qihanzhang wrote:

zsr123 wrote:

小学的时候挺喜欢周杰伦的说

...为什么这图我觉得note都比音乐提前很多..... 不同步啊= =..为什么我觉得timing对了、

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490 用不了那么红线

zsr123 wrote:

不同步啊= =..

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 126.81 Offset : 1490

cmn_891127 wrote:

根据B难度，时间误差的确很大了

cmn_891127 wrote:

以下时间点基于原始时间
01:02:904右侧的绿线没有移动，导致slider(1)的移动速度很诡异fixed
02:58:592 (1-5,1-3,1)整体后移到白线，还有把前面的转盘拖到白线处结束fixed
03:17:282 (5) 前移至红线fixed

D难度的滑条速度！！！！

HellDawn wrote:

General
Please fix timing section and Slider tick rate musb be similar ! fixed

D
Please resnap all notes and fix timing section fixed
01:32:306- New combo fixed
01:33:016- Remove new combo fixed
02:21:040- Remove kiai fixed
02:22:460- Kiai ! fixed
02:30:030- New combo fixed
02:30:977- Remove new combo fixed

C
Hp Drain Rate -1
Overal Difficulty -1
only -1ed the Hp Drain Rate
...
Good luck yeah~

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queueyeah~

D:
因为我个人觉得这图还有很多地方可以完善重新打了次，有remap的冲动..排列什么的||- - 所以我只说一些我觉得比较大的问题

首先KIAI中间还夹有BREAKTIME 这我觉得很笨.....= = 我个人觉得KIAI从01:17:165开始就可以了 前面没必要.说的也是..改了
然后是节奏问题:整个难度的节奏密度太不统一 有的地方几乎摆满了二分之一排满的是整..整拍吧 而有的地方空了很大一块 我觉得这需要解决有在努力....像开头30秒之前那样的节奏密度 我觉得就比较适合现在的星数.原来我当年这么菜....
再次是这是个1星EASY难度的话 掉血和下落速度是4我个人觉得有点偏高了.改掉了~
00:31:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑条的位置我觉得不太合适 我个人喜欢这样排[attachment=0:163e6]1.jpg[/attachment:163e6]嗯嗯..改了
00:50:906 (5) - 作为EASY难度的话 这里应该拣重音下拍子比较合适 也就是所谓的长白线白线是拍?
00:52:562 这里空着很尴尬改了..
01:08:649 (5) - 后面为什么空着呢 继续下拍子呗嗯嗯..
01:40:586 (1) - 纵观整个图似乎就只有这里下了这么赶的拍子 所以很不合适多下几个半拍出来..可以吗（吐槽的老毛病又犯..改掉了..拍子)
后面问题大多类似 我就不再举例了...改了好久

C:
01:01:078 (3) - 这之后你把BREAKTIME拉到长白线结束 我不太明白理由重音时上下突然黑一下的效果..其实拉没的那部分也算break来着..
01:47:447 与其BREAKTIME拉到这 为什么不直接下一个NOTE呢黑屏效果充当note..创新一下嘛
03:07:882 (1) - 在我个人看来 这里就算最后一个KIAI开始了把kika重新设了.. 下一个好长的转盘 似乎有点无聊=_=..改短了,不知道沙包咋想
这个节奏就很整齐的 虽然个别地方有点空 但是我觉得就算一个合格的NORMAL了YEAH!!~ 不过AR7有点太狠了...改ar5了..

反震老挂B:没改掉的..等他....
Resnap all note啊！这是我干的...fixed
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因..
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩fixed
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+

A:
玩起来很嗨好兴奋.. 我就说点别的问题好了
音量我建议在高点 现在听起来不够燃（..我自重加了5..
02:51:321 (1) - 这之后的SOFT音量有点太高了 弄的没有SOFT的意义了 因为NORMAL音量好低减了
02:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我个人不太喜欢这种排列 看起来有点别扭 不过也不是什么问题可能是排成线太渣了...把滑条改了个角度
然后就是有的NEW COMBO实在太长了 还是短点好一句话一combo来着...
有一个NOTE没SNAP上fixed~
我很期待如果真RANK那天 这个难度会是什么样子..我原来作图的时候 可真是RANK了和做的时候两个样了..吓？...
现在已经跟我两个月前下载你这个图完全不一个样了=_+好温暖..还记得..（我是remap过这个难度来着）

嘛 加油吧~
嗯..

再给你个星 YEAH~谢谢~ [/color]

fanzhen0019 wrote:

offline changed sth..
一大段unsnapped很头疼啊 　

deepsea wrote:

D you mean A,I guess..
Streams and naughty spacing, a bit hard to read but guess fine for Insane.
Also fun to play.\:D/yeah~

C B
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.oi think it to be OK as this is a 5-star diff..anyway,whether change or not will up to fanzhen0019..

B C
00:37:421 (4,5) - A note stack on slider end is a little bit hard to read, since it's beginning of this song.(As a normal diff)unstacked


A D
02:39:966 (1) - The arrow is covered by previous 2 and 3 and making this hard to read.changed
03:27:991 (1) - Too sudden for an Easy?:Oremoved the note

wcx19911123 wrote:

我个人不喜欢国语歌0.0
所以只是随便看看

[General]
难度名实在是太奇葩嗯..
我建议sliderbody还是静音好点感觉声音也不大..所以没动

[D is for do not try]
fine

[C is for could be better]fixed
01:45:554 (8,9) - 重叠没弄好
03:00:075 (4,1) - ^

我受不了了辛苦你了..
不要给我kd

1. Circle Size change to the large

1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.
2. HP Drain change to 6?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~ ^^
我很討厭周傑倫 = = 不過還是幫你看看下~~

D is for do not try
00:38:840 (6,1) - overlap them at circle (5)?nice suggestion..fixed
02:58:892 (1) - this spinner is too long, and a bit boring to spin itmaked it shorter

C is for could be better

1. Circle Size change to the large

changed
00:47:120 (1) - why don't start this slider at 00:46:884 ?fixed
01:02:084 - fix this Drag Breaken..i just make it to letterbox at that point..style?or i will fix it if it is unrankable...
02:48:010 (2,3,4) - make them like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151672yeah..the arrangement was not wery good..fixed
03:13:087 (1) - change to a circle at here only ?nope(i follow the guitar here)

fz's b is for "bucuo"..waiting for him
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here?
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird.agree..
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo
01:41:769 (1) - ^
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ?
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle?
03:17:109 (x) - ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32

A is for amazing

1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.purple..
2. HP Drain change to 6?

done
00:36:947 (1) - why this New Combo color is same as the previous New Combo color?
00:40:496 (1) - ^
00:44:517 (1) - ^, i don't said too much, behind got a lot, please fix it ._.emm..i had used three colors,and now i changed it back
00:45:700 (6) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~[color=#BF008BF]just because,i like the irc at this point..personally...[/color]
01:08:767 - why don't continue to stack some note start from here??maybe we need a break?
01:16:218 (1) - too short of this spinner.. you need to change to a slider, or maybe you need to keep this spinner, you must delete this circle [ 01:17:165 (1) ] and the end of this spinner at 01:17:165but..auto can play 2000..
01:31:360 (x) - add a circle?i think both are ok..but i've just removed a circle at this point..
01:45:080 (8) - overlap it without grid snap.fixed
01:47:683 (3) - down 7 or 8 grid? x:264 y:204?changed,and to suit the coming spinner,i down it more than 10 grid..
01:47:919 (1) - this spinner end at 01:49:339 - ? if you agree this, make sure you delete the next Break Time but break time is essential...
01:49:339 - fix this green line timing.
01:50:995 (1) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~for the same reason..unchanged
02:00:931 (7) - add a New Combofixed
02:05:662 (7) - ^^
02:09:447 (6) - ^^
02:26:481 (8) - ^^
02:34:762 (x) - add a Circle?i removed it deliberately..
02:36:062 (1) - change to a slider better then spinner.did have some problem..change the time of the spinner,but use slider
02:42:095 (8) - can't see clearly of this slider.. move out to other placeyes..
02:44:225 (x) - add a circle?seems to be a vacant..i add a slider
02:49:902 (11) - add a New Combofixed
03:13:559 (7) - ^^
03:13:796 (8) - ^quite a long combo,but i suppose it to be the shape of heart..
03:20:420 (11) - ^, and move out to other place...just new comboed..prefer stack this time..
03:28:700 (6) - add a New Combofixed
03:29:647 (x) - add a circlechanged

----
sorry for my nazi mod~that ok~there are many useful non-nazi mod as well~
That'll and Good Luck yeah~:!:

KayeSara wrote:

挫折无限啊叹气..~不是有人讨厌国语歌曲就是讨厌周杰伦
不过我还是给你鼓励啦~坚持!

VortexFlow wrote:

感觉我的图和你是一摸一样的纳尼？我和你的图长得一样？..
你是不是有个用户名叫qihanzhang那个..我之前叫qihanzhang，名字改掉了..
。。。。。。
顺便问下怎么给星星那个..现在星星系统改版了，只能给裤兜星..
想给不会给啊、、那个..有支持就好..星星啥的都是浮云..(..太假了)
教下那个..现在只能去mod别人的图得kudosu再..

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queue
反震老挂B:
Resnap all note啊！ resnap没啥用 自己手动修复了
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因.. nothing changed
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊 --->35%
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩 后面都unsnap了..改了
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么 ^
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+ 不想动了Orz

deepsea wrote:

C <-----....
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.o
daijobu XD

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

fz's b is for "bucuo"
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here? nop
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound k
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird. Orz..but nothing changed
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674 k
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo k
01:41:769 (1) - ^ k
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here k
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo no
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ? no
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo removed 02:50.162
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle? resnapped a lot of parts..so nothing changed
03:17:109 (x) - ^ ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo ^
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32 k

deepsea wrote:

Sorry for forgot this:

A:01:08:175 (12) - reverse arrow is almost blocked by hit300(100 50 x?) of 9.fixed

B:seems 3/4 stack is not fixed but still fine I guess.

C, D: All good for me.

No kd for this post.

deepsea wrote:

._.

Nymph wrote:

泡了 好帅
新人什么的 最强了哈哈哈哈哈lala~yeah

Feena wrote:

没有star纯精神支持咯 加油哦>.<

Megurine Luka wrote:

wow

中文歌正在努力壮大> <对耶...

加油↖(^ω^)↗谢谢支持~

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ ?泡了 　

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ=good job这样~
再补颗星再谢~

Scorpiour wrote:

KTV中最喜欢的歌～～～支持下～～～

1. Chinese and Pop are not necessary for tags.
2. Start KIAI at here: 01:17:165, 02:21:514, 03:06:936
3. End KIAI at here: 01:49:339, 02:51:795, 03:37:217

1. clap下的地方略多而且不太成节奏 一般来说每小节第三白线一个足矣 用于奠定歌曲的速度 可以参考一下B难度的前半部分 如果是vocal重音或者其他地方觉得有必要可以用soft-hitwhislte来修饰 最好也有一定规律
2. 总体来说spacing太小了 大部分都是x0.8 在SV不高而且是最高难的情况下打起来移动方面欠佳 没有跟着音乐走的感觉 歌词中虽然大部分是二分音铺过去但是可以根据曲调来插入一定的1/1的slider来调和下口味 每句歌词之间的空白也有点残念
3. 下面是具体的一些东西:
4. 01:34:671 (6) - 尾部挡的有点过
5. 01:47:919 (1) - 结束在后面的长白线上
6. 02:51:321 (1) - 换一个在02:51:795结束的slider吧
7. 03:05:043 (T) - 试试这样
8. 03:21:366 (5,1) - 这里可以用03:21:367~03:21:840 slider 然后03:22:077 note来搞定, spinner有点突兀 03:22:550也要一个note

1. 00:38:722 (2) - 这里如果要跟音乐需要3个四分音 目前打起来略违和
2. 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
3. 01:59:749 (4) - whistle换clap
4. 02:01:641 (T) - ^
5. 02:03:297 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:717 (1) - clap
7. 02:05:426 (1) - 换clap
8. 02:05:900 (3,4) - clap
9. 后半段还是按前半段的方法下clap吧 副歌可以做一定变化
10. 02:06:846 (T) - 突然没声音了

1. clap的问题
2. 01:03:917 (T) - break不要延后
3. 01:43:662 (6) - new combo

1. clap的问题

Colin Hou wrote:

可能要大动手术 继续加油

Colin Hou wrote:

我是被外国蝙蝠拖来看的...

[General]:

1. Chinese and Pop are not necessary for tags.删了
2. Start KIAI at here: 01:17:165, 02:21:514, 03:06:936
3. End KIAI at here: 01:49:339, 02:51:795, 03:37:217

kiai改好了

[A is for amazing]:

1. clap下的地方略多而且不太成节奏 一般来说每小节第三白线一个足矣 用于奠定歌曲的速度 可以参考一下B难度的前半部分 如果是vocal重音或者其他地方觉得有必要可以用soft-hitwhislte来修饰 最好也有一定规律学习了，也改了，全三白线clap- -
2. 总体来说spacing太小了 大部分都是x0.8 在SV不高而且是最高难的情况下打起来移动方面欠佳 没有跟着音乐走的感觉 歌词中虽然大部分是二分音铺过去但是可以根据曲调来插入一定的1/1的slider来调和下口味 每句歌词之间的空白也有点残念排列重新弄了，这次基础ds*1.2，歌词空白留了几个可以用finish结尾的，其它的填上了
3. 下面是具体的一些东西:
4. 01:34:671 (6) - 尾部挡的有点过fixed
5. 01:47:919 (1) - 结束在后面的长白线上fixed
6. 02:51:321 (1) - 换一个在02:51:795结束的slider吧ok
7. 03:05:043 (T) - 试试这样自己也觉得转盘太长，按这个图来说，第一个转盘部分重新map了，后面的就这样做的
8. 03:21:366 (5,1) - 这里可以用03:21:367~03:21:840 slider 然后03:22:077 note来搞定, spinner有点突兀 03:22:550也要一个noteok

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']:

1. 00:38:722 (2) - 这里如果要跟音乐需要3个四分音 目前打起来略违和我感觉打起来还可以- -
2. 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped改掉了
3. 01:59:749 (4) - whistle换clap音效改了
4. 02:01:641 (T) - ^
5. 02:03:297 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:717 (1) - clap
7. 02:05:426 (1) - 换clap
8. 02:05:900 (3,4) - clap
9. 后半段还是按前半段的方法下clap吧 副歌可以做一定变化
10. 02:06:846 (T) - 突然没声音了->55

[C is for could be better]:

1. clap的问题音效都重新下了
2. 01:03:917 (T) - break不要延后fixed
3. 01:43:662 (6) - new combofixed

[D is for do not try]:

1. clap的问题音效重下了

希望能对这张图和今后的图有所帮助/
可能要大动手术 继续加油

CountdownOffset: 3

Aleks719 wrote:

General
You used less than 80% of mp3... There is a rule about procents of using files.I was informed that mapped part should be last to 80% of the mp3.. So not change
i suggest to cut end of song a bit if it's possible. If not... okay then.

D is for do not try
remove this line with the aid of notepad, it's useless :

CountdownOffset: 3

fixed
Hum, this diff starts earlier than others... strange but okay.
Whole diff is 0.75x . wtf. you could set sv 0.75 and 1.0x sections.fixed
01:46:501 - kiai shouldn't work in breaks. fix it by replacing timing sectionchange all diff.'s kiai time
03:37:217 (5) - add finishok

C is for could be better
01:46:501 - kiai shouldn't work in breaks. fix it by replacing timing section
03:37:217 (5) - add finishok

fz's B is for 'bucuo'
Set slider tickrate 2 for consistensechanged
02:29:794 (1) - remove this ncfixed
03:37:217 (1,2,3) - remove (2) and (3)? then all diff will have similar ending time. ah, and add finish to (1)this diff is a guest diff,though. i think this end is ok, so not change

A is for amazing
Turn on letterboxes foe consistencefixed
Set combo colors like in other diffs for consistence tooi use the purple for special use- -
01:47:919 (1) - finish this spinner here? 01:49:339 ? imo, better. also you could remove short break after spinnernot a bad suggestion.. but i need a breaktime
02:50:848 (6,7) - hum, looks like antijump with with spacing... i suggest to make them a bit more far from each other.fixed
02:58:892 (1,2,3) - fix spacing here pleasedistance spacing->0.5
03:13:559 (7) - add nc?it is where i use purple, i think it is ok
03:37:217 (7) - add finish to this last note?ok