06:56:013 (2,4) - i dont think you use any other overlap in this map, this isnt really a problem but its not too consistent so im not sure if its worth changing cause it feels a bit out of place
00:50:469 (2,3,4) - i think this rhythm feels a bit akward to play, mainly the 3 being around 2 strong sounds on the red tics, 00:51:016 and 00:51:381 - i tried something like this - https://imgur.com/a/Wtj3lzM but i dont think it works too well either, fine to leave as is if you can't find something better
00:14:091 (1,1) - feel like this isn't spaced enough to show a 1/1 gap as the distance remains the same from here 00:14:456 (1,2) - even though its 1/2 not 1/1, i think moving the 1 to the left makes more sense here
05:06:484 (5,6) - This pattern is quite hard to read and I would prefer it to be spaced like the similar patterns to make it easier, also don't see much musical reason why this one should be different
04:45:622 (5,6), 04:47:001 (5,6), 04:48:381 (5,6), 04:49:760 (5,6) - The spacing here is really small and could even be read as a 6th note on the burst, the sound is also quite strong so I would use more spacing here, like later on such as - 04:51:139 (5,6) and 04:52:518 (6,7)