stck well and form a square Fixed
02:44:303 (6) - expand by 1/2 beat and whistle at the end (fourth tick)? 02:44:303 (4)? .add a note 02:44:753 and put on whiste

[Hard]
00:38:603 (3) - remove clap at the beginning? Fixed
01:21:803 (5) - finish here Fixed
02:44:753 - treat like [insane]? Fixed

[Normal]
00:39:053 - 感覺很空 用mute的slider？
00:46:703 (3) - whistle?
01:08:303 (3,4,5) - spacing

very rock style sounding >w< ~
maybe I can make a taiko diff if I have time ;w; ~

star ~

Byakugan249 wrote:

sorry about the delay. i've been working on a unsubmitted map yesterday and i forgot about this

General:
Kiai time is inconsistent. if u look at s h i o n's normal the times dont match. It is not necessary to make the KIAI time consistent in guest diff. Since I think that his KIAI time suits the song, I would like to maintain this.


Easy:
00:50:903(2) - like this? http://puu.sh/9EDh to make it flow　　　sorry,no change.I would like to maintain symmetry.
01:59:903(4) - *nazi* 1 grid down. it should align properly to (3)　　　Fixed

S h i o n's Normal:
00:46:103(3) - move the end point down to x:224 y:264
02:10:103(2) - make this look the same as (1)

Hard:
01:06:503(6) - NC　　　Fixed


Insane:
01:01:403(4) - r u sure that this slider looks the same as the 1st 3 sliders. i mean the look of it.　This is intentional. sorry,no change.
02:05:003(4) - ^　^
02:51:903(1) - *nazi* move 1 grid diagonal for the end point. it should align to (2)　　　Fixed
02:52:703(4) - make this slider nicer?　　Please let me think. I will change this, when one more person does the same indication. Fixed

this is the best i can do. Star and GL

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
00:39:053 - 感覺很空 用mute的slider？ ok
00:46:703 (3) - whistle? no
01:08:303 (3,4,5) - spacing fixed

Byakugan249 wrote:

S h i o n's Normal:
00:46:103(3) - move the end point down to x:224 y:264 fixed
02:10:103(2) - make this look the same as (1) fixed

Laurier wrote:

hi
from my mod queue

Hard
HP+1or2?　　　+1しました
00:27:353 (5) - これを消して次の白線にnote置いたほうが曲に合ってるように思います　このままで
00:45:203 (2) - 1grid 上？　修正
00:47:603 (2) - 1grid 左?　修正
00:58:103 (1) - end at 00:59:603 and 00:59:903~ add note?　修正
01:17:603 (2,4) - clap ?　このままで
01:33:353 (4) - ずれてるので置きなおしてください。　修正
01:34:103 (1) - add finish?　このままで
01:38:903 (1) - ^　このままで
01:43:703 (1) - ^　このままで
01:53:303 (1) - ^　このままで
02:01:703 (1) - end at 02:03:203 and 02:03:503 ~ add note?　修正
02:16:103 (1) - 2grid up?　修正
02:21:203 (2,4) - add clap ?　このままで
02:25:103 -ちょっと説明しにくいですがbrakeの開始をこんな感じにhttp://puu.sh/9GWZ (もしこれをするなら他の難易度も)　修正
02:40:103 (1) - finish　このままで
03:04:403 (2,4) - add clap? 個人的にはこの2,4にフィニッシュ入れているパターンの場所のフィニッシュはいらない気がします。　このままで　

Insane
00:22:103 (7,8,9) - この３つのスライダーは全部同じ形使ったほうがいいと思います　修正
00:47:603 (2,4,6) - clap on head and (8) clap　このままで
00:47:903 (3,7) - remve clap　このままで
00:55:703 (5) - add finish on head?　このままで
01:17:603 (3,7) - clap　このままで
01:18:503 (1) - remove clap and add clap on end and (2) add clap on end　このままで
01:43:703 (1) - add finish?　このままで
01:48:503 (1) - ^　このままで
02:52:703 (4) - (2)と同じ形がいいと思います　修正
02:58:703 (7) - 1grid down　修正

以上です。頑張ってください

• Combo Colorがデフォルトのままなので設定した方がいいと思います。
  03:11:303 - ここで譜面が終わった方が気持ちよく終わるような気がします
  
  全Diffの休憩は統一した方がいいと思います。
  例えばHardの青い部分02:25:703 - http://puu.sh/9H8h　他のdiffではなっていないので;_;
  02:44:903 - HardだとBreakがあり、InsaneだとBreakがない。

• 特に問題は見つかりませんでしたー

• 01:43:703 - Add note?
  02:05:303 (4,5) - Switching the position of these notes sounds better imo.
  02:22:103 (1) - Start at 02:23:303 - ?
  02:55:403 (1) - Start at 02:55:703 - ?

• 01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - y軸対象にしてほあどうでしょうか?
  01:22:103 - ここは音があった方が気持ちいいと思います。ノートを追加するか01:21:503 (5) - のリピートを増やしてみてはどうでしょうか?
  01:41:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 中心から始まったほうが綺麗かも?
  02:10:103 (1) - Remove NC?
  03:08:903 - 先ほどと同様にノートを追加?

• 01:08:903 (5) - NC? ボーカルの音合わせがドラムの音あわせに変わるので
  01:22:103 - Hardと同様に音が合った方がいいかとー
  01:37:253 (6) - 突然spacingが小さくなっています
  02:12:503 (5) - NC?
  03:08:903 - 音を追加?

Takos wrote:

Mod Requestありがとうございますー>w</
全て提案です!

General

• Combo Colorがデフォルトのままなので設定した方がいいと思います。　あまりカスタムカラーが好きではないのでこのままで
  03:11:303 - ここで譜面が終わった方が気持ちよく終わるような気がします　休日にいろいろパターンを試してみます!とりあえずいまはこのままで
  
  全Diffの休憩は統一した方がいいと思います。
  例えばHardの青い部分02:25:703 - http://puu.sh/9H8h　他のdiffではなっていないので;_;
  02:44:903 - HardだとBreakがあり、InsaneだとBreakがない。　修正しました!

Easy

• 特に問題は見つかりませんでしたー

S h i o n's Normal

• 01:43:703 - Add note?
  02:05:303 (4,5) - Switching the position of these notes sounds better imo.
  02:22:103 (1) - Start at 02:23:303 - ?
  02:55:403 (1) - Start at 02:55:703 - ?

Hard

• 01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - y軸対象にしてほあどうでしょうか?　修正
  01:22:103 - ここは音があった方が気持ちいいと思います。ノートを追加するか01:21:503 (5) - のリピートを増やしてみてはどうでしょうか?ノートを追加しましたいろいろ考えたのですが、ここはノートを置かないことにします
  01:41:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 中心から始まったほうが綺麗かも?　修正します。が配置を思いつかないので休日時間があるときに修正します!
  02:10:103 (1) - Remove NC?　　　01:06:503に合わせてNCを置いたので、とりあえずこのままで。後々多く指摘されたら修正します。
  03:08:903 - 先ほどと同様にノートを追加?　修正いろいろ考えたのですが、ここはノートを置かないことにします

Insane

• 01:08:903 (5) - NC? ボーカルの音合わせがドラムの音あわせに変わるので　修正
  01:22:103 - Hardと同様に音が合った方がいいかとー　配置を思いつかないので休日時間があるときに修正します!]
  01:37:253 (6) - 突然spacingが小さくなっています　このままで!
  02:12:503 (5) - NC?　修正
  03:08:903 - 音を追加?ここも休日に!

は、速い・・・そして楽しいです
ふぁいとです！

236,316,174503,2,0,B|306:287|306:199|252:167,1,169.999992907048

Takos wrote:

S h i o n's Normal

• 01:43:703 - Add note? このままで
  02:05:303 (4,5) - Switching the position of these notes sounds better imo. このままで
  02:22:103 (1) - Start at 02:23:303 - ? このままで
  02:55:403 (1) - Start at 02:55:703 - ? このままで

No_Gu wrote:

[shion]
00:20:903 (1) - finish
00:49:703 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:38:903 (2) - ^
01:53:303 (1) - ^
02:08:903 (1) - clap at the end all fixed , also adding some finish by self-mod.
02:54:503 (3) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/191295 ok
02:57:203 add a note whit clap ok

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue by shion

3m-3diff

[insane] No change
01:05:903 (3) - 1 grid up
01:32:753 (6) - NC
02:02:303 (5) - clap
02:02:903 (13) - finish & whistle

[hard]　All fixed
00:30:503 (1) - finish
00:49:703 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:53:303 (1) - ^

mercury2004 wrote:

-use 2 slider tick. sounds with the music better not necessary i guess ?
-Normal whistle in this difficulty do not fit with the music at all. Use soft whistle is better. If you're not going to change it please reduce volume by 20%. Normal whistle ruin the music If more people complain about this, i will make a change.
00:56:603 (4) - Use reverse slider like 00:55:703 (3) - sounds better Hmm.. Such two same sliders will be kinda boring imo , so I keep what it was.

Scorpiour wrote:

S h i o n's Normal:

00:26:753 (3) - add a whistle at beginning? ok
00:27:503 (4) - whistle? ok

00:31:103 (1,2,3) - whistles? ok
00:51:803 (4) - ^

00:59:903 (1) - remove one whistle no

01:19:703 (1) - add a break after fixed

01:39:803 (3) - i suppose it's better to stop at white line sorry , i don't think so

02:03:503 (1) - remove one whistle no

02:08:603 (6) - N:whistle no

03:06:653 (1) - suggest to start from next white line (03:06:803) ok

mercury2004 wrote:

Sorry for 2 days late. I was busy.
A Priority Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
-Folder OK
-Add adresse leviation into the Tags. These are Circle and Album　Fixed,thank you~~
-The current hitsound does not fit with the music well. Use this DOWNLOAD HERE right click and save as sorry,I maintain the current state.
-Remove one red color from the combo color sample set.　Fixed
Decrease Stack LeniencyI don't adhere to making it symmetrical about this map. I think that it is not necessary to lower a stack.

Easy Difficulty　All Fixed
-1 App rate
01:22:103 - Kiai should end here. Inconsistency Kiai end time base on Normal difficulty

Hard Difficulty　All Fixed
00:38:603 (3) - Clap this slider head
01:22:103 (6) - Kiai should end here. Inconsistency Kiai end time base on Normal difficulty

Insane Difficulty
This difficulty the main problem is lot of confusing jump and change in spacing but lack of NC. NC is very important when you are jumping. To indicate that this place is a jump. But not always true for some situation
I understand the importance of NC.
However, I am a case where quite high difficulty and a jump are used abundantly.
Especially in AR9, I think a jump or that using NC abundantly makes it incomprehensible whether that is right.
Of course, since this is my idea, it may be a thing which is not common.
However, I use my set.

HP Drain +1　No.Since the difficult stream is used, it makes map success very difficultly.
00:27:053 (7) - Stack this under 00:26:003 (3) -No. I think that time has passed, so that there is no necessity of using stack.
00:24:503 (5) - NC
00:28:703 (1) - NC
00:33:803 (6) - NC
00:37:103 (7) - NC
00:39:203 (5) - NC
00:58:703 (5) - NC and Clap here
01:03:503 (4) - Stack this under 01:02:603 (8) - 　No change　
01:04:703 (8) - Clap
01:08:903 (5) - NC
01:13:628 (5) - NC
01:13:703 (6) - Clap
01:14:003 (10) - Clap
01:20:153 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NC
01:22:103 - Kiai time should end here. Inconsistency kiai end time base on Normal difficulty　Fixed
01:30:503 (5) - NC
01:33:353 (1) - NC
01:37:103 (1) - NC due to change in spacing
01:37:553 (4) - ^
01:56:303 (5) - NC
02:02:303 (5) - Clap
02:07:103 (4) - Stack this under 02:06:203 (8) -
02:12:503 (5) - NC
02:17:228 (5) - NC
02:17:303 (6) - Clap
02:17:603 (10) - Clap
02:22:103 (9) - NC
03:00:428 (5) - NC
03:00:503 (6) - Clap
03:00:803 (10) - Clap
03:06:953 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NC
If you're not going to change those NC please. Change the Hit note sample color.

Pretty decent maps set. Insane difficulty a lot of fun. Just some improvement should get this beatmap rank soon. Star


If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

1. Song folder - osb file削除
2. Song folder - BGがBG.jpg(size981*767)とd0db5cd1.jpg(1024*768)2つあるので最初のを削除
3. Song Setup - Colours - Insaneだけ3色ですがわざとでしょうか？　統一した方が良いのでは？

1. 01:13:103 (2,3) - リズムの提案：vocal 「も～」が01:13:553から始まる為、 3を削除。 2のスライダーを01:13:703まで伸ばし、リピート1個追加。の方がやりやすい気がしました。
2. 02:16:703 (2,3) - ^同様

1. HD -1 (lower than hard) and AR -1 (I think that too fast ><;)
2. 00:23:903 (5) - end 00:24:803 ( repeat part 00:24:353 )
3. 00:29:303 (1) - spinner start 00:29:153 (vocal follow)
4. 00:56:603 (4,1) - try like this http://puu.sh/9OWz
5. 01:00:503 (2) - NC ?
6. 01:10:103 (1,2,3,4) - more beautiful. try↓
   

   240,212,69503,1,2
   168,156,69803,1,2
   240,104,70103,6,0,B|273:61|327:63,1,100,12|8
   408,104,70703,2,0,B|450:137|448:191,1,100,8|8
   360,180,71303,2,0,B|317:213|319:267,1,100,8|8
   408,256,71903,2,0,B|441:298|495:296,1,100,8|8

7. 01:26:903 (2) - Symmetrically 01:24:503 (1) - use copy ( Ctrl+C,V,H,J) plz
8. 01:29:303 (2) - change slider. end 01:29:453
9. 01:41:303 (2) - use 01:40:403 (1) - copy. ( Ctrl+C,V,H,J) and remove one repeat.
10. 02:13:103 (1) - remove NC and 02:13:703 add NC (same 01:09:503 (4)~ )
11. 02:13:703 (3) - beginning of slider add finish
12. 02:13:703 (3,4,5,6) - try ↓
    

    308,128,133103,1,2
    356,204,133403,1,2
    280,252,133703,6,0,B|313:295|367:293,1,100,12|8
    443,245,134303,2,0,B|410:202|356:204,1,100,8|8
    308,128,134903,2,0,B|361:129|394:86,1,100,8|8
    320,40,135503,2,0,B|266:38|233:81,1,100,8|8

13. 02:49:103 (2) - try rhythm and NC http://puu.sh/9P49
14. 03:06:803 (1) - spinner start 03:06:653

1. 00:26:903 (4,5,6,7) - リズムの提案 http://puu.sh/9P6X
2. 00:39:203 (4) - リズムの提案　startを00:39:053からに　and 00:39:353にadd circle
3. 01:12:503 (5) - NC and 01:12:953 - remove NC
4. 01:27:203 (2) - 01:26:903 (1) - のスライダー始めに重ねる？
5. 01:42:803 (5) - 00:39:203 (4)同じように
6. 03:03:953 (5) - 03:03:503 (4) - のスライダーendと重ねる
7. 03:08:753 - add note ?
8. 03:08:903 - ^

1. 01:52:403 (6,7) - DS1.0x で良いのでは？
2. 01:53:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形の提案↓
   

   68,272,113303,6,0,B|80:324|144:344|208:324|220:272,1,200,4|8
   144,208,113753,1,0
   68,144,113903,2,0,B|80:92|144:72|208:92|220:144,1,200,0|8
   316,184,114353,1,0
   352,276,114503,2,0,B|400:308|448:276,1,100,2|0

3. 03:08:303 (1) - end 03:08:903までリピート追加？

kosiga wrote:

[S h i o n's Normal] hi S h i o n :3 Please receive my mod ↓　sorry, long mod

1. HD -1 (lower than hard) and AR -1 (I think that too fast ><;) ok
2. 00:23:903 (5) - end 00:24:803 ( repeat part 00:24:353 ) this part remapped ><
3. 00:29:303 (1) - spinner start 00:29:153 (vocal follow) start on the white line now , 00:29:003
4. 00:56:603 (4,1) - try like this http://puu.sh/9OWz follow much on vocal , so no change...
5. 01:00:503 (2) - NC ?
6. 01:10:103 (1,2,3,4) - more beautiful. try↓ sorry no
7. 01:26:903 (2) - Symmetrically 01:24:503 (1) - use copy ( Ctrl+C,V,H,J) plz fixed
8. 01:29:303 (2) - change slider. end 01:29:453 There have been such two sliders before, so I have a note here.
9. 01:41:303 (2) - use 01:40:403 (1) - copy. ( Ctrl+C,V,H,J) and remove one repeat. not necessary, but still made tiny shape change here
10. 02:13:103 (1) - remove NC and 02:13:703 add NC (same 01:09:503 (4)~ ) fixed
11. 02:13:703 (3) - beginning of slider add finish fixed
12. 02:13:703 (3,4,5,6) - try ↓
    
13. 02:49:103 (2) - try rhythm and NC sorry , both no
14. 03:06:803 (1) - spinner start 03:06:653 not necessary i guess ?

nice song&map ~ ( sorry, for long mod ;;)

Star~☆

kosiga wrote:

hi~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - osb file削除　　　Fixed
2. Song folder - BGがBG.jpg(size981*767)とd0db5cd1.jpg(1024*768)2つあるので最初のを削除　　　Fixed
3. Song Setup - Colours - Insaneだけ3色ですがわざとでしょうか？　統一した方が良いのでは？　　　Fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:13:103 (2,3) - リズムの提案：vocal 「も～」が01:13:553から始まる為、 3を削除。 2のスライダーを01:13:703まで伸ばし、リピート1個追加。の方がやりやすい気がしました。　　　このままで!
2. 02:16:703 (2,3) - ^同様　　　このままで!

[Hard]

1. 00:26:903 (4,5,6,7) - リズムの提案 http://puu.sh/9P6X　　　Fixed
2. 00:39:203 (4) - リズムの提案　startを00:39:053からに　and 00:39:353にadd circle　　このままで!
3. 01:12:503 (5) - NC and 01:12:953 - remove NC　　　Fixed
4. 01:27:203 (2) - 01:26:903 (1) - のスライダー始めに重ねる？　　　このままで!
5. 01:42:803 (5) - 00:39:203 (4)同じように　　　Fixed
6. 03:03:953 (5) - 03:03:503 (4) - のスライダーendと重ねる　　　Fixed
7. 03:08:753 - add note ?　　　このままで!
8. 03:08:903 - ^　　　このままで!

[Insane]

1. 01:52:403 (6,7) - DS1.0x で良いのでは？　　　このままで!
2. 01:53:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形の提案↓　　　Fixed
   

   68,272,113303,6,0,B|80:324|144:344|208:324|220:272,1,200,4|8
   144,208,113753,1,0
   68,144,113903,2,0,B|80:92|144:72|208:92|220:144,1,200,0|8
   316,184,114353,1,0
   352,276,114503,2,0,B|400:308|448:276,1,100,2|0

3. 03:08:303 (1) - end 03:08:903までリピート追加？　　　このままで!

nice song&map ~ ( sorry, for long mod ;;)

Star~☆

Sync wrote:

Insane:
First off, let me say that this difficulty, plain and simple, is a very fun. With that being said, I can't just let these mistakes go unsaid. The main mistake in this difficulty is definitely flow.
00:22:403 (8) - Reverse selection (ctrl + r). Your two previous patterns involved a lot of movement so it felt very odd to me to stop like that. If you do this(I highly recommend it!!), make sure to move (9) too.　Fixed
00:24:503 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is basically covered up by the previous pattern making it very hard to see. I'd suggest moving it over.　no change
00:53:903 (9,10) - (9)'s slider end should point upwards and (10)'s slider end should point downwards. Basically, just switch them around. http://ssync.us/images/hptbaw.png　no change
01:13:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This streamer doesn't fit here at all -- I'd suggest changing it with a slider. I highly recommend you remove this. It's very awkward to play like this.　　 Please let me think.　Fixed
01:21:503 (1) - Add a break here or add some notes. Killer HP drain section　Add a break
01:56:303 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't play well. Make it more like (1,2,3,4). It'd feel a lot better.　Fixed
02:17:228 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same case as before -- this streamer doesn't fit well..　　Please let me think.　Fixed
02:51:953 (1) - Mini slider streams like these aren't very good. Instead, replace (1) with two hit notes.　　no change
03:00:428 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Since these come up a lot, you may be reluctant to get rid of these, so let me explain further: these streams are overmapped.　　no change

Hard:
00:29:153 (3) - move this back two ticks and make it longer by two ticks　　no change
01:05:903 (3,4,5) - Not a fan of this small pattern. It feels weird the way they are placed. Perhaps consider a more triangular shape?　Fixed
01:07:103 (3,4,5) - Same case　Fixed
01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest spreading these out more　　Please let me think.　Fixed
01:42:653 (5) - Add a hit circle　　no change
01:57:053 (5) - ^　　no change
03:06:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread these out more　　Please let me think.　Fixed

Good luck, I hope I helped. PM me if you need anything else.