00:11:680 (2) - Consider using CTRL+G on this slider, it will improve the flow of the entire pattern.
00:15:941 (1) - actually, this timing has strong drum sound.
But I think this NC is not needed.
01:02:305 (2,3) - Perhaps consider lowering the volume on this part since the music is stopping and there are only vocals, right now the volume is quite too loud for just covering the vocals.
01:12:702 (1) - This sliderstart is missing a finish, if you hear it closely you can hear there's a strong beat there.