04:49:545 (6) - add 1 more repeat to cover the whole stream

04:02:551 - add a circle here to continue following the vocals, you can move the spinner to 04:02:724 -

03:42:435 (5) - you can use this rhythm instead since the last part has 1/8 buzz sound https://i.imgur.com/eCVJFNN.png

00:12:108 -, 00:12:457 - Map these to emphasize this section’s high point and to match the rhythm density brought by the 1/8 slider here 00:11:672 (1) -

01:43:416 - Map the sound here to reflect the previously used rhythm 01:41:847 (1,2,1,2) -

01:50:913 (1) - Rotate -90 degrees for better visual separation with 01:51:088 (2,3,4) -

02:09:925 (2) - Map this differently than 02:10:274 (2,2) - to emphasize the prominent sound on 02:10:012 - not present on the following kicksliders

02:17:076 (4) - Should use higher spacing compared to 02:16:378 (3,1) - to emphasize the snare

02:34:518 (2,3,4,5) - 02:35:739 (2,3,4,5,6) - These are inconsistent with similar patterns which use consistent spacing 02:40:099 (2,3,4,5) - or groupings of two 02:41:320 (2,3,4,5,6) -

02:50:216 (1,2,3) - Changing this into a 1/3 repeat slider would better indicate that the following circles are 1/3

03:35:216 (3,4,1) - Should use higher spacing for 2 snares, contrast with the spacing used in pattern such as 03:37:657 (1,2,3) - in the same section

03:37:309 (5) - Can continue the stream on 1/4 sounds

04:20:216 - to 04:25:012 - This part’s slider shape is visually inconsistency since it is not used in the rest of the map, but the other parts of this section (04:09:053 - ) use common slider shapes

04:31:902 (4,1) - Wide angle plays harder than subsequent patterns which uses sharp angles

00:02:760 (4,5) - Emphasize 5 by increase spacing similar to 00:08:064 (4,5)

00:16:351 (1) - Reduce spacing because this 1/4 spacing looks like 1/2, compare with 00:13:368 (4,1) - for example

00:34:915 (2) - Can be shortened to 3/4 similar to 00:45:522 (6) -

01:18:009 (3,4,5,6) - Having these as two 1/2 sliders and 01:19:335 (7) - as two circles would emphasize vocals better by them all active

01:25:301 (1,2) - Spacing can be increased considerably to emphasize the strong sound on 2

02:18:174 (8,9) - Can be mapped differently (e.g: 1/8 slider) from the rest of the stream to represent the additional instrument here

02:50:163 (1) - Should be placed differently to break apart from previous pattern

04:43:533 (4,5,6,7) - 04:44:859 (2,3,4,5) - 04:45:854 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Add whistle to white and red ticks to improve feedback

04:48:837 (7,8) - Increase spacing for better clarity on 1/2 gap

00:15:753 - Add circle for vocals like 00:17:148 (3,5) -

01:10:520 (4,1) - Swap NC to align with kiai start

00:34:590 (2,3) - ctrl+g for clicking on vocals

01:14:706 (1) - Remove NC? This deviates from the established new combo every 2 beats

01:15:404 (3,4) - 1/1 slider + circle on 01:15:927 - for more vocal emphasis

00:37:032 - The 8/1 sounds are a bit weak to do this emphasis, consider 2/1 circles or held slider instead

This arrangement would be more fitting in this section 00:00:753 - since every beat is much more prominent

00:49:851 - Can add a circle here for more impact on this strong sound

01:07:729 (3,4,1) - Should be 1.30x ds to match the spacing after the SV change

00:33:194 (2,3) - Could increase spacing for the vocal, compare with 00:31:799 (2,3) -

00:34:939 (5,6) - Spacing is too large for 1/4 considering previous ones were overlapping (eg: 00:26:392 (7,8,9) - )

00:42:264 (4) - Can use a 1/4 slider to follow the drums while still differentiating from the vocals on 00:42:439 (5,6) -

00:50:287 (1,2,3) - Should use different spacing from 00:51:683 (3,4,5,1) - since there are no instruments

01:20:985 - Remove NC like with 01:23:776 (3,4,5,6) - 01:25:346 (4,5,1) -

01:27:264 (1) - The sound on the slider head is very faint, you can start the slider on 01:27:090 (8) - to emphasize that instead

00:05:636 (4,5,6) - NC spam for 3/4 rhythm visibility

00:24:822 (1) - Remove this NC on 1/1 gap if you applied this to not mislead the player

00:15:055 (2) - The movement between objects in this map is always angled except this one, I suggest moving to around x:100, y:135

00:16:450 (6) - Can use a 1/2 slider to capture the strong snare

00:22:991 (2,3) - 00:23:776 (7,8) - Broken stacks

00:48:892 (3,4) - Can use active 3/4 since you already introduced the rhythm earlier 00:05:636 (4,5,6) -

00:57:875 (2) - Missing hitsound on this overmapped triple

00:58:747 - The drums continue here, I suggest mapping this with a circle or a 1/4 slider from 00:58:659 (7) -

01:27:264 (1) - Same as insane (2326102#4871186)