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Jay Chou - Love before BC

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Banana
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月27日 at 12:49:19

Artist: Jay Chou
Title: Love before BC
Tags: fanzhen0019 C-Pop Fantasy Vincent Fang
BPM: 126.81
Filesize: 6404kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.04 stars, 155 notes)
  2. fanzhen's Hard (4.71 stars, 405 notes)
  3. Normal (3.11 stars, 215 notes)
Download: Jay Chou - Love before BC
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我感到很疲倦离家乡还是很远

lyric:
点咱
爱在西元前/Immemorial Love for You
古巴比伦王颁布了汉摩拉比法典
The Babylonian king, and his Hammurabi's Code
刻在黑色的玄武岩
距今三千七百多年
As petroglyphs on basalt black is thousand years old
你在橱窗前
凝视碑文的字眼
You are standing at showcase, peering at the word
我却在旁静静欣赏你那张我深爱的脸
My spoony eyes on your face, but you never know
祭司神殿征战弓箭是谁的从前
Time flooded away the fane, time washed away the bow
喜欢在人潮中你只属於我的那画面
Just enjoying you, and time is getting slow
经过苏美女神身边
我以女神之名许愿
Aside the Goddess of Sumer, vowing with prayerful tone
思念像底格里斯河般的漫延
My missing for you, even as Tigris' flow
当古文明只剩下难解的语言
We will never be told the genesis of ancient soul
传说就成了永垂不朽的诗篇
But the everlasting legends were presented thousand years ago
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我给你的爱写在西元前
深埋在美索不达米亚平原
At Mesopotamia plain, I left the immemorial love for you
几十个世纪后出土发现
泥板上的字迹依然清晰可见
Even covered by old stain, the love mark is still brand-new
我给你的爱写在西元前
深埋在美索不达米亚平原
At Mesopotamia plain, I left the immemorial love for you
用楔形文字刻下了永远
那已风化千年的誓言
Arrowheaded characters are the vow can be forever viewed
一切又重演
It was rebuilt, it was rebuilt
我感到很疲倦离家乡还是很远
Cozy home is far away still
害怕再也不能回到你身边
Just fearing I can never come to you
爱在西元前
Immemorial love for you
爱在西元前
Immemorial love for you
JoJo
我Jay fan..=w=

。。。但是。。。你这图完全没有rank希望啊。。。TvT

Timing我就不吐槽了。。
Artist应该是Jay Chou。。
逃走。。
对了扔个星吧=w=
Topic Starter
Banana
谢谢Artist 的更正、
谢谢星星、
没希望吗、望天、
timing、望天、
subarasikibuta
没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.
fanzhen0019
BPM 253大丈夫?没那么快吧lol
下完只有17kb..请full submit

star`
Topic Starter
Banana
我没下4分拍、其实就是126、、重新传过了、
JoJo
看了排列觉得你很有天赋啊~对节奏的把握也非常好,
第一张图能做到这样。。不。。已经超越我了。。= =!(?)
(这时我坚强的意志打消了我想逃走的冲动。。= =!)

BPM的话,你的应该没问题。。。(本来觉得是很奇葩的数字。。)

blah blah..几个地方吐槽一下吧。。
Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
combo color太相似了,不好分辨呢~
BG分辨率需要是800*600或者1024*768才行~
mp3比特率recode到128~192kbps之间吧~
你的storyboard是误操作么。。觉得还是不要比较好。。(顺便文件夹里有更换artist前留下的“Jay Zhou - Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (qihanzhang).osb”文件~果断大卸八块啊!~)
你需要在每个难度相同的位置设置一个preview time~一般在高潮前~(你的KIAI好乱。。一般只在高潮设置KIAI。。你懂的。。)Preview time设置方法:Timing==>Set Current Position as Preview Point.
Audio Lead-in Time没统一(Currently A=2018, C=2029, D=2029 建议统一到2000)

排列的话我只指出一些会导致Unrankable的stuff~(没列出的不代表都没有问题@_@..)
[C is for could be better]
你需要Timing ==> Resnap all notes.
00:40:537 (6,1) - Spacing.
00:42:311 (5) - 箭头
00:51:301 (3,4) - Confused.
00:58:871 (6) - New combo?
01:12:593 (1) - ...太突然,后面会很难接上

[A is for amazing]
你需要Timing ==> Resnap all notes.
●感觉和C很像是我的错觉么。。偷懒可不行啊= =!
00:42:312 (5) - Arrow
00:51:301 (3,4) - ...(真的是复制粘贴的么。。
02:14:582 (10,1) - 这样的遮挡是不行的~
02:50:068 (8,1) - 这种跳也是绝对不行的。。。(Orz
03:04:416 (1) - 在后一格的白线结束呀!

先写这么多了~@_@
作为第一张图已经做的不错了~但是要rank还是路漫漫其修远啊~~~~~
加油吧~!=w=

EDIT:哦对了!忘记说了,上传的时候顺便把帖子标题修复了吧~(Jay Zhou ==> Jay Chou)
Topic Starter
Banana
回复楼上:
表扬收下了、、(羞)


blah blah..几个地方吐槽一下吧。。

Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
●combo color太相似了,不好分辨呢~
把深的调深了、
●BG分辨率需要是800*600或者1024*768才行~
改了、
●mp3比特率recode到128~192kbps之间吧~
一定要吗、、比特率是、、等我百度了再来、、
●你的storyboard是误操作么。。觉得还是不要比较好。。(顺便文件夹里有更换artist前留下的“Jay Zhou - Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (qihanzhang).osb”文件~果断大卸八块啊!~)
那个文件删了、
●你需要在每个难度相同的位置设置一个preview time~一般在高潮前~(你的KIAI好乱。。一般只在高潮设置KIAI。。你懂的。。)Preview time设置方法:Timing==>Set Current Position as Preview Point.
kika啥的我吧两个碎的kika连在一起了、
preview time?、、谢谢对新手的照顾、不过我好像更菜一点、、

●Audio Lead-in Time没统一(Currently A=2018, C=2029, D=2029 建议统一到2000)
都删了,现在不需要了
排列的话我只指出一些会导致
Unrankable的stuff~(没列出的不代
表都没有问题@_@..)
不全没事、、总之谢谢~
[C is for could be better]
●你需要Timing ==> Resnap all notes.
手工拖到白线上可以吗?
r00:40:537 (6,1) - Spacing.
fixed~
b00:42:311 (5) - 箭头
转了个角度、、
r00:51:301 (3,4) - Confused.
一定要改?、好吧、fixed
b00:58:871 (6) - New combo?
fixed
b01:12:593 (1) - ...太突然,后面会很难接上
跟着周董下note了、
[A is for amazing]
●你需要Timing ==> Resnap all notes.
嗯、
●感觉和C很像是我的错觉么。。偷懒可不行啊= =!
先做的A||——、、后来把难度大的去掉成了C、、嗯、重排了前半部分
b00:42:312 (5) - Arrow
是音效问题吗?我把它转了一下、
r00:51:301 (3,4) - ...(真的是复制粘贴的么。。
、、是指和C一样吗、、insane难度也不能挡上啥、、?我把C改了、
r02:14:582 (10,1) - 这样的遮挡是不行的~
fixed~
r02:50:068 (8,1) - 这种跳也是绝对不行的。。。(Orz
fixed、
b03:04:416 (1) - 在后一格的白线结束呀!
fixed、
先写这么多了~@_@
对之后内容的欢迎、、
作为第一张图已经做的不错了~但是要rank还是路漫漫其修远啊~~~~~加油吧~!=w=
嗯?望天、、
rank是口号、一定要喊的~

EDIT:哦对了!忘记说了,上传的时候顺便把帖子标题修复了吧~
(Jay Zhou ==> Jay Chou)
好了、
NatsumeRin
看了一下,我觉得楼主节奏和音效天赋都是有的……排版大概是需要慢满磨一磨 (我现在的感觉是不知道从何说起)

基础问题Joshua Lost说的比较全了,我争取补充一些:

BPM……这绝对不是250+,http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32855 <<请对照一下什么是高BPM。这个应该是现有BPM除2,但说实话,这个timing测的如此有零有整我也没确认准不准。(我不喜欢周杰伦,不好意思)

Preview Point没有设,选到合适位置,timing下拉菜单的最后一项。

关于比特率,你查完后可以下个AudioAudition之类的东西来转码率,不过通常要重新测定offset。

C和D两个难度countdown没有去掉。

……重复一遍是排版暂时难以吐槽,我觉得需要大手术。主要是四分音的间距不要太离谱和其他时候不要太规矩。
Topic Starter
Banana
谢谢很详细的补充、谢谢星星、
bpm除以二了、、
preview point 设好了,虽然还是不知道它是干啥的、
码率转了,用的千千静听、
cutdown删了、
排列的问题、望天
这个能力要磨很久吧、刷图的时候多注意点好了、似乎也没什么办法、
fanzhen0019
o.o
我记得第一次在卡拉OK唱的歌就这个
现在都不怎么听周董的歌了lol


打了一把大致看了一下
果断比我first map强多了
不过排列啥的www
-C-
Resnap All Notes
01:50-51左右这根红线去掉 后面note从01:50:998开始
02:43:289 (1) - slider结尾加个clap会好点吧
02:52:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 没hitsound..
03:04:615 (1,2,3) - 摆下去?

排版...挤着一坨没问题吗

-A-
Resnap All Notes
01:44:845 (1,1,1,1,1) - combo spam..
02:10:877 (1,1) - what the... 你是忘记删掉这个slider了吗lol
02:33:351 (2,3) - 间距..被阴了
03:37:457 这根绿线加KIAI? 后面不是没note了吗lol

-D-
Resnap All Notes
好随意的间距..
00:16:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这什么..你也太懒了吧._.
00:31:745 (17) - new combo
00:39:316 (25,26) - 挡住了 unrankable
00:58:951 (1,2) - 间距
01:03:919 这个break..为啥不map掉这部分?
剩下的..是没做完吗
不堪入目lol

加油!
Topic Starter
Banana
-C-
Resnap All Notes
额、fixed
01:50-51左右这根红线去掉 后面note从01:50:998开始
额?红线去掉?我是用来调声音大小的、、出现副作用了吗、、
02:43:289 (1) - slider结尾加个clap会好点吧
是的、fixed
02:52:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 没hitsound..
有的、、100%的soft、、加不上去了
03:04:615 (1,2,3) - 摆下去?
嗯、把它们都删掉了、fixed
排版...挤着一坨没问题吗
排版、、望天
这个据楼上上说要大修、额,在努力提高水平、

-A-
Resnap All Notes
fixed
01:44:845 (1,1,1,1,1)
- combo spam..
是newcombo太多?
如果是的话fixed

02:10:877 (1,1) - what the... 你是忘记删掉这个slider了吗lol
||- -、啥时候冒出来的?fixed、
02:33:351 (2,3) - 间距..被阴了
fixed
03:37:457 这根绿线加KIAI? 后面不是没note了吗lol
我只是想最后来个烟花效果、、
嗯、最后加了kika的结束点、

-D-
本来准备昨天做的、但是去改A、C难度了、这个、这个只是下了节奏、辛苦你了
Resnap All Notes
这个等继续做时再改、、偷懒
好随意的间距..
00:16:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这什么..你也太懒了吧._.
00:31:745 (17) - new combo
00:39:316 (25,26) - 挡住了 unrankable
00:58:951 (1,2) - 间距
01:03:919 这个break..为啥不map掉这部分?
剩下的..是没做完吗
不堪入目lol
额、、
加油!
灰的~谢谢你~
Topic Starter
Banana

3kinnagi wrote:

没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.
会的~
mjw5150
周董的歌~
Topic Starter
Banana
谢谢星星~
Real_Imouto
A难度排列碉堡了
Topic Starter
Banana
额、排列又出问题了吗、望天、谢谢星星、
KayeSara
这首我超喜欢~ :)
Topic Starter
Banana
谢谢星星、恩、
Nymph
加油 加油 加油!
Topic Starter
Banana
好的好的好的~
KayeSara
刚刚看了下
当然只看了A难度
01:39:287 - 去掉note
01:39:524 - ^
01:39:879 - add note(我超级新手,建议可以无视,只是喜欢这首歌曲,感觉应该这种调,就说下。。。有点班门弄斧啦~呜呜)
新手作图。。。。我都不敢想象了 :( 我可以把自己的图坟了
Topic Starter
Banana

KayeSara wrote:

刚刚看了下
当然只看了A难度
01:39:287 - 去掉note fixed
01:39:524 - ^ 没动、、
01:39:879 - add notefixed
(我超级新手,建议可以无视,只是喜欢这首歌曲喜欢就好
感觉应该这种调,就说下。。。有点班门弄斧啦~呜呜)没事、都是新手、可以讨论的说
新手作图。。。。我都不敢想象了 :( 我可以把自己的图坟了额、、要不是前面有mod、、
:D
Love len
不對,那麼厲害?給你star~
雖然我不喜歡jay zhou(jay迷別打我啊!
Topic Starter
Banana

Love len wrote:

不對,那麼厲害?給你star~
雖然我不喜歡jay zhou(jay迷別打我啊!
谢谢星星~
cmn_891127
B和G是否为一张图???如果是guest diff要标注作者全名或简称,TAG也要加上全名
支持中文歌!!!早日冒泡!!!
Topic Starter
Banana

cmn_891127 wrote:

B和G是否为一张图???如果是guest diff要标注作者全名或简称,TAG也要加上全名
支持中文歌!!!早日冒泡!!!
G是不小心加进去了的、删了&full submitioned,tag里加了fanzhen0019,我也支持中文歌~我也希望冒泡~
cmn_891127

qihanzhang wrote:

Artist: Jay Chou
Title: Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian
Tags: Chinese Pop
BPM: 126.81
Filesize: 5659kb
Play Time: 03:37
tags要所有的diff都改的~要不就会像酱紫

还有
Version:A is for amazing
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:C is for could be better
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:D is for do not try
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:fz's B is for 'bucuo'
PreviewTime: 45978
我就是这样被戳泡的,呜呜呜~
Topic Starter
Banana

cmn_891127 wrote:

qihanzhang wrote:

Artist: Jay Chou
Title: Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian
Tags: Chinese Pop
BPM: 126.81
Filesize: 5659kb
Play Time: 03:37
tags要所有的diff都改的~要不就会像酱紫fixed

还有
Version:A is for amazing
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:C is for could be better
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:D is for do not try
PreviewTime: 77877
Version:fz's B is for 'bucuo'
PreviewTime: 45978
我就是这样被戳泡的,呜呜呜~额、、谢谢提醒,fixed
resubmitted、
fanzhen0019
hoLysoup
ˊ周大俠<3

3kinnagi wrote:

没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.
☆~
Topic Starter
Banana

hoLysoup wrote:

ˊ周大俠<3

3kinnagi wrote:

没望也给颗…毕竟好歌…
edit:放在08可以rank了...加油...可以的.
☆~
谢谢~
会努力的~
cmn_891127
我再来补颗星~为什么现在会限制回复长度了?
Topic Starter
Banana

cmn_891127 wrote:

我再来补颗星~为什么现在会限制回复长度了?
谢谢~不知道
_Kiva
Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian = Love Before D.C?
hahahha
Topic Starter
Banana

_Kiva wrote:

Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian = Love Before D.C?
hahahha
why D.C?i only know Washington D.C..
if translated literally,it would become Love before Christ.
i may find a better translation.. :D
thanks for your star~
Kanon
Diff名字亮爆了 :)

另外歌词神级翻译啊字数字数
Topic Starter
Banana

Kanon wrote:

Diff名字亮爆了 :)谢谢~

另外歌词神级翻译啊嗯~字数字数...
谢谢星星~~ :D
_Kiva
哎哟说错了应该是LOVE BEFORE B.C
(好像还是不对
B.C貌似是公元把歌名改成爱在公元前怎么样
fanzhen0019
我巨爽

big fast human heart

Finally finished

Download: Jay Chou - Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (qihanzhang) [G is for guest].osu
Sun Rainbow
这条歌太好了
不知什么时候会ranked呢?
虽然我是初音的FANS,不是Jay的FANS……
Topic Starter
Banana

_Kiva wrote:

哎哟说错了应该是LOVE BEFORE B.C
(好像还是不对
B.C貌似是公元把歌名改成爱在公元前怎么样
....早说中文我就不翻字典了
歌名的事我问问周董、、(误
Topic Starter
Banana

fanzhen0019 wrote:

我巨爽

big fast human heart

Finally finished
8-)
Topic Starter
Banana

Love miku1 wrote:

这条歌太好了我也是这么想的
不知什么时候会ranked呢?我也不知道(好像很没主见的说)
虽然我是初音的FANS,不是Jay的FANS……...我是脚踏两条船的 :o
Breeze

_Kiva wrote:

哎哟说错了应该是LOVE BEFORE B.C
(好像还是不对
B.C貌似是公元把歌名改成爱在公元前怎么样
中文歌用拼音没问题的,我以前的中文map也是拼音的,只要注意每个字之间空格和首字母大写就好
也可以在拼音后括号加英文 Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (Love Before B.C),注意“Qian”和后面的“(”之间有个空格

中文歌map应该支持
虽然我也不太喜欢周杰伦这人,不过他歌有些确实不错

[General]
  1. 除了[A is for amazing]难度外,用记事本打开其他难度的osu文件,你会看到如下code
    [General]
    AudioFilename: azxyq.mp3
    AudioLeadIn: 0
    PreviewTime: 77877
    Countdown: 0
    SampleSet: Normal
    StackLeniency: 0.6
    Mode: 0
    LetterboxInBreaks: 1
    CountdownOffset: 3
    红色那部分在你去掉countdown后完全没用的,都删掉吧,不过我想这不是必须的
  2. Tag可以再加个C-Pop
[Timing]
  1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490 用不了那么红线
    改变timing后记得resnap all note(在timing-Resnap All Notes)

    然后按照你现在的note都得往后拖动1/2拍,然后至少让KIAI和有音效改变的绿线对准真正开始这个改变的时间点,Preview也最好重新设一次
音效,你按照每4条白线加一次clap的方法来加,这是最基本的按照鼓点来加的音效
比如01:17:193开始加一个finish音代表高潮开始,然后01:18:140, 01:20:032, 01:21:925以此类推每4跟白线……都加个clap
先尝试着这样再把map完善一下
Topic Starter
Banana

Breeze wrote:

也可以在拼音后括号加英文 Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (Love Before B.C)我就只写拼音了,这个先记着,注意“Qian”和后面的“(”之间有个空格

中文歌map应该支持~
虽然我也不太喜欢周杰伦这人,不过他歌有些确实不错

[General]
  1. 红色那部分在你去掉countdown后完全没用的,都删掉吧,不过我想这不是必须的我也觉得不必须,但总之删了
  2. Tag可以再加个C-Pop这个建议不错~
[Timing]
  1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490BPM的问题。。一开始我按126.81做,后来脑子大条把BPM改了。。现在改回来了offset我自己重新测了下,感觉1490还有点提前。。 用不了那么红线本来是用来改音量的、想想还是删掉了
    改变timing后记得resnap all note(在timing-Resnap All Notes)
    [attachment=0:a05c0]0.jpg[/attachment:a05c0]
    然后按照你现在的note都得往后拖动1/2拍,然后至少让KIAI和有音效改变的绿线对准真正开始这个改变的时间点,Preview也最好重新设一次Preview Time重新设了,绿线因为是按原先正确的timing放的,所以不用动
音效,你按照每4条白线加一次clap的方法来加,这是最基本的按照鼓点来加的音效音效下次再改、、图太长了、、
比如01:17:193开始加一个finish音代表高潮开始,然后01:18:140, 01:20:032, 01:21:925以此类推每4跟白线……都加个clap
先尝试着这样再把map完善一下欢迎再来mod。。
:D
zsr123
小学的时候挺喜欢周杰伦的说 :D

...为什么这图我觉得note都比音乐提前很多..... 不同步啊= =..
Topic Starter
Banana

zsr123 wrote:

小学的时候挺喜欢周杰伦的说 :D

...为什么这图我觉得note都比音乐提前很多..... 不同步啊= =..为什么我觉得timing对了、
cmn_891127

qihanzhang wrote:

zsr123 wrote:

小学的时候挺喜欢周杰伦的说 :D

...为什么这图我觉得note都比音乐提前很多..... 不同步啊= =..为什么我觉得timing对了、
根据B难度,时间误差的确很大了

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]
  1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490 用不了那么红线
这个时间的确很好...你目前的note时间比这个还要早

以下时间点基于原始时间
01:02:904右侧的绿线没有移动,导致slider(1)的移动速度很诡异
02:58:592 (1-5,1-3,1)整体后移到白线,还有把前面的转盘拖到白线处结束
03:17:282 (5) 前移至红线

D难度的滑条速度!!!!
Topic Starter
Banana

zsr123 wrote:

不同步啊= =..

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490

cmn_891127 wrote:

根据B难度,时间误差的确很大了
狡辩一下、、我把自己电脑里的爱在西元前莫名其妙的改掉了、、改成了之前没转码的版本、、于是。。。。 :o
现在应该没问题了。。

cmn_891127 wrote:

以下时间点基于原始时间
01:02:904右侧的绿线没有移动,导致slider(1)的移动速度很诡异fixed
02:58:592 (1-5,1-3,1)整体后移到白线,还有把前面的转盘拖到白线处结束fixed
03:17:282 (5) 前移至红线fixed

D难度的滑条速度!!!!
HellDawn
General
Please fix timing section and Slider tick rate musb be similar !

D
Please resnap all notes and fix timing section
01:32:306- New combo
01:33:016- Remove new combo
02:21:040- Remove kiai
02:22:460- Kiai !
02:30:030- New combo
02:30:977- Remove new combo

C
Hp Drain Rate -1
Overal Difficulty -1

...
Good luck
Topic Starter
Banana

HellDawn wrote:

General
Please fix timing section and Slider tick rate musb be similar ! fixed

D
Please resnap all notes and fix timing section fixed
01:32:306- New combo fixed
01:33:016- Remove new combo fixed
02:21:040- Remove kiai fixed
02:22:460- Kiai ! fixed
02:30:030- New combo fixed
02:30:977- Remove new combo fixed

C
Hp Drain Rate -1
Overal Difficulty -1
only -1ed the Hp Drain Rate
...
Good luck yeah~
thanks for your mod~ :D
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queue

D:
因为我个人觉得这图还有很多地方可以完善 所以我只说一些我觉得比较大的问题 :P

首先KIAI中间还夹有BREAKTIME 这我觉得很笨= = 我个人觉得KIAI从01:17:165开始就可以了 前面没必要.
然后是节奏问题:整个难度的节奏密度太不统一 有的地方几乎摆满了二分之一 而有的地方空了很大一块 我觉得这需要解决.像开头30秒之前那样的节奏密度 我觉得就比较适合现在的星数.

再次是这是个1星EASY难度的话 掉血和下落速度是4我个人觉得有点偏高了.
00:31:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑条的位置我觉得不太合适 我个人喜欢这样排
00:50:906 (5) - 作为EASY难度的话 这里应该拣重音下拍子比较合适 也就是所谓的白线
00:52:562 这里空着很尴尬
01:08:649 (5) - 后面为什么空着呢 继续下拍子呗
01:40:586 (1) - 纵观整个图似乎就只有这里下了这么赶的拍子 所以很不合适
后面问题大多类似 我就不再举例了

C:
01:01:078 (3) - 这之后你把BREAKTIME拉到长白线结束 我不太明白理由
01:47:447 与其BREAKTIME拉到这 为什么不直接下一个NOTE呢
03:07:882 (1) - 在我个人看来 这里就算最后一个KIAI开始了 下一个好长的转盘 似乎有点无聊=_=
这个节奏就很整齐的 虽然个别地方有点空 但是我觉得就算一个合格的NORMAL了 不过AR7有点太狠了...

反震老挂B:
Resnap all note啊!
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因..
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+

A:
玩起来很嗨 我就说点别的问题好了
音量我建议在高点 现在听起来不够燃(..我自重
02:51:321 (1) - 这之后的SOFT音量有点太高了 弄的没有SOFT的意义了 因为NORMAL音量好低
02:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我个人不太喜欢这种排列 看起来有点别扭 不过也不是什么问题
然后就是有的NEW COMBO实在太长了 还是短点好
有一个NOTE没SNAP上
我很期待如果真RANK那天 这个难度会是什么样子..我原来作图的时候 可真是RANK了和做的时候两个样了..
现在已经跟我两个月前下载你这个图完全不一个样了=_+


嘛 加油吧~


再给你个星 :P

Topic Starter
Banana

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queueyeah~

D:
因为我个人觉得这图还有很多地方可以完善重新打了次,有remap的冲动..排列什么的||- - 所以我只说一些我觉得比较大的问题 :P

首先KIAI中间还夹有BREAKTIME 这我觉得很笨.....= = 我个人觉得KIAI从01:17:165开始就可以了 前面没必要.说的也是..改了
然后是节奏问题:整个难度的节奏密度太不统一 有的地方几乎摆满了二分之一排满的是整..整拍吧 而有的地方空了很大一块 我觉得这需要解决有在努力....像开头30秒之前那样的节奏密度 我觉得就比较适合现在的星数.原来我当年这么菜....

再次是这是个1星EASY难度的话 掉血和下落速度是4我个人觉得有点偏高了.改掉了~
00:31:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑条的位置我觉得不太合适 我个人喜欢这样排[attachment=0:163e6]1.jpg[/attachment:163e6]嗯嗯..改了
00:50:906 (5) - 作为EASY难度的话 这里应该拣重音下拍子比较合适 也就是所谓的白线白线是拍?
00:52:562 这里空着很尴尬改了..
01:08:649 (5) - 后面为什么空着呢 继续下拍子呗嗯嗯..
01:40:586 (1) - 纵观整个图似乎就只有这里下了这么赶的拍子 所以很不合适多下几个半拍出来..可以吗(吐槽的老毛病又犯..改掉了..拍子)
后面问题大多类似 我就不再举例了...改了好久

C:
01:01:078 (3) - 这之后你把BREAKTIME拉到长白线结束 我不太明白理由重音时上下突然黑一下的效果..其实拉没的那部分也算break来着..
01:47:447 与其BREAKTIME拉到这 为什么不直接下一个NOTE呢黑屏效果充当note..创新一下嘛
03:07:882 (1) - 在我个人看来 这里就算最后一个KIAI开始了把kika重新设了.. 下一个好长的转盘 似乎有点无聊=_=..改短了,不知道沙包咋想
这个节奏就很整齐的 虽然个别地方有点空 但是我觉得就算一个合格的NORMAL了YEAH!!~ 不过AR7有点太狠了...改ar5了..

反震老挂B:没改掉的..等他....
Resnap all note啊!这是我干的...fixed
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因..
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩fixed
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+

A:
玩起来很嗨好兴奋.. 我就说点别的问题好了
音量我建议在高点 现在听起来不够燃(..我自重加了5..
02:51:321 (1) - 这之后的SOFT音量有点太高了 弄的没有SOFT的意义了 因为NORMAL音量好低减了
02:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我个人不太喜欢这种排列 看起来有点别扭 不过也不是什么问题可能是排成线太渣了...把滑条改了个角度
然后就是有的NEW COMBO实在太长了 还是短点好一句话一combo来着...
有一个NOTE没SNAP上fixed~
我很期待如果真RANK那天 这个难度会是什么样子..我原来作图的时候 可真是RANK了和做的时候两个样了..吓?...
现在已经跟我两个月前下载你这个图完全不一个样了=_+
好温暖..还记得..(我是remap过这个难度来着)

嘛 加油吧~
嗯..

再给你个星 :PYEAH~谢谢~ [/color]
除了GD还有好多没动的(KIKA什么的——)..明天再说..困了..明天...[strike]天杀的军训....[/strike]
edit:D level 改完了..(几乎是remap了一次||- -..),吖..昨天忘谢(详尽而实用的)mod谢星了~今天补..
fanzhen0019
offline changed sth..
一大段unsnapped很头疼啊  
Topic Starter
Banana

fanzhen0019 wrote:

offline changed sth..
一大段unsnapped很头疼啊  
那个...貌似是我干的.. :?
deepsea
D
Streams and naughty spacing, a bit hard to read but guess fine for Insane.
Also fun to play.\:D/

C
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.o

B
00:37:421 (4,5) - A note stack on slider end is a little bit hard to read, since it's beginning of this song.(As a normal diff)


A
02:39:966 (1) - The arrow is covered by previous 2 and 3 and making this hard to read.
03:27:991 (1) - Too sudden for an Easy?:O
Topic Starter
Banana

deepsea wrote:

D you mean A,I guess..
Streams and naughty spacing, a bit hard to read but guess fine for Insane.
Also fun to play.\:D/yeah~ :D

C B
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.oi think it to be OK as this is a 5-star diff..anyway,whether change or not will up to fanzhen0019..

B C
00:37:421 (4,5) - A note stack on slider end is a little bit hard to read, since it's beginning of this song.(As a normal diff)unstacked


A D
02:39:966 (1) - The arrow is covered by previous 2 and 3 and making this hard to read.changed
03:27:991 (1) - Too sudden for an Easy?:Oremoved the note
thanks for your mod and star~oh a BAT post 8-)
wcx19911123
我个人不喜欢国语歌0.0
所以只是随便看看

[General]
难度名实在是太奇葩
我建议sliderbody还是静音好点

[D is for do not try]
fine

[C is for could be better]
01:45:554 (8,9) - 重叠没弄好
03:00:075 (4,1) - ^

我受不了了
不要给我kd
Topic Starter
Banana

wcx19911123 wrote:

我个人不喜欢国语歌0.0
所以只是随便看看

[General]
难度名实在是太奇葩嗯..
我建议sliderbody还是静音好点感觉声音也不大..所以没动

[D is for do not try]
fine

[C is for could be better]fixed
01:45:554 (8,9) - 重叠没弄好
03:00:075 (4,1) - ^

我受不了了辛苦你了..
不要给我kd
thanks for your time and mod
The 08 team_Bourdon
你好~ ^^
我很討厭周傑倫 = = 不過還是幫你看看下~~

D is for do not try
00:38:840 (6,1) - overlap them at circle (5)?
02:58:892 (1) - this spinner is too long, and a bit boring to spin it

C is for could be better
  1. Circle Size change to the large
00:47:120 (1) - why don't start this slider at 00:46:884 ?
01:02:084 - fix this Drag Break
02:48:010 (2,3,4) - make them like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151672
03:13:087 (1) - change to a circle at here only ?

fz's b is for "bucuo"
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here?
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird.
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo
01:41:769 (1) - ^
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ?
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle?
03:17:109 (x) - ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32

A is for amazing
  1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.
  2. HP Drain change to 6?
00:36:947 (1) - why this New Combo color is same as the previous New Combo color?
00:40:496 (1) - ^
00:44:517 (1) - ^, i don't said too much, behind got a lot, please fix it ._.
00:45:700 (6) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~
01:08:767 - why don't continue to stack some note start from here??
01:16:218 (1) - too short of this spinner.. you need to change to a slider, or maybe you need to keep this spinner, you must delete this circle [ 01:17:165 (1) ] and the end of this spinner at 01:17:165
01:31:360 (x) - add a circle?
01:45:080 (8) - overlap it without grid snap.
01:47:683 (3) - down 7 or 8 grid? x:264 y:204?
01:47:919 (1) - this spinner end at 01:49:339 - ? if you agree this, make sure you delete the next Break Time
01:49:339 - fix this green line timing.
01:50:995 (1) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~
02:00:931 (7) - add a New Combo
02:05:662 (7) - ^
02:09:447 (6) - ^
02:26:481 (8) - ^
02:34:762 (x) - add a Circle?
02:36:062 (1) - change to a slider better then spinner.
02:42:095 (8) - can't see clearly of this slider.. move out to other place
02:44:225 (x) - add a circle?
02:49:902 (11) - add a New Combo
03:13:559 (7) - ^
03:13:796 (8) - ^
03:20:420 (11) - ^, and move out to other place...
03:28:700 (6) - add a New Combo
03:29:647 (x) - add a circle

----
sorry for my nazi mod~
That'll and Good Luck :!: ;)
Topic Starter
Banana

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~ ^^
我很討厭周傑倫 = = 不過還是幫你看看下~~

D is for do not try
00:38:840 (6,1) - overlap them at circle (5)?nice suggestion..fixed
02:58:892 (1) - this spinner is too long, and a bit boring to spin itmaked it shorter

C is for could be better
  1. Circle Size change to the large
changed
00:47:120 (1) - why don't start this slider at 00:46:884 ?fixed
01:02:084 - fix this Drag Breaken..i just make it to letterbox at that point..style?or i will fix it if it is unrankable...
02:48:010 (2,3,4) - make them like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151672yeah..the arrangement was not wery good..fixed
03:13:087 (1) - change to a circle at here only ?nope(i follow the guitar here)

fz's b is for "bucuo"..waiting for him
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here?
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird.agree..
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo
01:41:769 (1) - ^
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ?
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle?
03:17:109 (x) - ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32

A is for amazing
  1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.purple..
  2. HP Drain change to 6?
done
00:36:947 (1) - why this New Combo color is same as the previous New Combo color?
00:40:496 (1) - ^
00:44:517 (1) - ^, i don't said too much, behind got a lot, please fix it ._.emm..i had used three colors,and now i changed it back
00:45:700 (6) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~[color=#BF008BF]just because,i like the irc at this point..personally...[/color]
01:08:767 - why don't continue to stack some note start from here??maybe we need a break?
01:16:218 (1) - too short of this spinner.. you need to change to a slider, or maybe you need to keep this spinner, you must delete this circle [ 01:17:165 (1) ] and the end of this spinner at 01:17:165but..auto can play 2000..
01:31:360 (x) - add a circle?i think both are ok..but i've just removed a circle at this point..
01:45:080 (8) - overlap it without grid snap.fixed
01:47:683 (3) - down 7 or 8 grid? x:264 y:204?changed,and to suit the coming spinner,i down it more than 10 grid..
01:47:919 (1) - this spinner end at 01:49:339 - ? if you agree this, make sure you delete the next Break Time but break time is essential...
01:49:339 - fix this green line timing.
01:50:995 (1) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~for the same reason..unchanged
02:00:931 (7) - add a New Combofixed
02:05:662 (7) - ^^
02:09:447 (6) - ^^
02:26:481 (8) - ^^
02:34:762 (x) - add a Circle?i removed it deliberately..
02:36:062 (1) - change to a slider better then spinner.did have some problem..change the time of the spinner,but use slider
02:42:095 (8) - can't see clearly of this slider.. move out to other placeyes..
02:44:225 (x) - add a circle?seems to be a vacant..i add a slider
02:49:902 (11) - add a New Combofixed
03:13:559 (7) - ^^
03:13:796 (8) - ^quite a long combo,but i suppose it to be the shape of heart..
03:20:420 (11) - ^, and move out to other place...just new comboed..prefer stack this time..
03:28:700 (6) - add a New Combofixed
03:29:647 (x) - add a circlechanged

----
sorry for my nazi mod~that ok~there are many useful non-nazi mod as well~ :D
That'll and Good Luck yeah~:!: ;)
thanks for your mod~
KayeSara
挫折无限啊~不是有人讨厌国语歌曲就是讨厌周杰伦
不过我还是给你鼓励啦~坚持! ;)
Topic Starter
Banana

KayeSara wrote:

挫折无限啊叹气..~不是有人讨厌国语歌曲就是讨厌周杰伦
不过我还是给你鼓励啦~坚持! ;)
:D 感谢你的支持~
VortexFlow
感觉我的图和你是一摸一样的
你是不是有个用户名叫qihanzhang
。。。
顺便问下怎么给星星
想给不会给啊、、
教下
Topic Starter
Banana

VortexFlow wrote:

感觉我的图和你是一摸一样的纳尼?我和你的图长得一样?..
你是不是有个用户名叫qihanzhang那个..我之前叫qihanzhang,名字改掉了..
。。。。。。
顺便问下怎么给星星那个..现在星星系统改版了,只能给裤兜星..
想给不会给啊、、那个..有支持就好..星星啥的都是浮云..(..太假了)
教下那个..现在只能去mod别人的图得kudosu再..
感谢支持 :D
fanzhen0019

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queue
反震老挂B:
Resnap all note啊! resnap没啥用 自己手动修复了
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因.. nothing changed
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊 --->35%
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩 后面都unsnap了..改了
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么 ^
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+ 不想动了Orz
thx

deepsea wrote:

C <-----....
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.o
daijobu XD

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

fz's b is for "bucuo"
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here? nop
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound k
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird. Orz..but nothing changed
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674 k
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo k
01:41:769 (1) - ^ k
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here k
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo no
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ? no
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo removed 02:50.162
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle? resnapped a lot of parts..so nothing changed
03:17:109 (x) - ^ ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo ^
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32 k
Thank you for modding!







Sorry for big delay..

Download: Jay Chou - Ai Zai Xi Yuan Qian (qihanzhang) [fz's B is for 'bucuo'].osu
deepsea
Sorry for forgot this:

A:01:08:175 (12) - reverse arrow is almost blocked by hit300(100 50 x?) of 9.

B:seems 3/4 stack is not fixed but still fine I guess.

C, D: All good for me.

No kd for this post.
Topic Starter
Banana

deepsea wrote:

Sorry for forgot this:

A:01:08:175 (12) - reverse arrow is almost blocked by hit300(100 50 x?) of 9.fixed

B:seems 3/4 stack is not fixed but still fine I guess.

C, D: All good for me.

No kd for this post.
thanks for your recheck~ :D
deepsea
._.
Topic Starter
Banana

deepsea wrote:

._.
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yeah~bubble~ :D thank you~
Nymph
泡了 好帅
新人什么的 最强了哈哈哈哈哈
Topic Starter
Banana

Nymph wrote:

泡了 好帅
新人什么的 最强了哈哈哈哈哈lala~yeah
:D
Feena
没有star纯精神支持咯 加油哦>.<
Topic Starter
Banana

Feena wrote:

没有star纯精神支持咯 加油哦>.<
谢谢支持~~~lalala~ :)
Megurine Luka
wow

中文歌正在努力壮大> <

加油↖(^ω^)↗
Topic Starter
Banana

Megurine Luka wrote:

wow

中文歌正在努力壮大> <对耶...

加油↖(^ω^)↗谢谢支持~
:D
fanzhen0019
GJ 泡了  
Topic Starter
Banana

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ ?泡了  
:?
fanzhen0019
GJ=good job
再补颗星
Topic Starter
Banana

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ=good job这样~
再补颗星再谢~
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