There is a lot of unjustified rhythm density in this diff especially in kiai part. 01:01:088 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:05:346 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 01:13:475 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and it's really hard for newer player to play that dense rhythm.
It would be better if you simplify some of them by adding break since some of them is land on more calmer part in kiai.
Here some example on certain place that you can add break,
01:01:088 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (https://imgur.com/GMB6CMF)
01:05:346 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - (https://imgur.com/Grtatrd) *modified the rhythm to match with your current rhythm choice 01:03:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -
01:13:475 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (https://imgur.com/o8lsr22)
Same also as Easy diff #1233941 something like 00:18:121 (5,6,1) - 00:25:669 (2,3) - 00:33:798 (3,4) - 00:41:346 (6,1) - 00:48:314 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - etc
it would be better if you make some linear patterns to make sure players can feel the flow correctly even in kiai time (https://imgur.com/IWmlJkh)