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GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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dalollypop
94 posts
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Topic Starter
dalollypop
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 05 July 2014 at 04:50:17

Artist: GARNiDELiA
Title: ambiguous (TV Size)
Source: Kill la Kill
Tags: op opening 2 ryuko matoi mako Mankanshoku studio trigger satsuki kiryuin Four Devas student council Tagre Blaziken Nofool aonkub555
BPM: 178
Filesize: 21255kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. aon's Insane (5.03 stars, 310 notes)
  2. Blaziken's Hard (2.79 stars, 242 notes)
  3. Easy (1.49 stars, 97 notes)
  4. Hard (3.1 stars, 191 notes)
  5. Insane (3.76 stars, 236 notes)
  6. Nofool's Muzukashii (3.02 stars, 361 notes)
  7. Nofool's Oni (3.84 stars, 446 notes)
  8. Normal (1.69 stars, 119 notes)
  9. Tagre's Insane (4.21 stars, 270 notes)
Download: GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size)
Download: GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I still haven't got too good at making these maps, but try it out tell me what i can improve on, because i really enjoy making these maps. i just need to learn to get better :)
easy
Normal
Hard
insane
Tagre's Insane
Blaziken's Insane
aon's Insane
TAIKO
Nofool's Oni
Nofool's Muzukashii
I have no idea how to make it hard without "overmapping" whatever that is? D:
Last edited by dalollypop , edited 148 times in total.
kliang96
4 posts
Joined January 2014
kliang96
This one is definitely done better than the other "GARNiDELiA - Ambiguous" currently available.

Will you be making hard/insane?

Only sad thing is that you put spinners to cover their bodies when they are bound by life fibers :cry: :cry:
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
Thanks, I'm still not really that good at this. but i try to put in what i think would be good.

I know i really didn't wan't to put spinners there, but i couldn't think of anything else to put there. it was just one big note she hit.
maybe a big slider would work? or anything you can suggest or send.


and yeah of course, and if anyone would like, they can get guest difficulty in the more the merrier


(can't update and fix a couple of things at this moment [11:00 uk] bancho keeps messing up)
Winek
888 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Hello, my mod you requested.

Link for the mod: Mod here :>
Color Represent Difficulty. You should know what I mean.
Sorry, I'm no good with Insanes difficulties, and Hard+ seem incomplete...
You can also answer the mod in the space: Your Answer.

So I hopes I help you.
Also, I give you a star to get rid of them for your best luck!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
thank you very much Winek for the mod :D


I will do it tommorow becuasde it is pretty late here right now.

Also good luck on your maps too. i would Mod back if i knew how to. but thanks anyway :3
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
mod from modding Q..

For all difficulties...
00:00:890 (1) - This is where the vocal starts, in case you didn't know..

[general]
I think your rhythm is a problem
Also, your patterns are basically bunch of straight or a little curved circles, like old maps
Consider using more sliders! <-- best way not to look like old maps.

[Hard]
00:03:671 (1) - sounds bad
SPOILER
00:05:862 (5,1) - [
SPOILER
00:06:199 (1) - I don't know if this bluetick-ending spinner is good. see what other people think about it.
00:09:006 (1) - make it into 2 sliders
00:10:185 (3) - sounds off beat to me , but I could be wrong :3
00:11:028 (4,5,6,7,1) - better flow
00:11:702 (1) - delete 1 tick and add a circle
00:21:646 (7) - no need for 3/4 slider
00:33:107 (6,7) - spacing
00:47:095 (2) - I don't like this
01:03:444 (2,3,4) - no need for 3/4
01:15:747 (1,3) - lame.
01:23:837 (5,1) - fill in notes

[Insane]
Overmapped, can't mod. I'm sorry :(
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
KK i do this baby

(that was quick lol)

thanks :P
[Yue]
1,643 posts
Joined January 2011
[Yue]
Hi! from my queue~
Small mod
2014-02-11 11:14 [Yue]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/365808 GARNiDELiA - Ambiguous (TV size) [Easy]]
2014-02-11 11:14 [Yue]: have time now for IRC mod?
2014-02-11 11:15 dalollypop: erm sure 
2014-02-11 11:15 dalollypop: :)
2014-02-11 11:15 [Yue]: good :3
2014-02-11 11:15 dalollypop: 2spooky never done chat mod
2014-02-11 11:16 dalollypop: k im on
2014-02-11 11:18 [Yue]: o.o
2014-02-11 11:18 dalollypop: love u
2014-02-11 11:19 [Yue]: Always remember to look your Aimod before upload beatmap
2014-02-11 11:19 [Yue]: in Easy
2014-02-11 11:20 dalollypop: ah kk
2014-02-11 11:20 dalollypop: object end not snapped
2014-02-11 11:20 dalollypop: thats all i think
2014-02-11 11:21 [Yue]: Well, now your map has duration 1:30
2014-02-11 11:22 [Yue]: so no need to have breaks
2014-02-11 11:22 dalollypop: so i fill in empty parts
2014-02-11 11:22 dalollypop: k
2014-02-11 11:25 [Yue]: the breaks are used on maps to last long, but little maps, like yours, you should fill in everything and not having breaks
2014-02-11 11:25 dalollypop: ok <3
2014-02-11 11:25 [Yue]: have to fill all the breaks all the difficulties you have o3o
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: yus ok :3
2014-02-11 11:26 [Yue]: press Control +1
2014-02-11 11:26 [Yue]: for better use of the grid
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: ohhhhh
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: nice
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: thanks
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: :D
2014-02-11 11:27 [Yue]: 00:00:974 (1,2) - 
2014-02-11 11:27 [Yue]: spacing
2014-02-11 11:27 [Yue]: always easy and normally must have the same spacing
2014-02-11 11:28 dalollypop:    ahh yes ok
2014-02-11 11:28 dalollypop: i can see top right i think spacing
2014-02-11 11:28 [Yue]: easy hp-2
2014-02-11 11:28 [Yue]: ar-1
2014-02-11 11:29 dalollypop: done :)
2014-02-11 11:30 [Yue]: song setup -> design -> 
2014-02-11 11:30 [Yue]: unmark "wedesreem support"
2014-02-11 11:30 dalollypop: ok
2014-02-11 11:31 [Yue]: You should disable this option in all the difficulties because you have SB
2014-02-11 11:31 dalollypop: SB? D:
2014-02-11 11:32 [Yue]: Storyboard
2014-02-11 11:32 dalollypop: ahh ok
2014-02-11 11:32 dalollypop: i see
2014-02-11 11:32 dalollypop: thanks
2014-02-11 11:33 [Yue]: your bg should be 1024x768
2014-02-11 11:34 dalollypop: ok i change that
2014-02-11 11:34 dalollypop: resize
2014-02-11 11:34 [Yue]: I think those are the basic things you should know
2014-02-11 11:35 dalollypop: ok thanks :)
2014-02-11 11:36 [Yue]: I can give you recheck when you have finished all
2014-02-11 11:36 dalollypop: ok thanks
2014-02-11 11:36 [Yue]: you call me :3

Good luck! :3
mrdawn2
6 posts
Joined September 2011
mrdawn2
Love it!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

mrdawn2 wrote:

Love it!
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
This is amazing.
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Blaziken wrote:

This is amazing.
WAIT WHAT.......REALLY :o :o :o

Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello, sorry for delay

bg stretched :\

Hard+
http://puu.sh/6Uc0c.osr
SPOILER
00:17:095 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is not really fun
01:07:994 (3,5) - also no sense in this sliders

Insane
http://puu.sh/6Uc6C.osr
SPOILER
nothing bad but I guess you need some work on patterns

Good Luck!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
ahhh thanks for that :D

and yeah those points i was quite doubtful of too. Hard+ (i kinda rushed, but shhh don't tell anyone.) :3

I will try to improve it when i can get time.

also yeah background stretched, couldn't find a bigger one for my previous pic. and this was origianlly bigger but not same aspect ratio. probably need to find a better one :P

Thanks anyway
encryptik
94 posts
Joined August 2013
encryptik
Just one small thing!

Sounded much nicer with the hitsound volume down to ~70-80%, but that might just be a personal preference thing. The streams in the insane difficulty sounded a little obnoxious with the hitsound volume so high.

Try it out and see if you prefer it
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
OK thanks for that, I've done that for you. (i think :S )

not sure if can give kudosu for that.

thanks anyhoo baby
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
I have no idea what to think about this, I LOVE Insane, but I really dislike Hard+, and Easy
Well, first, rename Hard+ to Insane, and Insane to somthing which indicates maximum difficulty, like ridiculous, tough, extre, extra, expert, exhaust, maximum, hyper, etc.

Please, use more NC (New Combos) In easy I seen combos with 16, The max is easy is 6-8, just like normal. On hard it is 10-12 and on Insane+ it is 18-20 as a max. Oh, maybe use a NC on every big white tick, every 4 beats

But, here are my testplays
Easy
Nomal
Hard
Hard+
Insane

On Easy-Normal diffs, use CS (Circle Size) 3, on Hard-Insane+ Diffs, use 3 or 4, depending on the song, no CS 5
If you want the .osr files, please PM me

Good Lcuk
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
K thanks baby. <3

The CS is no more 5+

and added some NC

thanks for the testplay
Neta
536 posts
Joined May 2011
Neta
Hi~ from my modding queue

All of my mod is suggestion

[Before Modding]
  1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6YZSl.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6Z08K.jpg )
    This will help you making your map's quality higher

[General]
  1. there's almost no hitsound you'd better put it

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These ones have some problems on rhythm
  2. 00:43:724 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:48:612 (1) - ^
  4. 01:16:252 (2,2) - ^
  5. 01:23:500 (3) -

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:702 (1) - weird rhythm
  2. 00:14:399 (1) - ^
  3. 00:24:342 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:41:365 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:57:208 (2) - ^
  6. 01:06:309 (3) - ^
  7. 01:11:028 (2,3,4,1) - ^
  8. 01:21:140 (1,2,3) - ^

[Other Diff]
  1. First there's some problems on offset or rhythm you should fix it
  2. Insane and Extra diff is little over mapped i'm sorry :(
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
K thanks done some of these.

kinda getting annoying, keeps saying something corrupt and have to keep DL it again. D:

but yeah thanks for mod
Don-Tan
73 posts
Joined May 2011
Don-Tan
This beatmap is getting pretty good :D still needs a little tweaking thou
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

xXDoNiXx wrote:

This beatmap is getting pretty good :D still needs a little tweaking thou
I'm trying
SPOILER
Don-Tan
73 posts
Joined May 2011
Don-Tan
You can do it :< i believe in you
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

xXDoNiXx wrote:

You can do it :< i believe in you
I Bereve in you who bereves in me, baby <3
ArcusCosinus
173 posts
Joined December 2012
ArcusCosinus
Random mod lol (and gd heh)
ALL OF MY MODS ARE ONLY SUGGESTIONS (i'm not too good modder)

[General]
Source: Kill la Kill
Try offset: 937

[Easy]
00:04:823 (3,4) - something wrong with spacing. fix it (if you will fix move 5 too)
00:19:823 (1,2) - same a above
00:23:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above (you need to be consistent with spacing in easy and normal. I suppose you wanted to safe some space. Totally not worth it)
00:27:913 (2) - this slider should have ended on 00:28:587 -
00:29:261 (4) - this slider should have ended 00:29:935 - here
00:35:666 (3,4) - try to get this shape http://puu.sh/7dHWA.jpg
00:41:059 (1) - should have ended 00:41:733 -
00:43:755 (1) - should have ended 00:44:430 -
00:57:407 (6) - should have ended 00:57:913 -
00:58:250 (1) - should have ended 00:58:924 -
01:01:284 (5) - you could change this repeat slider to long slider like this http://puu.sh/7dIEH.jpg (its ugly i know)
01:05:666 (1,2) - make they as a slider
01:12:913 (1) - spacing
01:13:755 - insert break?

all for easy
[Normal]
00:03:643 (1,2) - bad blanket. try to fix it
00:10:216 (1) - delete new combo
00:23:531 (2,3,4) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/7dJ0T.jpg
00:27:576 (3,4) - i bet this will be confused because 00:27:239 (2,3) - have wrong spacing and 3,4 have different rhythm than 1,2
00:30:609 to 00:46:789 - this part is very nice. Good job :D
00:46:621 (1,1) - overlapped each other
01:00:946 (4,5) - spacing
01:06:508 (3) - move this to 01:06:340 - and fix spacing
01:08:025 (3) - move to 01:08:194 then delete 01:09:036 (4) - its unnecessary
01:12:070 (3,4,1) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/7dJzi.jpg (you will have to fix spacing)

all for normal
[Hard]
00:02:801 (6) - delete repeat
00:06:340 (7) - delete then move slider to 00:06:255 - and extend it because it will have different time
00:09:079 (1) - well, i hope this became by accident. move it to 00:09:036 -
00:26:396 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/7dK1g.jpg
00:42:913 - there are 2 beat which are very important. place something here
00:46:452 (1) - should have ended on 00:46:958
00:51:508 (1,2,3) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/7dKcq.jpg
01:04:654 (5) - move to 01:04:823 - then delete repeat

all for hard

[Insane and Extra]
Sorry but I wont mod they because they are overmapped (insane not too much but extra is overmapped as hell)
I think you should delete this diffs from mapset
and here ill give you my gd http://puu.sh/7dGXI.osu (Insane)


Ok thats all
I suppose this is your one of first maps
I didnt mention about all of issues because i catch a lot of it and mod would have 2xA4 size
if you pm me ingame i will give you some tips (i'm not good mapper but i will do my best)
Good luck to your map :D
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
KK I change this, but I'll probably do it tomorrow, too tired today :O

I'll add GD thanks bby :D
Last edited by dalollypop , edited 2 times in total.
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Just passing by:

The song title is: ambiguous (TV Size) and the correct source is just Kill la Kill.
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
KK changed it, thanks baby
SPOILER
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
IRC mod.

Forgot to save log :( Good luck!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

10crystalmask01 wrote:

IRC mod.

Forgot to save log :( Good luck!
Thanks for mod :D :D :D



SPOILER
[spoilerbox]2014-03-01 18:49 10crystalmask01: Hullo o3o
2014-03-01 18:49 dalollypop: hai :3
2014-03-01 18:50 10crystalmask01: :D
2014-03-01 18:50 10crystalmask01: Shall we continue le mod?
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: if you want
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: :P
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: sure
2014-03-01 18:50 10crystalmask01: kk then
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: lo / leza go
2014-03-01 18:51 10crystalmask01: kk
2014-03-01 18:51 10crystalmask01: starting with Easy mode
2014-03-01 18:51 dalollypop: kkkkkk
2014-03-01 18:52 10crystalmask01: this time, I'll be looknig at le rhythm
2014-03-01 18:52 dalollypop: :O
2014-03-01 18:52 dalollypop: D:
2014-03-01 18:52 10crystalmask01: lol don't worry, it's not too bad :3
2014-03-01 18:53 dalollypop: is that the placment of notes or where i put on timeline
2014-03-01 18:54 10crystalmask01: Yep. Make sure you have hit objects on the large white ticks, because they help organize each seperate rhythm cycle.
2014-03-01 18:54 10crystalmask01: When you overrie one with a slider, like 00:11:386 (1) - for instance, it messes up the rhythm.
2014-03-01 18:55 dalollypop: ah i get ya
2014-03-01 18:55 dalollypop: i think
2014-03-01 18:55 10crystalmask01: 00:41:049 (1) - , 00:43:745 (1,2) - , 01:01:273 (5) - , 01:09:363 (2) - also has the same problem
2014-03-01 18:57 10crystalmask01: 00:23:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - to much hit circles in a row. This can actually very difficult for new players to handle.
2014-03-01 18:57 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 18:58 10crystalmask01: And that's it :3
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: with white tick things
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: shoul i move slider
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: and add note behind
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: or
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: forgot what was gonna say now D:
2014-03-01 18:59 10crystalmask01: there are many ways you can map 00:11:386 - 00:12:397 - . As lnog as there's a hit on 00:11:723 - it should be good
2014-03-01 18:59 10crystalmask01: Oh, and keep them 1 beat apart too! >//<
2014-03-01 18:59 dalollypop: kk :3
2014-03-01 19:01 dalollypop: is it ok to have repeats on big white tick or no
2014-03-01 19:01 10crystalmask01: Oh, can I also give a rhythm suggestion?
2014-03-01 19:01 10crystalmask01: yep, that's fine
2014-03-01 19:01 dalollypop: <3
2014-03-01 19:02 10crystalmask01: 00:05:993 - 00:10:712 - http://puu.sh/7f4cQ/2d9494db0b.jpg
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: what about end of slider? sorry bout all thsiD:
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: oh
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: lol
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: slly me
2014-03-01 19:02 10crystalmask01: post me a pic of the rhythm after
2014-03-01 19:03 10crystalmask01: 00:17:116 (3) - NC
2014-03-01 19:03 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:03 10crystalmask01: let's move this mod along now, :S
2014-03-01 19:03 dalollypop: D:
2014-03-01 19:04 10crystalmask01: fix later, you can savelog this chat later
2014-03-01 19:04 dalollypop: ah ok
2014-03-01 19:05 dalollypop: so normal then
2014-03-01 19:06 10crystalmask01: Wait, lemme finish giving some rhythm suggestions!
2014-03-01 19:06 10crystalmask01: =.=
2014-03-01 19:06 dalollypop: haha
2014-03-01 19:06 dalollypop: ok sorry :P
2014-03-01 19:07 10crystalmask01: 00:20:824 - 00:23:521 - http://puu.sh/7f4yc/1ff7784638.jpg try it
2014-03-01 19:08 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:08 10crystalmask01: Okay off to Normal
2014-03-01 19:08 dalollypop: :3
2014-03-01 19:08 10crystalmask01: 00:06:161 (1) - spinner should end at 00:08:689 -
2014-03-01 19:09 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:09 dalollypop: silly me
2014-03-01 19:09 10crystalmask01: 00:16:779 (3) - sldier overruns the big tick on 00:17:116 - .
2014-03-01 19:09 10crystalmask01: 00:20:824 (2,3,4) - No triple stacking on Normal diff
2014-03-01 19:09 10crystalmask01: 00:34:307 (3,4,5) - ^
2014-03-01 19:10 dalollypop: douoble stack?
2014-03-01 19:10 10crystalmask01: that's fine
2014-03-01 19:10 dalollypop: kk i jsut remove red
2014-03-01 19:10 10crystalmask01: 00:42:397 (2) - move to 00:42:566 - so it's equally spaced between the previous and next object.
2014-03-01 19:11 dalollypop: k
2014-03-01 19:12 10crystalmask01: 00:50:318 (1) - Spinner is to small. consider replacing it over the note at 00:50:318 -
2014-03-01 19:12 10crystalmask01: 01:01:274 (5) - Overruns large tick again.
2014-03-01 19:12 10crystalmask01: at 01:01:611 -
2014-03-01 19:13 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:13 10crystalmask01: Okay, onto hard diff
2014-03-01 19:13 10crystalmask01: ...You overused the clap hitsound O.o
2014-03-01 19:13 dalollypop: kay
2014-03-01 19:13 dalollypop: ;_;
2014-03-01 19:14 10crystalmask01: Here, use this hitsonud pattern: http://puu.sh/3OMD0/36fca333e9.jpg
2014-03-01 19:15 10crystalmask01: Hit objects that lands on the white ticks marked with a red 'x' will havea clap.
2014-03-01 19:15 10crystalmask01: ONLY the ones landing on the 'x'
2014-03-01 19:15 10crystalmask01: I can't mod Insane, sorry :S
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: ok
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: lol
2014-03-01 19:16 10crystalmask01: And that concludes the mod. Save the chat :L
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: thx
2014-03-01 19:57 10crystalmask01: np
Selkedoom
12 posts
Joined July 2011
Selkedoom
Hey lolly,

Your beatmaps are pretty good. But there are 2 major problems in my opinion: Variety and the placing of circles and sliders. And with the placing i mean: In the beatmap i can clearly notice that you didn't know exactly when to set a slider or a circle. It has gotten better through several mods but its not ready for ranked in my opinion.
To explain my point of view more accurately i would like to skype with you. If you cant then PM me.
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
You accepting GD's for this beatmap?
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Blaziken wrote:

You accepting GD's for this beatmap?
sure go ahead :3
eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue.

EASY
00:50:656 (1) - end it at 00:51:835

NORMAL
00:09:026 (1,2) - these 2 shapes should be the same
00:46:105 (3,1) - distance too close
00:50:318 (1) - end it at 00:51:835?
00:53:689 (4) - shorten by 1/2 (should end at 00:54:532)
00:55:037 (1) - move up by 1/2 (should start at 00:54:869) and try adding a circle at 00:56:217

HARD
00:17:116 (1) - put clap on the 3rd hit of slider
00:43:746 (1,2) - kinda far and random jump
01:24:026 (6,1) - put something inbetween here, such as another spinner

INSANE
00:11:893 (8) - new combo
00:12:904 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:352 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest move this part up by 1/2, and then maybe add a circle where (4) was
SPOILER
00:24:533 (6) - new combo
00:50:488 (1,1) - instead of that circle there try ending the spinner later?
01:05:656 (1) - this shape doesnt feel good
01:10:206 (3,4) - put something between here or make (4) a new combo
01:24:533 (2) - this doesnt sound right, try a 1/2 reverse slider with 4 hits maybe

Tagre's INSANE
I think this should be the same length as the other difficulties! Dont end it there!
Theres a lot of spinners for a 1:13 map, maybe change some to circles and sliders, especially the ones during the Kiai Time
00:25:206 (5) - i think it would flow better if this was changed to a 1/1 slider from 00:25:2056 - 00:25:543 (with an inheriting section to shorten it of course)
00:40:375 (1,2) - I really dont like the empty space, try this
SPOILER

EXTRA
OD=7-8 because you have the Insane difficulties already, make this hard!
you might wanna split the combos and turn up the HP too
00:00:937 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i think this part is overmapped, those streams arent in the music :P
00:11:723 (11) - new combo
00:20:234 (9) - new combo
00:58:745 (7,1) - put something between here

Nice mapset, good spread of difficulty! In general I think you should try making less empty spaces on your harder difficulties, I only pointed out the ones I thought were most blatant but theres more places you could add to. I know you were mapping the vocal but in these empty times try to follow the drum beat! Dont give up, and best of luck :)
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
I'll work on making a hard difficulty, you don't have to accept it tho
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Selkedoom wrote:

Hey lolly,

Your beatmaps are pretty good. But there are 2 major problems in my opinion: Variety and the placing of circles and sliders. And with the placing i mean: In the beatmap i can clearly notice that you didn't know exactly when to set a slider or a circle. It has gotten better through several mods but its not ready for ranked in my opinion.
To explain my point of view more accurately i would like to skype with you. If you cant then PM me.
Sure, just message me when i'm online <3

eeezzzeee wrote:

Thanks for mod, i will do the fixes <3 baby

Blaziken wrote:

I'll work on making a hard difficulty, you don't have to accept it tho
[/quote]

course i'll accept it, the more the merrier. :D :D
V3n0m
6 posts
Joined April 2013
V3n0m
Why did you change the Extra's level, it was good before but then now it's too easy, is it ok if you keep that old one back but call the levle differently? so you can have both maps :). ty
phi
18 posts
Joined September 2013
phi
Pretty good map, much better than the other versions of this song. I think Extra is a bit too easy though. Maybe bump up the drain a bit?
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

ifancysmeone wrote:

Why did you change the Extra's level, it was good before but then now it's too easy, is it ok if you keep that old one back but call the levle differently? so you can have both maps :). ty
aha you liked it. :P that's a first.

ok i will try to add back if you prefer that one

just for u bby <3 8-)
CPLs
351 posts
Joined April 2012
CPLs
I agree to remove extra, it's way too overmapped :o

and about the thing you say "the more the merrier" is wrong....
a map should not have more than 8 diff (except other modes), so don't add more gd if possible
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Selkedoom wrote:

Hey lolly,

Your beatmaps are pretty good. But there are 2 major problems in my opinion: Variety and the placing of circles and sliders. And with the placing i mean: In the beatmap i can clearly notice that you didn't know exactly when to set a slider or a circle. It has gotten better through several mods but its not ready for ranked in my opinion.
To explain my point of view more accurately i would like to skype with you. If you cant then PM me.
k thanks for IRC mod baby <3


CPLs wrote:

I agree to remove extra, it's way too overmapped :o
erm sure i i can't fix, but no-one told me what's wrong. some people, want it some don't so i leave it for those who do. until finished fixing other diffs. if no-one tells me whats wrong in it, then sure lol. :P
Clyine
158 posts
Joined December 2011
Clyine
Mod from Neonat's newcomer pit-stop

[General]
  1. Offset 929. Remember to resnap your green lines!
[Insane]
  1. This difficulty feel more like a hard. Even your Hard difficulty feels more insane than this.
  2. 00:03:288 (7) - Remove note.
  3. 00:03:625 (1) - Try this.
  4. 00:05:816 (8) - From 8 try this. plays alot better.
  5. 00:10:873 (6) - Try this
  6. 00:11:716 (8) - Remove note
  7. 00:11:884 (1) - Try this instead
  8. 00:14:413 (1) - Try this
  9. 00:18:120 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Stream is overmapped and breaks rhythm. Try this.
  10. 00:19:805 (1) -
  11. 00:22:670 (4) -
  12. 00:25:198 (3) -
  13. 00:27:558 (1,2) - This 2 slider is the worst part of the whole map.
  14. 00:30:591 (1,2,3) - Use this rhythm instead. Remove the overmapped stream.
  15. 00:38:682 (3,4,5) - Don't stack these.
  16. 00:40:199 (8,9,10) - Same with these ^
  17. 00:52:839 (3,4,1) -
  18. 00:55:536 (7) -
  19. 01:02:614 - Good time for streams
  20. 01:04:805 (2) - To keep your symmetry and improve the rhythm
  21. 01:06:997 (1) -
  22. 01:08:514 (9) - Change this to 3 notes
  23. 01:09:188 (1) -
  24. 01:10:704 - Add note
  25. 01:10:872 - Add note
  26. 01:21:322 (2) - Wrong timing. White tick.
  27. 01:22:670 (2) - Same as above.

[Tagre's Insane]
  1. Very good difficulty.
  2. OD +2 (whats with all the OD 6.)
  3. 00:58:071 (1,2) - Plays weird. Try remapping it.
[Remarks]
I'm not going to mod the rest of the difficulties. since i'm good good with easy difficulties.( But from what i see, it looks pretty good. ) Hard difficulty is better mapped than insane. But rmb to apply some things to from insane mod to hard where possible. There is also a NC spam in hard diff from what i see. remove it. it's not necessary.

And about extra.
I think it's better if you delete this difficulty. And if you need reasons, here's why.
  1. Unnecessary Triplets everywhere
  2. Unnecessary Streams everywhere
  3. Sliders that don't fit the music.
This map is also easier without the music. The reason should be pretty obvious.


And i'm sorry if i sound like a asshole. I'm really sorry. :( :? :( :? Good luck!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :)
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
Finished my map, I changed it to an Insane by the way.

Blaziken's Insane
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,535 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Do not give kudos to a post that is not a mod, like a guest map update. Just a reminder if you didn't know.
alegd1039
1 post
Joined June 2013
alegd1039
Man, i dont know how to vote this beatmap. I just play.. but if i can ill do it.. Ive just played the hard song and i LOVE it. Amazing map, amazing song, and amazing anime, obviously... Gratz
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
cant vote on it till its ranked
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Clyine wrote:

Thanks for mod bby guuurl <3

i will do these changes, though. now i jsut don;t know how to make hard maps anymore :cry: :cry: :cry: i thought you just need streams and jumps or something. maps a little too easy now, but still all good i guess :3 :3 :3

i delete extra too lol ;)

Blaziken wrote:

Finished my map, I changed it to an Insane by the way.

Blaziken's Insane
thanks bro, I'll just add it right away <3

neonat wrote:

Do not give kudos to a post that is not a mod, like a guest map update. Just a reminder if you didn't know.
ah you men i can only give it mods and not GD at all??? :? :? :? okai then bby <3 silly me

alegd1039 wrote:

Man, i dont know how to vote this beatmap. I just play.. but if i can ill do it.. Ive just played the hard song and i LOVE it. Amazing map, amazing song, and amazing anime, obviously... Gratz
ahah you need to get kudosu star first, then you can vote on map lol, but its fine. Happy you're enjoying it.....guurrrrl :) :)


to y'all <3
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
If you're going for ranking i'll shoot kudosu.
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Blaziken wrote:

If you're going for ranking i'll shoot kudosu.
I really don't mind, as long as people are playing my map, and like it. if not I am trying to improve. :D

just want a half decent map for once :P
SumdiLumdi
1 post
Joined September 2013
SumdiLumdi
This is really good, I can't wait until its ranked :)
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