3kinnagi wrote:

没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.

KayeSara wrote:

刚刚看了下
当然只看了A难度
01:39:287 - 去掉note fixed
01:39:524 - ^ 没动、、
01:39:879 - add notefixed
（我超级新手，建议可以无视，只是喜欢这首歌曲喜欢就好，
感觉应该这种调，就说下。。。有点班门弄斧啦~呜呜）没事、都是新手、可以讨论的说
新手作图。。。。我都不敢想象了 我可以把自己的图坟了额、、要不是前面有mod、、

Love len wrote:

不對，那麼厲害？給你star~
雖然我不喜歡jay zhou（jay迷別打我啊！

cmn_891127 wrote:

B和G是否为一张图???如果是guest diff要标注作者全名或简称，TAG也要加上全名
支持中文歌!!!早日冒泡!!!

qihanzhang wrote:

Artist: Jay Chou
Title: Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian
Tags: Chinese Pop
BPM: 126.81
Filesize: 5659kb
Play Time: 03:37

cmn_891127 wrote:

qihanzhang wrote:

Artist: Jay Chou
Title: Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian
Tags: Chinese Pop
BPM: 126.81
Filesize: 5659kb
Play Time: 03:37

tags要所有的diff都改的~要不就会像酱紫fixed

还有
Version:A is for amazing
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:C is for could be better
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:D is for do not try
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:fz's B is for 'bucuo'
PreviewTime: 45978
我就是这样被戳泡的，呜呜呜~额、、谢谢提醒，fixed

3kinnagi wrote:

没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.

hoLysoup wrote:

ˊ周大俠<3

3kinnagi wrote:

没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.

☆~

cmn_891127 wrote:

我再来补颗星~为什么现在会限制回复长度了？

_Kiva wrote:

Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian = Love Before D.C?
hahahha

Kanon wrote:

Diff名字亮爆了 谢谢~

另外歌词神级翻译啊嗯~字数字数...

_Kiva wrote:

哎哟说错了应该是LOVE BEFORE B.C
(好像还是不对
B.C貌似是公元把歌名改成爱在公元前怎么样

fanzhen0019 wrote:

我巨爽

big fast human heart

Finally finished

Love miku1 wrote:

这条歌太好了我也是这么想的
不知什么时候会ranked呢？我也不知道（好像很没主见的说）
虽然我是初音的FANS，不是Jay的FANS……...我是脚踏两条船的

_Kiva wrote:

哎哟说错了应该是LOVE BEFORE B.C
(好像还是不对
B.C貌似是公元把歌名改成爱在公元前怎么样

1. 除了[A is for amazing]难度外，用记事本打开其他难度的osu文件，你会看到如下code
   

   [General]
   AudioFilename: azxyq.mp3
   AudioLeadIn: 0
   PreviewTime: 77877
   Countdown: 0
   SampleSet: Normal
   StackLeniency: 0.6
   Mode: 0
   LetterboxInBreaks: 1
   CountdownOffset: 3

   红色那部分在你去掉countdown后完全没用的，都删掉吧，不过我想这不是必须的
2. Tag可以再加个C-Pop

1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490 用不了那么红线
   改变timing后记得resnap all note（在timing-Resnap All Notes）
   
   然后按照你现在的note都得往后拖动1/2拍，然后至少让KIAI和有音效改变的绿线对准真正开始这个改变的时间点，Preview也最好重新设一次

Breeze wrote:

也可以在拼音后括号加英文 Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (Love Before B.C)我就只写拼音了，这个先记着，注意“Qian”和后面的“(”之间有个空格

中文歌map应该支持~
虽然我也不太喜欢周杰伦这人，不过他歌有些确实不错

[General]

1. 红色那部分在你去掉countdown后完全没用的，都删掉吧，不过我想这不是必须的我也觉得不必须，但总之删了
2. Tag可以再加个C-Pop这个建议不错~

[Timing]

1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490BPM的问题。。一开始我按126.81做，后来脑子大条把BPM改了。。现在改回来了offset我自己重新测了下，感觉1490还有点提前。。 用不了那么红线本来是用来改音量的、想想还是删掉了
   改变timing后记得resnap all note（在timing-Resnap All Notes）
   [attachment=0:a05c0]0.jpg[/attachment:a05c0]
   然后按照你现在的note都得往后拖动1/2拍，然后至少让KIAI和有音效改变的绿线对准真正开始这个改变的时间点，Preview也最好重新设一次Preview Time重新设了，绿线因为是按原先正确的timing放的，所以不用动

音效，你按照每4条白线加一次clap的方法来加，这是最基本的按照鼓点来加的音效音效下次再改、、图太长了、、
比如01:17:193开始加一个finish音代表高潮开始，然后01:18:140， 01:20:032， 01:21:925以此类推每4跟白线……都加个clap
先尝试着这样再把map完善一下欢迎再来mod。。

zsr123 wrote:

小学的时候挺喜欢周杰伦的说

...为什么这图我觉得note都比音乐提前很多..... 不同步啊= =..为什么我觉得timing对了、

qihanzhang wrote:

zsr123 wrote:

小学的时候挺喜欢周杰伦的说

...为什么这图我觉得note都比音乐提前很多..... 不同步啊= =..为什么我觉得timing对了、

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490 用不了那么红线

zsr123 wrote:

不同步啊= =..

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490

cmn_891127 wrote:

根据B难度，时间误差的确很大了

cmn_891127 wrote:

以下时间点基于原始时间
01:02:904右侧的绿线没有移动，导致slider(1)的移动速度很诡异fixed
02:58:592 (1-5,1-3,1)整体后移到白线，还有把前面的转盘拖到白线处结束fixed
03:17:282 (5) 前移至红线fixed

D难度的滑条速度！！！！

HellDawn wrote:

General
Please fix timing section and Slider tick rate musb be similar ! fixed

D
Please resnap all notes and fix timing section fixed
01:32:306- New combo fixed
01:33:016- Remove new combo fixed
02:21:040- Remove kiai fixed
02:22:460- Kiai ! fixed
02:30:030- New combo fixed
02:30:977- Remove new combo fixed

C
Hp Drain Rate -1
Overal Difficulty -1
only -1ed the Hp Drain Rate
...
Good luck yeah~

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queueyeah~

D:
因为我个人觉得这图还有很多地方可以完善重新打了次，有remap的冲动..排列什么的||- - 所以我只说一些我觉得比较大的问题

首先KIAI中间还夹有BREAKTIME 这我觉得很笨.....= = 我个人觉得KIAI从01:17:165开始就可以了 前面没必要.说的也是..改了
然后是节奏问题:整个难度的节奏密度太不统一 有的地方几乎摆满了二分之一排满的是整..整拍吧 而有的地方空了很大一块 我觉得这需要解决有在努力....像开头30秒之前那样的节奏密度 我觉得就比较适合现在的星数.原来我当年这么菜....
再次是这是个1星EASY难度的话 掉血和下落速度是4我个人觉得有点偏高了.改掉了~
00:31:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑条的位置我觉得不太合适 我个人喜欢这样排[attachment=0:163e6]1.jpg[/attachment:163e6]嗯嗯..改了
00:50:906 (5) - 作为EASY难度的话 这里应该拣重音下拍子比较合适 也就是所谓的长白线白线是拍?
00:52:562 这里空着很尴尬改了..
01:08:649 (5) - 后面为什么空着呢 继续下拍子呗嗯嗯..
01:40:586 (1) - 纵观整个图似乎就只有这里下了这么赶的拍子 所以很不合适多下几个半拍出来..可以吗（吐槽的老毛病又犯..改掉了..拍子)
后面问题大多类似 我就不再举例了...改了好久

C:
01:01:078 (3) - 这之后你把BREAKTIME拉到长白线结束 我不太明白理由重音时上下突然黑一下的效果..其实拉没的那部分也算break来着..
01:47:447 与其BREAKTIME拉到这 为什么不直接下一个NOTE呢黑屏效果充当note..创新一下嘛
03:07:882 (1) - 在我个人看来 这里就算最后一个KIAI开始了把kika重新设了.. 下一个好长的转盘 似乎有点无聊=_=..改短了,不知道沙包咋想
这个节奏就很整齐的 虽然个别地方有点空 但是我觉得就算一个合格的NORMAL了YEAH!!~ 不过AR7有点太狠了...改ar5了..

反震老挂B:没改掉的..等他....
Resnap all note啊！这是我干的...fixed
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因..
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩fixed
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+

A:
玩起来很嗨好兴奋.. 我就说点别的问题好了
音量我建议在高点 现在听起来不够燃（..我自重加了5..
02:51:321 (1) - 这之后的SOFT音量有点太高了 弄的没有SOFT的意义了 因为NORMAL音量好低减了
02:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我个人不太喜欢这种排列 看起来有点别扭 不过也不是什么问题可能是排成线太渣了...把滑条改了个角度
然后就是有的NEW COMBO实在太长了 还是短点好一句话一combo来着...
有一个NOTE没SNAP上fixed~
我很期待如果真RANK那天 这个难度会是什么样子..我原来作图的时候 可真是RANK了和做的时候两个样了..吓？...
现在已经跟我两个月前下载你这个图完全不一个样了=_+好温暖..还记得..（我是remap过这个难度来着）

嘛 加油吧~
嗯..

再给你个星 YEAH~谢谢~ [/color]

fanzhen0019 wrote:

offline changed sth..
一大段unsnapped很头疼啊 　

deepsea wrote:

D you mean A,I guess..
Streams and naughty spacing, a bit hard to read but guess fine for Insane.
Also fun to play.\:D/yeah~

C B
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.oi think it to be OK as this is a 5-star diff..anyway,whether change or not will up to fanzhen0019..

B C
00:37:421 (4,5) - A note stack on slider end is a little bit hard to read, since it's beginning of this song.(As a normal diff)unstacked


A D
02:39:966 (1) - The arrow is covered by previous 2 and 3 and making this hard to read.changed
03:27:991 (1) - Too sudden for an Easy?:Oremoved the note

wcx19911123 wrote:

我个人不喜欢国语歌0.0
所以只是随便看看

[General]
难度名实在是太奇葩嗯..
我建议sliderbody还是静音好点感觉声音也不大..所以没动

[D is for do not try]
fine

[C is for could be better]fixed
01:45:554 (8,9) - 重叠没弄好
03:00:075 (4,1) - ^

我受不了了辛苦你了..
不要给我kd

1. Circle Size change to the large

1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.
2. HP Drain change to 6?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~ ^^
我很討厭周傑倫 = = 不過還是幫你看看下~~

D is for do not try
00:38:840 (6,1) - overlap them at circle (5)?nice suggestion..fixed
02:58:892 (1) - this spinner is too long, and a bit boring to spin itmaked it shorter

C is for could be better

1. Circle Size change to the large

changed
00:47:120 (1) - why don't start this slider at 00:46:884 ?fixed
01:02:084 - fix this Drag Breaken..i just make it to letterbox at that point..style?or i will fix it if it is unrankable...
02:48:010 (2,3,4) - make them like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151672yeah..the arrangement was not wery good..fixed
03:13:087 (1) - change to a circle at here only ?nope(i follow the guitar here)

fz's b is for "bucuo"..waiting for him
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here?
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird.agree..
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo
01:41:769 (1) - ^
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ?
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle?
03:17:109 (x) - ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32

A is for amazing

1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.purple..
2. HP Drain change to 6?

done
00:36:947 (1) - why this New Combo color is same as the previous New Combo color?
00:40:496 (1) - ^
00:44:517 (1) - ^, i don't said too much, behind got a lot, please fix it ._.emm..i had used three colors,and now i changed it back
00:45:700 (6) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~[color=#BF008BF]just because,i like the irc at this point..personally...[/color]
01:08:767 - why don't continue to stack some note start from here??maybe we need a break?
01:16:218 (1) - too short of this spinner.. you need to change to a slider, or maybe you need to keep this spinner, you must delete this circle [ 01:17:165 (1) ] and the end of this spinner at 01:17:165but..auto can play 2000..
01:31:360 (x) - add a circle?i think both are ok..but i've just removed a circle at this point..
01:45:080 (8) - overlap it without grid snap.fixed
01:47:683 (3) - down 7 or 8 grid? x:264 y:204?changed,and to suit the coming spinner,i down it more than 10 grid..
01:47:919 (1) - this spinner end at 01:49:339 - ? if you agree this, make sure you delete the next Break Time but break time is essential...
01:49:339 - fix this green line timing.
01:50:995 (1) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~for the same reason..unchanged
02:00:931 (7) - add a New Combofixed
02:05:662 (7) - ^^
02:09:447 (6) - ^^
02:26:481 (8) - ^^
02:34:762 (x) - add a Circle?i removed it deliberately..
02:36:062 (1) - change to a slider better then spinner.did have some problem..change the time of the spinner,but use slider
02:42:095 (8) - can't see clearly of this slider.. move out to other placeyes..
02:44:225 (x) - add a circle?seems to be a vacant..i add a slider
02:49:902 (11) - add a New Combofixed
03:13:559 (7) - ^^
03:13:796 (8) - ^quite a long combo,but i suppose it to be the shape of heart..
03:20:420 (11) - ^, and move out to other place...just new comboed..prefer stack this time..
03:28:700 (6) - add a New Combofixed
03:29:647 (x) - add a circlechanged

----
sorry for my nazi mod~that ok~there are many useful non-nazi mod as well~
That'll and Good Luck yeah~:!:

KayeSara wrote:

挫折无限啊叹气..~不是有人讨厌国语歌曲就是讨厌周杰伦
不过我还是给你鼓励啦~坚持!

VortexFlow wrote:

感觉我的图和你是一摸一样的纳尼？我和你的图长得一样？..
你是不是有个用户名叫qihanzhang那个..我之前叫qihanzhang，名字改掉了..
。。。。。。
顺便问下怎么给星星那个..现在星星系统改版了，只能给裤兜星..
想给不会给啊、、那个..有支持就好..星星啥的都是浮云..(..太假了)
教下那个..现在只能去mod别人的图得kudosu再..

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queue
反震老挂B:
Resnap all note啊！ resnap没啥用 自己手动修复了
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因.. nothing changed
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊 --->35%
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩 后面都unsnap了..改了
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么 ^
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+ 不想动了Orz

deepsea wrote:

C <-----....
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.o
daijobu XD

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

fz's b is for "bucuo"
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here? nop
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound k
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird. Orz..but nothing changed
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674 k
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo k
01:41:769 (1) - ^ k
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here k
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo no
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ? no
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo removed 02:50.162
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle? resnapped a lot of parts..so nothing changed
03:17:109 (x) - ^ ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo ^
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32 k

deepsea wrote:

Sorry for forgot this:

A:01:08:175 (12) - reverse arrow is almost blocked by hit300(100 50 x?) of 9.fixed

B:seems 3/4 stack is not fixed but still fine I guess.

C, D: All good for me.

No kd for this post.

deepsea wrote:

._.

Nymph wrote:

泡了 好帅
新人什么的 最强了哈哈哈哈哈lala~yeah

Feena wrote:

没有star纯精神支持咯 加油哦>.<

Megurine Luka wrote:

wow

中文歌正在努力壮大> <对耶...

加油↖(^ω^)↗谢谢支持~

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ ?泡了 　

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ=good job这样~
再补颗星再谢~

Scorpiour wrote:

KTV中最喜欢的歌～～～支持下～～～

1. Chinese and Pop are not necessary for tags.
2. Start KIAI at here: 01:17:165, 02:21:514, 03:06:936
3. End KIAI at here: 01:49:339, 02:51:795, 03:37:217

1. clap下的地方略多而且不太成节奏 一般来说每小节第三白线一个足矣 用于奠定歌曲的速度 可以参考一下B难度的前半部分 如果是vocal重音或者其他地方觉得有必要可以用soft-hitwhislte来修饰 最好也有一定规律
2. 总体来说spacing太小了 大部分都是x0.8 在SV不高而且是最高难的情况下打起来移动方面欠佳 没有跟着音乐走的感觉 歌词中虽然大部分是二分音铺过去但是可以根据曲调来插入一定的1/1的slider来调和下口味 每句歌词之间的空白也有点残念
3. 下面是具体的一些东西:
4. 01:34:671 (6) - 尾部挡的有点过
5. 01:47:919 (1) - 结束在后面的长白线上
6. 02:51:321 (1) - 换一个在02:51:795结束的slider吧
7. 03:05:043 (T) - 试试这样
8. 03:21:366 (5,1) - 这里可以用03:21:367~03:21:840 slider 然后03:22:077 note来搞定, spinner有点突兀 03:22:550也要一个note

1. 00:38:722 (2) - 这里如果要跟音乐需要3个四分音 目前打起来略违和
2. 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
3. 01:59:749 (4) - whistle换clap
4. 02:01:641 (T) - ^
5. 02:03:297 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:717 (1) - clap
7. 02:05:426 (1) - 换clap
8. 02:05:900 (3,4) - clap
9. 后半段还是按前半段的方法下clap吧 副歌可以做一定变化
10. 02:06:846 (T) - 突然没声音了

1. clap的问题
2. 01:03:917 (T) - break不要延后
3. 01:43:662 (6) - new combo

1. clap的问题

Colin Hou wrote:

可能要大动手术 继续加油

Colin Hou wrote:

我是被外国蝙蝠拖来看的...

[General]:

1. Chinese and Pop are not necessary for tags.删了
2. Start KIAI at here: 01:17:165, 02:21:514, 03:06:936
3. End KIAI at here: 01:49:339, 02:51:795, 03:37:217

kiai改好了

[A is for amazing]:

1. clap下的地方略多而且不太成节奏 一般来说每小节第三白线一个足矣 用于奠定歌曲的速度 可以参考一下B难度的前半部分 如果是vocal重音或者其他地方觉得有必要可以用soft-hitwhislte来修饰 最好也有一定规律学习了，也改了，全三白线clap- -
2. 总体来说spacing太小了 大部分都是x0.8 在SV不高而且是最高难的情况下打起来移动方面欠佳 没有跟着音乐走的感觉 歌词中虽然大部分是二分音铺过去但是可以根据曲调来插入一定的1/1的slider来调和下口味 每句歌词之间的空白也有点残念排列重新弄了，这次基础ds*1.2，歌词空白留了几个可以用finish结尾的，其它的填上了
3. 下面是具体的一些东西:
4. 01:34:671 (6) - 尾部挡的有点过fixed
5. 01:47:919 (1) - 结束在后面的长白线上fixed
6. 02:51:321 (1) - 换一个在02:51:795结束的slider吧ok
7. 03:05:043 (T) - 试试这样自己也觉得转盘太长，按这个图来说，第一个转盘部分重新map了，后面的就这样做的
8. 03:21:366 (5,1) - 这里可以用03:21:367~03:21:840 slider 然后03:22:077 note来搞定, spinner有点突兀 03:22:550也要一个noteok

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']:

1. 00:38:722 (2) - 这里如果要跟音乐需要3个四分音 目前打起来略违和我感觉打起来还可以- -
2. 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped改掉了
3. 01:59:749 (4) - whistle换clap音效改了
4. 02:01:641 (T) - ^
5. 02:03:297 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:717 (1) - clap
7. 02:05:426 (1) - 换clap
8. 02:05:900 (3,4) - clap
9. 后半段还是按前半段的方法下clap吧 副歌可以做一定变化
10. 02:06:846 (T) - 突然没声音了->55

[C is for could be better]:

1. clap的问题音效都重新下了
2. 01:03:917 (T) - break不要延后fixed
3. 01:43:662 (6) - new combofixed

[D is for do not try]:

1. clap的问题音效重下了

希望能对这张图和今后的图有所帮助/
可能要大动手术 继续加油

CountdownOffset: 3

Aleks719 wrote:

General
You used less than 80% of mp3... There is a rule about procents of using files.I was informed that mapped part should be last to 80% of the mp3.. So not change
i suggest to cut end of song a bit if it's possible. If not... okay then.

D is for do not try
remove this line with the aid of notepad, it's useless :

CountdownOffset: 3

fixed
Hum, this diff starts earlier than others... strange but okay.
Whole diff is 0.75x . wtf. you could set sv 0.75 and 1.0x sections.fixed
01:46:501 - kiai shouldn't work in breaks. fix it by replacing timing sectionchange all diff.'s kiai time
03:37:217 (5) - add finishok

C is for could be better
01:46:501 - kiai shouldn't work in breaks. fix it by replacing timing section
03:37:217 (5) - add finishok

fz's B is for 'bucuo'
Set slider tickrate 2 for consistensechanged
02:29:794 (1) - remove this ncfixed
03:37:217 (1,2,3) - remove (2) and (3)? then all diff will have similar ending time. ah, and add finish to (1)this diff is a guest diff,though. i think this end is ok, so not change

A is for amazing
Turn on letterboxes foe consistencefixed
Set combo colors like in other diffs for consistence tooi use the purple for special use- -
01:47:919 (1) - finish this spinner here? 01:49:339 ? imo, better. also you could remove short break after spinnernot a bad suggestion.. but i need a breaktime
02:50:848 (6,7) - hum, looks like antijump with with spacing... i suggest to make them a bit more far from each other.fixed
02:58:892 (1,2,3) - fix spacing here pleasedistance spacing->0.5
03:13:559 (7) - add nc?it is where i use purple, i think it is ok
03:37:217 (7) - add finish to this last note?ok

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. combo颜色不一样, 貌似没什么特别里有用不同的颜色啊, 还是统一一下各难度的combo颜色吧

在A难度里用紫色的combo摆出两个（貌似）很晦涩的爱心._.

D is for do not cry

1. 00:31:743 (1) - 加finish?
2. 00:46:884 (5) - ^
3. 01:02:025 (4) - slider结尾加finish
4. 01:17:165 (1) - slider头加finish
5. 01:51:232 (1) - ^
6. 02:06:609 - 我觉得这段break不太必要, 前面不就才刚有个break, 这里可以考虑也map掉 map了
7. 02:36:654 (6) - 加finish
8. 03:06:936 (3) - ^
9. 03:22:077 (1) - slider头加finish

都加上了

C is for could be better

1. 00:46:884 (1) - slider头加finish
2. 01:02:025 (3) - slider尾加finish
3. 01:14:090 (1) - 加finish
4. 01:32:306 (5) - slider尾加finish
5. 02:06:373 (4) - ^
6. 02:21:514 (5) - 加finish
7. 02:51:085 - 这个break感觉没必要 map掉了
8. 03:06:936 (1) - ^
9. 03:22:077 (6) - slider尾加finish

都加了，最开始的也加上了，虽然没说

fz's B is for "bucuo"

1. HP drain rate-1或者2, 都比最后一个难度高了
2. 00:34:937 (5,6) - 建议取消clap这里, 用whistle, 加到00:34:818 (4,6)上, 这样更配合背景音
3. 00:39:313 (3) - slider尾, 建议用whistle代替clap, 感觉听着会更舒服一点
4. 00:58:003 (2) - 这里clap听着也不是太舒服, 可以考虑给00:58:003 (2,3)都加whistle
5. 01:51:232 (1) - 加finish?
6. 01:58:684 (9) - 蓝线clap太奇怪了, 还是去掉吧
7. 02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 不建议3/4拍的stack, 不太容易判断得出来, 建议还是按照常规间距来放
8. 02:41:622 (3) - 这个跟之前的02:40:676 (1)完全重叠了, 很影响判断, 建议把这个向上或者至少左右移动几小格让它不要和之前的完全重叠
   Slider拉得很漂亮

两个蓝色的我自己订正了，HP drain rate-2，重叠滑条后面一部分稍微动了一下排列
音效我听着没什么大问题也不清楚那种好不敢动还是留给反震- -
另外那个重叠的四分之三拍提出过，但是反震说不改

A is for awesome

1. 00:45:464 - 这里开始的1.5xBPM意义不明, 歌曲里又没到高潮部分, 感觉来得太突然了
   马上开始的“骑士神殿...”一节音调一下变高了的..我是这么理解来着..这段之前的两个滑条做成拐弯的，按照原速移动应该不会断combo，用来缓冲，我觉得应该没事了就只改了这两个拐弯的形状
   “古文明”那段原速打下来不合适，音调也提高了点，我感觉也没问题
2. 01:49:339 - ^
3. 02:07:083 - ^
4. 01:15:272 (8) - 这里new combo吧 fixed
5. 02:50:848 (6) - 突然减速new combo一个吧 fixed

• 
  Offset:1468 is better to me.(current one +6)
  
  Speaking of combo color, how about adding purple to all diffs? (It's already added in A.)

1. 00:16:602 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:20:387 (5) - Add new combo.
3. 00:28:076 (5) - ^
4. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line.
5. 02:12:051 (4) - Add new combo.
6. 02:13:943 (1) - Remove new combo.

1. 00:31:310 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:47:357 (T) - ^
3. 00:48:540 (3) - It's better not to stack it with the tail of slider because kinda hard for normal-player to read it.
4. 01:33:726 (2) - ^
5. 02:41:386 (3) - ^
6. 02:44:225 (7) - Move it above by 4 grids to make reading it more clear.
7. 02:47:064 (4) - Same as above. (Avoid stacking.)
8. 03:01:968 (2) - ^
9. 03:03:151 (4) - ^

1. 02:12:051 (1,2,3) - It's hard to read this rhythm. I strongly recommend you to change these notes to an one-repeat-slider.
2. 02:19:503 (T) - Remove this green line.
3. 02:25:299 (7) - Don't put a note under the path of slider unless it's an Insane difficulty.

• 
  Overall your jump-pattern of formation is good though, some still look kinda weird and have room for improvement.

1. 00:40:259 (5,2) - Looks kinda crowded. Since 00:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5) are jumps, I recommend you to make spacing wider between (5,1). That looks more clear.
2. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line.
3. 01:06:520 (3,4,5) - It's very hard to read this quick triple at first time because (3) is hidden by the slider.
4. 01:07:938 (1,2,3) - This one is also hard to read since (2) is hidden. How about moving all of (1,2,3) to stack (1) with (8)?
5. 01:15:864 (4,5) - It looks better to move these notes further from (2,3).
6. 01:24:498 (6,8,9) - When playing, they aren't stacked perfectly due to stack leniency. Please stack them manually. (Move (8,9) right and below by 2 grids.)

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Offset:1468 is better to me.(current one +6) changed
  
  Speaking of combo color, how about adding purple to all diffs? (It's already added in A.) not a bad suggestion and changed

[D]

1. 00:16:602 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:20:387 (5) - Add new combo.
3. 00:28:076 (5) - ^
4. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line.
5. 02:12:051 (4) - Add new combo.
6. 02:13:943 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed all

[C]

1. 00:31:310 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:47:357 (T) - ^
3. 00:48:540 (3) - It's better not to stack it with the tail of slider because kinda hard for normal-player to read it.
4. 01:33:726 (2) - ^
5. 02:41:386 (3) - ^
6. 02:44:225 (7) - Move it above by 4 grids to make reading it more clear.
7. 02:47:064 (4) - Same as above. (Avoid stacking.)
8. 03:01:968 (2) - ^
9. 03:03:151 (4) - ^ fixed all, except two on stack (02:41:386 (3)& 03:03:151 (4))

[B]

1. 02:12:051 (1,2,3) - It's hard to read this rhythm. I strongly recommend you to change these notes to an one-repeat-slider. many mods point it out and fanzhen( who make this GD) thinks it's ok
2. 02:19:503 (T) - Remove this green line. fixed
3. 02:25:299 (7) - Don't put a note under the path of slider unless it's an Insane difficulty. i think it to be ok... i'll ask him later

[A]

• 
  Overall your jump-pattern of formation is good though, some still look kinda weird and have room for improvement.

1. 00:40:259 (5,2) - Looks kinda crowded. Since 00:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5) are jumps, I recommend you to make spacing wider between (5,1). That looks more clear. change (1,2) to a slider, and move it left trying to make the pattern more readable
2. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line. fixed
3. 01:06:520 (3,4,5) - It's very hard to read this quick triple at first time because (3) is hidden by the slider. move them 3 grids right
4. 01:07:938 (1,2,3) - This one is also hard to read since (2) is hidden. How about moving all of (1,2,3) to stack (1) with (8)? 3 grids right again
5. 01:15:864 (4,5) - It looks better to move these notes further from (2,3). changed, spacing->1.2*
6. 01:24:498 (6,8,9) - When playing, they aren't stacked perfectly due to stack leniency. Please stack them manually. (Move (8,9) right and below by 2 grids.) fixed

That's it!
Overall good maps but still need more works. yeah, i'll
Star for now :3

KayeSara wrote:

Orz 终于有泡的迹象了

KayeSara wrote:

Orz 终于有泡的迹象了

cmn_891127 wrote:

KayeSara wrote:

Orz 终于有泡的迹象了

1. Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

fanzhen0019 wrote:

wwww...okay
put them like this
http://puu.sh/fxE8

21215421 wrote:

請問沒有做圖可以給星星媽 ? 我也十分喜歡這首歌

Heming James wrote:

很喜欢这首歌和这张图，星星一颗

JoJo wrote:

。。。但是。。。你这图完全没有rank希望啊。。。TvT

cmn_891127 wrote:

吱~

cmn_891127 wrote:

D太简单，跳过 我妈会生气的

[C is for could be better]
01:46:980 (4) - 后面接一个小slider 好嘛
02:19:627 (3) - It doesn't fit and completely breaks the flow. 2x repeat sliders almost NEVER play well. (我会告诉你我刚被吐槽，然后直接复制过来的么~ 转告那个modder 他不行不会用

SPOILER

03:10:964 (1) - 这个spinner太容易被吐槽了，离后面太近神马的，所以啦，remove & don't be lazy 先放一会 马上上课了（误

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']
00:52:568 (1,2,3,4) - 这个还是稍微旋转一下角度（其实是我在这里因为没看懂图，断了…… 帮助天国的反震改掉了

[A is for amazing]
02:00:937 (6) - 看不清了，NC fixed
02:57:833 (4,5) - 太坑人了 我会说这是专门留出来给人挑的吗(fixed

没了……不要再坟了……咱尽量