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GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 05 July 2014 at 04:50:17

Artist: GARNiDELiA
Title: ambiguous (TV Size)
Source: Kill la Kill
Tags: op opening 2 ryuko matoi mako Mankanshoku studio trigger satsuki kiryuin Four Devas student council Tagre Blaziken Nofool aonkub555
BPM: 178
Filesize: 21255kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. aon's Insane (5.03 stars, 310 notes)
  2. Blaziken's Hard (2.79 stars, 242 notes)
  3. Easy (1.49 stars, 97 notes)
  4. Hard (3.1 stars, 191 notes)
  5. Insane (3.76 stars, 236 notes)
  6. Nofool's Muzukashii (3.02 stars, 361 notes)
  7. Nofool's Oni (3.84 stars, 446 notes)
  8. Normal (1.69 stars, 119 notes)
  9. Tagre's Insane (4.21 stars, 270 notes)
Download: GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size)
Download: GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I still haven't got too good at making these maps, but try it out tell me what i can improve on, because i really enjoy making these maps. i just need to learn to get better :)
easy
Normal
Hard
insane
Tagre's Insane
Blaziken's Insane
aon's Insane
TAIKO
Nofool's Oni
Nofool's Muzukashii
I have no idea how to make it hard without "overmapping" whatever that is? D:
Last edited by dalollypop , edited 148 times in total.
kliang96
4 posts
Joined January 2014
kliang96
This one is definitely done better than the other "GARNiDELiA - Ambiguous" currently available.

Will you be making hard/insane?

Only sad thing is that you put spinners to cover their bodies when they are bound by life fibers :cry: :cry:
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
Thanks, I'm still not really that good at this. but i try to put in what i think would be good.

I know i really didn't wan't to put spinners there, but i couldn't think of anything else to put there. it was just one big note she hit.
maybe a big slider would work? or anything you can suggest or send.


and yeah of course, and if anyone would like, they can get guest difficulty in the more the merrier


(can't update and fix a couple of things at this moment [11:00 uk] bancho keeps messing up)
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Hello, my mod you requested.

Link for the mod: Mod here :>
Color Represent Difficulty. You should know what I mean.
Sorry, I'm no good with Insanes difficulties, and Hard+ seem incomplete...
You can also answer the mod in the space: Your Answer.

So I hopes I help you.
Also, I give you a star to get rid of them for your best luck!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
thank you very much Winek for the mod :D


I will do it tommorow becuasde it is pretty late here right now.

Also good luck on your maps too. i would Mod back if i knew how to. but thanks anyway :3
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
mod from modding Q..

For all difficulties...
00:00:890 (1) - This is where the vocal starts, in case you didn't know..

[general]
I think your rhythm is a problem
Also, your patterns are basically bunch of straight or a little curved circles, like old maps
Consider using more sliders! <-- best way not to look like old maps.

[Hard]
00:03:671 (1) - sounds bad
SPOILER
00:05:862 (5,1) - [
SPOILER
00:06:199 (1) - I don't know if this bluetick-ending spinner is good. see what other people think about it.
00:09:006 (1) - make it into 2 sliders
00:10:185 (3) - sounds off beat to me , but I could be wrong :3
00:11:028 (4,5,6,7,1) - better flow
00:11:702 (1) - delete 1 tick and add a circle
00:21:646 (7) - no need for 3/4 slider
00:33:107 (6,7) - spacing
00:47:095 (2) - I don't like this
01:03:444 (2,3,4) - no need for 3/4
01:15:747 (1,3) - lame.
01:23:837 (5,1) - fill in notes

[Insane]
Overmapped, can't mod. I'm sorry :(
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
KK i do this baby

(that was quick lol)

thanks :P
[Yue]
1,643 posts
Joined January 2011
[Yue]
Hi! from my queue~
Small mod
2014-02-11 11:14 [Yue]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/365808 GARNiDELiA - Ambiguous (TV size) [Easy]]
2014-02-11 11:14 [Yue]: have time now for IRC mod?
2014-02-11 11:15 dalollypop: erm sure 
2014-02-11 11:15 dalollypop: :)
2014-02-11 11:15 [Yue]: good :3
2014-02-11 11:15 dalollypop: 2spooky never done chat mod
2014-02-11 11:16 dalollypop: k im on
2014-02-11 11:18 [Yue]: o.o
2014-02-11 11:18 dalollypop: love u
2014-02-11 11:19 [Yue]: Always remember to look your Aimod before upload beatmap
2014-02-11 11:19 [Yue]: in Easy
2014-02-11 11:20 dalollypop: ah kk
2014-02-11 11:20 dalollypop: object end not snapped
2014-02-11 11:20 dalollypop: thats all i think
2014-02-11 11:21 [Yue]: Well, now your map has duration 1:30
2014-02-11 11:22 [Yue]: so no need to have breaks
2014-02-11 11:22 dalollypop: so i fill in empty parts
2014-02-11 11:22 dalollypop: k
2014-02-11 11:25 [Yue]: the breaks are used on maps to last long, but little maps, like yours, you should fill in everything and not having breaks
2014-02-11 11:25 dalollypop: ok <3
2014-02-11 11:25 [Yue]: have to fill all the breaks all the difficulties you have o3o
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: yus ok :3
2014-02-11 11:26 [Yue]: press Control +1
2014-02-11 11:26 [Yue]: for better use of the grid
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: ohhhhh
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: nice
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: thanks
2014-02-11 11:26 dalollypop: :D
2014-02-11 11:27 [Yue]: 00:00:974 (1,2) - 
2014-02-11 11:27 [Yue]: spacing
2014-02-11 11:27 [Yue]: always easy and normally must have the same spacing
2014-02-11 11:28 dalollypop:    ahh yes ok
2014-02-11 11:28 dalollypop: i can see top right i think spacing
2014-02-11 11:28 [Yue]: easy hp-2
2014-02-11 11:28 [Yue]: ar-1
2014-02-11 11:29 dalollypop: done :)
2014-02-11 11:30 [Yue]: song setup -> design -> 
2014-02-11 11:30 [Yue]: unmark "wedesreem support"
2014-02-11 11:30 dalollypop: ok
2014-02-11 11:31 [Yue]: You should disable this option in all the difficulties because you have SB
2014-02-11 11:31 dalollypop: SB? D:
2014-02-11 11:32 [Yue]: Storyboard
2014-02-11 11:32 dalollypop: ahh ok
2014-02-11 11:32 dalollypop: i see
2014-02-11 11:32 dalollypop: thanks
2014-02-11 11:33 [Yue]: your bg should be 1024x768
2014-02-11 11:34 dalollypop: ok i change that
2014-02-11 11:34 dalollypop: resize
2014-02-11 11:34 [Yue]: I think those are the basic things you should know
2014-02-11 11:35 dalollypop: ok thanks :)
2014-02-11 11:36 [Yue]: I can give you recheck when you have finished all
2014-02-11 11:36 dalollypop: ok thanks
2014-02-11 11:36 [Yue]: you call me :3

Good luck! :3
mrdawn2
6 posts
Joined September 2011
mrdawn2
Love it!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

mrdawn2 wrote:

Love it!
Blaziken
611 posts
Joined June 2011
Blaziken
This is amazing.
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop

Blaziken wrote:

This is amazing.
WAIT WHAT.......REALLY :o :o :o

Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello, sorry for delay

bg stretched :\

Hard+
http://puu.sh/6Uc0c.osr
SPOILER
00:17:095 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is not really fun
01:07:994 (3,5) - also no sense in this sliders

Insane
http://puu.sh/6Uc6C.osr
SPOILER
nothing bad but I guess you need some work on patterns

Good Luck!
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
ahhh thanks for that :D

and yeah those points i was quite doubtful of too. Hard+ (i kinda rushed, but shhh don't tell anyone.) :3

I will try to improve it when i can get time.

also yeah background stretched, couldn't find a bigger one for my previous pic. and this was origianlly bigger but not same aspect ratio. probably need to find a better one :P

Thanks anyway
encryptik
94 posts
Joined August 2013
encryptik
Just one small thing!

Sounded much nicer with the hitsound volume down to ~70-80%, but that might just be a personal preference thing. The streams in the insane difficulty sounded a little obnoxious with the hitsound volume so high.

Try it out and see if you prefer it
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
OK thanks for that, I've done that for you. (i think :S )

not sure if can give kudosu for that.

thanks anyhoo baby
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
I have no idea what to think about this, I LOVE Insane, but I really dislike Hard+, and Easy
Well, first, rename Hard+ to Insane, and Insane to somthing which indicates maximum difficulty, like ridiculous, tough, extre, extra, expert, exhaust, maximum, hyper, etc.

Please, use more NC (New Combos) In easy I seen combos with 16, The max is easy is 6-8, just like normal. On hard it is 10-12 and on Insane+ it is 18-20 as a max. Oh, maybe use a NC on every big white tick, every 4 beats

But, here are my testplays
Easy
Nomal
Hard
Hard+
Insane

On Easy-Normal diffs, use CS (Circle Size) 3, on Hard-Insane+ Diffs, use 3 or 4, depending on the song, no CS 5
If you want the .osr files, please PM me

Good Lcuk
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
K thanks baby. <3

The CS is no more 5+

and added some NC

thanks for the testplay
Neta
536 posts
Joined May 2011
Neta
Hi~ from my modding queue

All of my mod is suggestion

[Before Modding]
  1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6YZSl.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6Z08K.jpg )
    This will help you making your map's quality higher

[General]
  1. there's almost no hitsound you'd better put it

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These ones have some problems on rhythm
  2. 00:43:724 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:48:612 (1) - ^
  4. 01:16:252 (2,2) - ^
  5. 01:23:500 (3) -

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:702 (1) - weird rhythm
  2. 00:14:399 (1) - ^
  3. 00:24:342 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:41:365 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:57:208 (2) - ^
  6. 01:06:309 (3) - ^
  7. 01:11:028 (2,3,4,1) - ^
  8. 01:21:140 (1,2,3) - ^

[Other Diff]
  1. First there's some problems on offset or rhythm you should fix it
  2. Insane and Extra diff is little over mapped i'm sorry :(
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
dalollypop
K thanks done some of these.

kinda getting annoying, keeps saying something corrupt and have to keep DL it again. D:

but yeah thanks for mod
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