From the first kiai to the end, everything needs to be reworked in term of object spacing. Here are some examples:
00:59:922 (1,2,3,4) - This jump pattern has the same spacing at this one 01:07:358 (1,2,3,4,1) whereas the music vibe on the second timestamp feels more intense when comparing both patterns. There's little to no clear emphasis on parts of the song that are more intense than the others and it makes the kiai quite bland
01:24:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like the music vibe begins to gradually slow at the end, but you decided to add a stream that gradually spaces
01:07:358 (1,2,3,4) - buffed this quite bit
01:24:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - redid a stream part