00:29:603 (29603|0) - Same issue with #2464866. This note may be considered as a ghost note because it actually should be 1/3 snap here.
00:46:013 (46013|1,46078|2) - This part isn't 1/4 snap but 1/3, you should fix accordingly and keep consistent with your changes in 00:29:603.
01:00:116 (60116|0,60180|1) - 这里是有一个滑音没错，但是我感觉和00:54:731 (54731|1,54796|2) - ，01:01:142 (61142|2,61206|1) - 相比太不明显了，出现在存在大量简化的hard里面感觉会比较突兀
01:07:167 (67167|1,67167|0,67296|3,67296|2,67424|1,67424|2,67552|0,67552|1) - 不能说这么写有问题，但是我发现你后面似乎都在避免出现这种锚键，比如01:11:270 (71270|3,71270|2,71398|0,71526|2,71526|1) -
所以我觉得这里可以把红线上的改成single
01:07:808 (67808|1,67808|0,67937|2,67937|3) - 这里实际上是三个1/4，可以考虑改成和01:08:834 (68834|2,68898|3,68962|1,68962|0) - 一样的
01:57:680 (117680|3,117744|0,117808|3,117872|0,117937|1,117937|3,117937|2) - 虽然我完全理解为啥要在这里放trill，但是考虑到这是234bpm，感觉会非常痛苦
稍微简单一点？https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17912740/f5e1
02:13:898 (133898|0,134283|2) - 这两个地方似乎并没有很明显的1/4鼓，我感觉不如把两个更明显的02:13:962 (133962|1,134090|3) - double