ExUsagi wrote:

quick check, no kds

every mania diff is now harder than the diff name itself, plus the star rating is above the diff name itself.. so i suggest you to rename it into :

Frim's EZ > Frim's NM
Frim's NM > Frim's HD
Frim's HD > Frim's MX

imaikiseta wrote:

Hard

00:08:067 (2) - Make the slider like this - Done

00:25:424 (2,3,4) - Maybe do this - Done


00:31:639 (1,2,3,4) - Too many of this/repeating pattern, change it. For example, (pic)


OR - I picked this one


01:02:067 - Volume should be 40% - Done
01:02:282 - Volume 60 or 75% - Done, 75 for me.
01:02:496 - Volume 100% - Done

Everything seems fine in Normal dff. - Thanks

Easy

00:45:353 (1) - Put this slider like this with reverse - made it like that but the place is wrong.

01:13:639 (3) - Remove - Done
^^01:12:782 (2) - Put reverse - Done
01:14:067 - Add circle - Done
01:14:924 (2,3) - Remove for slider - Not consistent anymore.

I love this song except I'm not a Romance/Shoujo fan. I'm a Action and Mecha fan.

I love both of them. <3 Haha. Hmm. I think I love all genre even ecchi ones. hihi
Thanks for modding :3

Knotts wrote:

Hey, from my queue

General

1. Here's the bg with the right dimensions - link - Thanks
2. Your video's pretty bad, here's one that I encoded for you - link - Thanks
3. You most definitely want to get a new mp3 but I'm probably not the best person to ask for those - Ok
4. Title should be 暁の華 - i put it in tags
5. I'm not sure if the mania difficulties uses them but your normal-hitclap and normal-hitwhistle aren't used as far as I can see - for mania
6. Try to keep your comboing consistent. NC at the beginning of every measure or every two measures - ok

Hard

1. You might want to lower the AR to 7.5 to even out the spread a little bit - Done
2. I think you forgot to change your sample set on this difficulty to soft-1 - Haha. oh yeah
3. You definitely want to change all your hitsounds that are set to 100% to somewhere around 70% - Done
   
4. 00:12:782 (1,2) - Drum whistles on the head of these - Done
5. 00:13:639 (3,4) - Put claps on all of these. Should sound better when you lower your volume - Done
6. 00:16:210 (5) - Finish on the head of this - Done
7. 00:17:924 (4) - ^ - Done
8. 00:20:496 (1,2) - Claps on the head of both of these
9. 00:24:782 (1) - You should probably move this up a little bit to avoid the overlap with 00:24:353 (8). It shouldn't really matter if you break your distance space pattern here. - Done
10. 00:29:067 (3) - ^ except move to the left - Done
11. 00:41:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know you're trying to follow the vocals but I think it'd be better to just map those things in between since you're skipping some important beats - Done
12. 00:45:353 (4) - The head of this should be a finish. You should probably split this slider up into 1/2 objects though because you can hear the song about to pick up before the kiai. - Done
13. 00:48:782 (4) - NC here - Done
14. 01:02:067 (3) - Probably could put claps on the repeats - Done
15. 01:15:782 (1) - ^ - Done
16. 01:22:424 (4,5,6) - Should have claps - Done
17. 01:22:853 (6) - Should make this a 1/4 slider and with a clap on both ends - Done

Normal

1. 00:08:067 - You're kinda skipping out on a lot here. You could put a repeating 1/1 slider here to follow the vocals nicely - Done
2. 00:30:782 (5,6,1) - You could do this for better flow - Done
3. 00:52:210 (3,4,5,6) - I'd probably drag all of these down a little to avoid the overlap with 00:51:782 (2) - Done
4. 00:58:639 (2) - This slider feels out of place because vocals start +1/2 into the slider. I'd probably just break this up into multiple objects - Done
5. 01:17:067 (2,3,4) - Triplet stacks are kinda lame tbh - Done

Easy

1. 00:05:924 (4) - This blanket's pretty off. It should look like this - Done
2. 00:09:353 (1) - Spinner feels kinda forced. You have so much to map here :3 - not removed
3. 00:17:067 (1) - This slider makes you a miss an important beat on 00:17:924 - Done
4. 00:23:067 (3) - You probably want to move this circle above the two sliders for better flow - Done
5. 00:32:496, 00:33:353, 00:34:210 - not sure why you're skipping these. - haha. i still didn't changed it though
6. 01:19:639 (4) - Blanket's really off here too. Should look like this - Done
7. 01:21:353 (5) - Ctrl + G this and move it to the left for better flow and it'll look a lot nicer - Done

Message me ingame if you need anymore help. GL!

Frim4503 wrote:

ExUsagi wrote:

quick check, no kds

every mania diff is now harder than the diff name itself, plus the star rating is above the diff name itself.. so i suggest you to rename it into :

Frim's EZ > Frim's NM
Frim's NM > Frim's HD
Frim's HD > Frim's MX

oke
will rename it.


Asakurane can you rename my dif ?

Starry- wrote:

Hey there! Just pointing out, my mod is a mania mod but it has a general mod inside. Be sure to take a look. p/4027281 ;p

Frim4503 wrote:

Starry- wrote:

Hey there! Just pointing out, my mod is a mania mod but it has a general mod inside. Be sure to take a look. p/4027281 ;p

can you check again my dif ?
i make another update here
MX
asakurane please update my dif again
make some re-arange

~ UPDATED and FIXED

arviejhay wrote:

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1,2,3,4,5,6,7

[Frim's NM]
00:12:782 (12782|0,13210|6,13639|0) - ctrl + H because of the previous note
00:14:496 (14496|6) - if you apply above, move to 1 because of 00:16:210 (16210|4,16210|6) -
00:18:782 (18782|0) - i think this should go here in 2
00:21:139 (21139|4) - its up to you if you wanna move this to 6 for pattern or stay it for sound
00:24:782 (24782|2) - move to 2 because of these notes 00:23:067 (23067|0,23067|4) - 00:26:496 (26496|1,26496|2) -
00:28:210 (28210|1) - move to 1
00:32:496 (32496|1) - why not move to 3?
00:37:639 (37639|3,38067|2,38496|1) - move 1 column to the left then 00:38:924 (38924|0,39353|1,39782|2) - move 1 column to the right then
00:40:210 (40210|3) - move to 2
00:47:924 (47924|2) - i recommend you to move this to 2, i feel a little bit emptyness on column 2
00:52:639 (52639|2) - move to 2 because of the previous notes
00:57:782 (57782|2) - i suggest to move this to 1 because emptyness of column 1 then 00:57:996 (57996|4) - move this to 7 for patterning if you want (optional)
01:00:567 (60567|5) - move this to 7 because of this 01:01:639 (61639|0,62067|6) -
01:03:782 (63782|2) - move this to 2 because of these 01:02:496 (62496|2,62496|4) - (optional)
01:05:496 (65496|2) - ^ felt emptyness
01:16:210 (76210|4,76210|2) - move to 2 and 7 for ending of kiai time
01:22:424 (82424|2,82639|3) - i suggest to move 1 column to the left
01:23:067 - add a note on 2 (optional)
apply all except the last one

[Frim's HD]
00:01:424 - why not add an LN on 2? because of uncomfortable hand balance, the LN's end should end in a blue line 00:01:746
00:03:139 - ^ same reason, but add a LN on 5
00:03:782 (3782|4) - if you apply the previous mod, move to 4
00:04:853 - ^same reason as before, but add LN on 5
00:06:567 - ^ add LN on 6
00:08:282 - ^ 5
00:09:996 - ^ 7
00:11:710 - ^ 2
00:15:139 (15139|2) - move to 2?
00:31:639 (31639|2) - move to 2
00:37:639 (37639|5) - move to 7, (optional)
00:40:210 (40210|3) - move to 5 (optional)
00:43:210 (43210|5) - move to 5 if you want
00:44:924 (44924|4) - move to 6
apply all

[Frim's MX]
00:13:210 (13210|3,13210|4,13210|6) - move 2 columns to the left for balancing
00:16:210 (16210|2) - move to 4
00:17:710 (17710|0) - move to 2 (optional)
00:19:424 (19424|0) - ^
00:20:496 (20496|4,20496|6,20710|5,20710|3,20924|2,20924|4) - i recommend you to move 1 column to the left because i felt emptyness on column 2
00:22:424 (22424|2) - move to 2 if you want
apply all
That's all

Good luck!

Frim4503 wrote:

yo asakurane

i just want to give you little suggestion

for hard dif i think it's little akward to play
it will be good if you add few note in
00:02:282 - add note - DOne
00:03:996 - ^ - DOne
00:05:710 - ^ - DOne
00:07:424 - ^ - DOne
00:21:353 - ^ - DOne

try place it and see the diference

feel free to give me kudosu

Thanks for looking at my map

1. for future, I recommend to use bigger grip level, like 4, even in easy.

1. 00:00:782 (1) - make it not so curvy, Imo it would look better
2. 00:04:210 (3) - blanket would be improved a bit
3. 00:23:496 (4) - why not just make copy of 00:21:782 (2) - and Ctrl + H and replace it here?
4. 00:36:353 (2) - for better distant: move to x494 y292

1. 00:31:639 (1,2,3) - improve blanket
2. 01:10:210 (2) - maybe make it look more straight: http://puu.sh/h7kYI/1279d3a744.jpg
3. 01:16:210 (1) - blanket would be improved

1. 00:02:067 (4,5) - stack them
2. 00:31:639 (1) - improve blanket,
3. 00:10:210 (4) - I understand that you want to keep distant snap right, but when there is only 1 note in screen, It doesn't matter. Also NC?
4. Normal distant changes too much, about in max 0,06x. It should not have so much different. Places to you can find to problem:

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi~heyo..

From My Queue

Here's my mod as requested

Column |1-7|

Frim's NM

Ready for some mindblowing issue: Column 6 is empty from the start until 00:27:353 (27353|5) , that's roughly 1/3 of the whole song Yes, this diff need to be more balanced. and i'll help a bit with my modyes i know that cuz i'm planning this for 4k, but idk why it end up become 7K

00:14:924 (14924|0) - move to 2 for balance
00:15:353 (15353|4) - move to 6^
00:21:139 (21139|4) - move to 6^
00:28:639 (28639|0) - move to 7^
00:30:782 (30782|2) - move to 6^
00:47:067 (47067|2,47282|4,47496|6,47710|4) - move these one column to the left
00:49:424 (49424|2) - move to 6 for balance

apply all

Frim's HD

00:02:067 (2067|1) - move to 6 for balance ok
00:06:996 (6996|4) - move to 2^ ok
00:35:389 (35389|5) - why don't you add note 1/4 before every two double notes like what you did here 00:14:817 (14817|2,14924|0,14924|3) it's for variation
00:37:103 (37103|0) - add note^ why ?. i think the current pattern is good enought
00:38:817 (38817|2) - add note^ ^
00:40:532 (40532|3) - add note^ ^
00:42:246 (42246|3) - add note^ ^
00:43:960 (43960|5) - add note^ ^
00:43:210 (43210|4) - move to 6,and 00:43:210 (43210|4) - add LN here, i tried to follow your previous pattern ok
00:44:924 (44924|2) - add LN here^ ^
01:02:174 (62174|1) - add note here no. 1 note is enought
01:09:032 (69032|3) - add note here no. 1 note is enought and 01:09:139 (69139|3,69246|2,69353|1) - move these one column to the left ok

Frim's MX

00:16:210 (16210|0) - move to 2 ok
00:30:353 (30353|0,30353|4) - move to 2-6 ok
00:30:567 (30567|2) - move to 4 ok
00:49:746 (49746|1) - add note, i hear some string sound here i just hear hit hat here
00:49:960 (49960|3) - ^ already have 2 notes
00:51:460 (51460|5) - ^ i just hear hit hat here
00:53:174 (53174|3) - ^ i just hear hit hat here
00:53:389 (53389|6) - ^ already have 2 notes
00:54:889 (54889|5) - ^ i just hear hit hat here
00:55:103 (55103|5) - ^ already have 2 notes
00:56:603 (56603|3) - ^ i just hear hit hat here
00:56:817 (56817|1) - ^ already have 2 notes
00:58:317 (58317|1) - ^ i just hear hit hat here
00:58:532 (58532|5) - ^ already have 2 notes
01:00:032 (60032|1) - ^ i just hear hit hat here

Nice Map, Frim! thank you

GO RANK!~ i hope i can

1. 00:00:000 (0) - Little late in development to say this, but it could use an Insane.
   Easy:
   
   1. 00:38:496 (5) - NC
      
      
   2. 01:02:496 (3,4) - Personal pet peeve of mine, mixing curved and straight sliders looks and feels kinda weird. Other times you did this it was fine, but this one just looks off. Up2u
   I can see a bunch of would be errors that were modded out, but that isn't a bad thing
   
   Normal:
   
   1. 00:22:639 (3) - This slider looks weird.
      
      
   2. 00:23:924 (6) - NC
      
      
   3. 00:26:496 (4) - ^
      
      
   4. 00:37:210 (5) - ^ AND/OR at 00:39:353
      
      
   5. 00:45:353 (6) - ^
   Just in general (for easy too, to a point) work on combos. They're too long and inconsistent.
   
   Hard:
   
   1. 00:01:639 (2,3,4,5) - OOOOOK. Remove 2, and move 3 to 2's old position and then move 4 to 3's old position. Do this for the first 4 combos.

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue

[General]

1. for future, I recommend to use bigger grip level, like 4, even in easy. - Ok.

[Easy]

1. 00:00:782 (1) - make it not so curvy, Imo it would look better - Done
2. 00:04:210 (3) - blanket would be improved a bit - Done
3. 00:23:496 (4) - why not just make copy of 00:21:782 (2) - and Ctrl + H and replace it here? - Done
4. 00:36:353 (2) - for better distant: move to x494 y292 - Done

[Normal]

1. 00:31:639 (1,2,3) - improve blanket - Done
2. 01:10:210 (2) - maybe make it look more straight: http://puu.sh/h7kYI/1279d3a744.jpg - Done
3. 01:16:210 (1) - blanket would be improved - Done

[Hard]

1. 00:02:067 (4,5) - stack them - Done
2. 00:31:639 (1) - improve blanket, - Done
3. 00:10:210 (4) - I understand that you want to keep distant snap right, but when there is only 1 note in screen, It doesn't matter. Also NC? - Done
4. Normal distant changes too much, about in max 0,06x. It should not have so much different. Places to you can find to problem:

00:03:567 (3) - ,00:05:067 (2) - ,00:05:282 (3) - ,00:05:924 (1) - ,00:06:996 (3) - etc. I won't write all spots, check them yourself.
↑ those's spot distant should be about 1,22x-1,18x. - Done

Well that's all what I can find. Good Luck!

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Hey, from queue

As always, my mods are subjective. It's your map, bro.

General:

1. 00:00:000 (0) - Little late in development to say this, but it could use an Insane. - ow. Don't know about that. but i could try.
   Easy:
   
   1. 00:38:496 (5) - NC - Done
      
      
   2. 01:02:496 (3,4) - Personal pet peeve of mine, mixing curved and straight sliders looks and feels kinda weird. Other times you did this it was fine, but this one just looks off. Up2u - Done
   I can see a bunch of would be errors that were modded out, but that isn't a bad thing
   
   Normal:
   
   1. 00:22:639 (3) - This slider looks weird. - Done
      
      
   2. 00:23:924 (6) - NC - Done
      
      
   3. 00:26:496 (4) - ^ - Done
      
      
   4. 00:37:210 (5) - ^ AND/OR at 00:39:353 - Done
      
      
   5. 00:45:353 (6) - ^ - Done
   Just in general (for easy too, to a point) work on combos. They're too long and inconsistent.
   
   Hard:
   
   1. 00:01:639 (2,3,4,5) - OOOOOK. Remove 2, and move 3 to 2's old position and then move 4 to 3's old position. Do this for the first 4 combos. - Done

Other than that I really didn't see any serious errors.

GLHF ranking!

Alex Li wrote:

from queue

[Easy]

1. 00:16:210 (4) - some messy ncs here,make sure you nc at the down beat - Done
2. 00:31:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - confuse rhythm, instantly gape is not good for starters - Done
3. 01:10:210 (4) - plz do good blankets in your map - Done
4. 01:14:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 circles might be a bit hard, i think you should add some sliders in - Done

[Normal]

1. 00:00:782 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to change some patterns, its not good if you use the same pattern over and over - Done
2. 00:17:067 (2,3,4) - dangerous, might get dq by qats - Done
3. 00:29:496 (4) - try to not do a reverse at the down beat, it feels so much better if you dont do that - Done
4. 00:39:353 (4,5,1,2,3) - its not very good rhythm though, however people like to hit the beat that is stronger in game not the weak ones - Done

[Hard]

1. 00:09:353 (3,1) - didnt feel the finishes in the music - Done
2. 00:40:210 (5) - long sliders need to be placed at the right place, such as places that have rare music, this is definitely not the place for it - Done

need more work on rhythms
make sure you let people feel the music while playing your map
and make sure you nc with the music
good luck

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Frim's MX

00:17:067 (17067|6) - move to 4 00:17:496 ok (17496|2,17496|6) - it's a powerful sound but 00:17:067 (17067|6,17067|2) - it's a less powerful in my think. don't seem the same. maybe that's good just my think i think it's same as other
00:18:782 (18782|0) - move to 4 ok
00:19:210 (19210|3) - ^ 1 ok
00:21:139 - ,00:21:246 - add one ok
00:47:496 - ,00:47:710 - ^ , no. cuz this note just have guitar sound, not drum sound. try listen it carefully00:47:067 (47067|1,47067|5,47067|6) - and 00:47:282 (47282|4,47282|0,47282|2) - has 3 notes
00:48:782 - add one here's have powerful sound

Frim's HD

01:22:746 (82746|6) - remove ok

I always think, You're have a great quality Frim4503! thank you
Here's my M4M map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/298006
Good luck

neonat wrote:

General

I recommend 2000ms of time before the map starts, add 1300 to AudioLeadIn in .osu in Notepad - Done

Easy

00:00:782 (1,2) - since you are already trying to blanket, make ti more perfect (probably not the only one but will just highlight one) - Done
00:07:639 (5) - NC - Done
00:41:924 (2) - NC here instead of 00:41:496 (1) to keep the pattern consistent - Done
00:45:353 (1) - finish on start of slider - Done
00:47:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - honestly don't see why the chorus would be so special to use a different kind of combo patterning, which is to start the new combo 2 beats earlier, it changes quite a lot in what has been done and I don't see why this is needed, especially emphasis is on the regular 1st beat of the normal phrasing like 01:02:496 (01:02:496 (3) - ) - Changed it~
01:03:353 (4,1) - shift 01:05:067 (1) - it's too low, and the movement to that object is not very smooth - Done
01:19:639 (4) - NC - Done

Normal Remapping some parts~

00:07:639 (1,4,5) - remove those finishes, it's pretty excessive and doesn't fit the mood of the music at that point removed but i changed the patterns
00:11:067 (1,2,3,4) - remove the finishes, they don't fit and drown out the music - Done
00:13:639 (3) - remove finish and add clap on both the start and end of slider - Done
00:14:067 (4) - remove finish on start of slider and add clap on start and middle of slider - Done
00:20:496 (2,3,4) - try to use a different shape, use curve sliders instead, to make it less angular in motion - Done
00:21:353 (4) - NC instead of 00:21:782 (1) - Done
00:23:924 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:24:782 (3) - NC - Done
00:25:210 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:26:496 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:29:924 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:36:782 (1) - remove NC - Done
00:41:924 (2) - NC instead of 00:41:496 (1) - Done
00:46:639 (2,3) - do not have them on the same y-axis, the motion is too straight and isn't very good - Done
00:45:353 (1) - finish on start of slider - Done
00:47:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same thing as Easy - Done
01:17:282 (3) - clap on end of slider - Done
01:19:639 (3) - NC - Done
01:22:210 (2,3) - add claps - Done

Hard - Remapping some and I'll take note of what you said

00:00:782 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - really really too angular and straight, the flow here is really bad, have more curves implemented for better play
00:07:639 (1,3,1) - remove the finishes
00:11:067 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:09:353 (3) - NC instead of 00:10:210 (1)
00:16:210 (5) - NC instead of 00:17:067 (1) - Just look at what you did at 00:14:496 (1,2,3,4) - follow is through and through
00:17:924 (4) - NC instead of 00:18:782 (1)
00:19:639 (5) - NC instead of 00:20:496 (1)
00:21:353 (3) - NC instead of 00:21:782 (1)
00:27:782 (8) - have it more in line with the previous slider:

SPOILER

00:41:496 (2,3) - unstack them, that is much better
00:42:353 (5,6) - ^
00:43:210 (2,3) - ^
00:44:067 (5,6) - ^
00:48:782 (1) - you did the right thing here, but then you went back to the inconsistent NC patterns !!!!!! aaaaa 00:51:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - same thing as Easy and Normal
01:15:139 (6,1) - don't overlap
01:16:210 (2) - NC


One thing I noticed is that your patterns tend to really be very angular and straight, which is not very smooth for flow and it's quite the 'old style' which doesn't really play that well ~ Changing it


Good Luck

(osu! Mania) ~UPDATED

(osu! Standard) ~UPDATED but still remapping some

Julie wrote:

Requested from Love & Julie's Best Friend Queue!

★

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[General]

For creator : might want to try to fix that http://puu.sh/h9RbJ.png , seem like there was some change in the HD and MX O.O. I don't know how it end up like that, but it cause a unicode issue on AIMod. oh, i'm sorry. that was my miss. should be good right now

Also Frim's MX is the only one to have this 暁の華 in tags @.@ fix

[Frim's NM]

00:35:067 - this part should honnestly have more impact then this 00:36:782 - and 00:38:496 - . You did put drumfinish hitsound, but should be more impact while playing, like while tapping :3. i think i will keep it for now

00:47:710 (47710|3,47924|1) - wowowow still normal-hitclap?!? no more drum here LOL. Only diff you did that.fix. i forgot about that

00:48:782 - add one more note? that part should have more impact! fix. will adjusting for another dif

00:50:924 - no 2 note like this 00:50:067 - and this 00:51:782 - ? i think i will keep it for now

01:02:282 (62282|5) - change to normal-hitclap like all of your other difficulty, I don't hear a hithat here ><. fix

01:09:246 (69246|4) - delete, don't try to suddenly add a stream here, since you didn't do it at 01:02:389 - and 01:16:103 - .ok

01:09:353 - add one more note with drumfinish like you did on your other difficulty, should have more impact here!!! .ok

01:23:067 (83067|6) - end it here 01:29:924 - , the is still sound contiinue between 01:29:817 - and 01:29:924 - and it truly have a small stop sound here 01:29:924 - .fix

[Frim's HD]

00:10:424 (10424|5,10639|6,10853|5) - isn't it supose to be like that http://puu.sh/h9UAD.jpg judging from the instrument pitch ?ok. i just put it random. so, idk about pitch

00:16:210 (16210|3) - isn't this supose to be normal-hitwhistle like you did in NM and MX what are you talking about ?.all my dif in this section using normal-hitwhistle.

00:14:067 (14067|4,14282|3) - change those to normal-hitclap, still snare sound. okay

01:19:424 - add another note with normal-hitclap, important snare sound :3.oh. i didn't hear that


01:22:317 (82317|3,82532|3) - Hmm not you didn't add those on MX, either add or delete?delete

01:23:067 (83067|2) - end it here 01:29:924 - , the is still sound contiinue between 01:29:817 - and 01:29:924 - and it truly have a small stop sound here 01:29:924 - .fix

[Frim's MX]

00:14:067 (14067|2,14174|1,14282|2,14389|3) - change those to normal-hitclap, still snare sound. fix

00:16:746 - map this sound? because this part 00:16:853 - follow 00:16:746 - XD. ok

00:21:353 - only 2 notes here? Should be more impact then the same number of note as the part before. I think you forgot a drumfinish.wav here too. You did 3 notes + a drumfinish.wav in your HD ;3. oh, yes i'm forgot about it

00:45:353 - this part should have more impact then 00:45:567 - to 00:46:853 - , so add one more note with drumfinish.wav. ok

00:48:782 - same reason as 00:21:353 - , you did it good in HD :3.ok

01:15:246 - add a note here since you did it here 01:14:817 - . fix

01:19:424 - add one more note, there isn't just a hithat here, there also one drum sound that you put normal-hitclap when you map that drum sound. fix

01:21:674 (81674|2,81782|0,81889|2,81996|4) - this feel weird, suddendly small LN here. Try keep it consistent and make those normal note except this one 01:21:996 (81996|4) - can be LN till here 01:22:210 - . fix

01:22:210 (82210|6,82210|2,82424|4,82424|0,82639|2,82853|4,82960|6) - mistake maybe? should be normal-hitclap, that whistle is a bass sound O.O. And you also put normal-hitclap on HD. fix

01:22:639 - and 01:22:853 - add one more note with normal-hitclap, should be same as 01:22:210 (82210|6,82210|2,82424|0,82424|4) - .ok

01:23:067 (83067|0) - end it here 01:29:924 - , the is still sound contiinue between 01:29:817 - and 01:29:924 - and it truly have a small stop sound here 01:29:924 - . fix

Really a freaking nice osu mania mapset! Incredibly well map, most of the part among difficulty really consistent! Keep up the great work! This is my 1st time seing your osu mania Frim O.O! and I'm suprise !! Feel free to pm me some of your other work too !! *Star*

AND GAWD PLEASE HAVE THIS SONG RANK SOON <3!! OSU NEED AKATSUKI NO YONA!! I try mapping a song of it but I got lazy =w=

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:04:210 (3) - Personally I think the red anchor is weird in here, try to make slider smoother so that beginners can play sliders more easily - Done
   
   eg

   
2. 00:56:496 (4,5) - Better not to start slider at red tick, moreover you only mapped this pattern at 00:56:496 (4,5) and 01:14:496 (4,5), You used reversed slider for same rhythm in other place, so I think you can use it as well for consistence. - Done
   

[Normal] ~ REMAPPED IT

1. 00:00:782 (1,3) - Avoid these overlapping, it looks weird and quite difficult to read, since it is only to beginning I think it is easily to fix
2. 00:03:567 (4,1) - Try curving 00:04:210 (1), Using straight slider provide a sharp turn here which flow is bad, you can also place 00:04:210 (1)'s tail higher which give out a better flow too
   
   eg

   
3. 00:05:924 (3) - ^, try to curve this slider a bit
4. 00:10:210 (5) - Place this higher for a curve flow, placing 3 notes horizontally breaks the flow of this diff
5. 00:14:067 (4) - Overlapping with 00:12:782 (1) looks weird, try to change the pattern
6. 00:18:782 (2) - Flow is bad here, I suggest you to put the reverse on the left side 00:17:924 (1) so players can hit it easily instead of moving down cursors, and then fix the following ds
   
   eg

   
7. 00:24:782 (3) - Place higher instead? so players dont need to move down their cursors but moving it along the curve
8. 00:31:639 (1,2,3) - Leave some 1/2 gap here, or else it would break the consistence
9. 01:05:924 (3,4,5) - ^
10. 01:10:210 (2) - This slider is weird to the consistence, try to map here like 00:55:639 (3,4,5,6,7,8)

[Hard]

1. 00:09:353 (3,1) - Fix DS here - Done
2. 00:14:496 (1) - Slider is curved up, but you placed following notes (00:15:353 (2,3) ) at below, may consider fixing the flow - Done
3. Generally fine, but I feel this diff is a bit like "old style' :pp ~ I think as a beginner, I learned the wrong style. haha. but im gradually learning.

~ UPDATED(Osu! Standard and Osu! Mania)

ModernTiger wrote:

Hello, I'm here to mod Mania's map!
Please note that all the list below are just suggestions. If the suggestion feels useless, feel free reject that.
If change is strongly suggested, I'll check that as a ★.

[General]
★ Recommand using more HQ MP3. I think it comes from TV Rip OP, am I right?idk. for this part i will leave this problem to creator

[Patterns]
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7
I'll take notes on consistency pattern hand balance.

Frim's HD

★ Make LNs more conscious with melodies.

00:01:424 (1424|1) / 00:03:139 (3139|4) / 00:04:853 (4853|4) / 00:06:567 (6567|5) / 00:08:282 (8282|4) / 00:09:996 (9996|6) / 00:11:710 (11710|1) - +1/8 at LNs. Also, this part is more difficult then MX.
00:12:782 (12782|3,12782|4,12782|5) - Delete notes at 4, 6ok
00:13:210 (13210|6,13210|5) - Move a note at 5 at delete another.ok
00:13:639 (13639|6,13853|5,14067|4,14282|3) - Make this a LN. why?
01:02:174 - Add a note. ok
01:09:032 - ^ ok
01:15:889 - ^ ok
01:16:532 (76532|3,76639|4,76639|2,76746|3,76853|2) - Make this untangle, like 01:16:532 (76532|3,76639|5,76639|2,76746|4,76853|6) or anything.
01:24:782 (84782|5) 01:26:496 (86496|4) 01:28:210 (88210|6) - Delete this.

Frim's MX

★ This map's unicode title is different with others. fix
★ Make LNs more conscious with melodies. fix

★ 00:00:782 - Priority to consistency, LN is not match with synth line's melody fix. Also, 00:00:782 (782|3) , I couldn't find any matched sound with this LN's type.
00:12:782 (12782|4,12782|6,12782|3) - Delete a note at 4. ok
00:13:210 (13210|4,13210|2) - Move notes to 5,7 and delete 2. ok
00:16:317 (16317|2) - Delete this (a note not match with bass). ok
00:16:960 (16960|1) - ^ ok
00:17:389 (17389|1) - Add a note here at 2. why? i must make tripplets here?
★00:21:353 (21353|3) - Priority to consistency, LN is not match with eletric guitar's melody. Consider to make it match with melody.i will try to make something like that
00:21:353 (21353|5,21353|6) - Delete a note at 6. 1/18 drum sound is not during. 7 is for a symbal. ???. try listen it again, it has cymbal and drum sound
00:49:317 (49317|2) - Make a note here. (matches with bass sound)
00:49:424 (49424|2) - Move a note to 1. ???>>>
00:49:639 (49639|0,49853|2) - If you want to make this more difficult, using bass sound and closed hi hat sound("ching ching") both. Here is an example with bass chords. 00:49:639 (49639|0,49746|2,49853|0,49960|2) And that's why I recommand to use more HQ MP3. Bass line is barely to hear.

Frim4503 wrote:

Frim's HD

00:13:639 (13639|6,13853|5,14067|4,14282|3) - Make this a LN. why? - That part is drum's tom tom. I think it is great to insert LN on here.

Frim's MX

00:17:389 (17389|1) - Add a note here at 2. why? i must make tripplets here? - It is for bass guitar.
00:21:353 (21353|5,21353|6) - Delete a note at 6. 1/18 drum sound is not during. 7 is for a symbal. ???. try listen it again, it has cymbal and drum sound - It has Finish hitsound, so I confused. :/
00:49:424 (49424|2) - Move a note to 1. ???>>> - It was mistaken. Just ignore this.

ModernTiger wrote:

Frim4503 wrote:

Frim's HD

00:13:639 (13639|6,13853|5,14067|4,14282|3) - Make this a LN. why? - That part is drum's tom tom. I think it is great to insert LN on here.

Frim's MX

00:17:389 (17389|1) - Add a note here at 2. why? i must make tripplets here? - It is for bass guitar.
00:21:353 (21353|5,21353|6) - Delete a note at 6. 1/18 drum sound is not during. 7 is for a symbal. ???. try listen it again, it has cymbal and drum sound - It has Finish hitsound, so I confused. :/
00:49:424 (49424|2) - Move a note to 1. ???>>> - It was mistaken. Just ignore this.

General

Most of the problems have already been pointed out by BN already. Your map is almost ready (std mode). Just little suggestions

Easy

1. 00:52:639 (2) add clap ?
2. 01:14:067 (3,5) ^

Hard

1. 01:16:210 (1) remove NC
2. 01:05:924 (4) why do you put whistle here ?. It seems out of the blue from the whole song

makemek wrote:

From MakeMEK's Modding Queue

General

Most of the problems have already been pointed out by BN already. Your map is almost ready (std mode). Just little suggestions

Easy

1. 00:52:639 (2) add clap ? - Ow. didn't see that. Done
2. 01:14:067 (3,5) ^ - Done

Hard

1. 01:16:210 (1) remove NC - Done
2. 01:05:924 (4) why do you put whistle here ?. It seems out of the blue from the whole song - Nope. Not really. It fits after a clap. It's consistent throughout the song.

Good luck getting this map ranked
Be sure to contact BN when you think its ready - Ok.
Have a star

- Thanks for the STAR and for the Mod. I appreciate it.