nao - Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki [CatchTheBeat] · forum

rew0825

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-04-18T05:54:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 29, 2018 at 6:18:25 PM

Artist: nao
Title: Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki
Source: 恋する少女と想いのキセキ～Poupee de souhaits～
Tags: Sugar Pot Koisuru Doll opening eroge -Luminate Luminate [R] ron's maya 山下慎一狼
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7027kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:

Cup (1.4 stars, 146 notes)
Lumi's Overdose (5.13 stars, 441 notes)
Miracle (6.69 stars, 441 notes)
Overdose (5.43 stars, 432 notes)
Platter (2.86 stars, 266 notes)
Rain (4.04 stars, 332 notes)
Salad (2.12 stars, 182 notes)

Download: nao - Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3🤍 Nominators : Benita | Deif | F D Flourite 🤍

● Cup by rew0825
● Salad by rew0825
● Platter by rew0825
● Rain by rew0825
● Lumi's Overdose by -Luminate
● Overdose by rew0825
● Miracle by rew0825

🎵 Hitsound by rew0825
🖼️ Storyboard by [R]

Last edited by rew0825 2021-07-28T13:35:22+00:00, edited 139 times in total.

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-16T09:08:17+00:00

from Q

[Miracle]
check ai mod there are lots of objects that are not snapped
00:38:747 (3) - this note here doesnt really emphasizes anything, just delete it to be consistent with the others like 00:34:868 (1,2) - 00:31:558 (1,2,3) -
00:39:834 (1) - add clap perhaps for better emphasis for this note
00:43:558 (1) - the spacing here is not quite balanced cus it's a bit close to (2) and gives an awkward play when catching it so perhaps move it to x426 it plays better imo and would look good aesthetically cus it overlaps 00:43:971 (1) - uwu
00:46:920 (4) - this is kinda overmapped imo just delete this note instead and then overlap 00:46:971 (4) - with 00:46:661 (2) - like what u did on 00:45:420 (4,5) -
00:50:489 (6) - quiet underspaced even tho it has a strong sound, just place it on x352 to overlap with 00:50:334 (4) -
00:55:765 (2,4) - uh ik this is quite nazi but fix overlap? uwu
00:58:609 (3) - same reason as before, delete? then just move 00:58:661 (3) - quite closer x310 mayb
01:03:006 (1) - ctrl h this pls then put it back to same position x400 it fells more comfy
01:05:489 (1,2) - i expected this to be on the left side, CTRL H these perhaps
01:06:730 (3,1) - ^ move 01:07:971 (2) - x216 after
01:08:385 (3,1) - ^
01:12:109 - for this part i would make the rhythm like this to be consistent with others
01:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i like this pattern, but may be unrankable idk

[lumi's overdose]
same here check ai mod
01:16:868 (6) - nc
01:39:006 (3,4,5) - shouldn't this be play like 01:42:316 (3,4,5) - ?

[Rain]
ye check ai mod
00:39:834 (3) - add clap here as well? like miracle diff
00:49:351 (2,3,4) - sorry for nazi mod but the overlaps here are quite ugly w
01:03:523 (4,6) - hm i would ctrl g these two or change something cus 01:03:834 (1) - gives a strong vocal sound perhaps i'd replace it with a repeat slider insted to follow the rhythm on 01:02:592 (2) -
01:12:109 - in this part i think the pattern should already for variety i'd suggest repeat sliders instead for this part instead also adjust the sliderends
01:24:937 (4,5) - i'd seperate these instead cus they have different sounds and move them to x424 after
01:30:316 (1) - quite far imo move 01:30:109 (6) - to x155 perhaps and align the notes like this then fix 01:30:316 (1,3) - overlap after for aesthetics uwu

[Platter]
01:17:075 (1) - make this hdash cus it has stronger sound
01:17:902 (3) - move this closer overlap it with 01:18:316 (1) -
01:18:109 (4) - just move this quite closer x230 move 01:17:902 (3,1) - 1 grid after
01:44:282 (2) - make this hdash x96

that's all Salad and Cup i sleep lol
hope i helped something!
goodluck!!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-16T10:59:22+00:00

AJamez wrote:
from Q

[Miracle]
check ai mod there are lots of objects that are not snapped Ok, Fix.
00:38:747 (3) - this note here doesnt really emphasizes anything, just delete it to be consistent with the others like 00:34:868 (1,2) - 00:31:558 (1,2,3) - I heard a low sound on this so not change.
00:39:834 (1) - add clap perhaps for better emphasis for this note Ok, Add.
00:43:558 (1) - the spacing here is not quite balanced cus it's a bit close to (2) and gives an awkward play when catching it so perhaps move it to x426 it plays better imo and would look good aesthetically cus it overlaps 00:43:971 (1) - uwu Change.
00:46:920 (4) - this is kinda overmapped imo just delete this note instead and then overlap 00:46:971 (4) - with 00:46:661 (2) - like what u did on 00:45:420 (4,5) - I think it's ok for me. not change.
00:50:489 (6) - quiet underspaced even tho it has a strong sound, just place it on x352 to overlap with 00:50:334 (4) - Change.
00:55:765 (2,4) - uh ik this is quite nazi but fix overlap? uwu Fix.
00:58:609 (3) - same reason as before, delete? then just move 00:58:661 (3) - quite closer x310 mayb I heard a low sound on this so not change.
01:03:006 (1) - ctrl h this pls then put it back to same position x400 it fells more comfy . I think it's want a antiflow so not change this.
01:05:489 (1,2) - i expected this to be on the left side, CTRL H these perhaps
01:06:730 (3,1) - ^ move 01:07:971 (2) - x216 after
01:08:385 (3,1) - ^ not change all of this. It's good but after it the note look bad ;w;
01:12:109 - for this part i would make the rhythm like this to be consistent with others Change.
01:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i like this pattern, but may be unrankable idk I think so I will wait for BN see it and complain this.

[Rain]
ye check ai mod Fix.
00:39:834 (3) - add clap here as well? like miracle diff Add.
00:49:351 (2,3,4) - sorry for nazi mod but the overlaps here are quite ugly w - 3 - Change.
01:03:523 (4,6) - hm i would ctrl g these two or change something cus 01:03:834 (1) - gives a strong vocal sound perhaps i'd replace it with a repeat slider insted to follow the rhythm on 01:02:592 (2) - this is a rest for a player so not change.
01:12:109 - in this part i think the pattern should already for variety i'd suggest repeat sliders instead for this part instead also adjust the sliderends Sorry I don't understand it ;w;
01:24:937 (4,5) - i'd seperate these instead cus they have different sounds and move them to x424 after Change.
01:30:316 (1) - quite far imo move 01:30:109 (6) - to x155 perhaps and align the notes like this then fix 01:30:316 (1,3) - overlap after for aesthetics uwu Change.

[Platter]
01:17:075 (1) - make this hdash cus it has stronger sound It's so hard to add it sorry ;w;
01:17:902 (3) - move this closer overlap it with 01:18:316 (1) - Change.
01:18:109 (4) - just move this quite closer x230 move 01:17:902 (3,1) - 1 grid after I think it look weird. not change.
01:44:282 (2) - make this hdash x96 When i move to x:96 it's not hdash so not change sorry ;w;

that's all Salad and Cup i sleep lol
hope i helped something!
goodluck!!

Thank you so much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-09-16T11:26:31+00:00

fixed

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:永遠なる絆と想いのキセキ
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ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:rew0825
Version:Lumi's Overdose
Source:恋する少女と想いのキセキ～Poupee de souhaits～
Tags:Sugar Pot Koisuru Doll opening eroge
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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2017-09-16T15:30:28+00:00

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from p/6252515

If you were me, i would like to:

The Cup

-00:36:523 (2) - Maybe you should drag this to the right to make it closer to slider 00:35:696 (1) and object 00:37:351 (1)

-00:43:971 (1) - the case is kinda the same as above, but drag to the left closer to 00:44:696 (2) , or put it on the middle (optional, plus flip it horizontally [ctrl + h])

-00:45:627 (1) - same as above (but without ctrl + h)

-00:47:282 (1,2,3) - drag these to the right to make 00:47:282 (1) closer to end of slider 00:46:351 (2)

-00:48:006 (4) - i don't seem i prefer sharp slider for cup diff, i feel i find it requires player to use dash, so i suggest you to rotate it 45 degree clockwise, based on playfield centre, then drag this to the right a bit

-01:31:144 (1) - i don't know but maybe you'd like to remove the spinner here?

-01:42:627 (4) - the same case as 00:48:006 (4), but based on selection centre

The Salad

-00:20:799 (1) - maybe you should make this closer (make prev less than 1.74x) so new players wouldn't feel to rough to jump

-00:39:834 (3) - drag this to the right by make it closer a bit to 00:39:420 (2) | yet i find it slightly farther for 290 bpm...

-00:43:971 (1) - ctrl + g this, then drag this to the left a bit? i find it somewhat rough to jump...

-00:50:592 (1) - hmmm maybe you should drag this to the left (make it closer to 00:50:385 (4) and also making its prev less than 2.05x)

-01:00:523 (1) - same case as above...

-01:20:385 (1) - i can suggest you to make its prev to 1.60x by dragging it to the right

-01:22:040 (1) - same as above, but to the left, and make its prev to 1.67x

-01:31:144 (1) - the case is the same as this spinner on cup diff

Platttterrrrrr

-00:16:351 (3) - ctrl + g this. i find it somewhat sudden just to jump to 00:16:661 (4) without hyper

-00:17:489 (1) - well, drag this to the left (to make its prev less than 1.48x, at least at 1.30x

-00:48:937 (1) - i think i find it somewhat afar from 00:49:661 (2) so will you drag this to the left a bit closer to 00:49:661 (2) ?

Raiiiiinnnnn

first of all, nailed it ;w; so most part seem fine to me but,

-00:23:696 (3) - i highly suggest to make this closer to 00:23:902 (4)

-00:42:730 (3) - i highly suggest to drag this to the right to make 00:42:730 (3) and 00:42:523 (2) has hyper

Lumi's Overdose

Before i proceed to overdose and beyond diff mod, i have to say that even though i'm able to mod any diff (regardless its SR), i now only able to mod based on my own current playability skill here (sorry if i forgot to mention them in my rule for modding ctb in the Q you requested before

) i missed my old skill ):

-00:30:730 (1) - i find the pattern kinda rough for high bpm so i suggest you to make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103250

-00:31:558 (3) - same case as above, but just ctrl + g this

-00:35:696 (1,2) - try make them like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103282 to make them all hyper for jumping

-00:37:351 (1) - quite the same case as 00:30:730 (1)

-00:42:937 (4) - ctrl + g, then drag it to the left

-00:43:351 (2) - just drag this to the left

Miracle

hmmm, i may say the diff is theorically FC / SS able so, ALL IS GOOD

well, that's all i can mod

ugh, the HIGH bpm seem had given me so much pressure to play ):

will you stop map eroge song please ;w; , i feel kinda too allergic now ;w;

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-09-18T12:31:46+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
00:30:730 (1) - i find the pattern kinda rough for high bpm so i suggest you to make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103250
>> Fixed but bent the slider a little bit more
00:31:558 (3) - same case as above, but just ctrl + g this

00:35:696 (1,2) - try make them like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103282 to make them all hyper for jumping

00:37:351 (1) - quite the same case as 00:30:730 (1)

00:42:937 (4) - ctrl + g, then drag it to the left

00:43:351 (2) - just drag this to the left >> did you mean to make the end of the slider Hdash? In that case, fixed

Otherwise, all fixed Thanks

Overdose

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-18T12:51:19+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
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from p/6252515

If you were me, i would like to:

The Cup
-00:36:523 (2) - Maybe you should drag this to the right to make it closer to slider 00:35:696 (1) and object 00:37:351 (1) Ok, move it.

-00:43:971 (1) - the case is kinda the same as above, but drag to the left closer to 00:44:696 (2) , or put it on the middle (optional, plus flip it horizontally [ctrl + h]) I think it's ok because distance btw that is same 00:45:627 (1,2) - , 00:47:696 (3,4) - so not change.

-00:45:627 (1) - same as above (but without ctrl + h) same as above.

-00:47:282 (1,2,3) - drag these to the right to make 00:47:282 (1) closer to end of slider 00:46:351 (2) same as above.

-00:48:006 (4) - i don't seem i prefer sharp slider for cup diff, i feel i find it requires player to use dash, so i suggest you to rotate it 45 degree clockwise, based on playfield centre, then drag this to the right a bit Change a bit.

-01:31:144 (1) - i don't know but maybe you'd like to remove the spinner here? Ok change.

-01:42:627 (4) - the same case as 00:48:006 (4), but based on selection centre I think it's ok, not change.

The Salad
-00:20:799 (1) - maybe you should make this closer (make prev less than 1.74x) so new players wouldn't feel to rough to jump I don't want it to jump. not change.

-00:39:834 (3) - drag this to the right by make it closer a bit to 00:39:420 (2) | yet i find it slightly farther for 290 bpm... change.

-00:43:971 (1) - ctrl + g this, then drag this to the left a bit? i find it somewhat rough to jump... yes i want this to jump because it look big sound so not change.

-00:50:592 (1) - hmmm maybe you should drag this to the left (make it closer to 00:50:385 (4) and also making its prev less than 2.05x) I think it's ok when compare with 00:30:523 (4,1) -

-01:00:523 (1) - same case as above... same as above.

-01:20:385 (1) - i can suggest you to make its prev to 1.60x by dragging it to the right If a distance is low i think player will confuse it will dash or not so I not change for make sure it dash for them.

-01:22:040 (1) - same as above, but to the left, and make its prev to 1.67x same as too.

-01:31:144 (1) - the case is the same as this spinner on cup diff Change.

Platttterrrrrr
-00:16:351 (3) - ctrl + g this. i find it somewhat sudden just to jump to 00:16:661 (4) without hyper I think it's ok because the distance btw it is 1.0x.

-00:17:489 (1) - well, drag this to the left (to make its prev less than 1.48x, at least at 1.30x I want it to dash so not change.

-00:48:937 (1) - i think i find it somewhat afar from 00:49:661 (2) so will you drag this to the left a bit closer to 00:49:661 (2) ? Ok move a bit.

Raiiiiinnnnn
first of all, nailed it ;w; so most part seem fine to me but, *0*

-00:23:696 (3) - i highly suggest to make this closer to 00:23:902 (4) change.

-00:42:730 (3) - i highly suggest to drag this to the right to make 00:42:730 (3) and 00:42:523 (2) has hyper If have Hdash all of 00:42:523 (2,3,4,5) - will Hdash all so it too hard so not change.

Miracle
hmmm, i may say the diff is theorically FC / SS able so, ALL IS GOOD Wow thank you xD

well, that's all i can mod

ugh, the HIGH bpm seem had given me so much pressure to play ):

will you stop map eroge song please ;w; , i feel kinda too allergic now ;w;

Thank you so much <3

and UPDATE ALL

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Ollapeu 2017-09-21T16:23:56+00:00

Hello! Mod as requested.

General stuff:

Difficulty Spread: Platter's hp is currently 4, I recommend to change it to 5, same goes for Rain, 5 -> 6.
BG: 1020x596 seems to be an unusual size, I wasn't able to find anything about bg sizes in osu! If any rules changed during my hiatus, I'm sorry for pointing that out.

Cup

00:25:765 (1,2) - The distance between these 2 objects is a little too big, also the previous pattern looks exactly the same and it has slightly smaller distance. I would suggest to follow the previous pattern, so (2) = x:152
01:31:144 (2) - Imo it's a bit too close to (1). You could easily make it look better with x:304.
01:40:971 (2) - Same as in the first point ^.
01:44:799 (1) - Again x:264 to make it look better. It might have looked even better if you changed the shape (symmetrical). It's up to you.

Salad

Overall just by playing the distance feels a bit too big. I would suggest you to reduce the distance. For example: 00:18:730 (3,4,1). Don't get me wrong, I had fun playing that, but new players might have problems reading that spacing. It doesn't have to be such a big change, going from x328 to x:320 would be totally fine.

Besides that:
00:08:070 (3) - Wouldn't you like to highlight that sound here by adding a short 1/4 slider

Check it out

01:44:799 (3) - Since it's Salad u can actually add more notes, but u added the same pattern as it's in Cup. My advice is to replace the slider into the shorter one and then add a note at the end (click). I think it will match the rhythm perfectly.

Platter

00:02:776 (1,1) - There is a missing note between them.
00:04:541 (1,2,1) - I don't understand why you put a note here, but in 00:08:423 (1,1) and 00:10:187 (1,1) you didn't. ^
00:07:364 (2) - That piano should be highlighted. What about adding 2 notes at the of the slider?

click

01:10:247 (3,1) - As someone told me a whille go, 1/4 hyperdashes like these aren't allowed anymore in Platter.
01:18:109 (4,1) - ^
01:31:144 (3) - U can clearly hear 1/4 notes in the background, I would suggest you to replace the slider to notes to follow the music properly, I mean it's up to you since you decided to stick to the vocal in this case.

Rain

00:02:776 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2) - The whole section is basically almost the same as it's in Platter, so the same things to point out as well.
I couldn't find anything else, such a good Rain, the flow is amazing! Good job

Lumi's Overdose

00:07:364 (3) - Same as it was in other diffs, imo the piano part should be highlighted, so I would suggest to add notes after the slider.
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda ugly, (3) = ctrl+h, ctrl+j and x: 336.
00:12:658 (5) - What about making it more movable? A rounder shape could fix it.
00:36:523 (1) - I don't like the flow here, you can easily solve the problem doing ctrl+h and x: 120.
00:38:178 (3,4) - You're missing a hdash here as u added it in every single similar pattern in ur map (that follows the vocal).
01:03:834 (6) - Maybe a bit rounder shape? (click)
01:05:489 (3) - ^
The rest is fine.

Miracle

01:03:006 (1) - The flow would be way better if you ctrl+h and move the slider at the same position x: 416.

Wow, the flow is just perfect. I'm not an advanced player, but I was still able to play the map without any issues.

Good luck, I hope it helps.

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-22T14:36:03+00:00

Ollapeu wrote:
Hello! Mod as requested.

General stuff:

Difficulty Spread: Platter's hp is currently 4, I recommend to change it to 5, same goes for Rain, 5 -> 6. I think it's ok because HP of all diff increment by 1
BG: 1020x596 seems to be an unusual size, I wasn't able to find anything about bg sizes in osu! If any rules changed during my hiatus, I'm sorry for pointing that out. Ohh thank you I forget it xD

Cup

00:25:765 (1,2) - The distance between these 2 objects is a little too big, also the previous pattern looks exactly the same and it has slightly smaller distance. I would suggest to follow the previous pattern, so (2) = x:152 Change it to near. (152 is y xD)
01:31:144 (2) - Imo it's a bit too close to (1). You could easily make it look better with x:304. Change.
01:40:971 (2) - Same as in the first point ^. Change.
01:44:799 (1) - Again x:264 to make it look better. It might have looked even better if you changed the shape (symmetrical). It's up to you. Change.

Salad

Overall just by playing the distance feels a bit too big. I would suggest you to reduce the distance. For example: 00:18:730 (3,4,1). Don't get me wrong, I had fun playing that, but new players might have problems reading that spacing. It doesn't have to be such a big change, going from x328 to x:320 would be totally fine. I think it's ok. but if BN is complain about this i will change.

Besides that:
00:08:070 (3) - Wouldn't you like to highlight that sound here by adding a short 1/4 slider It's look nice but i think it suddenly note for players. not change.
Check it out
01:44:799 (3) - Since it's Salad u can actually add more notes, but u added the same pattern as it's in Cup. My advice is to replace the slider into the shorter one and then add a note at the end (click). I think it will match the rhythm perfectly. , but add a dash on this.

Platter

00:02:776 (1,1) - There is a missing note between them. I don't add ;w; sorry. because i think the sound look low.
00:04:541 (1,2,1) - I don't understand why you put a note here, but in 00:08:423 (1,1) and 00:10:187 (1,1) you didn't. ^ In my I think it's low sound and it unnes to have note on that.
00:07:364 (2) - That piano should be highlighted. What about adding 2 notes at the of the slider? Not add I think it look confuse for player @_@
click
01:10:247 (3,1) - As someone told me a whille go, 1/4 hyperdashes like these aren't allowed anymore in Platter. I not sure it's a 1/2 because it's high bpm so i want BN to check it for sure.
01:18:109 (4,1) - ^ ^^^
01:31:144 (3) - U can clearly hear 1/4 notes in the background, I would suggest you to replace the slider to notes to follow the music properly, I mean it's up to you since you decided to stick to the vocal in this case. Change.

Rain

00:02:776 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2) - The whole section is basically almost the same as it's in Platter, so the same things to point out as well. Change.
I couldn't find anything else, such a good Rain, the flow is amazing! Good job

Miracle

01:03:006 (1) - The flow would be way better if you ctrl+h and move the slider at the same position x: 416. On this i want it antiflow for a miss :v. not change.

Wow, the flow is just perfect. I'm not an advanced player, but I was still able to play the map without any issues.

Good luck, I hope it helps.

Thank you so much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-09-22T14:39:21+00:00

Ollapeu wrote:
Lumi's Overdose

00:07:364 (3) - Same as it was in other diffs, imo the piano part should be highlighted, so I would suggest to add notes after the slider.
>>> I think the piano itself isn't strong enough to place a note
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda ugly, (3) = ctrl+h, ctrl+j and x: 336.
>>> I think it's fine, If I change then it will be too forced to dash to the next note
00:12:658 (5) - What about making it more movable? A rounder shape could fix it.
00:36:523 (1) - I don't like the flow here, you can easily solve the problem doing ctrl+h and x: 120.
00:38:178 (3,4) - You're missing a hdash here as u added it in every single similar pattern in ur map (that follows the vocal).
01:03:834 (6) - Maybe a bit rounder shape? (click)
01:05:489 (3) - ^
The rest is fine.
Otherwise, all fixed Thanks

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Version:Lumi's Overdose
Source:恋する少女と想いのキセキ～Poupee de souhaits～
Tags:Sugar Pot Koisuru Doll opening eroge
BeatmapID:1369600
BeatmapSetID:601392

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.4
OverallDifficulty:9.3
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:2.25
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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264,248,68592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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rew0825

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Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-22T14:59:24+00:00

UPDATE ALL!

BoberOfDarkness

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Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-09-22T16:23:59+00:00

Hey Ollapeu asked me to clarify if dash at 01:10:247 (3,1) - is rankable or not

So basically what's the wiki says: you can use higher snapped hyperdashes if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. Here you got around 103/104 ms between objects so all 1/2 hypers at this BPM are unrankable.

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Ollapeu 2017-09-22T16:30:20+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Hey Ollapeu asked me to clarify if dash at 01:10:247 (3,1) - is rankable or not

So basically what's the wiki says: you can use higher snapped hyperdashes if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. Here you got around 103/104 ms between objects so all 1/2 hypers at this BPM are unrankable.

Thanks for claryfying, btw. I called them 1/4 in my mod, my bad, the high bpm was kinda misleading.

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-24T14:29:36+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Hey Ollapeu asked me to clarify if dash at 01:10:247 (3,1) - is rankable or not

So basically what's the wiki says: you can use higher snapped hyperdashes if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. Here you got around 103/104 ms between objects so all 1/2 hypers at this BPM are unrankable.

Ok, Thank you for your suggestion <3. Change.

GiGas

Beatmap Nominator

135 posts

Joined October 2015

GiGas 2017-10-04T01:00:49+00:00

GiGas Modding Q

⬛🔵 Blue for suggestions: Just little suggestions. Nothing wrong with it.
⬛🔴 Red for little warnings : Is fine but might want to fix it.
⬛ ⚫ Black for unrankable :Fix it if your map wants to get ranked
⬛ Ⓜ️ For my comments for the map or just personal things!

Cup

Cup Modding

Ⓜ️While looking at the map i felt like the cup diff was a bit too harsh. I felt like the repeat slider needed to be angled smaller and the half circle sliders needed to be angled smaller too. Since its a pretty fast bpm I would prefer you to fix all the angles in a bit smaller. If you disagree with this statement you can just ignore this Cup mod.

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:16:661 (1) -since it shares the shares similar sounds with 00:17:075 (2) - how about making the sliders only move to the right for these two instead of making the first slider a bit to the left then the next slider to the right. Its cup so i don't think you should focus that much on different rhythms of the song.

⬛ 01:15:420 (1,2) - Vocal says something 3 times. A repeat slider may be used in that case instead of a full slider.

⬛01:44:799 (1) -x=240 feels more comfortable to play

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛00:17:489 (1) - I am probably gonna say lots of things about this kind of repeat slider in the cup diff but as I mentioned early i think this is a bit too large for cup players. I would prefer x=312. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the other repeat sliders too.

⬛00:24:834 (2) - This kind of pattern would be a bit too harsh for cup. I would like to see a tilted version of the slider that I just mentioned. For example 00:23:178 (4) - is a good way you can change the slider to. It has less movement involved which fits cup. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the half circle sliders too.

⬛From the start of the kiai using those spaced repeat slider and the half circle may be used since its the drop.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛I saw some things in the forum but you fixed them so you are good to go!

Salad

Salad Modding

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:09:128 (2) - There's a pretty big gap but the note barely moves meanwhile all the other ones that had a big gap behind moved pretty far away. I suggest moving this note far like the others.

⬛ 01:44:799 (3,4) - Since you ended at the piano sound, using this timing would be good.
Try deleting the hitsound at the slider end (3) and add a whistle hitsound to emphasize the piano sound.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:27:420 (1) - This repeat slider is pretty non spaced than the other repeat sliders such as 00:25:765 (1). Space it please.

⬛ 00:39:834 (3) - Without using the dash key you can catch this note with the semi-edge of the catcher. I don't think this part needs a dash so I think a note placement of x=200 would be good.

⬛ 01:28:454 (4,1) - Is this dash necessary? I listened to the vocal a bit and her pitch goes down then goes back up at 01:29:385 (3). I think a dash would fit at that part better instead of 01:28:454 (4,1).

⬛ 01:41:902 (1) - same mod as 00:27:420 (1)

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Platter

Platter Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 01:10:247 (3) - It is a quiet part. I think a dash would fit instead of a hyper fruit.

⬛01:22:040 (1) - How about adding a Hyper fruit somewhere to emphasize this note. When you used hyper fruits it was mostly when the guitar had an strong beat. I hear this at the part that I mentioned but there is no Hyper fruit.

⬛01:38:592 (1) - After the Hyper jump at 01:38:384 (6) I think it is important to make it flow. I'm pretty sure platter players would have a hard time trying to change the flow after a hyper jump. I would be expecting those patterns in rain~overdose diff.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:34:040 (1,2) -This pattern feels really random. When this type of song pattern came out you used a 1 2 1 2 beat pattern dividing the notes. But this is 1 123. It just adds a weird flow change. And the shape of 00:34:868 (4,5) - is different using 123 1. Please change this.

⬛00:50:592 (1,2), 00:51:420 (4,5) - ^^^^^

⬛01:02:799 (4) - Is this hyper fruit needed? I don't hear anything that would really fit.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Rain

Rain Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ Start ~ 00:15:834- I think you can use different timing patterns for sound variation instead of Slider+1 note or Slider+Slider.

⬛ 00:48:523 (5,6,7,8) - The song intensity is increasing but the spacing's seem to decrease then suddenly there's a hyper jump. I think you should slowly increase the spacing's then put a hyper jump.

⬛01:37:971 (2) - Since the back melody sound gets big over there a hyper fruit jump may fit.

⬛01:28:454 (6) - I don't really hear anything to emphasize the beat therefore a hyper fruit would not be a good choice in that part.

⬛01:44:592 (2) - Instead of making this note a hyper fruit make only 01:44:799 (3,4) hyper fruits so you can emphasize the piano beat at the end.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:50:592 (1,2) -I've mentioned some "hey use same notes of same beat" but I think you over use this pattern. It kills the creativeness of the map. Try to find another pattern.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot!

Lumi's Overdose

Lumi's Overdose Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 00:43:351 (2,3) - I see why you put a counter flow slider jump at 00:42:523 (2,3). But i cannot see why you put it at 00:43:351 (2,3). Unless there is a special reason i think making it flow would be better.

⬛01:00:109 (2,3) - Vocal voice goes down a bit. Song is not really intense. A dash would fit better instead of an hyper jump.

⬛01:03:420 (2,3,4,5) - Try changing the pattern to this for better flow. I don't think this needs to suddenly have a counter flow.

⬛01:12:109 (1,2) - I think you are fine without emphasizing this part if you did not at 01:10:454 (1,2) which is pretty similar except the fact that 01:12:109 (1,2) sounds bigger. I don't think it sounds that big.

⬛01:38:178 (3,4,1) - using notes instead of sliders + making the spacing decreased will represent the song pretty good in my opinion. Or try to space it down a bit by bit.

⬛01:45:006 (6,7) - I think a hyper jump over there is a bit over emphasizing. How about changing that to a 1/2 slider?

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛-00:52:868 (4) - This feels like an unnecessary hyper fruit.

⬛01:22:040 (1,2) - The higher pitched vocal is at (1) but the note is emphasized on (2). Change (2) to (1) and (1) to (2) please.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot!

Miracle

Miracle Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛01:03:006 (1,2,3,4,5) -Changing the pattern like this will make it flow even better. + I don't think separating the slider and the 4 notes is really necessary.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛01:02:489 (2,3,4,5,6) -Are those hyper jumps necessary? I don't think it really fits since there's nothing to emphasize.

⬛01:31:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A very random pattern that does not fit. I personally think before the kiai it is a stage to make people get ready for the drop. Therefore introducing patterns but not that hard. In kiai's i believe that you need to use patterns that you used in early stages that the players are used to seeing in the map but harder since its the drop. Not a complete random pattern. I suggest you using this pattern.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️This map is so fun like holy I love this map. Nice work!

Ⓜ️ My comments!
This is my 2nd CTB mod! This map was really fun to mod but it also took me about 4 hours lol. I really hope this gets ranked. It deserves it. Only kudosu me if the mod actually helped.

Modding Q from: p/6278673/

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-04T12:03:32+00:00

- G i G a s - wrote:

GiGas Modding Q
⬛🔵 Blue for suggestions: Just little suggestions. Nothing wrong with it.
⬛🔴 Red for little warnings : Is fine but might want to fix it.
⬛ ⚫ Black for unrankable :Fix it if your map wants to get ranked
⬛ Ⓜ️ For my comments for the map or just personal things!

Cup
Cup Modding
Ⓜ️While looking at the map i felt like the cup diff was a bit too harsh. I felt like the repeat slider needed to be angled smaller and the half circle sliders needed to be angled smaller too. Since its a pretty fast bpm I would prefer you to fix all the angles in a bit smaller. If you disagree with this statement you can just ignore this Cup mod.

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:16:661 (1) -since it shares the shares similar sounds with 00:17:075 (2) - how about making the sliders only move to the right for these two instead of making the first slider a bit to the left then the next slider to the right. Its cup so i don't think you should focus that much on different rhythms of the song.
Look good but for now I don't want to change. Keep.
⬛ 01:15:420 (1,2) - Vocal says something 3 times. A repeat slider may be used in that case instead of a full slider. I think it unnecessary and look suddenly on cup.

⬛01:44:799 (1) -x=240 feels more comfortable to play Move it.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛00:17:489 (1) - I am probably gonna say lots of things about this kind of repeat slider in the cup diff but as I mentioned early i think this is a bit too large for cup players. I would prefer x=312. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the other repeat sliders too. Change.

⬛00:24:834 (2) - This kind of pattern would be a bit too harsh for cup. I would like to see a tilted version of the slider that I just mentioned. For example 00:23:178 (4) - is a good way you can change the slider to. It has less movement involved which fits cup. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the half circle sliders too. I don't change because distance between this and next note is look big.

⬛From the start of the kiai using those spaced repeat slider and the half circle may be used since its the drop. Ok change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛I saw some things in the forum but you fixed them so you are good to go!

Salad
Salad Modding
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:09:128 (2) - There's a pretty big gap but the note barely moves meanwhile all the other ones that had a big gap behind moved pretty far away. I suggest moving this note far like the others. Change.

⬛ 01:44:799 (3,4) - Since you ended at the piano sound, using this timing would be good. Change.
Try deleting the hitsound at the slider end (3) and add a whistle hitsound to emphasize the piano sound.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:27:420 (1) - This repeat slider is pretty non spaced than the other repeat sliders such as 00:25:765 (1). Space it please. Change.

⬛ 00:39:834 (3) - Without using the dash key you can catch this note with the semi-edge of the catcher. I don't think this part needs a dash so I think a note placement of x=200 would be good. I want it to dash because the melody is strong.

⬛ 01:28:454 (4,1) - Is this dash necessary? I listened to the vocal a bit and her pitch goes down then goes back up at 01:29:385 (3). I think a dash would fit at that part better instead of 01:28:454 (4,1). I think it ok. before this note, All dash note is flow to dash but this is antiflow so if have one probably no problem.

⬛ 01:41:902 (1) - same mod as 00:27:420 (1) Change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Platter

Platter Mod
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 01:10:247 (3) - It is a quiet part. I think a dash would fit instead of a hyper fruit. Change.

⬛01:22:040 (1) - How about adding a Hyper fruit somewhere to emphasize this note. When you used hyper fruits it was mostly when the guitar had an strong beat. I hear this at the part that I mentioned but there is no Hyper fruit. Change.

⬛01:38:592 (1) - After the Hyper jump at 01:38:384 (6) I think it is important to make it flow. I'm pretty sure platter players would have a hard time trying to change the flow after a hyper jump. I would be expecting those patterns in rain~overdose diff. Move it to near a bit.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:34:040 (1,2) -This pattern feels really random. When this type of song pattern came out you used a 1 2 1 2 beat pattern dividing the notes. But this is 1 123. It just adds a weird flow change. And the shape of 00:34:868 (4,5) - is different using 123 1. Please change this. Sorry I don't understand this @_@.

⬛00:50:592 (1,2), 00:51:420 (4,5) - ^^^^^ ^^ T^T

⬛01:02:799 (4) - Is this hyper fruit needed? I don't hear anything that would really fit. Change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Rain
Rain Mod
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ Start ~ 00:15:834- I think you can use different timing patterns for sound variation instead of Slider+1 note or Slider+Slider. I use that on Miracle so I think on the diff is easier the note should less

⬛ 00:48:523 (5,6,7,8) - The song intensity is increasing but the spacing's seem to decrease then suddenly there's a hyper jump. I think you should slowly increase the spacing's then put a hyper jump. It's increase 0.0

⬛01:37:971 (2) - Since the back melody sound gets big over there a hyper fruit jump may fit. The sound is not strong when compare with 01:44:592 (2) - so Not change.

⬛01:28:454 (6) - I don't really hear anything to emphasize the beat therefore a hyper fruit would not be a good choice in that part. For the pattern. Not change.

⬛01:44:592 (2) - Instead of making this note a hyper fruit make only 01:44:799 (3,4) hyper fruits so you can emphasize the piano beat at the end. No, I think on 01:44:592 (2) - is strong voice. Not change.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:50:592 (1,2) -I've mentioned some "hey use same notes of same beat" but I think you over use this pattern. It kills the creativeness of the map. Try to find another pattern. I will try.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot!

Miracle
Miracle Mod
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛01:03:006 (1,2,3,4,5) -Changing the pattern like this will make it flow even better. + I don't think separating the slider and the 4 notes is really necessary. On all mod is have suggestion on this ;w; so Change.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛01:02:489 (2,3,4,5,6) -Are those hyper jumps necessary? I don't think it really fits since there's nothing to emphasize. I think it's not a big problem. Not change.

⬛01:31:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A very random pattern that does not fit. I personally think before the kiai it is a stage to make people get ready for the drop. Therefore introducing patterns but not that hard. In kiai's i believe that you need to use patterns that you used in early stages that the players are used to seeing in the map but harder since its the drop. Not a complete random pattern. I suggest you using this pattern. I think 1/4 is not good for this. Now I'm waiting for a BN look on this. Now not change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️This map is so fun like holy I love this map. Nice work!

Ⓜ️ My comments!
This is my 2nd CTB mod! This map was really fun to mod but it also took me about 4 hours lol. I really hope this gets ranked. It deserves it. Only kudosu me if the mod actually helped. Ohh!! 4 hours @_@

Modding Q from: p/6278673/

Thank you so much. <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-10-04T12:36:48+00:00

- G i G a s - wrote:

Lumi's Overdose
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 00:43:351 (2,3) - I see why you put a counter flow slider jump at 00:42:523 (2,3). But i cannot see why you put it at 00:43:351 (2,3). Unless there is a special reason i think making it flow would be better. >>Agreed with that somehow I put it cuz of my likes though (Fixed)

⬛01:00:109 (2,3) - Vocal voice goes down a bit. Song is not really intense. A dash would fit better instead of an hyper jump. >> Okay, Fixed

⬛01:03:420 (2,3,4,5) - Try changing the pattern to this for better flow. I don't think this needs to suddenly have a counter flow. >> I agreed with the part that I put unnecessary Hdash on antiflow but I fix the pattern myself

⬛01:12:109 (1,2) - I think you are fine without emphasizing this part if you did not at 01:10:454 (1,2) which is pretty similar except the fact that 01:12:109 (1,2) sounds bigger. I don't think it sounds that big. >> I don't think this sounds strange but I fix anyway

⬛01:38:178 (3,4,1) - using notes instead of sliders + making the spacing decreased will represent the song pretty good in my opinion. Or try to space it down a bit by bit. >> Move a little closer

⬛01:45:006 (6,7) - I think a hyper jump over there is a bit over emphasizing. How about changing that to a 1/2 slider?>> I wanted this hyper to be a finisher for the song so I don't fix it

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛-00:52:868 (4) - This feels like an unnecessary hyper fruit. >> Reduced the distance

⬛01:22:040 (1,2) - The higher pitched vocal is at (1) but the note is emphasized on (2). Change (2) to (1) and (1) to (2) please. >> Actually , this could make the sudden antiflow after hyper so I don't fix it

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot! Thanks for the compliment!

I also fix some patterns that looks weird by myself

เย้

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rew0825

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rew0825 2017-10-04T17:35:30+00:00

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LiousPL

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LiousPL 2017-10-13T12:08:14+00:00

Requested mod.

[Miracle]

00:24:006 (6,1) - Maybe do some longer hdash here for a characteristic sound? For example take 1 to x:136, later u can do the same operation with 2 if you like'd it.
00:26:489 (1) - Change a bit curve of this slider, maybe take the end of the slider to x:112, that operation will add some flow in this moment.
00:29:799 (1) - There's characteristic sound, maybe do something a bit more interesting here? Like change curve a bit more here, i prefer here something like
this.
01:03:109 - U missed a note here.
01:18:316 (5) - Do something crazy at this moment, maybe do some wave curve or something, this will be interesting with the sound like this. For exemple something like this will be looking fun.
[Lumi's Overdose]
00:22:247 (3,4) - A bit more movement here for keep flow, and there's not any good sounds for do that flat pattern.
00:24:109 (1) - There's a strange drum hit, do something more interesting here (for example add more curve).
00:30:316 (4) - The same reason ^, try to do something more fit to song, like here u have the same sound on 3 so u can do the same shape of the slider here, click.
00:33:006 (4,5) - This is not good for catching those objects. Catcher must to do weird rush to the right site. More fit will be if u are use a combination Ctrl+H on 5,6, after do this catcher will do break in flow already in the right moment.
00:37:351 (1,2) - Some anti-flow here? Like that.
00:38:178 (3,4) - ^
00:38:696 , 00:38:747 - Missing notes here.
00:58:558 , 00:58:609 - ^
01:01:040 - ^
01:01:868 - ^
01:03:109 - ^?
01:19:351 (4) - Take this to x:240 for add some more flow at this moment.
01:19:765 (2,3) - That flow break here is really hard to catch, mu sugestion is curve 3a more, or take away a bit from 2
01:22:040 (1,2) - Again that weird movement, at 1 have started a new combo with vocal sound, so why not add movement in this combo section?
01:33:213 (2,3,4) - Already in this movement this movement is fit a bit more than others, so you can keep it, but im prefer to take 3 to the right site.
[Rain]
00:23:902 (4) - Change a little shape of it for better follow the flow here.
00:49:971 (4,5) - Move it closer to each one becouse this is hard to catch.
01:38:385 (4) - I think u can change this shape a little bit too.

Other diffs is clearly to play, so i don't expect from them too much, gl

rew0825

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rew0825 2017-10-14T03:12:39+00:00

LiousPL wrote:
Requested mod.

[Miracle]
00:24:006 (6,1) - Maybe do some longer hdash here for a characteristic sound? For example take 1 to x:136, later u can do the same operation with 2 if you like'd it. Now I think I will change a stream all. Look it have a promblem.
00:26:489 (1) - Change a bit curve of this slider, maybe take the end of the slider to x:112, that operation will add some flow in this moment. Move to x:120
00:29:799 (1) - There's characteristic sound, maybe do something a bit more interesting here? Like change curve a bit more here, i prefer here something like
this. Change.
01:03:109 - U missed a note here. I use a slider I can't add ;w;.
01:18:316 (5) - Do something crazy at this moment, maybe do some wave curve or something, this will be interesting with the sound like this. For exemple something like this will be looking fun. It's look hard a bit and it's antiflow I don't like. Sorry, Not change.
[Rain]
00:23:902 (4) - Change a little shape of it for better follow the flow here. Not change. I want to keep the pattern when 00:30:316 (3,4) - I add a hdash.
00:49:971 (4,5) - Move it closer to each one becouse this is hard to catch. Change.
01:38:385 (4) - I think u can change this shape a little bit too. Same as the first.

Other diffs is clearly to play, so i don't expect from them too much, gl

Thank you very much <3

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