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nao - Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2017-04-18T05:54:44+00:00

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-04-18T05:54:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 29, 2018 at 6:18:25 PM

Artist: nao
Title: Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki
Source: 恋する少女と想いのキセキ～Poupee de souhaits～
Tags: Sugar Pot Koisuru Doll opening eroge -Luminate Luminate [R] ron's maya 山下慎一狼
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7027kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:

Cup (1.4 stars, 146 notes)
Lumi's Overdose (5.13 stars, 441 notes)
Miracle (6.69 stars, 441 notes)
Overdose (5.43 stars, 432 notes)
Platter (2.86 stars, 266 notes)
Rain (4.04 stars, 332 notes)
Salad (2.12 stars, 182 notes)

Download: nao - Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3🤍 Nominators : Benita | Deif | F D Flourite 🤍

● Cup by rew0825
● Salad by rew0825
● Platter by rew0825
● Rain by rew0825
● Lumi's Overdose by -Luminate
● Overdose by rew0825
● Miracle by rew0825

🎵 Hitsound by rew0825
🖼️ Storyboard by [R]

Last edited by rew0825 2021-07-28T13:35:22+00:00, edited 139 times in total.

Jemzuu

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-16T09:08:17+00:00

from Q

[Miracle]
check ai mod there are lots of objects that are not snapped
00:38:747 (3) - this note here doesnt really emphasizes anything, just delete it to be consistent with the others like 00:34:868 (1,2) - 00:31:558 (1,2,3) -
00:39:834 (1) - add clap perhaps for better emphasis for this note
00:43:558 (1) - the spacing here is not quite balanced cus it's a bit close to (2) and gives an awkward play when catching it so perhaps move it to x426 it plays better imo and would look good aesthetically cus it overlaps 00:43:971 (1) - uwu
00:46:920 (4) - this is kinda overmapped imo just delete this note instead and then overlap 00:46:971 (4) - with 00:46:661 (2) - like what u did on 00:45:420 (4,5) -
00:50:489 (6) - quiet underspaced even tho it has a strong sound, just place it on x352 to overlap with 00:50:334 (4) -
00:55:765 (2,4) - uh ik this is quite nazi but fix overlap? uwu
00:58:609 (3) - same reason as before, delete? then just move 00:58:661 (3) - quite closer x310 mayb
01:03:006 (1) - ctrl h this pls then put it back to same position x400 it fells more comfy
01:05:489 (1,2) - i expected this to be on the left side, CTRL H these perhaps
01:06:730 (3,1) - ^ move 01:07:971 (2) - x216 after
01:08:385 (3,1) - ^
01:12:109 - for this part i would make the rhythm like this to be consistent with others
01:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i like this pattern, but may be unrankable idk

[lumi's overdose]
same here check ai mod
01:16:868 (6) - nc
01:39:006 (3,4,5) - shouldn't this be play like 01:42:316 (3,4,5) - ?

[Rain]
ye check ai mod
00:39:834 (3) - add clap here as well? like miracle diff
00:49:351 (2,3,4) - sorry for nazi mod but the overlaps here are quite ugly w
01:03:523 (4,6) - hm i would ctrl g these two or change something cus 01:03:834 (1) - gives a strong vocal sound perhaps i'd replace it with a repeat slider insted to follow the rhythm on 01:02:592 (2) -
01:12:109 - in this part i think the pattern should already for variety i'd suggest repeat sliders instead for this part instead also adjust the sliderends
01:24:937 (4,5) - i'd seperate these instead cus they have different sounds and move them to x424 after
01:30:316 (1) - quite far imo move 01:30:109 (6) - to x155 perhaps and align the notes like this then fix 01:30:316 (1,3) - overlap after for aesthetics uwu

[Platter]
01:17:075 (1) - make this hdash cus it has stronger sound
01:17:902 (3) - move this closer overlap it with 01:18:316 (1) -
01:18:109 (4) - just move this quite closer x230 move 01:17:902 (3,1) - 1 grid after
01:44:282 (2) - make this hdash x96

that's all Salad and Cup i sleep lol
hope i helped something!
goodluck!!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-16T10:59:22+00:00

AJamez wrote:
from Q

[Miracle]
check ai mod there are lots of objects that are not snapped Ok, Fix.
00:38:747 (3) - this note here doesnt really emphasizes anything, just delete it to be consistent with the others like 00:34:868 (1,2) - 00:31:558 (1,2,3) - I heard a low sound on this so not change.
00:39:834 (1) - add clap perhaps for better emphasis for this note Ok, Add.
00:43:558 (1) - the spacing here is not quite balanced cus it's a bit close to (2) and gives an awkward play when catching it so perhaps move it to x426 it plays better imo and would look good aesthetically cus it overlaps 00:43:971 (1) - uwu Change.
00:46:920 (4) - this is kinda overmapped imo just delete this note instead and then overlap 00:46:971 (4) - with 00:46:661 (2) - like what u did on 00:45:420 (4,5) - I think it's ok for me. not change.
00:50:489 (6) - quiet underspaced even tho it has a strong sound, just place it on x352 to overlap with 00:50:334 (4) - Change.
00:55:765 (2,4) - uh ik this is quite nazi but fix overlap? uwu Fix.
00:58:609 (3) - same reason as before, delete? then just move 00:58:661 (3) - quite closer x310 mayb I heard a low sound on this so not change.
01:03:006 (1) - ctrl h this pls then put it back to same position x400 it fells more comfy . I think it's want a antiflow so not change this.
01:05:489 (1,2) - i expected this to be on the left side, CTRL H these perhaps
01:06:730 (3,1) - ^ move 01:07:971 (2) - x216 after
01:08:385 (3,1) - ^ not change all of this. It's good but after it the note look bad ;w;
01:12:109 - for this part i would make the rhythm like this to be consistent with others Change.
01:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i like this pattern, but may be unrankable idk I think so I will wait for BN see it and complain this.

[Rain]
ye check ai mod Fix.
00:39:834 (3) - add clap here as well? like miracle diff Add.
00:49:351 (2,3,4) - sorry for nazi mod but the overlaps here are quite ugly w - 3 - Change.
01:03:523 (4,6) - hm i would ctrl g these two or change something cus 01:03:834 (1) - gives a strong vocal sound perhaps i'd replace it with a repeat slider insted to follow the rhythm on 01:02:592 (2) - this is a rest for a player so not change.
01:12:109 - in this part i think the pattern should already for variety i'd suggest repeat sliders instead for this part instead also adjust the sliderends Sorry I don't understand it ;w;
01:24:937 (4,5) - i'd seperate these instead cus they have different sounds and move them to x424 after Change.
01:30:316 (1) - quite far imo move 01:30:109 (6) - to x155 perhaps and align the notes like this then fix 01:30:316 (1,3) - overlap after for aesthetics uwu Change.

[Platter]
01:17:075 (1) - make this hdash cus it has stronger sound It's so hard to add it sorry ;w;
01:17:902 (3) - move this closer overlap it with 01:18:316 (1) - Change.
01:18:109 (4) - just move this quite closer x230 move 01:17:902 (3,1) - 1 grid after I think it look weird. not change.
01:44:282 (2) - make this hdash x96 When i move to x:96 it's not hdash so not change sorry ;w;

that's all Salad and Cup i sleep lol
hope i helped something!
goodluck!!

Thank you so much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-09-16T11:26:31+00:00

fixed

osu file format v14

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Title:Towa naru Kizuna to Omoi no Kiseki
TitleUnicode:永遠なる絆と想いのキセキ
Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:rew0825
Version:Lumi's Overdose
Source:恋する少女と想いのキセキ～Poupee de souhaits～
Tags:Sugar Pot Koisuru Doll opening eroge
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Professor Gila

644 posts

Joined December 2014

Professor Gila 2017-09-16T15:30:28+00:00

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from p/6252515

If you were me, i would like to:

The Cup

-00:36:523 (2) - Maybe you should drag this to the right to make it closer to slider 00:35:696 (1) and object 00:37:351 (1)

-00:43:971 (1) - the case is kinda the same as above, but drag to the left closer to 00:44:696 (2) , or put it on the middle (optional, plus flip it horizontally [ctrl + h])

-00:45:627 (1) - same as above (but without ctrl + h)

-00:47:282 (1,2,3) - drag these to the right to make 00:47:282 (1) closer to end of slider 00:46:351 (2)

-00:48:006 (4) - i don't seem i prefer sharp slider for cup diff, i feel i find it requires player to use dash, so i suggest you to rotate it 45 degree clockwise, based on playfield centre, then drag this to the right a bit

-01:31:144 (1) - i don't know but maybe you'd like to remove the spinner here?

-01:42:627 (4) - the same case as 00:48:006 (4), but based on selection centre

The Salad

-00:20:799 (1) - maybe you should make this closer (make prev less than 1.74x) so new players wouldn't feel to rough to jump

-00:39:834 (3) - drag this to the right by make it closer a bit to 00:39:420 (2) | yet i find it slightly farther for 290 bpm...

-00:43:971 (1) - ctrl + g this, then drag this to the left a bit? i find it somewhat rough to jump...

-00:50:592 (1) - hmmm maybe you should drag this to the left (make it closer to 00:50:385 (4) and also making its prev less than 2.05x)

-01:00:523 (1) - same case as above...

-01:20:385 (1) - i can suggest you to make its prev to 1.60x by dragging it to the right

-01:22:040 (1) - same as above, but to the left, and make its prev to 1.67x

-01:31:144 (1) - the case is the same as this spinner on cup diff

Platttterrrrrr

-00:16:351 (3) - ctrl + g this. i find it somewhat sudden just to jump to 00:16:661 (4) without hyper

-00:17:489 (1) - well, drag this to the left (to make its prev less than 1.48x, at least at 1.30x

-00:48:937 (1) - i think i find it somewhat afar from 00:49:661 (2) so will you drag this to the left a bit closer to 00:49:661 (2) ?

Raiiiiinnnnn

first of all, nailed it ;w; so most part seem fine to me but,

-00:23:696 (3) - i highly suggest to make this closer to 00:23:902 (4)

-00:42:730 (3) - i highly suggest to drag this to the right to make 00:42:730 (3) and 00:42:523 (2) has hyper

Lumi's Overdose

Before i proceed to overdose and beyond diff mod, i have to say that even though i'm able to mod any diff (regardless its SR), i now only able to mod based on my own current playability skill here (sorry if i forgot to mention them in my rule for modding ctb in the Q you requested before

) i missed my old skill ):

-00:30:730 (1) - i find the pattern kinda rough for high bpm so i suggest you to make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103250

-00:31:558 (3) - same case as above, but just ctrl + g this

-00:35:696 (1,2) - try make them like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103282 to make them all hyper for jumping

-00:37:351 (1) - quite the same case as 00:30:730 (1)

-00:42:937 (4) - ctrl + g, then drag it to the left

-00:43:351 (2) - just drag this to the left

Miracle

hmmm, i may say the diff is theorically FC / SS able so, ALL IS GOOD

well, that's all i can mod

ugh, the HIGH bpm seem had given me so much pressure to play ):

will you stop map eroge song please ;w; , i feel kinda too allergic now ;w;

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-09-18T12:31:46+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
00:30:730 (1) - i find the pattern kinda rough for high bpm so i suggest you to make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103250
>> Fixed but bent the slider a little bit more
00:31:558 (3) - same case as above, but just ctrl + g this

00:35:696 (1,2) - try make them like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9103282 to make them all hyper for jumping

00:37:351 (1) - quite the same case as 00:30:730 (1)

00:42:937 (4) - ctrl + g, then drag it to the left

00:43:351 (2) - just drag this to the left >> did you mean to make the end of the slider Hdash? In that case, fixed

Otherwise, all fixed Thanks

Overdose

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-18T12:51:19+00:00

Professor Gila wrote:
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from p/6252515

If you were me, i would like to:

The Cup
-00:36:523 (2) - Maybe you should drag this to the right to make it closer to slider 00:35:696 (1) and object 00:37:351 (1) Ok, move it.

-00:43:971 (1) - the case is kinda the same as above, but drag to the left closer to 00:44:696 (2) , or put it on the middle (optional, plus flip it horizontally [ctrl + h]) I think it's ok because distance btw that is same 00:45:627 (1,2) - , 00:47:696 (3,4) - so not change.

-00:45:627 (1) - same as above (but without ctrl + h) same as above.

-00:47:282 (1,2,3) - drag these to the right to make 00:47:282 (1) closer to end of slider 00:46:351 (2) same as above.

-00:48:006 (4) - i don't seem i prefer sharp slider for cup diff, i feel i find it requires player to use dash, so i suggest you to rotate it 45 degree clockwise, based on playfield centre, then drag this to the right a bit Change a bit.

-01:31:144 (1) - i don't know but maybe you'd like to remove the spinner here? Ok change.

-01:42:627 (4) - the same case as 00:48:006 (4), but based on selection centre I think it's ok, not change.

The Salad
-00:20:799 (1) - maybe you should make this closer (make prev less than 1.74x) so new players wouldn't feel to rough to jump I don't want it to jump. not change.

-00:39:834 (3) - drag this to the right by make it closer a bit to 00:39:420 (2) | yet i find it slightly farther for 290 bpm... change.

-00:43:971 (1) - ctrl + g this, then drag this to the left a bit? i find it somewhat rough to jump... yes i want this to jump because it look big sound so not change.

-00:50:592 (1) - hmmm maybe you should drag this to the left (make it closer to 00:50:385 (4) and also making its prev less than 2.05x) I think it's ok when compare with 00:30:523 (4,1) -

-01:00:523 (1) - same case as above... same as above.

-01:20:385 (1) - i can suggest you to make its prev to 1.60x by dragging it to the right If a distance is low i think player will confuse it will dash or not so I not change for make sure it dash for them.

-01:22:040 (1) - same as above, but to the left, and make its prev to 1.67x same as too.

-01:31:144 (1) - the case is the same as this spinner on cup diff Change.

Platttterrrrrr
-00:16:351 (3) - ctrl + g this. i find it somewhat sudden just to jump to 00:16:661 (4) without hyper I think it's ok because the distance btw it is 1.0x.

-00:17:489 (1) - well, drag this to the left (to make its prev less than 1.48x, at least at 1.30x I want it to dash so not change.

-00:48:937 (1) - i think i find it somewhat afar from 00:49:661 (2) so will you drag this to the left a bit closer to 00:49:661 (2) ? Ok move a bit.

Raiiiiinnnnn
first of all, nailed it ;w; so most part seem fine to me but, *0*

-00:23:696 (3) - i highly suggest to make this closer to 00:23:902 (4) change.

-00:42:730 (3) - i highly suggest to drag this to the right to make 00:42:730 (3) and 00:42:523 (2) has hyper If have Hdash all of 00:42:523 (2,3,4,5) - will Hdash all so it too hard so not change.

Miracle
hmmm, i may say the diff is theorically FC / SS able so, ALL IS GOOD Wow thank you xD

well, that's all i can mod

ugh, the HIGH bpm seem had given me so much pressure to play ):

will you stop map eroge song please ;w; , i feel kinda too allergic now ;w;

Thank you so much <3

and UPDATE ALL

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Ollapeu 2017-09-21T16:23:56+00:00

Hello! Mod as requested.

General stuff:

Difficulty Spread: Platter's hp is currently 4, I recommend to change it to 5, same goes for Rain, 5 -> 6.
BG: 1020x596 seems to be an unusual size, I wasn't able to find anything about bg sizes in osu! If any rules changed during my hiatus, I'm sorry for pointing that out.

Cup

00:25:765 (1,2) - The distance between these 2 objects is a little too big, also the previous pattern looks exactly the same and it has slightly smaller distance. I would suggest to follow the previous pattern, so (2) = x:152
01:31:144 (2) - Imo it's a bit too close to (1). You could easily make it look better with x:304.
01:40:971 (2) - Same as in the first point ^.
01:44:799 (1) - Again x:264 to make it look better. It might have looked even better if you changed the shape (symmetrical). It's up to you.

Salad

Overall just by playing the distance feels a bit too big. I would suggest you to reduce the distance. For example: 00:18:730 (3,4,1). Don't get me wrong, I had fun playing that, but new players might have problems reading that spacing. It doesn't have to be such a big change, going from x328 to x:320 would be totally fine.

Besides that:
00:08:070 (3) - Wouldn't you like to highlight that sound here by adding a short 1/4 slider

Check it out

01:44:799 (3) - Since it's Salad u can actually add more notes, but u added the same pattern as it's in Cup. My advice is to replace the slider into the shorter one and then add a note at the end (click). I think it will match the rhythm perfectly.

Platter

00:02:776 (1,1) - There is a missing note between them.
00:04:541 (1,2,1) - I don't understand why you put a note here, but in 00:08:423 (1,1) and 00:10:187 (1,1) you didn't. ^
00:07:364 (2) - That piano should be highlighted. What about adding 2 notes at the of the slider?

click

01:10:247 (3,1) - As someone told me a whille go, 1/4 hyperdashes like these aren't allowed anymore in Platter.
01:18:109 (4,1) - ^
01:31:144 (3) - U can clearly hear 1/4 notes in the background, I would suggest you to replace the slider to notes to follow the music properly, I mean it's up to you since you decided to stick to the vocal in this case.

Rain

00:02:776 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2) - The whole section is basically almost the same as it's in Platter, so the same things to point out as well.
I couldn't find anything else, such a good Rain, the flow is amazing! Good job

Lumi's Overdose

00:07:364 (3) - Same as it was in other diffs, imo the piano part should be highlighted, so I would suggest to add notes after the slider.
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda ugly, (3) = ctrl+h, ctrl+j and x: 336.
00:12:658 (5) - What about making it more movable? A rounder shape could fix it.
00:36:523 (1) - I don't like the flow here, you can easily solve the problem doing ctrl+h and x: 120.
00:38:178 (3,4) - You're missing a hdash here as u added it in every single similar pattern in ur map (that follows the vocal).
01:03:834 (6) - Maybe a bit rounder shape? (click)
01:05:489 (3) - ^
The rest is fine.

Miracle

01:03:006 (1) - The flow would be way better if you ctrl+h and move the slider at the same position x: 416.

Wow, the flow is just perfect. I'm not an advanced player, but I was still able to play the map without any issues.

Good luck, I hope it helps.

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-22T14:36:03+00:00

Ollapeu wrote:
Hello! Mod as requested.

General stuff:

Difficulty Spread: Platter's hp is currently 4, I recommend to change it to 5, same goes for Rain, 5 -> 6. I think it's ok because HP of all diff increment by 1
BG: 1020x596 seems to be an unusual size, I wasn't able to find anything about bg sizes in osu! If any rules changed during my hiatus, I'm sorry for pointing that out. Ohh thank you I forget it xD

Cup

00:25:765 (1,2) - The distance between these 2 objects is a little too big, also the previous pattern looks exactly the same and it has slightly smaller distance. I would suggest to follow the previous pattern, so (2) = x:152 Change it to near. (152 is y xD)
01:31:144 (2) - Imo it's a bit too close to (1). You could easily make it look better with x:304. Change.
01:40:971 (2) - Same as in the first point ^. Change.
01:44:799 (1) - Again x:264 to make it look better. It might have looked even better if you changed the shape (symmetrical). It's up to you. Change.

Salad

Overall just by playing the distance feels a bit too big. I would suggest you to reduce the distance. For example: 00:18:730 (3,4,1). Don't get me wrong, I had fun playing that, but new players might have problems reading that spacing. It doesn't have to be such a big change, going from x328 to x:320 would be totally fine. I think it's ok. but if BN is complain about this i will change.

Besides that:
00:08:070 (3) - Wouldn't you like to highlight that sound here by adding a short 1/4 slider It's look nice but i think it suddenly note for players. not change.
Check it out
01:44:799 (3) - Since it's Salad u can actually add more notes, but u added the same pattern as it's in Cup. My advice is to replace the slider into the shorter one and then add a note at the end (click). I think it will match the rhythm perfectly. , but add a dash on this.

Platter

00:02:776 (1,1) - There is a missing note between them. I don't add ;w; sorry. because i think the sound look low.
00:04:541 (1,2,1) - I don't understand why you put a note here, but in 00:08:423 (1,1) and 00:10:187 (1,1) you didn't. ^ In my I think it's low sound and it unnes to have note on that.
00:07:364 (2) - That piano should be highlighted. What about adding 2 notes at the of the slider? Not add I think it look confuse for player @_@
click
01:10:247 (3,1) - As someone told me a whille go, 1/4 hyperdashes like these aren't allowed anymore in Platter. I not sure it's a 1/2 because it's high bpm so i want BN to check it for sure.
01:18:109 (4,1) - ^ ^^^
01:31:144 (3) - U can clearly hear 1/4 notes in the background, I would suggest you to replace the slider to notes to follow the music properly, I mean it's up to you since you decided to stick to the vocal in this case. Change.

Rain

00:02:776 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2) - The whole section is basically almost the same as it's in Platter, so the same things to point out as well. Change.
I couldn't find anything else, such a good Rain, the flow is amazing! Good job

Miracle

01:03:006 (1) - The flow would be way better if you ctrl+h and move the slider at the same position x: 416. On this i want it antiflow for a miss :v. not change.

Wow, the flow is just perfect. I'm not an advanced player, but I was still able to play the map without any issues.

Good luck, I hope it helps.

Thank you so much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-09-22T14:39:21+00:00

Ollapeu wrote:
Lumi's Overdose

00:07:364 (3) - Same as it was in other diffs, imo the piano part should be highlighted, so I would suggest to add notes after the slider.
>>> I think the piano itself isn't strong enough to place a note
00:08:423 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda ugly, (3) = ctrl+h, ctrl+j and x: 336.
>>> I think it's fine, If I change then it will be too forced to dash to the next note
00:12:658 (5) - What about making it more movable? A rounder shape could fix it.
00:36:523 (1) - I don't like the flow here, you can easily solve the problem doing ctrl+h and x: 120.
00:38:178 (3,4) - You're missing a hdash here as u added it in every single similar pattern in ur map (that follows the vocal).
01:03:834 (6) - Maybe a bit rounder shape? (click)
01:05:489 (3) - ^
The rest is fine.
Otherwise, all fixed Thanks

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Version:Lumi's Overdose
Source:恋する少女と想いのキセキ～Poupee de souhaits～
Tags:Sugar Pot Koisuru Doll opening eroge
BeatmapID:1369600
BeatmapSetID:601392

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.4
OverallDifficulty:9.3
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:2.25
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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264,248,68592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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rew0825

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Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-22T14:59:24+00:00

UPDATE ALL!

BoberOfDarkness

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Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-09-22T16:23:59+00:00

Hey Ollapeu asked me to clarify if dash at 01:10:247 (3,1) - is rankable or not

So basically what's the wiki says: you can use higher snapped hyperdashes if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. Here you got around 103/104 ms between objects so all 1/2 hypers at this BPM are unrankable.

Ollapeu

192 posts

Joined November 2012

Ollapeu 2017-09-22T16:30:20+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Hey Ollapeu asked me to clarify if dash at 01:10:247 (3,1) - is rankable or not

So basically what's the wiki says: you can use higher snapped hyperdashes if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. Here you got around 103/104 ms between objects so all 1/2 hypers at this BPM are unrankable.

Thanks for claryfying, btw. I called them 1/4 in my mod, my bad, the high bpm was kinda misleading.

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-09-24T14:29:36+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Hey Ollapeu asked me to clarify if dash at 01:10:247 (3,1) - is rankable or not

So basically what's the wiki says: you can use higher snapped hyperdashes if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. Here you got around 103/104 ms between objects so all 1/2 hypers at this BPM are unrankable.

Ok, Thank you for your suggestion <3. Change.

GiGas

152 posts

Joined October 2015

GiGas 2017-10-04T01:00:49+00:00

GiGas Modding Q

⬛🔵 Blue for suggestions: Just little suggestions. Nothing wrong with it.
⬛🔴 Red for little warnings : Is fine but might want to fix it.
⬛ ⚫ Black for unrankable :Fix it if your map wants to get ranked
⬛ Ⓜ️ For my comments for the map or just personal things!

Cup

Cup Modding

Ⓜ️While looking at the map i felt like the cup diff was a bit too harsh. I felt like the repeat slider needed to be angled smaller and the half circle sliders needed to be angled smaller too. Since its a pretty fast bpm I would prefer you to fix all the angles in a bit smaller. If you disagree with this statement you can just ignore this Cup mod.

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:16:661 (1) -since it shares the shares similar sounds with 00:17:075 (2) - how about making the sliders only move to the right for these two instead of making the first slider a bit to the left then the next slider to the right. Its cup so i don't think you should focus that much on different rhythms of the song.

⬛ 01:15:420 (1,2) - Vocal says something 3 times. A repeat slider may be used in that case instead of a full slider.

⬛01:44:799 (1) -x=240 feels more comfortable to play

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛00:17:489 (1) - I am probably gonna say lots of things about this kind of repeat slider in the cup diff but as I mentioned early i think this is a bit too large for cup players. I would prefer x=312. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the other repeat sliders too.

⬛00:24:834 (2) - This kind of pattern would be a bit too harsh for cup. I would like to see a tilted version of the slider that I just mentioned. For example 00:23:178 (4) - is a good way you can change the slider to. It has less movement involved which fits cup. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the half circle sliders too.

⬛From the start of the kiai using those spaced repeat slider and the half circle may be used since its the drop.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛I saw some things in the forum but you fixed them so you are good to go!

Salad

Salad Modding

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:09:128 (2) - There's a pretty big gap but the note barely moves meanwhile all the other ones that had a big gap behind moved pretty far away. I suggest moving this note far like the others.

⬛ 01:44:799 (3,4) - Since you ended at the piano sound, using this timing would be good.
Try deleting the hitsound at the slider end (3) and add a whistle hitsound to emphasize the piano sound.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:27:420 (1) - This repeat slider is pretty non spaced than the other repeat sliders such as 00:25:765 (1). Space it please.

⬛ 00:39:834 (3) - Without using the dash key you can catch this note with the semi-edge of the catcher. I don't think this part needs a dash so I think a note placement of x=200 would be good.

⬛ 01:28:454 (4,1) - Is this dash necessary? I listened to the vocal a bit and her pitch goes down then goes back up at 01:29:385 (3). I think a dash would fit at that part better instead of 01:28:454 (4,1).

⬛ 01:41:902 (1) - same mod as 00:27:420 (1)

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Platter

Platter Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 01:10:247 (3) - It is a quiet part. I think a dash would fit instead of a hyper fruit.

⬛01:22:040 (1) - How about adding a Hyper fruit somewhere to emphasize this note. When you used hyper fruits it was mostly when the guitar had an strong beat. I hear this at the part that I mentioned but there is no Hyper fruit.

⬛01:38:592 (1) - After the Hyper jump at 01:38:384 (6) I think it is important to make it flow. I'm pretty sure platter players would have a hard time trying to change the flow after a hyper jump. I would be expecting those patterns in rain~overdose diff.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:34:040 (1,2) -This pattern feels really random. When this type of song pattern came out you used a 1 2 1 2 beat pattern dividing the notes. But this is 1 123. It just adds a weird flow change. And the shape of 00:34:868 (4,5) - is different using 123 1. Please change this.

⬛00:50:592 (1,2), 00:51:420 (4,5) - ^^^^^

⬛01:02:799 (4) - Is this hyper fruit needed? I don't hear anything that would really fit.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Rain

Rain Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ Start ~ 00:15:834- I think you can use different timing patterns for sound variation instead of Slider+1 note or Slider+Slider.

⬛ 00:48:523 (5,6,7,8) - The song intensity is increasing but the spacing's seem to decrease then suddenly there's a hyper jump. I think you should slowly increase the spacing's then put a hyper jump.

⬛01:37:971 (2) - Since the back melody sound gets big over there a hyper fruit jump may fit.

⬛01:28:454 (6) - I don't really hear anything to emphasize the beat therefore a hyper fruit would not be a good choice in that part.

⬛01:44:592 (2) - Instead of making this note a hyper fruit make only 01:44:799 (3,4) hyper fruits so you can emphasize the piano beat at the end.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:50:592 (1,2) -I've mentioned some "hey use same notes of same beat" but I think you over use this pattern. It kills the creativeness of the map. Try to find another pattern.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot!

Lumi's Overdose

Lumi's Overdose Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 00:43:351 (2,3) - I see why you put a counter flow slider jump at 00:42:523 (2,3). But i cannot see why you put it at 00:43:351 (2,3). Unless there is a special reason i think making it flow would be better.

⬛01:00:109 (2,3) - Vocal voice goes down a bit. Song is not really intense. A dash would fit better instead of an hyper jump.

⬛01:03:420 (2,3,4,5) - Try changing the pattern to this for better flow. I don't think this needs to suddenly have a counter flow.

⬛01:12:109 (1,2) - I think you are fine without emphasizing this part if you did not at 01:10:454 (1,2) which is pretty similar except the fact that 01:12:109 (1,2) sounds bigger. I don't think it sounds that big.

⬛01:38:178 (3,4,1) - using notes instead of sliders + making the spacing decreased will represent the song pretty good in my opinion. Or try to space it down a bit by bit.

⬛01:45:006 (6,7) - I think a hyper jump over there is a bit over emphasizing. How about changing that to a 1/2 slider?

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛-00:52:868 (4) - This feels like an unnecessary hyper fruit.

⬛01:22:040 (1,2) - The higher pitched vocal is at (1) but the note is emphasized on (2). Change (2) to (1) and (1) to (2) please.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot!

Miracle

Miracle Mod

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛01:03:006 (1,2,3,4,5) -Changing the pattern like this will make it flow even better. + I don't think separating the slider and the 4 notes is really necessary.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛01:02:489 (2,3,4,5,6) -Are those hyper jumps necessary? I don't think it really fits since there's nothing to emphasize.

⬛01:31:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A very random pattern that does not fit. I personally think before the kiai it is a stage to make people get ready for the drop. Therefore introducing patterns but not that hard. In kiai's i believe that you need to use patterns that you used in early stages that the players are used to seeing in the map but harder since its the drop. Not a complete random pattern. I suggest you using this pattern.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️This map is so fun like holy I love this map. Nice work!

Ⓜ️ My comments!
This is my 2nd CTB mod! This map was really fun to mod but it also took me about 4 hours lol. I really hope this gets ranked. It deserves it. Only kudosu me if the mod actually helped.

Modding Q from: p/6278673/

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-04T12:03:32+00:00

- G i G a s - wrote:

GiGas Modding Q
⬛🔵 Blue for suggestions: Just little suggestions. Nothing wrong with it.
⬛🔴 Red for little warnings : Is fine but might want to fix it.
⬛ ⚫ Black for unrankable :Fix it if your map wants to get ranked
⬛ Ⓜ️ For my comments for the map or just personal things!

Cup
Cup Modding
Ⓜ️While looking at the map i felt like the cup diff was a bit too harsh. I felt like the repeat slider needed to be angled smaller and the half circle sliders needed to be angled smaller too. Since its a pretty fast bpm I would prefer you to fix all the angles in a bit smaller. If you disagree with this statement you can just ignore this Cup mod.

🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:16:661 (1) -since it shares the shares similar sounds with 00:17:075 (2) - how about making the sliders only move to the right for these two instead of making the first slider a bit to the left then the next slider to the right. Its cup so i don't think you should focus that much on different rhythms of the song.
Look good but for now I don't want to change. Keep.
⬛ 01:15:420 (1,2) - Vocal says something 3 times. A repeat slider may be used in that case instead of a full slider. I think it unnecessary and look suddenly on cup.

⬛01:44:799 (1) -x=240 feels more comfortable to play Move it.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛00:17:489 (1) - I am probably gonna say lots of things about this kind of repeat slider in the cup diff but as I mentioned early i think this is a bit too large for cup players. I would prefer x=312. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the other repeat sliders too. Change.

⬛00:24:834 (2) - This kind of pattern would be a bit too harsh for cup. I would like to see a tilted version of the slider that I just mentioned. For example 00:23:178 (4) - is a good way you can change the slider to. It has less movement involved which fits cup. If you decide to fix this think about fixing all the half circle sliders too. I don't change because distance between this and next note is look big.

⬛From the start of the kiai using those spaced repeat slider and the half circle may be used since its the drop. Ok change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛I saw some things in the forum but you fixed them so you are good to go!

Salad
Salad Modding
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛00:09:128 (2) - There's a pretty big gap but the note barely moves meanwhile all the other ones that had a big gap behind moved pretty far away. I suggest moving this note far like the others. Change.

⬛ 01:44:799 (3,4) - Since you ended at the piano sound, using this timing would be good. Change.
Try deleting the hitsound at the slider end (3) and add a whistle hitsound to emphasize the piano sound.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:27:420 (1) - This repeat slider is pretty non spaced than the other repeat sliders such as 00:25:765 (1). Space it please. Change.

⬛ 00:39:834 (3) - Without using the dash key you can catch this note with the semi-edge of the catcher. I don't think this part needs a dash so I think a note placement of x=200 would be good. I want it to dash because the melody is strong.

⬛ 01:28:454 (4,1) - Is this dash necessary? I listened to the vocal a bit and her pitch goes down then goes back up at 01:29:385 (3). I think a dash would fit at that part better instead of 01:28:454 (4,1). I think it ok. before this note, All dash note is flow to dash but this is antiflow so if have one probably no problem.

⬛ 01:41:902 (1) - same mod as 00:27:420 (1) Change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Platter

Platter Mod
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 01:10:247 (3) - It is a quiet part. I think a dash would fit instead of a hyper fruit. Change.

⬛01:22:040 (1) - How about adding a Hyper fruit somewhere to emphasize this note. When you used hyper fruits it was mostly when the guitar had an strong beat. I hear this at the part that I mentioned but there is no Hyper fruit. Change.

⬛01:38:592 (1) - After the Hyper jump at 01:38:384 (6) I think it is important to make it flow. I'm pretty sure platter players would have a hard time trying to change the flow after a hyper jump. I would be expecting those patterns in rain~overdose diff. Move it to near a bit.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:34:040 (1,2) -This pattern feels really random. When this type of song pattern came out you used a 1 2 1 2 beat pattern dividing the notes. But this is 1 123. It just adds a weird flow change. And the shape of 00:34:868 (4,5) - is different using 123 1. Please change this. Sorry I don't understand this @_@.

⬛00:50:592 (1,2), 00:51:420 (4,5) - ^^^^^ ^^ T^T

⬛01:02:799 (4) - Is this hyper fruit needed? I don't hear anything that would really fit. Change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Rain
Rain Mod
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ Start ~ 00:15:834- I think you can use different timing patterns for sound variation instead of Slider+1 note or Slider+Slider. I use that on Miracle so I think on the diff is easier the note should less

⬛ 00:48:523 (5,6,7,8) - The song intensity is increasing but the spacing's seem to decrease then suddenly there's a hyper jump. I think you should slowly increase the spacing's then put a hyper jump. It's increase 0.0

⬛01:37:971 (2) - Since the back melody sound gets big over there a hyper fruit jump may fit. The sound is not strong when compare with 01:44:592 (2) - so Not change.

⬛01:28:454 (6) - I don't really hear anything to emphasize the beat therefore a hyper fruit would not be a good choice in that part. For the pattern. Not change.

⬛01:44:592 (2) - Instead of making this note a hyper fruit make only 01:44:799 (3,4) hyper fruits so you can emphasize the piano beat at the end. No, I think on 01:44:592 (2) - is strong voice. Not change.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛ 00:50:592 (1,2) -I've mentioned some "hey use same notes of same beat" but I think you over use this pattern. It kills the creativeness of the map. Try to find another pattern. I will try.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot!

Miracle
Miracle Mod
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛01:03:006 (1,2,3,4,5) -Changing the pattern like this will make it flow even better. + I don't think separating the slider and the 4 notes is really necessary. On all mod is have suggestion on this ;w; so Change.

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛01:02:489 (2,3,4,5,6) -Are those hyper jumps necessary? I don't think it really fits since there's nothing to emphasize. I think it's not a big problem. Not change.

⬛01:31:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A very random pattern that does not fit. I personally think before the kiai it is a stage to make people get ready for the drop. Therefore introducing patterns but not that hard. In kiai's i believe that you need to use patterns that you used in early stages that the players are used to seeing in the map but harder since its the drop. Not a complete random pattern. I suggest you using this pattern. I think 1/4 is not good for this. Now I'm waiting for a BN look on this. Now not change.

⚫ Black for unrankable

⬛Can't see any!

Ⓜ️This map is so fun like holy I love this map. Nice work!

Ⓜ️ My comments!
This is my 2nd CTB mod! This map was really fun to mod but it also took me about 4 hours lol. I really hope this gets ranked. It deserves it. Only kudosu me if the mod actually helped. Ohh!! 4 hours @_@

Modding Q from: p/6278673/

Thank you so much. <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-10-04T12:36:48+00:00

- G i G a s - wrote:

Lumi's Overdose
🔵 Blue for suggestions

⬛ 00:43:351 (2,3) - I see why you put a counter flow slider jump at 00:42:523 (2,3). But i cannot see why you put it at 00:43:351 (2,3). Unless there is a special reason i think making it flow would be better. >>Agreed with that somehow I put it cuz of my likes though (Fixed)

⬛01:00:109 (2,3) - Vocal voice goes down a bit. Song is not really intense. A dash would fit better instead of an hyper jump. >> Okay, Fixed

⬛01:03:420 (2,3,4,5) - Try changing the pattern to this for better flow. I don't think this needs to suddenly have a counter flow. >> I agreed with the part that I put unnecessary Hdash on antiflow but I fix the pattern myself

⬛01:12:109 (1,2) - I think you are fine without emphasizing this part if you did not at 01:10:454 (1,2) which is pretty similar except the fact that 01:12:109 (1,2) sounds bigger. I don't think it sounds that big. >> I don't think this sounds strange but I fix anyway

⬛01:38:178 (3,4,1) - using notes instead of sliders + making the spacing decreased will represent the song pretty good in my opinion. Or try to space it down a bit by bit. >> Move a little closer

⬛01:45:006 (6,7) - I think a hyper jump over there is a bit over emphasizing. How about changing that to a 1/2 slider?>> I wanted this hyper to be a finisher for the song so I don't fix it

🔴 Red for little warnings

⬛-00:52:868 (4) - This feels like an unnecessary hyper fruit. >> Reduced the distance

⬛01:22:040 (1,2) - The higher pitched vocal is at (1) but the note is emphasized on (2). Change (2) to (1) and (1) to (2) please. >> Actually , this could make the sudden antiflow after hyper so I don't fix it

Ⓜ️ Extremely fun map. I like it a lot! Thanks for the compliment!

I also fix some patterns that looks weird by myself

เย้

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-04T17:35:30+00:00

UPDATE ALL!

LiousPL

231 posts

Joined February 2015

LiousPL 2017-10-13T12:08:14+00:00

Requested mod.

[Miracle]

00:24:006 (6,1) - Maybe do some longer hdash here for a characteristic sound? For example take 1 to x:136, later u can do the same operation with 2 if you like'd it.
00:26:489 (1) - Change a bit curve of this slider, maybe take the end of the slider to x:112, that operation will add some flow in this moment.
00:29:799 (1) - There's characteristic sound, maybe do something a bit more interesting here? Like change curve a bit more here, i prefer here something like
this.
01:03:109 - U missed a note here.
01:18:316 (5) - Do something crazy at this moment, maybe do some wave curve or something, this will be interesting with the sound like this. For exemple something like this will be looking fun.
[Lumi's Overdose]
00:22:247 (3,4) - A bit more movement here for keep flow, and there's not any good sounds for do that flat pattern.
00:24:109 (1) - There's a strange drum hit, do something more interesting here (for example add more curve).
00:30:316 (4) - The same reason ^, try to do something more fit to song, like here u have the same sound on 3 so u can do the same shape of the slider here, click.
00:33:006 (4,5) - This is not good for catching those objects. Catcher must to do weird rush to the right site. More fit will be if u are use a combination Ctrl+H on 5,6, after do this catcher will do break in flow already in the right moment.
00:37:351 (1,2) - Some anti-flow here? Like that.
00:38:178 (3,4) - ^
00:38:696 , 00:38:747 - Missing notes here.
00:58:558 , 00:58:609 - ^
01:01:040 - ^
01:01:868 - ^
01:03:109 - ^?
01:19:351 (4) - Take this to x:240 for add some more flow at this moment.
01:19:765 (2,3) - That flow break here is really hard to catch, mu sugestion is curve 3a more, or take away a bit from 2
01:22:040 (1,2) - Again that weird movement, at 1 have started a new combo with vocal sound, so why not add movement in this combo section?
01:33:213 (2,3,4) - Already in this movement this movement is fit a bit more than others, so you can keep it, but im prefer to take 3 to the right site.
[Rain]
00:23:902 (4) - Change a little shape of it for better follow the flow here.
00:49:971 (4,5) - Move it closer to each one becouse this is hard to catch.
01:38:385 (4) - I think u can change this shape a little bit too.

Other diffs is clearly to play, so i don't expect from them too much, gl

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-14T03:12:39+00:00

LiousPL wrote:
Requested mod.

[Miracle]
00:24:006 (6,1) - Maybe do some longer hdash here for a characteristic sound? For example take 1 to x:136, later u can do the same operation with 2 if you like'd it. Now I think I will change a stream all. Look it have a promblem.
00:26:489 (1) - Change a bit curve of this slider, maybe take the end of the slider to x:112, that operation will add some flow in this moment. Move to x:120
00:29:799 (1) - There's characteristic sound, maybe do something a bit more interesting here? Like change curve a bit more here, i prefer here something like
this. Change.
01:03:109 - U missed a note here. I use a slider I can't add ;w;.
01:18:316 (5) - Do something crazy at this moment, maybe do some wave curve or something, this will be interesting with the sound like this. For exemple something like this will be looking fun. It's look hard a bit and it's antiflow I don't like. Sorry, Not change.
[Rain]
00:23:902 (4) - Change a little shape of it for better follow the flow here. Not change. I want to keep the pattern when 00:30:316 (3,4) - I add a hdash.
00:49:971 (4,5) - Move it closer to each one becouse this is hard to catch. Change.
01:38:385 (4) - I think u can change this shape a little bit too. Same as the first.

Other diffs is clearly to play, so i don't expect from them too much, gl

Thank you very much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-10-14T09:50:20+00:00

LiousPL wrote:
[Lumi's Overdose]
00:22:247 (3,4) - A bit more movement here for keep flow, and there's not any good sounds for do that flat pattern. >>Fixed
00:24:109 (1) - There's a strange drum hit, do something more interesting here (for example add more curve)
>>Umm.. I don't know what do you mean about drum hit but I changed the pattern so it won't be repititive one
00:30:316 (4) - The same reason ^, try to do something more fit to song, like here u have the same sound on 3 so u can do the same shape of the slider here, click. >> Fixed as you said, but in my own pattern
00:33:006 (4,5) - This is not good for catching those objects. Catcher must to do weird rush to the right site. More fit will be if u are use a combination Ctrl+H on 5,6, after do this catcher will do break in flow already in the right moment. >> I changed (5) into 1/2 slider instead
00:37:351 (1,2) - Some anti-flow here? Like that. >> No, It's somehow too forced for a low sound(I have changed that already from previous mod)
00:38:178 (3,4) - ^ >> Uh..huh changed a little
00:38:696 , 00:38:747 - Missing notes here. >>Added
00:58:558 , 00:58:609 - ^ >>Added
01:01:040 - ^ >>Added
01:01:868 - ^ >>Added
01:03:109 - ^? >>Nope
01:19:351 (4) - Take this to x:240 for add some more flow at this moment. >>Fixed
01:19:765 (2,3) - That flow break here is really hard to catch, mu sugestion is curve 3a more, or take away a bit from 2 >>Fixed
01:22:040 (1,2) - Again that weird movement, at 1 have started a new combo with vocal sound, so why not add movement in this combo section? >>Fixed
01:33:213 (2,3,4) - Already in this movement this movement is fit a bit more than others, so you can keep it, but im prefer to take 3 to the right site. >> Nah, that would be even more weirder

Thanks for the mod!

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-14T10:28:06+00:00

@-Luminate อ่าวกรรม xD

UPDATE ALL!

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-10-17T01:00:01+00:00

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General]

Difficulty Spread : Not sure why cup has ar5,6, but I think it could be 6 so that it's more readable?
Background Size : ok
Unsnapped objects : none AFAIK, but Miracle diff finishes 1 ms earlier than all other diffs (it finishes at 01:45:160 - ). Dunno why this is the case, but you might as well take a look at it.
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : nope
Metadata Issues : add luminate to tags on all diffs
Timeline Issues : You could add a note 01:45:161 here on Platter so that it's consistent with Cup and Salad? Same with Rain/Overdose diffs
Combo Colors : Lumi's Overdose diff doesn't have any combocolours, while the rest of the set does. Please fix this.
Unused Hitsounds : none
Hitsounds Issues : You could crop the length of normal-sliderticks 1 to 3 so that they occupy even less space than they actually do? idk, rest is ok
Unused Files / Other : All diffs except Miracle have widescreen storyboard turned on without a storyboard present. Not that it is of much importance, but if you care about it you could turn them off or something?

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Cup]

General

One thing I noticed is that you always use similarly shaped curves for the 5/2 sliders used in instrumental parts of the song (such as 00:46:351 (2) - 00:44:696 (2) - 00:49:661 (4) - ) with the exception of 00:48:006 (4) - this slider here that plays as an almost straight line in gameplay. It became really repetitive for me really quick, and I think cup players will find it as repetitive as I did too. Just a suggestion, but you could vary the shapes of them in between curves, straight lines, zigzags or whatever else that offers variety on their shapes.

[

Salad]

General

00:39:834 (3) - Move to x:136? Makes dash clearer

[

Platter]

General

Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other. Platters should serve as an introduction to hyperdashing, meaning strong hypers and hypers (e.g. 1.5x above the trigger distance) and hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used. 1/3 and 1/4 hyperdashes may be used singularly (not in conjunction with other dashes or hyperdashes) if the BPM is less than 120.
00:23:902 (6,1) - Hyperdash into an antiflowing 1/2 repeat slider, don't really think it's ok even if the whole set is kinda harder than your usual mapset.
Would consider nerfing it to a more accessible pattern making 00:23:592 (3,4,5,6) - all these go in a straight line to the left, like this: pattern and then ctrl+g'ing 00:24:109 (1) -
00:42:937 (4,5) - 1/2 hyperdash on 290bpm == 1/4 hyperdash on 145bpm, which is unrankable for a platter. Other instances of these are: 01:19:144 (3,4) - 01:20:799 (2,3) - 01:22:454 (2,3) - 01:24:109 (2,3) - 01:25:765 (2,3) - 01:27:420 (2,3) - 01:29:075 (2,3) - (Basically the whole kiai)
01:20:178 (6,1) - This hyper requires a bit too much control over the catcher at this point, which isn't really the case when it comes to platter players. a.k.a. antiflow hyper, you could move 01:20:178 (6) - to x:440 and then ctrl+h and ctrl+g 01:20:385 (1) - so that the hyper is a lot more flowing and easy to play (you're still gonna need to remove the 1/2 hypers on the whole kiai because of the 1/4 hyperdash rule anyway so yeah big changes)
01:21:834 (5,1) - Same as above.
01:23:489 (5,1) - ^ (gonna stop marking these now, I think you got the point)
01:38:384 (6,1) - Same as the first point made here (I think this is a copypaste of 00:17:489 - this section onwards so yeah, same applies here)

Basically nerf the 1/2 hyperdashes into simple dashes and the antiflow hyperdashes as well and this can be perfectly rankable.

[

Rain]

General

00:02:776 (1,1,1,1) - It strikes me odd that all these sliders are going over the sound clearly audible 00:03:482 - here, for example, instead finishing a beat ahead of it even though you decided to map it on Salad. I think that you could also map it on this diff as well, since it's already the rain diff and a bit more of density doesn't really do that much anyway. For example, you could finish 00:02:776 (1) - this slider at x:416 and add a note at x:349 so that it remains the same kind of movement even though you're using a slider and a note.
00:23:696 (3,4,1) - I think this kind of movement is a bit too complicated even for a rain. I get you're trying to emphasize the highly-pitched, different compared to the rest of the sounds of the background with harder patterns, but at least you could make 00:23:902 (4) - horizontal pointing to the left? More so considering that the hyperdash to 00:24:109 (1) - is an antiflowing one.
01:12:937 (3,4) - You could move these to x:80 to keep symmetry with 01:12:109 (1,2) - these and make it look more pleasant.
01:22:454 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - I think all these are really similar to the point they almost look like carbon copies of each other, and becomes really repetitive IMO. You could vary the shapes of these patterns a bit, for example, moving 01:25:040 (5) - to x:480 so that it creates a curve with 01:24:937 (4) - , ctrl+g 01:25:351 (1) - placing it at x:200, ctrl+g 01:25:765 (2) - placing it at x:294 and 01:26:075 (3) - ctrl+g this placing it at x:200. This makes them so that they're pointing to the sides of the playfield instead of to the centre and gives the kiai more variety IMO. Try it out and tell me what you think! :>
01:38:178 (3,4,1) - Same as the second point.

[

Lumi's Overdose]

General

00:10:187 (5,1) - Swap NCs, downbeat (big white tick) is on (5), not (1). You should apply this logic to all other NCs you find that have similar issues to this one. I've also noticed a lot of other senseless NCs on the rest of the diff as well, such as 00:33:627 (1) - that only has 3 fruits until the next NC and could as well be removed completely without losing anything,
00:37:144 (2) - You could instead ctrl+g this slider and place it at x:320 so that it's more comfortable to catch.
01:22:247 (2) - I think you could tilt this a bit more to the left horizontally, like this: slider so that it's more apparent that you require to make a quick double left-right movement to catch it whole and also doesn't make the catcher stutter into a complete stop to catch both sliderhead and sliderend.
01:25:661 (2) - This slider ends on a pretty prominent sound and makes the hyperdash into 01:25:868 (3) - play oddly because you're basically emphasizing the sound at the head of (3), which isn't really strong at all. This whole issue is caused because you decided to add a NC 01:25:454 (1) - here on a red tick instead of on a downbeat (again, big white tick) in which 01:25:351 (3) - is. tl;dr: add a NC 01:25:351 (3) - here, remove NC 01:25:454 (1) - here and remap the whole 01:25:351 (3,1,2,3) - section with this in mind (this issue applies in similar other sections as well, but I'll let you find them on your own while you redo the map's NCs applying what I've said on the first point)

[

Miracle]

General

00:14:775 (2,3,4) - whoa whoa speedracer, the intense section hasn't started yet, why 2x distance between the ending of (2) and notes 3 and 4? Move 00:15:599 (3) - to x:288 instead.
00:58:765 (5) - There is no sound 00:58:816 - here, just turn into a normal note instead and adjust accordingly so that the hyper into 00:58:868 (1) - triggers anyway (moving 00:58:661 (4) - to x:336, 00:58:765 (5) - to x:448 and 00:58:868 (1) - to x:280 or so does the job just fine for this)

Finished. Nice set~ Good luck!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-18T05:51:26+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
mod

[ General]
Difficulty Spread : Not sure why cup has ar5,6, but I think it could be 6 so that it's more readable? In Ranking Criteria is tell AR,OD should be between 4-6 so I think this is not a problem. Not change.
Background Size : ok
Unsnapped objects : none AFAIK, but Miracle diff finishes 1 ms earlier than all other diffs (it finishes at 01:45:160 - ). Dunno why this is the case, but you might as well take a look at it. Ok, Change.
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : nope
Metadata Issues : add luminate to tags on all diffs Ohh my god I forget add name tag TwT. Add it.
Timeline Issues : You could add a note 01:45:161 here on Platter so that it's consistent with Cup and Salad? Same with Rain/Overdose diffs Ok. Change.
Combo Colors : Lumi's Overdose diff doesn't have any combocolours, while the rest of the set does. Please fix this. Fix.
Unused Hitsounds : none
Hitsounds Issues : You could crop the length of normal-sliderticks 1 to 3 so that they occupy even less space than they actually do? idk, rest is ok
Unused Files / Other : All diffs except Miracle have widescreen storyboard turned on without a storyboard present. Not that it is of much importance, but if you care about it you could turn them off or something? Forget again TwT uncheck all.

[ Cup]

General

One thing I noticed is that you always use similarly shaped curves for the 5/2 sliders used in instrumental parts of the song (such as 00:46:351 (2) - 00:44:696 (2) - 00:49:661 (4) - ) with the exception of 00:48:006 (4) - this slider here that plays as an almost straight line in gameplay. It became really repetitive for me really quick, and I think cup players will find it as repetitive as I did too. Just a suggestion, but you could vary the shapes of them in between curves, straight lines, zigzags or whatever else that offers variety on their shapes. Change.

[ Salad]

General

00:39:834 (3) - Move to x:136? Makes dash clearer Move it.

[ Platter]

General

Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other. Platters should serve as an introduction to hyperdashing, meaning strong hypers and hypers (e.g. 1.5x above the trigger distance) and hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used. 1/3 and 1/4 hyperdashes may be used singularly (not in conjunction with other dashes or hyperdashes) if the BPM is less than 120. Ohh I don't know ;;.
00:23:902 (6,1) - Hyperdash into an antiflowing 1/2 repeat slider, don't really think it's ok even if the whole set is kinda harder than your usual mapset.
Would consider nerfing it to a more accessible pattern making 00:23:592 (3,4,5,6) - all these go in a straight line to the left, like this: pattern and then ctrl+g'ing 00:24:109 (1) - Change.
00:42:937 (4,5) - 1/2 hyperdash on 290bpm == 1/4 hyperdash on 145bpm, which is unrankable for a platter. Other instances of these are: 01:19:144 (3,4) - 01:20:799 (2,3) - 01:22:454 (2,3) - 01:24:109 (2,3) - 01:25:765 (2,3) - 01:27:420 (2,3) - 01:29:075 (2,3) - (Basically the whole kiai) I will change.
01:20:178 (6,1) - This hyper requires a bit too much control over the catcher at this point, which isn't really the case when it comes to platter players. a.k.a. antiflow hyper, you could move 01:20:178 (6) - to x:440 and then ctrl+h and ctrl+g 01:20:385 (1) - so that the hyper is a lot more flowing and easy to play (you're still gonna need to remove the 1/2 hypers on the whole kiai because of the 1/4 hyperdash rule anyway so yeah big changes) Change in mind.
01:21:834 (5,1) - Same as above. ^
01:23:489 (5,1) - ^ (gonna stop marking these now, I think you got the point) ^
01:38:384 (6,1) - Same as the first point made here (I think this is a copypaste of 00:17:489 - this section onwards so yeah, same applies here) Change.
Basically nerf the 1/2 hyperdashes into simple dashes and the antiflow hyperdashes as well and this can be perfectly rankable. Ok Thanks.

[ Rain]

General

00:02:776 (1,1,1,1) - It strikes me odd that all these sliders are going over the sound clearly audible 00:03:482 - here, for example, instead finishing a beat ahead of it even though you decided to map it on Salad. I think that you could also map it on this diff as well, since it's already the rain diff and a bit more of density doesn't really do that much anyway. For example, you could finish 00:02:776 (1) - this slider at x:416 and add a note at x:349 so that it remains the same kind of movement even though you're using a slider and a note. Change on the start.
00:23:696 (3,4,1) - I think this kind of movement is a bit too complicated even for a rain. I get you're trying to emphasize the highly-pitched, different compared to the rest of the sounds of the background with harder patterns, but at least you could make 00:23:902 (4) - horizontal pointing to the left? More so considering that the hyperdash to 00:24:109 (1) - is an antiflowing one. Move this to not dash.
01:12:937 (3,4) - You could move these to x:80 to keep symmetry with 01:12:109 (1,2) - these and make it look more pleasant. Ok.
01:22:454 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - I think all these are really similar to the point they almost look like carbon copies of each other, and becomes really repetitive IMO. You could vary the shapes of these patterns a bit, for example, moving 01:25:040 (5) - to x:480 so that it creates a curve with 01:24:937 (4) - , ctrl+g 01:25:351 (1) - placing it at x:200, ctrl+g 01:25:765 (2) - placing it at x:294 and 01:26:075 (3) - ctrl+g this placing it at x:200. This makes them so that they're pointing to the sides of the playfield instead of to the centre and gives the kiai more variety IMO. Try it out and tell me what you think! :> I change it similar like you except the last I change the slider to curve a bit.
01:38:178 (3,4,1) - Same as the second point. Change.

[ Miracle]

General

00:14:775 (2,3,4) - whoa whoa speedracer, the intense section hasn't started yet, why 2x distance between the ending of (2) and notes 3 and 4? Move 00:15:599 (3) - to x:288 instead. I think it should dash but now i move it closer.
00:58:765 (5) - There is no sound 00:58:816 - here, just turn into a normal note instead and adjust accordingly so that the hyper into 00:58:868 (1) - triggers anyway (moving 00:58:661 (4) - to x:336, 00:58:765 (5) - to x:448 and 00:58:868 (1) - to x:280 or so does the job just fine for this) Delete a note and change pattern in mind.

Finished. Nice set~ Good luck!

~~Will check again. So a lot ;w;~~ Thank you so much for modding

UPDATE ALL.

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Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-10-18T09:45:34+00:00

Placeholder, will mod after rew and Lumi answered Hareimu's mod

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-10-18T13:17:28+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
mod

Lumi's Overdose
General

00:10:187 (5,1) - Swap NCs, downbeat (big white tick) is on (5), not (1). You should apply this logic to all other NCs you find that have similar issues to this one. I've also noticed a lot of other senseless NCs on the rest of the diff as well, such as 00:33:627 (1) - that only has 3 fruits until the next NC and could as well be removed completely without losing anything,
00:37:144 (2) - You could instead ctrl+g this slider and place it at x:320 so that it's more comfortable to catch. >>Okay
01:22:247 (2) - I think you could tilt this a bit more to the left horizontally, like this: slider so that it's more apparent that you require to make a quick double left-right movement to catch it whole and also doesn't make the catcher stutter into a complete stop to catch both sliderhead and sliderend. >>Fixed
01:25:661 (2) - This slider ends on a pretty prominent sound and makes the hyperdash into 01:25:868 (3) - play oddly because you're basically emphasizing the sound at the head of (3), which isn't really strong at all. This whole issue is caused because you decided to add a NC 01:25:454 (1) - here on a red tick instead of on a downbeat (again, big white tick) in which 01:25:351 (3) - is. tl;dr: add a NC 01:25:351 (3) - here, remove NC 01:25:454 (1) - here and remap the whole 01:25:351 (3,1,2,3) - section with this in mind (this issue applies in similar other sections as well, but I'll let you find them on your own while you redo the map's NCs applying what I've said on the first point)

>>Thanks, I really appreciate for pointing out the NCs. It really helps me since I'm technically a newbie to ranking maps

เย้ๆ

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Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-10-26T13:25:12+00:00

From my modding queue (sorry for the long delay!)

Kudosu only when helpful!

General

Hitsounds: normal-slidertick - Copy is unused, can be deleted I guess. The other two slidertick hitsounds are completely silent, is that intended? If not I suggest to use other hitsounds for that.
At the moment Rain and Lumi's Overdose end 1/4 beat earlier than the other diffs, is that necessary? Would be nicer if all diffs end at the same time imo.
Miracle still ends at 01:45:160 - , to fix that delete the last slider and make it once more.
Don't shoot stars at your mapset next time, it will get enough stars from us modders anyway

Cup

00:16:661 (1,2) - I would make them single notes instead of making 1/1 sliders because right now it is really dense for a Cup - you did something similar at 00:30:730 (1,2) - , so why not here too?
00:18:213 (2,1,2) - Making 00:19:144 (1) - antiflow is pretty harsh for a Cup, it is creating many movement changes. I would flip it to create similar flow to 00:17:489 (1) - . Same goes for all upcoming similar parts.
00:30:730 (1,2,1) - I would increase the distance because right now it plays a bit toooooooo boring even for a Cup, so I suggest to move 00:31:558 (2) - more to the right to fix that. Same goes for all upcoming similar parts.
00:32:385 (1,2) - Make these more horizontal please (like the ones that after these), right now there is too much standstill in that part which is boring.

Nothing more to say about the diff, just apply my suggestions to every part and not just the one I mentioned when you agree with me.

Salad

The beginning part is a bit too repetitive, how about changing it up a bit more to make it more interesting?
01:27:006 (1,2) - These sliders play completely different from the rest of the section which is inconsistent. Therefore I suggest to use sliders like you did before (for example 01:23:696 (1,2) - ) to keep the consistency in this part.

Platter

00:13:011 (2,3,1,2,3) - Since you already started the right-left single note movement with 00:13:011 (2) - , 00:13:717 (1) - is completely underemphasized since the change in the music is easy to hear but your pattern stays the same. I suggest to make 00:13:011 (2,3) - a slider instead of two single notes to fix that.
00:17:075 (5,1) - I would definitively place a hyper here because you placed one at 00:23:902 (6,1) - , therefore it just makes sense rhythm-wise to place one here too. Since that would lead to a hyperdash into antiflow at the moment (which is unrankable on Platter), I suggest to make 00:16:661 (4,5) - more horizontal to create a right-left movement and flip 00:17:489 (1) - to create a normal hyper. It would like this: *click*
00:40:454 (5,1) - I think a hyper is too much here since you had already one right before this one and the sound isn't that important, therefore I suggest to make it a normal dash instead.
00:43:144 (7,1) - Should be a hyper to create better rhythm too, just change the slidershape to create a hyper.
01:15:420 (1,2) - Quite intense part. Increase the distance here to create a dash to emphasize the intensity of the music better.
01:18:316 (1) - The idea of this slider is nice but as it is right now the start of the kiai lands on the sliderend which is awkward rhythm-wise. I would shorten the slider by 1/2 and make a single note on 01:18:730 - to create better rhythm, there should be a hyper then if you do it.
Many hyperdashes into antiflow in the kiai which is unrankable in Platter (example: 01:20:178 (6,1) - ). You need to get rid off that. I guess you need to remap the kiai section Please make sure that it is more consistent with the dash/hyperdash usage when you remap it, there are some inconsistencies right now (for example: 01:25:247 (7,1) - Is just a walk which is completely inconsistent with the rest of the kiai).
01:31:558 (7,1) - Needs to be a hyper as well for the sake of rhythm, just fill the gap with some notes to make it easier (the lack of notes here is questionable anyway).

Rain

You just need to take a look at your hyperdash-usage, otherwise nice diff!

00:17:075 (3,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm.
00:23:696 (3,4) - These sliders create a weird flow, i would make them horizontal not vertical to fix that.
00:36:937 (4,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm.
00:43:144 (5,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm.
00:56:799 (4,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm.
01:18:316 (5) - Same as in Platter.
01:38:178 (3,4) - Same as 00:23:696 (3,4) - .

Lumi's Overdose

The diff is fine gameplay-wise, just a few rhythm and emphasizing choices that occur me.

00:04:894 (3,4,5) - Doesn't fit the sluggish flow of the section, I would prefer more simple movement here. Same goes for 00:12:305 (4,5,6) - .
I think putting a NC on every second big white tick is way more suitable and consistent than your current NCs, please change them.
01:15:213 (5,1) - Here should be a hyper to keep consistency with 01:16:040 (3,4) - . I think extending 01:15:213 (5) - to a 1/2 slider is a good way to go here.

Just two more rhythm suggestions here, I think considering them would make the diff much better as it already is! Keep in mind that I mention them only once but that I mean the whole diff, so if you decide to follow the suggestions make sure to apply them for the whole diff!

00:17:489 (1,2) - and 00:19:144 (5,6) - are leading to a very nice and stable rhythm and flow, when you do that for every upcoming similar spot too (like 00:20:799 - , 00:22:454 - and so on) it would make the diff way more stable rhythm-wise.
Try to avoid using the same pattern when the music changes: At 01:21:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you used 1/2 sliders all the time but you've got a downbeat on 01:22:040 (4) - which calls for a pattern change.

I think your diff is very nice nevertheless, I think you are a very good mapper if you improve your rhythm and consistency.

Miracle

00:07:364 (2,3,4,1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:894 (3,4,5) - in Lumi's Overdose.

The diff plays fine as well, I just don't like that you don't really emphasized the downbeats (means the sounds you can hear on every second big white tick like 00:19:144 (1) - and 00:20:799 (1) - ), because that would lead to a more stable rhythm.

The mod was kinda lazy, sorry for that, hopefully it still helps you improving your mapset

Good Luck with ranking!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-26T15:17:07+00:00

Sanyi wrote:

From my modding queue (sorry for the long delay!)

Kudosu only when helpful!

General
Hitsounds: normal-slidertick - Copy is unused, can be deleted I guess. The other two slidertick hitsounds are completely silent, is that intended? If not I suggest to use other hitsounds for that. I forget change it to sliderstick3 xD
At the moment Rain and Lumi's Overdose end 1/4 beat earlier than the other diffs, is that necessary? Would be nicer if all diffs end at the same time imo. Umm... I think now i will change to consistency with the another diff.
Miracle still ends at 01:45:160 - , to fix that delete the last slider and make it once more. Change.
Don't shoot stars at your mapset next time, it will get enough stars from us modders anyway xD
Cup
00:16:661 (1,2) - I would make them single notes instead of making 1/1 sliders because right now it is really dense for a Cup - you did something similar at 00:30:730 (1,2) - , so why not here too? Change.
00:18:213 (2,1,2) - Making 00:19:144 (1) - antiflow is pretty harsh for a Cup, it is creating many movement changes. I would flip it to create similar flow to 00:17:489 (1) - . Same goes for all upcoming similar parts. I think it's fine for me. Not change.
00:30:730 (1,2,1) - I would increase the distance because right now it plays a bit toooooooo boring even for a Cup, so I suggest to move 00:31:558 (2) - more to the right to fix that. Same goes for all upcoming similar parts. Ok Change it and all of similar part.
00:32:385 (1,2) - Make these more horizontal please (like the ones that after these), right now there is too much standstill in that part which is boring. I think i use horizontal note a lot if i have vertical note one is fine for me. not change.
Nothing more to say about the diff, just apply my suggestions to every part and not just the one I mentioned when you agree with me.
Salad
The beginning part is a bit too repetitive, how about changing it up a bit more to make it more interesting? Ok I will change.
01:27:006 (1,2) - These sliders play completely different from the rest of the section which is inconsistent. Therefore I suggest to use sliders like you did before (for example 01:23:696 (1,2) - ) to keep the consistency in this part. I want more pattern to use in diff. Not change.
Platter
00:13:011 (2,3,1,2,3) - Since you already started the right-left single note movement with 00:13:011 (2) - , 00:13:717 (1) - is completely underemphasized since the change in the music is easy to hear but your pattern stays the same. I suggest to make 00:13:011 (2,3) - a slider instead of two single notes to fix that. Change.
00:17:075 (5,1) - I would definitively place a hyper here because you placed one at 00:23:902 (6,1) - , therefore it just makes sense rhythm-wise to place one here too. Since that would lead to a hyperdash into antiflow at the moment (which is unrankable on Platter), I suggest to make 00:16:661 (4,5) - more horizontal to create a right-left movement and flip 00:17:489 (1) - to create a normal hyper. It would like this: *click* I think not. It's look suddenly a bit and I don't want to change distance of notes too much.
00:40:454 (5,1) - I think a hyper is too much here since you had already one right before this one and the sound isn't that important, therefore I suggest to make it a normal dash instead. Change.
00:43:144 (7,1) - Should be a hyper to create better rhythm too, just change the slidershape to create a hyper. Same as heading (2)
01:15:420 (1,2) - Quite intense part. Increase the distance here to create a dash to emphasize the intensity of the music better. Change.
01:18:316 (1) - The idea of this slider is nice but as it is right now the start of the kiai lands on the sliderend which is awkward rhythm-wise. I would shorten the slider by 1/2 and make a single note on 01:18:730 - to create better rhythm, there should be a hyper then if you do it. I think it's fine and on 1/2 of the slider is not have a sound so I think it shouldn't change.
Many hyperdashes into antiflow in the kiai which is unrankable in Platter (example: 01:20:178 (6,1) - ). You need to get rid off that. I guess you need to remap the kiai section Please make sure that it is more consistent with the dash/hyperdash usage when you remap it, there are some inconsistencies right now (for example: 01:25:247 (7,1) - Is just a walk which is completely inconsistent with the rest of the kiai). I just know about antiflow TwT so remap on kiai.
01:31:558 (7,1) - Needs to be a hyper as well for the sake of rhythm, just fill the gap with some notes to make it easier (the lack of notes here is questionable anyway). The note on this is similar like at first of song.
Rain

You just need to take a look at your hyperdash-usage, otherwise nice diff!
00:17:075 (3,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm. Change.
00:23:696 (3,4) - These sliders create a weird flow, i would make them horizontal not vertical to fix that. Change.
00:36:937 (4,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm. Change.
00:43:144 (5,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm. Now is have it.
00:56:799 (4,1) - Hyperdash for rhythm. Change.
01:18:316 (5) - Same as in Platter. Same as too.
01:38:178 (3,4) - Same as 00:23:696 (3,4) - .

Miracle
00:07:364 (2,3,4,1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:894 (3,4,5) - in Lumi's Overdose. I think it's fine the sound is look like don't need to move to much.
The diff plays fine as well, I just don't like that you don't really emphasized the downbeats (means the sounds you can hear on every second big white tick like 00:19:144 (1) - and 00:20:799 (1) - ), because that would lead to a more stable rhythm. I want many type pattern :3.
The mod was kinda lazy, sorry for that, hopefully it still helps you improving your mapset

Good Luck with ranking!

~~I will check this again tomorrow.~~ Thank you :3

Last edited by rew0825 2017-10-27T21:20:17+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

-Luminate

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-Luminate 2017-10-27T11:48:37+00:00

Sanyi wrote:

From my modding queue (sorry for the long delay!)

Kudosu only when helpful!

Lumi's Overdose

The diff is fine gameplay-wise, just a few rhythm and emphasizing choices that occur me.
00:04:894 (3,4,5) - Doesn't fit the sluggish flow of the section, I would prefer more simple movement here. Same goes for 00:12:305 (4,5,6) - .
>>Okay then
I think putting a NC on every second big white tick is way more suitable and consistent than your current NCs, please change them.
>>Hareimu has mentioned this before from his mod :: Some of them can't be properly NC because of the slider that is following the sentences //Rechecked
01:15:213 (5,1) - Here should be a hyper to keep consistency with 01:16:040 (3,4) - . I think extending 01:15:213 (5) - to a 1/2 slider is a good way to go here. >>Fixed
Just two more rhythm suggestions here, I think considering them would make the diff much better as it already is! Keep in mind that I mention them only once but that I mean the whole diff, so if you decide to follow the suggestions make sure to apply them for the whole diff!
00:17:489 (1,2) - and 00:19:144 (5,6) - are leading to a very nice and stable rhythm and flow, when you do that for every upcoming similar spot too (like 00:20:799 - , 00:22:454 - and so on) it would make the diff way more stable rhythm-wise.
Try to avoid using the same pattern when the music changes: At 01:21:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you used 1/2 sliders all the time but you've got a downbeat on 01:22:040 (4) - which calls for a pattern change. >>Fixed
>>As you said, I'm considering on remap the whole section after the klai while following your guidelines as much as I can
I think your diff is very nice nevertheless, I think you are a very good mapper if you improve your rhythm and consistency. Thanks for the compliment!

Thank you for a mod!!

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-10-27T21:00:20+00:00

UPDATE ALL!

@-Luminate ไม่แตกต่างกันเลย ;w;

Spectator

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1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Spectator 2017-11-11T02:31:28+00:00

It's your secret santa here, merry christmas!

Cup

00:43:144 - I feel like the vocal here should be mapped as well. Maybe shorten the 00:42:316 (1) - a bit and add a new slider on 00:43:144 - ?
01:15:006 (2) - The whistle here should be on 01:14:592 - instead
01:17:075 - Uh I would just map the part instead of putting a spinner here
Nice and clean Cup, good job.

Salad

00:23:902 (4,1) - This just here seems to be a bit harder than the previous ones so maybe reduce it a bit?
00:58:868 (1,2,3) - Why are these sliders so close? Maybe you can put some more distances between them
01:30:316 (1,2) - Here comes the most intense part, but the distance is quite small. Try moving (2) to the left slightly
I'm kinda unsure about jumps in kiai part but overall a very nice salad. I especially liked how you made jumps a bit challenging

Platter

00:30:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this instead? Also If you're going to apply this don't forget to move them to a bit closer to the center otherwise it'll create a edge dashes
image 1
00:31:558 (4,5) - ^

Rain

00:20:178 (2,3,4,5,6) - The distances here are a bit awkward to me. Try moving (3)~(6) to x:195, and then moving (6) to the right for a bit
01:19:454 (4) - It'd play better if you make this slider curved imo

Lumi's Overdose

00:33:213 (5,6,7) - This plays a bit weird due to the anti-flow. Try something like this instead?
image 2
01:25:351 (1) - missing clap on 01:25:558 -
01:27:730 (4,5) - The timeline here is questionable. I'd fix it like the image 3
image 3

Miracle

Maybe AR9.7 can also work? I feel like it still has a bit slow AR because the BPM is around 300.
This diff is miracle, I mean, it's overall really nice and clean that I have no major thing to point out.
But I disappointed a bit after seeing 01:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixed. I actually liked the previous pattern and I still feel like it'll fit more with the part, so please consider about the roll-back :p

hope it'll be helpful

good luck!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-11-11T12:53:34+00:00

Spectator wrote:
It's your secret santa here, merry christmas!

Cup
00:43:144 - I feel like the vocal here should be mapped as well. Maybe shorten the 00:42:316 (1) - a bit and add a new slider on 00:43:144 - ? I not add because it's a break for next part with a lot of note.
01:15:006 (2) - The whistle here should be on 01:14:592 - instead Change.
01:17:075 - Uh I would just map the part instead of putting a spinner here Melody on that is look strong i don't want to use a note on that, Sorry ;;.
Nice and clean Cup, good job.

Salad
00:23:902 (4,1) - This just here seems to be a bit harder than the previous ones so maybe reduce it a bit? The distance is similar like another dash. so I think it's ok. Not change.
00:58:868 (1,2,3) - Why are these sliders so close? Maybe you can put some more distances between them Change.
01:30:316 (1,2) - Here comes the most intense part, but the distance is quite small. Try moving (2) to the left slightly Change.
I'm kinda unsure about jumps in kiai part but overall a very nice salad. I especially liked how you made jumps a bit challenging

Platter
00:30:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this instead? Also If you're going to apply this don't forget to move them to a bit closer to the center otherwise it'll create a edge dashes I want to keep a Hdash on before this. Not change.
image 1
00:31:558 (4,5) - ^ I want this note same as above. Not change.

Rain
00:20:178 (2,3,4,5,6) - The distances here are a bit awkward to me. Try moving (3)~(6) to x:195, and then moving (6) to the right for a bit It's fine for me, not change.
01:19:454 (4) - It'd play better if you make this slider curved imo Change.

Miracle
Maybe AR9.7 can also work? I feel like it still has a bit slow AR because the BPM is around 300. I not sure I think now is fine. not change.
This diff is miracle, I mean, it's overall really nice and clean that I have no major thing to point out.
But I disappointed a bit after seeing 01:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixed. I actually liked the previous pattern and I still feel like it'll fit more with the part, so please consider about the roll-back :p I think so xD Now change it <3

hope it'll be helpful

good luck!

Thank you so much

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-11-11T13:42:55+00:00

Spectator wrote:
It's your secret santa here, merry christmas!

Lumi's Overdose
00:33:213 (5,6,7) - This plays a bit weird due to the anti-flow. Try something like this instead?
image 2
01:25:351 (1) - missing clap on 01:25:558 -
01:27:730 (4,5) - The timeline here is questionable. I'd fix it like the image 3
image 3

All Fixed! Thank you!

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-11-12T07:05:52+00:00

UPDATE ALL <3

Rekkursion

297 posts

Joined September 2013

Rekkursion 2017-11-12T07:39:31+00:00

Hello~

[Cup]

00:24:109 (1,1) - The constant back and forth is not very intuitive to play for newer players, I think. So it's reasonable to reduce the quantity of anitflows, like these two silders, both of them could be normal flows instead of antiflows.
01:33:627 (1) - Also this. It's proper to use normal flow here.
01:40:247 (1) - Still the same, but this time I suggest that you try another patterns in stead of reverse slider, such as the patterns you used at 01:43:558 (1,2,3) -?

[Salad]

Isn't HP too low? Maybe making HP 4 is good I think.
00:37:351 (1,2) - To make the flow better that according to the strength of sounds, I think make these two silders more vertical, then make 00:39:006 (1,2) - both more horizontal. And the dash at the end of 00:39:420 (2) - will be not that strange, I think.
I rarely could find many problems in this diff, but I was told that using too many antiflows with dashes is improper in Salad. The point at 00:24:109 (1) -, 00:25:765 (1) -, 00:27:420 (1) -, 00:43:971 (1) -, 01:23:696 (1) -, 01:25:351 (1) -, 01:28:661 (1) -, 01:38:592 (1) -, 01:40:247 (1) -, 01:41:902 (1) -, are all antiflows with dashes. I think some of them should be fixed to reduce the quantity of antiflows, maybe?

[Platter]

HP in Platter should between 5 and 6? I think making it be 5 is good.
00:13:717 (1,2,3,1) - The distance between 00:14:422 (3,1) - should be larger due to the very high sound here, but normal dash is better than Hdash I think, maybe x:392? Also to make stronger emphasis, I think it's good to shorten the distance between 00:13:717 (1,2) -, like move (2) to x:200?
00:55:971 (2) - Sound is high here, I'd make this silder more vertical, so that the distance between 00:55:558 (1,2) - and the one between 00:55:971 (2,3) - can both larger to emphasize the strong sound.
01:18:937 (2,3) - The enter point of Chorus deserves a Hdash in Platter I think. I think this pattern is good.
01:29:075 (2,3) - The vocal here is the strongest in whole song I think? I'd make the distance bigger even it's Hdash.
01:36:522 (3) - To make the flow better, I think it's good to move this note to x:128.
01:43:144 (3) - Same here, I'd move it to x:360 to let it more good-looking while playing.

[Rain]

Try making HP 6 or 7? I think it's more proper in Rain?
00:13:717 (1,2) - Due to the high sound here, I think it's good to make the distance larger, and I prefer normal dash instead of Hdash, to emphasize the next part.
00:22:868 (2,1) - There's a strong sound as well, maybe make the distance larger?
00:29:489 (2,1) - Same as above.
00:41:075 (2,3,4) - To distinguish this part from the part at 01:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -, that one has Hdashes, another doesn't, Hdash at (4) is inappropriate here I think. I suggest that you move the triple to x:192. Also, in my opinion, this can help the structure of patterns more good-looking and symmetrical (like the part at 01:00:523 - ) while playing.
Same as above. More reason, to emphasize the Hdash at 00:42:937 (4) - that is truly needed, I think moving the triple to x:312 or x:320 is good.
00:49:351 (2,3) - And here, the very strong sound should be highlighted, I think. Maybe lengthen the distance?
01:29:075 (2,3) - Same as Platter, it deserves bigger distance to emphasize that I think.
01:43:971 (2,1) - Also this, as I mentioned many times, maybe make the distance larger?

[Lumi's Overdose]

00:13:717 (1,2,3) - The sound here is upper as time going, so I think it's good to make the distance between (1) and (2) smaller, and make the one between (2) and (3) larger, to follow the upper sound more appropriate. Also can put the slider 00:14:775 (4) - more left to emphasize the local highest sound here, but I prefer no Hdash, just the bigger distance. Like this?
00:35:696 (1,3) - To make the map more fun, I'd turn these two sliders toward the right, then put them to central. The composition will look like this in Editor, and the patterns will look like this while playing.
00:38:747 (5,6) - I think it's a little weird to use this kind of patterns here, maybe remove 00:38:747 (5) - ?
00:55:971 (2,3,4) - I don't get why you use many Hdashes but no here. The sound here is strong, it deserves Hdashes. In my opinion, making the distance much larger than now is good and proper.
01:45:006 (5,6) - There's no emphasis when the map is full of Hdash with the more or less same distances. To highlight the end of whole song, I think it's okay to move (6) more right like x:456 or what.

[Miracle]

Sorry but I think I am unable to mod this diff since I'm too noob. I couldn't even pass the beginning xd. But it seems like a very cool style c:

Very cool mapset, also the song is awesome. I'm pretty fond of this. Hope my mod will help you. Good luck!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-11-13T14:32:40+00:00

cb128128cb wrote:
Hello~

[Cup]
00:24:109 (1,1) - The constant back and forth is not very intuitive to play for newer players, I think. So it's reasonable to reduce the quantity of anitflows, like these two silders, both of them could be normal flows instead of antiflows. I not sure about this. Keep it
01:33:627 (1) - Also this. It's proper to use normal flow here. Change.
01:40:247 (1) - Still the same, but this time I suggest that you try another patterns in stead of reverse slider, such as the patterns you used at 01:43:558 (1,2,3) -? Same as too.
[Salad]
Isn't HP too low? Maybe making HP 4 is good I think.
00:37:351 (1,2) - To make the flow better that according to the strength of sounds, I think make these two silders more vertical, then make 00:39:006 (1,2) - both more horizontal. And the dash at the end of 00:39:420 (2) - will be not that strange, I think. I think it's fine for me, Sorry not change.
I rarely could find many problems in this diff, but I was told that using too many antiflows with dashes is improper in Salad. The point at 00:24:109 (1) -, 00:25:765 (1) -, 00:27:420 (1) -, 00:43:971 (1) -, 01:23:696 (1) -, 01:25:351 (1) -, 01:28:661 (1) -, 01:38:592 (1) -, 01:40:247 (1) -, 01:41:902 (1) -, are all antiflows with dashes. I think some of them should be fixed to reduce the quantity of antiflows, maybe? I not sure on this too I'm waiting BN/QAT complain about this i will fix.
[Platter]
HP in Platter should between 5 and 6? I think making it be 5 is good.
00:13:717 (1,2,3,1) - The distance between 00:14:422 (3,1) - should be larger due to the very high sound here, but normal dash is better than Hdash I think, maybe x:392? Also to make stronger emphasis, I think it's good to shorten the distance between 00:13:717 (1,2) -, like move (2) to x:200? Change.
00:55:971 (2) - Sound is high here, I'd make this silder more vertical, so that the distance between 00:55:558 (1,2) - and the one between 00:55:971 (2,3) - can both larger to emphasize the strong sound. I think it's not too high. not change.
01:18:937 (2,3) - The enter point of Chorus deserves a Hdash in Platter I think. I think this pattern is good. I think it look suddenly for player and In platter I follow Hdash on every 2 channel of rhythm
01:29:075 (2,3) - The vocal here is the strongest in whole song I think? I'd make the distance bigger even it's Hdash. It's unrank ;w;
01:36:522 (3) - To make the flow better, I think it's good to move this note to x:128. I think it's too big distance.
01:43:144 (3) - Same here, I'd move it to x:360 to let it more good-looking while playing. Same as above^.

[Rain]
Try making HP 6 or 7? I think it's more proper in Rain?
00:13:717 (1,2) - Due to the high sound here, I think it's good to make the distance larger, and I prefer normal dash instead of Hdash, to emphasize the next part. Change.
00:22:868 (2,1) - There's a strong sound as well, maybe make the distance larger? I think now is fine distance.
00:29:489 (2,1) - Same as above. Same as too.
00:41:075 (2,3,4) - To distinguish this part from the part at 01:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -, that one has Hdashes, another doesn't, Hdash at (4) is inappropriate here I think. I suggest that you move the triple to x:192. Also, in my opinion, this can help the structure of patterns more good-looking and symmetrical (like the part at 01:00:523 - ) while playing. Look good but I not sure about this. Keep.
Same as above. More reason, to emphasize the Hdash at 00:42:937 (4) - that is truly needed, I think moving the triple to x:312 or x:320 is good. I think now is fine for me.
00:49:351 (2,3) - And here, the very strong sound should be highlighted, I think. Maybe lengthen the distance? Same as 00:22:868 (2,1) -
01:29:075 (2,3) - Same as Platter, it deserves bigger distance to emphasize that I think. I think it's ok now with Hdash.
01:43:971 (2,1) - Also this, as I mentioned many times, maybe make the distance larger? Same as 00:22:868 (2,1) -
[Miracle]
Sorry but I think I am unable to mod this diff since I'm too noob. I couldn't even pass the beginning xd. But it seems like a very cool style c:
Very cool mapset, also the song is awesome. I'm pretty fond of this. Hope my mod will help you. Good luck!

~~I will check it tomorrow :v~~ About HP now I will change it by increase all 1

Thank you for mod <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-11-17T19:12:25+00:00

Rekkursion wrote:
Hello~

[Lumi's Overdose]
00:13:717 (1,2,3) - The sound here is upper as time going, so I think it's good to make the distance between (1) and (2) smaller, and make the one between (2) and (3) larger, to follow the upper sound more appropriate. Also can put the slider 00:14:775 (4) - more left to emphasize the local highest sound here, but I prefer no Hdash, just the bigger distance. Like this? >>Moved as you said a little
00:35:696 (1,3) - To make the map more fun, I'd turn these two sliders toward the right, then put them to central. The composition will look like this in Editor, and the patterns will look like this while playing. >>Fixed only for slider (3)
00:38:747 (5,6) - I think it's a little weird to use this kind of patterns here, maybe remove 00:38:747 (5) - ? >>Following the drumsounds so no
00:55:971 (2,3,4) - I don't get why you use many Hdashes but no here. The sound here is strong, it deserves Hdashes. In my opinion, making the distance much larger than now is good and proper. >>I prefer normal dash on non-klai vocal line so no
01:45:006 (5,6) - There's no emphasis when the map is full of Hdash with the more or less same distances. To highlight the end of whole song, I think it's okay to move (6) more right like x:456 or what. >>Moved (6) further to hilight the end more

Thanks for the mod!!

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

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rew0825 2017-11-18T06:58:06+00:00

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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-11-18T07:27:12+00:00

Hi! I'm your secret santa this week. Glad to see this beatmap alive, it brings me good memories from the CWC finals of last year. Let's go:

[Miracle]

00:40:661 (1) - 00:41:489 (1) - Both sliders could be curved a bit to improve a bit the flow in this section. Using straight and slightly tilted sliders after a dash could lead to lose the middle droplet in the worst case.
01:15:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section feels like some intensity is missing on those hypers, which could be a good introduction to the chorus. I'd recommend you to increase a bit the distance of those sliders in order to create stronger hyperdashes. eg 01:15:730 (2) - on x:200, 01:16:040 (3) - on x:152, etc
01:20:592 (2) - Having a slider tilted like this in the middle part of the hyperchain could lead to an not-so-clear flow break, since players wouldn't know if they need to keep dashing or not. This could be an alternative solution to make a pattern with continuous dashing. Take into account that the distances between the sliders should be around 2.00x.
01:21:834 (4,1) - Tilt (4) a bit more to the right in order to increase the distance? That could match well with the high-pitched vocals.
01:24:316 (4,1) - 01:29:696 (2,3) - 01:30:213 (4,1) - For the same reason as before, these examples could also have a 2.50x distance instead of the current 2.00x you used. Changing the shape of the sliders a bit could do the trick.
01:31:144 (5) - Forgot to add a NC in here? It's inconsistent with the rest of the fast sections of the map, where you placed one every stanza more or less.
01:31:765 (8) - An antiflow pattern would fit for the end of the chorus and as introduction of the next section. What about placing this note at the left side of the screen on x:112 for example?

[Overdose]

00:12:305 (4) - A NC could be added for this note to keep the sequence more or less consistent.
00:21:420 (3,4) - A potential hyperdash is missing here that would match the crash sound. You can achieve it by moving the beginning of the slider (4) more to the right. Mirrored notes would also need to be changed if you applied this suggestion: 01:35:902 (3,4) - and 01:40:868 (6,7) - .
00:37:144 (2,1) - On the other hand the strength of this one doesn't really match the melody since so much intensity isn't needed. Making a distance of ~2.75x with a more vertical slider (2) would work better.
00:42:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The structure you made plays fine, though it doesn't fit the vocals that well. Looking at the first 4 sliders you chained them all with hyperdashes whereas you just made normal distances on the following 4 sliders, where the vocals were more intense. Please consider making the first 4 sliders more lenient and add more intensity on the other 4 by creating more hyperdashes there.
01:05:489 (5) - A bit more of distance with the previous note would help remarking the vocals better. What about moving the head of the slider at ~x:368?
01:06:730 (1,2) - And in this case the distance is definitely insufficient. Please move the end of the slider (1) more to the left.
01:27:523 (3,4) - These notes need a hyperdash to match the intense instrument sound.
01:29:282 (5,6) - And these ones due to the intense vocals would also need a hyperdash.
01:30:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a similar case to the one mentioned on 00:42:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - though in this case the first 4 sliders would need to be just a bit less intense and the next notes go more crazy in order to make a good introduction in the last section.
01:45:109 (6) - Following the tendency of the other difficulties, you'd need an object on 01:45:161 - to match the last sound of the melody. Either you could move this note to the next blue tick or add another object in there.

[Rain]

00:36:109 (2,3) - A small dash between those sliders to remark the vocals? It might be insufficient intensity just by tilting the sliders.
00:43:144 (5,1) - No hyperdash for this transition? Even if there's a 1/1 distance between those objects, it's possible to achieve one.
00:43:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a similar NC usage in this intense section as you did in the previous one starting on 00:17:489 - ? You can do the same for the chorus afterwards, from 01:18:730 - on. Having more objects on the plate in intense parts could make it more difficult to see the upcoming objects at a relatively low AR.
00:55:558 (1,2,3) - Place (2) a bit more far away from the other objects? The default distance seems insufficient for this section.
01:26:799 (5,6,1) - In this case I believe it's not necessary to create a hyperdash, seeing similar spots of the chorus. As the vocals aren't that intense, a normal dash would be enough for this spot.

[Platter]

00:14:775 (1) - Remove this NC? You used one until here every 2 stanzas.
00:16:351 (3,4) - I'd consider reducing the distance of those objects. The previous doubles aren't a common element on Platters and this dash may cause some confusion.
00:58:558 (6,7,8) - This is the only place where you used 1/4 objects. At this BPM I wouldn't recommend them for this kind of difficulty and therefore you should go with the option of removing (7) from there.
01:11:282 (3) - 01:12:937 (3) - I guess you forgot to add the custom whistle at the beginning of those 2 sliders.
01:20:178 (6,1) - This hyperdash is combined with an antiflow pattern, which shouldn't be allowed in this kind of difficulty. In order to avoid this, you can try making for the slider (1) a similar shape like you used on 01:21:109 (3) - for example.
01:29:385 (3,4,1) - And here you'd have to change the shapes of (4) and (1), since both of them generate an antiflow pattern + hyperdash.
01:31:765 - This section looks quite empty since there are no objects between 01:31:558 (7) - and 01:31:971 (1) - . An additional object on 01:31:765 - would help filling this gap by covering the intense notes of the transition just at the end of the chorus.

[Salad]

01:16:247 (2,1) - With such a high BPM you'd need a bigger distance object-spinner, at least 2 bars instead of 1. Both slider and spinner are quite clustered at the moment.

[Cup]

Generally speaking the new combos you used in the calm sections felt rather unorganised. You normally used a NC every second stanza, though there were some points where it differed like 00:30:730 (1,2,3,4) - with 4 stanzas, 01:00:523 (1,2,1,2) - with just 1 or 01:05:489 (1,2,3,4) - with even 6. Please take a look at the sections from 00:30:730 - to 00:43:971 - and from 00:50:592 - to 01:10:454 - , since the mentioned examples aren't all the inconsistencies that can be found.
01:11:282 (2) - 01:12:937 (2) - 01:13:765 (1) - Same as in Platter, there are some custom whistles missing at the beginning of the first 2 sliders and at the end of the 3rd one. Default whistles don't match with the rest of difficulties.
01:44:799 (1) - Remove this NC as well? It doesn't look that necessary, as being the last object of the map would make all the collected objects fell off the plate.

[]

That'd be everything from my side, and I hope it helped a bit. Good luck with your beatmap!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

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rew0825 2017-11-18T09:42:43+00:00

Deif wrote:
Hi! I'm your secret santa this week. Glad to see this beatmap alive, it brings me good memories from the CWC finals of last year. Let's go:
Me too <3
[Miracle]
00:40:661 (1) - 00:41:489 (1) - Both sliders could be curved a bit to improve a bit the flow in this section. Using straight and slightly tilted sliders after a dash could lead to lose the middle droplet in the worst case. Change.
01:15:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section feels like some intensity is missing on those hypers, which could be a good introduction to the chorus. I'd recommend you to increase a bit the distance of those sliders in order to create stronger hyperdashes. eg 01:15:730 (2) - on x:200, 01:16:040 (3) - on x:152, etc Change.
01:20:592 (2) - Having a slider tilted like this in the middle part of the hyperchain could lead to an not-so-clear flow break, since players wouldn't know if they need to keep dashing or not. This could be an alternative solution to make a pattern with continuous dashing. Take into account that the distances between the sliders should be around 2.00x. Change.
01:21:834 (4,1) - Tilt (4) a bit more to the right in order to increase the distance? That could match well with the high-pitched vocals. Change.
01:24:316 (4,1) - 01:29:696 (2,3) - 01:30:213 (4,1) - For the same reason as before, these examples could also have a 2.50x distance instead of the current 2.00x you used. Changing the shape of the sliders a bit could do the trick. Change.
01:31:144 (5) - Forgot to add a NC in here? It's inconsistent with the rest of the fast sections of the map, where you placed one every stanza more or less. Forget it xD Add.
01:31:765 (8) - An antiflow pattern would fit for the end of the chorus and as introduction of the next section. What about placing this note at the left side of the screen on x:112 for example? Personally, I like this more than antiflow. Not change.
[Rain]
00:36:109 (2,3) - A small dash between those sliders to remark the vocals? It might be insufficient intensity just by tilting the sliders. Change.
00:43:144 (5,1) - No hyperdash for this transition? Even if there's a 1/1 distance between those objects, it's possible to achieve one. Change.
00:43:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a similar NC usage in this intense section as you did in the previous one starting on 00:17:489 - ? You can do the same for the chorus afterwards, from 01:18:730 - on. Having more objects on the plate in intense parts could make it more difficult to see the upcoming objects at a relatively low AR. Change but on 01:18:730 - is fine for me i think.
00:55:558 (1,2,3) - Place (2) a bit more far away from the other objects? The default distance seems insufficient for this section. Change.
01:26:799 (5,6,1) - In this case I believe it's not necessary to create a hyperdash, seeing similar spots of the chorus. As the vocals aren't that intense, a normal dash would be enough for this spot. Change.
[Platter]
00:14:775 (1) - Remove this NC? You used one until here every 2 stanzas. Change.
00:16:351 (3,4) - I'd consider reducing the distance of those objects. The previous doubles aren't a common element on Platters and this dash may cause some confusion. Change.
00:58:558 (6,7,8) - This is the only place where you used 1/4 objects. At this BPM I wouldn't recommend them for this kind of difficulty and therefore you should go with the option of removing (7) from there. Change.
01:11:282 (3) - 01:12:937 (3) - I guess you forgot to add the custom whistle at the beginning of those 2 sliders. Change.
01:20:178 (6,1) - This hyperdash is combined with an antiflow pattern, which shouldn't be allowed in this kind of difficulty. In order to avoid this, you can try making for the slider (1) a similar shape like you used on 01:21:109 (3) - for example. Change.
01:29:385 (3,4,1) - And here you'd have to change the shapes of (4) and (1), since both of them generate an antiflow pattern + hyperdash. Change.
01:31:765 - This section looks quite empty since there are no objects between 01:31:558 (7) - and 01:31:971 (1) - . An additional object on 01:31:765 - would help filling this gap by covering the intense notes of the transition just at the end of the chorus. Change.
[Salad]
01:16:247 (2,1) - With such a high BPM you'd need a bigger distance object-spinner, at least 2 bars instead of 1. Both slider and spinner are quite clustered at the moment. Change.
[Cup]
Generally speaking the new combos you used in the calm sections felt rather unorganised. You normally used a NC every second stanza, though there were some points where it differed like 00:30:730 (1,2,3,4) - with 4 stanzas, 01:00:523 (1,2,1,2) - with just 1 or 01:05:489 (1,2,3,4) - with even 6. Please take a look at the sections from 00:30:730 - to 00:43:971 - and from 00:50:592 - to 01:10:454 - , since the mentioned examples aren't all the inconsistencies that can be found. Change.
01:11:282 (2) - 01:12:937 (2) - 01:13:765 (1) - Same as in Platter, there are some custom whistles missing at the beginning of the first 2 sliders and at the end of the 3rd one. Default whistles don't match with the rest of difficulties. Change.
01:44:799 (1) - Remove this NC as well? It doesn't look that necessary, as being the last object of the map would make all the collected objects fell off the plate. Change.
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That'd be everything from my side, and I hope it helped a bit. Good luck with your beatmap!

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-Luminate 2017-11-18T12:53:46+00:00

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[Overdose]
00:12:305 (4) - A NC could be added for this note to keep the sequence more or less consistent.>>Added
00:21:420 (3,4) - A potential hyperdash is missing here that would match the crash sound. You can achieve it by moving the beginning of the slider (4) more to the right. Mirrored notes would also need to be changed if you applied this suggestion: 01:35:902 (3,4) - and 01:40:868 (6,7) - . >>Fixed them alllll
00:37:144 (2,1) - On the other hand the strength of this one doesn't really match the melody since so much intensity isn't needed. Making a distance of ~2.75x with a more vertical slider (2) would work better. >>Fixed
00:42:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The structure you made plays fine, though it doesn't fit the vocals that well. Looking at the first 4 sliders you chained them all with hyperdashes whereas you just made normal distances on the following 4 sliders, where the vocals were more intense. Please consider making the first 4 sliders more lenient and add more intensity on the other 4 by creating more hyperdashes there. >> I think it's fine as I'm not following the vocal here and the pattern itself is increasing the intensity of the song so no change
01:05:489 (5) - A bit more of distance with the previous note would help remarking the vocals better. What about moving the head of the slider at ~x:368?>>Fixed
01:06:730 (1,2) - And in this case the distance is definitely insufficient. Please move the end of the slider (1) more to the left. >>Fixed
01:27:523 (3,4) - These notes need a hyperdash to match the intense instrument sound. >>Fixed
01:29:282 (5,6) - And these ones due to the intense vocals would also need a hyperdash. >>Fixed
01:30:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a similar case to the one mentioned on 00:42:316 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - though in this case the first 4 sliders would need to be just a bit less intense and the next notes go more crazy in order to make a good introduction in the last section. >>I disagree about this but I did see the problem of the note intensity, but to do so would make me flip the whole map after this section. If this doesn't affect how the last section play, I will accept this totally
01:45:109 (6) - Following the tendency of the other difficulties, you'd need an object on 01:45:161 - to match the last sound of the melody. Either you could move this note to the next blue tick or add another object in there. >>Fixed
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Kin

2,622 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-11-21T20:34:52+00:00

Hi there! \o
From my random modding Q

[Miracle]
As Spectator said, I also agree with AR9.7. Pattern are easier to read in my opinion.

00:37:351 (1,1) - both are following the exact same kind of vocal but are mapped differently. The 1st one is "flow friendly" while the 2nd one is anti flow. According to how you've mapped other similar vocals here 00:30:730 (1,1) - (this one is "flow friendly only) & here 00:34:040 (1,1) - (this one is anti flow) ; I'd say it's better to keep the consistency across the same sentence.
tldr: 00:37:351 (1,1) - how about using the same kind of flow on both slider reverse?
01:44:799 (1,2,3,4) - with the current pattern, the last emphasis is currently here 01:45:109 - . However, the last note should get more emphasis. So to get more emphasis on this note 01:45:161 - I'd say it's better to just reverse this 1/4 slider 01:45:006 (3) - & add a note 01:45:161 - hyperdash left movement.

[Lumi's Overdose]

01:16:040 (3) - without direction change or without hyperdash, the current pattern kinda lack of emphasis. I'd highly suggest you to move this slider on the left of 01:15:730 (2) - or use a higher spacing to get a -> hyperdash. If you move the slider to the left, you'll have to fix other pattern.
00:17:489 - 00:30:730 - I assume you're following the melody on this part. But in this case, there's something quite inconsistent. As you can hear on this 00:18:523 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:25:144 (1,2,3) - ; the melody is building up into the high pitch right after the downbeat. The same thing happens here 00:21:834 (1,2,3) - . But 00:18:213 (5,1) - & 00:24:834 (9,1) - have hyperdash between those 2 sliders, unlike 00:21:523 (4,1) - . However, my main point is mainly about this: 00:20:178 (1,2,3,4) - 00:23:489 (1,2) - 00:26:799 (1,2,3,4) - 00:30:109 (1,2) - . As you can hear, right after the downbeat, the melody is quite different from the previous point mentionned. The pitch is already high. But this patterns doesn't get any hyperdash on 00:20:178 (1) - . Consider using a dash for build up right after downbeats & hyperdash for high pitch note right after downbeats.
the same thing happen in the last part of the song (after the kiai)
00:24:109 (4) - Better use 1/2 reverse slider. With the 1/1 slider, it kinda skip the melody here 00:24:213 - .

[Rain]

01:03:523 (4,5,6) - how about lowering the spacing a lil bit on the stream to inscrease a lil bit the spacing between those 2 notes 01:03:730 (6,1) - ? You'll get more emphasis on 01:03:834 (1) - . Which can be better considering the fact, the music really change here 01:03:834 - .

[Platter]

I really find some dash hard to read, just because of the AR7.8. AR8 seems way easier to read 1/2 dash in kai time.

ôwô

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-11-22T10:58:25+00:00

Kin wrote:
Hi there! \o
From my random modding Q

[Miracle]
As Spectator said, I also agree with AR9.7. Pattern are easier to read in my opinion. Ok now I change.

00:37:351 (1,1) - both are following the exact same kind of vocal but are mapped differently. The 1st one is "flow friendly" while the 2nd one is anti flow. According to how you've mapped other similar vocals here 00:30:730 (1,1) - (this one is "flow friendly only) & here 00:34:040 (1,1) - (this one is anti flow) ; I'd say it's better to keep the consistency across the same sentence.
tldr: 00:37:351 (1,1) - how about using the same kind of flow on both slider reverse? Ok change.
01:44:799 (1,2,3,4) - with the current pattern, the last emphasis is currently here 01:45:109 - . However, the last note should get more emphasis. So to get more emphasis on this note 01:45:161 - I'd say it's better to just reverse this 1/4 slider 01:45:006 (3) - & add a note 01:45:161 - hyperdash left movement. Hmm...Ok change <3
[Rain]

01:03:523 (4,5,6) - how about lowering the spacing a lil bit on the stream to inscrease a lil bit the spacing between those 2 notes 01:03:730 (6,1) - ? You'll get more emphasis on 01:03:834 (1) - . Which can be better considering the fact, the music really change here 01:03:834 - . I think it's fine for me because distance between them is same all.
[Platter]

I really find some dash hard to read, just because of the AR7.8. AR8 seems way easier to read 1/2 dash in kai time. Ok change.
ôwô

Thank you so much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-11-22T16:27:57+00:00

Kin wrote:
Hi there! \o
From my random modding Q

[Lumi's Overdose]

01:16:040 (3) - without direction change or without hyperdash, the current pattern kinda lack of emphasis. I'd highly suggest you to move this slider on the left of 01:15:730 (2) - or use a higher spacing to get a -> hyperdash. If you move the slider to the left, you'll have to fix other pattern.
>> Hmm? Isn't this already a hyper?
00:17:489 - 00:30:730 - I assume you're following the melody on this part. But in this case, there's something quite inconsistent. As you can hear on this 00:18:523 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:25:144 (1,2,3) - ; the melody is building up into the high pitch right after the downbeat. The same thing happens here 00:21:834 (1,2,3) - . But 00:18:213 (5,1) - & 00:24:834 (9,1) - have hyperdash between those 2 sliders, unlike 00:21:523 (4,1) - . However, my main point is mainly about this: 00:20:178 (1,2,3,4) - 00:23:489 (1,2) - 00:26:799 (1,2,3,4) - 00:30:109 (1,2) - . As you can hear, right after the downbeat, the melody is quite different from the previous point mentionned. The pitch is already high. But this patterns doesn't get any hyperdash on 00:20:178 (1) - . Consider using a dash for build up right after downbeats & hyperdash for high pitch note right after downbeats.
>> Uh, huh.. I don't get it at some points but I emphasized 00:20:178 (1) and some scaling-up high pitch notes
the same thing happen in the last part of the song (after the kiai) >> The after-klai parts are fixed as well, I don't think there's much problem in it. except if it's for more specific parts
00:24:109 (4) - Better use 1/2 reverse slider. With the 1/1 slider, it kinda skip the melody here 00:24:213 - . >>The downbeat here is strong so I want to make it more obvious that it doesn't blend up like any others
ôwô

Thanks for the mod!

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-11-23T09:49:02+00:00

UPDATE ALL!

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2017-11-25T04:28:58+00:00

Ho ho hello, I'm your secret Santa this week!

[

General]

Background: Resolution is a little low, here's an upscaled and sharper looking version if you want it, smaller filesize too

[

Cup]

00:49:661 (4) - This is noticeably higher pitch than 00:48:006 (4) - but the pattern here is the exact same. I'd recommend making this slider shape more distinct to help represent the higher pitch, C shape curve would work well

[

Salad]

01:12:937 (3,4) - You seem to be following vocals from 01:10:454 - but these notes seem to keep the same rhythm even though the vocals fall a beat late here. Try moving these a beat later to 01:13:144 - for the vocals, this will also give you the opportunity to add a dash to 01:13:765 (1) - if you want

[

Platter]

01:03:730 (8) - The note here isn't too strong so I think it would be better to delete this and have a good dash between 01:03:627 (7,1) -. Mapping 01:03:730 (8) - prevents any real emphasis on 01:03:834 (1) - due to the density and I think having the dash is a better alternative to mapping this note considering how weak it is
01:12:937 (3,4) - Same point as in the Salad, these notes follow a rhythm the song no longer supports so I'd suggest moving them a beat later to 01:13:144 (3,4) -

[

Rain]

01:03:730 (6,1) - Dash here would be nice, I certainly think 01:03:834 (1) - deserves some emphasis and a 1/2 dash isn't too hard at this level of difficulty
01:12:937 (3,4) - Same again as said in the Salad and Platter mod, these notes would fit better a beat later, would also allow for a hyper between 01:13:558 (4,1) -

[

Lumi's Overdose]

00:56:385 (4) - Could extend this to 00:56:696 - for the vocal
01:10:454 (1) - This is a strong sound certainly worth some emphasis, right now it's just a walk to this and has no real impact. A hyper to this would be ideal
01:12:109 (1) - Similar to above, this is also deserving of a hyperdash

[

Miracle]

01:03:420 (2,3,4,5) - Wiggle here doesn't feel too justified, it's a lot of fast direction changes for some fairly weak notes. A simpler pattern would be a better fit here, maybe something like this

Cool style, good luck with your map

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

rew0825 2017-11-25T23:58:37+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Ho ho hello, I'm your secret Santa this week!

[ General]
Background: Resolution is a little low, here's an upscaled and sharper looking version if you want it, smaller filesize too Ok, Change.
[ Cup]
00:49:661 (4) - This is noticeably higher pitch than 00:48:006 (4) - but the pattern here is the exact same. I'd recommend making this slider shape more distinct to help represent the higher pitch, C shape curve would work well Change.
[ Salad]
01:12:937 (3,4) - You seem to be following vocals from 01:10:454 - but these notes seem to keep the same rhythm even though the vocals fall a beat late here. Try moving these a beat later to 01:13:144 - for the vocals, this will also give you the opportunity to add a dash to 01:13:765 (1) - if you want I follow the melody ;w; It's low diff so i add the note a few. Sorry not change.
[ Platter]
01:03:730 (8) - The note here isn't too strong so I think it would be better to delete this and have a good dash between 01:03:627 (7,1) -. Mapping 01:03:730 (8) - prevents any real emphasis on 01:03:834 (1) - due to the density and I think having the dash is a better alternative to mapping this note considering how weak it is Change.
01:12:937 (3,4) - Same point as in the Salad, these notes follow a rhythm the song no longer supports so I'd suggest moving them a beat later to 01:13:144 (3,4) - I follow the melody ;w; It's low diff so i add the note a few. Sorry not change.
[ Rain]
01:03:730 (6,1) - Dash here would be nice, I certainly think 01:03:834 (1) - deserves some emphasis and a 1/2 dash isn't too hard at this level of difficulty Change.
01:12:937 (3,4) - Same again as said in the Salad and Platter mod, these notes would fit better a beat later, would also allow for a hyper between 01:13:558 (4,1) - Same as those too ;w;
[ Miracle]
01:03:420 (2,3,4,5) - Wiggle here doesn't feel too justified, it's a lot of fast direction changes for some fairly weak notes. A simpler pattern would be a better fit here, maybe something like this
I think now is fine for me. I want to create a note for do a player feel scared.

Cool style, good luck with your map

Thank you so much <3

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-11-26T10:08:53+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Ho ho hello, I'm your secret Santa this week!

Lumi's Overdose
00:56:385 (4) - Could extend this to 00:56:696 - for the vocal
>>That sounds weird
01:10:454 (1) - This is a strong sound certainly worth some emphasis, right now it's just a walk to this and has no real impact. A hyper to this would be ideal
>>Fixed
01:12:109 (1) - Similar to above, this is also deserving of a hyperdash
>>Okay
Cool style, good luck with your map

Thanks for the mod!

เย้

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rew0825

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Ponchiwi

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Ponchiwi 2017-11-30T04:16:31+00:00

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Cup]

Maybe you could change the form of the sliders 00:06:306 (1,2) - for give to these patterns feel a bit more exotic ,
and if you do it move 00:08:423 (1) - x=384Click Here
00:11:952 (1) - Move to x=392 Try this

[

Salad]

This section feels somewhat empty of dashes, why not add one here? 00:34:040 (1) - Move to x=128
00:37:351 (1) - same here add dash? uwu
00:50:592 (1) - oh, in this part needs dashes too, but i guess you did it cruz you like it like is and well.. in my opinion looks good add the dashes
why you did add a dash here? 01:15:420 (1) - D:

[

Platter]

00:15:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not give more intensity to this part? Something like this
2 and now i think is better cause you have one hdashes in this slider 00:17:075 (5) -
01:25:351 (1) - Add hdashes plz x.x will be cool

[

Rain]

One way to not make this part so repetitive is to give this form to these patternsClick Here

[

Lumi's Overdose]

01:08:799 (3) - Why is not there a bigger spacing here? you should increase it because have a finish sound

Funny map! I hope see it ranked soon

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