After You Sleep

00:02:760 (4,5) - Emphasize 5 by increase spacing similar to 00:08:064 (4,5)

00:03:091 (5) - feel like this slider can definitely be changed if u feel like it, where u can emphasize the soft guitar sound in the background, what i tried to was something like this, and it flows better with the track. also counts for: 00:08:395 (5) & 00:19:003 (5)

00:16:351 (1) - Reduce spacing because this 1/4 spacing looks like 1/2, compare with 00:13:368 (4,1) - for example

00:34:915 (2) - Can be shortened to 3/4 similar to 00:45:522 (6) -

00:41:544 (6) - would extend this slider to 00:42:539 to fully represent the vocal

00:45:522 (6) - unlike with #4842526 i don't think this one is that much of an issue but i'd extend it to 00:46:185 in case to fully represent the vocal

01:13:036 (5) - perhaps expand this slider to end in 01:13:036 - ?

01:18:009 (3,4,5,6) - Having these as two 1/2 sliders and 01:19:335 (7) - as two circles would emphasize vocals better by them all active

02:07:732 (1) - Give this one more space with the previous objects to follow the strong intonation and the new section.

02:14:694 (6,7) - You could probably unstack these objects as the mixture of 1/2 and 1/4 stacks can be a little overwhelming.

02:18:174 (8,9) - Can be mapped differently (e.g: 1/8 slider) from the rest of the stream to represent the additional instrument here

02:21:986 - This object sounds like it's missing something. I'd recommend adding a whistle at the head of this slider, which will follow the similar sound at 02:20:992 -

02:50:163 (1) - Should be placed differently to break apart from previous pattern

03:29:942 (1,2,3) - See about moving 3 further away as these three objects are very close to one another and the distance seems similar while these objects are having gaps on the timeline.

another example is 03:48:506 (1,2,3) - which is better spaced, and rhythm being more noticeable.

03:41:544 (4) - try rotating this slider by -31 and place on x192 y176

03:55:301 (2) - jumps look too intense, so you may want to place it on x425 y128

03:56:627 (2) - also it would be better on x188 y200

03:59:114 (1) - x128 y156, 03:59:445 (3) - x61 y105 and 03:59:611 (4) - ctrl+g and try putting it on x233 y135

04:00:439 (1) - x288 208, 04:00:605 (2) - x156 y192, 04:00:771 (3) - x232 y135, 04:00:937 (4) - x216 y264

04:01:765 (1) - x110 y302, 04:01:931 (2) - x32 y244, 04:02:097 (3) - x160 y216

04:05:909 (2) - x392 y128

04:07:069 (1) - x258 y189, 04:07:235 (2) - x380 y179, 04:07:401 (3) - x308 y112

04:08:561 (2) - x174 y136

04:16:517 (2) - x148 y104, 04:16:683 (3) - x72 y132

04:17:677 (1,2,3) - scale this group down a little

04:20:329 (1) - x94 y95, 04:20:495 (2) - x214 y176, 04:20:660 (3) - x100 y200, 04:20:826 (4) - x180 y 100 ?

04:21:655 (1,2,3,4) - it needs less spacing imo

04:23:975 (5) - End of this slider could be ending on a 1/8 instead of a 1/6 as all rhythm aren't going in the 1/3s.

04:25:633 (1) - x424 y192, 04:25:799 (2) - x363 y90, 04:25:964 (3) - x316 y168

04:26:959 (1,2,3,4) - also needs less spacing

04:28:285 (1) - x342 y24, 04:28:451 (2) - x411 y183, 04:28:616 (3) - x444 y80, 04:28:782 (4) - x320 y144 ig

04:43:533 (4,5,6,7) - These two sets of piano sounds are rather very distinct, so copy/pasting the objects doesn't really do justice.

I'm thinking you could stack objects 6-7 or replace them with a 1/4 slider.

04:43:533 (4,5,6,7) - 04:44:859 (2,3,4,5) - 04:45:854 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Add whistle to white and red ticks to improve feedback

04:44:196 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Coming here, you could build it up a little more to follow the song. For instance, with this combo 04:45:522 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , the spacing could be a little larger, even in-between the circles.

04:48:837 (7,8) - Increase spacing for better clarity on 1/2 gap

05:21:821 (3) - Extend this slider to follow the vocals?

05:57:456 (5) - Change the Normal-Sampleset to Drum-Sampleset

05:58:451 (1,2) - Going over the vocals at 05:58:782 - seems pretty off. Shorten the slider by 1/4 and add a circle to 05:58:948 -

06:04:252 (3,4) - Thinking you could remove the circle and extend the slider until that point as it will follow the vocals a little more closely.

Remove the hitsounds at the tail of the slider and add a Drum-sampleset to the circle.

07:36:572 (1,2) - Spacing these two from the previous slider wouldn't be bad at all. Thinking of x:320 y:352, which will emphasize the end well.