Shuuten no Saki ga Aru to Suru naraba.Explicit

01:09:942 (69942|2,70070|2) - same

02:34:708 (154708|4,154836|4) -

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01:23:219 (83219|2,83219|1,83219|0) - same goes here

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changed double 00:31:772 -
and are other sections with the same rhythm okay? 01:25:899 - 02:27:176 -

yo mb i meant to do this one 00:32:027 - 😅

imma little tired man disregard this suggustion and apply this to hard mb again lol

ok bro I'll be waiting for your mod

that note was meant to express the guitar's vibration, but since it feels ambiguous, i will delete it

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00:40:070 (40070|5) - that note is meant to express the short vocal, similar to this LN

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Also 01:14:410 (74410|2) - should be LN for vocal

02:09:431 - Same

I tried to express the jack with rice notes simultaneously, but the arrangement got messed up, and I'm not sure how many LNs would be best for consistency. For now, I'll match the consistency with 2 1/1 LNs

01:14:410 (74410|2) - 02:11:602 (131602|4) - changed to 1/2 LN

02:15:431 (135431|6,135495|5,135559|4,135559|6) - Same

Instead of weakening the chord, I'll follow your suggestion and adjust the placement

01:27:048 (87048|1,87176|2,87304|3,87431|4) - vs 01:29:219 (89219|5,89346|4,89474|3) - vs 01:31:133 (91133|1,91197|2,91261|6,91261|3,91389|5,91389|2,91516|1,91516|4) - are all different too. It's not critical by itself cuz you could consider those transitions and have some variety there for fun. But this kind of variety should be on top of a solid structure. There are just too many varying parts here which makes the base structure weaker imo.

01:27:559 - I changed it to maintain consistency with 2 LNs throughout
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01:30:240 (90240|1,90495|0,90623|5,91006|0) - For the section at 01:30:240 (90240|1,90495|0,90623|5,91006|0), I changed 01:31:006 (91006|0) to a rice note and kept the rest as is, aiming to give a sense of a break in the progression
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vs ... vs... - I changed it to a 1/2 LN staircase pattern for consistency
01:27:048 (87048|1,87176|2,87304|3,87431|4) - However, since the sound here doesn't feel particularly strong, I'll keep it as a single note

Instead of removing the jack, I extended the LN sound expression on the guitar from 01:30:240 (90240|1) to 01:30:431. I changed it like this because I thought it would be better to extend it to one LN rather than two LNs in terms of visibility.
and I also changed the col of LN ( 1col->2col ) because I checked that the pitch of the negative is also different after listening to you again

<(32123) Changed to the shape stair structure LN

1/4 snap LN might be an overstatement, but for consistency, I think it would be better to switch to 1/4 snap rather than erase it.
I think the expression of the guitar solo accompaniment part of this part is important, so I will change it to 1/4 snap LN

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That placement is intentional, to reflect the division in the guitar sound. I placed it there to convey the feeling of the guitar sound being divided.

#4400754/11709363
most of the time, the reason I make such placements is to intentionally express the division of the guitar sound. If later on BN or similar individuals find issues with those parts, I'll revise them overall.

I think the bracket pattern at that bpm level may be difficult. I changed the pattern for visibility and simple roll.

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I kept one LN for the vocals and two LNs for the piano, and changed the rest to rice notes

02:34:899 - put 6col rice

I think expressing the 1/3 guitar rhythm in that section would make the drum chord placement awkward, so I'll keep it as it is for now