你好~ ^^
我很討厭周傑倫 = = 不過還是幫你看看下~~
D is for do not try00:38:840 (6,1) - overlap them at circle (5)?
02:58:892 (1) - this spinner is too long, and a bit boring to spin it
C is for could be better- Circle Size change to the large
00:47:120 (1) - why don't start this slider at 00:46:884 ?
01:02:084 - fix this Drag Break
02:48:010 (2,3,4) - make them like this? -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15167203:13:087 (1) - change to a circle at here only ?
fz's b is for "bucuo"00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here?
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird.
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? -->
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15167401:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo
01:41:769 (1) - ^
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ?
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle?
03:17:109 (x) - ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32
A is for amazing- i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.
- HP Drain change to 6?
00:36:947 (1) - why this New Combo color is same as the previous New Combo color?
00:40:496 (1) - ^
00:44:517 (1) - ^, i don't said too much, behind got a lot, please fix it ._.
00:45:700 (6) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~
01:08:767 - why don't continue to stack some note start from here??
01:16:218 (1) - too short of this spinner.. you need to change to a slider, or maybe you need to keep this spinner, you must delete this circle [ 01:17:165 (1) ] and the end of this spinner at 01:17:165
01:31:360 (x) - add a circle?
01:45:080 (8) - overlap it without grid snap.
01:47:683 (3) - down 7 or 8 grid? x:264 y:204?
01:47:919 (1) - this spinner end at 01:49:339 - ? if you agree this, make sure you delete the next Break Time
01:49:339 - fix this green line timing.
01:50:995 (1) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~
02:00:931 (7) - add a New Combo
02:05:662 (7) - ^
02:09:447 (6) - ^
02:26:481 (8) - ^
02:34:762 (x) - add a Circle?
02:36:062 (1) - change to a slider better then spinner.
02:42:095 (8) - can't see clearly of this slider.. move out to other place
02:44:225 (x) - add a circle?
02:49:902 (11) - add a New Combo
03:13:559 (7) - ^
03:13:796 (8) - ^
03:20:420 (11) - ^, and move out to other place...
03:28:700 (6) - add a New Combo
03:29:647 (x) - add a circle
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sorry for my nazi mod~
That'll and Good Luck