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This beatmap was ranked on 24 September 2024!
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Welcome to my offish.

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wooow

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+4~6ms to current offset looks more accurate

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can do +5

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tags:
mg mpg mappers guild dubcore hardcore j-core jcore dubstep drumstep

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not the mpg tags but i will add japanese to tags too since u suggested jcore / j-core and the genre itself is called japanese hardcore

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01:48:458 - finisher here should be removed and added at 01:48:309 for actual cymbal (only inner oni put it in correct place)

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01:52:319 - same, should be removed and added at 01:52:170 for all diffs

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i prefer them where they are now cuz thats where the stronger beat is and i was told that it felt weird to hit a finisher before that point even if thats where the cymbal is (at least the cymbal is weak so it doesnt sound too odd)

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00:28:705 - 00:39:398 - Feels like these Finishers are unnecessary as they are just overemphasizing a normal beat.

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there r strong sounds / cymbals behind them

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01:38:062 - I don't really like the way you use Finisher here. The strong beat at 01:37:616 correlates with 01:37:913, which the Finisher should be placed at 01:37:913 instead of 01:38:062.

Same goes for 01:48:458 and 01:52:319.

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in the first instance u mentioned, the cymbal is where i have it right now but later on it switches to be on the weaker beat so i wanted to at least keep it consistent with how it happened the first time since it felt awkward otherwise but i dont think swapping the first time makes sense cuz that isnt what the song is doing

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01:13:854 - Add Finisher to stay consistent with 01:04:349.

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ok

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02:21:224 - 02:21:484 - Feels like the snaps should be on 02:21:230 - 02:21:477 respectively. Would double check this with some others.

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agree, it sounds more accurate in the 1/6 ticks

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either is fine to me but 1/6 is simpler

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OD seems to change quite arbitrarily, and Kantan is quite hard to have OD3.5 since the map doesn't deliver anything too difficult, and same goes to Futsuu. Inner Oni's OD is quite low, which makes the OD jump to top diff is too large. Please consider the OD settings below

Kantan -> top diff
3 - 4 - 5 - 5.5 - 6 - 6.5

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there were more diffs before so yeah it scaled a little differently

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01:04:794 (346,347,348,350,351,352,354,355,356,358,359,360,362,363,364) - 01:14:299 (419,420,421,423,424,425,427,428,429,431,432,433) -
for inner and top diff, I would expect the triplet variety at these two sections to be mono triplets for Inner Oni and multicolor triplets for top diff in both sections too

my point is that multicolor triplets between finishers is kinda hard to play so both diffs currently play the same technique, so consider changing the triplets at 01:04:794 into D kkk D kkk D etc...

then add multicolors in 01:14:299 (558,559,560) - 01:14:745 (562,563,564) - 01:15:190 (566,567,568) - 01:15:636 (570,571,572) -

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i think i will just make them monos cuz part of what i didnt like from the original map was the ddk's between the finishers cuz it is kind of difficult when that shouldnt b the focus there

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finishers look consistent between diffs but tbh some could have color changes and also there are places where extra finishers would look pretty cool for the low diffs:

all diffs: 01:04:349 the sound here kinda resembles 00:59:596 and would look better as finisher imo
K/F: 02:14:448 finisher here would look cool too cuz the synth goes very high
K/F/M 02:15:636 SAME^
K/F/M: 01:04:646 01:05:537 the bass has a high pitch so K might sound better
F/M: 01:14:596 01:15:487 D for similar reasons, the contrast between the bass pitches gives space for color changes

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not too a big of fan of being inconsistent but i guess it would make the k/f less boring

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02:16:824 ending is too ez in muzu, maybe you should paste the outro in the futsuu and then make something else for muzu that includes 1/2 triplets or smth

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did smth

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F/M 01:54:250 - 01:55:438 looks empty in both diffs, could add notes at 01:54:844 for both and maybe 01:54:547 for muzu

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did smth

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00:04:052 01:20:091 k to follow the high pitch instrument? this looks particularly good in lower diffs

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not following that layer in the opening

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fix svs later

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a

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S/K/F/M: 00:21:576 00:26:329 00:31:378 K? for high pitch synth + cymbal

also idk why u big note 00:30:784 and not the others above, the sound there is very weak imo

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added some finishers

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yea

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kotik

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SLAYYYYED : You have used all your hype. You have 0 hype left. You'll get another hype in 15 hours.

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