Your hitsound has a 9ms silence. Replace it with this
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/ua31dh0m7dmkxzggtlzjm/soft-hitclap9.wav?rlkey=p8qdy8nud319qajr3rmc6c0xz&dl=0
Meta:https://dmdokuro.bandcamp.com/track/save
You can add some of those tags if you didnt do yet
https://i.imgur.com/2Oq3C0m.png
00:10:014 (4,5,6,7,1) - that pattern could need a small spacing variation like https://i.imgur.com/nHcd7sf.jpeg
04:57:348 (1,2) - some double pattern with 04:58:014 (3,4,5,6) - that indicates emphasis reduced gradually here at 04:58:014 (3,4,5,6) - while being a copy pattern of the 04:57:348 (1,2) -
I think i cant make clear by words what i mean... here a pic https://i.imgur.com/4Z3o6Qw.jpeg
03:11:181 (4) - the spacing is uneven to the others 03:10:681 (1,2,3,4,1) - try to balance the emphasis a bit more
i like you consistant you changed the flow in the sections every measure - this is however one spot you dont https://i.imgur.com/cECXSKM.jpeg 01:44:014 (1,2,3,4) -
01:25:348 (1) - 1/1 for some more emphasis on the downbeat - would appreciate the melody as well here kinda
agree with him. You dont really need to emphasise this breath. Many starts of new sections have kinda this situation but mappers usually ommit those sounds and start where the downbeat starts bc the melody and all the instruments come there together in harmony
Edit: in the other hard it looks a bit awkward to run an object when... well literally nothing is to hear
04:14:660 (1) - this isnt rather a problem however its the same melody and vocals or in other words just a repetition which i think the solution is to make the same as the other 2 problematic onces