CrestRising wrote:
From my queue. I actually had this map for the longest time but just deleted it earlier. Guess I'll have to redownload.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.
[General:][Hard:]
* Your Hard difficulty is WAY too easy. Its more like a Normal and nothing like a Hard. There are no noticeable jumps and is just too boring and easy. Likewise, your Normal is more like an Easy to me. You could rename Hard to Normal and rename Normal to Easy, but you would still need a true Hard, and Extra is too Hard to fit the bill. Planning to make a hard then but it might takes ~30 days because I will have an exam soon And Extra is made to be harder than Insane, but it is 4.9 stars for some reason
EDIT:Done
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* 00:21:880 (1,2,3,4) This pattern doesn't fit right. You should try something like this: done~
* 00:30:513 (1,2) You should probably combine these into one slider to keep a symmetrical rhythm with 00:27:636 (1) done~
00:33:391 (1,2) You might want to combine these in one slider too. It would match the xylophone to (or whatever that high-pitched instrument is, I think you know what I'm talking about.) Em,no. 00:33:751 (2) - is already following the vocals, and I think there is not a need to have a OMGVERYLONG slider here
00:42:024 (1,2) Combine these in a slider, maybe?done~
00:44:902 (6,1) See 00:33:391 See 00:33:391
01:06:485 (5) I think it would fit the pace better if it was split into two sliders like 01:05:046 (3,4) since there's barely any lyrics in this part, just a thought. done~
01:12:959 (4,1,2) You should probably cut the repeat of off the slider and make a two beat slider where the endpoint of 4 was originally. It would match up with the rest of the verse/instrumental thing. done~
01:30:945 (1) It would probably be better if it was a 1 beat slider, then a circle a beat later instead of a 2 beat slider. The rhythm is fine here, so I don't think I will change it now, sorry
01:33:823 (1) and 01:36:700 (1) and 01:39:578 (1) ^ ^
* 01:41:017 (1) It would fit much better if there was a spinner here instead. done~
01:46:413 (4) It may be better if you broke it up in three circles to make it look like the red combo just before.done~
01:59:722 (3,4) Imo, it would be much better if you deleted two and added a repeat on 1 to match up with 01:56:485 (3) done~
02:16:988 (4,5) It would sound better if these were merged into one slider. I think they are the same...so I am not gonna to change it, sorry
02:29:218 (4,5) Maybe merge into a slider? done~[Extra:]
00:44:902 (1,2) Unstack maybe? done~
00:56:413 (1,2,3) Just a thought, but maybe it would be better as (slider-slider-circle) instead of (circle-slider-slider) done~[Insane:]
00:27:636 (1,2) Imo, would probably look better if this was just stacked over 3. I prefer a blanket here
00:37:708 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern doesn't look very nice, imo. remapped~
00:38:427 (5) I think it would sound nicer if you added an extra repeat. I, personally, dislike sliders that repeat more than 4 times. However, I remapped the whole part.
00:49:938 (3) Maybe you should add an extra repeat here too. ^^
* 01:15:118 (1,2) You should probably space these out to make it kind of look like 01:16:557 (1,2,3) done~A very nice map. Keep doing what you're doing.
00:17:474 (2) This triplet seems odd to me. Maybe delete this circle? done~
* 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5) This is even less than the distance spacing, I think you should space this pattern out more imo. done~
/me feels proud of himself of a minute of perfect in this diff
01:24:830 (2,3,1) This anti-jump seems pointless to me. Imo, you should probably just space it out. done~
01:45:244 (2) See 00:17:474 done~
* 01:59:182 This feels missing without a circle. done~with a slider
* 02:00:981 (4,1) If you're going to do the anti-jumps at 02:02:420 (2,3) and 02:03:859 (1,2) you might as well do one here too. done~
Overall, this and Extra are very nice difficulties, but I think you could go a little bit farther. You see places like 02:03:859 (1,2) that go with the du-du-du (don't know what to call it )? I think you're map could use more of those, as long as its done consistent (like every other du-du-du, or only in a section of the chorus, etc.). Idk, just a thought. nah it's quite flow-killing ;_;