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Yorukichi - Sky High

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Lanttu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20. maaliskuuta 2012 at 11:53:30

Artist: Yorukichi
Title: Sky High
Tags: UTAU Kasane Teto Utattemita nico nakano4 TakamuraRin electro
BPM: 135
Filesize: 5080kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,28 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Insane (4,93 stars, 313 notes)
  3. Normal (4,2 stars, 174 notes)
  4. TR (4,68 stars, 260 notes)
Download: Yorukichi - Sky High
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SAITAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AI GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
NAITEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
NEMURENAAAAAAAAAI YO

Massive storyboard that probably 99% of players will delete, but whatever. At least I had awesome time making it.
heintsi
I love you and this map ~♥ ♥ ♥
Your idea of using slider puzzle as storyboard is so awesome and works so well~
The map and storyboard has lots of variety too, i bet it was lot of work~ (of course it was)

The song is also really groovy, nice choice, I think i like it that much i got to find more of his music~

I really hope this map hits the ranks asap~.
Topic Starter
Lanttu

heintsi wrote:

I love you and this map ~♥ ♥ ♥
I love you too~♥ ♥ ♥
Thanks~ *u*

*paijaa*
iPown3G
Well.
I like the storyboard and the diffs, such as the song.
I think the only diff you should make changes is "Hard", even if they're small ones.

Hard
00:14:077 add a note here
00:31:411 ^
00:52:744 ^
00:59:588 ^ (not really necessary, but it'd fit anyways)
01:56:588 (6) Extend by one
02:00:299 add a note
02:00:633 (4) Make this one just like 01:59:966 (2)

And That's it ;)

I like the map and its ready to be ranked, i think ;)
Good job!
Topic Starter
Lanttu

iPown3G wrote:

Well.
I like the storyboard and the diffs, such as the song.
I think the only diff you should make changes is "Hard", even if they're small ones.

Hard
00:14:077 add a note here
00:31:411 ^
00:52:744 ^
00:59:588 ^ (not really necessary, but it'd fit anyways)
01:56:588 (6) Extend by one
02:00:299 add a note
02:00:633 (4) Make this one just like 01:59:966 (2)

And That's it ;)

I like the map and its ready to be ranked, i think ;)
Good job!
Hmm, I understand your point with those, but I think I'd still like to keep it the way it is. ;u; Thanks anyways<3
- Suima -
GOOD!

look AImod more often! You can find some suggestions in it.
narakucrimson
Hi Lanttu!

Actually, I was going to mod this now so I could be of more help than when you had a lot of mods, but honestly, this is pretty good already.

What I'll say is this:
  1. The offset seems a bit late imo. I think that having it at 7290 works better.
  2. Maybe you could set another image as the background (for the preview on the download). A Grey image with a giant white stripe doesn't look so attractive xD
  3. The Combo Colour 1 (white) kinda confused me at some parts. The only thing I can think of - and normally, I wouldn't say this, but this is a rare case - is to make it even more white, so that the darkened background (the background turns a little more dark while playing) helps making it more distinguishable.
    Or I don't know, maybe it's just me xD
And that's all! Have your star, Lanttu!

Oh and, no need for kudosu!
Topic Starter
Lanttu

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi Lanttu!

Actually, I was going to mod this now so I could be of more help than when you had a lot of mods, but honestly, this is pretty good already.

What I'll say is this:
  1. The offset seems a bit late imo. I think that having it at 7290 works better. Hmm, yeah, changed!
  2. Maybe you could set another image as the background (for the preview on the download). A Grey image with a giant white stripe doesn't look so attractive xD ehhehe, I know, but somehow I'd like to keep the actual background image hidden before the chorus part. XD But I'll see what I can do. ;u;
  3. The Combo Colour 1 (white) kinda confused me at some parts. The only thing I can think of - and normally, I wouldn't say this, but this is a rare case - is to make it even more white, so that the darkened background (the background turns a little more dark while playing) helps making it more distinguishable. made it just a bit more white, then! :3
    Or I don't know, maybe it's just me xD
And that's all! Have your star, Lanttu!

Oh and, no need for kudosu!
thanks<3

Oh,and kevin, there wasn't really anything important in AImod. ;u; But thanks~
CMP
Interest Pattern map


good! wow~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!








my pending map->http://osu.ppy.sh/31388
Aleks719
General
Can't believe, baka-Lanttu, mp3 is 256kbps!
Yay, SB is pure love.

Hard
01:04:178 (7) - add whistle?
01:32:512 - add note?

Normal
If i were you, i made AR +1
00:35:289 (3) - add whistle to the end
00:39:289 (4) - add whistle
00:41:067 (2) - whistles to the start and end
00:42:178 (3) - add whistle to the end
00:46:401 (4) - add whistle
00:49:956 (1) - black combo color and black bg work bad together: I missed here once because almost black approach is almost invisible :P
I guess this suggestion for all diffs, but i played good this moment in Hard
01:44:623 (4) - move this note to the left side a bit?

Easy
If i were you, i made AR +1 and HP +1
00:35:734 (1,5) - add 2 whistles
00:40:623 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:41:956 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end
00:46:401 (4) - add whistle
01:21:956 (1) - you could make it much pretty :<
01:50:845 (4) - imo, replace nc here

You deserve a star :P
val0108
o/

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1
00:46:623 - break delete?
00:47:956 - delete green line
01:16:178 (1) - renew combo
00:54:401 (2,3) - little overlap >_>
01:25:512 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4Gpz
code: 232,32,85512,6,0,B|237:81|276:176|354:121|333:50|262:50|244:117|276:172|388:168,1,270,4|8

[Normal]
Slider tick rate 1
00:46:623 - break delete?
00:47:956 - delete green line
01:10:845 (3) - The screen outside D:
02:07:512 (5) - move to the middle?

[Hard]
02:05:956 (5,6,7,8,9) - how about this? suggestion http://puu.sh/4Gqm
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Can't believe, baka-Lanttu, mp3 is 256kbps! Oh damn~!
Yay, SB is pure love. <3

Hard
01:04:178 (7) - add whistle? Sure, why not~
01:32:512 - add note? Can't get one to fit here. ;u;

Normal
If i were you, i made AR +1 ok~
00:35:289 (3) - add whistle to the end OK~
00:39:289 (4) - add whistle ok~
00:41:067 (2) - whistles to the start and end OK~
00:42:178 (3) - add whistle to the end ok~
00:46:401 (4) - add whistle OK~
00:49:956 (1) - black combo color and black bg work bad together: I missed here once because almost black approach is almost invisible :P
I guess this suggestion for all diffs, but i played good this moment in Hard Arf, I'll do something about it when I get home from school. ;u;
01:44:623 (4) - move this note to the left side a bit? Why? >:

Easy
If i were you, i made AR +1 and HP +1 OK~
00:35:734 (1,5) - add 2 whistles ok~
00:40:623 (1) - add whistle to the end OK~
00:41:956 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end ok~
00:46:401 (4) - add whistle OK~
01:21:956 (1) - you could make it much pretty :< I think it's pretty enough ;_;
01:50:845 (4) - imo, replace nc here OK~

You deserve a star :P
Thank you~ o/

val0108 wrote:

o/

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1 W-why? ;_; Ok..
00:46:623 - break delete? awww, why?
00:47:956 - delete green line OK~
01:16:178 (1) - renew combo e-eh, what?
00:54:401 (2,3) - little overlap >_> I like this overlap, though.
01:25:512 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4Gpz I prefer it the way it is. ;u;

[Normal]
Slider tick rate 1 Ok.. >':
00:46:623 - break delete? Nooo~
00:47:956 - delete green line OK~
01:10:845 (3) - The screen outside D: It's not. ;_;
02:07:512 (5) - move to the middle? it makes a jump then.. I don't know, I'll try to get some opinions about that.

[Hard]
02:05:956 (5,6,7,8,9) - how about this? suggestion http://puu.sh/4Gqm I like it when they're all in same combo.. ;u;
Thank you too~ o/
Aleks719

Lanttu wrote:

Aleks719 wrote:

01:44:623 (4) - move this note to the left side a bit? Why? >: because

01:21:956 (1) - you could make it much pretty :< I think it's pretty enough ;_; okay :<
And i don't know why you change tickrate. tickrate 2 works perfect(!) for all diffs.
FireballFlame
Awesome storyboard is awesome.
Shadow

FireballFlame wrote:

Awesome storyboard is awesome.
This
nooodl_old
Easy
01:11:734 (1,2) - "shiro kuro" - should somehow be put into white/black combos respectively
...alright, I'll admit, I couldn't think of anything serious to put here. Solid mapping.

Normal
00:27:956 (5,6) - are these confusing/weirdly placed on purpose? Feels weird.

Hard
00:41:067 (2,3,4) - mapping the echo is kind of a stretch. I'd just map the regular notes
01:00:623 (1) - line the red anchor point up with the red tick
01:18:401 (1) - make this one returning...
01:20:178 (2) - then replace this with a circle somehow
01:34:845 (2,3,4) - kinda packed together :<

This was really hard to find actual mistakes in, so it's pretty damn good. I could definitely see this getting ranked
Topic Starter
Lanttu

nooodl wrote:

Easy
01:11:734 (1,2) - "shiro kuro" - should somehow be put into white/black combos respectively Oooh, sure thing. Done with other diffs as well~
...alright, I'll admit, I couldn't think of anything serious to put here. Solid mapping.

Normal
00:27:956 (5,6) - are these confusing/weirdly placed on purpose? Feels weird. Hmm, are they really that weird? I can't see any problems with those. ;_;

Hard
00:41:067 (2,3,4) - mapping the echo is kind of a stretch. I'd just map the regular notes Heeh, tried something else~
01:00:623 (1) - line the red anchor point up with the red tick I can't go that without destroying the pattern, though.. ;u;
01:18:401 (1) - make this one returning... I like it better this way
01:20:178 (2) - then replace this with a circle somehow ^
01:34:845 (2,3,4) - kinda packed together :< Hauu, but I like it like that.. ;_;

This was really hard to find actual mistakes in, so it's pretty damn good. I could definitely see this getting ranked
Thank you~<3 >u</
Sleep Powder
[Easy]

01:01:512 (2) - Move down by 1 on lvl 4 grid.
01:21:956 (1) - This slider seems ugly to me... fix/change it?
01:25:512 (1) - Slider end area is kind of messy

[Normal]

Alright.

[Hard]

02:07:512 (1) - New Combo?

Your maps are pretty nice already. I don't really want to double-check the SB since I barely know how to lol
Topic Starter
Lanttu

animask wrote:

[Easy]

01:01:512 (2) - Move down by 1 on lvl 4 grid. Ok~
01:21:956 (1) - This slider seems ugly to me... fix/change it? Augh, but I like it. ;_;
01:25:512 (1) - Slider end area is kind of messy How come? >: I can't see it..

[Normal]

Alright.

[Hard]

02:07:512 (1) - New Combo? I changed the whole end combo a bit, plus added the new combo~

Your maps are pretty nice already. I don't really want to double-check the SB since I barely know how to lol
Thank you~ >u<
Topic Starter
Lanttu
Goddammit.
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