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GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

10crystalmask01 wrote:

IRC mod.

Forgot to save log :( Good luck!
Thanks for mod :D :D :D



SPOILER
[spoilerbox]2014-03-01 18:49 10crystalmask01: Hullo o3o
2014-03-01 18:49 dalollypop: hai :3
2014-03-01 18:50 10crystalmask01: :D
2014-03-01 18:50 10crystalmask01: Shall we continue le mod?
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: if you want
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: :P
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: sure
2014-03-01 18:50 10crystalmask01: kk then
2014-03-01 18:50 dalollypop: lo / leza go
2014-03-01 18:51 10crystalmask01: kk
2014-03-01 18:51 10crystalmask01: starting with Easy mode
2014-03-01 18:51 dalollypop: kkkkkk
2014-03-01 18:52 10crystalmask01: this time, I'll be looknig at le rhythm
2014-03-01 18:52 dalollypop: :O
2014-03-01 18:52 dalollypop: D:
2014-03-01 18:52 10crystalmask01: lol don't worry, it's not too bad :3
2014-03-01 18:53 dalollypop: is that the placment of notes or where i put on timeline
2014-03-01 18:54 10crystalmask01: Yep. Make sure you have hit objects on the large white ticks, because they help organize each seperate rhythm cycle.
2014-03-01 18:54 10crystalmask01: When you overrie one with a slider, like 00:11:386 (1) - for instance, it messes up the rhythm.
2014-03-01 18:55 dalollypop: ah i get ya
2014-03-01 18:55 dalollypop: i think
2014-03-01 18:55 10crystalmask01: 00:41:049 (1) - , 00:43:745 (1,2) - , 01:01:273 (5) - , 01:09:363 (2) - also has the same problem
2014-03-01 18:57 10crystalmask01: 00:23:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - to much hit circles in a row. This can actually very difficult for new players to handle.
2014-03-01 18:57 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 18:58 10crystalmask01: And that's it :3
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: with white tick things
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: shoul i move slider
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: and add note behind
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: or
2014-03-01 18:58 dalollypop: forgot what was gonna say now D:
2014-03-01 18:59 10crystalmask01: there are many ways you can map 00:11:386 - 00:12:397 - . As lnog as there's a hit on 00:11:723 - it should be good
2014-03-01 18:59 10crystalmask01: Oh, and keep them 1 beat apart too! >//<
2014-03-01 18:59 dalollypop: kk :3
2014-03-01 19:01 dalollypop: is it ok to have repeats on big white tick or no
2014-03-01 19:01 10crystalmask01: Oh, can I also give a rhythm suggestion?
2014-03-01 19:01 10crystalmask01: yep, that's fine
2014-03-01 19:01 dalollypop: <3
2014-03-01 19:02 10crystalmask01: 00:05:993 - 00:10:712 - http://puu.sh/7f4cQ/2d9494db0b.jpg
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: what about end of slider? sorry bout all thsiD:
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: oh
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: lol
2014-03-01 19:02 dalollypop: slly me
2014-03-01 19:02 10crystalmask01: post me a pic of the rhythm after
2014-03-01 19:03 10crystalmask01: 00:17:116 (3) - NC
2014-03-01 19:03 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:03 10crystalmask01: let's move this mod along now, :S
2014-03-01 19:03 dalollypop: D:
2014-03-01 19:04 10crystalmask01: fix later, you can savelog this chat later
2014-03-01 19:04 dalollypop: ah ok
2014-03-01 19:05 dalollypop: so normal then
2014-03-01 19:06 10crystalmask01: Wait, lemme finish giving some rhythm suggestions!
2014-03-01 19:06 10crystalmask01: =.=
2014-03-01 19:06 dalollypop: haha
2014-03-01 19:06 dalollypop: ok sorry :P
2014-03-01 19:07 10crystalmask01: 00:20:824 - 00:23:521 - http://puu.sh/7f4yc/1ff7784638.jpg try it
2014-03-01 19:08 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:08 10crystalmask01: Okay off to Normal
2014-03-01 19:08 dalollypop: :3
2014-03-01 19:08 10crystalmask01: 00:06:161 (1) - spinner should end at 00:08:689 -
2014-03-01 19:09 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:09 dalollypop: silly me
2014-03-01 19:09 10crystalmask01: 00:16:779 (3) - sldier overruns the big tick on 00:17:116 - .
2014-03-01 19:09 10crystalmask01: 00:20:824 (2,3,4) - No triple stacking on Normal diff
2014-03-01 19:09 10crystalmask01: 00:34:307 (3,4,5) - ^
2014-03-01 19:10 dalollypop: douoble stack?
2014-03-01 19:10 10crystalmask01: that's fine
2014-03-01 19:10 dalollypop: kk i jsut remove red
2014-03-01 19:10 10crystalmask01: 00:42:397 (2) - move to 00:42:566 - so it's equally spaced between the previous and next object.
2014-03-01 19:11 dalollypop: k
2014-03-01 19:12 10crystalmask01: 00:50:318 (1) - Spinner is to small. consider replacing it over the note at 00:50:318 -
2014-03-01 19:12 10crystalmask01: 01:01:274 (5) - Overruns large tick again.
2014-03-01 19:12 10crystalmask01: at 01:01:611 -
2014-03-01 19:13 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:13 10crystalmask01: Okay, onto hard diff
2014-03-01 19:13 10crystalmask01: ...You overused the clap hitsound O.o
2014-03-01 19:13 dalollypop: kay
2014-03-01 19:13 dalollypop: ;_;
2014-03-01 19:14 10crystalmask01: Here, use this hitsonud pattern: http://puu.sh/3OMD0/36fca333e9.jpg
2014-03-01 19:15 10crystalmask01: Hit objects that lands on the white ticks marked with a red 'x' will havea clap.
2014-03-01 19:15 10crystalmask01: ONLY the ones landing on the 'x'
2014-03-01 19:15 10crystalmask01: I can't mod Insane, sorry :S
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: ok
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: lol
2014-03-01 19:16 10crystalmask01: And that concludes the mod. Save the chat :L
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: kk
2014-03-01 19:16 dalollypop: thx
2014-03-01 19:57 10crystalmask01: np
Selkedoom
12 posts
Joined July 2011
Selkedoom
Hey lolly,

Your beatmaps are pretty good. But there are 2 major problems in my opinion: Variety and the placing of circles and sliders. And with the placing i mean: In the beatmap i can clearly notice that you didn't know exactly when to set a slider or a circle. It has gotten better through several mods but its not ready for ranked in my opinion.
To explain my point of view more accurately i would like to skype with you. If you cant then PM me.
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
You accepting GD's for this beatmap?
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Blaziken wrote:

You accepting GD's for this beatmap?
sure go ahead :3
eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue.

EASY
00:50:656 (1) - end it at 00:51:835

NORMAL
00:09:026 (1,2) - these 2 shapes should be the same
00:46:105 (3,1) - distance too close
00:50:318 (1) - end it at 00:51:835?
00:53:689 (4) - shorten by 1/2 (should end at 00:54:532)
00:55:037 (1) - move up by 1/2 (should start at 00:54:869) and try adding a circle at 00:56:217

HARD
00:17:116 (1) - put clap on the 3rd hit of slider
00:43:746 (1,2) - kinda far and random jump
01:24:026 (6,1) - put something inbetween here, such as another spinner

INSANE
00:11:893 (8) - new combo
00:12:904 (1) - remove new combo
00:23:352 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest move this part up by 1/2, and then maybe add a circle where (4) was
SPOILER
00:24:533 (6) - new combo
00:50:488 (1,1) - instead of that circle there try ending the spinner later?
01:05:656 (1) - this shape doesnt feel good
01:10:206 (3,4) - put something between here or make (4) a new combo
01:24:533 (2) - this doesnt sound right, try a 1/2 reverse slider with 4 hits maybe

Tagre's INSANE
I think this should be the same length as the other difficulties! Dont end it there!
Theres a lot of spinners for a 1:13 map, maybe change some to circles and sliders, especially the ones during the Kiai Time
00:25:206 (5) - i think it would flow better if this was changed to a 1/1 slider from 00:25:2056 - 00:25:543 (with an inheriting section to shorten it of course)
00:40:375 (1,2) - I really dont like the empty space, try this
SPOILER

EXTRA
OD=7-8 because you have the Insane difficulties already, make this hard!
you might wanna split the combos and turn up the HP too
00:00:937 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - i think this part is overmapped, those streams arent in the music :P
00:11:723 (11) - new combo
00:20:234 (9) - new combo
00:58:745 (7,1) - put something between here

Nice mapset, good spread of difficulty! In general I think you should try making less empty spaces on your harder difficulties, I only pointed out the ones I thought were most blatant but theres more places you could add to. I know you were mapping the vocal but in these empty times try to follow the drum beat! Dont give up, and best of luck :)
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
I'll work on making a hard difficulty, you don't have to accept it tho
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Selkedoom wrote:

Hey lolly,

Your beatmaps are pretty good. But there are 2 major problems in my opinion: Variety and the placing of circles and sliders. And with the placing i mean: In the beatmap i can clearly notice that you didn't know exactly when to set a slider or a circle. It has gotten better through several mods but its not ready for ranked in my opinion.
To explain my point of view more accurately i would like to skype with you. If you cant then PM me.
Sure, just message me when i'm online <3

eeezzzeee wrote:

Thanks for mod, i will do the fixes <3 baby

Blaziken wrote:

I'll work on making a hard difficulty, you don't have to accept it tho
[/quote]

course i'll accept it, the more the merrier. :D :D
V3n0m
6 posts
Joined April 2013
V3n0m
Why did you change the Extra's level, it was good before but then now it's too easy, is it ok if you keep that old one back but call the levle differently? so you can have both maps :). ty
phi
18 posts
Joined September 2013
phi
Pretty good map, much better than the other versions of this song. I think Extra is a bit too easy though. Maybe bump up the drain a bit?
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

ifancysmeone wrote:

Why did you change the Extra's level, it was good before but then now it's too easy, is it ok if you keep that old one back but call the levle differently? so you can have both maps :). ty
aha you liked it. :P that's a first.

ok i will try to add back if you prefer that one

just for u bby <3 8-)
CPLs
351 posts
Joined April 2012
CPLs
I agree to remove extra, it's way too overmapped :o

and about the thing you say "the more the merrier" is wrong....
a map should not have more than 8 diff (except other modes), so don't add more gd if possible
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Selkedoom wrote:

Hey lolly,

Your beatmaps are pretty good. But there are 2 major problems in my opinion: Variety and the placing of circles and sliders. And with the placing i mean: In the beatmap i can clearly notice that you didn't know exactly when to set a slider or a circle. It has gotten better through several mods but its not ready for ranked in my opinion.
To explain my point of view more accurately i would like to skype with you. If you cant then PM me.
k thanks for IRC mod baby <3


CPLs wrote:

I agree to remove extra, it's way too overmapped :o
erm sure i i can't fix, but no-one told me what's wrong. some people, want it some don't so i leave it for those who do. until finished fixing other diffs. if no-one tells me whats wrong in it, then sure lol. :P
Clyine
158 posts
Joined December 2011
Clyine
Mod from Neonat's newcomer pit-stop

[General]
  1. Offset 929. Remember to resnap your green lines!
[Insane]
  1. This difficulty feel more like a hard. Even your Hard difficulty feels more insane than this.
  2. 00:03:288 (7) - Remove note.
  3. 00:03:625 (1) - Try this.
  4. 00:05:816 (8) - From 8 try this. plays alot better.
  5. 00:10:873 (6) - Try this
  6. 00:11:716 (8) - Remove note
  7. 00:11:884 (1) - Try this instead
  8. 00:14:413 (1) - Try this
  9. 00:18:120 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Stream is overmapped and breaks rhythm. Try this.
  10. 00:19:805 (1) -
  11. 00:22:670 (4) -
  12. 00:25:198 (3) -
  13. 00:27:558 (1,2) - This 2 slider is the worst part of the whole map.
  14. 00:30:591 (1,2,3) - Use this rhythm instead. Remove the overmapped stream.
  15. 00:38:682 (3,4,5) - Don't stack these.
  16. 00:40:199 (8,9,10) - Same with these ^
  17. 00:52:839 (3,4,1) -
  18. 00:55:536 (7) -
  19. 01:02:614 - Good time for streams
  20. 01:04:805 (2) - To keep your symmetry and improve the rhythm
  21. 01:06:997 (1) -
  22. 01:08:514 (9) - Change this to 3 notes
  23. 01:09:188 (1) -
  24. 01:10:704 - Add note
  25. 01:10:872 - Add note
  26. 01:21:322 (2) - Wrong timing. White tick.
  27. 01:22:670 (2) - Same as above.

[Tagre's Insane]
  1. Very good difficulty.
  2. OD +2 (whats with all the OD 6.)
  3. 00:58:071 (1,2) - Plays weird. Try remapping it.
[Remarks]
I'm not going to mod the rest of the difficulties. since i'm good good with easy difficulties.( But from what i see, it looks pretty good. ) Hard difficulty is better mapped than insane. But rmb to apply some things to from insane mod to hard where possible. There is also a NC spam in hard diff from what i see. remove it. it's not necessary.

And about extra.
I think it's better if you delete this difficulty. And if you need reasons, here's why.
  1. Unnecessary Triplets everywhere
  2. Unnecessary Streams everywhere
  3. Sliders that don't fit the music.
This map is also easier without the music. The reason should be pretty obvious.


And i'm sorry if i sound like a asshole. I'm really sorry. :( :? :( :? Good luck!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :)
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
Finished my map, I changed it to an Insane by the way.

Blaziken's Insane
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
Do not give kudos to a post that is not a mod, like a guest map update. Just a reminder if you didn't know.
alegd1039
1 post
Joined June 2013
alegd1039
Man, i dont know how to vote this beatmap. I just play.. but if i can ill do it.. Ive just played the hard song and i LOVE it. Amazing map, amazing song, and amazing anime, obviously... Gratz
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
cant vote on it till its ranked
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Clyine wrote:

Thanks for mod bby guuurl <3

i will do these changes, though. now i jsut don;t know how to make hard maps anymore :cry: :cry: :cry: i thought you just need streams and jumps or something. maps a little too easy now, but still all good i guess :3 :3 :3

i delete extra too lol ;)

Blaziken wrote:

Finished my map, I changed it to an Insane by the way.

Blaziken's Insane
thanks bro, I'll just add it right away <3

neonat wrote:

Do not give kudos to a post that is not a mod, like a guest map update. Just a reminder if you didn't know.
ah you men i can only give it mods and not GD at all??? :? :? :? okai then bby <3 silly me

alegd1039 wrote:

Man, i dont know how to vote this beatmap. I just play.. but if i can ill do it.. Ive just played the hard song and i LOVE it. Amazing map, amazing song, and amazing anime, obviously... Gratz
ahah you need to get kudosu star first, then you can vote on map lol, but its fine. Happy you're enjoying it.....guurrrrl :) :)


to y'all <3
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
If you're going for ranking i'll shoot kudosu.
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Blaziken wrote:

If you're going for ranking i'll shoot kudosu.
I really don't mind, as long as people are playing my map, and like it. if not I am trying to improve. :D

just want a half decent map for once :P
SumdiLumdi
1 post
Joined September 2013
SumdiLumdi
This is really good, I can't wait until its ranked :)
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

SumdiLumdi wrote:

This is really good, I can't wait until its ranked :)


<3 thanks bby guuurl
CPLs
351 posts
Joined April 2012
CPLs
:o 4 insanes :o
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

CPLs wrote:

:o 4 insanes :o
lol 3 then i guess xD

i've gone too far :o
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
From my Queue.

[Storyboard]
Checking your OSB files, the following file kill-la-kill-character-wallpaper.jpg is missing from the folder but it's mentioned in the OSB. That aside, your folder have 3 Storyboard files. There should be only one.

The image osubgtaiko.png is not used anywhere.

[General]
The difficulties have different Kiai times. Personally this is not nice for people who can't play all difficulties but want to feel the same intensity of the Kiai mode. I'd like to have similar Kiai times to all difficulties, just a personal opinion.

It would be nice to have the same color set in all difficulties too but this is not so critical. Usually as long as they serve the background well it's fine.

Fix the Audio-lead in to all beatmaps. Should be minimum 2000 ms. If you open the .osu file with notepad you'll find it at the top.

[Easy]
00:19:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use a lot of claps, keep the claps at the beat, the default claps sound really annoying to such songs. Try to use a custom clap which will make it sound more pleasant if you'd like.
00:29:243 (4,1) - Low AR makes this overlap visible, it's be nice to use another pattern to avoid the overlap. I'll leave it to your own judge. By changing one you shall mind 00:31:940 (2) - as well.
00:35:648 (3,4) - Fix the blanket here.
00:42:052 (3) - I think this gets off the gamefield quite a lot.
00:59:412 (2) - Start this on the next white tick. Downbeat sliders are difficult for new players.

[Normal]
00:54:861 (1) - Just move this one tick to left to avoid the overlap with the previous slider.
01:09:355 (4,1) - Stack them? o: Looks better imo.
Nothing else.

[Hard]
00:34:973 (4,5) - Stack 4 with the end of 5 looks better I guess
01:01:265 (1,1,1) - remove the New combo from those and let the NC to 01:02:277 (1) - only so people can at least guess there's something different with the specific sliders since the rest are on the same speed.

[Blaziken's Hard]
I'd rather AR8. It's meant to be hard afterall.
01:15:760 (1,2) - Why this overlap :c It doesn't look okay, move the one slider away from the other so it doesn't touch o:
01:16:771 (5,6) - ^
01:25:029 (4) - End this to the red tick, fits better I think.

[Insane]
Nothing to see.

[Tagre's Insane]
Some nazi things
00:17:445 (3,4) - Blanket
00:20:479 (4,5) - ^
00:23:513 (1,2) - ^
00:28:737 (6,7) - ^

Nothing else.

[aon's insane]
00:52:164 - Kiai should be here like the rest difficulties. Your kiai now starts totally randomly out of nowhere and doesn't give any emphasis to the part as it's meant to be doing.
01:09:608 (1,1) - The distance is far too much even for insane. The beat spacing must be appropriately set to let the player spin out the whole time while being able to keep the combo afterwards. That aside, the spinner is too short.

Nothing else.

Good luck. :)
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Pappy
From queue~!

[General]
Needs video and colors :c
Lol, GDs insane are the same but little changed O.o

[Insane]
00:01:434 (2) - Change to something like this:
ss
After this, move 00:02:109 (3,4,5) there:
SPOILER
00:03:625 (1,2,3) - Give these more spacing
00:05:816 (8) - This slider is little unrankable
00:11:041 (7) - Try to not making more than one reverse
00:16:098 (6) - NC here guy :P
00:18:626 (6) - ^
00:25:704 (2) - Unrankable slider
00:27:558 (1,2,3) - Give these more spacing
00:34:300 (1) , 00:35:986 (5) - Try to change shape of turning
00:39:693 (7) - NC here guy :P
00:41:716 (2,3,4,5) - More spacing
00:44:413 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:49:299 (1) - Try to not making more than one reverse
00:56:041 (1) 01:05:648 (1) 01:21:490 (2,2) - Don't like these sliders :c Circular sliders are better
01:25:704 - Add note here and start spinner at blue line

[Blaziken's Hard]
00:05:479 (3,4) - Lol, why the same with 1 & 2? O.o
00:14:412 (1,2) - Blank these two
00:16:434 (6,7) - Spacing
00:34:131 (2,3,4) - ^ It looks ugly :C
00:42:052 (5,6) - ^
01:04:131 (6,8) - Ugly sliders, circulars are better :3
01:20:310 (6) - This slider is unrankable

And... There isn't any hitsound! :O

[Hard]
00:15:929 (6) - NC here :P
01:00:760 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam lol
01:07:838 (1) - Unrank slider
01:21:153 (1,3) - ^

[Normal]
00:03:625 (1,2) - Blanket
00:09:018 (1,2) - Ugly sliders x.x
00:27:558 (3,5) - ^

[Easy]
Move 00:04:468 (2) to x:200 y:288, 00:04:805 (3) to x:260 y:236, 00:05:142 (4) to x:284 y:160 and 5 and 6 with DS
00:21:827 (5) - Move up
00:23:513 (7) - NC
00:25:198 (10) - This slider should be end at 00:25:704
00:31:603 - Add note here
00:50:647 (1,1) - On easy diffs, after spinner must be one white line no occupied.

Whahahhaw done :3
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

&

Papcio wrote:

[General]
Needs video and colors :c
Lol, GDs insane are the same but little changed O.o
but i have got video and colors D:

But yeah
Thanks both of you guys, i will do these mods. great help, good mod. :D :D


big halp <3
aonkub555
133 posts
Joined June 2012
aonkub555

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

From my Queue.

[Storyboard]
Checking your OSB files, the following file kill-la-kill-character-wallpaper.jpg is missing from the folder but it's mentioned in the OSB. That aside, your folder have 3 Storyboard files. There should be only one.

The image osubgtaiko.png is not used anywhere.

[General]
The difficulties have different Kiai times. Personally this is not nice for people who can't play all difficulties but want to feel the same intensity of the Kiai mode. I'd like to have similar Kiai times to all difficulties, just a personal opinion.

It would be nice to have the same color set in all difficulties too but this is not so critical. Usually as long as they serve the background well it's fine.

Fix the Audio-lead in to all beatmaps. Should be minimum 2000 ms. If you open the .osu file with notepad you'll find it at the top.

[Easy]
00:19:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You use a lot of claps, keep the claps at the beat, the default claps sound really annoying to such songs. Try to use a custom clap which will make it sound more pleasant if you'd like.
00:29:243 (4,1) - Low AR makes this overlap visible, it's be nice to use another pattern to avoid the overlap. I'll leave it to your own judge. By changing one you shall mind 00:31:940 (2) - as well.
00:35:648 (3,4) - Fix the blanket here.
00:42:052 (3) - I think this gets off the gamefield quite a lot.
00:59:412 (2) - Start this on the next white tick. Downbeat sliders are difficult for new players.

[Normal]
00:54:861 (1) - Just move this one tick to left to avoid the overlap with the previous slider.
01:09:355 (4,1) - Stack them? o: Looks better imo.
Nothing else.

[Hard]
00:34:973 (4,5) - Stack 4 with the end of 5 looks better I guess
01:01:265 (1,1,1) - remove the New combo from those and let the NC to 01:02:277 (1) - only so people can at least guess there's something different with the specific sliders since the rest are on the same speed.

[Blaziken's Hard]
I'd rather AR8. It's meant to be hard afterall.
01:15:760 (1,2) - Why this overlap :c It doesn't look okay, move the one slider away from the other so it doesn't touch o:
01:16:771 (5,6) - ^
01:25:029 (4) - End this to the red tick, fits better I think.

[Insane]
Nothing to see.

[Tagre's Insane]
Some nazi things
00:17:445 (3,4) - Blanket
00:20:479 (4,5) - ^
00:23:513 (1,2) - ^
00:28:737 (6,7) - ^

Nothing else.

[aon's insane]
00:52:164 - Kiai should be here like the rest difficulties. Your kiai now starts totally randomly out of nowhere and doesn't give any emphasis to the part as it's meant to be doing.
okey fix
01:09:608 (1,1) - The distance is far too much even for insane. The beat spacing must be appropriately set to let the player spin out the whole time while being able to keep the combo afterwards. That aside, the spinner is too short.
hm...i can play pass in point this but wait recommed from mod other
Nothing else.

Good luck. :)
Thank you for modding :)

Update
osu file format v12

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Creator:dalollypop
Version:aon's Insane
Source:Kill la Kill
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256,100,73232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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480,32,74074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,160,74243,2,2,P|388:224|548:288,1,240.000010049343
294,222,74749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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340,16,75423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,252,75760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,75928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,76097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,72,76265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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96,152,76771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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176,24,77277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,180,77445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,85704,12,0,88906,0:0:0:0:
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
I'll work through my mods when I get out of school.

Edit
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KiyoshiX101 wrote:

From my Queue.



[Blaziken's Hard]
I'd rather AR8. It's meant to be hard afterall. Yup.
01:15:760 (1,2) - Why this overlap :c It doesn't look okay, move the one slider away from the other so it doesn't touch o:Mmhmm
01:16:771 (5,6) - ^ Yeh
01:25:029 (4) - End this to the red tick, fits better I think.Okay
Onto the next one.

Papcio wrote:

From queue~!



[Blaziken's Hard]
00:05:479 (3,4) - Lol, why the same with 1 & 2? O.o Tried moving it
00:14:412 (1,2) - Blank these two Okay
00:16:434 (6,7) - Spacing yeh
00:34:131 (2,3,4) - ^ It looks ugly :C Tried blanking it
00:42:052 (5,6) - ^ No idea how to change this one.
01:04:131 (6,8) - Ugly sliders, circulars are better :3 Not too sure how to change dis plus I quite like it this way tbh
01:20:310 (6) - This slider is unrankable I don't know where to find the ranking criteria for sliders in particular so I just went with it and changed it

And... There isn't any hitsound! :O I'll try in a different .osu file


Whahahhaw done :3
I'll upload in a sec.....
There we go.

http://puu.sh/7HPsZ.osu
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi, modding Taiko diffs as requested by Nofool.

dat bg

[General]
:!: Disable letterboxing.

[Muzukashii]
wow, this diff is very good for my taste. There are a few mistakes here though and I have some suggestions I'll be happy to help here.
00:07:670 (12) - It'd be better if you start this slider along with vocals in 00:06:322. I think you put this to follow the increasing sound in the background, but as it is barely noticeable, it feels a bit uncomfy to play, you can also end this slider in 00:08:681, where the vocals stop. Alternatively, you can use a spinner with the same length I suggest.
00:20:985 - This will be a large but a simple suggestion, add a don here and do the same in the next similar patterns(00:22:333, 00:23:681, 00:25:030.), this way the katsu notes would emphasize more. If you do, change 00:25:535 (79,80,81) and similar spots (00:26:884 (84,85,86), 00:28:232 (89,90,91), )into katsu, the drums change in tone (idk about musical terms, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say) and katsu notes would fit more here. And maybe keep using this pattern for 00:29:580 (84,85,86,87).
00:35:817 - Add a don here, it'd play nicely and it'll make 00:35:985 (114) feel better.
00:41:209 - Please don't make the change in speed so drastical, if possible remove it, it doesn't feel to comfy ;_;
00:44:580 - Maybe add a don here too, the drums are quite noticeable here.
00:49:636 - Add a don here to keep somehow the consistency you used for previous part.
00:50:479 - A don here would play nice.
The kiai is missing some notes, it is very good you base on drums to map, but adding a few notes for vocals doesn't hurt and will make the map fit the song better. Basically the suggestions below will be for that.
00:52:164 (178) - Use finisher here?
00:52:670 - A don here.
00:54:018 - Maybe a don here.
00:55:367 - 00:56:546 - Maybe focus on the vocals here? Like you did in 01:06:827 (241,242,243).
00:57:389 - Maybe a don here.
00:58:400 - A don here.
01:00:591 - 01:01:603 - Same about vocals.
01:02:445 (221) - If you modify the one I said above, moving this to 01:02:108 would be nice to keep vocals.
01:02:951 (225) - Use finisher here?
01:03:457 - A don here.
01:04:805 - Maybe a don here.
01:06:322 (238) - Maybe move 1/2 back, the vocals begin to emphasize here so it'd be better to map on vocals here.
01:06:827 (241,242,243,248) - Finishers for these notes would be nice to play, as they're strong beats.
[Oni]
Well, I have a few things to say here, it'll be mostly unrankable stuff and some big issues I found, and a few suggestions, the diff is mostly fine.
00:07:670 (13) - Same as in Muzukashii.
:!: 00:14:117 (29) - Remove this, 1/8 notes are very discouraged to use in Taiko, adding that this doesn't play very nice :( Also, use a ddddk pattern for this part, it'd fit better imo.
00:16:350 (42,43) - Swap the colors here, it's a bit odd you use a different pattern here where the music doesn't have a noticeable change.
00:19:805 - 00:30:591 - I'd suggest to put a few notes more here, this part is almost the same as in Muzu. Maybe like this or something that you think it's better.

00:32:951 (111,112,113,114,115) - kkddd would fit better imo, this one feels a bit odd as you're using xxo patterns to begin a stream.
00:37:080 (141) - Change to katsu, same reason as above.
00:41:209 - 00:51:490 - Again this sudden slowdown, though I'd suggest you to remove it, maybe use 0.90. Also, this part is very similar to Muzu too, add a few notes more, there are a few drum beats being ignored :p
00:49:973 (210,211) - Swapping the colors here would feel nice.
:!: 00:51:870 (218) - Remove this too.
00:52:164 (221) - Use finisher here?
00:58:400 - Add a katsu here, this 1/1 spacing feels a bit empty.
00:59:075 - Add a don here.
01:02:951 (288) - Use finisher here?
01:02:951 - Well, I highly suggest you to remove this speed up, the music may be stronger put speeding up is not a nice way to emphasize it, using a bit harder patterns would work nicely.
01:03:457 - A katsu here would play nice, if you do, change 01:03:794 (292) to a don for better enjoyment.
01:06:827 (311,314,319) - Maybe use finishers for these ones.
01:10:282 (329) - This 3/4 space feels a bit odd, move it to 01:10:198, also I suggest you to remove 01:10:451 (331), the stream feels better if it begins in 01:10:535 along with the music and using either a kkddkkd pattern.
01:18:372 (378,386) - The whole stream would play better if you remove this.

That'd be all from my part, good luck \o/
Nofool
Elite Mapper
1,102 posts
Joined February 2011
Nofool

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, modding Taiko diffs as requested by Nofool.

dat bg n_n

[General]
:!: Disable letterboxing. fixed

[Muzukashii]
wow, this diff is very good for my taste. There are a few mistakes here though and I have some suggestions I'll be happy to help here.
00:07:670 (12) - It'd be better if you start this slider along with vocals in 00:06:322. I think you put this to follow the increasing sound in the background, but as it is barely noticeable, it feels a bit uncomfy to play, you can also end this slider in 00:08:681, where the vocals stop. Alternatively, you can use a spinner with the same length I suggest. fixed, I used a spinner
00:20:985 - This will be a large but a simple suggestion, add a don here and do the same in the next similar patterns(00:22:333, 00:23:681, 00:25:030.), this way the katsu notes would emphasize more. If you do, change 00:25:535 (79,80,81) and similar spots (00:26:884 (84,85,86), 00:28:232 (89,90,91), )into katsu, the drums change in tone (idk about musical terms, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say) and katsu notes would fit more here. And maybe keep using this pattern for 00:29:580 (84,85,86,87). fixed everything except 00:28:906 (85) I kept d there
00:35:817 - Add a don here, it'd play nicely and it'll make 00:35:985 (114) feel better. fixed
00:41:209 - Please don't make the change in speed so drastical, if possible remove it, it doesn't feel to comfy ;_; mm I'll do it just 'cause it might be too hard for a muzu
00:44:580 - Maybe add a don here too, the drums are quite noticeable here. fixed
00:49:636 - Add a don here to keep somehow the consistency you used for previous part. fixed
00:50:479 - A don here would play nice. fixed
The kiai is missing some notes, it is very good you base on drums to map, but adding a few notes for vocals doesn't hurt and will make the map fit the song better. Basically the suggestions below will be for that. well I guess that's true since the vocal sounds way higher than drums ;_;
00:52:164 (178) - Use finisher here? fixed
00:52:670 - A don here. fixed
00:54:018 - Maybe a don here. fixed
00:55:367 - 00:56:546 - Maybe focus on the vocals here? Like you did in 01:06:827 (241,242,243). Ok, I did some changes that follow the vocal there
00:57:389 - Maybe a don here. fixed
00:58:400 - A don here. fixed
01:00:591 - 01:01:603 - Same about vocals. I did something there ye n_n
01:02:445 (221) - If you modify the one I said above, moving this to 01:02:108 would be nice to keep vocals. fixed
01:02:951 (225) - Use finisher here? I'll do it but I'm still not sure about it :c it fits more with the other finish u suggested tho
01:03:457 - A don here. fixed
01:04:805 - Maybe a don here. fixed
01:06:322 (238) - Maybe move 1/2 back, the vocals begin to emphasize here so it'd be better to map on vocals here. true, it fits more with the vocal now
01:06:827 (241,242,243,248) - Finishers for these notes would be nice to play, as they're strong beats. Did it, except for the fourth beat
[Oni]
Well, I have a few things to say here, it'll be mostly unrankable stuff and some big issues I found, and a few suggestions, the diff is mostly fine.
00:07:670 (13) - Same as in Muzukashii. fixed
:!: 00:14:117 (29) - Remove this, 1/8 notes are very discouraged to use in Taiko, adding that this doesn't play very nice :( Also, use a ddddk pattern for this part, it'd fit better imo. ;_; I wanted to keep some difficulty with these 1/8, fixed tho
00:16:350 (42,43) - Swap the colors here, it's a bit odd you use a different pattern here where the music doesn't have a noticeable change. fixed, I did it first only 'cause 3 times the same things looked too much, I guess that's not that important
00:19:805 - 00:30:591 - I'd suggest to put a few notes more here, this part is almost the same as in Muzu. Maybe like this or something that you think it's better. Changed it, just like the muzu, I don't really want to overmap this part

00:32:951 (111,112,113,114,115) - kkddd would fit better imo, this one feels a bit odd as you're using xxo patterns to begin a stream. I hesitated a lot on this one x) fixed
00:37:080 (141) - Change to katsu, same reason as above. fixed
00:41:209 - 00:51:490 - Again this sudden slowdown, though I'd suggest you to remove it, maybe use 0.90. Also, this part is very similar to Muzu too, add a few notes more, there are a few drum beats being ignored :p gonna try 0.80. and add some notes there, I'd like to keep this slow part, I'll change it if more peoples think it's bad
00:49:973 (210,211) - Swapping the colors here would feel nice. no changes, katsu is needed at 00:50:142 ;_; (to me)
:!: 00:51:870 (218) - Remove this too. fixed
00:52:164 (221) - Use finisher here? as in the muzu n_n
00:58:400 - Add a katsu here, this 1/1 spacing feels a bit empty. fixed
00:59:075 - Add a don here. fixed, I also added a d at 01:00:423 I hope it doesn't feel overmapped :c
01:02:951 (288) - Use finisher here? fixed
01:02:951 - Well, I highly suggest you to remove this speed up, the music may be stronger put speeding up is not a nice way to emphasize it, using a bit harder patterns would work nicely. Ok fixed
01:03:457 - A katsu here would play nice, if you do, change 01:03:794 (292) to a don for better enjoyment. nice, fixed
01:06:827 (311,314,319) - Maybe use finishers for these ones. Used finisher on 01:07:134 (320,321,323)
01:10:282 (329) - This 3/4 space feels a bit odd, move it to 01:10:198, also I suggest you to remove 01:10:451 (331), the stream feels better if it begins in 01:10:535 along with the music and using either a kkddkkd pattern. no changes for now, waiting for others think about it :c
01:18:372 (378,386) - The whole stream would play better if you remove this. fixed

That'd be all from my part, good luck \o/
Thanks a lot DakeDekaane! pretty usefull mod

to dalollypop
SPOILER
Muzu's changes : http://pastebin.com/aRZWLR4V
Oni's changes : http://pastebin.com/M8urGQir
Kurodragon_old
Kurodragon_old
Muzukashii
00:31:266 - d
That's all I see, I really tide that map
Nofool
Elite Mapper
1,102 posts
Joined February 2011
Nofool

Kurodragon wrote:

Muzukashii
00:31:266 - d good, fixed
That's all I see, I really tide that map
thanks Kurodragon~
update : http://pastebin.com/80RVf8FU
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
Hello from my queue.

Hard's Mod ~

Easy

  • 00:02:108 (2,3) - this could be difficult to read, because the circle and the slider are on red ticks. Ez's follow easy rhythm and this one is a combo break at the beginning of the song. Really discouraging. If you still want to go with red ticks, you should 1/1 it. Put a circle at 00:01:771 -
    00:05:479 (5) - This slider end has no rhythm. Oo I think this could not only confuse the player, but it also changes the rhythm of the song and sounds rather not good. Let the slider end on 00:05:816 - for better rhythm.
    00:06:322 (6) - this slider shouldn't touch 00:05:479 (5). It ugly and plays anything but good. Maybe you should rather try moving it down a bit. For better flow and better looks. Also move the start of this slider to 00:06:153 (6) - because that fits more with the rhythm.
    00:11:715 (1) - This slider gets cutted because it's to out of the screen. Move it to the left. If you want to keep the symmetry, use ctrl + g and change the DS of 2/1 from 1.0 to 1.2. This won't bother the player. If the slider stays out of the screen, your map will be considered unrankable. Ofc you'll have to change the circles that come after this slider as something like colleteral :D
    00:21:827 (5) - distance is off. You shouldn't change this suddenly. This couldn't be a jump, right?
    00:21:490 (4,6) - maybe stack those 2?
    00:29:243 (4) - the sliderend doesn't make sense. Let it end at 00:29:917 -
    00:46:434 (1) - same as 21:825 (5)
    00:47:445 (2) - stack with 00:46:097 (4) - for better looks
    00:48:625 (1,2,3) - please change this beat. It is confusing like hell.
    00:56:715 (4,1) - stack them properly. I wont explain, why you should. Well I will explain. If it's stacked properly it will look 1000000,993 times better than before. To do this, you should turn off Grid snap. If this is stacked properly, you can stack the slider afterwards easier.
    00:57:389 (6,2) - ^ Also, to use symmetry, copypaste the slider before and use ctrl +h and ctrl + j
    01:01:265 (3) - The same as below. Distance snap.
    01:01:603 (4) - please use correct distance snap. Suddenly changing distance confuses the newer players. Well, it also confuses the older players. It confuses everyone.
    01:01:603 (4) - consider blanketing 01:01:265 (3) for looks. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1467322
    01:19:131 (2) - This slider cuts the edge again. It's out of the field. Change this, it's unrankable.
Normal

  • 00:01:771 (2,3) - Look at distance snap, please.
    No. I won't mod this diff. This is completely off, changes the DS by will and uses crazy rhythms. Think about remapping this diff. With good rhythms, that are somehow reasonable.
Hard

  • 00:11:715 (1,2) - I suggest, you rotate this part a bit, so you can blanket 00:12:558 (2) - a bit better. This also prevents you from that uninviting overlapp. The outcome would look like this:
    SPOILER
    00:20:479 (1,2,3) - I think you should either go with the bassline, or the vocals. I'd suggest you go with the vocals, and change the pattern to something a bit more appetizing, like this:
    SPOILER
    00:20:479 - I also suggest, that you go with a DS of 1.3 for this part. I don't think that 1/2's should touch each other like a stream. That's not how it should be like. This isn't a stream. This isn't fast. This shouldn't feel fast. 1/2's are used for jumps and don't cuddle. 1/2's are manly.
    I'll remodd this part, but can't mod if you apply + 1.3 DS for everything. I'll look at your changes and if you changed this part I'll look over it again.
    00:30:592 (1,2,3) - I don't know what rhythm is used at this point. 1/1's are boring to play and they don't make sense at this part. Try something like this:
    SPOILER
    00:34:637 (3,4,5) - stack this properly for better looks, please. This would really improve the outcome.
    00:35:311 (5,6,7) - these 1/1 are again out of rhythm and I don't understand them. Try going with 1/2's sometimes. It's a Hard. Play Hard.
    01:05:648 (1) - nove this to the right please, so it gets blanketted by 01:04:805 (5) -
Blaziken's Hard

  • 00:12:221 (4) - Think about going to the left with the slider for better flow. You change the direction at this part and it goes smoother if you change it slowly. And only 1 time instead of two. It would look somehow like this:
    SPOILER
    00:13:063 (5,6,8) - this pattern looks boring and also plays boring. The flow isn't the best and it feels unoriginal. Try changing this with rotating 5 to the right. This would improve your flow and make a good-looking pattern. You'd also have something that's not only straight. Straight isn't bad but sometimes not appropriate.
    00:16:434 (6,7) - copy and paste 6 and then use ctrl + g to make a perfect pattern.
    00:25:198 (1) - as i said in the other diff before. I highly recommend to use a higher DS. The sliders get slower, this is true but the spacing could stay the same. It's just somehow off. 1/2's with a bpm of 175 don't need to look look like streams.
    00:40:198 (5,6,7,8) - this stack feels unneeded and isn't that useful. Try making a pattern. It doesn't need to be a square but something nice wouldn't be bad.
    00:53:344 (6,7,8,9) - how about using 2 sliders instead of 4 circles? The vocals don't end that fast and the circles can't convey the length of the singers voice. You should use sliders to emphasize the voice.
I'm dont want to mod anymore. No Insane because I don't want.
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dalollypop
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dalollypop
aha thanks for this, big mod :O

I've done some changes i guess, its like 1am here xD

Hard wrote:

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  • 00:01:771 (2,3) - Look at distance snap, please.
    No. I won't mod this diff. This is completely off, changes the DS by will and uses crazy rhythms. Think about remapping this diff. With good rhythms, that are somehow reasonable.
i have no idea what yo mean by rhythm, people keep saying this word, but i don't know what it is or what you mean D:
and its all at 0.9 i think :P


thanks anyhoo for the mod :3 bby
Hard
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Joined February 2013
Hard
The rhythm is off. That means, the different patterns of that song don't merge with the patterns you have choosen for your map. It is off. It doesn't sound like the song sounds.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhythm

If you don't know what the word means, here's wikipedia.
dalollypop
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Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Hard wrote:

The rhythm is off. That means, the different patterns of that song don't merge with the patterns you have choosen for your map. It is off. It doesn't sound like the song sounds.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhythm

If you don't know what the word means, here's wikipedia.
haha :lol: yeah i know what rhythm means, i just didn't get it in osu terms.

as i thought you just had to keep to beat, and if BPM is right, the white and red ticks mostly with the beat, so thought you can put on any of them.
of course taking into account vocals, band upbeat and offbeat. I just probably switch a lot i guess. :3
Hard
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Joined February 2013
Hard
That's the problem. You shouldn't just suddenly switch the beat. Try to stay with one for some time, other things get confusing. The maps should be intuitive.
dalollypop
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Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
haha thanks bby <3
I will try not to next time ;_;
4 u bebe :3
Blaziken
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Blaziken
I didn't get an email telling me I had a mod to work on ;_;. I'll look at it tomorrow.
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