1. Easy (2.83 stars, 154 notes)
2. Extra (4.85 stars, 477 notes)
3. Hard (4.9 stars, 312 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 408 notes)
5. Normal (4.11 stars, 198 notes)

Thanks for the ones who modded my map

Deni
Hinsvar
-Bakari-
chaotic_iak
kurohana
Nagisawa
JudgeTheDude
Lally x2
Frostmourne(PM Mod)
Kuroneko-sHerald
CrestRising
yanlu
Snowy Dream
Natsu
KiyoshiX101
BounceBabe
ChivaCookie
HelloSCV
Unsfamiliar
Pagno
zorefire
gideon5504
ax_pokl
Mako Sakata
Leorda

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!
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Easy

Always remember to use distance snap. You didn't use it in some parts.
ok,well

00:16:125 (2,3) - They are overlapping. That's not so pretty.
fixed
00:27:995 (2) - Move this 1 grid to the left.
fixed
00:29:794 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow can be too difficult for Easy.
fixed
00:29:794 (4) - New Combo
fixed
00:37:708 (3,4) - Stacks can be too difficult for Easy.
fixed
00:39:147 (1) - This circle is overlapping with the slider before. That's not so pretty.
fixed
00:41:305 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow can be too difficult for Easy.
fixed
00:41:305 (4) - New Combo
fixed
01:09:003 (3) - Make this more symmetrical
fixed
01:41:017 (3) - I dont think this slider fits + 1 more than 1 reverse arrow can be too hard.
fixed,spinner instead
02:02:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - You didn't use distance snap in this part.
I am using Anti-Jumps here,so,I am not changing it,sorry
02:14:111 (2,3) - They are overlapping. That's not so pretty.
fixed
02:25:621 (2,3) - ^
fixed

Normal

00:42:744 (2,3) - They are overlapping. That's not so pretty.
fixed
00:55:693 (5,1) - ^
fixed
00:59:649 (2,3) - ^
fixed
01:33:103 (4,5,6,7) - This is too difficult for Normal.
fixed,dont know if it seems better(parallel)
01:38:859 (5,6,7,8) - ^
^
02:13:031 (2,3) - They are overlapping.
fixed
02:15:908 (2,3) - ^
fixed

1. Add a space between "Young" and "(Nightcore" on the song's title. Remember to full submit after doing this.
2. The BG's quality is pretty bad. Try to find a better one. Full submit after doing this.

1. 00:31:593 (3) - Shorten the slider to 1/2 (if you don't understand, end this at 00:31:772) to follow the vocal better.
2. 00:33:751 (2) - Move the first anchor point to (316,284) (aka three grids down on Grid Level 4)? The curve that's made by 00:33:391 (1,2) should look more natural.
3. 00:36:629 (2,3,4) - Hmm... Can you rearrange these sliders so they won't touch other sliders' path/body? Right now they just look weird.
4. 00:43:104 (3) - Same as 00:31:593 (3). Also, I don't really recommend copy-pasting on your map (just noticed this now), but what's done is done, I guess.
5. 00:45:262 (2) - Similar to 00:33:751 (2). Just move the first anchor point three grids down.
6. 00:49:578 (4) - Move the last anchor point to (200,244). The reason is same as 00:33:751 (2).
7. 00:50:657 (1,2) - Don't change the spacing here.
8. 00:53:535 (3,4) - I... kinda dislike the overlaps and the blanketing here. Try to make a neater pattern. I myself can't really see a suitable one, so please use your creativity here. (Look out for things like this on the entire mapset; I can't really see this to be employed as a mapping style, so don't use that for your reason.)
9. 01:01:449 (6,1) - A weird overlap. Try to rearrange the sliders' position here.
10. 01:10:441 (1) - Remove the NC. There's no reason for it.
11. 02:04:039 (2) - NC because the spacing decreases significantly (anti-jump).
12. 02:05:477 (4) - ^ (Except that the spacing returns to normal.)
13. 02:11:233 (3,4) - Hmm... The blanket doesn't work well here. Just play with the anchor points of (3) so it will look good.
14. 02:22:744 (3,4) - ^

1. AR+1? The notes appear too fast and looks clustered while playing.
2. 00:21:880 (3,4) - ...I don't really think a jump (even if it's symmetrical) is allowed on a Normal diff.
3. 00:30:513 (4) - NC like like what you've done at 00:39:147 (1,2,3,1,2,3) later.
4. 00:31:952 (6) - Drag the first anchor point to (300,228) to make the curve here look more natural?
5. 01:47:131 (1) - I don't really think you need to NC this, so remove?
6. 02:05:298 (5) - NC this. It's been four stanzas since the last NC usage and the music gets more intense here.

1. AR+1? The reason is same as Normal. Heck, I might even recommend AR+2 for this.
2. I recommend you to use 1.0x DS entirely (except for jumps, streams, and anti-jumps), but whatever for now...
3. 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... Try to make a better star using "Create Polygon Circles" on the "Compose" menu?
4. 00:26:197 (6) - NC since the spacing changes radically here.
5. 02:05:298 (8) - NC? The reason is same as Normal.

1. AR+1? Reason's same as... Normal and Hard.
2. 00:38:427 (5,6) - I don't really recommend a pattern like this, since it can be pretty confusing at times.
3. 01:00:729 (7) - NC? (Also check for combos that have >8 objects; most of them just don't fit. Won't mention all of them; there's just too much.)
4. 01:17:276 (5) - The repeat is almost hidden by 01:16:916 (4), which is borderline "unrankable". I suggest to rearrange the position of the slider here.
5. 01:35:981 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - A pattern like this is very confusing, IMO.

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there.

Let's mod this.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. Add a space between "Young" and "(Nightcore" on the song's title. Remember to full submit after doing this. fixed
2. The BG's quality is pretty bad. Try to find a better one. Full submit after doing this.

fixed

>Easy

1. 00:31:593 (3) - Shorten the slider to 1/2 (if you don't understand, end this at 00:31:772) to follow the vocal better. oh,it extended abnormally.Anyway fixed
2. 00:33:751 (2) - Move the first anchor point to (316,284) (aka three grids down on Grid Level 4)? The curve that's made by 00:33:391 (1,2) should look more natural. fixed.You are awesome,for this
3. 00:36:629 (2,3,4) - Hmm... Can you rearrange these sliders so they won't touch other sliders' path/body? Right now they just look weird. fixed
4. 00:43:104 (3) - Same as 00:31:593 (3). Also, I don't really recommend copy-pasting on your map (just noticed this now), but what's done is done, I guess. fixed
5. 00:45:262 (2) - Similar to 00:33:751 (2). Just move the first anchor point three grids down. fixed
6. 00:49:578 (4) - Move the last anchor point to (200,244). The reason is same as 00:33:751 (2). fixed
7. 00:50:657 (1,2) - Don't change the spacing here. fixed
8. 00:53:535 (3,4) - I... kinda dislike the overlaps and the blanketing here. Try to make a neater pattern. I myself can't really see a suitable one, so please use your creativity here. (Look out for things like this on the entire mapset; I can't really see this to be employed as a mapping style, so don't use that for your reason.) fixed,I think it will be okay...
9. 01:01:449 (6,1) - A weird overlap. Try to rearrange the sliders' position here. fixed
10. 01:10:441 (1) - Remove the NC. There's no reason for it. fixed
11. 02:04:039 (2) - NC because the spacing decreases significantly (anti-jump). fixed
12. 02:05:477 (4) - ^ (Except that the spacing returns to normal.) fixed
13. 02:11:233 (3,4) - Hmm... The blanket doesn't work well here. Just play with the anchor points of (3) so it will look good. fixed
14. 02:22:744 (3,4) - ^

fixed

>Normal

1. AR+1? The notes appear too fast and looks clustered while playing. AR+1
2. 00:21:880 (3,4) - ...I don't really think a jump (even if it's symmetrical) is allowed on a Normal diff. fixed
3. 00:30:513 (4) - NC like like what you've done at 00:39:147 (1,2,3,1,2,3) later. fixed
4. 00:31:952 (6) - Drag the first anchor point to (300,228) to make the curve here look more natural? fixed
5. 01:47:131 (1) - I don't really think you need to NC this, so remove? fixed
6. 02:05:298 (5) - NC this. It's been four stanzas since the last NC usage and the music gets more intense here.

fixed

>Hard

1. AR+1? The reason is same as Normal. Heck, I might even recommend AR+2 for this. AR+2
2. I recommend you to use 1.0x DS entirely (except for jumps, streams, and anti-jumps), but whatever for now... I prefer 0.75x from 00:27:636 (1) - to 00:50:657 (1) -
3. 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... Try to make a better star using "Create Polygon Circles" on the "Compose" menu? fixed
4. 00:26:197 (6) - NC since the spacing changes radically here. fixed
5. 02:05:298 (8) - NC? The reason is same as Normal.

fixed

>Insane

1. AR+1? Reason's same as... Normal and Hard. AR+1 - ed
2. 00:38:427 (5,6) - I don't really recommend a pattern like this, since it can be pretty confusing at times. fixed
3. 01:00:729 (7) - NC? (Also check for combos that have >8 objects; most of them just don't fit. Won't mention all of them; there's just too much.) fixed,I think
4. 01:17:276 (5) - The repeat is almost hidden by 01:16:916 (4), which is borderline "unrankable". I suggest to rearrange the position of the slider here. fixed
5. 01:35:981 (9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - A pattern like this is very confusing, IMO.

I kept 01:35:981 (9,10,11,12) Others were remade

...I was just mentioning some of the most severe problems. There's a lot more, but if I mention them all, it will be a repetitive mod full of "this pattern is bad", "the flow is bad here", "NC", and others. Well,because it is my first beatmap,I can't eliminate all those problems.Sorry

Find more modders here and evaluate/test the entire mapset by yourself. There's still a long way to go, but I think you have the skill needed to map something nicely (well, when there weren't any errors on the Hard and Insane diff, some patterns actually play and look good). Just get some dedication inside. Thanks for your suggestions

Good luck on the way Thanks

-Bakari- wrote:

hi! you know what? i love this song <3

[General]
first of all title is Forever Young (Nightcore Mix) done
add tags: remix Marian Gold Martin Lister David Goodes Jakob Kiersch done

links: t/24443 (read before pdating map) did not read it the first time,but lucky I fixed this and it should be fine now

02:31:916 - i guess you should end kiai here (all diffs) (also: end spinner here?) fixed
did you cut mp3 or something? no.The mp3 is 2:33 long but the music ends before 2:33it sounds odd in the end try to add fade out in the end? >.< yes
it would be better if you'll use 800x600 BG Reason?
try to avoid using 100% volume Normal hitsounds? too loud >.< fixed
slider tick rate 2 fits with music much better fixed

[Insane]
this time i won't do huge and detalized mod. only some suggestions
OD8 plays much better to me. try it! :3 fixed,and I can't pass my map anymore
i guess i should say that i can't enjoy your rhythm because notes (hitobkects) are covered by hitbursts (example: as you can see it's not actual problem it's more about how it looks. :/ if map contains many many many overlapped objects we won't be able to enjoy playing :< try to avoid them, please)
00:13:247 (1,1) - all diffs/ i see why you want to use spinner here but i think slider (maybe with slowdown fits here better) it's also unpleasure to play this big jump from spinner center to 00:14:686 (1) - so i guess best solution is to remove spinner and use slider here instead. fixed,I actrally remap it due to the fact that sliders can never follow the vocals here
00:16:215 - beat here is missing. a bit uncomfortable to play. put circle here, please fixed
00:23:319 (1) - why spinner? are you lazy or what >.< it doesn't fits here at all for me. try to map this part properly (circles/sliders) fixed
00:26:197 (6) - eh.. i guess it's not okay to play because this slowdown is unreadable. try to put new combo here and it'll make your map more enjoyable for us <3 fixed
00:27:816 (2,3,4,5,6) - well.. i'll point out it once just to let you know that overlaps like this looks good in editor only. because during gameplay notes are covered by hitbursts and it's unplayable with hidden :< fixed
00:36:089 - feels empty to me. try to put here a circle and it'll sound better :3 fixed,I simply add a circle in the same spot
00:39:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't mind copy-paste while mapping but don't overuse it. it looks odd and also boring to play! i see some awesome patterns and i want to see more of them but i don't want to see ctrl+c => ctrl+v => ctrl+h :< fixed
00:47:780 (4) - whis spacing plays awkward :< try to put new combo here or re-arrange your pattern fixed
01:25:190 (1,2,3) - objects like this are covered by hitbursts and it's hard to read them :< fixed
01:29:506 (1) - if you'll make a miss at 01:28:787 (5) - you won't see reverse arrow at (1) which is unrankable :< fixed

nice diff. but personally i'd like to see more your patterns and less copypasta .

[Hard]
OD and HP Drain: 6-7 much more balanced with your mapping and your rhythm HP=7OD=5 cause I think 6 is too hard for hard
i'd like to see smaller hitcircles. map looks messy as is :< (hard to read/many overlaps) CS=4
00:23:319 (1) - same as Insane (i'll probably will write many same suggestions.) fixed
00:24:758 (1) - it's a bug. put new combo here to fix it (as you can see number is 1 but there's no New Combo! should be fixed) fixed.weird...
00:28:355 - weak rhythm. personally i want you to follow vocals here. (slider with start at 00:28:355 - and end at 00:28:535 ) fixed
00:39:866 - actually you have same thing as i writed down above. maybe it's because of copypasta? :3 fixed
01:06:485 - 01:07:923 - it's kinda awkward to play because you skipping red ticks (but i can hear beats >.<) try to put circles at red ticks as well fixed
01:31:305 (2,3) - just letting you to know that this jump here plays awkward to me. it doesn't fits with music and looks not really good :< fixed
01:59:003 - i guess it's same as 00:28:355 fixed
02:06:197 (6) - please, make this slider faster. it looks like too small and too short ;_; fixed
02:17:708 (6) - reverse arrow here is a bit overlapped with (3)'s hitburst. kinda hard to ead (and extremly hard with hidden) fixed
02:30:118 (1) - ends kinda awkward: same for all diffs fixed

[Normal]
diff setting are unbalanced. try OD:4 and HP Drain: 3 to be more balanced fixed
oh..okay it looks like easy with AR5 and the main problem is overlaps.

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note: i finished mod because: i don't want to stress you with OMGWTFLONGPOST and because i know that easy and normal have exactly the same style/rhythm mistakes as Hard/Insane. personally i suggest you to use bigger slider velocity for Normal diff next time

quite good for first beatmap

chaotic_iak wrote:

Unrankable stuffs, must fix; definitely a problem, should fix; plausible problem, might need fix. Good stuffs.

[General]
Why the background is from some Japanese anime... I don't think its a problem...
Why the hitsounds are not heard... I'm not sure why. You have 80% volume for that, but it still feels like 15%. Can you ask someone expert in hitsounds about this? Easy and Normal feel like really bland.

[Easy]
Uh for some reason I think this is a Normal >_< Here are some reasons of why it's too hard for Easy.
00:27:995 (2,3) - 1.5-beat gap might be problematic for Easy players, since they are not really used to them yet (more to 1-beat and 2-beat gaps).no
00:28:715 (3,1,2,3) - ^ I guess now you know why.no
00:50:657 - Speed change in Easy is quite difficult, especially within a small gap like that.intended
01:00:729 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing (0.67x against 0.80x, but noticeable because the 4 overlaps with the 3 while all other 1-beat gaps don't)fixed
01:33:823 (1) - Might be hidden by red 2fixed
02:02:600 (1,1,1,1) - Difficult for Easy players that rely on spacing fixed,but could be more beautiful
02:09:794 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing (1.42x against 0.80x)intended
02:17:348 (5,1) - Inconsistent spacing (0.66x against 0.80x, noticeable because of the same reason in 01:00:729)fixed
02:21:305 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing (1.41x against 0.80x)fixed

[Normal]
00:15:406 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing (1.16x against 0.80x) fixed
00:22:240 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing (1.16x against 0.80x) fixed
00:56:772 (2,3,4) - Hard to see for Normalfixed
00:58:931 (5,1,2) - ^ fixed
01:00:729 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing (1.52x against 0.80x) fixed
01:02:528 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing (1.22x against 0.80x) fixed
01:04:326 (4) - Number of repeats might be unexpected (expecting 1) fixed
01:09:722 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing (1.20x against 0.80x) fixed
01:35:981 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing (1.64x against 0.80x) According how people play these sliders,I won't change it.
01:41:017 (3) - Number of repeats might be unexpected (expecting 11 or something) Very hard to fit anything in here except a repeating slider.so,no
01:57:564 (5,6,1) - Inconsistent spacings (1.75x and 1.11x against 0.80x) According how people play these sliders,I won't change it.
02:04:578 (4,1) - Inconsistent spacing (1.33x against 0.80x) fixed
02:13:031 (2,3,4) - Hard to see for Normal
02:15:190 (5,1,2) - ^
02:16:988 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing (1.52x against 0.80x)
02:18:787 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing (1.22x against 0.80x)
02:20:585 (4) - Number of repeats might be unexpected (expecting 1)
02:25:981 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing (1.20x against 0.80x)This part is basically the same as the first kiaitime.So,things I fixed before are fixed,so are others

[Hard & Insane]
Okay now I played both, I feel like you underestimate the difficulties. Easy should be Normal; Normal should be Hard; Hard should be Insane; Insane should be something more...say Extreme or Insane++? If so, I have absolutely no problems with these two, and the former two have much less issues. Your choice; I'll continue after you decide. Accepted

Anyway, good luck! I will keep track on this because I like the song.

General

Normal

Hard

Insane

Extra

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/
Sorry for delay ^^'

General

1. Delete the .osb-file in your songfolder and make a full submit. will do
2. You bg-file is 600x450, very low quality. It has to be 800x600 or 1024x768 at least. Search a better one found.full submit after all mods have fixed
3. Timing sounds very wrong to me... Search for someone who could check this.

will do

Normal

1. 02:10:513 (2) - No. Jumps. In. Normal. Move it ._.

Since so many of you mentioned it,fixed

Hard

1. You use the same slider-velocity as in normal, that's not very good... It should rise with every diff... I will keep this in mind
2. 00:27:636 - 00:50:657 - Use spacing 1,1x to remove these ugly overlaps. Scaled.But I am not satisfied and will improve
3. 00:40:585 (3) - Make this slider curvier fixed
4. 00:43:463 (3) - ^ fixed
5. 01:02:528 (2) - Spacing fixed
6. 02:18:787 (2) - ^ fixed

Insane

1. 00:13:607 (2) - This slider is totally of. It should end at 00:13:967 It does not follow the vocals then
2. 00:27:636 - 00:50:657 - Again, use 1,1x fixed

Extra

1. Sometimes the patterns are hard to read, maybe take a look by yourself over it and I check again ^^
2. 00:13:607 (2) - The same as Insane The same as Insane
3. 00:27:636 - 00:50:657 - Again, use 1,1x
4. 00:51:916 (6) - Hidden under sliderslide (5) fixed
5. 01:03:427 (6) - ^ fixed
6. 01:59:722 (6) - Ugly overlap with (5) fixed
7. 02:08:175 (6) - Hidden under sliderslide (5) fixed
8. 02:19:686 (6) - ^ fixed
9. 02:29:218 (5) - NC fixed

Call me for re-check ^^

kurohana wrote:

Timing sounds very wrong to me... Search for someone who could check this.

chaotic_iak wrote:

kurohana wrote:

Timing sounds very wrong to me... Search for someone who could check this.

I have listened throughout the whole song with the metronome on, and I don't hear any mistimed part. Maybe you get this because a line of "Forever young" at the beginning of a chorus starts at the second beat and ends at the fourth beat plus half?
Speaking of which,I have already request this map to this thread /p/1814666 for a more accurate timing

Yay starring because I like the song, but more because your map is pretty well-done.
Thank you very much,sir

Nagisawa wrote:

hi) from my modding que

General
delete .osb file in your folder and full submit Will do after all things are modified
Maybe rename your background pictire in 'bg' or 'background'? Will do after all things are modified
bg must be in format JPEG and size 800x600 or 1024x768!! Will do after all things are modified

Hard
00:39:866 (2,3) - spacing ok

do these sliders equal. they are looking ugly.
00:53:535 (1) - ok
00:56:772 (2) - I think it looks fine as a blanket
01:33:823 (1,2) - ok
01:35:262 (3) - ok

It seems to be a rhythm map fine. But something keeps me its ok mod. She did not look neatly, not always met the distance required.
Work better!
star for motivate ;3
Thank you very much!

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.
Black: Notifs
Must be fixed
Good things

[Normal]
Make you shapes more symetrical, they're not beatiful.

00:33:751 (2) - Weird shape Fixed
00:35:190 (3) - Same Fixed
00:33:751 (2,3) - Little overriding Fixed
00:45:262 (2,3) - Same here (I mean the shapes and the overriding) Fixed
00:52:096 (2) - Strange shape It seems fine because the slider is actrally mirrored from 00:50:657 (1) -
01:01:449 (4) - Center it with 01:02:168 (1) x:220 y:184 It is not symetrical then
01:06:485 (5,1) - Good placing thank you :3
01:36:700 (1,3) - Little overriding on 3's end Fixed
02:02:600 (1) - First time I played, I didn't see it Moved it to a better position
02:06:197 (2,1) - Overriding Fixed
02:11:233 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
02:16:269 (4) - Fix the Slider velocity ! Too slow, the slider end after the next start ! -> I have some troubles with the Edit, it's maybe only a problem with my computer, but check it. It is alright here.I had experienced it sometimes

[Hard]
01:43:175 (2,3) - Overriding Fixed
02:13:031 (2) - You could make a symetrical shape. Made

[Insane/Extra]
Too fast for me, sorry Its fine then

GL For rank !thank you

1. New combo fix:
   nc = new combo
   remove = remove new combo

Lally wrote:

Well, i love this song C: Here a little mod for you :3/ you have much work to do ;w;

[General]
Normal and Hard: SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 why no 1.0 ? o3o fixed
DistanceSpacing: 0.8 please don't use the same distancespacing in all diff fixed
Use Slider Tick Rate : 1 i think is better fixed
fix in some part slider velocity, in some parts is to slow I think thats a problem with the editor, and it causes some sliders to be extended unexpectedly

[Break time]
well i see in all diff exept Extra you used same break i think is better to have the same one in extra too
01:13:679 - 01:28:067 I put the break in 01:25:190 to 01:28:067 instead

[kiai time]
00:50:657 - 01:13:679 and 02:06:916 - 02:31:916 <-finish kiai time here
fix it in all diff fixed

[Normal]
00:24:758 - finish fixed
00:49:578 (4,1) - better a blanket here made
01:01:449 (4,1) - better blanket fixed
01:12:959 (4) - finish at end of slider fixed
01:28:067 - why don't you try to silence this end of spin :/ same with it in other diff too fixed
01:32:024 - add a circle here made
01:34:902 - add a circle made
01:36:700 (1,3) - better blanket fixed
01:41:017 - finish fixed
01:43:535 - 01:44:974 - 01:46:413 - 01:47:852 - so empty :/ you should place some circles or make more sliders to continue the rythmfixed
01:51:089 - finish + 40-50% volume fixed
02:00:801 (4) - stalk it better with 01:58:643 (1) made a new pattern
02:19:866 (3,4) - better blanket fixed
02:22:024 (2,3) - better blanket fixed
02:23:823 (4,1) - better blanket fixed
02:26:700 (4,1) - better blanket o3o fixed o3o

1. New combo fix:
   nc = new combo
   remove = remove new combo

00:33:391 - remove
00:33:751 - nc
00:36:269 - remove
00:36:629 - nc
00:39:147 - remove
00:39:506 - nc
00:44:902 - remove
00:45:262 - nc
00:47:780 - remove
00:48:139 - nc
01:58:283 - remove
01:58:643 - nc
all fixed

[Hard]
Need some stalking fix and do some sliders better , and a little work on rithm :V I see
distance spacing is so close :/ try to use a other distance spacing change to 1
like 01:36:341 (5,1) - ._. not nice to see and to play fixed
02:05:298 - remove nc and add it here 02:05:837 fixed

good luck :3

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Normal]
01:11:881 (2) - Unsnapped circle (+1 ms) snapped

[Insane]
Various unsnapped notes. "Resnap all notes" to fix. snapped
00:24:039 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's confusing. Remapped
00:24:578 (6,1) - Stack better The part is remapped so it don't need to change
00:24:218 (4,2) - ^ ^
00:26:017 - Add a circle stacked with 00:26:197 (1) - ? As I listen I don't hear any beats are there in 00:26:017 !So,no sorry

[Extra]
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FrAsH69 wrote:

I hope that this card will be in rank. I really liked it, well done, well at work =)

• 
  * Your Hard difficulty is WAY too easy. Its more like a Normal and nothing like a Hard. There are no noticeable jumps and is just too boring and easy. Likewise, your Normal is more like an Easy to me. You could rename Hard to Normal and rename Normal to Easy, but you would still need a true Hard, and Extra is too Hard to fit the bill.
  
  [Normal:] [list:eac5c]
  * 00:21:880 (1,2,3,4) This pattern doesn't fit right. You should try something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  * 00:30:513 (1,2) You should probably combine these into one slider to keep a symmetrical rhythm with 00:27:636 (1)
  00:33:391 (1,2) You might want to combine these in one slider too. It would match the xylophone to (or whatever that high-pitched instrument is, I think you know what I'm talking about.)
  00:42:024 (1,2) Combine these in a slider, maybe?
  00:44:902 (6,1) See 00:31:391
  01:06:485 (5) I think it would fit the pace better if it was split into two sliders like 01:05:046 (3,4) since there's barely any lyrics in this part, just a thought.
  01:12:959 (4,1,2) You should probably cut the repeat of off the slider and make a two beat slider where the endpoint of 4 was originally. It would match up with the rest of the verse/instrumental thing.
  01:30:945 (1) It would probably be better if it was a 1 beat slider, then a circle a beat later instead of a 2 beat slider.
  01:33:823 (1) and 01:36:700 (1) and 01:39:578 (1) ^
  * 01:41:017 (1) It would fit much better if there was a spinner here instead.
  01:46:413 (4) It may be better if you broke it up in three circles to make it look like the red combo just before.
  01:59:722 (3,4) Imo, it would be much better if you deleted two and added a repeat on 1 to match up with 01:56:485 (3)
  02:16:988 (4,5) It would sound better if these were merged into one slider.
  02:29:218 (4,5) Maybe merge into a slider?

• 
  00:44:902 (1,2) Unstack maybe?
  00:56:413 (1,2,3) Just a thought, but maybe it would be better as (slider-slider-circle) instead of (circle-slider-slider)

• 
  00:27:636 (1,2) Imo, would probably look better if this was just stacked over 3.
  00:37:708 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern doesn't look very nice, imo.
  00:38:427 (5) I think it would sound nicer if you added an extra repeat.
  00:49:938 (3) Maybe you should add an extra repeat here too.
  * 01:15:118 (1,2) You should probably space these out to make it kind of look like 01:16:557 (1,2,3)

• 
  00:17:474 (2) This triplet seems odd to me. Maybe delete this circle?
  * 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5) This is even less than the distance spacing, I think you should space this pattern out more imo.
  01:24:830 (2,3,1) This anti-jump seems pointless to me. Imo, you should probably just space it out.
  01:45:244 (2) See 00:17:474
  * 01:59:182 This feels missing without a circle.
  * 02:00:981 (4,1) If you're going to do the anti-jumps at 02:02:420 (2,3) and 02:03:859 (1,2) you might as well do one here too.
  Overall, this and Extra are very nice difficulties, but I think you could go a little bit farther. You see places like 02:03:859 (1,2) that go with the du-du-du (don't know what to call it )? I think you're map could use more of those, as long as its done consistent (like every other du-du-du, or only in a section of the chorus, etc.). Idk, just a thought.

CrestRising wrote:

From my queue. I actually had this map for the longest time but just deleted it earlier. Guess I'll have to redownload.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[General:]

• 
  * Your Hard difficulty is WAY too easy. Its more like a Normal and nothing like a Hard. There are no noticeable jumps and is just too boring and easy. Likewise, your Normal is more like an Easy to me. You could rename Hard to Normal and rename Normal to Easy, but you would still need a true Hard, and Extra is too Hard to fit the bill. Planning to make a hard then but it might takes ~30 days because I will have an exam soon And Extra is made to be harder than Insane, but it is 4.9 stars for some reason
  EDIT:Done
  
  [Normal:] [list:01b0e]
  * 00:21:880 (1,2,3,4) This pattern doesn't fit right. You should try something like this: done~
  
  SPOILER

  
  * 00:30:513 (1,2) You should probably combine these into one slider to keep a symmetrical rhythm with 00:27:636 (1) done~
  00:33:391 (1,2) You might want to combine these in one slider too. It would match the xylophone to (or whatever that high-pitched instrument is, I think you know what I'm talking about.) Em,no. 00:33:751 (2) - is already following the vocals, and I think there is not a need to have a OMGVERYLONG slider here
  00:42:024 (1,2) Combine these in a slider, maybe?done~
  00:44:902 (6,1) See 00:33:391 See 00:33:391
  01:06:485 (5) I think it would fit the pace better if it was split into two sliders like 01:05:046 (3,4) since there's barely any lyrics in this part, just a thought. done~
  01:12:959 (4,1,2) You should probably cut the repeat of off the slider and make a two beat slider where the endpoint of 4 was originally. It would match up with the rest of the verse/instrumental thing. done~
  01:30:945 (1) It would probably be better if it was a 1 beat slider, then a circle a beat later instead of a 2 beat slider. The rhythm is fine here, so I don't think I will change it now, sorry
  01:33:823 (1) and 01:36:700 (1) and 01:39:578 (1) ^ ^
  * 01:41:017 (1) It would fit much better if there was a spinner here instead. done~
  01:46:413 (4) It may be better if you broke it up in three circles to make it look like the red combo just before.done~
  01:59:722 (3,4) Imo, it would be much better if you deleted two and added a repeat on 1 to match up with 01:56:485 (3) done~
  02:16:988 (4,5) It would sound better if these were merged into one slider. I think they are the same...so I am not gonna to change it, sorry
  02:29:218 (4,5) Maybe merge into a slider? done~

[Hard:]

• 
  00:44:902 (1,2) Unstack maybe? done~
  00:56:413 (1,2,3) Just a thought, but maybe it would be better as (slider-slider-circle) instead of (circle-slider-slider) done~

[Extra:]

• 
  00:27:636 (1,2) Imo, would probably look better if this was just stacked over 3. I prefer a blanket here
  00:37:708 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern doesn't look very nice, imo. remapped~
  00:38:427 (5) I think it would sound nicer if you added an extra repeat. I, personally, dislike sliders that repeat more than 4 times. However, I remapped the whole part.
  00:49:938 (3) Maybe you should add an extra repeat here too. ^^
  * 01:15:118 (1,2) You should probably space these out to make it kind of look like 01:16:557 (1,2,3) done~

[Insane:]

• 
  00:17:474 (2) This triplet seems odd to me. Maybe delete this circle? done~
  * 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5) This is even less than the distance spacing, I think you should space this pattern out more imo. done~
  
  /me feels proud of himself of a minute of perfect in this diff
  
  01:24:830 (2,3,1) This anti-jump seems pointless to me. Imo, you should probably just space it out. done~
  01:45:244 (2) See 00:17:474 done~
  * 01:59:182 This feels missing without a circle. done~with a slider
  * 02:00:981 (4,1) If you're going to do the anti-jumps at 02:02:420 (2,3) and 02:03:859 (1,2) you might as well do one here too. done~
  Overall, this and Extra are very nice difficulties, but I think you could go a little bit farther. You see places like 02:03:859 (1,2) that go with the du-du-du (don't know what to call it )? I think you're map could use more of those, as long as its done consistent (like every other du-du-du, or only in a section of the chorus, etc.). Idk, just a thought. nah it's quite flow-killing ;_;

A very nice map. Keep doing what you're doing.

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ Mod Request via my Mod Queue~

[overall]

*藍色要不要改成膚色比較適合BG 像現在有點太突兀>< 現在應該...行吧

*easy跟normal的SV都用1.00耶...EASY最好做成3星以下吧...所以建議用0.80改看看 找一天有空會把EASY給重製了

*關於你的slider也給個建議 拉的slider中點會影響整個弧的左右平衡..
所以盡量是放中間會好看的多:3 好像好複雜

*還有關於你下節奏跟間距的變化...
除了Extra (eaz跟nor不說) insane跟hard幾乎是照著同樣的間距在走:(
這樣玩起來雖然有跟著音樂節奏
可是就會變很無趣
可以試試做點變化~(像2連+slider.2連打.3連5連7連...)
前提當然要配合音樂下囉>_< >_<

[Insane]
00:16:125 (5)- 碰到00:15:765 (4)- 了.. 修好~
00:19:902 (4,1,2)- 擋住了喔 如果是故意的 4跟2沒有疊好 修好~
00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5)- 節奏要這樣放的話...間距可以拉大一點>< 修好~
00:45:441 (2,4)- 略醜 修好~
00:46:880 (2)- 1跟3間距不一樣 修好~
00:56:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- 似乎是想做對稱可是沒有很對稱喔 修好~
01:02:528 (2,6)- 跟前面的擋住了 修好~
01:05:585 (1)- 可以跟01:03:967 (7)- 疊好 修好~
01:09:902 (2,5)- 就像我前面說的 這種slider可以在拉的漂亮一點 修好~其他差不多的也修好了

[Extra]
Extra就跳得滿好玩的
00:19:812 (5)- 刪這個 修好~
00:23:229 (5,1,2,3,4,5)- 這裡做連打沒理由啊OAQ 這位置比其他有更多明顯的拍~所以不打算改了
00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5)- 一樣的問題~ 修好~
00:33:211 (3,1,2,1)- 可以擺成正方形? 修好~
00:38:427 (3,4,5,6)- 奇怪的跳.. 修好~
00:42:114 (2)- 不必要的note建議刪 好像..問題不大?
00:49:938 (3,4,5,6)- 突然的間距變化 修好~
01:00:549 (6)- 這裡最好別做來回~不好讀 修好~
01:01:089 (2,2)- 疊 修好~

有點累...所以mod一半"大概問題都是其他的前面提到的>_< >_<辛苦了
我就不一個個點出來了請自己發現它們(?

btw,這歌我很喜歡呢:3 很難得

good luck~加油rank!!

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   
   01:12:961 - snap to 01:12:959
   01:30:981 - snap to 01:30:944
   01:43:175 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
   
2. Consider OD+1? Although it is an Easy diff, ppl should still practice improving their ability. So low OD is not a good choice for beginners to improve.
3. 00:13:247 (1) - What about adding finish to this note? It is the first Downbeat.
4. 00:33:751 (2) - You'd better follow the beat not the vocal, so beginners can recognize when they should click, or they may be confused for it. My suggestion: Start this slider from 00:33:391 to 00:34:830, so 00:33:391 (1) will be removed.
5. 01:15:118 (1) - Make this more suitable for 01:14:758 (2) such as below..
   
   
6. 01:43:895 (2) - Why you add finish to this note? I guess it is not necessary...
7. 02:29:218 (4) - Remove the whistle from the start of slider and the slider body, it feels so strange that the previou three sliders are not such sound effect, so you'd better keep the same.

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   
   01:30:981 - snap to 01:30:944
2. Wait...4.01 stars Normal diff? hmm...Try reducing the difficulty under 4 stars.
3. 01:24:830 (4) - What about putting this slider to x:224 y:168? Then it does not touch anything, look better anyway..
4. 01:53:967 - Oh no.. It is no need to add clap here, just remove this clap from the end of the slider... Since background music stops here, and it is on the longest white tick, so finish is enough.

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   
   01:30:981 - snap to 01:30:944
2. 01:16:917 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   
3. 00:13:247 - What about adding finish to the start of this slider? It is the first Downbeat.
4. 01:17:995 (1,2,3,4) - Try all newcombos here? Since you put these notes so close. It may be interesting !
5. 01:25:190 (1) - No need to add newcombo... Actually without newcombo, it would look more symmetrical.
6. 01:51:089 (1) - It is no need to add clap here, just remove this clap from the end of the slider... Since background music stops here, and it is on the longest white tick, so finish is enough.

1. 01:50:550 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   
2. 00:13:247 (1) - What about adding finish to the start of this slider? It is the first Downbeat.
3. 00:34:830 - Useless finish! Finish here sounds not good in my view... It's better to add whistle to the start of the slider instead.
4. 01:11:341 (6) - Attempt to ctrl+G, then ppl get a more fluent flow and a good jump.

1. 00:36:809 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
2. 01:20:694 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   
3. 01:18:535 (5) - Why you put this note here?.. It is so crowded and ppl can read hard, try moving it to free space.
4. 01:51:089 (1) - Missing a finish? ... I guess you should mend it.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Fine!

[Easy]

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fixed
   
   01:12:961 - snap to 01:12:959
   01:30:981 - snap to 01:30:944
   01:43:175 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fixed
   
2. Consider OD+1? Although it is an Easy diff, ppl should still practice improving their ability. So low OD is not a good choice for beginners to improve. fixed.LOL why I would choose OD1 for this inb4
3. 00:13:247 (1) - What about adding finish to this note? It is the first Downbeat. fixed
4. 00:33:751 (2) - You'd better follow the beat not the vocal, so beginners can recognize when they should click, or they may be confused for it. My suggestion: Start this slider from 00:33:391 to 00:34:830, so 00:33:391 (1) will be removed. well,since some of you suggested,fixed
5. 01:15:118 (1) - Make this more suitable for 01:14:758 (2) such as below.. made something similar because of the spacing
   
   
6. 01:43:895 (2) - Why you add finish to this note? I guess it is not necessary... fixed
7. 02:29:218 (4) - Remove the whistle from the start of slider and the slider body, it feels so strange that the previou three sliders are not such sound effect, so you'd better keep the same. fixed

[Normal]

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fixed
   
   01:30:981 - snap to 01:30:944
2. Wait...4.01 stars Normal diff? hmm...Try reducing the difficulty under 4 stars. Would like to try
3. 01:24:830 (4) - What about putting this slider to x:224 y:168? Then it does not touch anything, look better anyway.. fixed
4. 01:53:967 - Oh no.. It is no need to add clap here, just remove this clap from the end of the slider... Since background music stops here, and it is on the longest white tick, so finish is enough. fixed

[Hard]

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: fixed
   
   01:30:981 - snap to 01:30:944
2. 01:16:917 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). fixed
   
3. 00:13:247 - What about adding finish to the start of this slider? It is the first Downbeat. fixed
4. 01:17:995 (1,2,3,4) - Try all newcombos here? Since you put these notes so close. It may be interesting ! fixed
5. 01:25:190 (1) - No need to add newcombo... Actually without newcombo, it would look more symmetrical. fixed
6. 01:51:089 (1) - It is no need to add clap here, just remove this clap from the end of the slider... Since background music stops here, and it is on the longest white tick, so finish is enough. fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:50:550 (5) - Unsnapped circle. fixed
   
2. 00:13:247 (1) - What about adding finish to the start of this slider? It is the first Downbeat. fixed
3. 00:34:830 - Useless finish! Finish here sounds not good in my view... It's better to add whistle to the start of the slider instead. fixed
4. 01:11:341 (6) - Attempt to ctrl+G, then ppl get a more fluent flow and a good jump. fixed

[Extra]

1. 00:36:809 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start). fixed
2. 01:20:694 (4) - Unsnapped circle. fixed
   
3. 01:18:535 (5) - Why you put this note here?.. It is so crowded and ppl can read hard, try moving it to free space. fixed
4. 01:51:089 (1) - Missing a finish? ... I guess you should mend it. ment :3

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Great!

Natsu wrote:

General:

SPOILER

Kiai is not the same in all diffs should fix cuz you make all diffs.. fixed

preview time is not the same on insane fiz it fixed

Easy:

SPOILER

I see alot of inconsistency in distance plz use just 0.80 or 1.0 in all the map

00:27:478 (1,1) - why this jump in easy? be consistent with distance in this lvl plz
00:40:067 (4,1) - distance issue fix
00:49:060 (1,2) - distance error again i know you wanna make a nice pattern but you need use the same distance move it to x:336 y:108 you keep pattern and keep distance
01:10:643 (3,4,1) - again need to fix
02:03:880 (1,2,1) - ^

well you got alot of distance errors here i know you wanna make a beauty diff but be consistent with distance

Remapped, so all fixed I think

Extra:

SPOILER

02:28:520 spinner end is unsnapped (is unsnapped in insane too fix this is unrankable) fixed
00:16:865 (5,6,7) - in my opinion you should follow previous pattern like this one 00:17:585 (1,2,3) - I'd like to have some variety in patterns.Will see others mods.
01:53:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this look alot better on this way (more symetrical) fixed

02:16:290 (4,1) - stack they perfectly fixed

i just mod 2 diff since is a long map T.T fine~thanks~

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KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello there

This is a M4M from My queue

Keep in mind that my Mods are not meant to modify your mapping style but just suggestions to improve it which is your choice to use them or not. If something is urgent to be changed it will be marked Red with a legal explanation.

[Easy]
00:10:109 (3,4) - Fix abit the slider shape to look better around the previous circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616538 (Sorry perfectionist :c) fixed
00:41:866 (3,4) - ^ : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616541 sorry the spacing won't allow me
00:59:852 (4,1) - ^ : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616547 >.<; fixed
01:35:462 - It would be nice to put a Inherited point there and put clap to the slider tick in my opinion. slider ticks hitsounds feels awkard,so sorry no
01:45:175 (3) - Add Finish I didn't add them because this is within the whole "verse" and does not worth to be stressedWill see others though
02:20:427 (2,3) - : Fix abit the slider shape to look better around the previous circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616555 (Sorry perfectionist :c) fixed

[Normal]
01:00:571 (1,2) - Those two are has wrong spacing. One accidental click and it moved closer to the previous circle, please fix it! :/ fixed
01:16:757 - It would be nice to put a Inherited point there and put clap to the slider tick in my opinion. slider ticks hitsounds feels awkard,so sorry no
01:39:420 (3) - That sounds too loud, maybe consider to do a volume drop or sample change to this one fixed
01:53:808 (1) - Add Clap
01:55:607 (4) - Add Clap
01:57:046 (2) - Add Clap @ Beginning
01:58:485 (4) - Add Clap
No to all because the part suits to be bland.However I might see and fix if other's mentioning it.
Makes this part sounds better in my opinion

[Hard]
01:16:397 (1,1,1,1) - The NCs are not needed in my opinion. Maybe make it a 4 circle combo there >.<; fixed
02:20:246 (4) - Fix it's shape and make the boarder more clear. If you do this, fix the spacings afterwards. fixed

[Extra]
00:40:336 - Add a circle there omfg. The music makes it sound like a stream from 00:40:246 (6) - to 00:40:606 (3) - even if it's not. This is totally confusing and I needed 50% slow motion to notice it >.<; changed it somehow
01:13:340 (4) - Add Clap
01:14:779 (8) - Add Clap
01:16:218 - Add Clap
01:19:095 (4) - Add Clap
01:20:534 (8) - Add Clap
01:21:973 (6) - Add Clap
This part looks better with triple-claps in my opinion, try it out if you want
Maybe a good idea, but I refuse it for now since the hitsounds currently feels better for me
01:40:318 (2,4) - Add Finish fixed,I understand why

I fell in love with the Extra >.<!

[Insane]

SPOILER

01:13:340 (8) - Add Clap
01:14:779 (8) - Add Clap
01:16:218 (8)- Add Clap
01:19:095 (8) - Add Clap
01:20:534 (4) - Add Clap @ the end of the slider
01:21:973 (8) - Add Clap
This part looks better with triple-claps in my opinion, try it out if you want

If you want to do the same with the Insane as well o= same as insane.

[StoryBoard]
The pulses overall are disappearing very fast and it doesn't look good in my opinion, try to extend a bit the fade without much points, use the Tweening option and just put the Start and the End fade point.
I see you did copy paste the pulses and each one of them has a random Move point a bit after the push, use the small arrows under the time line and remove them.

00:11:649 - You could start the map with a slow motion pulse which would end at 00:13:088

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 S,0,11559,11649,0.8079999,0.808
 F,0,11649,13088,1,0

01:11:991 - A longer push would fit there as well according to the music.

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 F,0,71991,72081,1
 S,0,71991,72081,0.8079999,0.808
 F,0,72081,73520,1,0

01:59:473 - More pulses to that part makes it more exciting! Try out this code and see what I mean

SPOILER

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 F,0,119743,119833,0.4799999,0
 M,0,121071,,320,240
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 F,0,121002,121092,1,0.7359999
 F,0,121092,121182,0.7359999,0.4799999
 F,0,121182,121272,0.4799999,0
 M,0,122510,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\bg2.jpg",320,240
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 S,0,122351,122441,0.8079999,0.808
 F,0,122441,122531,1,0.7359999
 F,0,122531,122621,0.7359999,0.4799999
 F,0,122621,122711,0.4799999,0
 M,0,123949,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\bg2.jpg",320,240
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 S,0,123070,123160,0.8079999,0.808
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 F,0,123340,123430,0.4799999,0
 M,0,124668,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\bg2.jpg",320,240
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 F,0,123970,124060,0.7359999,0.4799999
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 F,0,124329,124419,0.7359999,0.4799999
 F,0,124419,124509,0.4799999,0
 M,0,125747,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\bg2.jpg",320,240
 F,0,124509,124599,1
 S,0,124509,124599,0.8079999,0.808
 F,0,124599,124689,1,0.7359999
 F,0,124689,124779,0.7359999,0.4799999
 F,0,124779,124869,0.4799999,0
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\bg2.jpg",320,240
 F,0,125318,125408,1
 S,0,125318,125408,0.8079999,0.808
 F,0,125408,126847,1,0

Keep a backup of your OSB file and use the one I made with those changes
http://puu.sh/23Wse

thanksss!!!!!


The map overall is awesome, keep going and I'll give a Star for this! Good job!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

General

Correct timing, since it goes off at the end:
1. Offset: 139ms BPM: 166,754
Resnap after and move the timing points right!
The mp3 needs a better fadeout at the end, its cut off
02:28:340 - Let kiai end here on every diff, it suits better because after it is no beat left only the echo
some problems with offset.Anyway, all are fixed
Easy

00:27:478 (1) - NC not needed
00:34:672 (3,1) - Reverse NC, for stanza and for the beat
00:43:305 (5,1) - ^
00:46:182 (3,1) - ^
fixed all
01:16:398 (1) - NC not needed No, it is a new verse

Normal

01:16:398 (1) - Remove NC No, it is a new verse
01:25:390 - Why does the Break start here, remove it and place it behind the last slider, check this on every map please
02:17:909 (3,4) - Incorrect spacing[/color] fixed

Hard

01:16:397 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is like a 1/2 spacing and might confuse players so they play it like 1/2 instead of 1/1, make a square pattern and fix the spacing to normal fixed
01:42:477 (1) - Remove NC, its not needed, also to follow your combo its better fixed

Extra

00:19:203 (2,3) - This spacing really destroys the consistency and flow, make normal spacingffixed
01:45:894 (4,7,1) - Spacing is inconsistent, also here the same mistake 01:46:973 (2,3) - ^
Intended.Normal spacing is 1.0x while streams are mostly 0.8x
01:48:412 (7,8,9) - Keep the spacing from beforefixed

Insane

There is a lot of inconsistence spacing in this difficultie, you should try to improve them more. And i dont mean jumps. Like this for example

Example

01:05:067 (3,4) - Spacing

fixed this and some others

01:09:203 (5) - NC fixed
01:56:596 (5) - Doesnt fit at all, remove it fixed
01:59:383 (4,1) - Place like a stream, make normal spacing fixed
02:28:430 - Let the spinner start here fixed

That it, GL

• Nothing

• 00:11:702 - I'd start with a slider, because this "forever" should be exaggerated in my opinion. The slider could end here 00:12:781
  
  00:14:220 - instead of a soft whistle I would prefer a normal whistle to put the sirenes in the foreground.
  
  00:15:660 - same
  
  00:17:099 - ^
  
  00:18:538 - ^
  
  01:09:625 - because this part is instrumental, I would suggest you to add an inheriting section to decrease the volume. I think 45 would be reasonable.
  
  01:29:772 - maybe you should change the slider to a repeating one, so that this tone there isn't lost.
  
  01:32:650 - same
  
  01:35:528 - ^
  
  02:00:892 - i think if you add a circle here, it would make the long gap before the one at 02:01:072 - more comprehensible. Also the exaggeration with the basedrum, shown in the song would be given.
  
  02:02:331 - same
  
  02:03:050 - the slider could end here and then you could do another circle at 02:03:230
  
  02:03:770 - add a circle to show the base
  
  02:04:669 - change the slider to something like that: so you can make a nice prelude for the kiai-mode and also exaggerate the drums vortex.

• 00:12:062 - Don't let the "forever" die
  01:22:576 - maybe a repeating slider with whistle sound wouldn't be wrong. Since it is a prelude.
  01:31:571 - those sliders feel strange, but I don't really know how you should change it. It sounds good, maybe it's just their shape or their placement
  01:34:449 - same
  01:37:327 - ^
  01:39:486 - this slider is very wicked, because you don't really know when it ends, if you don't know the remix. For a rookie it would be difficult to get the note at 01:41:284
  01:56:035 - same like 01:31:571
  01:59:453 - adding a circle would sound better
  02:04:669 - use something to exaggerate the vortex
  01:29:412 - maybe you should add an inheriting section and make the notes a bit quieter
  01:53:876 - notes could be more quiet.

• 00:15:839 - I would add a whistle sound here. In the song this tone is different from the other ones, i think you should accentuate it
  
  00:18:718 - same
  
  00:21:596 - ^
  
  00:24:654 - I would place the note somewhere else. It just doesn't look cool enough. (maybe x: 256 and y: 164)
  
  00:37:605 - I would recommend you add an inheriting section and increase the volume. Otherwise you can't here the sounds.
  
  00:51:277 (1,2,3) - i would change the shape... It remembers me of something perverted. Same at 02:07:547
  
  01:59:453 - Maybe adding a circle there would be good.

• 
  00:15:839 (8) - add whistle sound
  
  00:18:718 - same
  
  00:21:596 - ^
  
  00:43:272 - maybe you could add a circle here, there is a drum sound and it would fit
  
  00:46:150 - same
  
  00:47:589 - ^
  
  01:15:111 - I would add clap sound
  
  01:15:381 - same
  
  01:15:561 - ^
  
  01:15:831 - ^
  
  01:16:551 - ^
  
  01:17:270 - ^
  
  02:16:902 - I think you should add decrescending inheriting sections. It would make this part more dynamic
  
  02:19:780 - Add another inheriting section with your original settings
  
  02:25:536 - Make another decrescendo

ChivaCookie wrote:

Hello a wild Chiva is in your thread\m/

Chiva uses modding.

It is super effective!
I used Protect ._.

Before I'll rip your map apart (actually I won't but it sounds good) let me give you some compliments. I love your work with the sliders and the SB is well-made. Kiyoshi did a good job with that. Also all the difficulties seem very artistic. It makes fun to play them.


[General]

• Nothing

[Easy]

• 00:11:702 - I'd start with a slider, because this "forever" should be exaggerated in my opinion. The slider could end here 00:12:781
  No, not in this case. I don't want to increase the difficulty by this
  
  00:14:220 - instead of a soft whistle I would prefer a normal whistle to put the sirenes in the foreground. Normal whistles are too loud IMO
  
  00:15:660 - same ^
  
  00:17:099 - ^ ^
  
  00:18:538 - ^ ^
  
  01:09:625 - because this part is instrumental, I would suggest you to add an inheriting section to decrease the volume. I think 45 would be reasonable. ok
  
  01:29:772 - maybe you should change the slider to a repeating one, so that this tone there isn't lost. I'd want some variation on rhythm, though
  
  01:32:650 - same ^
  
  01:35:528 - ^ ^
  
  02:00:892 - i think if you add a circle here, it would make the long gap before the one at 02:01:072 - more comprehensible. Also the exaggeration with the basedrum, shown in the song would be given. It'll be too hard for easy then.
  
  02:02:331 - same ^
  
  02:03:050 - the slider could end here and then you could do another circle at 02:03:230 Still too hard lol
  
  02:03:770 - add a circle to show the base ^
  
  02:04:669 - change the slider to something like that: so you can make a nice prelude for the kiai-mode and also exaggerate the drums vortex. More than 1 repeat could be confusing IMO. Will think about it

That's all I guess.


[Normal]

• 00:12:062 - Don't let the "forever" die same as Easy, but will consider adding it
  01:22:576 - maybe a repeating slider with whistle sound wouldn't be wrong. Since it is a prelude. fixed
  01:31:571 - those sliders feel strange, but I don't really know how you should change it. It sounds good, maybe it's just their shape or their placement Well, they are in their best state I suppose
  01:34:449 - same ^
  01:37:327 - ^ ^
  01:39:486 - this slider is very wicked, because you don't really know when it ends, if you don't know the remix. For a rookie it would be difficult to get the note at 01:41:284 Will think of how to improve it.
  01:56:035 - same like 01:31:571 same as 01:31:571
  01:59:453 - adding a circle would sound better used a repeating slider instead
  02:04:669 - use something to exaggerate the vortex Will think of how to improve it.
  01:29:412 - maybe you should add an inheriting section and make the notes a bit quieter fixed
  01:53:876 - notes could be more quiet.fixed

Hard

• 00:15:839 - I would add a whistle sound here. In the song this tone is different from the other ones, i think you should accentuate it Fixed
  
  00:18:718 - same Fixed
  
  00:21:596 - ^ Fixed
  00:24:654 - I would place the note somewhere else. It just doesn't look cool enough. (maybe x: 256 and y: 164) Fixed
  
  00:37:605 - I would recommend you add an inheriting section and increase the volume. Otherwise you can't here the sounds. Clear enough IMO
  
  00:51:277 (1,2,3) - i would change the shape... It remembers me of something perverted. Same at 02:07:547 okie prev
  
  01:59:453 - Maybe adding a circle there would be good. used a repeating slider instead

That's all.

[Extra]

• 
  00:15:839 (8) - add whistle sound ok to all
  
  00:18:718 - same
  
  00:21:596 - ^
  
  00:43:272 - maybe you could add a circle here, there is a drum sound and it would fit fixed
  
  00:46:150 - same I'd like to keep my flow for this one
  
  00:47:589 - ^ ^
  
  01:15:111 - I would add clap sound no to all as it hears awkard
  
  01:15:381 - same
  
  01:15:561 - ^
  
  01:15:831 - ^
  
  01:16:551 - ^
  
  01:17:270 - ^
  
  02:16:902 - I think you should add decrescending inheriting sections. It would make this part more dynamic fixed
  
  02:19:780 - Add another inheriting section with your original settings fixed
  
  02:25:536 - Make another decrescendo
  fixed

[Insane]

I am sorry... I searched for something I could complain about, but I couldn't find anything.










I hope something I suggested has been usefull. If not... Modding your map was kinda fun

HelloSCV wrote:

From Korean Modding Team

Easy

nothing

Normal

00:35:267 (2) - how about making this slider looks like 00:33:828 (2) - this? think for a while
00:36:706 (2) - ^ think for a while
01:11:064 (5) - check DS fixed

Hard

00:36:886 (3,4) - i'm recommend reudce DS to similar with 00:36:166 (1,2) - this becuase this part is downbeat so you don't need some jumps( you can use this this pattern http://puu.sh/2z2mg ) did something similar
00:48:398 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:52:536 (5) - how about curved? current slider isn't good fixed
01:44:702 (4) - touching HP bar fixed

Extra

00:32:209 (1) - delete NC fixed
00:43:722 (1) - ^ fixed
01:03:509 (1) - try ctrl G on this slider, feels better when playing imo fixed
01:16:820 (4) - touching HP bar? fixed

Insane

[b]why you spamming C&P on this diff? spamming C&P is NOT good for map
Don't really understand :O

00:12:062 (2) - this slider isn't symetical fixed
01:01:890 (6) - make same slider with 01:00:990 (2) - this ( 02:18:161 (6) - same ) remapped

good luck

1. sb\bg2.png this file is not used you can delete it

1. AR -1 also -> 3 is the best here
2. I think you need to rework on spacing on easybecause it seems to close,i know it is a hard work but for having a perfectmap is neded, use in all map the spacing at 1.0 and all will be perfect,because you have some really ugly overlaps in your diff ;_;
3. 01:29:412 - from here 60% volume seems really high imo try to reduce it to 45-50%

1. 00:27:532 (3,1) - like i said before if you were using the spacing at 1.0 this ugly overlap won't exist
2. 00:50:557 (2,3) - same about here
   
   and ecc... try to impove the spacing really it makes the map better as it is now :/

1. 00:26:093 - when you reduce slider velocity you should increese the spacing here is sooooooo close ;_; try to use 1.1 or 1.2 in this selection, it will help you to impove the little overlaps :<

Lally wrote:

well i give a look o3o because of nightcore power °D°

[General]
Unused Image Files:

1. sb\bg2.png this file is not used you can delete it

deleted

[Easy]
General:

1. AR -1 also -> 3 is the best here will see how the new one feels
2. I think you need to rework on spacing on easybecause it seems to close,i know it is a hard work but for having a perfectmap is neded, use in all map the spacing at 1.0 and all will be perfect,because you have some really ugly overlaps in your diff ;_;
3. 01:29:412 - from here 60% volume seems really high imo try to reduce it to 45-50%

Placement:

1. 00:27:532 (3,1) - like i said before if you were using the spacing at 1.0 this ugly overlap won't exist
2. 00:50:557 (2,3) - same about here
   
   and ecc... try to impove the spacing really it makes the map better as it is now :/

[Normal]

1. 00:26:093 - when you reduce slider velocity you should increese the spacing here is sooooooo close ;_; try to use 1.1 or 1.2 in this selection, it will help you to impove the little overlaps :<

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! M4M from me. I promise I'd look at your map.

Just some suggestions:

Normal
NP.

Hard
NP.

Extra

1. 01:03:869 (2,3) - These are too close. Compared to other spacing that is. I'd expect a 1/4 note to follow that spacing. fixed
2. 01:31:571 (1,3) - Maybe position these two notes where 01:29:952 (3) was.nicee
3. 01:59:453 (10,1) - Too close? For same reason as before. Just making an antijump/ antijump patterns as the music suggested it
4. 02:00:892 (2,3) - ^
5. 02:02:331 (4,5) - ^
6. 02:03:051 (6,7) - ^ I guess all these work, just being meticulous.

Insane

1. 00:27:532 (7,8) - Overlapping from slider is justified here. An example about what I was saying before.Fixed spacing
2. 01:05:487 (4) - Ctrl+G? did something else
3. 01:32:110 (4,1,2,3) - These are very compacted, maybe space them out slightly.

fixed

Overall, very good. Can't really say that much due to my lack of experience. Hope I was helpful. Kudos if you think I am deserving, otherwise just ignore.

Thanks again for your mod!

Ciao~