Yukitoki (TV Size)

00:02:656 (2) - blanket kinda off from 00:02:291 (1) -

00:02:656 (2) - i feel like a 1/2 and 1/1 slider would fit better here to have the vocal on the reverse active because this is where the vocal is actually sustained

00:03:932 (1) - Would be nicer visually if you stack it properly to the slider end of 00:02:656 (2)

00:04:662 (4) - I have some doubts about the places where this type of slider is used.
00:54:644 (3) - If it is used only in areas where the cymbals are playing, like here, the intention becomes clearer.

00:06:841 (5) - same thing as #4565322, it'd be nice to space this out a lil bit more

00:08:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:11:186 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - At the start of the map, you need to bring the circles closer together, then progressively space the jumps

00:11:367 (2) - HS audible issue: you increase the distance to make big jumps, but the feedback of clicking the notes is barely audible.

00:13:727 (1) - 3 circles on the white and red ticks would be better since there's a crash sound at 00:14:091 and song's building up at this point

00:13:727 (8) - could turn into circle to catch the string instrument, it'll also help differentiate from these pattern 00:12:815 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -

00:14:091 (1,1) - feel like this isn't spaced enough to show a 1/1 gap as the distance remains the same from here 00:14:456 (1,2) - even though its 1/2 not 1/1, i think moving the 1 to the left makes more sense here

00:14:456 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would be nice to show a much more gradual increase in spacing from circle to circle instead of just keeping it constant for the most part because the drums are getting progressively louder and louder, especially 00:15:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

00:14:456 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole section is currently over-spaced. There is nothing in the song that would let you make the spacing so huge, do it much lower please. This currently feels like a diff-spike ngl

same 00:17:169 #4739008

00:17:192 (1,2,3) - Also lacks hitsound feedback.

00:17:374 (3,4,5) - changing all these to 1/4 sliders would go so hard, all the synths would be played actively

00:17:739 (4,5,6,1) - The arrangement feels cramped, so it would be advisable to widen the gap between 00:17:739 (4,5,6).

00:19:015 (7) - nc

00:19:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream seems a bit overdone for what the music has to offer should nerf by around 0.1x-0.2x can do this easily with ctrl + shift + s

00:24:304 (3) - #4565331

00:27:194 (2,1) - the space between these two objects is too small to where it doesn't give the strong beat at 00:27:923 - justice
therefore, you could keep up with a similar spacing pattern to 00:21:386 (5,1) - 00:24:304 (3,1) - in order to achieve consistency

also the same suggestion could apply to 00:28:653 (2,1) - as well

00:42:273 (6,1) - i feel like you could map this triple to better help the intensity buildup in this measure

00:43:542 (1,2,3,4) - Also not very audible stream.

00:43:904 (1) - The music here should be a finish instead of a clap.

00:44:451 - a filler beat could be used here and placed under the slider-end of 00:43:904 (1) - because the rhythm is still going on and that sudden pause feels a bit awkward
the same could be applied to 00:50:286

00:44:998 (2) - what about unstacking it so that proper emphasis plays out better here?

https://imgur.com/a/RnABSI0

00:46:092 (6) - would be nice to space this out a bit since its a snare (could apply to the rest since im seeing it quite frequently)

00:46:821 (1,2,3) - the rhythm used here kind of feels off since you're neither following the vocals or the background changing pitch, it just sounds like a filler rhythm
a better rhythm could be represented with replacing this circle 00:46:821 (1) - with a 1/2 slider, and placing a circle at 00:47:186 . in this way you're keeping up with the vocals and you're not missing the important beat at 00:47:369 - and you can play with spacing to also represent the up-going pitch in the background

00:47:916 (5,1) - should space these out more or create counter flow to emphasize strong vocal at 00:48:098 -

00:49:375 (5,6) - spacing this more would be reasonable because you'll be emphasizing the strong beat more

00:52:659 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Can you make this whole pattern more progressively as music intense rised up? Since everything before was mapped in such lower spacing and sharp changes in spacing looks so unpredictable.

also would make 00:54:096 (1,2,3) more lower in spacing, because it seems like the song is becoming much less progressive here

00:54:096 - I like what you did in the insane diff with the sliders that break the jump section to fit the song, but not here for some reason. The intensity of the music doesn't seem like the jumps need to be that spaced

00:54:644 (3) - It's a subtle difference, but a slider with an angle feels more natural than a vertical one, as it aligns better with the diagonal flow.

00:55:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Need to be closer together

00:55:946 (2) - don't think this deserves that much spacing, would just reduce it

00:59:922 (1,2,3,4) - Jump here is quite big compared with 00:58:281 (1,2,3,4) , but the two places has similar intensity. Suggested to make the distance closer for the later jump.

01:01:194 (1,2,3) - i think you could map these the same as you did for 00:58:281 (1,2) - since they are the same

01:01:194 (1,2) - This is a beautifully styled map, but the visuals here seem underutilized. It is possible to create patterns like this.

01:01:922 (3,4,5) - Can you nerf this spacing a bit? It still remains the same as was before while the song here is less intense.

01:02:831 (1) - could turn into circle tbh, imo these are kinda weird to be slider since the vocal is strong on both the head and slider of the tail.

01:05:550 (5,1,2) - i think this wide angle kinda throws this pattern off since mostly the entire map uses more sharper angles and this one is rather random + flow feels unnatural

01:09:179 - this red tick should be clickable and this 01:09:361 (4) - should be a 1/2 slider

01:12:092 (4,5,6) - overmapped tripplet here is kinda redundant since you follow the vocals with jumps before

just make it a jump imo

01:17:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda same as #4565347, where you only can hear the drums really coming in from 01:17:736 (3) - onwards

01:17:554 (2) - Not quite audible jump. Whistle should be good to cover it.

01:18:645 circle because crash sound

01:19:282 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kinda same thing, maybe a rhythm close to #4565334 would be better.

01:24:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could make the streams be more rounder to be honest, especially the latter half

01:25:368 (7) - nc, then nc 01:25:551 (1) -

01:25:551 (2,3) - should put a kickslider here to emphasize the double snare

something like this(ignore the circle numbers they are wrong):