SHIORI (TV Size)

00:05:543 (1) - I think this NC is not needed.

00:06:566 (2,3) - kind of weird flow.

00:13:725 (3,1) - it'll be better to make a stack of 5 circles stacked on 1 here, feels emphasized more correctly

00:15:089 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - what i would wish is that the spacing increases each with each melody. Make them visual clear. From low to high (but not that low)

00:17:305 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - dude that feels waaaaay too cramped here

00:26:339 (1) - This slider is off-screen by some pixels, you should move it up in order to avoid this issue.

00:40:316 (2) - ctrl+g for flow since you used circular flow before

Why does 00:46:793 (1,2) - break circular flow but then 00:47:475 (3,4) - continues it?

00:57:191 (4,5) - This rhythm here sounds strange because there's actually no sound on (4)'s end. Consider extending (4) instead until (5) is, that way you'll follow the vocals properly and you'll map only sounds which are present in the music. After that, don't forget to fix your pattern as well.

00:57:702 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Why is the volume exactly the same for this entire part when there's clearly a crescendo on-going for this part? Consider gradually increasing the volume here. Also, the volume is kinda too low that almost every hitsound can barely heard for this part.

01:03:839 (3,4,5) - flip for correct rhythm

01:05:714 - There's beats here that you could map with an extra circle, which would avoid the issue of suddenly pausing player movement which can feel awkward.

01:12:532 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The only quarter note triple is at 01:12:532 (4,5,1) - and the rest is overmapped (there are only 1/2 drums)

01:14:066 (1) - to follow vocal sound, I think it is better to change slider to circles.
Example : https://puu.sh/DqKBy/ae88ab0676.png
Example2 : https://puu.sh/DqKFi/04faf702a8.png

01:15:770 (2,4) - If you move a bit down these circles,
it can make blanket consist of 01:15:770 (2,4,1) - .

Start the vertical jump pattern at 01:18:157 (1) - instead of putting a slider there.

01:20:202 (1,2) - There's no reason for putting cross-screen jumps here other than to inflate the difficulty for no reason; the melody is at a low point in the chorus.

01:20:714 (2,1) - LOL? This is an almost inhuman jump and basically nobody would expect it. 6.92x spacing...

01:20:884 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, consider moving it down a bit if possible.

01:23:441 (2,1) - again, ridiculously long 1/4 jump.

01:23:441 (2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This can't be rankable.

01:23:441 (6,1) - This pattern might be way too tricky to hit, since you're having a 1/4 slider going into another 1/2 slider with a really short gap of time in order to hit it. Consider making the spacing closer.

01:23:441 (6) - I don't see the need for a kick slider, a circle should be fine

01:24:975 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - there's no build up, the music gets more intense every white tick starting 01:24:975 - I think these jumps should reflect that

01:25:998 (1,2,1) - You're losing some 1/4 beats here.

01:27:702 (1) - Same as suggested on the other Extra, consider silencing this sliderend since there's actually no sound on this part.