Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queueyeah~

D:
因为我个人觉得这图还有很多地方可以完善重新打了次，有remap的冲动..排列什么的||- - 所以我只说一些我觉得比较大的问题

首先KIAI中间还夹有BREAKTIME 这我觉得很笨.....= = 我个人觉得KIAI从01:17:165开始就可以了 前面没必要.说的也是..改了
然后是节奏问题:整个难度的节奏密度太不统一 有的地方几乎摆满了二分之一排满的是整..整拍吧 而有的地方空了很大一块 我觉得这需要解决有在努力....像开头30秒之前那样的节奏密度 我觉得就比较适合现在的星数.原来我当年这么菜....
再次是这是个1星EASY难度的话 掉血和下落速度是4我个人觉得有点偏高了.改掉了~
00:31:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 滑条的位置我觉得不太合适 我个人喜欢这样排[attachment=0:163e6]1.jpg[/attachment:163e6]嗯嗯..改了
00:50:906 (5) - 作为EASY难度的话 这里应该拣重音下拍子比较合适 也就是所谓的长白线白线是拍?
00:52:562 这里空着很尴尬改了..
01:08:649 (5) - 后面为什么空着呢 继续下拍子呗嗯嗯..
01:40:586 (1) - 纵观整个图似乎就只有这里下了这么赶的拍子 所以很不合适多下几个半拍出来..可以吗（吐槽的老毛病又犯..改掉了..拍子)
后面问题大多类似 我就不再举例了...改了好久

C:
01:01:078 (3) - 这之后你把BREAKTIME拉到长白线结束 我不太明白理由重音时上下突然黑一下的效果..其实拉没的那部分也算break来着..
01:47:447 与其BREAKTIME拉到这 为什么不直接下一个NOTE呢黑屏效果充当note..创新一下嘛
03:07:882 (1) - 在我个人看来 这里就算最后一个KIAI开始了把kika重新设了.. 下一个好长的转盘 似乎有点无聊=_=..改短了,不知道沙包咋想
这个节奏就很整齐的 虽然个别地方有点空 但是我觉得就算一个合格的NORMAL了YEAH!!~ 不过AR7有点太狠了...改ar5了..

反震老挂B:没改掉的..等他....
Resnap all note啊！这是我干的...fixed
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因..
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩fixed
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+

A:
玩起来很嗨好兴奋.. 我就说点别的问题好了
音量我建议在高点 现在听起来不够燃（..我自重加了5..
02:51:321 (1) - 这之后的SOFT音量有点太高了 弄的没有SOFT的意义了 因为NORMAL音量好低减了
02:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我个人不太喜欢这种排列 看起来有点别扭 不过也不是什么问题可能是排成线太渣了...把滑条改了个角度
然后就是有的NEW COMBO实在太长了 还是短点好一句话一combo来着...
有一个NOTE没SNAP上fixed~
我很期待如果真RANK那天 这个难度会是什么样子..我原来作图的时候 可真是RANK了和做的时候两个样了..吓？...
现在已经跟我两个月前下载你这个图完全不一个样了=_+好温暖..还记得..（我是remap过这个难度来着）

嘛 加油吧~
嗯..

再给你个星 YEAH~谢谢~ [/color]

fanzhen0019 wrote:

offline changed sth..
一大段unsnapped很头疼啊 　

deepsea wrote:

D you mean A,I guess..
Streams and naughty spacing, a bit hard to read but guess fine for Insane.
Also fun to play.\:D/yeah~

C B
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.oi think it to be OK as this is a 5-star diff..anyway,whether change or not will up to fanzhen0019..

B C
00:37:421 (4,5) - A note stack on slider end is a little bit hard to read, since it's beginning of this song.(As a normal diff)unstacked


A D
02:39:966 (1) - The arrow is covered by previous 2 and 3 and making this hard to read.changed
03:27:991 (1) - Too sudden for an Easy?:Oremoved the note

wcx19911123 wrote:

我个人不喜欢国语歌0.0
所以只是随便看看

[General]
难度名实在是太奇葩嗯..
我建议sliderbody还是静音好点感觉声音也不大..所以没动

[D is for do not try]
fine

[C is for could be better]fixed
01:45:554 (8,9) - 重叠没弄好
03:00:075 (4,1) - ^

我受不了了辛苦你了..
不要给我kd

1. Circle Size change to the large

1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.
2. HP Drain change to 6?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~ ^^
我很討厭周傑倫 = = 不過還是幫你看看下~~

D is for do not try
00:38:840 (6,1) - overlap them at circle (5)?nice suggestion..fixed
02:58:892 (1) - this spinner is too long, and a bit boring to spin itmaked it shorter

C is for could be better

1. Circle Size change to the large

changed
00:47:120 (1) - why don't start this slider at 00:46:884 ?fixed
01:02:084 - fix this Drag Breaken..i just make it to letterbox at that point..style?or i will fix it if it is unrankable...
02:48:010 (2,3,4) - make them like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151672yeah..the arrangement was not wery good..fixed
03:13:087 (1) - change to a circle at here only ?nope(i follow the guitar here)

fz's b is for "bucuo"..waiting for him
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here?
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird.agree..
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo
01:41:769 (1) - ^
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ?
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle?
03:17:109 (x) - ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32

A is for amazing

1. i suggest you add one or two more color, like red or green color.purple..
2. HP Drain change to 6?

done
00:36:947 (1) - why this New Combo color is same as the previous New Combo color?
00:40:496 (1) - ^
00:44:517 (1) - ^, i don't said too much, behind got a lot, please fix it ._.emm..i had used three colors,and now i changed it back
00:45:700 (6) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~[color=#BF008BF]just because,i like the irc at this point..personally...[/color]
01:08:767 - why don't continue to stack some note start from here??maybe we need a break?
01:16:218 (1) - too short of this spinner.. you need to change to a slider, or maybe you need to keep this spinner, you must delete this circle [ 01:17:165 (1) ] and the end of this spinner at 01:17:165but..auto can play 2000..
01:31:360 (x) - add a circle?i think both are ok..but i've just removed a circle at this point..
01:45:080 (8) - overlap it without grid snap.fixed
01:47:683 (3) - down 7 or 8 grid? x:264 y:204?changed,and to suit the coming spinner,i down it more than 10 grid..
01:47:919 (1) - this spinner end at 01:49:339 - ? if you agree this, make sure you delete the next Break Time but break time is essential...
01:49:339 - fix this green line timing.
01:50:995 (1) - here is no need to add the x1.5 slider speed, remove it~for the same reason..unchanged
02:00:931 (7) - add a New Combofixed
02:05:662 (7) - ^^
02:09:447 (6) - ^^
02:26:481 (8) - ^^
02:34:762 (x) - add a Circle?i removed it deliberately..
02:36:062 (1) - change to a slider better then spinner.did have some problem..change the time of the spinner,but use slider
02:42:095 (8) - can't see clearly of this slider.. move out to other placeyes..
02:44:225 (x) - add a circle?seems to be a vacant..i add a slider
02:49:902 (11) - add a New Combofixed
03:13:559 (7) - ^^
03:13:796 (8) - ^quite a long combo,but i suppose it to be the shape of heart..
03:20:420 (11) - ^, and move out to other place...just new comboed..prefer stack this time..
03:28:700 (6) - add a New Combofixed
03:29:647 (x) - add a circlechanged

----
sorry for my nazi mod~that ok~there are many useful non-nazi mod as well~
That'll and Good Luck yeah~:!:

KayeSara wrote:

挫折无限啊叹气..~不是有人讨厌国语歌曲就是讨厌周杰伦
不过我还是给你鼓励啦~坚持!

VortexFlow wrote:

感觉我的图和你是一摸一样的纳尼？我和你的图长得一样？..
你是不是有个用户名叫qihanzhang那个..我之前叫qihanzhang，名字改掉了..
。。。。。。
顺便问下怎么给星星那个..现在星星系统改版了，只能给裤兜星..
想给不会给啊、、那个..有支持就好..星星啥的都是浮云..(..太假了)
教下那个..现在只能去mod别人的图得kudosu再..

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from: Kanon's mod queue
反震老挂B:
Resnap all note啊！ resnap没啥用 自己手动修复了
00:38:367 (1,2,3) - 这玩意听起来很不爽 不过可能是我自己的原因.. nothing changed
02:07:319 (1) - 这之后音量咋的了?给我兔子耳朵我也听不见啊 --->35%
02:56:885 (1) - 这转盘蓝线结束真心很奇葩 后面都unsnap了..改了
03:02:799 (1) - 长白线结束不行么 ^
03:14:273 (4) - FINISH咋在这 长白线加个NOTE加FINISH 然后空03:14:743 (1) - 这个拍子不行吗=_+ 不想动了Orz

deepsea wrote:

C <-----....
02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 3/4 stack is a bit hard for first play, unstack them?o.o
daijobu XD

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

fz's b is for "bucuo"
00:39:077 (3) - change to a circle at here? nop
00:54:218 (4) - remove behind clap sound k
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - sound very weird. Orz..but nothing changed
01:12:197 (7) - make it like this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151674 k
01:37:274 (1) - remove this New Combo k
01:41:769 (1) - ^ k
01:57:856 (7) - i suggest move out to other place. every time i was mistake at here k
02:30:030 (1) - remove this New Combo no
02:41:622 (3) - move to grid x:328 y:136 ? no
02:50:849 (1) - remove this New Combo removed 02:50.162
03:14:151 (x) - add a circle? resnapped a lot of parts..so nothing changed
03:17:109 (x) - ^ ^
03:24:206 (6) - add a New Combo ^
03:27:754 (4) - up 1 grid? x:104 y:32 k

deepsea wrote:

Sorry for forgot this:

A:01:08:175 (12) - reverse arrow is almost blocked by hit300(100 50 x?) of 9.fixed

B:seems 3/4 stack is not fixed but still fine I guess.

C, D: All good for me.

No kd for this post.

deepsea wrote:

._.

Nymph wrote:

泡了 好帅
新人什么的 最强了哈哈哈哈哈lala~yeah

Feena wrote:

没有star纯精神支持咯 加油哦>.<

Megurine Luka wrote:

wow

中文歌正在努力壮大> <对耶...

加油↖(^ω^)↗谢谢支持~

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ ?泡了 　

fanzhen0019 wrote:

GJ=good job这样~
再补颗星再谢~

Scorpiour wrote:

KTV中最喜欢的歌～～～支持下～～～

1. Chinese and Pop are not necessary for tags.
2. Start KIAI at here: 01:17:165, 02:21:514, 03:06:936
3. End KIAI at here: 01:49:339, 02:51:795, 03:37:217

1. clap下的地方略多而且不太成节奏 一般来说每小节第三白线一个足矣 用于奠定歌曲的速度 可以参考一下B难度的前半部分 如果是vocal重音或者其他地方觉得有必要可以用soft-hitwhislte来修饰 最好也有一定规律
2. 总体来说spacing太小了 大部分都是x0.8 在SV不高而且是最高难的情况下打起来移动方面欠佳 没有跟着音乐走的感觉 歌词中虽然大部分是二分音铺过去但是可以根据曲调来插入一定的1/1的slider来调和下口味 每句歌词之间的空白也有点残念
3. 下面是具体的一些东西:
4. 01:34:671 (6) - 尾部挡的有点过
5. 01:47:919 (1) - 结束在后面的长白线上
6. 02:51:321 (1) - 换一个在02:51:795结束的slider吧
7. 03:05:043 (T) - 试试这样
8. 03:21:366 (5,1) - 这里可以用03:21:367~03:21:840 slider 然后03:22:077 note来搞定, spinner有点突兀 03:22:550也要一个note

1. 00:38:722 (2) - 这里如果要跟音乐需要3个四分音 目前打起来略违和
2. 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped
3. 01:59:749 (4) - whistle换clap
4. 02:01:641 (T) - ^
5. 02:03:297 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:717 (1) - clap
7. 02:05:426 (1) - 换clap
8. 02:05:900 (3,4) - clap
9. 后半段还是按前半段的方法下clap吧 副歌可以做一定变化
10. 02:06:846 (T) - 突然没声音了

1. clap的问题
2. 01:03:917 (T) - break不要延后
3. 01:43:662 (6) - new combo

1. clap的问题

Colin Hou wrote:

可能要大动手术 继续加油

Colin Hou wrote:

我是被外国蝙蝠拖来看的...

[General]:

1. Chinese and Pop are not necessary for tags.删了
2. Start KIAI at here: 01:17:165, 02:21:514, 03:06:936
3. End KIAI at here: 01:49:339, 02:51:795, 03:37:217

kiai改好了

[A is for amazing]:

1. clap下的地方略多而且不太成节奏 一般来说每小节第三白线一个足矣 用于奠定歌曲的速度 可以参考一下B难度的前半部分 如果是vocal重音或者其他地方觉得有必要可以用soft-hitwhislte来修饰 最好也有一定规律学习了，也改了，全三白线clap- -
2. 总体来说spacing太小了 大部分都是x0.8 在SV不高而且是最高难的情况下打起来移动方面欠佳 没有跟着音乐走的感觉 歌词中虽然大部分是二分音铺过去但是可以根据曲调来插入一定的1/1的slider来调和下口味 每句歌词之间的空白也有点残念排列重新弄了，这次基础ds*1.2，歌词空白留了几个可以用finish结尾的，其它的填上了
3. 下面是具体的一些东西:
4. 01:34:671 (6) - 尾部挡的有点过fixed
5. 01:47:919 (1) - 结束在后面的长白线上fixed
6. 02:51:321 (1) - 换一个在02:51:795结束的slider吧ok
7. 03:05:043 (T) - 试试这样自己也觉得转盘太长，按这个图来说，第一个转盘部分重新map了，后面的就这样做的
8. 03:21:366 (5,1) - 这里可以用03:21:367~03:21:840 slider 然后03:22:077 note来搞定, spinner有点突兀 03:22:550也要一个noteok

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']:

1. 00:38:722 (2) - 这里如果要跟音乐需要3个四分音 目前打起来略违和我感觉打起来还可以- -
2. 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped改掉了
3. 01:59:749 (4) - whistle换clap音效改了
4. 02:01:641 (T) - ^
5. 02:03:297 (1) - ^
6. 02:04:717 (1) - clap
7. 02:05:426 (1) - 换clap
8. 02:05:900 (3,4) - clap
9. 后半段还是按前半段的方法下clap吧 副歌可以做一定变化
10. 02:06:846 (T) - 突然没声音了->55

[C is for could be better]:

1. clap的问题音效都重新下了
2. 01:03:917 (T) - break不要延后fixed
3. 01:43:662 (6) - new combofixed

[D is for do not try]:

1. clap的问题音效重下了

希望能对这张图和今后的图有所帮助/
可能要大动手术 继续加油

CountdownOffset: 3

Aleks719 wrote:

General
You used less than 80% of mp3... There is a rule about procents of using files.I was informed that mapped part should be last to 80% of the mp3.. So not change
i suggest to cut end of song a bit if it's possible. If not... okay then.

D is for do not try
remove this line with the aid of notepad, it's useless :

CountdownOffset: 3

fixed
Hum, this diff starts earlier than others... strange but okay.
Whole diff is 0.75x . wtf. you could set sv 0.75 and 1.0x sections.fixed
01:46:501 - kiai shouldn't work in breaks. fix it by replacing timing sectionchange all diff.'s kiai time
03:37:217 (5) - add finishok

C is for could be better
01:46:501 - kiai shouldn't work in breaks. fix it by replacing timing section
03:37:217 (5) - add finishok

fz's B is for 'bucuo'
Set slider tickrate 2 for consistensechanged
02:29:794 (1) - remove this ncfixed
03:37:217 (1,2,3) - remove (2) and (3)? then all diff will have similar ending time. ah, and add finish to (1)this diff is a guest diff,though. i think this end is ok, so not change

A is for amazing
Turn on letterboxes foe consistencefixed
Set combo colors like in other diffs for consistence tooi use the purple for special use- -
01:47:919 (1) - finish this spinner here? 01:49:339 ? imo, better. also you could remove short break after spinnernot a bad suggestion.. but i need a breaktime
02:50:848 (6,7) - hum, looks like antijump with with spacing... i suggest to make them a bit more far from each other.fixed
02:58:892 (1,2,3) - fix spacing here pleasedistance spacing->0.5
03:13:559 (7) - add nc?it is where i use purple, i think it is ok
03:37:217 (7) - add finish to this last note?ok

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. combo颜色不一样, 貌似没什么特别里有用不同的颜色啊, 还是统一一下各难度的combo颜色吧

在A难度里用紫色的combo摆出两个（貌似）很晦涩的爱心._.

D is for do not cry

1. 00:31:743 (1) - 加finish?
2. 00:46:884 (5) - ^
3. 01:02:025 (4) - slider结尾加finish
4. 01:17:165 (1) - slider头加finish
5. 01:51:232 (1) - ^
6. 02:06:609 - 我觉得这段break不太必要, 前面不就才刚有个break, 这里可以考虑也map掉 map了
7. 02:36:654 (6) - 加finish
8. 03:06:936 (3) - ^
9. 03:22:077 (1) - slider头加finish

都加上了

C is for could be better

1. 00:46:884 (1) - slider头加finish
2. 01:02:025 (3) - slider尾加finish
3. 01:14:090 (1) - 加finish
4. 01:32:306 (5) - slider尾加finish
5. 02:06:373 (4) - ^
6. 02:21:514 (5) - 加finish
7. 02:51:085 - 这个break感觉没必要 map掉了
8. 03:06:936 (1) - ^
9. 03:22:077 (6) - slider尾加finish

都加了，最开始的也加上了，虽然没说

fz's B is for "bucuo"

1. HP drain rate-1或者2, 都比最后一个难度高了
2. 00:34:937 (5,6) - 建议取消clap这里, 用whistle, 加到00:34:818 (4,6)上, 这样更配合背景音
3. 00:39:313 (3) - slider尾, 建议用whistle代替clap, 感觉听着会更舒服一点
4. 00:58:003 (2) - 这里clap听着也不是太舒服, 可以考虑给00:58:003 (2,3)都加whistle
5. 01:51:232 (1) - 加finish?
6. 01:58:684 (9) - 蓝线clap太奇怪了, 还是去掉吧
7. 02:12:051 (1,2,3) - 不建议3/4拍的stack, 不太容易判断得出来, 建议还是按照常规间距来放
8. 02:41:622 (3) - 这个跟之前的02:40:676 (1)完全重叠了, 很影响判断, 建议把这个向上或者至少左右移动几小格让它不要和之前的完全重叠
   Slider拉得很漂亮

两个蓝色的我自己订正了，HP drain rate-2，重叠滑条后面一部分稍微动了一下排列
音效我听着没什么大问题也不清楚那种好不敢动还是留给反震- -
另外那个重叠的四分之三拍提出过，但是反震说不改

A is for awesome

1. 00:45:464 - 这里开始的1.5xBPM意义不明, 歌曲里又没到高潮部分, 感觉来得太突然了
   马上开始的“骑士神殿...”一节音调一下变高了的..我是这么理解来着..这段之前的两个滑条做成拐弯的，按照原速移动应该不会断combo，用来缓冲，我觉得应该没事了就只改了这两个拐弯的形状
   “古文明”那段原速打下来不合适，音调也提高了点，我感觉也没问题
2. 01:49:339 - ^
3. 02:07:083 - ^
4. 01:15:272 (8) - 这里new combo吧 fixed
5. 02:50:848 (6) - 突然减速new combo一个吧 fixed

• 
  Offset:1468 is better to me.(current one +6)
  
  Speaking of combo color, how about adding purple to all diffs? (It's already added in A.)

1. 00:16:602 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:20:387 (5) - Add new combo.
3. 00:28:076 (5) - ^
4. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line.
5. 02:12:051 (4) - Add new combo.
6. 02:13:943 (1) - Remove new combo.

1. 00:31:310 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:47:357 (T) - ^
3. 00:48:540 (3) - It's better not to stack it with the tail of slider because kinda hard for normal-player to read it.
4. 01:33:726 (2) - ^
5. 02:41:386 (3) - ^
6. 02:44:225 (7) - Move it above by 4 grids to make reading it more clear.
7. 02:47:064 (4) - Same as above. (Avoid stacking.)
8. 03:01:968 (2) - ^
9. 03:03:151 (4) - ^

1. 02:12:051 (1,2,3) - It's hard to read this rhythm. I strongly recommend you to change these notes to an one-repeat-slider.
2. 02:19:503 (T) - Remove this green line.
3. 02:25:299 (7) - Don't put a note under the path of slider unless it's an Insane difficulty.

• 
  Overall your jump-pattern of formation is good though, some still look kinda weird and have room for improvement.

1. 00:40:259 (5,2) - Looks kinda crowded. Since 00:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5) are jumps, I recommend you to make spacing wider between (5,1). That looks more clear.
2. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line.
3. 01:06:520 (3,4,5) - It's very hard to read this quick triple at first time because (3) is hidden by the slider.
4. 01:07:938 (1,2,3) - This one is also hard to read since (2) is hidden. How about moving all of (1,2,3) to stack (1) with (8)?
5. 01:15:864 (4,5) - It looks better to move these notes further from (2,3).
6. 01:24:498 (6,8,9) - When playing, they aren't stacked perfectly due to stack leniency. Please stack them manually. (Move (8,9) right and below by 2 grids.)

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Offset:1468 is better to me.(current one +6) changed
  
  Speaking of combo color, how about adding purple to all diffs? (It's already added in A.) not a bad suggestion and changed

[D]

1. 00:16:602 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:20:387 (5) - Add new combo.
3. 00:28:076 (5) - ^
4. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line.
5. 02:12:051 (4) - Add new combo.
6. 02:13:943 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed all

[C]

1. 00:31:310 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:47:357 (T) - ^
3. 00:48:540 (3) - It's better not to stack it with the tail of slider because kinda hard for normal-player to read it.
4. 01:33:726 (2) - ^
5. 02:41:386 (3) - ^
6. 02:44:225 (7) - Move it above by 4 grids to make reading it more clear.
7. 02:47:064 (4) - Same as above. (Avoid stacking.)
8. 03:01:968 (2) - ^
9. 03:03:151 (4) - ^ fixed all, except two on stack (02:41:386 (3)& 03:03:151 (4))

[B]

1. 02:12:051 (1,2,3) - It's hard to read this rhythm. I strongly recommend you to change these notes to an one-repeat-slider. many mods point it out and fanzhen( who make this GD) thinks it's ok
2. 02:19:503 (T) - Remove this green line. fixed
3. 02:25:299 (7) - Don't put a note under the path of slider unless it's an Insane difficulty. i think it to be ok... i'll ask him later

[A]

• 
  Overall your jump-pattern of formation is good though, some still look kinda weird and have room for improvement.

1. 00:40:259 (5,2) - Looks kinda crowded. Since 00:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5) are jumps, I recommend you to make spacing wider between (5,1). That looks more clear. change (1,2) to a slider, and move it left trying to make the pattern more readable
2. 00:47:357 (T) - Remove this green line. fixed
3. 01:06:520 (3,4,5) - It's very hard to read this quick triple at first time because (3) is hidden by the slider. move them 3 grids right
4. 01:07:938 (1,2,3) - This one is also hard to read since (2) is hidden. How about moving all of (1,2,3) to stack (1) with (8)? 3 grids right again
5. 01:15:864 (4,5) - It looks better to move these notes further from (2,3). changed, spacing->1.2*
6. 01:24:498 (6,8,9) - When playing, they aren't stacked perfectly due to stack leniency. Please stack them manually. (Move (8,9) right and below by 2 grids.) fixed

That's it!
Overall good maps but still need more works. yeah, i'll
Star for now :3

KayeSara wrote:

Orz 终于有泡的迹象了

KayeSara wrote:

Orz 终于有泡的迹象了

cmn_891127 wrote:

KayeSara wrote:

Orz 终于有泡的迹象了

1. Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

fanzhen0019 wrote:

wwww...okay
put them like this
http://puu.sh/fxE8

21215421 wrote:

請問沒有做圖可以給星星媽 ? 我也十分喜歡這首歌

Heming James wrote:

很喜欢这首歌和这张图，星星一颗

JoJo wrote:

。。。但是。。。你这图完全没有rank希望啊。。。TvT

cmn_891127 wrote:

吱~

cmn_891127 wrote:

D太简单，跳过 我妈会生气的

[C is for could be better]
01:46:980 (4) - 后面接一个小slider 好嘛
02:19:627 (3) - It doesn't fit and completely breaks the flow. 2x repeat sliders almost NEVER play well. (我会告诉你我刚被吐槽，然后直接复制过来的么~ 转告那个modder 他不行不会用

SPOILER

03:10:964 (1) - 这个spinner太容易被吐槽了，离后面太近神马的，所以啦，remove & don't be lazy 先放一会 马上上课了（误

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']
00:52:568 (1,2,3,4) - 这个还是稍微旋转一下角度（其实是我在这里因为没看懂图，断了…… 帮助天国的反震改掉了

[A is for amazing]
02:00:937 (6) - 看不清了，NC fixed
02:57:833 (4,5) - 太坑人了 我会说这是专门留出来给人挑的吗(fixed

没了……不要再坟了……咱尽量

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
HP+1 OD+1
00:56:826 (3,4) - 下面那个是直的然后上面变弯的了？...我觉得两个都弯的比较好 改了
01:17:171 (1) - 还是规规矩矩的1/4玩起来比较好，后面的倒是没啥违和感不知道怎么回事... 懒了而且泡的时候就这样然后看着也还凑合于是就懒了
03:30:599 (1) - ^

[Normal]
02:15:604 (4) - 拖到这里来 哪里？...
02:58:898 (1) - 试试用这个节奏 ok

[Hard]
00:50:202 (4,5) - 不要叠起来 不是很考读图于是没改
00:55:880 (1) - delete NC ok
00:56:353 (2) - ^然后把NC加到这里
01:58:572 (8,9,1) - 就算加个NC还是有点坑，建议后面1和2别重叠 同第一条
02:13:003 (4) - 弧度再弯一点 ok
02:41:628 (3) - 可能会被喷，因为箭头被盖住了 终于有梗改这个了
唔.....spinner都没静音啊....静音比较好....10%之类的 不静音似乎没啥问题

[Insane]
00:20:156 (2,3) - 太近了 不过前面的蓝线是两个overlap滑条所以喊人test的时候没人出读图问题
00:45:233 (3,4,5) - 靠太近了有点，看起来像是连打不是跳 嘛 再看看有没有人挑
01:07:944 (1,2,3) - 3的箭头被盖住了 只挡住了一半 然后在default skin下注意过这里 没问题
01:13:385 (1,2,3) - 间距一样比较漂亮 嗯 其实是和前面一个圈摆了一个弧线..
01:16:224 (1) - 我个人感觉整个曲子其实都很放松的，干嘛这边放一个小spinner来拉高紧张度呢？............. 因为歌曲是这样啊 这样啊 这样啊...........
01:38:344 (2) - ctrl+G ok
01:47:925 (1) - 拉到01:49:345 思考了一下决定拉break
02:12:411 (4) - ctrl+G 这边现在的感觉是不太想改 等我再test几次
02:15:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 打起来特别奇怪，前面停着后面突然大跳移动.....违和感 （这里移动还好吧 嘛
02:43:993 (6,1) - 太近了 我是以能读为标准来的 表示没问题
03:21:372 (2,3) - 太近，保持前面1-2的间距比较好 这边是觉得歌曲慢下来了所以用了小间距
虽然比较残念但是这个难度可能还要修，给我的感觉就是前面你没放开，蓝线跳和白线正常间距太靠近了，我打的时候经常蓝线半拍跳完后按到白线然后50 get......
接着后面你就放好开O口O！！！
越到后面越开O口O！！！！！
你可以自己打，打完前面大概1/4后再调到最后KIAI，感觉像是俩人做的Orz.......
然后这个曲子我不建议1.0到0.5过渡，因为玩的时候你在跳然后跳到最后突然0.5一下玩起来差别真的有点大，建议改成0.75
一般这种曲子我个人喜欢做成送分向的..........
现在这个Insane看起来太杂乱，因为不同的间距用的太多，排的时候有些地方突然挤一下然后突然就跳了Orz...

1. 01:17:171 - why don't you start #1st kiai here ? i think it fits much better with song
2. why don't you use the same hitsound on all diff? owo custom hitsounds are cute :U

1. 00:38:372 (5,6) - since this is a easy diff please don't stack circles
2. 00:53:986 (3,1) - spacing
3. 00:56:825 (3) - consider to do this slider like the next one 00:57:772 (4)
4. 01:02:030 - o3o this break time is random D: map this part
5. 01:12:912 - start spinner here since the vocal beginns here
6. 01:20:956 (1,2) - dont cover (2) :c can bee confusefull for beginners
7. 01:24:741 (1,2) - the slider (2) - you can make a better blanket for it
8. 01:53:603 (3,4) - how i said before please don't stack objects in a easy diff :c
9. 02:03:066 - beginn spinner here
10. 02:17:734 - finish spinner here
11. 02:36:660 (6,1) - this can may confuse some beginners == try to rotate the slider a bit
12. 02:51:327 - i think here you can add a slider like, because to stark break here is not really nice :/
    

1. 01:25:689 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
2. 03:23:976 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
3. 03:33:439 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
4. 03:36:278 (4) - Unsnapped circle
5. 00:52:567 (3,4) - do blanket
6. 01:02:030 - unsnapped break
7. 01:12:912 - same as (D) diff - start spinner here
8. 01:48:398 - add a circle here or detle this slider here 01:47:689 (5) - for being consistent with (D) diff

1. 00:45:709 -
2. 02:20:392 -
3. 02:51:811 -
4. 01:16:224 - i just did it a little bit better
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Here is the code >u<)/
   
   

   256,272,76225,6,0,B|288:260|308:276|328:296|320:332|276:372|212:360|176:324|148:252|212:216|248:204|248:204|272:188|284:164|272:116,1,400,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:38:226 - beginn spinner here
6. 02:20:573 - consider to copy paste here the prev slider
7. 02:35:477 - start spinner here
8. 03:03:156 - start spinner here
9. 03:27:996 - start spinner here

1. 01:17:171 - detle this sircle and finish spinner there
2. 01:48:872 - unsnapped break
3. 02:05:668 - new combo

Lally wrote:

Hi from my Queue \:D\

๑ must fix
๑ suggestions
๑ normal/nazi things

[General]

1. 01:17:171 - why don't you start #1st kiai here ? i think it fits much better with song fixed~
2. why don't you use the same hitsound on all diff? owo custom hitsounds are cute :U ops, new hitsounds are added during the last remap, and i'm tired to change all diff.s hitsound (need more changes than just switch it to costum ones, you know..

[Inconsistency in Kiai Times:]
A is for amazing
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:18:117, ends on 01:47:452
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:22:465, ends on 02:51:801

fz's B is for 'bucuo'
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:18:117, ends on 01:47:453
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:22:465, ends on 02:51:811

C is for could be better
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:18:117, ends on 01:47:453
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:22:465, ends on 02:51:801

D is for do not try
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:18:117, ends on 01:47:453
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:22:465, ends on 02:51:801
fixed!

[D is for do not try]

1. 00:38:372 (5,6) - since this is a easy diff please don't stack circles will change if it still be pointed out
2. 00:53:986 (3,1) - spacing fixed
3. 00:56:825 (3) - consider to do this slider like the next one 00:57:772 (4) ok
4. 01:02:030 - o3o this break time is random D: map this part oh, here need a break and i don't know a better way to place it, made the break shorter
5. 01:12:912 - start spinner here since the vocal beginns here 'de' here is a auxiliary word while 'shipian' after it is n.,and all same issues are checked again
6. 01:20:956 (1,2) - dont cover (2) :c can bee confusefull for beginners fixed~
7. 01:24:741 (1,2) - the slider (2) - you can make a better blanket for it i can make a nice blanked
8. 01:53:603 (3,4) - how i said before please don't stack objects in a easy diff :c miaow~ (slap
9. 02:03:066 - beginn spinner here
10. 02:17:734 - finish spinner here
11. 02:36:660 (6,1) - this can may confuse some beginners == try to rotate the slider a bit ok
12. 02:51:327 - i think here you can add a slider like, because to stark break here is not really nice :/
    i think it was ok here so no change

[C is for could be better]

1. 01:25:689 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start) resnapped all!
2. 03:23:976 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
3. 03:33:439 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
4. 03:36:278 (4) - Unsnapped circle
5. 00:52:567 (3,4) - do blanket ok
6. 01:02:030 - unsnapped break
7. 01:12:912 - same as (D) diff - start spinner here
8. 01:48:398 - add a circle here or detle this slider here 01:47:689 (5) - for being consistent with (D) diff map diff.s separately is my opinion ._.

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']
Consider to add a break time i think for a long song like this is nedded a longer break. there are easy sections here so it's ok to me
Unsnapped inherited timing points at:

1. 00:45:709 -
2. 02:20:392 -
3. 02:51:811 - all checked and fix
4. 01:16:224 - i just did it a little bit better ok
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Here is the code >u<)/
   
   

   256,272,76225,6,0,B|288:260|308:276|328:296|320:332|276:372|212:360|176:324|148:252|212:216|248:204|248:204|272:188|284:164|272:116,1,400,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:38:226 - beginn spinner here spinners in this diff. are all changed
6. 02:20:573 - consider to copy paste here the prev slider fanzhen is afk now and i'm lazy...
7. 02:35:477 - start spinner here
8. 03:03:156 - start spinner here
9. 03:27:996 - start spinner here

[A is for amazing]

1. 01:17:171 - detle this sircle and finish spinner there i like short spinner
2. 01:48:872 - unsnapped break fixed~
3. 02:05:668 - new combo i think it was ok

waah sorry for lazy mod =w=)/ good luck

No_Gu wrote:

拖了有点久sorry

[General/All diffs]
难度名。。感觉真没啥意义 跟歌好像也没啥关系 还没开始做图的时候花了一周的时间想的难度名 现在也觉得比较蠢不过现在我还是蠢所以觉得还是可以留着
不加无声sliderslide吗 加了一部分
音效我觉得都跟A比较好。。别的听起来都不怎么合曲子 gd改了 似乎whistle比较多听着还不错 另外两个难度感觉还是不太合适 因为音量比较小
02:21:519 kiai不是应该这里开始吗 fix
03:06:941 ^

[D]
其实我不太推荐easy难度用tick2 嘛 感觉保持一致更不容易被挑
00:53:041 (2,3) - 这样的看起来。。真是不怎么雅观 改了
02:15:369 (1,1) - 节奏的话感觉跟前面统一下比较好 改了
03:20:190 (3,1) - 别overlap对我来说可能好点 全难度基本都over下来的就算这边改了...
03:27:760 (1) - 我觉得真没必要在这放个spinner..你知道新手相当恨kiai和转盘你又放这里了。。改了
其实我觉得下一次可以弄的在整洁点，比如要是我开这个SV 我就会把DS开到1.1，这样没有overlap会让你的图看起来很好 其这是比较黑的历史所以长得是这样..嘛 况且我也不是很讨厌overlap所以这个难度就没re

[C]
00:47:835 (1) - 离远点别跟前面的搭上 所以说我不讨厌overlap...
00:59:191 (1,2,3) - 弄好看点? 确实歪了.改了
02:48:961 (1) - 还是不推荐overlap 喵
03:10:963 (1) - 建议换成普通note 改了

[B]
00:45:943 (4,5,6) - 乱。。 个人观点表示可以理解 所以没动
01:01:557 (2) - 结尾clap fixed
01:09:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DS用1.6好看得多 大概是用了1.45手工排了下
01:29:946 (1) - NC意义何在 个人理解是保证右边几个对称的滑条用同样的combo colour...
01:33:258 (2,3,4) - 间距不相等，而且后面的stack顶起来更不好了 果然歪了..改了
02:30:036 (1) - 删了NC吧 先留着好了 总觉得这样也没什么不妥
03:37:223 (1,2,3) - 非常奇怪。。。嗯 这边是有两条vocal的音轨来的 于是这个难度跟了另一条
好乱的感觉

[A]
00:19:446 (1,2,3) - 如果是我的话这里会排三角 间距稍微排大了一些 （其实这边也排了三角 不过是和再后面的滑条尾巴
01:02:976 (2,3) - 这意义何在啊。。 表示这个mapper希望使用自创节奏但是又不敢弄得太过分
01:15:869 (2) - 个人觉得可以再远点 改成同方向的了 再大怕排不好看
01:47:452 (1) - 我觉得你往后都map了比较好。或者转盘换成circle在开始break，现在这样我觉得有点坑而且节奏听起来不舒服 [/color]
02:05:668 (7) - 来个break吧 第一个break前面有一段慢速所以觉得这边不需要
02:50:854 (1,2) - 就这么俩note真有必要吗 nc什么的我一向弄得很乱..
02:57:478 为什么从这里开始。。听奇葩的 提前了1/2
03:28:706 (6) - NC 加了
我觉得。。虽然知道你是跟hit-hat,但是感觉有点做过了。。本来挺慢的歌。。不过嘛一个人一种想法就是了 嘛..

1. Timing的Downbeat错位，把第一个红线放到00:01:467 -
2. 因为这首歌本身就有英文名的缘故，我认为把title写成 Love before BC 更合适一点～然后titleunicode用中文就Okay
3. 因为有那种很短的小break存在，所以我觉得Letterbox Durning Breaks关掉会比较好
4. 把 Fantasy Vincent Fang 加到tags里
5. 然后diff名什么的…………呃……

1. 因为红线错位，所以NC各种混乱，重放吧。
2. 00:27:017 (1) - 就这么直着上去了感觉有点愣……弄点弧度出来？要是我的话可能不会选择跳而是做成这样：
   
   SPOILER

   
   不过这个就没所谓啦～～
3. 00:31:275 (8,9,10) - 这三连听着有点僵硬
4. 00:31:748 - 这里后面这一段的sliderslide听得不是很舒服……
5. 00:34:706 (6) - 感觉这个放的没啥理由～～
6. 00:37:663 (5,6,7) - 依然是有点意义不明的白线三连……无论是背景乐还是vocal这里都是1/2为底的吧？
7. 00:41:448 (7,1) - 这里跳的理由何在……一句话没唱完突然中间一个大跳出去……
8. 00:44:287 - 依然是看不到什么理由的空拍……
9. 00:47:126 - 这里加个note来压一下那个鼓点？
10. 00:50:793 - 这里的空拍感觉把你前面刚营造出来的跳的flow整个又破坏掉了……我自己的话节奏会做成这样：
    
11. 00:52:567 (3) - 感觉弧线变成向上弯的flow会好点？
12. 01:03:094 (3) - 这里用3/4slider我认为不是很好听…………
13. 01:08:181 (3) - 这reverse arrow的遮挡我觉得很难过关
14. 01:16:224 (1,1) - 感觉这spinner还是太短了……直接转到白线上不好么……
15. 01:19:536 (5) - 这里ctrl+g一下会更契合音乐吧？而且跟后面部分在移动上的连接也会更平滑～
16. 01:25:924 - 空拍有点不舒服……
17. 01:29:472 (7,8) - 这里vocal上只是个很轻的过渡却突然跳这么远…………相比之下01:39:645 (6,7) - 这个跳就感觉放个很好
18. 01:51:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 吓我一跳……怎么突然来了个对称排列我还以为collab了呢……
19. 01:59:991 - 依然是不舒服的blank....
    大概说下空拍：
    
    怎么说呢……在我看来，下blank的地方首先一定要是鼓点“收稳”的地方。比如说对于xxxxx x 型的节奏，最后一个重音结束后音乐会有一个很稳定的切断感，干净利索，这时候一个空拍会让你的图的节奏感变得很强。再比如2连起手的stream: xx xx x xxxxxxxxX X X xxxxxxX _ 这里最后一个重音也是一个非常踏实而且稳定的结束点，在这样的地方放空拍会很舒服又不缺燃点。
    
    对于你这张图而言，比如02:06:378 (12) - 这里后面的空拍就下的很好～
    
    建议去多翻翻H30的图……他的空拍运用我觉得是最好的……
20. 02:45:413 - 继续blank的issue
21. 02:52:747 - 其实我觉得把这段break给map上也挺好的www
22. 03:31:545 (2) - 为啥要用3/4的蓝线折返……

1. 00:31:512 - 从这里开始如何？
2. 00:42:867 - 建议+note
3. 00:59:428 - 空拍依然是觉得不舒服
4. 01:02:740 - 这里也是考虑来个note？
5. 01:55:970 (3) - 完全看不到的reverse arrow...
6. 02:07:088 - 依然是+note建议……毕竟看你整体还是跟vocal的这种地方没有啥理由放过吧:>
7. 02:29:800 (1) - 这里单一个note的NC我觉得没必要，毕竟歌词是连在一起的~

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue
唔……快速看了下可能要说的东西比较多……所以决定先中文了:>

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Timing的Downbeat错位，把第一个红线放到00:01:467 - general all done
2. 因为这首歌本身就有英文名的缘故，我认为把title写成 Love before BC 更合适一点～然后titleunicode用中文就Okay
3. 因为有那种很短的小break存在，所以我觉得Letterbox Durning Breaks关掉会比较好
4. 把 Fantasy Vincent Fang 加到tags里
5. 然后diff名什么的…………呃……

[A is for amazing]

1. 因为红线错位，所以NC各种混乱，重放吧。 233 重下了
2. 00:27:017 (1) - 就这么直着上去了感觉有点愣……弄点弧度出来？要是我的话可能不会选择跳而是做成这样：
   
   SPOILER

   
   不过这个就没所谓啦～～ 没所谓就这样好了- -
3. 00:31:275 (8,9,10) - 这三连听着有点僵硬 原曲就这样我也没办法.
4. 00:31:748 - 这里后面这一段的sliderslide听得不是很舒服…… 先这样吧 我不是很喜欢sliderslide消音所以只消了一部分
5. 00:34:706 (6) - 感觉这个放的没啥理由～～ 删了
6. 00:37:663 (5,6,7) - 依然是有点意义不明的白线三连……无论是背景乐还是vocal这里都是1/2为底的吧？ 咦 这里（还有后面一个3/4）是跟的底音鼓音来的
7. 00:41:448 (7,1) - 这里跳的理由何在……一句话没唱完突然中间一个大跳出去…… 改了 本来是想平衡跳的难度 后来想想也不必要
8. 00:44:287 - 依然是看不到什么理由的空拍…… 嗯 空拍一般我是放长白线后的 偶尔凭感觉乱放 不过timing错了于是... 空拍基本挑的原来的长白线所以基本改了 50秒那个只加了个圈
9. 00:47:126 - 这里加个note来压一下那个鼓点？ 哦
10. 00:50:793 - 这里的空拍感觉把你前面刚营造出来的跳的flow整个又破坏掉了……我自己的话节奏会做成这样：
    
11. 00:52:567 (3) - 感觉弧线变成向上弯的flow会好点？ 改了
12. 01:03:094 (3) - 这里用3/4slider我认为不是很好听………… 改了
13. 01:08:181 (3) - 这reverse arrow的遮挡我觉得很难过关 改了
14. 01:16:224 (1,1) - 感觉这spinner还是太短了……直接转到白线上不好么…… 改了
15. 01:19:536 (5) - 这里ctrl+g一下会更契合音乐吧？而且跟后面部分在移动上的连接也会更平滑～ 改了
16. 01:25:924 - 空拍有点不舒服……
17. 01:29:472 (7,8) - 这里vocal上只是个很轻的过渡却突然跳这么远…………相比之下01:39:645 (6,7) - 这个跳就感觉放个很好 跳改掉到前面的clap去了
18. 01:51:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 吓我一跳……怎么突然来了个对称排列我还以为collab了呢…… collab with qihanzhang（喂 这不是你的旧id吗 老梗稍微修了一下感觉还行就留着了
19. 01:59:991 - 依然是不舒服的blank....
    大概说下空拍：
    
    怎么说呢……在我看来，下blank的地方首先一定要是鼓点“收稳”的地方。比如说对于xxxxx x 型的节奏，最后一个重音结束后音乐会有一个很稳定的切断感，干净利索，这时候一个空拍会让你的图的节奏感变得很强。再比如2连起手的stream: xx xx x xxxxxxxxX X X xxxxxxX _ 这里最后一个重音也是一个非常踏实而且稳定的结束点，在这样的地方放空拍会很舒服又不缺燃点。
    
    对于你这张图而言，比如02:06:378 (12) - 这里后面的空拍就下的很好～
    
    建议去多翻翻H30的图……他的空拍运用我觉得是最好的……
20. 02:45:413 - 继续blank的issue
21. 02:52:747 - 其实我觉得把这段break给map上也挺好的www break后面的note起的有点奇怪所以改了个位置 不过全map掉有点不想..
22. 03:31:545 (2) - 为啥要用3/4的蓝线折返……

[fz's B is for 'bucuo']

1. 00:31:512 - 从这里开始如何？ 这种起始句跟vocal的note加了 空拍什么的我觉得用的还可以就没动
2. 00:42:867 - 建议+note
3. 00:59:428 - 空拍依然是觉得不舒服
4. 01:02:740 - 这里也是考虑来个note？
5. 01:55:970 (3) - 完全看不到的reverse arrow... 切到default skin看了 一下 在打和这个滑条头stack住的note的时候就可以看见arrow了 所以没改
6. 02:07:088 - 依然是+note建议……毕竟看你整体还是跟vocal的这种地方没有啥理由放过吧:>
7. 02:29:800 (1) - 这里单一个note的NC我觉得没必要，毕竟歌词是连在一起的~ 哦

2个低diff快速看了下应该问题不大…………唔……我觉得主要问题还是在你的Insane上，意义不明的跳有些多，空拍有些用的很好有些用的让人很憋……总而言之我认为应该还有不少提升的空间～

不知道这图你是什么时候remap的，但是我建议去找几个有经验的modder再进一步的帮你修修细节然后再来找我吧:>

Gabe wrote:

I highly suggest you to change all your difficulty names, they're a bit.. pointless? do pointless, changed
Easy, Normal, Hard and Insane are perfect and easy to deal with.