Dareka no Uta de Boku ga Shinu

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This beatmap set was updated by the mapper after a nomination. Please ensure to re-check the beatmaps for new issues. If you are the mapper, please comment in this thread on what you changed.

[hs thread]
00:03:535 - I think you skipped clap

yeet

this song was featured on the album Tsuki no Hibiki ( 月の響 -ツキノヒビキ- ) Would add these to tags

Here's a 192kbps from a flac

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2uof7jtu0skyman/06%20%E8%AA%B0%E3%81%8B%E3%81%AE%E6%AD%8C%E3%81%A7%E5%83%95%E3%81%8C%E6%AD%BB%E3%81%AC.mp3?dl=0

I don't think it's needed to have those 146bpm and 144bpm additional timing lines. It doesn't really change anything either it doesn't seem to correct anything. Please remove them

just a little minor suggestion, but you're using a lot of 1/4-sliders with repeat in Platter and Rain, which creates quite ugly looking droplets between 1/4 notes that aren't supposed to be there. if you want to fix it, you could just replace the repeats with either circles or single sliders, which would change nothing except getting rid of those droplets

some hitsounding stuff:
01:23:119 - finish instead of 01:22:286 -?
01:27:702 - missing finish
01:28:952 - is this one supposed to have a finish?
02:11:036 (1,2,3) - hitsounding seems messed up here (claps should be on 02:11:452 - 02:12:286 - 02:13:119 -)

01:18:536 - this triple is 1/5. applies to Platter and Rain, in Salad i think the 1/2-slider works fine because of the vocal

NCing is very inconsistent in all the diffs. i recommend to go through the diffs and rework the NCing sticking to a simple pattern (for example NC the downbeat every measure), except for gimmick sections like 02:01:036 - of course. if you don't want do to that, you could also compare same/similar sections and check the NCs for consistency atleast

if you can find it, it would be nice to put the background source in the map description to credit the artist

cool rain, good luck!

vocal loid

Hitsounding mod

Missing finishes
00:34:369 (1) -
00:41:036 (1) -
00:44:369 (1) -
00:46:869 (4) -
01:14:369 (1) -
01:51:036 (1) -
01:20:619 (5,1) - Swap finishes here
01:33:952 (5,1) - ^

forgot to hype lol ops

I like this map gj

should remove "Kiiraaisan" in tags cuz there is no primary metadata.
and instead of it, add "きゃらあい" "kyaraai" in tags
metadata
https://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm18208659
https://twitter.com/kyaraai (twitter of this illustrator)

Platter and Rain HP is below the difficulty setting guidelines.
It should be changed below
Platter HP 3.5→4
Rain HP 4.5→5

vocaloid

owob

ar/od spread 7/7.5/8 maybe?