RiGHT NOW (TV Size)

00:00:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Dragging intensity in this part is way too much for calm part. This could be done more easier by reducing the slider usage to lower the dragging intensity in this part.

00:11:540 (2) - simplify the flow since its still in intro https://puu.sh/Eyifn/82a2ffcb69.png

00:27:411 (4) - a little bit closely spaced to 00:25:669 (2) - maybe adjust a little to the top right

00:30:121 - heavily putting emphasis on vocal to sync the previous section sometimes feel a bit heavy than it should, will do this rhythm instead https://puu.sh/Eyij0/75f2e08957.png

Please avoid something like this 00:35:540 (6) - 01:00:314 (7) - in normal diff. This confusing due the overlapping slider tail with circle (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14029266/97fb) and it's pretty hard to notice them in such short time.

It would be better if you do something like this instead. (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14029271/9870)

00:35:913 - this entire part up until the kiai feels rather too dense with being almost the same density as the kiai.
I would highly suggest simplifying the rhythm a bit more to help this issue

00:36:895 (3,4) - 1/2 slider for softer emphasis

00:39:024 (1) - ctrl-h and adjust, for vocal variant

00:49:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i suggest ctrl+g on these, strong beats on sliderends are really not a good idea. Its also easier to play to have slider circle, as it somewhat forces the correct speed onto the player

https://i.imgur.com/Ekd3s6g.png 00:52:171 - possibly change the rhythm similar to the picture to capture the vocals/drum more actively since right now it feels underwhelming even for a normal

https://i.imgur.com/ZneTil4.png 00:59:720 - something along like this since right now the current pattern 01:00:688 (1) - has this too close to the sliderend which is a reading hazard for a new player

01:01:088 (2,3) - ctrl-g rhythm, you don't necessarily weight all on double circle after slider

01:03:798 (1) - 1/1 slider followed by circle by then you can also emphasis the sound where the current slidertail at

01:15:798 (8,9,1) - spinner into really awkward, almost felt like forced, where could be reduced by simply use convert 2 circles into 1/2 slider

01:23:914 (3,4,5,6) - yeah this should probably have at least passive 1/2 rhythm since making a pattern for the sake of it, just makes this feel rather underwhelming for the melody

01:25:475 (1,2,3,4) - Synth in this part is more prominent than instrument on 01:26:637 (3) - It would be more intuitive if you follow the melody using 3/4 slider like (https://imgur.com/i7TJDfE).