thank you for star,Patchouli <3
some thing changed thank you for mod & star~~LaceWingfield wrote:
[General]
Don't make combo more than 10, because it's kinda ugly Dx
[S h i o n 's normal]
even if it's unfinished, i'll try mod~
00:41:856 (3~4): 1 grid down
anything is fine ~
[Hard]
00:23:856 (8): new combo
00:28:056 (8): ^
00:38:556 (10): ^
00:47:256 (7): ^
01:02:856 (6): ^
01:06:456 (6): ^
01:07:656 (6): ^
01:12:456 (5): ^
01:18:456 (9): ^
01:21:906 ~ 01:24:456 : add break
01:27:456 (9): New combo
01:32:256 (10: ^
01:42:156 (10): ^
02:06:456 (6): ^
02:11:256 (7): ^
02:16:056 (5): ^
that's it~
[Insane]
00:21:531 (4,5): make it the same spacing as (1,2) earlier.
00:23:106 (10): 1 grid left
00:23:817 (2~4): like this?SPOILER00:25:056 (9): 1 grid down[attachment=0:85fc5]screenshot072.jpg[/attachment:85fc5]
00:26:556 (5): 1 grid right
00:28:026 (2): 1 grid left
00:31:356 (6~7): 1 grid right
00:48:756 (6): 1 grid down
01:04:956 (9): 1 grid right?
01:09:456 (6): new combo?
01:13:656 (5): ^
01:21:906 ~ 01:24:456 : add break
01:52:656 (7): 2 grid left?
02:02:556 (9): new combo
02:13:072 (9): ^
nice map~
nice song >w< i love it
star!
I seem to be no problem,sorry no changeDivineRage wrote:
Insane:
01:10:206 the beat circle here is overlapping a slider extremely shortly afterwards which makes reading difficult. Maybe move 1 grid down so it isn't directly overlapping?
Other than that, awesome song
Shana Aisaka wrote:
Hi ~ >~< A request from My Modding Queue~
Blue - No problem ~
Purple - Seems Okay ~ ( Map )
Pink - Suggestion
[Easy]
01:05:903(2) = how about change it to slider 1/2 o.o? http://puu.sh/9rhC
01:22:103 = put a break time after finish this spinner ~ http://puu.sh/9rik
02:44:603 = ^ http://puu.sh/9rjs
[S h i o n's Normal]
[Hard]
01:07:703(11) = NC
01:12:503(5) = ^
01:17:303(5) = ^
01:28:103(10) = ^
01:32:003(9) = ^
01:36:803(7) = ^
01:41:303(7) = ^
01:56:303(7) = ^
02:44:903 = put break time ~ http://puu.sh/9rmg
[Insane]
Can't mod ~ >~<''
That's all >w<"
my diff All fixedwmfchris wrote:
[Insane]
00:44:903 (1,2,3,4) - this is not a square =w= you can (2) up 1 grid, (3) down 1 grid Fixed
01:09:053 (6) - left 1 grid to stck well and form a square Fixed
02:44:303 (6) - expand by 1/2 beat and whistle at the end (fourth tick)? 02:44:303 (4)? .add a note 02:44:753 and put on whiste
[Hard]
00:38:603 (3) - remove clap at the beginning? Fixed
01:21:803 (5) - finish here Fixed
02:44:753 - treat like [insane]? Fixed
[Normal]
00:39:053 - 感覺很空 用mute的slider?
00:46:703 (3) - whistle?
01:08:303 (3,4,5) - spacing
very rock style sounding >w< ~
maybe I can make a taiko diff if I have time ;w; ~
star ~
my diff fixed some parts.Byakugan249 wrote:
sorry about the delay. i've been working on a unsubmitted map yesterday and i forgot about this
General:
Kiai time is inconsistent. if u look at s h i o n's normal the times dont match. It is not necessary to make the KIAI time consistent in guest diff. Since I think that his KIAI time suits the song, I would like to maintain this.
Easy:
00:50:903(2) - like this? http://puu.sh/9EDh to make it flow sorry,no change.I would like to maintain symmetry.
01:59:903(4) - *nazi* 1 grid down. it should align properly to (3) Fixed
S h i o n's Normal:
00:46:103(3) - move the end point down to x:224 y:264
02:10:103(2) - make this look the same as (1)
Hard:
01:06:503(6) - NC Fixed
Insane:
01:01:403(4) - r u sure that this slider looks the same as the 1st 3 sliders. i mean the look of it. This is intentional. sorry,no change.
02:05:003(4) - ^ ^
02:51:903(1) - *nazi* move 1 grid diagonal for the end point. it should align to (2) Fixed
02:52:703(4) - make this slider nicer?Please let me think. I will change this, when one more person does the same indication. Fixed
this is the best i can do. Star and GL
wmfchris wrote:
[Normal]
00:39:053 - 感覺很空 用mute的slider? ok
00:46:703 (3) - whistle? no
01:08:303 (3,4,5) - spacing fixed
Thank you for mod and star~Byakugan249 wrote:
S h i o n's Normal:
00:46:103(3) - move the end point down to x:224 y:264 fixed
02:10:103(2) - make this look the same as (1) fixed
modありがとうございます!参考になります!Laurier wrote:
hi
from my mod queue
Hard
HP+1or2? +1しました
00:27:353 (5) - これを消して次の白線にnote置いたほうが曲に合ってるように思います このままで
00:45:203 (2) - 1grid 上? 修正
00:47:603 (2) - 1grid 左? 修正
00:58:103 (1) - end at 00:59:603 and 00:59:903~ add note? 修正
01:17:603 (2,4) - clap ? このままで
01:33:353 (4) - ずれてるので置きなおしてください。 修正
01:34:103 (1) - add finish? このままで
01:38:903 (1) - ^ このままで
01:43:703 (1) - ^ このままで
01:53:303 (1) - ^ このままで
02:01:703 (1) - end at 02:03:203 and 02:03:503 ~ add note? 修正
02:16:103 (1) - 2grid up? 修正
02:21:203 (2,4) - add clap ? このままで
02:25:103 -ちょっと説明しにくいですがbrakeの開始をこんな感じにhttp://puu.sh/9GWZ (もしこれをするなら他の難易度も) 修正
02:40:103 (1) - finish このままで
03:04:403 (2,4) - add clap? 個人的にはこの2,4にフィニッシュ入れているパターンの場所のフィニッシュはいらない気がします。 このままで
Insane
00:22:103 (7,8,9) - この3つのスライダーは全部同じ形使ったほうがいいと思います 修正
00:47:603 (2,4,6) - clap on head and (8) clap このままで
00:47:903 (3,7) - remve clap このままで
00:55:703 (5) - add finish on head? このままで
01:17:603 (3,7) - clap このままで
01:18:503 (1) - remove clap and add clap on end and (2) add clap on end このままで
01:43:703 (1) - add finish? このままで
01:48:503 (1) - ^ このままで
02:52:703 (4) - (2)と同じ形がいいと思います 修正
02:58:703 (7) - 1grid down 修正
以上です。頑張ってください
mod&starありがとうございます!とても参考になりました!Takos wrote:
Mod Requestありがとうございますー>w</
全て提案です!
GeneralEasy
- Combo Colorがデフォルトのままなので設定した方がいいと思います。 あまりカスタムカラーが好きではないのでこのままで
03:11:303 - ここで譜面が終わった方が気持ちよく終わるような気がします 休日にいろいろパターンを試してみます!とりあえずいまはこのままで
全Diffの休憩は統一した方がいいと思います。
例えばHardの青い部分02:25:703 - http://puu.sh/9H8h 他のdiffではなっていないので;_;
02:44:903 - HardだとBreakがあり、InsaneだとBreakがない。 修正しました!S h i o n's Normal
- 特に問題は見つかりませんでしたー
Hard
- 01:43:703 - Add note?
02:05:303 (4,5) - Switching the position of these notes sounds better imo.
02:22:103 (1) - Start at 02:23:303 - ?
02:55:403 (1) - Start at 02:55:703 - ?Insane
- 01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - y軸対象にしてほあどうでしょうか? 修正
01:22:103 - ここは音があった方が気持ちいいと思います。ノートを追加するか01:21:503 (5) - のリピートを増やしてみてはどうでしょうか?ノートを追加しましたいろいろ考えたのですが、ここはノートを置かないことにします
01:41:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 中心から始まったほうが綺麗かも? 修正します。が配置を思いつかないので休日時間があるときに修正します!
02:10:103 (1) - Remove NC? 01:06:503に合わせてNCを置いたので、とりあえずこのままで。後々多く指摘されたら修正します。
03:08:903 - 先ほどと同様にノートを追加?修正いろいろ考えたのですが、ここはノートを置かないことにしますは、速い・・・そして楽しいです
- 01:08:903 (5) - NC? ボーカルの音合わせがドラムの音あわせに変わるので 修正
01:22:103 - Hardと同様に音が合った方がいいかとー配置を思いつかないので休日時間があるときに修正します!]
01:37:253 (6) - 突然spacingが小さくなっています このままで!
02:12:503 (5) - NC? 修正
03:08:903 - 音を追加?ここも休日に!
ふぁいとです!
236,316,174503,2,0,B|306:287|306:199|252:167,1,169.99999290704802:57:203 add a note whit clap
Takos wrote:
S h i o n's Normal
- 01:43:703 - Add note? このままで
02:05:303 (4,5) - Switching the position of these notes sounds better imo. このままで
02:22:103 (1) - Start at 02:23:303 - ? このままで
02:55:403 (1) - Start at 02:55:703 - ? このままで
Thanks for mod ~No_Gu wrote:
[shion]
00:20:903 (1) - finish
00:49:703 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:38:903 (2) - ^
01:53:303 (1) - ^
02:08:903 (1) - clap at the end all fixed , also adding some finish by self-mod.
02:54:503 (3) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/191295 ok
02:57:203 add a note whit clap ok
thank you for mod~~No_Gu wrote:
request from my queue by shion
3m-3diff
[insane] No change
01:05:903 (3) - 1 grid up
01:32:753 (6) - NC
02:02:303 (5) - clap
02:02:903 (13) - finish & whistle
[hard] All fixed
00:30:503 (1) - finish
00:49:703 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:53:303 (1) - ^
No change, but your suggestions are all constructive. Thank you for mod & star~mercury2004 wrote:
-use 2 slider tick. sounds with the music better not necessary i guess ?
-Normal whistle in this difficulty do not fit with the music at all. Use soft whistle is better. If you're not going to change it please reduce volume by 20%. Normal whistle ruin the music If more people complain about this, i will make a change.
00:56:603 (4) - Use reverse slider like 00:55:703 (3) - sounds better Hmm.. Such two same sliders will be kinda boring imo , so I keep what it was.
Thanks for mod~Scorpiour wrote:
S h i o n's Normal:
00:26:753 (3) - add a whistle at beginning? ok
00:27:503 (4) - whistle? ok
00:31:103 (1,2,3) - whistles? ok
00:51:803 (4) - ^
00:59:903 (1) - remove one whistle no
01:19:703 (1) - add a break after fixed
01:39:803 (3) - i suppose it's better to stop at white line sorry , i don't think so
02:03:503 (1) - remove one whistle no
02:08:603 (6) - N:whistle no
03:06:653 (1) - suggest to start from next white line (03:06:803) ok
thank you for mod & star~~~mercury2004 wrote:
Sorry for 2 days late. I was busy.
A Priority Mod.
Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.
General
-Folder OK
-Add adresse leviation into the Tags. These are Circle and Album Fixed,thank you~~
-The current hitsound does not fit with the music well. Use this DOWNLOAD HERE right click and save as sorry,I maintain the current state.
-Remove one red color from the combo color sample set. Fixed
Decrease Stack LeniencyI don't adhere to making it symmetrical about this map. I think that it is not necessary to lower a stack.
Easy Difficulty All Fixed
-1 App rate
01:22:103 - Kiai should end here. Inconsistency Kiai end time base on Normal difficulty
Hard Difficulty All Fixed
00:38:603 (3) - Clap this slider head
01:22:103 (6) - Kiai should end here. Inconsistency Kiai end time base on Normal difficulty
Insane Difficulty
This difficulty the main problem is lot of confusing jump and change in spacing but lack of NC. NC is very important when you are jumping. To indicate that this place is a jump. But not always true for some situation
I understand the importance of NC.
However, I am a case where quite high difficulty and a jump are used abundantly.
Especially in AR9, I think a jump or that using NC abundantly makes it incomprehensible whether that is right.
Of course, since this is my idea, it may be a thing which is not common.
However, I use my set.
HP Drain +1 No.Since the difficult stream is used, it makes map success very difficultly.
00:27:053 (7) - Stack this under 00:26:003 (3) -No. I think that time has passed, so that there is no necessity of using stack.
00:24:503 (5) - NC
00:28:703 (1) - NC
00:33:803 (6) - NC
00:37:103 (7) - NC
00:39:203 (5) - NC
00:58:703 (5) - NC and Clap here
01:03:503 (4) - Stack this under 01:02:603 (8) - No change
01:04:703 (8) - Clap
01:08:903 (5) - NC
01:13:628 (5) - NC
01:13:703 (6) - Clap
01:14:003 (10) - Clap
01:20:153 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NC
01:22:103 - Kiai time should end here. Inconsistency kiai end time base on Normal difficulty Fixed
01:30:503 (5) - NC
01:33:353 (1) - NC
01:37:103 (1) - NC due to change in spacing
01:37:553 (4) - ^
01:56:303 (5) - NC
02:02:303 (5) - Clap
02:07:103 (4) - Stack this under 02:06:203 (8) -
02:12:503 (5) - NC
02:17:228 (5) - NC
02:17:303 (6) - Clap
02:17:603 (10) - Clap
02:22:103 (9) - NC
03:00:428 (5) - NC
03:00:503 (6) - Clap
03:00:803 (10) - Clap
03:06:953 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all NC
If you're not going to change those NC please. Change the Hit note sample color.
Pretty decent maps set. Insane difficulty a lot of fun. Just some improvement should get this beatmap rank soon. Star
If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there mod from queue~
General:
Source : EVITATION Fixed
Hard:
00:51:353 (4) - consider move to 00:51:503 and stack with 00:51:653 (5) - .. i felt it's more smooth No change.Although the proposal is wonderful,but I like my pattern.
00:53:753 (5) - similar to above, move to next white line and stack with next circle ^
01:17:303 (1,2,3,4) - the finishes here....noisy..02:17:303 (1,2,3,4) - is much better Change to another pattern
01:24:503 (1,2) - not suggest to use this style in Hard diff... I use this.
02:20:903 (1,2,3,4) - noisy...similar :03:04:103 (1,2,3,4) - Change to another pattern
02:44:753 (5) - i suppose i would move it to next white line, and add a note here, or extend ur reverse to here In this portion, I have been going to unite with back music.
03:08:303 (5) - stop ur map here...i felt 03:08:903 (6) - is unnecessary Fixed
Insane:No change
Are u sure to select AR9? I thought AR8 is enough for this music
I think that it will become very difficult to distinguish a jump if it is AR8.
It is AR9 that can read irrational arrangement.
00:23:153 (10) - delete...or stack with 00:22:703 (9) - ...this jump is...omg..
00:32:753 (11,1,2,3,4,5) - it's very strange here....mass and confusing...suggest to remap here...
00:37:103 (7) - NC
00:39:203 (5) - move forward to 00:39:053
01:17:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg...looks like random jump...feeling not good..
01:42:803 (5) - move forward to red line
02:42:203 - add a note here, or change 02:41:903 (4) - to slider
that's all....omg the difficult...GL~
240,212,69503,1,2
168,156,69803,1,2
240,104,70103,6,0,B|273:61|327:63,1,100,12|8
408,104,70703,2,0,B|450:137|448:191,1,100,8|8
360,180,71303,2,0,B|317:213|319:267,1,100,8|8
408,256,71903,2,0,B|441:298|495:296,1,100,8|8
308,128,133103,1,2
356,204,133403,1,2
280,252,133703,6,0,B|313:295|367:293,1,100,12|8
443,245,134303,2,0,B|410:202|356:204,1,100,8|8
308,128,134903,2,0,B|361:129|394:86,1,100,8|8
320,40,135503,2,0,B|266:38|233:81,1,100,8|8
68,272,113303,6,0,B|80:324|144:344|208:324|220:272,1,200,4|8
144,208,113753,1,0
68,144,113903,2,0,B|80:92|144:72|208:92|220:144,1,200,0|8
316,184,114353,1,0
352,276,114503,2,0,B|400:308|448:276,1,100,2|0
Thanks for your mod and star ~kosiga wrote:
[S h i o n's Normal] hi S h i o n :3 Please receive my mod ↓ sorry, long modnice song&map ~ ( sorry, for long mod ;;)
- HD -1 (lower than hard) and AR -1 (I think that too fast ><;) ok
- 00:23:903 (5) - end 00:24:803 ( repeat part 00:24:353 ) this part remapped ><
- 00:29:303 (1) - spinner start 00:29:153 (vocal follow) start on the white line now , 00:29:003
- 00:56:603 (4,1) - try like this http://puu.sh/9OWz follow much on vocal , so no change...
- 01:00:503 (2) - NC ?
- 01:10:103 (1,2,3,4) - more beautiful. try↓ sorry no
- 01:26:903 (2) - Symmetrically 01:24:503 (1) - use copy ( Ctrl+C,V,H,J) plz fixed
- 01:29:303 (2) - change slider. end 01:29:453 There have been such two sliders before, so I have a note here.
- 01:41:303 (2) - use 01:40:403 (1) - copy. ( Ctrl+C,V,H,J) and remove one repeat. not necessary, but still made tiny shape change here
- 02:13:103 (1) - remove NC and 02:13:703 add NC (same 01:09:503 (4)~ ) fixed
- 02:13:703 (3) - beginning of slider add finish fixed
- 02:13:703 (3,4,5,6) - try ↓
- 02:49:103 (2) - try rhythm and NC sorry , both no
- 03:06:803 (1) - spinner start 03:06:653 not necessary i guess ?
Star~☆
mod & star ありがとうございます!細かいところまでmodして頂きとても参考になりましたkosiga wrote:
hi~
here my mod ~
[General][Easy]
- Song folder - osb file削除 Fixed
- Song folder - BGがBG.jpg(size981*767)とd0db5cd1.jpg(1024*768)2つあるので最初のを削除 Fixed
- Song Setup - Colours - Insaneだけ3色ですがわざとでしょうか? 統一した方が良いのでは? Fixed
[Hard]
- 01:13:103 (2,3) - リズムの提案:vocal 「も~」が01:13:553から始まる為、 3を削除。 2のスライダーを01:13:703まで伸ばし、リピート1個追加。の方がやりやすい気がしました。 このままで!
- 02:16:703 (2,3) - ^同様 このままで!
[Insane]
- 00:26:903 (4,5,6,7) - リズムの提案 http://puu.sh/9P6X Fixed
- 00:39:203 (4) - リズムの提案 startを00:39:053からに and 00:39:353にadd circle このままで!
- 01:12:503 (5) - NC and 01:12:953 - remove NC Fixed
- 01:27:203 (2) - 01:26:903 (1) - のスライダー始めに重ねる? このままで!
- 01:42:803 (5) - 00:39:203 (4)同じように Fixed
- 03:03:953 (5) - 03:03:503 (4) - のスライダーendと重ねる Fixed
- 03:08:753 - add note ? このままで!
- 03:08:903 - ^ このままで!
nice song&map ~ ( sorry, for long mod ;;)
- 01:52:403 (6,7) - DS1.0x で良いのでは? このままで!
- 01:53:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形の提案↓ Fixed
68,272,113303,6,0,B|80:324|144:344|208:324|220:272,1,200,4|8
144,208,113753,1,0
68,144,113903,2,0,B|80:92|144:72|208:92|220:144,1,200,0|8
316,184,114353,1,0
352,276,114503,2,0,B|400:308|448:276,1,100,2|0- 03:08:303 (1) - end 03:08:903までリピート追加? このままで!
Star~☆
Sync wrote:
Insane:
First off, let me say that this difficulty, plain and simple, is a very fun. With that being said, I can't just let these mistakes go unsaid. The main mistake in this difficulty is definitely flow.
00:22:403 (8) - Reverse selection (ctrl + r). Your two previous patterns involved a lot of movement so it felt very odd to me to stop like that. If you do this(I highly recommend it!!), make sure to move (9) too. Fixed
00:24:503 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is basically covered up by the previous pattern making it very hard to see. I'd suggest moving it over. no change
00:53:903 (9,10) - (9)'s slider end should point upwards and (10)'s slider end should point downwards. Basically, just switch them around. http://ssync.us/images/hptbaw.png no change
01:13:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This streamer doesn't fit here at all -- I'd suggest changing it with a slider. I highly recommend you remove this. It's very awkward to play like this.Please let me think.Fixed
01:21:503 (1) - Add a break here or add some notes. Killer HP drain section Add a break
01:56:303 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't play well. Make it more like (1,2,3,4). It'd feel a lot better. Fixed
02:17:228 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same case as before -- this streamer doesn't fit well..Please let me think.Fixed
02:51:953 (1) - Mini slider streams like these aren't very good. Instead, replace (1) with two hit notes. no change
03:00:428 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Since these come up a lot, you may be reluctant to get rid of these, so let me explain further: these streams are overmapped. no change
Hard:
00:29:153 (3) - move this back two ticks and make it longer by two ticks no change
01:05:903 (3,4,5) - Not a fan of this small pattern. It feels weird the way they are placed. Perhaps consider a more triangular shape? Fixed
01:07:103 (3,4,5) - Same case Fixed
01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest spreading these out morePlease let me think.Fixed
01:42:653 (5) - Add a hit circle no change
01:57:053 (5) - ^ no change
03:06:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spread these out morePlease let me think.Fixed
Good luck, I hope I helped. PM me if you need anything else.
Thank you for mod ~ Apricot nyanApricot wrote:
Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.
[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.
You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.
Normal
- 00:29:003 (1) - add finish fixed
- 01:00:503 (2) - ^ or clap finish added
- 01:04:703 (5) - remove whistle
- 01:43:703 (2) - Drag the beginning of the break here fixed
- 02:04:103 (2) - add finish or clap finish added
- 02:35:303 (1) - remove whistle from start of slider
- 02:36:503 (2) - add whistle to end of slider I was on purpose to make these sliders what they are now.
- 02:37:703 (3) - add whistle to repeat of slider fixed
- 02:43:403 (1) - move to 02:43:703 and end it at 02:44:903 fixed, finish removed too
- 02:47:303 (2) - add finish finish is too noisy here and whistle is enough imo.
- 02:54:503 (3) - add whistle to end of slider fixed
modありがとうごさいました!とても参考になります。Apricot wrote:
Red = You NEED to change.
Orange = You should change.
Black = If possible, change. no need to change if you don't like.
Blue = Suggestion/nazi.
[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.
You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.
GeneralEasy このままで
- 00:42:503 (1) - RNC
- 00:52:103 (1) - ^
- 01:46:103 (1) - ^
- 01:55:703 (1) - ^
- 02:37:703 (1) - ^
- 02:42:503 (1) - ^
- 02:52:103 (1) - ^
Hardこのままで
- 00:26:453 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/194160 修正
- 00:29:303 (3,4) - ドラッグして00:29:153 へ移動、(3)の終点のclapを削除して(4)にclapを追加、00:29:903 にサークルを追加 凄く良い音取りだと思うのですが、4つ続きのリズムを多く入れると後々のリズムをかなり変更しないと音が少なく聞こえてしまうのでこのままで。
- 00:37:253 (6,7) - (6)削除、(7)を 00:37:103 へ移動、00:37:703 にサークルを追加 hitsound調整 -^
- 01:00:203 (2) - whistle このままで
- 01:00:653 - サークル追加 修正
- 01:18:503 (5) - NC 修正
- 01:22:103 (6) - サークル追加 w/ finish このままで
- 01:39:653 (2,3) - 00:26:453 と同じ 修正
- 01:54:503 (3,4) - 01:54:353 移動、01:55:103 サークル追加 hitsound調整 このままで
- 02:04:253 (2) - サークル追加 修正
- 02:22:103 (5) - NC 修正
- 02:44:753 (5) - (4)にスタックさせて 02:44:903 へ移動 このままで
- 03:03:953 (5) - (4)とスタックさせずに、次の(1)とスタックさせた方がいいと思います 修正
- 03:08:903 (6) - サークル追加 w/ finish
Insane
スライダーの繰り返しの配置が多かったです。コピペとCtrl+Hを使ってもっとジャンプさせてもいいと思います。
時間があるときに配置を見直してみます!
- 00:22:103 (7) - NC 修正
- 00:23:603 (2) - 00:23:303 (1) を Copy & Paste + Ctrl+H 修正
- 00:24:203 (4) - (3)を^ 修正
- 00:24:503 (5) - NC, ↑2つを直したなら、画面中央に置く 修正
- 00:29:303 (9) - NC 修正
- 00:32:603 (10,11) - スライダーにする このままで
- 00:37:103 (7) - NC 修正
- 00:39:203 (5) - NC 修正
- 00:53:303 (5) - NC 修正
- 00:58:703 (5,7) - clap このままで
- 00:59:303 (13) - finish 修正
- 01:10:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (1,2)をスタック、後、単発単発スライダー単発単発スライダー...を繰り返した方がいいと思います。単発は全てスタック 時間があるときに配置を見直してみます。とりあえずいまはこのままで!
- 01:13:628 (5) - remove circle このままで
- 01:16:103 (6) - NC 修正
- 01:17:903 (5) - NC 修正
- 01:18:503 (1) - これはスタックさせない方がいいです
- 01:20:153 (1,1,1,1) - RNC 修正
- 01:33:053 (7) - NC 修正
- 01:40:103 (7) - NC 修正
- 01:42:803 (5) - NC 修正
- 01:44:753 (4) - DS
このままで修正- 01:47:153 (4) - DS
このままで修正- 01:49:553 (4) - DS
このままで修正- 02:02:303 (5,7) - clap このままで
- 02:02:903 (13) - finish 修正
- 02:12:503 (5) - NC 修正
- 02:17:228 (5) - remove circle このままで
- 02:21:503 (5) - NC 修正
- 02:22:103 (9) - NC 修正
- 02:25:703 - Breakの開始をここへ移動 修正
- 02:44:753 (5) - (4)にスタックさせて 02:44:903 へ移動 修正
- 03:00:428 (5) - remove circle このままで
- 03:04:703 (5) - NC 修正
- 03:06:953 (1,1,1,1) - RNC 修正
Nothing has been changed, but still thank you for the mod ~justnobody wrote:
Shion requested a mod from me about this map so i'm here.
@Shion: sry i'm probably late. it's ok~
[S h i o n's Normal]
00:38:603 (2) - the finish in the end is too "heavy" imo nope
01:32:303 (1) - start 1/2 later? nope, follow vocal here
01:55:103 (4,5,1) - don't like the whistle in these notes I like them very much T,T
03:02:903 (2,3) - looks strange in my eyes because of ... too short.
03:05:603 (1,2) - similar to above. and don't fit the music imo. sorry
justnobody wrote:
Shion requested a mod from me about this map so i'm here.
@Shion: sry i'm probably late.
[General]
i think there should be tags about which album this song comes from.
i tried to google the album name but i can't find it.
OK
[Hard]
01:05:903 (3,4,5) - looks bad in my eyes. Fixed
01:07:103 (3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
01:19:703 (1,2,3,4) - make their spacing larger?Please let me think.Fixed
ehh...i misread these sliders at first 2 plays as i expect something like 01:17:303 (1,2,3,4).
similar in 03:06:503 (1,2,3,4).
thank you for mod~~Shiirn wrote:
Easy
Nice.
Normal
Also ok.
Hard Fixed
00:26:453 (2,3) - i don't like the 2 under the 1. try to make them spaced differently? 2 on top of 3 might work, or making them split.
For some reason, the normal-hit claps seem much louder here. especially the beginning. soften?
01:38:903 (1,2,3) - see :26. dat copypaste.
Insane
this diff is too stretchy and fast for the song. AR8 + make some of the stupid jumps smaller.I think BPM200 is sufficient elements to be AR9
Some of the sliders would look a lot better if you made them more neat. I like to do prettier than a slider, I do my best
01:02:603 (8) -
can be turned into
small changes make a big difference to how your map looks
00:36:803 (2,3,4,5,6) - stupid jumps Changed
01:09:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a spaced stream like this is just cruel and unfitting. Fixed
01:37:553 (8) - randomly placed i bet For me there is no random
01:39:653 (4,5) - nice try on the pattern but it really doesn't fit, re-ctrl+r these. No, I like this
02:17:003 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - hey guys she's singing a constant note, what do we do? STREAAAAAAMS. I say no, this is ugly.
Fixed
i dislike how you end the song on all your diffs - it just cuts off, with no real ending. 03:11:303 is a better spot to end.
I also love the idea of you, my proposal was for a time suitable to take a break time.No change.