Hi there o/
Everything I say is to be treated as a suggestion. Feel free to ignore this post if you so see fit.[General]Timing feels off somehow though I have no idea what it is or how to fix it. Try consulting someone with timing experience to check?
Breaks in all diffs are different, and normal doesn't even have breaks. Consider making atleast your own diffs consistent. I suggest 01:08:865 - 01:11:623. I know the break is a bit short, but it's what makes most sense to me. Either that or a part of the slow section.
The hitsounds feels a bit bland to me
It's like it's not really giving me that feeling of hitting the notes together with the music. Try using stronger-sounding hitsounds?
the tag "BounceBabe" is in [LoliFlan's Love], which I have no idea why is there? You could also add LoliFlan to the tags actually.
[True Love]00:24:742 (1) - Finish on beginning
00:27:500 (4) - Newcombo?
00:29:568 (6) - New combo?
00:29:568 (6,7,8) - Do you need finish on all of them? I suggest removing on (6,7)
00:32:670 (4) - New combo, then remove new combo at 00:34:394 (1) and add at 00:35:428 (4).
If you like this kind of new-combo pattern, consider doing it for the rest of the diff as I'm lazy to point them out again xD It's following the vocals.
00:34:394 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern might be confusing and hard to read in an easy, since it's overlapping.
00:35:428 (1) - Finish
00:46:804 (1) - Finish on beginning
01:08:865 (1) - Center this?
I guess this diff in general needs more finishes :p
01:48:162 (3,4,5) - Confusing again I think. You can move it like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168437[Love Me]Yeah, you could try following vocals with the newcombo here too.
00:29:913 (6) - Move this upwards so it looks like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168439 Then move 00:30:258 (1) - here:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168444 and finally move 00:30:602 (2,3,4,5,6) - so 00:31:981 (4) - is directly above 00:33:705 (1).
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16844500:56:628 (5,6) - Move up 1 grid?
00:46:631 (1) to 01:05:246 (6) <-- I love the finishes <3 Try using them in the other diffs?
01:09:210 - Add a break here
01:13:002 - 01:20:068 <--- try using the defaul soft-hitwhistle here and see if you can come up with something. It feels a bit empty.
01:20:585 - Add a spinner here, ending at 01:22:654. You need to remove that slider. Add a note on the current endpoint.
02:05:570 (5,6) - Down 1 grid
02:17:635 - 02:28:838 <-- where are the hitsounds D:
02:25:219 (7,1) - This is weird. Try this pattern:
http://puu.sh/7oYt[LoliFlan's Love]00:05:438 - 00:05:783 - <-- unused timing sections? Delete them
This diff has some weird spacing and sliderslowdowns that you should consider fixing.
For example:
00:27:327 (1,2) -
00:28:362 (3,1) -
00:32:670 (1,2) - This can be fixed by reversing the 2nd slider
00:34:566 (5,1) - And this slider
00:38:358 (1,2,3) -
I feel they kill the flow.
00:25:432 (3,4,5) - All 1/2, but different spacing that doesn't feel right.
00:26:466 (2,3,1) - Spread out the blue sliders so the yellow one fits perfectly in between.
00:46:631 - Aww, kiai time and the whole section feels slow :<
01:02:316 (5) - Remove this
01:06:797 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You suddenly switch what you're following here. I think it makes more sense to change at 01:06:107
01:09:037 - Break
01:25:928 (1) - This feels really unnatural.Either begin it on the blue tick at 01:26:014 - or just have it on the white tick.
01:30:754 (5) - End this slider at 01:30:927 -
01:39:200 (2,3) - spacing :<
01:55:746 - More natural to have kiai begin here imo.
02:04:881 (6,7,8) - Spacing again.
02:25:908 (1) - Extend spinner to 02:28:838
Try using some more finishes too.
[Broken Heart]OD -1
AR -1? <-- This is fine either way, but for me AR 8 felt much better.
00:23:363 - 00:29:396 <-- You should add hitsounds in this part too.
00:35:773 (9) - Finish
01:22:654 (1,2,3) - This is kinda covered by the "Clear" from the spinner. Consider moving?
01:26:101 (7,1) - Swap new combos
Well, the spacing is a bit inconsistent here too, but it is an insane, so I'm not pointing them out. Some of them did feel a bit weird though, mainly those slower ones in the kiai sections. Try some more finishes here too I think.
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Well, all in all the mapset is good. I'd like to hear some louder hitsounding though, as I said
Good luck~~