00:01:270 (1270|2,1398|3) - 我还是对这个地方的对音有点怀疑，如果你是抓和后面00:01:526 (1526|2,1655|3,1783|0) - 一样的旋律音，我认为应该是这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17911455/26ea
顺便参考了jinjin的set，应该也是放在这个1/4上的
00:18:055 (18055|3,18119|2,18183|3) - throughout the first js this seems to be the only one-hand trill, im just curious if you have a structure or logic to the way in which you patterned the JS according to the synth wiggles, because if u compare the first two JS waves i don't really see any discernable logic to it (e.g., 00:20:042 (20042|1,20106|3,20170|1,20234|3) - appears to be the only 4 note trill in both sections, 00:23:311 (23311|2,23375|3,23439|2) - and 00:24:209 (24209|3,24273|2,24337|3) - both land on the right hand, etc.)
rearranged a bit and removed 00:25:362 (25362|3,25491|2) - for a break to the next intense part
00:20:629 (20629|0,20629|3) - 这里的音明显比前面00:20:501 (20501|0,20501|1,20501|3) - 要重，所以我觉得三押双押可以调整一下
00:20:875 (20875|1,20875|0,20971|3,21003|2,21003|1,21132|0,21132|3,21164|1) - im not sure if the simplification of the sounds here is appropriate; while i can understand the first two being clap sounds the next downbeat is stronger at 00:21:068 - than 00:21:003 (21003|2,21003|1). it's a similar bassy sound to 00:20:491 (20491|1,20491|3,20491|0) - , which you emphasized as a triple
00:20:981 (20981|0) - > 00:20:971 (20971|0) - 我感觉在1/6线上的，还有00:21:174 (21174|2) - 这个
00:24:721 (24721|3,24721|1) - this is way too soft to be doubled, compare the sound to all the other snare sounds in this section: 00:24:850 (24850|0,24850|1,25042|3,25042|0,25234|3,25234|2,25298|1,25298|0) -
I meant to use one for melody and one for instrumental sound so here I'd like to keep it since this is my main guideline for mapping
00:28:696 (28696|1,28760|0,28824|1,28888|0,29080|0,29145|1,29209|0,29273|1,29337|0) - if you want to follow the alternation in the patterning (e.g., see 00:28:055 (28055|2,28055|1,28119|3,28119|0,28183|1,28183|2,28247|3) - and 00:27:670 (27670|3,27670|0,27734|1,27734|2,27798|3,27798|0,27862|1) - ) then i think you should move the second longer trill to the other hand. these trills stand out esp. since they land on the same hand, and i don't think it works well with the whole alternating-pattern idea you're trying to go for; while the patterns visually flip the physical motion to hit them doesn't.
see also 00:32:157 (32157|2,32221|3,32286|2,32350|3,32414|2) - 00:30:747 (30747|2,30811|3,30875|2,30939|3,31003|2) - 00:45:106 (45106|2,45170|3,45234|2,45298|3,45491|3,45555|2,45619|3,45683|2,45747|3). for an example of what i mean by alternation in trills see 00:48:183 (48183|0,48247|1,48311|0,48375|1,48568|2,48632|3,48696|2,48760|3,48824|2) -
I've made some 3 stacks, like 00:25:619 (25619|1,25747|1,25875|1) - and 00:26:003 (26003|2,26132|2,26260|2) - which contains an LN, more regular. This should be much better ;w;
00:29:475 (29475|1,29603|1,29731|0) - 这个地方比前面00:28:449 (28449|2,28578|3,28706|2) - 明显有多几个鼓，可以考虑加上。类似的还有00:45:885 (45885|1,46013|2,46142|1) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17751465/1815 00:29:561 (29561|0,29646|0) - don't forget to superimpose the HS on these two notes
00:29:731 (29731|0,29731|3,29796|1,29796|2,29860|3,29860|0,30116|2,30116|1,30180|0,30180|3,30244|2,30244|1) - 我感觉从这里开始他的旋律和00:25:629开始是一样的除了音调， 而你在00:25:629的相同地方用了00:25:629 (25629|1,25629|0,25693|2,25693|3,25757|1,25757|0,26013|2,26013|3,26078|0,26078|1,26142|3,26142|2) - ，从00:25:629到00:29:731相同的地方你或许有一些规律，而后一部分00:29:731感觉又有一点没规律了，尤其是00:30:757 (30757|1,30757|2,30821|0,30821|3,30885|2,30885|1,31142|1,31142|0,31206|2,31206|3,31270|0,31270|1) - 或许你可以抄前一段的？或许你也有这么做的理由我没看出来
00:33:834 - 00:42:039 - IMO, I found this part to be a bit repetitive because the constant one-handed trills and doesn't flow well, I also found this a bit of an unjustified difficulty spike. You should probably balance it out by making the one handed trills appear more in the middle and for flow make it move left, middle, right or right, middle left a bit more often, you could still go left, right or right, left every measure
Image showing solution
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/846606157102841872/888935685388652604/bitch_lettuce.PNG
You could variate this pattern while making it still being comfortable (ie. making it move right to left instead)
00:34:539 (34539|0,34539|1,34539|3) - 这个地方相比于00:34:347 (34347|1,34347|2,34347|0) - 并没有那么重的鼓，应该和白线上音的强度差不多，我倾向于改成这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17255080/9dcd，这段应该还有一些类似的地方
00:37:606 (37606|2,37606|1,37798|2,37798|3) - why are these doubles? the entire handstream section here has these bass notes as triples
00:41:516 (41516|1) - why is this not doubled? sounds pretty similar to 00:41:709 - to me. similar snare sound occurs at 00:41:901, which is a single
00:49:209 (49209|3,49209|2,49273|1,49337|3,49337|0,49401|2,49465|0,49465|1) - for a "Beyond" chart i think you can afford to make these 1/8 bursts...
00:51:099 (51099|2,51142|1,51184|0) - 也许改一下排列，现在这样把旋律和鼓混起来了，打着像是楼梯是一组的
00:51:334 (51334|3) - > 00:51:313 (51313|3) - 。00:51:590 (51590|1) - > 00:51:569 (51569|1) - （我觉得都在1/6线上
00:56:313 - The melody is present here so add some LN's at 00:56:227 & 00:56:313
Solution
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/846606157102841872/888940218860834866/bagelseeker.PNG
there're some single notes representing them but changed them into LNs and maybe they're on 1/4 lines
01:00:555 (60555|0,60683|3) - 01:04:786 (64786|1,64914|1) - not sure if i hear the hihats here
01:00:875 (60875|0,60875|3) - no kick sound (specifically the kick sound is syncopated and falls later than the red tick)
smh I can actually hear that. I may know you mean the 1/8 right behind the double but actually, it can't be noticed while playing. I used to add hs as well but feels bad after that. So gonna keep
but always keep one direction is also not good right? I'm now rearranging here a bit to fit for the music as possible
maybe not easy I think? They're not as regular as 01:20:489. If you don't pay attention to his part, the accuracy could go down. You can see there're 1/4 snaps and 1/6 (1/3) snaps, which requires the players some skills to hit them accurately.
And this part is kinda long, hard and contains many inconsistent snaps, I would like to see this could be some kind of break time (even won't make players too relaxed) still I think it's kinda good.
01:13:321 - 这里开始，发现你有些3/4蓝线上的单音给了note，比如01:13:513 (73513|0) - ，01:14:026 (74026|1) -
但是有一些地方又直接忽略掉了，比如从01:15:116 - 到01:19:860 - ，就没太看懂取舍的规则是什么，是为了给多押之间留一定距离还是？
01:19:764 (79764|3) - burst starts later (& 01:19:850 (79850|1,79850|0) - any reason why this is doubled too)
I believe the burst starts there.
Double for the starting of jumpstream. And it's drum as well
01:32:552 (92552|3,92552|1,92616|0,92680|2,92680|1,92744|3,92808|2,92808|0,92872|1,92937|3,92937|2,93001|0,93065|1,93065|3) - 虽然知道这里的逻辑，但是有必要摆这么满吗，还在build-up
01:34:347 (94347|0) - 我在想这根长面是为啥。。。应该不是 fill blank 吧？毕竟你 01:29:219 没有加。
所以若我没搞错的话，长面应该是用给每段最后一个乐器音的，比如 01:31:655
而你现在摆的 01:34:347 对标的是 01:31:270 。。。
然后 01:31:655 对标的 01:34:731 你却没有摆长面。
当然你也可以保留 01:34:347 (94347|0) - for transition，但个人感觉 01:34:731 得 extend。。。
My suggestion， https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17924872/70b2
01:34:347 (94347|0) - 砍一点长度和上个长 LN 的长度看齐。
最后摆长面
01:37:414 (97414|0,97414|2,97414|1,97798|1,97798|3,97798|2) - so here's the big question for the BNs & QATs: are the SVs here justifiably as "strong" as the following dense HS section? for the record (+ and - relate to pros and cons):
Hello mint. None of these mods would get 'ignored'.
We (mappers and BNs) will discuss these things together. And try to justified everything clearly and fairly.
Really thx for your input. But please give us some time to reconsider all these things.
This might take some time but I promise we will check and finish these things asap. 👌
now what I'm thinking is to change the pattern and the SVs together. I'll use some kind of shake for those strong sounds. And change the pattern following the sounds
01:41:773 (101773|1,101837|0,101901|1,101965|0,102157|0,102221|1,102286|0,102350|1) - im not hand bias police here but for this section i feel like there's more left hand trills than right hand trills, see also 01:41:132 (101132|1,101196|0,101260|1,101324|0) - 01:42:862 (102862|0,102927|1,102991|0,103055|1) - 01:43:824 (103824|1,103888|0,103952|1,104016|0,104209|0,104273|1,104337|0,104401|1) - 01:45:106 (105106|0,105170|1,105234|0) - )
01:48:053 u missed something here? it feels odd since it seems to be the same part as this 01:39:464 (99464|1,99464|3,99464|2,99528|0,99592|3,99656|2,99720|1,99784|3,99848|0,99848|2,99848|1) -
01:49:978 (109978|0,109978|1,110042|2,110106|0,110106|1,110106|3,110170|2,110234|3,110298|0,110362|1,110427|2,110491|1,110491|3,110491|0,110555|2,110619|3) - idk about you but it feels weird that these two patterns are almost the exact same, even the previous section varied it up a little 01:41:709.
01:51:013 (111013|3) - 这个应该double吧，和01:49:988 (109988|1,109988|0) - ，01:42:808 (102808|2,102808|3) - 一样
后一个确实没那么强，但是在前一个鼓差不多并且你也空了一拍的情况下，这里没有sv我个人感觉是有点违和的
如果你考虑强度的话，可以用更柔和一点的sv（但是要能被感觉到），当然这只是我个人的感觉，如果你还是觉得没必要，那就keep
01:52:167 (112167|1,112167|0) - 这个感觉和前一段01:43:962 (103962|2,103962|3,103962|1) - 还是比较接近的吧，后一个确实弱了很多
02:01:003 (121003|3,121132|3,121260|3,121388|3,121516|3,121645|3,121773|3,121901|3,122029|3,122157|3) - 02:05:234 (125234|0,125362|0,125491|0,125619|0,125747|0,125875|0,126003|0,126132|0) - see the tricky thing about dense HS is that it gets really boring without having to use long anchors like these
sorry wrongly understood. but I wanna keep this anchor since the whole stream part is good for playing
02:09:721 (129721|0,129786|3,129850|0,129914|3) - arguable, but i don't hear these notes as trills
02:10:811 (130811|3,130811|2) - 02:13:503 (133503|1,133503|0) - 02:14:529 (134529|3,134529|2) - 02:16:580 (136580|1,136580|0) - 02:17:286 (137286|3,137286|1) - only a slight snare sound here. no bass beat. refer to 02:23:760 -
02:11:452 (131452|2,131452|1) - 02:15:555 (135555|2,135555|1) - 02:17:093 (137093|1,137093|0) - no discernible bass beat. only really hear a syncopated one that comes after the blue tick
smh I still can hear them. But yeah it's not as strong as others but I still wanna catch them
02:12:424 (132424|1,132488|3,132488|2,132552|0,132552|1) - 感觉这三个全double好一点吧，毕竟你其他地方都这么摆的
02:19:721 (139721|0) - 02:20:811 (140811|1) - 02:21:132 (141132|2) - starts on the next 1/8 tick
02:20:949 (140949|1) - 这根面 hmm 结束的地方有点怪。而且 02:21:526 后面的大段 blank 有点尴尬，个人感觉。
两个 suggest 键型
1，02:21:398 有个转音 ，可以考虑直接延长面
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17924880/6231
2，在转音的地方断面，而不是 02:21:526 然后
02:21:526 (141526|0) - 这根面可以延长 fill blank，像 02:18:449 一样
02:24:422 (144422|2,144422|1,144508|3) - the rhythms don't seem right. beats fall on 02:24:422 - 02:24:465 - and 02:24:529 -